Thriller Kahani

[Shivay chauhan]

Ek incomplete story readers k liye bhut bada jhtka hota kyuki wo usse dil se jud jate jaise Shiva apne dost ko bolta ki padte huye un kirdaro ko jita hai waise hi bhut se readers b kahani ko jeete hai
Par puri na ho pana ya jab kisi ka intrest na rahe tab puri hona kahaniki haar hai

Dost apki baat bilkul sahi hai aur Mai aapki baat ye mutffiq bhi hun magar yaqeen maniye Mai apni taraf se poori koshish kar raha hun kai bar update likh kar Mita bhi chuka hun kyuki mujhe wo is qabil nahi lagta ki aapke samne Mai us update ko pesh karun. Darasal ghalti meri hi agar main ne prem chand, krishn Chandra manto, aadi ki kahaniyan na padhi hoti ya exbii pe suspense ke badshah(meri Nazar me ) batman, Rohit Bhai, vampire aadi ko na padha hota toh shayad Mai koi bhi sasta sa update pesh kar deta. Mere saath ek masla aur bhi hai ki Mai Sher kahta hun nazm, ghazal, ye mere liye koi mushkil baat nahi magar Nasr(prose) likhne me badi dikkat hoti hai ummid hai ki aap mera soorat e hal samjhenge aur is na cheez ko waqt denge.

 

[Shivay chauhan]

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Shiva is waqt behosh tha Tabhi uske kanon me ek awaz gunjti hai fir achank wo apne aapko ek ajeeb si jagah pata hai uske charon taraf aag me jhulsti Hui chattane thi uske pairon ke neeche ki zameen dhadak Rahi thi magar phir bhi use kuch nhi ho Raha tha Shiva soch Raha
Shiva man me – kya Mai mar gya hu kya yahi nark hai lagta toh waisa hi hai ab kya hoga mere mission ka meri team meri
Wo abhi kuch aur sochta ke tabhi ek saya uske samne aa kar khada ho jata hai aur dheere dheere ek jism ki akriti lene lgta hai wo saya kahta hai
Saya – jo tum soch rahe ho waisa kuch bhi nahi hai na tum mare ho aur na hi ye nark hai
Shiva – toh phir ye hai kya aur tum ho kaun
Saya – Mai wahi hun jiska tum ansh ho aur ye jagah tumahara Ghar hai
Wo saya ab jism me badal chuka tha wo bilkul Shiva kj tarah hi dikh Raha tha bas uski ankhe laal thi
Shiva – agar Mai mara nahi hun toh Mai yaha kaise aya
Saya – yahan na tum ho na tumhari atma hai bas tumahara wo hissa hai Jisne mujhe apna liya tha
Shiva khamosh rahta hai magar wo saya uske man ki uthal puthal se wakif tha
Saya – Mai janta hun tum apne sathiyon aur mission ke bare me soch rahe ho tumne unke alawa kabhi kuch socha bhi nahi
Shiva – agar aap jante hai toh kyaa aap meri madad nahi karenge
Saya – Mai tumahari madad kyu karunga tumhare Marne me hi Mera fayda hai kyuki tabhi tum shareer ko Mai poori tarah se kaboo kar paunga
Shiva – phir aap bhi mere sathiyon ke sath wahi karenge wo un logon ne aapke aur death valley ke saath Kiya majboor aur lachar chhod Diya
Saya Shiva ki baat sun kar kuch sochne lag jata hai
Wahi dusri taraf Dr kafi gusse me tha kyuki pulse reader me Shiva ki pulse zero dikh Rahi thi aur ventilator machine bhi kuch asar nahi kar paa Rahi thi
Dr- Maine kaha tha shhva ko itna torcher mat Karo ki wo mar Jaye magar tum nahi Mane
Michael thhda ghabrate hue kahta hai
Michael – nahi boss wo Zinda hai bas comma me chala gya hai Mai use hosh me lane ki poori koshish kar raha hun don’t worry
Tabhi us jagah par suren bajne lagte hai
Rahman – ab ye kya museebat hai
Ek admi ghbraya hua waha aata hai
admi – sir hum par attack ho Raha hai
Michael chaunkte hue kahta hai
Michael – what rubbish ye ho hi nahi sakta cameras on Karo
Admi – sare cameras hacked ho chuke Hain
Dr – lagta hai shuva ki team aa gai
Michael – magar ye kaise possible hai
Rahman – wo sab chhodo boss lagta hai plan b ka waqt aa gya hai
Dr – hmm ok do your best aur dhyan rahe koi marna nahi chahiye
Rahman – done sir
Rahaman turant lab se nikal jata hai
Wahi dusri taraf gunship apne destination par pahuchne wali thi
Commissioner krishnamurti – deva hum pahuchne Wale plan kya hai
Deva – aziz surya tum log us jagah par explosives lagaoge arohi aap commissioner sahab aur mai samne se ladai ko roke rakhenge jab Williams aur force nahi aajati aur charu tum gunship par hi rahogi sabki position batati rahogi ok
Sabhi log han me sar hila dete hai
Deva – shayad kabhi ye kahne ka mauka mile na mile magar Mai ye kahna chahunga ki aap sabhi logon ke saath is jung shamil ho kar ladna mere liye fakr ki baat thi
Commissioner krishnamurti – Mai paridhi ki maut ke baad toot gya tha magar tum logon ne mujhe phir se jeene ka maqsad Diya thank you thank you very much
Kah wo log charu ki taraf dekhte hai
Charu – mujhe kuch nahi kahna
Aziz – kyu
Charu – kyunki abhi wo waqt nahi aya hum sab log yahan se Zinda wapas jayenge
Wahi dusri taraf lab par lagatar humla ho raha tha kis kj kuch samjh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya ho Raha goliyon ki awaz lagatar aur kareeb ati ja Rahi thi
Idhar Shiva aur us saye me baat chit chal Rahi thi
Saya – hmm baat tum ne sahi kahi magar Mai tumhari baat kyun mani
Shiva – aap hi kahte ho na ki Mai aapka ansh hun toh kya aaperi itni si bast nahi man sakte kya mera apna koi wajood nahi
Saya – meri madad kyu chahte ho tum
Shiva – kyunki is waqt sirf aap hi hain Jo meri madad kar sakte aur hai hi kaun mera apke siwa
Saya – baaten acchi kar lete ho magar bhoolo nahi ki shaitan se baat kar Raha hun
Shiva – nahi Mai us Aseem Shakti se baat kar Raha hun jiska Mai ansh hun Aur mujhe hi ye adhikar hasil hai ki Mai aapse kuch bhi aur kabhi mang sakta hun
Saya – wahh tunhari himmat ki daad deni padegi man gye
Shiva – ye sab apki hi toh den hai
Saya – hmm ye bhi sach hai
Idhar commissioner krishnamurti aur team gunship se chhalang laga dete hai koodne se pahle unhone Williams se baat ki thi usne batata ki use aane me kareeb 1ghanta lag sakta hai.


