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A beautiful ending to a beautiful story 
along with the story the characters of the story have touched our hearts like fun of younger brothers and sisters, bickering of Neha-Raghav, love of elders, everything. You presented the emotions to us in such a wonderful way that sometimes it feels as if we ourselves have become involved in this story. 
The last three updates were so lovely, ek khubsurat shaam sirf ot sirf tumhare naam, izhaae or ikraar how sweet
Loving is not so easy we have to go deep into the heart of the other person only then to realize it and Neha has done this work very well. The tears flowing from her eyes are proof of this. 
Love can change anyone has great power, the perfect example of this is in front of us, There is a lot of difference between the earlier and today's Raghav. This story is complete in itself, a loving partner, a happy family and a happy tomorrow. Love gradually leads from affection to happiness, it is a strong feeling of attraction and personal connection that makes a person forget everything and live with that person.
Maybe this is your first story that I am reading, gradually my interest increasing, no doubt you are a great writer, thanks for writing such a beautiful story, there is an addiction in your story What we have become is a habit and it is very difficult to get rid of it. Your writing is commendable, every line, every word touches the heart and makes you think, right from the beginning your writing is such that every moment the mind remains restless as to what will happen next, what can I say in praise your writing impresses me even more. Adirshi Hats Off... enjoyed it.
along with the story the characters of the story have touched our hearts like fun of younger brothers and sisters, bickering of Neha-Raghav, love of elders, everything. You presented the emotions to us in such a wonderful way that sometimes it feels as if we ourselves have become involved in this story. The last three updates were so lovely, ek khubsurat shaam sirf ot sirf tumhare naam, izhaae or ikraar how sweet
Loving is not so easy we have to go deep into the heart of the other person only then to realize it and Neha has done this work very well. The tears flowing from her eyes are proof of this. Love can change anyone has great power, the perfect example of this is in front of us, There is a lot of difference between the earlier and today's Raghav. This story is complete in itself, a loving partner, a happy family and a happy tomorrow. Love gradually leads from affection to happiness, it is a strong feeling of attraction and personal connection that makes a person forget everything and live with that person.
Maybe this is your first story that I am reading, gradually my interest increasing, no doubt you are a great writer, thanks for writing such a beautiful story, there is an addiction in your story What we have become is a habit and it is very difficult to get rid of it. Your writing is commendable, every line, every word touches the heart and makes you think, right from the beginning your writing is such that every moment the mind remains restless as to what will happen next, what can I say in praise your writing impresses me even more. Adirshi Hats Off... enjoyed it.
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For completed 400 pages on your story thread.....
