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Bahut sundar update tha.Ab jadugar ka bachana mushkil hai.
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# UPDATE 55
Prashtuti:- Swami aapko mere upar hath rakh kar ye mantra bolna hai, PRAVITHTAM HRIDAYA STHANAM GRANAM.
Jaise hi maine hath rakh ke ye mantra bola dekhte hi dekhte wah pushtak mere andar samahit ho gai.
Ab Aage......................
Main iss waqt dhyan ke mudra me baitha tha or iss waqt main uss pushtak ka adhyayan kar raha tha.
prashtuti:- Pranam swami kahen main aapki kya sahayta kar sakti hun.
Main:- Jab tum mere hriday ke sath par sthit ho to tumko to pata hi hoga ki main kya janna chahta hun.
Prashtuti:- Ji Main janti hun kintu main apne swami ke agya ke bina koi bhi chij nahi kar sakti, isliye aap hame adesh de kya janna hai aaoko.
Main:- Thik hai, to tum mujhe uss dusht jokram ko marne ka raaz btao.
Prashtuti:- wo aise mara jayega ................... .
Main apne dhayan se bahar aaya or ramika ke paas gaya, abhi subah hone wali thi, or ye wahi waqt tha jab jokram shaitan se shaktiyan prapt kar ke khushiyan mana raha tha.
Main:- hame jaldi karna chahiye aapke pita ko khatra ho sakta hai, kahi uss jokram ne unke sath kuchh kar naa diya ho.
Ramika:- To phir kya yojna banai hai aapne pitaji ko chhudane ki.
Main:- Yojna ye hai ki koi yojn nahi hai, bas jana hai or waha se unko chhuda kar lana hai.
Lio/miru/ramika:- Kyaaaaaa????
Teeno ke teeno mujhe ghurne lage, jaise maine jane kya kah diya.
Main:- Kya hua chalo der ho rahi hai.
Ramika:- Pata nahi inke paas itni taqat kaise aai hai, dimag to thoda bhi nahi hai.
Lio:- Bhai aap mujhe bhi apne sath le chalo, main us dudht ko to nahi mar sakta kintu aapki kuchh to madad kar sakta hun.
Main:- Nahi tum nahi jaa sakte, main nhi chahta ki tum log musibat me faso, isliye yahi raho apni bahan ke sath.
Miru:- Mujhe bhi aap logo ke sath hi jana hai, ham bhi chalege.
Main:- Chhalo phir agar tumko chalna hi hai to, maharani ji kijiye udhan chhu.
Or ramika ne chutki bajai or hum log phir wahi tahkhane me pahunch gaye, maine jaldi se sabke sar pe hath rakh kar adrishya kar diya, phir hum andar badh gaye.
Andar ka nazara hi aaj badla hua tha, har taraf sainik hi the maine dekha to waha senapati bhi tha.
Senapati:- sainikon satarak raho jab tak ki maharaj naa aa jaye, kisi ko bhi dekhte hi usko khatam kar do.
Main:- Iski to main, ye tumhara hi senapati hai naa, iske andar koi rajbhakti to nahi dikhti.
Ramika:- Nahi ye hamare senapati nahi hain, kyoki unki mrityu pahle hi ho chuki hai, ye to mujhe jokram ka hi koi gulam lagta hai.
Main:- ohh to aisa hai, to suno main jakar rinoma ko chhudata hun, tum teeno maharani inko talwar pradan kare or aap sab inka dhayan apni taraf khinchiye main aapke pita ko chhudata hun.
Ramika:- Lekin tum pita ji ko chhudaoge kaise wo jail khana to toot-ta hi nahi hai.
Main:- tum apna kaam karo wo main dekh lunga, thik hai.
sab:- thik hai.
Maine un teeno ko dhrishyman kar diya or wo sab sainiko ki taraf badh gaye, unko dekhte hi sainiko ne unko dhamkaya.
sainik:- wahi rook jao nahi to jaan se mare joge.
Senapati:- Aaiye maharani aaiye, aapka swagata hai, ye aap kisko sath liye ghum rahi hai aapki sena to bahut badi hai.
ramika:- Hat jao hamare rashte se, hum kisi se yuddh yaa kisi ko marna nahi chahte, hame apne pita ko chhudana hai.
