Romance Ek Bhool(Completed)

[Champ_AK_81]

Awesome story champ bhai,
maine aapki ye story xp par padhi thi,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur dil ko chhune wali story hai bhai,
Second part ka besabri se intazar rahega bhai

Welcome Aman bhai on the story...Jaan kar accha laga ki aapko story itna pasand aaya
Ek Bhool 2 iss story ka sequel nahi alag hi story hai...Uss ko start karne me 18 weeks baaki hai...Story start karte hi aapko msg kar dunga.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

oooooooooooooye ye to pagal ho gaya
priya ki jindgi kharab karne par tula hai

dekhte hain kaise apne bichhaye jaal mein khud hi fansta hai

aur abhi to priya ko kahani suna raha hai.........abhi shruti aur neha ka bhi pardafash hoga

dekhte hain aage

Thanks Kamdev bhai for your support and review...Aapke sawaal ki jawaab jald hi milega...Abb flashback end hone hi wala hai...Saath bane rahiye bhai.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Sameer bechara shadi dekhne jayega aur shadi kar ke aayega
Shruti bhi apni karni ka fal khayegi
Sabse jyada bura to bechari Priya ke sath hoga

I think mystery is coming to end...
In present also Shruti and Neha were planning something... Present will also carry lot of action I guess.

Waiting for more

Thanks Lone Hunterr bhai for your support and review...Keep supporting bro.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 58​

2 Days Later


Sameer subah subah hi nikal gaya Priya ki gaanw ke liye, Priya ke papa ke diye hue address ki madad se...Ghar me usne bataya ki 1 ya 2 hafte ke liye ghumne ke liye kahi baahar jaa raha hai.

Mr. Sharma ne bhi unki baat maan liya...Unhone socha ki abhi abhi exams khatam hua hai aur Sameer ka study bhi complete ho gaya hai...Kuch din baad usse job karna hai to yahi mauka hai kahi ghum kar mood fresh karne ka...Unhe iss baat se koi aapatti nahi tha aur naa hi Sameer ki Maa ko bhi.

Sameer ne iss baare me Shruti se kuch baat nahi kiya tha...Sameer ne socha ki 1 ya 2 hafte ka hi to kaam hai aise me batana jaruri nahi hai.

Karib 5 ya 6 ghante ki bike ki safar ke baad Sameer Priya ki gaanw pahunch gaya...Jab usne Priya ki gaanw me kadam rakha to apne aap hi uske chehre par ek kutil muskaan aa gaya.

Usne bike rok kar aas paas ke maahaul ko dekha...Gaanw dekhne me naa hi bahut bikashit(developed) thaa aur naahi jyada abikashit...Gaanw dekhne me thik thaak tha...Gaanw ki log middle aur low class family se belong karte the...Bas ek ya do hi honge jo upper class se belong karte ho.

Gaanw me hariyaali charo taraf tha...Pollution shehar ki tulna me bahut hi kam tha...Sameer gaanw me aa kar khud ko ekdam fresh mehsoos karne laga...Thodi der usne gaanw me ghumne ka socha...Ghumte ghumte uske dimaag me ek baat aaya.

Sameer:- (In his mind) Kya mai jo kar raha hu wo sahi kar raha hu? Kahi mai ye sab karke kisi ki life barbaad to nahi kar raha yaa fir mai koi galti to nahi kar raha...Kya mujhe Priya ko maaf kar dena chaahiye?

Issi baat ko soch kar Sameer idhar udhar tehelne laga...Iss sawaal ki jawaab ko dhundne laga...Aur bahut jald hi usse jawaab mil gaya aur khud se hi kehne laga.

Sameer:- Nahi mai Priya ko maaf nahi karunga...Usne maafi laayak kaam nahi kiya hai...Uski vajah se Rajesh ki jaan jaa sakti thi aur kayi aur jaan ko gam me jeena padta...Kya hota Rajesh ki parents ka jab wo budhaape me apne jawaan bete ko kho dete kisi ki ego ki vajah se.

