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Romance EK MUTTHI AASMAN(short story)

lone_hunterr

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:claps: :claps: bhut acha update tha bhai Patrick Amit ko train karega_____. Madhu bhi fail hui par vo finally sad nhi hai Amit ke karan.------ Dono ne apna relation bhi maan liya hai.__________ Aab bas wait hai to Amit ki success journey ka joki start ho chuki hai uski sabse badi weakness yani ki stamina ko improve karne se. :smile:

Agle update ka wait hai bhai...
 
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Swaraj

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NIGHT CLUB ME
kanika ka 5 bottle beer khatam ho chuka tha
Apne yaadon me khoyi hui thi wo
Wo bhi ek boxer thi lekin kandhe par ek permanent injury ki wajah se.....

Mihir khojne aaya tha kanika ko aur use wahin mili kanika jahan usne guess kiya tha

"kanika tum...."mihir ne bolna chaha

" I FUCKING HATE THIS WORLD"kanika zor se chillayi

He bhagwan ye ladki marwaegi aaj
Mihir ne club ke manager se lekar waiter sabse maafi maangi

"chalo bohut ho gaya kanika" mihir bola

"tu bhaad me kyun nahi chala Jaata mihir" kanika boli

Mihir kuch nahi bola use pata tha ki kanika madhu ke sapne ko jee rahi thi, use apna sapna madhu me dikhta tha.
Wo chahti thi madhu uske sapne ko poora kare

DHAP

kanika ka quota jawab de chuka tha
Aur wo ludak gayi thi

Aur mihir ne kanika ko uthaya aur kisi tarah uske ghar tak le gaya

"kambakht aurat ke ghar me bedroom first floor par hi hona tha" mihir badbadaya gusse me

Kanika ko litakar mihir ne apni peeth thik ki tabhi kanika ki t shirt upar chadh gayi aur uska pet dikhne laga

"mai nahi dekh raha, mai nahi dekh raha" aankhen band kar badbadaya mihir aur kisi blanket chadha kar apne ghar ki aur chala gaya
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Waqt Ka pahiya ghoomta raha aur madhu ke Saath amit ka ye rishta aur gehra hota chala gaya

"wah mere sher kya muscles hai tumhare" madhu amit ke body ko touch karte hue boli

"wo to bas..." amit halka sa sharmate hue bola

"fir se dikhao" madhu ne zabardasti uske bag se wo medal nikal li jo amit ne aaj jeeta tha

"kya lade aaj tum yaar, kya fight thi" madhu boli

"bakwas" bol amit khada hua

"kyun??" madhu be poocha

"Saare boxers sadakchaap the, kisi ne koi training nahi li thi" amit bola

"but an achievement is an achievement right" madhu boli

Amit chup raha

"waise ye tumhare liye" madhu ne ek baag diya amit ko

"gloves, head gear...." amit je muh se nikla

"pehli achievement ke liye meri aur se" madhu boli aur gaal par ek kiss dekar chali ja rahi thi

"ruko madhu, e ek sapna mai tumhare Saath dekhna chahta hoon" amit bola

"bolo" madhu boli

"mai hum dono ko ek Saath champions hote dekhna chahti hoon" amit bola

"matlab??" madhu boli

"mai world heavyweight je liye Edward ko challange karke jeetna chahta hoon, tum medals ke liye box karo" amit bola

Madhu hairan thi, Edward?? Wo to kisi ko ring me 10 minute se zyada khada na hone de, fight karna alag

"to kare sapne poore" amit muskura kar bola

Madhu muskura di

raat zyada ho gayi thi isliye amit ne dheere dheere paanv badha diye apne kamre ki aur

"amit??" Mr surana ne awaz lagai

"ji papa" amit bola

"suna koi tournament jeet kar aaye ho" amit bola

"h Haan papa, lekin koi bohut badi tournament nahi wo to bas Baaki boxers kamzor the" amit bola

