Thriller Kahani

[Kabiransari]

Mast update bhai

 

[Shivay chauhan]

Update continue


Shiva o Shiva utha jao beta dekho itna Sona sehat ke liye accha nahi hota come yar utha

Michael ne Shiva ke galon ko thapthapate hue kaha

Shiva abhi usi halat me tha magar Shiva ki bahut kharab thi uske sharer me jaise jan bachi hi na ho aur Aisa ho bhi kyu na pichle teen dinon se use lagatar torcher Kiya ja Raha bijli ke jhatke diye ja rhe the Jane kaun kaun se injection diye Gaye the uski halat wakai me kharab thi agar use is waqt chhor bhi Diya jata toh shayad hi wo apne pairon par khada ho pata ye toh Shiva tha jk abhi Tak Zinda tha warna aur koi hota toh shuruwati torcher me hi mar gya hota wo Abdi mushkil se apni ankhen kholta jise dekh kar Michael kahta

Michael – well done my boy kaisa lag raha hai mere dost

Shiva uski baat ka koi jawab nahi deta ya yun kahen ki usme jawab Dene ki taqat hi nahi bachi thi

Michael – offo ye kya bat Hui kuch bol yar

Tabhi peeche ek admi aakar kahta hai

Admi – sir abhi abhi humare radar ne ek anjan fight ko track Kiya hai wo isi taraf AA Rahi hai

Shiva ke kaan khade ho jate Hain ye sun wo turant apni ankhen khol deta jise dekh kar Michael kahta hai

Michael – are wah lagta party ke aur log bhi aa rahe Hain unka swagat zordar hona chahiye kyu hai na Shiva

Shiva apni bachi Hui taqat ikktha kar kahta hai

Shiva – agar tu ne unhe kuch bhi Kiya toh tujhe koi nahi bacha payega

Michael – achha hmm ek Kam karte unhe hawa me salami de dete hain kyu kya khyal hai

Shiva uski baat sun kar chhatpata hai

Michael apne admi se kahta hai

Michael – get the missiles ready and make the target should be destroyed at once

Shiva – nahi Michael tu ye nahi kar sakta

Michael – kyu nahi kar sakta jab tu apni dosti Tod kar meri ye halat kar sakta hai toh Mai ye kyun nahi kar sakta

Michael ne apne mask ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha

Idhar Williams laptop par laga hua tha

Commissioner krishnamurti usse kahte hai

Commissioner krishnamurti – Williams akhir tum karna kya chahate ho

Williams – main Shiva ki location pata karne ki koshish kar raha hun
wait a minute

Deva – magar kaise

Vaishali – pichhili bar jab shiva ko goli lagi thi toh hume use Bina bataye uske shahrir me ek tracking device dal diya tha usi ke signals se Shiva ka pata chalega

Deva ki baat ka jawab dete hue vaishali ne kaha jab ki Williams laptop par hi laga Raha

Commissioner krishnamurti – toh abhi Tak kis baat ka intezar kar rahe the

Vaishali – kyunki hum ye kaam sirf ek bar hi kar sakte the

Williams – yes mil gya

Deva – surya aziz commissioner sahab chalne ki taiyari kijiye Williams thappar aur vaishali aap log yahi rahenge aur hum logon ko Shiva ki location batate raheng

Vaishali – magar aap log wahan phas gye toh hume poori taiyyari ke sath wahan Jana chahiye

Williams – vaishali is right kyunki agar Shiva museebat me hai toh wo koi chhoti moti museebat nahi hogi Bina taiyari ke Jana maut ko dawat Dena hoga

Thappar – ye log theek kah rahe Hain

Deva – baat toh theek hai magar abhi humare paas waqt nahi hai

Commissioner krishnamurti – toh kyu na hum log groups me bat jayen Williams vaishali aur thappar tum log force ke saath humara picgha karna Tab Tak hum log waha ke halat ko sambhale rahenge

Aarohi – ye theek rahega magar yaha ki matlb Nisha aur nidhi ki security ka kya

Williams – uski fikr mat kijiye Mai uska intzam kar chuka hun

Aziz – toh phir der kis baat ki chalu Shiva ko bacha kar late hain

Kuch hi der bad aarohi commissioner krishnamurti Aziz surya aur Deva ek gunship me baitha kar Shiva ki location ki taraf nikal padte hai


Wahi dusri taraf flight me sabhi log relax mode me the veenu aur Aslam toh so bhi gye the ke tabhi alarm bajne lagte Hain sabhi hadbada kar uth jate Hain Mr James pilot ke paas jate

Mr James – kya hua koi problem

Pilot – sir humare peeche ek missile hai

Mr James – kitni der hai

Pilot – 2 minutes maxiymum

Mr James – aur hum destination se kitni door hain.

