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Veenu – archan apko kya lgta hai kya wo Shiva ko mar denge

Veenu ne sawal toh pooch liya tha magar apna dar nahi chhipa pai thi wahi dar jo is waqt us gadi me maujood sabhi logon ko lag raha kyuki sab jante the ki agar Shiva beqaboo ho gya toh wo tabahi macha sakta hai aur agar uske andar ka shaitan jag utha toh Qayamat ko koi nahi rok payega

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Idhar commissioner krishnamurti safe house me idhar udhar tahal rahe the wahan maujood sabhi log pareshan the magar commissioner krishnamurti unki bechaini kuch alag thi

Commissioner krishnamurti – pichhle char din se Aslam aur veenu ka kuch pata nahi chala archan bhi gayab hain agar in logon ko kuch ho gya toh Mai Shiva ko kya jawan dunga

Vikram thappar – sir humne har jagah apne log laga diye hai hume unka chal jayega unhe kuch nahi hoga

Deva – han commissioner sahab sab theek ho jayega

Commissioner krishnamurti – ye tum mujhe bata rahe ho ya khud ko dilasa de rahe ho tum log acche jante ho ki agar Shiva aya aur use veenu Aslam ya archan me se koi nahi Mila toh wo kohram macha dega

William – ho sakta hai ki wo log Shiva ki talash me hi gye ho

Itni der se khamoshi se apne laptop par kuch kar rahe William ne kaha uski is baat ne sabhi ka dhyan apni taraf kheencha

Vaishali ne uske laptop ki screen ki taraf dekhte hue kaha

Vaishali – sir shayad William ko kuch Mila hai ye dekhiye

Wo screen par chal Rahi ek photo ki taraf ishara karti hai jisme archan Aslam veenu aur do anjan log ek saath ek car me dikhai dete hai

Commissioner krishnamurti – tumhe ye pic kahan se mili

William – satellite image hai sir 1 ghante pahle ki

Vikram thappar – chalo shukr hai hai ye log theek hai

Usne chain ki sans lete hue kaha

Wahi dusri taraf veenu Aslam aur baki sabhi log tezi se apni manzil ki taraf badh rahe the

Wahi dusri taraf lab me Shiva buri tarah tourcher Kiya ja raha tha uski halat bahut kharab thi wo aki bar bar behosh ho chuka tha is waqt Michael ek cabin me baitha hua tha uske samne do aur log bhi the wo log aur koi nahi balki Rahman aur DR the

Michael – bahut jan hai sale me itna tourcher agar kisi aur ko Kiya hota toh kab ka mar gya hota

DR – wo marna nahi chahiye Michael is baat ko bhulna mat

DR ne bahut thande laheje me kaha jisse ek pal ke liye Michael bhi ghabra gya

Rahma – sir mujhe samjh nahi ata ki aap use marne kyu nahi dete

Rahman ne khisiyate hue kaha

DR – tum nahi samjhoge use marne pahle kai aur mauten marna hai

Idhar veenu ke poochhe hue sawal ka jawab na Milne par wo sabki taraf dekhti hai toh Mr James bolte

Mr James – dekho beta maine jahan tak is case ko samjha usse mujhe ye lagta hai ki wo log Shiva ko sirf marna nahi chahte balki uske andar ke shaitan ko bahar Lana chahte Hain

Veenu – magar kyun

Mr yung – taki wo uski shatiyan ka istemal apne fayde ke liye kar saken

Archan – aur iske liye unhe Shiva ki bali deni hogi

Veenu – bali

Archan – han bali jiska muhurt kal raat ka hai

Wahi dusri taraf Michael Shiva ke galon ko thapthapa kar use jagane ki koshish karta hai

Michael – shiva o Shiva utho beta dekho tum se milne kaun aya utho utho utho

Wo Shiva ki kisi bacche ki taraf utha Raha tha Shiva bhari sanse leta hua apni ankhen kholta hai

Michael – gud boy chalo mere friends ko hello bolo

Shiva jab us disha me dekhta hai toh use samne Rahman aur DR dikhai dete hai

DR – hello my friend kaise ho katir darie koi Kami toh nahi Rahi

Shiva uski taraf gusse se dekhta hai

DR – mai janta tum kya soch rahe ho ki in sab ke peeche mera haath hai hai na toh tum bilkul sahi ho tum logo ko nakli khabar pahuchana tumhe yaha qabeele ki madad ke liye bulana sab Mera plan tha aur jante ho best part kya hai ki tumhare bare kisi ko kuch pata bhi nahi hai aur han tum fikar mat Karo tumhare baad Mai tumhare sathiyon ko bhi jaldi tumhare paas bhejunga magar sab se pahle us journalist wo kya naam hai uska han veenu use marunga tadapa tadpa ke

