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Ravi

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Idhar Ravi aur Monika ek doosre se baat karna bhi pasand nahin karte the to wahin doosri or Jay aur Sonali chahte huye bhi ek doosre se khul kar baat nahin kar paate the. Jahan Jay is baat se pareshan hai ki agar maine apne pyaar ka ijhaar kiya to pata nahin Sonali mere bare mein kya sochegi, kya wo Raj ko bhula kar mujhe apnayegi, kahin wo ye na sochne lage ki Raj mar gaya aur uska sasur jail mein chala gaya to main use pyaar ki baatein karke uski jaydad ke peeche pada hoon.

Nahin nahin wo aisa nahin soch sakti, lekin samaj humein kya milne dega. Ek widhwa ko to waise bhi samaj achhi drishi se nahin dekhta aur us par se punah vivaah. Agar Sonali maan bhi gayi to bhi kya hamara bhavishya ujjwal rahega. Kya samaj ke thekedaaron ka saamna hamara pyaar kar payega. Kya Sonali is sab mein mera saath degi.

Kya wo din wapas aayenge jab wo dono ek saath haathon mein haath dale ghumte the, ped ke neeche ek doosre ki baahon mein ghanton bitate the, ek doosre ki khinchai, meethi meethi takraar, phir pyaar se manana, wo jhule par jhulna, wo baarish mein nahana, wo school bunk karke picture dekhne jaana, wo shopping ki list, wo wade, wo kasme kya ab kabhi aisa hoga. Jay ki aankhon mein ye sab sochkar aansu aa gaye.

Idhar Sonali bhi kuch alag nahin soch rahi thi. Manjil ek thi lekin raaste alag alag the. Sonali ke man mein hamesha ek dwandyudh chalta rehta tha. Ek taraf wo Raj ko bhula nahin paa rahi thi to doosri taraf Jay ko bhi nahin apna paa rahi thi. Kahin kahin Jay ki is halat ke liye wo khud ko doshi maanti thi jiski ishwar ne use bahut badi saja de di thi. Na wo Jay ko reject karti aur na hi use ye din dekhne padte. Ab to usne apne jeene ka ek hi maksad bana liya tha ki apni poori jindagi apne hone wale bacche ke saath bitani hai. Uski dekhbhal, padhai likhai, shaadi aur bhi na jaane kya kya sapne Sonali ne dekh liye the.

Dono jaise ek aag mein jal rahe the. Sonali jitna Jay se door jaane ki koshish karti uska dil use wahin khinch lata. Use baar baar Jay ka masoom chehra, uska bholapan, uski sadgi, uski khuddari, uska tarah tarah se help karna, jab Sonali ka koi nahin tha (Matlab pati mar gaya tha aur sasur jail chala gaya tha) tab Jay hi tha jisne use sahara diya tha. Sonali ko routine checkup ke liye le jaana, uski dawaiyon ka khyaal rakhna, uske khaane peene ka dhyaan rakhna sab Jay hi to kar raha tha. Wo kaise bhool sakti hai uski meharbaaniyon ko.

Jay subah subah ek baar Sonali ka haal pochne jaroor aata tha aur college chootne ke baad ek round laga kar aata tha. Jab bhi Sonali ko checkup ke liye jaana hota tha Jay college se chutti kar leta tha. Lekin har kadam Sonali ka saath nibhana hi jaise ab uski jindagi ban gayi thi. Kabhi kabhi Sonali use mana bhi karti thi lekin Jay ki jid ke aage uski ek na chalti thi. Wo bhi jyada jor nahin deti thi kyunki wo Jay ke saath surakshit mehsoos karti thi.

Lekin kehte hain na ishq mushq chupaye nahin chupte. Poore mohalle mein baat fail gayi thi dono ke rishte ko lekar. Logon mein aisi dharna ban chuki thi ki dono ke beech najayaj sambhandh hai. Halanki Jay ko to isse koi fark nahin padhta tha lekin Sonali ab bade khandan ki bahu thi. Halanki Sikander ek mujrim tha lekin phir bhi uska kuch to samaj mein naam tha hi. Parivaar ki maryada, uski ijjat in sab baton ka khyaal to ab Sonali ko hi rakhna tha.