Ramika ki baat sun ke sab ke sab hasne lage.
Senapati:- To aao le jao aapne pita ko maharani, sainiko inke pita ko lao.
Pichhe se kuchh sainik rinoma ko pakad ke le aaye or unke gale pe talwar rakhi hui thi, ye dekhte hi ramika tadap uthi.
Ramika:- Pita ji,,, chhod do mere pita ko nahi to koi bhi nahi bachega mujhse.
Senapati:- Hahahahahha maine to kaha hai maharani aao or le jao apne pita ko, lekin usse pahle ye bta do ki wo manava kaha hain.
Ramika:- Mujhe nahi pata uske bare me main nahi janti.
Senapati:- Achaa?? to aap nahi janti ki wo manav kaha hai.
Wahi main bhi Sabse chhip kar us kaid khane ke paas pahunch hi gay tha ki uss senapati ki baat sun ruk gaya, mujhe bhi bada ascharya hua ki rinoma bahar hai lekin tabhi.
Ramika:- Maine kaha naa main nahi janti, unko chhodo.
Senapati:- thik hai aap nahi janti to hum bhi aapke pita ko nahi jante.
Tabhi uss sena pati ne rinoma ke gale par talwar chala diya or khoon ka fawara waha foot pada or rinoma zameen me geer pade tadafte hue.
ye dekh ramika ki chikh nikal gai, aisa to maine bhi nahi socha tha ki hoga, mujhe bahut gussa aaya, Lekin phir mujhe ehsaas hua ki jaisa rinoma ne kaha tha ki joram bahut maya rachta hai kahi ye maya to nahi, ek baar jail khane ko dekh lena chahiye, maine apn divy talwar ko yaad kiya or jail ke paas jane laga.
Wahi ramika apne pita ki mrityu dekh hosh kho baithi miru usko sambhal rahi thi.
Senapati:- Hahahahahahah Kya hua maharani ab kise bachaogi, pita to tumhare gaye, sainikon pakad lo sabko.
Sab sainik inke taraf badh gaye sirf lio bacha tha or wo akela kya kar pata.
Miru:- Maharani uthiye nahi to hum mare jayege, hame jana hoga, sainik idhar hi aa rahe hai.
Itna sunte ramika khadi ho gai gusse me or apni full shakti ke sath sabhi sainiko ko bijli ke jhatke diye, wali lio or miru bhi mharani ko ladta dekh maidan me kud gaye, or sainiko ke sath talwar bazi karne lage, wahi maharani senapati ki taraf badhi or use apni shaktiyon se ladne lagi.
Jaisa ki ramika ne kaha tha senapat bhi ek gulam hi tha usne bhi apni shaktiyon se ladna shuru kar diya, maharani par usne apni agni shakti ka prayog kiya kintu maharani ne use ro diya.
Phir ramika ne vayu ki shakti se bavandar bana kar senapati ko usme gher liya, lekin senapati ne uss bavandar me dhool ko shmil kar diya or phirr pani ki shakti se uss bawandar ko khatam kar diya.
Waahi main jaise hi uss jail ke paas pahuncha waise hi mujhe zor ka dhakka laga, main pichhe geer gaya, mujhe aisa laga ki kisi ne mujhe dhakka diya ho. main khada hua to mere samne wahi do saye the jo mujhe dhundhne aaye the.
Saya1:- kya hua manav tum to halke dhakke se geer gaye humne socha tha tumme kuchh to dum hoga lekin tumne mujhe nirash kiya.
Main:- Tumne mera dum dekha hi hai phir bhi agar sandeh hai to phir se ajma lo, aise aksmaat mujhe dhakka de kar tumne koun saa bahaduri ka kaam kiya hai.
Saya2:- achha yaad dilaya hai, hame bhi pichhi baar ka hisab chukta karana hai to aaja.
Main khada hua or apne talwar ko phir gayab kar diya, or hath se yuddh karne ke liye taiyar hua.
Un dono ne mujhe aage pichhe se gher liya or mujhe paar vaar karne lage, ek ne laat mari to wahi dusre ne mukka, Maine laat ka jawab laat se or mukke ka mukke se diya dono hi block.