"fir bhi a win is a win" Mr surana bole

Dono chup rahe

"yani boxing continue karoge" Mr surana ne poocha

"Haan papa, abhi sirf state ke liye taiyyari kar raha hoon, fir nationals aur fir Olympics ya Asian games ke liye" amit bola

Mr surana bas badi badi aankhon se amit ko dekh rahe the, koi badi badi baat nahi kar raha hai ye ladka
Jo Keh raha hai karke dikhayega

"jao thak gaye hoge so jao" Mr surana bole aur apne kamre me chale gaye
Mrs surana so rahi thi

"suno, lagta hai amit kaafi bada ho gaya hai, koun soch sakta tha ki wo mera Naam is tarah Roshan karega" Mr surana bole

"tumhara naam?? Beta mera hai samjhe" mrs surana lete hye boli

"ayyy kuch kaha tumne??" Mr surana ne poocha

"kuch nahi so jao" bol Mrs surana ne lights off kar diya
 
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Naina

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"tum rishabh bhaiyya wale gym join kyun nahi kar lete amit, wahan tumhe acha guidance milega" madhu ne amit ke baalon par haath ferte hue kaha

"nahi madhu mai thik hoon, waise bhi yahan maine grow kiya hai, koi baat nahi next time ache se perform karunga" amit bola

Madhu ne gaur se dekha amit ko, kai mahine se relationship me hai is ladke ke Saath, iske dil me kya chal raha hai use ache se pata hai

"aise nahi chalega utho" madhu ne adesh diya

"l lekin madhu kahan ja rahe hai" amit bola

"Patrick boxing academy" madhu ne amit ka haath pakad lagbhag kheechte hue kaha

"lekin kyun" amit bola

"wo wahan pata chal jayega" madhu ne amit ko kheechte hue le Jaana jari rakha

Academy pohunch kar madhu seedha amit ko Ander le gayi

"arey amit kal kya shandar perform kiya tumne, waise rest le lete aaj" mihir bola

"mihir sir, Patrick sir kahan milenge" madhu ne poocha

"ring me hai, kyun??" mihir ne hairaani se poocha

"kuch nahi" bol madhu amit ko le gayi ring ke a der jahan par Patrick boxing gloves pehen kar exercise kar raha tha


"mujhe kuch kehna hai amit ke baare me" madhu boli

"Haan pata hai, maine promise kiya tha ki ye tournament jeetne ke baad hi ise train karunga" Patrick shaant hokar bola

"come on sir ye iski pehli tournament hai aur aap isse kais.... Mmmfff bfffffff" amit ne madhu ka muh apne haathon se band kar diya

"ruk jao madhu" amit bola aur Patrick ke Saamne khada ho gaya

"us tournament se maine bohut kuch seekha hai, mai fir se us tournament me hissa Lunga aur aapko sabit kar doonga" amit Patrick ke aankhon me aankhen daal kar bola

"uksi zaroorat nahi hai, kyunki tumhari pehli tournament hai, isliye mai tumhe train karunga ye tournament haarne ke bawjood" Patrick bola

"j ji ji??" amit ko yakeen nahi hua

"Haan ab bhago aur kal se taiyyar shuru karo" Patrick bola

Amit daud kar chala gaya aur Patrick madhu ke Paas aaya

"madhu tum iski stamina badhaogi" Patrick bola

Madhu ne Haan me sar hilaya
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Subah ke 4 baje

"aawwnnnn" band aankhon se gate kholkar madhu ke Saamne khada ho gaya amit

"10 kilometers daily, na kam na zyada, constant speed ke Saath" madhu boli.track suit pehen rakha tha madhu ne lekin neeche sirf short pehna hua tha

Amit ki nazar wahan jate hi madhu ka para chad gaya

"ab tharak panti band karo aur chalo shuru karte hai" madhu boli

Daudne ke Waqt amit thak kar choor ho Jaata Hai, kisi bench par baith Jaata Hai
Madhu sab dekhti hai, samajhti hai lekin wo kuch nahi kar sakti
Success ke peeche koi short cut nahi hai
Wo madhu ko ache se pata hai
Amit ka stamina poor hai aur wahi uske haar ka kaaran bana