Lekin is dil ka kya karen. Dil insaan ko kabhi kabhi kitna majboor bana deta hai. Sab kuch uske haath mein hote huye bhi uske haath mein kuch nahin hota. Aksar Jay Sonali ko park wagairah mein ghumane le jaata tha. Halanki pehle jaise wo park mein milte the waisa mahaul to nahin tha lekin phir bhi yahan aakar Sonali ka dil khushi se jhoom uththa tha lekin jab kabhi use purane din yaad aate to use apni Jay ke prati berukhi yaad aati to uski aankhen nam ho jaati. Jay kabhi samajh nahin paaya uske man ko. Use hamesha yahi lagta tha ki Sonali Raj ko yaad karke ro rahi hai.

Wo Sonali ko dilasa deta rehta tha lekin Sonali ko jo takleef hai jiski wajah se wo ghut ghut kar jee rahi hai use Jay ko kaise bataye. Kya kare wo uski samajh mein kuch nahin aa raha tha. Kya wo Jay ke paas wapas chali jaye? Kahin Jay use thukra na de kyunki ek baar wo bhi aisa kar chuki hai. Kya wo jindagi bhar widhwa bani rahegi. Kya uski jindagi ka aisa hi ant likha tha bhagwan ne.

Dono apne apne jajbaaton ko seene mein chupaye ek doosre se milte the, baatein karte the lekin kabhi kabhi dono ki aankhen hi sab bol deti thi lekin jhijhak ki wajah se dono ke hoth seal the. Jarurat thi to us waqt ki jab dono premi ek doosre ke wapas ho jayen kyunki pichli baar to shayad sirf ek akarshan tha jo ek dum se toot gaya lekin is samay dono ke beech sachha aur pavitra ankaha prem panap raha tha jise abhi samaj ke saamne apna sar uthana hai.

Kya aisa hoga?


To be continued....
 

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Do din aise hi gujar gaye lekin Monika ko koi raasta najar nahin aaya. Udhar Ravi ko kya tension honi thi, wo mast khushi se life college enjoy kar raha tha. Monika ko ab jhijhak hoti thi uska saamna karne mein ki kahin wo uska majak na banana shuru kar de. Halanki Ravi itna bura nahin tha jitna Monika sochti thi lekin kehte hain na doodh ka jala chach ko bhi foonk foonk kar peeta hai. Isliye Monika ab koi risk lena nahin chahti thi.

Ek din rojana ki tarah Ravi apne ghar se bike par college ke liye akela nikla kyunki Pawan kuch beemar tha. Halanki Ravi ka man nahin tha Pawan ke bagair jaane ka lekin Pawan ne force karke use jaise taise bhej hi diya. Ravi chala jaa raha tha ki raaste mein use ek burkhe wali aunty bike rokne ke liye haath deti huyi dikhi.

Ravi ne pehle socha shayad kisi aur ko ishara kar rahi hogi lekin jab us aunty ne use awaaz dekar rukne ke liye kaha to usne bike rok li. Aunty uske paas aayi aur boli “Beta tum ABC college (Naam jop chahe rakh lo kya fark padta hai ) mein jaa rahe ho na.” “Haan Aunty, kyun aapko kuch kaam tha”

“Beta wo meri beti wahan padhti hai. Uski fees jama karani thi aur aaj last date hai. Wo jaldi jaldi mein ghar par paise bhool gayi hai. Main bahut der se bus ka wait kar rahi hoon lekin koi bus nahin mili. Agar tumhe takleef na ho to kya tum mujhe college tak chod sakte ho”