Pilot – 2 ghatne


Mr James turant peeche aate Hain aur sabhi ko parachute dete hue

Mr James – we have been attacked we have to jump

Idhar Michael Jo Shiva ke samne khada hua tha uska ek admi aa kar kahta Hai

Admi – sir mission accomplished

Shiva uski bat sunkar buri tarah chilata hai

Michael – chilla aur zor se chilla abhi toh tujhe Kai mauten marna

Shiva uski baat koi jawab nahi deta kyuki wo behosh ho chuka tha





Update continue

 

[Shivay chauhan]

Lijiye doston update hazir hai padhiye aur apne keemti reviews dijiye

 

[Tri2010]

Update continue


Shiva o Shiva utha jao beta dekho itna Sona sehat ke liye accha nahi hota come yar utha

Michael ne Shiva ke galon ko thapthapate hue kaha

Shiva abhi usi halat me tha magar Shiva ki bahut kharab thi uske sharer me jaise jan bachi hi na ho aur Aisa ho bhi kyu na pichle teen dinon se use lagatar torcher Kiya ja Raha bijli ke jhatke diye ja rhe the Jane kaun kaun se injection diye Gaye the uski halat wakai me kharab thi agar use is waqt chhor bhi Diya jata toh shayad hi wo apne pairon par khada ho pata ye toh Shiva tha jk abhi Tak Zinda tha warna aur koi hota toh shuruwati torcher me hi mar gya hota wo Abdi mushkil se apni ankhen kholta jise dekh kar Michael kahta

Michael – well done my boy kaisa lag raha hai mere dost

Shiva uski baat ka koi jawab nahi deta ya yun kahen ki usme jawab Dene ki taqat hi nahi bachi thi

Michael – offo ye kya bat Hui kuch bol yar

Tabhi peeche ek admi aakar kahta hai

Admi – sir abhi abhi humare radar ne ek anjan fight ko track Kiya hai wo isi taraf AA Rahi hai

Shiva ke kaan khade ho jate Hain ye sun wo turant apni ankhen khol deta jise dekh kar Michael kahta hai

Michael – are wah lagta party ke aur log bhi aa rahe Hain unka swagat zordar hona chahiye kyu hai na Shiva

Shiva apni bachi Hui taqat ikktha kar kahta hai

Shiva – agar tu ne unhe kuch bhi Kiya toh tujhe koi nahi bacha payega

Michael – achha hmm ek Kam karte unhe hawa me salami de dete hain kyu kya khyal hai

Shiva uski baat sun kar chhatpata hai

Michael apne admi se kahta hai

Michael – get the missiles ready and make the target should be destroyed at once

Shiva – nahi Michael tu ye nahi kar sakta

Michael – kyu nahi kar sakta jab tu apni dosti Tod kar meri ye halat kar sakta hai toh Mai ye kyun nahi kar sakta

Michael ne apne mask ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha

Idhar Williams laptop par laga hua tha

Commissioner krishnamurti usse kahte hai

Commissioner krishnamurti – Williams akhir tum karna kya chahate ho

Williams – main Shiva ki location pata karne ki koshish kar raha hun
wait a minute

Deva – magar kaise

Vaishali – pichhili bar jab shiva ko goli lagi thi toh hume use Bina bataye uske shahrir me ek tracking device dal diya tha usi ke signals se Shiva ka pata chalega

Deva ki baat ka jawab dete hue vaishali ne kaha jab ki Williams laptop par hi laga Raha

