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Thriller Kahani

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Jab uski ankhen khulti hai toh khud ko bandha hua pata hai wo abhi bhi hosh aur behoshi ke beech me use kuch awazen sunai toh de rahi thi magar wo samjh nahi paa Raha tha ki wo kahan dheer dheere use ye ehsas ho chala tha ki wo bandha hua aur khada hai magar wo hai kaha aur sab se aham baat wo yaha aya kaise wo toh ….
Wahi jab archan Mr yung aur Mr James jab us kitab ke us panne ko dekhte hai toh hairan rah jate hai wo turant veenu aur Aslam ko bulate hai
Veenu – kya hua archan sab theek toh hai na
Veenu ne aate hi sawal Kiya uski sawal me bechaini saaf thi
Archan – hum sab ko jald se jald ooasis qabeele ki taraf niklna hoga Shiva ki Jan khatre me hai
Aslam – use kuch nahi hoga wo pahle bhi kai bar maut se khel chuka
Aslam ne ye baat unko Kam khud ko zayda smajhhte hue kaha
Mr James – magar is bar khatra bahut bada sari bate raste me bataunga chalo jaldi
Idhar Shiva ki team pareshan thi kyuki veenu aur Aslam teen din se gayab the Shiva ka bhi koi pata nahi lag pa raha tha commissioner krishnamurti aur Deva apni poori taqat se Shiva veenu aur Aslam ko talash karne me lage hue magar kisi ko kuch samjh nahi AA Raha tha veenu aur Aslam akhiri bar archan ke yahan dekhe gye the magar archan khud teen din se la pata hai kisi ko nahi pata ki wo kahan hai puri academy bhi pareshan thi kyuki Aisa shayad pahli bar hua tha
Idhar dusri duniya me bahut halchal machi hui thi jahan dusre rajya pagal hue ja rahe the wahi death valley me jashn chal Raha tha wo bhala ho us samjhaute ka jo hazaron sal pahle hua tha ki koi bhi rajya apne se kamzor rajya ko pratadit nahi karega warna abhi Tak toh death valley ma naam o nishan bhi mita Diya gya hota.
Wo phir se hosh me AA Raha tha is bar uska hosh uski behoshi par bhari pad raha tha wo samjh raha tha ki wo kaha hai ye ek lab thi bahut adhunik wahan par aise aise equipments the Jo shayad ISRO aur NASA ke paas bhi nahi honge kuch stands bhi the jin par pracheen kism ki kitaben adh khuli rakhi hui thi wo dheere dheere apne isthiti ka jayza lene ki koshish kar raha tha ki tabhi uske kano me ek jani pahchani awaz padti hai
Kaise ho mere purane dost
Wo us awaz ki taraf dekhta hai toh pata hai ki ek admi apren pahne hue uske samne khada tha wo uske chahre ki taraf dekhta hai toh pata hai ki uske chahre par kale rang ka ek naqab hai Jo shayad chamde ka bana hua hai use dekh kar uske muh se ek naam nikalta hai
MICHAEL
 
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Shivay chauhan

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Chhota hai par phir bhi shuruat ko karni hi thi toh phir se ek bar

Lijiye doston update hazir hai padhiye aur apne keemti reviews dijiye
 
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Very nice update Bhai ☺️😊
 

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लगता है किसी को दिलचस्पी नहीं रही
 
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Kaise ho mere purane dost

Wo us awaz ki taraf dekhta hai toh pata hai ki ek admi apren pahne hue uske samne khada tha wo uske chahre ki taraf dekhta hai toh pata hai ki uske chahre par kale rang ka ek naqab hai Jo shayad chamde ka bana hua hai use dekh kar uske muh se ek naam nikalta hai


MICHAEL

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Wo apni ankhen band kiye hue tha magar poori tarah hosh me tha wo apne aas paas ki awazon se ye samjhne ki koshish kar raha tha ki waha chal kya Raha hai use kuch kuch andaza ho bhi gya tha magar use ye yaad nahi AA pa raha tha ki wo yahan kaise pahucha tabhi achanak use yaad ata hai ki wo bhadra aur bakiyon ke saath junglee tha ek training session me wo log apas me lad kar ek dusre ki taqat aur kamzori ko samjhne wale the phir Aisa kya hua jo wo is hal me yaha par tha kuch toh Aisa hai Jo wo bhool Raha hai magar kya tabhi use ek Jani pahchani awaz sunai deti hai aur ek ka ek uske muh se niklta hai