Kitni baar samjhaya Priya tujhe please humse dur reh...Hume jyada ukshane ki koshish mat kar kuch karne ke liye...Lekin tu nahi maani....Bahut kar liya apni manmaani aur har baar maine tujhe samjhaya...Lekin laato ke bhoot baato se nahi maante...Teri har galti ko maaf kiya yaa fir badla lene ka iccha hote hue bhi nahi liya...Socha sab kuch thik ho jaayega...Lekin kuch thik nahi hua...Ulta aur bigadta chala gaya...Aaj tujhe chhod diya to pata nahi kal kahi tu Shruti aur mujhe bhi nukshan pahuchane ka koshish na kar le.

Tune mujhe majboor kar hi diya Priya ye sab karne ke liye...Mai kabhi nahi chaahta tha ye sab karne ko lekin aaj majbur hu...Pehle teri shaadi jo tere marji ke khilaaf hoga usse apni aankho se dekhunga fir yaha se ek sukoon ke saath jaaunga...Majaa aayega tujhe jindagi bhar ki dard aur aansu dene me.

Agar wo Karan aa gaya to bhi tujhe bacha nahi paayega...Tere baap ko bahut bhadka dunga aur wo aasani se bhadak bhi jaayega...Pehle tera khel khatam karta hu uske baad Karan ka.

Itna sab kehne ke baad Sameer ki aankho me nafrat aa gaya...Usne tay kar liya ki yahi uska aakhiri faisla hoga aur wo apni faisle se kabhi piche nahi hatega...Aur saath hi Priya ki barbadi dekh kar hi jaayega.

Iske baad Sameer gaanw ki ek dhaabe me chala gaya aur kaha.

Sameer:- Bhaiya...Iss gaanw me mujhe kuch kaam hai...1 ya 2 hafta rukna pad sakta hai...Kiraye me ek room milega...Paisa ki chinta mat karo...Har din ka 500 dunga.

Sameer ne ek aasha ke saath kaha...Wo gaanw ke kone me tha...Waha room mil jaata to koi pareshaani nahi hone waala tha...Agar gaanw ke bich me hota to shaayad Priya usse dekh sakti thi.

Dhaabe wala ne jab ye suna wo ekdam se khus ho gaya...Har din ka 500 uske liye badi baat tha...Aise me 1 ya 2 hafte tak wo bahut kama sakta tha...Khushi ke saath wo bola.

Dhaabe wala:- Haan bhai...Ek kamra to hai...Par shaayad wo aapke haisiyat aur paisa ke hisaab se utna accha na ho.

Dhaabe wala ke last ki line me kuch chinta thi lekin Sameer ki jawaab ne usse khus kar diya.

Sameer:- Koi baat nahi bhaiya...Bas ek bed aur thoda saaf suthra room chaahiye aur khane ki acchi subidha.

Dhaabe waala:- Ho jaayega...Kab se rahenge? Aur agar buraa nahi manenge to ek baat pucchna chaahta tha "Aap kis kaam se aaye hai"?

Sameer:- Abhi se rahunga...Aur kaam koi khaas nahi hai aur aap ki samajh se baahar hai...Bas rehne ke liye jagah nahi hai iss liye yaha pucchne aaya tha.

Sameer thoda chhidh gaya tha Dhaabe waale ki sawal se.

Dhaabe wala:- Koi baat nahi bhai...Agar nahi chaahte to mat bataaiye...Chaliye aapko room dikhaa deta hu.

Iske baad Sameer ko Dhaabe wala Sameer ko room dikha deta hai...Room thoda chhota tha lekin ek insaan ke liye kafi tha...Facility ke naam me koi saaman nahi tha par fir bhi Sameer ne manage karne ka aur apne kaam par dhyan dene ka socha.

Room dekh lene ke baad Sameer ne Dhaabe waala se Priya ki Papa ke baare me puccha.

Dhaabe wala:- Aapko kya kaam hai bhai usse?

Dhaabe wala ne nafrat se jawaab diya.

Sameer:- Kuch khaas nahi...Jab wo shehar aaye thhe tab mujhse kuch paisa udhar liya tha jo abhi tak unhone nahi lautaya...Iss liye puch raha hu.