Commissioner krishnamurti – toh abhi Tak kis baat ka intezar kar rahe the

Vaishali – kyunki hum ye kaam sirf ek bar hi kar sakte the

Williams – yes mil gya

Deva – surya aziz commissioner sahab chalne ki taiyari kijiye Williams thappar aur vaishali aap log yahi rahenge aur hum logon ko Shiva ki location batate raheng

Vaishali – magar aap log wahan phas gye toh hume poori taiyyari ke sath wahan Jana chahiye

Williams – vaishali is right kyunki agar Shiva museebat me hai toh wo koi chhoti moti museebat nahi hogi Bina taiyari ke Jana maut ko dawat Dena hoga

Thappar – ye log theek kah rahe Hain

Deva – baat toh theek hai magar abhi humare paas waqt nahi hai

Commissioner krishnamurti – toh kyu na hum log groups me bat jayen Williams vaishali aur thappar tum log force ke saath humara picgha karna Tab Tak hum log waha ke halat ko sambhale rahenge

Aarohi – ye theek rahega magar yaha ki matlb Nisha aur nidhi ki security ka kya

Williams – uski fikr mat kijiye Mai uska intzam kar chuka hun

Aziz – toh phir der kis baat ki chalu Shiva ko bacha kar late hain

Kuch hi der bad aarohi commissioner krishnamurti Aziz surya aur Deva ek gunship me baitha kar Shiva ki location ki taraf nikal padte hai


Wahi dusri taraf flight me sabhi log relax mode me the veenu aur Aslam toh so bhi gye the ke tabhi alarm bajne lagte Hain sabhi hadbada kar uth jate Hain Mr James pilot ke paas jate

Mr James – kya hua koi problem

Pilot – sir humare peeche ek missile hai

Mr James – kitni der hai

Pilot – 2 minutes maxiymum

Mr James – aur hum destination se kitni door hain.

Pilot – 2 ghatne


Mr James turant peeche aate Hain aur sabhi ko parachute dete hue

Mr James – we have been attacked we have to jump

Idhar Michael Jo Shiva ke samne khada hua tha uska ek admi aa kar kahta Hai

Admi – sir mission accomplished

Shiva uski bat sunkar buri tarah chilata hai

Michael – chilla aur zor se chilla abhi toh tujhe Kai mauten marna

Shiva uski baat koi jawab nahi deta kyuki wo behosh ho chuka tha





Update continue

Lovely update

 

[Shanu]

Fantastic update Bhai

 

[Kabiransari]

Nice update

 

[Kabiransari]

Waiting for next update

 

[The AMAN]

Update continue


Shiva o Shiva utha jao beta dekho itna Sona sehat ke liye accha nahi hota come yar utha

Michael ne Shiva ke galon ko thapthapate hue kaha

Shiva abhi usi halat me tha magar Shiva ki bahut kharab thi uske sharer me jaise jan bachi hi na ho aur Aisa ho bhi kyu na pichle teen dinon se use lagatar torcher Kiya ja Raha bijli ke jhatke diye ja rhe the Jane kaun kaun se injection diye Gaye the uski halat wakai me kharab thi agar use is waqt chhor bhi Diya jata toh shayad hi wo apne pairon par khada ho pata ye toh Shiva tha jk abhi Tak Zinda tha warna aur koi hota toh shuruwati torcher me hi mar gya hota wo Abdi mushkil se apni ankhen kholta jise dekh kar Michael kahta

Michael – well done my boy kaisa lag raha hai mere dost

Shiva uski baat ka koi jawab nahi deta ya yun kahen ki usme jawab Dene ki taqat hi nahi bachi thi

Michael – offo ye kya bat Hui kuch bol yar

Tabhi peeche ek admi aakar kahta hai

Admi – sir abhi abhi humare radar ne ek anjan fight ko track Kiya hai wo isi taraf AA Rahi hai

Shiva ke kaan khade ho jate Hain ye sun wo turant apni ankhen khol deta jise dekh kar Michael kahta hai

Michael – are wah lagta party ke aur log bhi aa rahe Hain unka swagat zordar hona chahiye kyu hai na Shiva

Shiva apni bachi Hui taqat ikktha kar kahta hai

Shiva – agar tu ne unhe kuch bhi Kiya toh tujhe koi nahi bacha payega

Michael – achha hmm ek Kam karte unhe hawa me salami de dete hain kyu kya khyal hai