Ab apna Ravi to hai hi dariyadil. “Haan haan kyun nahin aunty. Main to wahin jaa raha hun. Baith jaiye main apko chod deta hoon.” Aunty uski bike ke peeche usse kuch fasla bana kar ek taraf pair karke baith jaati hain, jaisa ki aamtaur par ladkiyan baiththi hain (Ab apni GF wali style mat samajh lena sab ). Ravi ne bike chalani start kar di lekin raaste mein ek restaurant pada to aunty ne Ravi ko rukne ko kaha. Ravi ke yahan rukne ka karan poochne par aunty ne bataya ki aaj college ke chakkar main bahut late ho gayi hoon. Ab ghar par khana bhi nahin bana paungi. Bus yahan rukti nahin jo main wapsi mein le lun isliye khana yahin se pack karwa rahi hoon.”

Ravi ko kya fark panda tha. Usne dubara bike start kar di. Lekin ye kya aunty jo pehle fasla bana kar baithi huyi thi ab usse ek dum chipak kar baithi huyi thi. Ravi ne socha shayad aunty ko dar lag raha hoga to usne bike dheemi kar di lekin aunty par to jaisa koi asar hi nahin hua. Wo waise hi Ravi se chipak kar baithi rahi. Usne burkha bhi hata diya tha lekin Ravi ki nigaahein to saamne thi to use us aunty ka chehra dikhai nahin de raha tha. Aunty ne chipakne ke saath kuch kuch harkatein bhi shuru kar di.

Kabhi pet par haath firati, kabhi jaangho par, kabhi gardan ko sehlati to kabhi gaalo ki chikoti kaatti. Aakhir Ravi kab tak bardhast karta. Usne aunty ko tok diya aur mana kiya lekin aunty kahan maanne wali thi. Ab to usne chalti bike mein hi ek taraf se dono taraf pair kar liye aur Ravi se ekdum chipak gayi. Ravi ka to bura haal tha. Raaste ke saare log unhen dekh kar hans rahe the. Ravi kya kehta, usne socha college aane wala hai hi. Jaise hi college aayega ye apne raaste main apne raaste.

College pahunchne tak Ravi bahut pareshan ho gaya. Usne socha ki bahar gate par utarunga to aunty fir mere chep ho jayegi ki mujhe fees counter pata nahin wahan chod kar aa. Isse to acha hai ki main pehle se hi unhe wahan chod dun. Ravi ne apni bike ko fees counter ki taraf mod liya.

Fees counter par pahunch kar Ravi ne aunty se kaha “Aunty yahin par fees jama hoti hai. Aap fees jama kar do main chalta hun. Mujhe class ke liye late ho raha hai”. Lekin tabhi uske kaano mein jo awaaz padti hai use sunkar wo chaunk jaata hai.

“Aye haye mere raja. Baja dungi tera baja. Mujhe yahan kyun laya hai. Mere se shaadi karega. Main tayyar hun. Kitna gora hai re tu. Maja aa jayega.Chal aa ja mere paas aise sharma kyun raha hai”

Ravi ne peeche mud kar dekha to taaliyon bajata ek hijda burkhe mein bol raha tha. Ravi ki to halat kharab thi. Sab Ravi ko dekh kar hans rahe the. Sabne Ravi aur us hijde ko bike par chipakte huye dekha tha.

Ravi ki to bolti hi band ho gayi thi. Saara college uspar hans raha tha. Itne mein Sanju aur Jay ko pata chala to wo bhagte bhagte uske paas aaye aur usse sab haal poochne lage. Ravi ne bata diya to wo use dusri taraf le gaye. Lekin Ravi ka mood upset tha usne bike utahi aur ghar par aa gaya. Poore din wo yahi sochta raha ki uske saath ye kya ho gaya. Lekin use kuch bhi nahin soojha. Usne socha kal tak sab bhool jayenge aur koi dikkat nahin aayegi.