Dhaabe wala:- Wo sharabi aisa hi hai...Sabhi se udhar leta hai par lautata nahi hai...Abb gaanw me koi udhar nahi deta to shehar jaane laga.

Ek bar fir Dhabe waala ne nafrat se kaha...Aur Sameer ko Priya ki ghar ka address de diya...Sameer ne kuch nahi kaha bas dhabe waale ki baat se ye pata chal gaya ki Priya ki Papa ki gaanw me utna izzat nahi hai.

Sameer ne ek topi aur sunglass laga liya aur chhote chhote daadhi shave kar liya taaki Priya usse aasani se nahi pehchaan sake...Aur chala gaya Priya ki gaanw dekhne.

Kuch der chalne ke baad Sameer Priya ki gaanw ke saamne pahunch gaya jo gaanw ke bich me tha...Priya ka ek kaccha ghar tha jo mitti se bana tha...Ghar ka haalat dekh anuman lagaya jaa sakta tha ki ghar ki aarthik sthiti kuch khaas accha nahi hai.

Iske baad Sameer waapas apne room me laut aaya aur aaram karne laga aur bahut jald thakan ki vajah se usse neend aa gaya.

Lekin shaam me uska neend toot gaya...Fresh ho kar baithne ke baad uski kaan me ek aawaj aaya...Aawaj me ek dard mehsoos ho raha tha aur aisa lag raha tha wo insaan andar se ghutan sa mehsoos kar raha hai...Sameer ne jab khidki se baahar dekha to paaya ki wo Priya hai.

Priya ki murjhaye chehra dekh Sameer ki chehre me thoda muskaan aa gaya...Priya apne saheliyon ke saath gaanw me chal rahi thi...Shaayad wo sabhi gaanw me ghumte ghumte waha tak pahunch gayi thi...Priya ki saheli usse baat kiye jaa rahi thi lekin Priya ekdam khaamosh thi...Ye dekh kar Sameer ki chehre me apna jeet ki khushi aa gaya.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 59​

Sameer abhi bhi Priya ki saheli aur Priya ki baatein sun raha tha...Priya apne 3 saheli ke saath ghum rahi thi.

Saheli 1:- Priya tu itni chup kyu hai? Pehle to kitna bolti thi...Abb ekdam se chup ho gayi hai...Kya baat hai...Shehar me jaake tujh me aisa kaun sa badlaaw aa gaya hai jo humse baat bhi nahi kar rahi hai abb.

Ye baat sun kar Priya kuch bolne hi wali thi ki Saheli 2 bich me hi bol deti hai.

Saheli 2:- Abb ye shehar me jaakar padh likh kar aayi ladki hum jaise gawar se kyu baat karegi...Kaha inka haisiyat aur kaha humara.

Ye baat sun kar Priya ko bahut buraa laga lekin firse wo kuch bolti uski teesri saheli ne kaha.

Saheli 3:- Are nahi nahi...Ye baat nahi hai...Bechaari ka college me koi boyfriend hoga jisse na mil paane ki vajah se ye udaas hogi.

Teeno saheli ne to hasi majaak me ye sab keh diya...Lekin unhe kya pata tha ki unka ye majaak Priya ko kitna taklif pahunch raha hai...Jab bardaast ke baahar hua ye baatein tab Priya ekdam gusse se boli.

Priya:- Band karo tum sab apni bakwaas...Tab se jo man me aaye wohi boli jaa rahi ho...Ye bhi nahi dikh raha hai ki saamne waala kya mehsua kar raha hai aur tum logo ki baato se usse kitna taklif pahunch rahi hai.

Itna keh kar Priya chup ho gayi...Priya ki aawaj me gussa aur bahut saara dard tha...Priya ki baatein sun uski sabhi saheli wohi ruk gayi aur ekdam shaant ho gayi...Sabhi ko pata chal gaya ki koi to baat hai jis vajah se Priya itna dard me hai.

Saheli 1:- Sorry Priya...Hum to bas aise hi majaak kar rahe the.

