Adultery Kagaz ke phool

[Rocky2602]

Waiting

 

[urc4me]

Waiting for next update

 

[Mr. Marvel]

well played.. i feel kiran ka roll bahut kam lag raha hai is kahani main.. while i found her very interesting character... lets see how it goes

Thanks bhai. Bhai ap tension mat lijiye sare characters ke sath justification kiya jayega. Ap bas sath bane rahiye.

 

[Mr. Marvel]

Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai

Thanks bro

 

[Mr. Marvel]

Very nice update bro
Abhi tak ki story achchhi lagi hai aasha hai ki aage bhi aise hi chalti rahegi.
Mujhe kuchh idea hai ki divya apne room jakar kyo nach rahi h kyoki vo aditi ko lekar confirm karna chah rahi thi ki rahul aur aditi committed to nahi hai ,
And jo banda rahul ko market me dikha tha 20 saal pahle wala shayad ye hi banda rahul ki maa ki maut ke pichchhe eska hath ho but ye main criminal nhi h kahi na kahi aisa lagata hai ki jo ye rajiv hai esne hi rahul ki maa ko marvaya ho property vaigarah ke lalch me ya fir koi aisa banda ho jo rahul ki maa ko chahta ho but uski shadi rajiv se ho gyi to vo usko markar badla lena chah raha hoga aur us bande ko bhejha ho doctor ke bhesh me
Vaise hone ko kuchh bhi ho sakta hai lekin pata to bhavishaya me hi chalega
Good story
Waiting for the next update bro.

Bhai thanks for your appreciation. Aur achha laga k apne story itne dhyan se padhi aur apne vichar comment ke jariye parkat kiye. Baki jo jo apne possibilities batayi hain unmein kya pata kya ho jaye. Ab use janne ke liye toh thoda wait karna hi padega. Keep supporting bro.

 

[Arv313]

Update kab de rahe ho bhai ji

Bhai thanks for your appreciation. Aur achha laga k apne story itne dhyan se padhi aur apne vichar comment ke jariye parkat kiye. Baki jo jo apne possibilities batayi hain unmein kya pata kya ho jaye. Ab use janne ke liye toh thoda wait karna hi padega. Keep supporting bro.

Waiting for the next update bro.

 

[Jassybabra]

Nice update

 

[Last benchers]

Sir update kb aayega ..plzz daily update Diya kro

 

[Mr. Marvel]

Nice update

Thanks bhai

 

[Mr. Marvel]

Update kab de rahe ho bhai ji

Waiting for the next update bro.

Sir update kb aayega ..plzz daily update Diya kro

Bhai actually main canada mein job karta hun toh weekdays pe kaam pe hota hun aur abhi v break ke beech mein reply kar raha hun. Baki main try karta hun k har hafte 5 update de paun. Agar weekdays pe koi kami reh jati hai toh weekend pe main extra update de deta hun.