Agle din jab Ravi Pawan ke saath college pahuncha to usne dekha ki jaise usne Monika ke posters deewar par chipakwaye hain waise hi uske kal hijde ke saath chipka chipki wale posters saare college mein chipke huye hain. Tabhi unhen saamne se Monika hansti huyi aati dikhai di. Usne Ravi se kaha “Dekh liya mujh se panga lene ka anjaam” aur itna kehkar :thumbdown: dikha kar chali gayi.

Ravi ka chehra gusse se laal ho gaya tha lekin wo kuch nahin kar sakta tha. Wo bus ab is beizzati ka badla lene ki soch raha tha.

Isi tarah roj Ravi aur Monika koi na koi bahana dhoondhte rehte the ek doosre ko neecha dikhane ke liye lekin ise saubhagya kahiye ya durbhagya dono ko hi aisa koi mauka nahin mila jisse woe k doosre ko neecha dikha sake. Halanki baaki dost dono ke hi common friends the lekin shukar hai in dono ke ladai jhagde ki wajah se dono ki apne apne doston se abhi tak anban nahin huyi thi. Shayad iska ek karan ye bhi tha ki sab samajh gaye the ki Ravi aur Monika aise hain jaise aag aur paani. Dono ek saath ho hi nahin sakte. Isliye dono ke jhagde ko ignore karna hi unhen behtar lagta tha.


To be continued....
:haha: acha badla liya hai monika ne dekhte hai ravi kese badla leta hai
 
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Update 70

Idhar Ravi aur Monika ek doosre se baat karna bhi pasand nahin karte the to wahin doosri or Jay aur Sonali chahte huye bhi ek doosre se khul kar baat nahin kar paate the. Jahan Jay is baat se pareshan hai ki agar maine apne pyaar ka ijhaar kiya to pata nahin Sonali mere bare mein kya sochegi, kya wo Raj ko bhula kar mujhe apnayegi, kahin wo ye na sochne lage ki Raj mar gaya aur uska sasur jail mein chala gaya to main use pyaar ki baatein karke uski jaydad ke peeche pada hoon.

Nahin nahin wo aisa nahin soch sakti, lekin samaj humein kya milne dega. Ek widhwa ko to waise bhi samaj achhi drishi se nahin dekhta aur us par se punah vivaah. Agar Sonali maan bhi gayi to bhi kya hamara bhavishya ujjwal rahega. Kya samaj ke thekedaaron ka saamna hamara pyaar kar payega. Kya Sonali is sab mein mera saath degi.

Kya wo din wapas aayenge jab wo dono ek saath haathon mein haath dale ghumte the, ped ke neeche ek doosre ki baahon mein ghanton bitate the, ek doosre ki khinchai, meethi meethi takraar, phir pyaar se manana, wo jhule par jhulna, wo baarish mein nahana, wo school bunk karke picture dekhne jaana, wo shopping ki list, wo wade, wo kasme kya ab kabhi aisa hoga. Jay ki aankhon mein ye sab sochkar aansu aa gaye.

Idhar Sonali bhi kuch alag nahin soch rahi thi. Manjil ek thi lekin raaste alag alag the. Sonali ke man mein hamesha ek dwandyudh chalta rehta tha. Ek taraf wo Raj ko bhula nahin paa rahi thi to doosri taraf Jay ko bhi nahin apna paa rahi thi. Kahin kahin Jay ki is halat ke liye wo khud ko doshi maanti thi jiski ishwar ne use bahut badi saja de di thi. Na wo Jay ko reject karti aur na hi use ye din dekhne padte. Ab to usne apne jeene ka ek hi maksad bana liya tha ki apni poori jindagi apne hone wale bacche ke saath bitani hai. Uski dekhbhal, padhai likhai, shaadi aur bhi na jaane kya kya sapne Sonali ne dekh liye the.

Dono jaise ek aag mein jal rahe the. Sonali jitna Jay se door jaane ki koshish karti uska dil use wahin khinch lata. Use baar baar Jay ka masoom chehra, uska bholapan, uski sadgi, uski khuddari, uska tarah tarah se help karna, jab Sonali ka koi nahin tha (Matlab pati mar gaya tha aur sasur jail chala gaya tha) tab Jay hi tha jisne use sahara diya tha. Sonali ko routine checkup ke liye le jaana, uski dawaiyon ka khyaal rakhna, uske khaane peene ka dhyaan rakhna sab Jay hi to kar raha tha. Wo kaise bhool sakti hai uski meharbaaniyon ko.