Shiva uski baat sun kar chhatpata hai

Michael apne admi se kahta hai

Michael – get the missiles ready and make the target should be destroyed at once

Shiva – nahi Michael tu ye nahi kar sakta

Michael – kyu nahi kar sakta jab tu apni dosti Tod kar meri ye halat kar sakta hai toh Mai ye kyun nahi kar sakta

Michael ne apne mask ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha

Idhar Williams laptop par laga hua tha

Commissioner krishnamurti usse kahte hai

Commissioner krishnamurti – Williams akhir tum karna kya chahate ho

Williams – main Shiva ki location pata karne ki koshish kar raha hun
wait a minute

Deva – magar kaise

Vaishali – pichhili bar jab shiva ko goli lagi thi toh hume use Bina bataye uske shahrir me ek tracking device dal diya tha usi ke signals se Shiva ka pata chalega

Deva ki baat ka jawab dete hue vaishali ne kaha jab ki Williams laptop par hi laga Raha

Commissioner krishnamurti – toh abhi Tak kis baat ka intezar kar rahe the

Vaishali – kyunki hum ye kaam sirf ek bar hi kar sakte the

Williams – yes mil gya

Deva – surya aziz commissioner sahab chalne ki taiyari kijiye Williams thappar aur vaishali aap log yahi rahenge aur hum logon ko Shiva ki location batate raheng

Vaishali – magar aap log wahan phas gye toh hume poori taiyyari ke sath wahan Jana chahiye

Williams – vaishali is right kyunki agar Shiva museebat me hai toh wo koi chhoti moti museebat nahi hogi Bina taiyari ke Jana maut ko dawat Dena hoga

Thappar – ye log theek kah rahe Hain

Deva – baat toh theek hai magar abhi humare paas waqt nahi hai

Commissioner krishnamurti – toh kyu na hum log groups me bat jayen Williams vaishali aur thappar tum log force ke saath humara picgha karna Tab Tak hum log waha ke halat ko sambhale rahenge

Aarohi – ye theek rahega magar yaha ki matlb Nisha aur nidhi ki security ka kya

Williams – uski fikr mat kijiye Mai uska intzam kar chuka hun

Aziz – toh phir der kis baat ki chalu Shiva ko bacha kar late hain

Kuch hi der bad aarohi commissioner krishnamurti Aziz surya aur Deva ek gunship me baitha kar Shiva ki location ki taraf nikal padte hai


Wahi dusri taraf flight me sabhi log relax mode me the veenu aur Aslam toh so bhi gye the ke tabhi alarm bajne lagte Hain sabhi hadbada kar uth jate Hain Mr James pilot ke paas jate

Mr James – kya hua koi problem

Pilot – sir humare peeche ek missile hai

Mr James – kitni der hai

Pilot – 2 minutes maxiymum

Mr James – aur hum destination se kitni door hain.

Pilot – 2 ghatne


Mr James turant peeche aate Hain aur sabhi ko parachute dete hue

Mr James – we have been attacked we have to jump

Idhar Michael Jo Shiva ke samne khada hua tha uska ek admi aa kar kahta Hai

Admi – sir mission accomplished

Shiva uski bat sunkar buri tarah chilata hai

Michael – chilla aur zor se chilla abhi toh tujhe Kai mauten marna

Shiva uski baat koi jawab nahi deta kyuki wo awesome update

 

[The AMAN]

Chhota hai par phir bhi shuruat ko karni hi thi toh phir se ek bar

Lijiye doston update hazir hai padhiye aur apne keemti reviews dijiye

Shuruat toh dobara ki par bhut bura lgta ki 4 saal se likh k abb yu late kr rhe ho toh intrest kam hona hi hai aur shyad complete b nhi kroge as story ko

 

[The AMAN]

Ek incomplete story readers k liye bhut bada jhtka hota kyuki wo usse dil se jud jate jaise Shiva apne dost ko bolta ki padte huye un kirdaro ko jita hai waise hi bhut se readers b kahani ko jeete hai
Par puri na ho pana ya jab kisi ka intrest na rahe tab puri hona kahaniki haar hai