MICHAEL

Michael – ohh tumne mujhe pahchan liya badhiya kyuki humri pichhili mulaqat me toh tum ne meri pahchan mitane ki poori koshish ki aur qamyab bhi hue the

Usne apne mask ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha

Shiva apni adhkhuli ankhon se uski taraf gusse se dekhta toh wo bolta

Michael – are chhodo in purani baton ko waise mujhe tumhe thank you kahna chahiye tumhari hi wajah se Mai wo machine banane me qamyab ho paya tumhare notes bahut Kam aye magar bahut pechida bhi the

Shiva – tum unhe theek se nahi samajh paye na

Michael – nahi yar tum bhi na mujhe bewakoof samjha hai kya Maine wo machine bana Li hai tumne suna nahi kya

Shiva – phir mujhe zinda kyu rakkha hai

Michael – wah kya baat hai jawab nahi yar Tera bhi tu har cheez samjh leta chahe kisi bhi halat me ho hai na toh Mai tumhe zinda rakhne ki wajah batata hun magar pahle inse milo

Uske kahte hi mahaguru aur unke yoddha waha aa gye

Michael – ye mere hi log hai tumhe yaad hai na us din hospital me tum logo par ek experiment ne humla Kiya tha wo Maine hi banaya tha Mai remotely control kar Raha tha tum bas Marne hi wale the ki achanak ye hua

Kahte hue usne samne lage bade se screen par wo photage chalaya jisme Shiva ne us experiment ko mar Diya tha

Michael – mujhe bas ye janna tha ki tumne Aisa kaise toh Maine in logon ki madad Li aur Jo in logon ne mujhe bataya wo toh unbelievable tha matalab guru ji ke hisab se tumhare andar shaitan ki atma hai aur phir Maine is bare me research ki toh pata chala ki ye sach aur phir Maine socha ki kyu na tumahri shaktiyon se Mai apne sare experiment ko zinda kar lun ya phir us duniya ka darwaza khol lun jiske tum raja ho hai na exciting

Mahaguru – aur isiliye hum tumhe yaha laye taki tum humare banaye jal me phas sako

Shiva – apne mujhe dhoka Dene ke liye toh Mai maaf kar deta magar apne archan ko dhoka diya uske liye Mai apko wo saza dunga jiske bare me apne socha bhi nahi hoga

Michael – tum Aisa tab kar paoge jab tum yahan se bachoge ye Jo machine hai ye tumhare andar ke rakshas ko bahar layegi aur phir tumhari sari taqat sokh legi

Shiva – Aisa kabhi nahi hoga

Michael – ohh mere dost Aisa zaroor hoga kyuki Mai janta hun ki ye kaise hoga

Kahte hue uske chahre par ek kutil muskan thi

Kah kar usne ek switch dabaya Jo us machine se thodi hi doori bar tha aur Shiva tez jhakta laga itna tez jaise asman ki bijli uski ragon me daud gai ho 10 sec baad Michael ne wi switch off Kiya

Shiva buri tarah haaf raha tha

Michael – Shiva tumhe meri kamyabi dekh kar jhatka lag gya

Shiva – Michael tum nahi jante tum kya kar rahe ho jis cheez Mai kabo me nahi kar paya khud me daba ke rakkha tum use bahar nikal kar kaboo karna chahate ho are bewakoof 100 Walt ke bulb me power house ki sari bijli kaise ayegi meri baat mano aur rok……….


Shiva ke shabd beech me hi ruk gye kyuki Michael ne phir se wo button daba Diya tha

Idhar alsam veenu archan mr yung aur Mr James Oasis qabeele ki taraf tezi se badh rahe the aslam drive kar raha tha veenu uske bagal me baithi thi aur archan aur baki dono peeche

Veenu – archan apko kya lgta hai kya wo Shiva ko mar denge

Veenu ne sawal toh pooch liya tha magar apna dar nahi chhipa pai thi wahi dar jo is waqt us gadi me maujood sabhi logon ko lag raha kyuki sab jante the ki agar Shiva beqaboo ho gya toh wo tabahi macha sakta hai aur agar uske andar ka shaitan jag utha toh Qayamat ko koi nahi rok payega




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Awesome update Bhai ☺️😊
 
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