Jay subah subah ek baar Sonali ka haal pochne jaroor aata tha aur college chootne ke baad ek round laga kar aata tha. Jab bhi Sonali ko checkup ke liye jaana hota tha Jay college se chutti kar leta tha. Lekin har kadam Sonali ka saath nibhana hi jaise ab uski jindagi ban gayi thi. Kabhi kabhi Sonali use mana bhi karti thi lekin Jay ki jid ke aage uski ek na chalti thi. Wo bhi jyada jor nahin deti thi kyunki wo Jay ke saath surakshit mehsoos karti thi.

Lekin kehte hain na ishq mushq chupaye nahin chupte. Poore mohalle mein baat fail gayi thi dono ke rishte ko lekar. Logon mein aisi dharna ban chuki thi ki dono ke beech najayaj sambhandh hai. Halanki Jay ko to isse koi fark nahin padhta tha lekin Sonali ab bade khandan ki bahu thi. Halanki Sikander ek mujrim tha lekin phir bhi uska kuch to samaj mein naam tha hi. Parivaar ki maryada, uski ijjat in sab baton ka khyaal to ab Sonali ko hi rakhna tha.

Lekin is dil ka kya karen. Dil insaan ko kabhi kabhi kitna majboor bana deta hai. Sab kuch uske haath mein hote huye bhi uske haath mein kuch nahin hota. Aksar Jay Sonali ko park wagairah mein ghumane le jaata tha. Halanki pehle jaise wo park mein milte the waisa mahaul to nahin tha lekin phir bhi yahan aakar Sonali ka dil khushi se jhoom uththa tha lekin jab kabhi use purane din yaad aate to use apni Jay ke prati berukhi yaad aati to uski aankhen nam ho jaati. Jay kabhi samajh nahin paaya uske man ko. Use hamesha yahi lagta tha ki Sonali Raj ko yaad karke ro rahi hai.

Wo Sonali ko dilasa deta rehta tha lekin Sonali ko jo takleef hai jiski wajah se wo ghut ghut kar jee rahi hai use Jay ko kaise bataye. Kya kare wo uski samajh mein kuch nahin aa raha tha. Kya wo Jay ke paas wapas chali jaye? Kahin Jay use thukra na de kyunki ek baar wo bhi aisa kar chuki hai. Kya wo jindagi bhar widhwa bani rahegi. Kya uski jindagi ka aisa hi ant likha tha bhagwan ne.

Dono apne apne jajbaaton ko seene mein chupaye ek doosre se milte the, baatein karte the lekin kabhi kabhi dono ki aankhen hi sab bol deti thi lekin jhijhak ki wajah se dono ke hoth seal the. Jarurat thi to us waqt ki jab dono premi ek doosre ke wapas ho jayen kyunki pichli baar to shayad sirf ek akarshan tha jo ek dum se toot gaya lekin is samay dono ke beech sachha aur pavitra ankaha prem panap raha tha jise abhi samaj ke saamne apna sar uthana hai.

Kya aisa hoga?


To be continued....
Nice update sonali ko dubara jay se pyar ho gaya lekin ek baat samajh na aa rahi akhir isse kitni baar pyaar hoga story me pehle jay se phir sagar se phir raj se ab dubara jay se lekin shayad usse har baar attraction huwa tha aur ab kahin jaake sacha pyar huwa hai dekhte hai kab aur kese dono ek dusre se pyar ka ijhar karte hai aur pehle kon karta hai
 