Hamari ladai ghamasan hoti chali gai, kabhi main marta to kabhi wo, hum teeno hi ap ghayal ho rahe the, mera to takshak ki shakti ki wajah se ghav bhar jate the, kintu unke nahi,
Akhir shaitan ke bhakto ne apni shaitani chhal chal hi di, jab dekha ki aise nahi jeet sakte to mujhe par ab apni shaktiyon se vaar karne lage, ek ne apni kali tarango se mere dono hath or dono pair band diye, wahi dusre ne apnoi kaali tarango se mere gaye ko fande ki tarah fasa kar dabane laga.
Mujhe bahut hi jyada taklif ho rahi thi, Gale me fanda kasta jaa raha tha, tab maine apne takshak ki shakti ka istemal kar te hue apna roop badal kar bhediye me badal gaya, ek jhatke me mere hath chhot gaye, phir maine un dono ko pakad liya or ghuma kar zameen me de mara, or apne pairo se unke sar ko kuchal kuchal ke maar dala.
"wooooooohaaaaaaaaaaa" wooooohaaaaaa" Jaise hi meri dahad suni sabne to sab ghabra gaye, idhar udhar bhagne lage, maine dekha to miru or lio bhi ghayal ho gaye hain, mere rashte me jo bhi aata main apne hatho se chirta fadta aage badha, sabko khatam karne baad main jail ke paas gaya or jaise hi....
Wahi ramika abhi bhi senapati se lad rahi thi, wah jitna prayash karti sab vifal ho jata tha, usne phir se senapati par vayu shakti se bavandar banaya or senapati ko usme fasa diya.
Senapati:- Hahahahahaha maharani tumme kuchh bhi taqat nahi tu phir harogi, ek hi prahar baar baar karke tum mujhe hara nahi paogi hahahahha ye lo.
usne socha iss baar bhi wah pani ki shakti se bavandar ko vifal kar dega, lekin iss baar ramika ne bavandar me hawa ke sath vidhyut ki shakti se bijli bhi samil kar diya, jaise hi senpati ne pani ki shakti ka istemal kiya usko bahut jor ka jhatka laga or bilji uske upar geerne se wah jaal kar maar gaya.
Aaj ke liye itna hi.
Thank you.
Prashtuti:- Swami aapko mere upar hath rakh kar ye mantra bolna hai, PRAVITHTAM HRIDAYA STHANAM GRANAM.
Jaise hi maine hath rakh ke ye mantra bola dekhte hi dekhte wah pushtak mere andar samahit ho gai.
Ab Aage......................
Main iss waqt dhyan ke mudra me baitha tha or iss waqt main uss pushtak ka adhyayan kar raha tha.
prashtuti:- Pranam swami kahen main aapki kya sahayta kar sakti hun.
Main:- Jab tum mere hriday ke sath par sthit ho to tumko to pata hi hoga ki main kya janna chahta hun.
Prashtuti:- Ji Main janti hun kintu main apne swami ke agya ke bina koi bhi chij nahi kar sakti, isliye aap hame adesh de kya janna hai aaoko.
Main:- Thik hai, to tum mujhe uss dusht jokram ko marne ka raaz btao.
Prashtuti:- wo aise mara jayega ................... .
Main apne dhayan se bahar aaya or ramika ke paas gaya, abhi subah hone wali thi, or ye wahi waqt tha jab jokram shaitan se shaktiyan prapt kar ke khushiyan mana raha tha.
Main:- hame jaldi karna chahiye aapke pita ko khatra ho sakta hai, kahi uss jokram ne unke sath kuchh kar naa diya ho.
Ramika:- To phir kya yojna banai hai aapne pitaji ko chhudane ki.
Main:- Yojna ye hai ki koi yojn nahi hai, bas jana hai or waha se unko chhuda kar lana hai.
Lio/miru/ramika:- Kyaaaaaa????
Teeno ke teeno mujhe ghurne lage, jaise maine jane kya kah diya.
Main:- Kya hua chalo der ho rahi hai.
Ramika:- Pata nahi inke paas itni taqat kaise aai hai, dimag to thoda bhi nahi hai.
Lio:- Bhai aap mujhe bhi apne sath le chalo, main us dudht ko to nahi mar sakta kintu aapki kuchh to madad kar sakta hun.