Har din ye silsila chalta raha lekin amit ne kabhi bhi band nahi kiya daudna
Ab to wo madhu ke just peeche chalta daudta rehta hai

"ye lo madhu" amit ne ek bag thama diya madhu ko

"kya hai ye?? Aur itne paise kharch karne ki kya zaroorat thi??" madhu boli aur packet khol diya
Ek t shirt aur ek jeans thi usme

"k kal shopping mall me bohut der se use dekh rahi thi na t tum" amit sar khujte hue bola

Madhu ki aankhen chalak uthi

"ro kyun rahi ho tum" amit ne poocha

"koun ro raha hai, waise amit kal mere liye ek bada din hai. Asian games ke selection ke liye Jaana Hai mujhe, tum aaoge??" madhu ne poocha

"na kehti tab bhi aata" amit haakar bola to madhu bhi muskura uthi

ASIAN GAMES TOURNAMENT

Aankhen fuli hui aur chehra sooja hua tha
Lekin wo nahi ho paaya jo madhu chahti thi
Jise dekhne ke liye amit aaya tha

"mat ro madhu plz chup ho jao" kanika madhu ke haath par haath rakh kar Keh rahi thi

"kanika zara yahan to aana" mihir ke bulate hi kanika ne madhu ka haath kas kar pakda aur fir chali gayi

"lao apna haath do madhu" amit bola aur madhu ka gloves kholne laga

Bencha par baithi madhu chupchap apna haath Amit ke Saamne rakhe

"tum bohut acha ladi aaj, kam se kam us opponent se behtar jisne galat fayda uthakar ye match jeeta" amit bola

Madhu chup thi

"mai ye baat tumhe tasalli dene ke liye nahi bol raha hoon madhu, balki isliye kyunki mujhe pata hai ki tum kitni behtareen boxer ho" amit fir bola aur doosre haath ka gloves kholne laga

"maine to kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki Asian games ke selection tak pohunch paunga, lekin tum to is stage tak a gayi, I'm proud of you madhu" amit bola

"amit" madhu dheere se boli

"k kya madhu" amit bola

Madhu ne apne haklane wale bf ke chehre ko pakda aur

Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

"thanks, I love you" apna lips alag karte hue madhu boli

"m me too" amit bola

"me too se kya matlab??"

"n nahi matlab mai tumse pyaar karta hoon madhu"

"whatever, mai nahi maanti"

"aah madhu tum..."

"acha zor se chillao, fir dekhenge"

"z zor se y yahan"

"oh yani tum nahi karoge"

"I LOVE YOU M MADHU"

"mujhe sunai nahi diya"

"oh please madhu"

"ha ha ha"

"tum has kyun r rahi ho??"
So finally pratick Amit ko train karne wala hai par ush se pehle jish skill mein kamjor hai like stamina ushe improve karna hoga... hmm madhu Amit k help toh kar rahi hain par woh har gayi tournament mein.... sayad opponent ne cheating ki hogi....
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill Swaraj ji :applause: :applause:
 

Naina

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NIGHT CLUB ME
kanika ka 5 bottle beer khatam ho chuka tha
Apne yaadon me khoyi hui thi wo
Wo bhi ek boxer thi lekin kandhe par ek permanent injury ki wajah se.....

Mihir khojne aaya tha kanika ko aur use wahin mili kanika jahan usne guess kiya tha

"kanika tum...."mihir ne bolna chaha

" I FUCKING HATE THIS WORLD"kanika zor se chillayi

He bhagwan ye ladki marwaegi aaj
Mihir ne club ke manager se lekar waiter sabse maafi maangi

"chalo bohut ho gaya kanika" mihir bola

"tu bhaad me kyun nahi chala Jaata mihir" kanika boli

Mihir kuch nahi bola use pata tha ki kanika madhu ke sapne ko jee rahi thi, use apna sapna madhu me dikhta tha.
Wo chahti thi madhu uske sapne ko poora kare