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Nice update sonali ko dubara jay se pyar ho gaya lekin ek baat samajh na aa rahi akhir isse kitni baar pyaar hoga story me pehle jay se phir sagar se phir raj se ab dubara jay se lekin shayad usse har baar attraction huwa tha aur ab kahin jaake sacha pyar huwa hai dekhte hai kab aur kese dono ek dusre se pyar ka ijhar karte hai aur pehle kon karta hai
Wo sagar nahin Sameer tha :D
 

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guru padh liya pura ...ek bat bta pawan se kya dushmani hai teri sala sabka dil to tod hi diya tha use kyu chod diya .aisa to nhi jaldbaji mai bhul gya. . .sala mtlb pure khani mai heart break hai.hai....title ek din achanak nhi breaking relationship hone chahiye
mtlb javed ki bhi setting agar kar hi di to jassi kha gyi mtlb agar character dala hai to role to pura krwate ya wo EDA ki google map thi adress btaya aur navigation off ho gya
bhai khani mai bhut sare suspense dekhe but itne heart break krega to agla story padhne se pehle daru ki bottle lene jaega
 
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tau ye update likha te huaa kaha uljhe huai the ki pura update he uljha ke rakha diya.
kon kya kare kya na kare is main update nikal gaya fear bhi update pura na huaa.
:doh:
kya hoga dono ka :ohno:
ab to bus dost log he kucha kar de dono ke liye. :D
in dono se to kuch nhi hone vala. :pray:
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Update 71

Jay aur Sonali ki jindagi bhi ajeeb khel khel rahi thi unke saath. Kabhi dono ek doosre se juda rehne ki koshish karte the to kabhi ek doosre ki yaad mein aansu bahate the. Aakhir wok arte bhi kya dono ki hi position aisi thi ki wo jamane ka saamna nahin kar sakte the. Jahan Jay abhi berojgar tha aur use apne pairon par khada hona tha taaki wo apna aur Sonali ka bacche samet palan kar sake.

Sonali bhi ek widhwa hone ke naate majboor thi kyunki hamare samaj ne widhwa par kai bandhise laga rakhi hain. Na wo usse milne jaa sakti thi aur na hi use apna sakti thi. Lekin jab dono milte the to duniya jahan ke dard, musibatein bhulkar ek sukhad anubhuti mehsoos karte the. Dono chahkar bhi kuch bol nahin pate the. Jahan ek prem kahani kisi nateeje par nahin pahunch rahi thi to wahin doosri aur ek nayi prem kahani janam le rahi thi.

Sabki life mast chal rahi thi ki ek din achanak ek ghatna se kai logon ke jeewan mein parivartan la diya. Huya yun ki Saturday ka din tha aur Manish ka birthday tha. Usne Jay, Jawed aur baaki doston ko birthday party mein invite kiya. Ab Manish ki birthday party thi to uski Girlfriend ka aana to tay tha lekin pareshani ye thi ki wo akeli nahin aayegi uske saath uski behan Jassi bhi aayegi. Ab Jassi ko kaun jhelega. Use ignore bhi nahin kar sakte kyunki agar use ignore kiya to Manish ki to band baj jayegi.

Ab sawal ye tha ki use jhele kaun. To sabne faisla liya ki bali ka bakra pehle ki tarah Jawed hi banega. Jassi ke saath poori party ke dauran rehna aur uska khyaal rakhna Jawed ke jimme aa gaya. After all birthday boy ki GF ki behan jo thi. Ab Jawed kya kehta uska to chehra aise ho gaya tha jaise kisi ne use maut ki saja suna di ho. Hatasha bhari awaaz mein usne hami bhar di. Iske baad sab party ki tayyariyon mein lag gaye.


Halanki sab college mein aa gaye the lekin janamdin wohi bachpan ko yaad karta huya mana rahe the. Wohi rang birange gubbare jise fulane mein sabki saans ful gayi. Kagaj jisse HAPPY BIRTHDAY likhne mein sabke haath gond se chipak gaye the aur chipke bhi aise ki Fevicol ka AD sabko yaad aa gaya (Ye Fevicol ka majboot jod hai tootega nahin). Ek bada sa choclate cake jis par sab apni lar tapka rahe the. Do teen tarah ki namkeen, biscuits, snacks etc. plates mein sajane mein sab lage the. Kami thi to bas sar par lagane wali topi ki jo Manish janbhujkar nahin laaya kyunki laata to use hi sabse pehle pehanni padti.