Main:- Nahi tum nahi jaa sakte, main nhi chahta ki tum log musibat me faso, isliye yahi raho apni bahan ke sath.
Miru:- Mujhe bhi aap logo ke sath hi jana hai, ham bhi chalege.
Main:- Chhalo phir agar tumko chalna hi hai to, maharani ji kijiye udhan chhu.
Or ramika ne chutki bajai or hum log phir wahi tahkhane me pahunch gaye, maine jaldi se sabke sar pe hath rakh kar adrishya kar diya, phir hum andar badh gaye.
Andar ka nazara hi aaj badla hua tha, har taraf sainik hi the maine dekha to waha senapati bhi tha.
Senapati:- sainikon satarak raho jab tak ki maharaj naa aa jaye, kisi ko bhi dekhte hi usko khatam kar do.
Main:- Iski to main, ye tumhara hi senapati hai naa, iske andar koi rajbhakti to nahi dikhti.
Ramika:- Nahi ye hamare senapati nahi hain, kyoki unki mrityu pahle hi ho chuki hai, ye to mujhe jokram ka hi koi gulam lagta hai.
Main:- ohh to aisa hai, to suno main jakar rinoma ko chhudata hun, tum teeno maharani inko talwar pradan kare or aap sab inka dhayan apni taraf khinchiye main aapke pita ko chhudata hun.
Ramika:- Lekin tum pita ji ko chhudaoge kaise wo jail khana to toot-ta hi nahi hai.
Main:- tum apna kaam karo wo main dekh lunga, thik hai.
sab:- thik hai.
Maine un teeno ko dhrishyman kar diya or wo sab sainiko ki taraf badh gaye, unko dekhte hi sainiko ne unko dhamkaya.
sainik:- wahi rook jao nahi to jaan se mare joge.
Senapati:- Aaiye maharani aaiye, aapka swagata hai, ye aap kisko sath liye ghum rahi hai aapki sena to bahut badi hai.
ramika:- Hat jao hamare rashte se, hum kisi se yuddh yaa kisi ko marna nahi chahte, hame apne pita ko chhudana hai.
Ramika ki baat sun ke sab ke sab hasne lage.
Senapati:- To aao le jao aapne pita ko maharani, sainiko inke pita ko lao.
Pichhe se kuchh sainik rinoma ko pakad ke le aaye or unke gale pe talwar rakhi hui thi, ye dekhte hi ramika tadap uthi.
Ramika:- Pita ji,,, chhod do mere pita ko nahi to koi bhi nahi bachega mujhse.
Senapati:- Hahahahahha maine to kaha hai maharani aao or le jao apne pita ko, lekin usse pahle ye bta do ki wo manava kaha hain.
Ramika:- Mujhe nahi pata uske bare me main nahi janti.
Senapati:- Achaa?? to aap nahi janti ki wo manav kaha hai.
Wahi main bhi Sabse chhip kar us kaid khane ke paas pahunch hi gay tha ki uss senapati ki baat sun ruk gaya, mujhe bhi bada ascharya hua ki rinoma bahar hai lekin tabhi.
Ramika:- Maine kaha naa main nahi janti, unko chhodo.
Senapati:- thik hai aap nahi janti to hum bhi aapke pita ko nahi jante.
Tabhi uss sena pati ne rinoma ke gale par talwar chala diya or khoon ka fawara waha foot pada or rinoma zameen me geer pade tadafte hue.
ye dekh ramika ki chikh nikal gai, aisa to maine bhi nahi socha tha ki hoga, mujhe bahut gussa aaya, Lekin phir mujhe ehsaas hua ki jaisa rinoma ne kaha tha ki joram bahut maya rachta hai kahi ye maya to nahi, ek baar jail khane ko dekh lena chahiye, maine apn divy talwar ko yaad kiya or jail ke paas jane laga.
Wahi ramika apne pita ki mrityu dekh hosh kho baithi miru usko sambhal rahi thi.
Senapati:- Hahahahahahah Kya hua maharani ab kise bachaogi, pita to tumhare gaye, sainikon pakad lo sabko.
Sab sainik inke taraf badh gaye sirf lio bacha tha or wo akela kya kar pata.
Miru:- Maharani uthiye nahi to hum mare jayege, hame jana hoga, sainik idhar hi aa rahe hai.