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[Shivay chauhan]

Lijiye doston update hazir hai padhiye aur apne keemti reviews dijiye

 

[Shanu]

Brilliant update Bhai

 

[The AMAN]

Dost apki baat bilkul sahi hai aur Mai aapki baat ye mutffiq bhi hun magar yaqeen maniye Mai apni taraf se poori koshish kar raha hun kai bar update likh kar Mita bhi chuka hun kyuki mujhe wo is qabil nahi lagta ki aapke samne Mai us update ko pesh karun. Darasal ghalti meri hi agar main ne prem chand, krishn Chandra manto, aadi ki kahaniyan na padhi hoti ya exbii pe suspense ke badshah(meri Nazar me ) batman, Rohit Bhai, vampire aadi ko na padha hota toh shayad Mai koi bhi sasta sa update pesh kar deta. Mere saath ek masla aur bhi hai ki Mai Sher kahta hun nazm, ghazal, ye mere liye koi mushkil baat nahi magar Nasr(prose) likhne me badi dikkat hoti hai ummid hai ki aap mera soorat e hal samjhenge aur is na cheez ko waqt denge.

Jrur bhai waqt toh denge hi jab sabki man pasand chiz aap pesh kar rahe ho
Wo jo likha wo ek trh se meri irritation thi bcse phle b kuch kahaniya puri padh nhi paya hu

 

[The AMAN]