Itna keh kar wo chup ho gayi...Priya kuch nahi boli.

Saheli 2:- Kya baat hai Priya...Kabhi tujhe itna dukhi nahi dekha...Please yaar bata kya baat hai...Lagta hai jarur kuch hua hai.

Priya fir bhi chup rahi...Wo itna dukhi thi ki kuch bhi bola nahi jaa raha tha usse...Abb dhire dhire uski aankho se aansu behne lage.

Priya ko rota dekh uski sabhi saheliyan dar gayi...Bahut samjhaane aur support ke baad aur jor dene ke baad Priya rote hue boli.

Priya:- Papa ne meri shaadi tay kar di hai.

Priya ne rote hue kaha.

Priya ki iss baat se kisi ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki isme aakhir rone ki kya baat hai...Shaadi ke pehle aisa rona normal baat to hai nahi...Lekin kisi ko kya pata tha iss vakt Priya ke dil me kya baat hai.

Saheli 3:- Iss me rone ki kya baat hai...Teri umar ho gayi hai shaadi ki...Aur tune to shehar jaa kar apni padhaai bhi khatm kar liya...Aakhir kisi na kisi din shaadi to karni hi hai.

Usne bas itna hi kaha tha ki Priya uss par bhadak gayi aur gusse se boli.

Priya:- Band kar apni bakwaas...Aur apna gyan apne paas hi rakh...Tab se tum logo ki bakwaas sun rahi hu...Bina kuch soche samjhe kuch bhi bak kar rahi ho.

Mai Karan se pyar karti hu aur ussi se shaadi karna chaahti hu...Papa meri shadi jabbardasti karwa rahe hai...Aur mai iss shaadi se khus nahi hu.


Suru me to Priya ne gusse me kaha lekin last ki kuch lines rote hue...Apni baat khatam karne ke baad Priya wahi niche baith kar jor jor se rone lagi.

Uska dard ab uski saheliyon ne samjha...Uski dard sabhi mehsoos kar rahe the...Kuch der sabhi ne Priya ko rone diya...Jab wo roo kar shaant hui tab fir se uski saheli ne kaha.

Saheli 1:- To fir apne Papa ko samjha yaa fir maa ko...Aise rone se kuch nahi hone waala...Jab tu unse baat karegi tabhi to baat banega.

Priya:- Tujhe kya lagta hai maine koshish nahi kiya hai? Jab 2 din pehle Papa ke saath yaha aayi thi tabhi maine keh diya apne aur Karan ke baare me...Ye bhi kaha ki mai Karan ke saath shaadi karna chaahti hu.

Lekin unhone saaf mana kar diya aur kaha ki unhone ek ladka dhund liya hai aur mujhe ussi se shadi karna hoga.

Maa ko bhi samjhaya...Maa to maan gayi aur Papa se baat bhi kiya unhone.

Lekin Papa nahi maane...Aur kaha ki agar maine unki pasand se shaadi nahi kiya to wo jehar khaa lenge aur unhone unn logo se bahut karz liya hai aur ussi ko chukane ke liye mera shaadi karwa rahe hai.

Mai aur maa majbur hai.

Priya ne fir se rote hue kaha.

Saheli 2:- Tab to ek hi raasta hai...Tu uss ladka se baat karle...Agar nahi maana to ham usse baat kar lenge...Aur bhaga denge usse yaha se.

Usne Priya ko samjhaate hue kaha aur maahaul ko bhi accha karne ke liye hanste hue kaha...Lekin uski hansi ko Priya ki agli hi baat se gaayab ho gaya.

Priya:- Jaante ho wo kaun hai...Pratap. :

Saheli 2:- Kaun Pratap....Kahi wohi Pratap to nahi.

Priya:- Ha wohi Pratap...Gaanw ka sabse awaara ladka jo mujhse ek saal senior bhi hai...College me bhi wo dono Pratap aur Ramesh aise hi awaaragardi karte the...Pehle se hi bahut bigad chuka hai.

Kal maine usse baat kiya tha lekin wo nahi maan...Kaha ki har haal me mujhse shaadi karega.

