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Nice update 
Pawan to bahut jyada emotional ladka lag raha jis tarah se aaj vo Ravi ke samne ro raha tha
Par ye kya jab Ravi ko pata chala ki Rider itna bura bhi nhi jitna vo samajhta tha
Ab jab usne Rider se sulah karne ka socha to Rider ko hi out kar diya story se
Ab dekhte hai inki aage ki school life kaisi hogi
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Pawan to bahut jyada emotional ladka lag raha jis tarah se aaj vo Ravi ke samne ro raha tha
Par ye kya jab Ravi ko pata chala ki Rider itna bura bhi nhi jitna vo samajhta tha
Ab jab usne Rider se sulah karne ka socha to Rider ko hi out kar diya story se
Ab dekhte hai inki aage ki school life kaisi hogi
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Update 11
Doston aap ne padha ki Kaise Pawan aur Rider dushman se dost ban gaye. Kaise Pawan mein itni himmat aa gayi ki wo haalat ka dat kar saamna karna sikh gaya. Jo ab uske bahut kaam ane wala tha aage jaakar . Ravi Rider se mil nahin paaya, usse maafi bhi nahin maang paya. Wo to yehi sochta raha ki Rider use ab bhi apna dushman samajh raha hoga lekin kya Rider bhi aisa hi kuch sochta hai. Aage pata chalega
Episode 2
Rider to chala gaya lekin Ravi aur Pawan ki dosti aur bhi gehri hoti gayi. Lekin ab Pawan mein vyaktitva mein ek badlav sa aa gaya tha jise dekhkar Ravi hairan tha. Jo Pawan ladkiyon ko dekhkar sharmata tha ab seedha baat shuru karne se bhi nahin jhijhkata tha. Usne kai baar Pawan se iske baare mein poocha lekin har baar Pawan ka ek hi jawab tha "Pata nahin yaar ye sab kaise ho gaya. Shayad Rider ki wajah se". Khair jo bhi ho Ravi bahut khus tha ki Pawan haalat ka saamna karna seekh gaya. Kal ko agar wo dono ek saath na bhi huye to bhi ye akele sab musibaton ka saamna kar sakega.
Dheere dheere is baat ko ek saal beet gaya aur dono dost 11th mein aa gaye. Haan ye baatein tab ki thi jab dono 10th mein the. 11th mein aane ke baad dono ko dubara admission lena tha kyunki jis school mein ye pad rahe the wo sirf 10th tak tha. Dono ne kai school ki khaak chani lekin kahin safalta nahin mili. Iska karan ye tha ki dono ke alag alag subjects mein alag alad numbers the. Kahin bhi dono ka saath mein admission nahin ho raha tha. Kisi school mein Pawan ka ho jata lekin Ravi ka nahin to kisi school mein Ravi ka ho jata Pawan ka nahin. Lekin dono dost ne faisla kiya hua tha ki kahin bhi admission mile dono saath mein hi lenge.
Lekin kehte hain na "JAHAN CHAH WAHAN RAAH" dono ko dhoondte huye aakhir ek school mil hi gaya jo Co-ed tha matlab jahan ladke ladkiyan saath mein padhte hain. Dono ko fees jama karni padi jisme Ravi ne Pawan ki pehli baar financially help ki. Aaj tak to kewal khane peene par hi kharch hota tha lekin padhai ke liye kharch pehli baar huya tha. Pawan ne bahut mana kiya kyunki wo ek khuddar banda tha lekin Ravi ke aage uski ek na chali. Dusra wo ye sochkar bhi dheela pad gaya ki agar is school mein bhi admission nahin liya to pata nahin aage unhe kisi school mein saath mein admission mile bhi ya nahin.
Pawan aur Ravi ne naye school mein admission to le liya lekin is school ke saath unse samanjhasya nahin banaya jaa raha tha. Karan ye tha ki pehle wo sirf ladko ke saath padhte the jahan hansi majak, ek dusre ki taang kheechna aur masti karna unki roz ki aadat thi. Dusra wo wahan kaafi samay se padh rahe the to us school ki yaadein unki nas nas mein bhari padi thi. Jabki is school mein sab naya tha. Co-ed tha to jahir hai ladkiyan bhi thi. Ab ladkiyon se baat kaise ki jaye. Unhe kyun aur kaise dost banaya jaye aise kai sawaal Pawan aur khaskar Ravi ke dimmag mein chal rahe the.
Lekin waqt dheere dheere sab sikha deta hai. Aise hi kuch din gujar gaye to sabse dosti bhi honi shuru ho gayi. ladkon se hui to hui kuch ladkiyon se bhi ho gayi. (Sirf Dosti aur jyada kuch nahin ), Ab jyada isliye nahin kyunki Ravi ko pyaar vyaar mein vishwas nahin tha (Ab aap log kahoge Shahrukh ki movie se inspired karke update dala hai ). Aisa nahin hai ki bilkul vishwaas nahin tha lekin uski himmat hi nahin hoti thi ki kisi ko I LOVE YOU bol de. Baat khub karta tha ladkiyon se aur ladkiyan bhi usse lekin koi pasand bhi aa jaye to ye teen words wo chah kar nahin bol sakta tha. Khair usne kabhi koshish bhi nahin ki in sab baton ko sochne tak ki bhi.
Lekin Pawan ka jahan vyaktitva change hua to uska najariya bhi change ho gaya. Jahan pehle wo sharmata tha ab bedhadak har ladki se baat karna shuru kar deta tha. Ravi se ladkiyon ki dosti usi ki badaulat huyi thi. Agar Pawan nahin hota to shayad Ravi ki koi lady dost bhi nahin hoti. Pawan dosti shuru karta aur sab aapas mein milkar school time enjoy karte. Dheere dheere Ravi bhi khulne lag gaya. Ab pehle ki tarah jyada sharmata nahin tha lekin pyaar vyaar ke chakkar mein ab bhi nahin padhta tha.
Aise hi masti karte huye ek saal beet gaya aur dono achhe numbers se paas hokar 12th mein aa gaye. Class change huyi to kuch purane dost saath bhi aaye jo paas ho gaye the to kuch chut bhi gaye jo fail ho gaye the. Lekin dono ko koi farak nahin padhta tha kyunki wo dono to saath hi the.
Lekin kya aisa hoga ?
To be continued....
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Nub_Ag
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bhai konsi story apun ki koi story na haiyaha to har update ka chir fad karing.
vese apni vali kahai band kar ke bethe ho.
shuru ki huai story to pure karo
aka3829
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Wah ji wah update 8 me to meri kahi hui baat hi sahi sabit kar di. Pawan itna dar gya ki wo khud hi ladne baith gya Rider se. Aur to sur ab to pawan ladkiyo se bhi khul kar baat karta he. Tabhi to Riya mili he use. Waise bhai isame kuch fight bhi he ya nahi.
Aaj chot sa hi review diya he plzz naraz na hona.
Waiting 4 next update
Aaj chot sa hi review diya he plzz naraz na hona.
Waiting 4 next update
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