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Shiva is waqt behosh tha Tabhi uske kanon me ek awaz gunjti hai fir achank wo apne aapko ek ajeeb si jagah pata hai uske charon taraf aag me jhulsti Hui chattane thi uske pairon ke neeche ki zameen dhadak Rahi thi magar phir bhi use kuch nhi ho Raha tha Shiva soch Raha
Shiva man me – kya Mai mar gya hu kya yahi nark hai lagta toh waisa hi hai ab kya hoga mere mission ka meri team meri
Wo abhi kuch aur sochta ke tabhi ek saya uske samne aa kar khada ho jata hai aur dheere dheere ek jism ki akriti lene lgta hai wo saya kahta hai
Saya – jo tum soch rahe ho waisa kuch bhi nahi hai na tum mare ho aur na hi ye nark hai
Shiva – toh phir ye hai kya aur tum ho kaun
Saya – Mai wahi hun jiska tum ansh ho aur ye jagah tumahara Ghar hai
Wo saya ab jism me badal chuka tha wo bilkul Shiva kj tarah hi dikh Raha tha bas uski ankhe laal thi
Shiva – agar Mai mara nahi hun toh Mai yaha kaise aya
Saya – yahan na tum ho na tumhari atma hai bas tumahara wo hissa hai Jisne mujhe apna liya tha
Shiva khamosh rahta hai magar wo saya uske man ki uthal puthal se wakif tha
Saya – Mai janta hun tum apne sathiyon aur mission ke bare me soch rahe ho tumne unke alawa kabhi kuch socha bhi nahi
Shiva – agar aap jante hai toh kyaa aap meri madad nahi karenge
Saya – Mai tumahari madad kyu karunga tumhare Marne me hi Mera fayda hai kyuki tabhi tum shareer ko Mai poori tarah se kaboo kar paunga
Shiva – phir aap bhi mere sathiyon ke sath wahi karenge wo un logon ne aapke aur death valley ke saath Kiya majboor aur lachar chhod Diya
Saya Shiva ki baat sun kar kuch sochne lag jata hai
Wahi dusri taraf Dr kafi gusse me tha kyuki pulse reader me Shiva ki pulse zero dikh Rahi thi aur ventilator machine bhi kuch asar nahi kar paa Rahi thi
Dr- Maine kaha tha shhva ko itna torcher mat Karo ki wo mar Jaye magar tum nahi Mane
Michael thhda ghabrate hue kahta hai
Michael – nahi boss wo Zinda hai bas comma me chala gya hai Mai use hosh me lane ki poori koshish kar raha hun don’t worry
Tabhi us jagah par suren bajne lagte hai
Rahman – ab ye kya museebat hai
Ek admi ghbraya hua waha aata hai
admi – sir hum par attack ho Raha hai
Michael chaunkte hue kahta hai
Michael – what rubbish ye ho hi nahi sakta cameras on Karo
Admi – sare cameras hacked ho chuke Hain
Dr – lagta hai shuva ki team aa gai
Michael – magar ye kaise possible hai
Rahman – wo sab chhodo boss lagta hai plan b ka waqt aa gya hai
Dr – hmm ok do your best aur dhyan rahe koi marna nahi chahiye
Rahman – done sir
Rahaman turant lab se nikal jata hai
Wahi dusri taraf gunship apne destination par pahuchne wali thi
Commissioner krishnamurti – deva hum pahuchne Wale plan kya hai
Deva – aziz surya tum log us jagah par explosives lagaoge arohi aap commissioner sahab aur mai samne se ladai ko roke rakhenge jab Williams aur force nahi aajati aur charu tum gunship par hi rahogi sabki position batati rahogi ok
Sabhi log han me sar hila dete hai
Deva – shayad kabhi ye kahne ka mauka mile na mile magar Mai ye kahna chahunga ki aap sabhi logon ke saath is jung shamil ho kar ladna mere liye fakr ki baat thi
Commissioner krishnamurti – Mai paridhi ki maut ke baad toot gya tha magar tum logon ne mujhe phir se jeene ka maqsad Diya thank you thank you very much
Kah wo log charu ki taraf dekhte hai
Charu – mujhe kuch nahi kahna
Aziz – kyu
Charu – kyunki abhi wo waqt nahi aya hum sab log yahan se Zinda wapas jayenge
Wahi dusri taraf lab par lagatar humla ho raha tha kis kj kuch samjh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya ho Raha goliyon ki awaz lagatar aur kareeb ati ja Rahi thi
Idhar Shiva aur us saye me baat chit chal Rahi thi
Saya – hmm baat tum ne sahi kahi magar Mai tumhari baat kyun mani
Shiva – aap hi kahte ho na ki Mai aapka ansh hun toh kya aaperi itni si bast nahi man sakte kya mera apna koi wajood nahi
Saya – meri madad kyu chahte ho tum
Shiva – kyunki is waqt sirf aap hi hain Jo meri madad kar sakte aur hai hi kaun mera apke siwa
Saya – baaten acchi kar lete ho magar bhoolo nahi ki shaitan se baat kar Raha hun
Shiva – nahi Mai us Aseem Shakti se baat kar Raha hun jiska Mai ansh hun Aur mujhe hi ye adhikar hasil hai ki Mai aapse kuch bhi aur kabhi mang sakta hun
Saya – wahh tunhari himmat ki daad deni padegi man gye
Shiva – ye sab apki hi toh den hai
Saya – hmm ye bhi sach hai
Idhar commissioner krishnamurti aur team gunship se chhalang laga dete hai koodne se pahle unhone Williams se baat ki thi usne batata ki use aane me kareeb 1ghanta lag sakta hai.


Update continue

Amazing

 

[Shivay chauhan]

Aaj Mai apne readers ek baat aur kahna chahunga Jo Aaj Tak Maine nahi kahi please share my story

 

[The AMAN]

Aaj Mai apne readers ek baat aur kahna chahunga Jo Aaj Tak Maine nahi kahi please share my story

Update?

 

[The AMAN]

Waiting

 

[The AMAN]

For