DHAP

kanika ka quota jawab de chuka tha
Aur wo ludak gayi thi

Aur mihir ne kanika ko uthaya aur kisi tarah uske ghar tak le gaya

"kambakht aurat ke ghar me bedroom first floor par hi hona tha" mihir badbadaya gusse me

Kanika ko litakar mihir ne apni peeth thik ki tabhi kanika ki t shirt upar chadh gayi aur uska pet dikhne laga

"mai nahi dekh raha, mai nahi dekh raha" aankhen band kar badbadaya mihir aur kisi blanket chadha kar apne ghar ki aur chala gaya
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Waqt Ka pahiya ghoomta raha aur madhu ke Saath amit ka ye rishta aur gehra hota chala gaya

"wah mere sher kya muscles hai tumhare" madhu amit ke body ko touch karte hue boli

"wo to bas..." amit halka sa sharmate hue bola

"fir se dikhao" madhu ne zabardasti uske bag se wo medal nikal li jo amit ne aaj jeeta tha

"kya lade aaj tum yaar, kya fight thi" madhu boli

"bakwas" bol amit khada hua

"kyun??" madhu be poocha

"Saare boxers sadakchaap the, kisi ne koi training nahi li thi" amit bola

"but an achievement is an achievement right" madhu boli

Amit chup raha

"waise ye tumhare liye" madhu ne ek baag diya amit ko

"gloves, head gear...." amit je muh se nikla

"pehli achievement ke liye meri aur se" madhu boli aur gaal par ek kiss dekar chali ja rahi thi

"ruko madhu, e ek sapna mai tumhare Saath dekhna chahta hoon" amit bola

"bolo" madhu boli

"mai hum dono ko ek Saath champions hote dekhna chahti hoon" amit bola

"matlab??" madhu boli

"mai world heavyweight je liye Edward ko challange karke jeetna chahta hoon, tum medals ke liye box karo" amit bola

Madhu hairan thi, Edward?? Wo to kisi ko ring me 10 minute se zyada khada na hone de, fight karna alag

"to kare sapne poore" amit muskura kar bola

Madhu muskura di

raat zyada ho gayi thi isliye amit ne dheere dheere paanv badha diye apne kamre ki aur

"amit??" Mr surana ne awaz lagai

"ji papa" amit bola

"suna koi tournament jeet kar aaye ho" amit bola

"h Haan papa, lekin koi bohut badi tournament nahi wo to bas Baaki boxers kamzor the" amit bola

"fir bhi a win is a win" Mr surana bole

Dono chup rahe

"yani boxing continue karoge" Mr surana ne poocha

"Haan papa, abhi sirf state ke liye taiyyari kar raha hoon, fir nationals aur fir Olympics ya Asian games ke liye" amit bola

Mr surana bas badi badi aankhon se amit ko dekh rahe the, koi badi badi baat nahi kar raha hai ye ladka
Jo Keh raha hai karke dikhayega

"jao thak gaye hoge so jao" Mr surana bole aur apne kamre me chale gaye
Mrs surana so rahi thi

"suno, lagta hai amit kaafi bada ho gaya hai, koun soch sakta tha ki wo mera Naam is tarah Roshan karega" Mr surana bole

"tumhara naam?? Beta mera hai samjhe" mrs surana lete hye boli

"ayyy kuch kaha tumne??" Mr surana ne poocha

"kuch nahi so jao" bol Mrs surana ne lights off kar diya
hmm..... kanika ki bhi apni hi ek ankahin kahani hai aur shayad woh kafi peeda dayak hain.... Swaraj ji is chupi huyi kahani pe bhi roushni dale....
madhu k harne ki sath hi uske bhi sapne tut gaye....
are wah Mrs surana ki toh sur hi badal gaye... kya baat hain..... waise yeh baat bhi sach hai apne santan ke progress, success dekh kar sab se zyada khush uske parents hi hote hai....
Brilliant update Swaraj ji.... Great going :applause: :applause:
 
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