Itna sunte ramika khadi ho gai gusse me or apni full shakti ke sath sabhi sainiko ko bijli ke jhatke diye, wali lio or miru bhi mharani ko ladta dekh maidan me kud gaye, or sainiko ke sath talwar bazi karne lage, wahi maharani senapati ki taraf badhi or use apni shaktiyon se ladne lagi.
Jaisa ki ramika ne kaha tha senapat bhi ek gulam hi tha usne bhi apni shaktiyon se ladna shuru kar diya, maharani par usne apni agni shakti ka prayog kiya kintu maharani ne use ro diya.
Phir ramika ne vayu ki shakti se bavandar bana kar senapati ko usme gher liya, lekin senapati ne uss bavandar me dhool ko shmil kar diya or phirr pani ki shakti se uss bawandar ko khatam kar diya.
Waahi main jaise hi uss jail ke paas pahuncha waise hi mujhe zor ka dhakka laga, main pichhe geer gaya, mujhe aisa laga ki kisi ne mujhe dhakka diya ho. main khada hua to mere samne wahi do saye the jo mujhe dhundhne aaye the.
Saya1:- kya hua manav tum to halke dhakke se geer gaye humne socha tha tumme kuchh to dum hoga lekin tumne mujhe nirash kiya.
Main:- Tumne mera dum dekha hi hai phir bhi agar sandeh hai to phir se ajma lo, aise aksmaat mujhe dhakka de kar tumne koun saa bahaduri ka kaam kiya hai.
Saya2:- achha yaad dilaya hai, hame bhi pichhi baar ka hisab chukta karana hai to aaja.
Main khada hua or apne talwar ko phir gayab kar diya, or hath se yuddh karne ke liye taiyar hua.
Un dono ne mujhe aage pichhe se gher liya or mujhe paar vaar karne lage, ek ne laat mari to wahi dusre ne mukka, Maine laat ka jawab laat se or mukke ka mukke se diya dono hi block.
Hamari ladai ghamasan hoti chali gai, kabhi main marta to kabhi wo, hum teeno hi ap ghayal ho rahe the, mera to takshak ki shakti ki wajah se ghav bhar jate the, kintu unke nahi,
Akhir shaitan ke bhakto ne apni shaitani chhal chal hi di, jab dekha ki aise nahi jeet sakte to mujhe par ab apni shaktiyon se vaar karne lage, ek ne apni kali tarango se mere dono hath or dono pair band diye, wahi dusre ne apnoi kaali tarango se mere gaye ko fande ki tarah fasa kar dabane laga.
Mujhe bahut hi jyada taklif ho rahi thi, Gale me fanda kasta jaa raha tha, tab maine apne takshak ki shakti ka istemal kar te hue apna roop badal kar bhediye me badal gaya, ek jhatke me mere hath chhot gaye, phir maine un dono ko pakad liya or ghuma kar zameen me de mara, or apne pairo se unke sar ko kuchal kuchal ke maar dala.
"wooooooohaaaaaaaaaaa" wooooohaaaaaa" Jaise hi meri dahad suni sabne to sab ghabra gaye, idhar udhar bhagne lage, maine dekha to miru or lio bhi ghayal ho gaye hain, mere rashte me jo bhi aata main apne hatho se chirta fadta aage badha, sabko khatam karne baad main jail ke paas gaya or jaise hi....
Wahi ramika abhi bhi senapati se lad rahi thi, wah jitna prayash karti sab vifal ho jata tha, usne phir se senapati par vayu shakti se bavandar banaya or senapati ko usme fasa diya.
Senapati:- Hahahahahaha maharani tumme kuchh bhi taqat nahi tu phir harogi, ek hi prahar baar baar karke tum mujhe hara nahi paogi hahahahha ye lo.
usne socha iss baar bhi wah pani ki shakti se bavandar ko vifal kar dega, lekin iss baar ramika ne bavandar me hawa ke sath vidhyut ki shakti se bijli bhi samil kar diya, jaise hi senpati ne pani ki shakti ka istemal kiya usko bahut jor ka jhatka laga or bilji uske upar geerne se wah jaal kar maar gaya.
Aaj ke liye itna hi.
Thank you.
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Hmm lagta ha next update ma hero ki sahi Power's daikhne ko milengi
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