Sab dost dopahar se college chutne ke baad se hi Manish ke ghar dera jamaye huye the. Manish bhi man mein gali de raha tha saala itna kharcha to party mein bhi nahin hona jitna ye log dopahar se shaam tak kha kha kar denge. Kabhi inko wafers chahiye, kabhi colddrinks, kabhi sweets to kabhi kuch. Saala isse to achha tha ki main akele sab arrangement kar leta.

Lekin wo kehte hain na Ab Pachtaye Hot Kya Jab Chidiya Chug Gayi Khet. Bas ab jab sabko bula liya hai to jhelo. Lekin dost hote kaise hain jab dekho tab ek doosre ki jeb kate rehte hai lekin jab waqt aata hai to ek doosre ke liye jaan dene mein bhi peeche nahin hatte. Bas Manish unhen dekh dekh kar khush tha ki sab uske liye kitna kar rahe hain. Itna to koi saga bhai bhi nahin karega.

Shaam tak sab tayyariyan ho chuki thi. Cake bhi aa gaya tha jispar rangeen candles laga di gayi thi. Charon taraf gubbare chipke huye the, kagaj se Happy Birthday deewar par likha huya tha. Usi se phoolon ki chadar jaisa chat par bana diya gaya tha. 10 saal purana cassette player jise kal hi thok pitkar gaane sunane ke liye specially tayyar kiya gaya tha. Chamchamate kapde jo kal hi road side par lagne wale bazaar se kharide the aur us par khusbudar scent chidka tha jisme se ab khusbu aa rahi thi ya badbu ye to pata nahin haan lekin lagaya jaroor tha.

Sab intezar kar rahe the ladkiyon ke aane ka aur reh reh kar Jawed ko chidaya ja raha tha. Jawed ki bolti band thi. Use wo din yaad aa raha tha jab aisi hi kuch halat Jawed ki Jassi se milne jaate waqt huyi thi. Lekin tab aur aaj mein jameen aasman ka antar tha. Sabki nigahein darwaje ki taraf thi. Sanju ne to bahar door take k round bhi lagaya lekin dono ka kuch ata pata nahin tha.

Aakhir kitna intezar karte sabko apne apne ghar bhi jaana tha. 7 baje ka time tha aur 9 to aise hi baj gaye the. Shayad dono kahin fans gayi hongi ye sochkar sabne cake katne ka man banaya. Idhar Jawed Bhai man hi man bahut khus the ki unka peecha chuta. Jaan Bachi to lakho paye aur Laut ke budhu Ghar ko aaye wali kahawat unpar fit baith rahi thi.

Manish bhi man marker centre table ke paas pahunch gaya jahan cake rakha huya tha. Wahan jaakar usne mombatti jalai aur ek aas ke saath darwaje ki taraf dekha lekin koi fayda nahin. Shayad wo nahin aayengi to unke chakkar mein baaki dost ka waqt kyun barbad karun yahi sochkar jaise hi Manish ne mombatti par phoonk marni chahi ki use saamne se do ladkiyan aati dikhai hi jise dekhkar sab chaunk gaye.


To be continued....
 

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are bina birthday bomb diye birthday mna rhe ho writer chii kuch to sharm kro..
bdi jaldi thi cake katwane ki...dekhna khi manish ka cake ke sath chutiya bhi mat kat dena...sala javed ka bhi breakup krwayega tu...ye writer hai ya love broker jav javed ki setting ho chuki thi fir jassi ko uske sar par kyu thopa...mtlb sala kisi ko bhi live happily ever nhi bolne dega.
dekhte av ye do kon hai riya diya ya fir jassi aur uski behen
 
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