Abb kya karu...Majburi ho gayi hai mere liye ye shaadi karna...Sab Papa aur unki sharab ki aadat se ye sab hua hai...Wo to bachpan se mujhe pasand nahi karte the...Jo bhi hu Maa ki vajah se hu...Papa har haal me mera shaadi karwa kar rahenge.

Naa hi jee paa rahi hu aur naa hi mar sakti hu....

Ye sab kehte hue fir se Priya ki aankho me aansu aa gaye...Uski dard bas wo uski Maa aur uski saheliya hi samajh rahe the.

Abb uski saheliyan bhi chaah kar kuch nahi kar pa rahi thi...Bas bhagwaan se dua kar rahe the ki ye shaadi naa ho.

Aise hi kuch der tak Priya roti rahi saari bat yaad karke aur apna future ke baare me soch kar...Uski saheliyon ne usse kissi tarah samjha kar waha se le gayi.

Unke jaane ke baad Sameer soch me pad gaya.

Priya ko rote dekh ek pal ke liye to Sameer pighal gaya tha lekin agle hi pal usne apne dil ko majbut bana liya aur apne faislaa par tike rehne ka faisla kiya.

Unke jaane ke baad Sameer ne khud se kaha.

Sameer:- Dekha Priya...Bhagwaan sab dekhta hai...Tumhe tumhaara paap ki sazaa mil raha hai...Ek din tumne Rajesh ki life se khelne ka koshish kiya tha lekin aaj Pratap ki haatho me hai tumhaari life.

Aaj tum jo iss tarah se roo rahi thi iski vajah bhi tum khud hi ho...Naa tum Rajesh ke saath ye sab karti aur naa mujhe aisa kuch karna padta.

Yaad hai ek din maine tumhe issi Pratap aur Ramesh ki ragging se bachaya tha aur unse dushmani kar liya tha ye jaante hue bhi ki tum meri dost nahi ho.

Insaniyat ki khaatir tumhaara saath diya.

Lekin aaj kuch aisa haal hai ki mujhe khushi ho raha hai tumhaara aur Pratap ki shaadi ki baat sun kar...Ek sukoon mil raha hai.

Pratap jaisa pati paa kar tumhaara life acche se barbaad ho jayega...Wo bhi tumhaari Papa jaisa hi banega baad me jaa kar aur saari jindagi tumhe apne kiye aur kismat par rona padega.

Itna keh kar Sameer chup ho gaya...Usse yakin ho gaya ki uska plan kamyaab ho gaya aur issi ke saath uske chehre par ek muskaan aaya jo uski jeet ka gawaahi de raha tha.

After 2 Months​

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Friends aaj mood thik nahi hai issi liye 2 updates post kiya hai...Kal 3 updates aur parso 2...Fir flashback khatm.

 

[lone_hunterr]

Pratap... Part of the plan of Neha or just a coincidence????

Badhiya updates....
Will wait for more

 

[kamdev99008]

Friends aaj mood thik nahi hai issi liye 2 updates post kiya hai...Kal 3 updates aur parso 2...Fir flashback khatm.

ok dear.........bahut badhiya,,,,,,,,,,,, lekin abhi kuchh aur bhi pata chalega sameer ko ..........shayad pratap isi gaon ka hai.......usi se
tab sameer ko apni bhool ka ahsas hoga

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Pratap... Part of the plan of Neha or just a coincidence????

Badhiya updates....
Will wait for more

Thanks Lone Hunterr bhai for your support and review...This time it is coincidence...Priya's father found all those character in Pratap that he wanted...And for continuing the plan Pratap had no problem too...Keep supporting bro.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

ok dear.........bahut badhiya,,,,,,,,,,,, lekin abhi kuchh aur bhi pata chalega sameer ko ..........shayad pratap isi gaon ka hai.......usi se
tab sameer ko apni bhool ka ahsas hoga

Thanks Kamdev bhai for your support and review...Sameer ko kaise apne bhool ka ehsas hoga ye jald hi pata chalega...Saath bane rahiye bhai.