Kah kar wo rahaman aur Michael Jane lagte hai toh Shiva bolta hai

Shiva – agar tum logon ko sarvanash se bachna hai toh mujhe mar do ghalti se agar mai zinda Bach gya toh Aisa bisan vidhwans hoga ki khud mahakal bhi tumhe nahi bacha payenge mai tum sab ko mar dunga

DR – dekhte hai kaun kise Marta hai
 

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Ek bar me stage pe 4 5 ladkiyan naach rahi thi bar me kafi bheed thi kai log unpe not uda rahe wahi kuch khamoshi se baithe hue unka nach dekh rahe the aur kuch sirf sharab peene me magan the usi stage theek upar ek cabin bana hua tha jisme is waqt teen log ek doosre ke samne baithe hue the un mese ek kahta .

Pahla wyakti – dekhiye agar aap hum se maal lete hai toh purity aur safety dono ki poori gurantee humri hogi aap chahe toh market se pata kar lijiye .

Ye koi aur nahi balki rahman tha 6 feet 3 inch lamba chauda vyakti dekhne saaf pata chalta hai ki wo ek wrestler hai magar is waqt wo ek acche salesman ki tarah apna product bech raha tha.

Samne baithe hue ek wyakti ne kaha .

Wyakti – sir hai mr rahman we will do bussiness with but agar koi problem hui toh aap jante hai ki kya ho skta hai .

Rahman – you don’t worry about that .

Wo dono khade ho jate hai aur un mese ek kahta hai .

Wyatki – theek mr rahman hum apko apna order phone pe bata denge .

Rahman – theek hai .

Wo dono kamre se bahar nikal jate hai aur rahman cigarette jala kar peene lagta hai kuch der baad uska ek admi andar aata hai .

Admi – bhai abdul aaya hai apse milna chahta hai .

Rahman – theek hai bhejo .

Kuch der baad ek rahman ki hi kad kathi wala wyakti kamre me dakhil hota hai aur andar aate hi rahman ko adab se salam karta hai rahman use baithne ka ishara karta hai .

Rahman – bolo abdul kya khabar laye ho .

Abdul – bhai commissioner krishmurti aapko raste se hatane ke liye apni poori taqat laga raha .

Rahman muskurate hue kahta hai .

Rahman – wo mera kuch nahi bigad payega legally toh bilkul nahi .

Abdul – isiliye toh wo shiva ko doodne me laga hua hai .

Rahman – kya shiva jinda hai .

Abdul – han bhai agar nahi hota toh commissioner use kyu talash karta .

Rahman – tum jante ho ki wo kaha hai .

Abdul – nahi bhai maine apne sare ladke isi kam pe laga diye hai jald hi pata chal jayega .

Rahman – very good ye lo .

Kahkar rahman ne noto ka ek bundal use diya abdul ne bandal liya aur waha se chala gya.

Wahi dosri taraf rahul aur baki uski sathi pareshan the ki ab wo log camping pe kaise jayenge .

Rohan – yar ab kya karenge .

Rahul – wahi mai bhi soch raha hu .

Shaks – waise tum log jungal kyu jaa rahe .

Toh un mese ek ladki kahti .

Ladki – sir wo humri college ki chhuttiya shuru ho gai thi toh socha thoda adventure hi kar le magar Ab toh lagta hai ki kuch nahi ho sakta.

Usne mayus ho kar kaha tabhi chhote bol padta hai .

Chhote – ho kyu nahi sakta .

Kahkar usne apne guru ki taraf dekha us shaks ne chhote se turant kaha .

Shaks – nahi bilkul nahi mai inhe leke jungal nahi ja raha .

Chhote – chalo na guru dekho kitne Mayoos hai bichare aur waise bhi mujhe jungal dekhne ka bahut man hai .

Shaks – kyu jungal me tere kaunse rishtedar hai.

Chhote – mai kuch nahi janta aap mujhe aur in logo ko jungal leke ja rahe ho bas .

Usne zid karte hue kaha aur us shaks ki taraf apni peeth kar li toh wo shaks uske paas jata hai aur uske samne ghutno pe baith ke kahtA.

Shaks – aur agar jungal me sher aa gya toh .

Chhote – tum kisi sher se kam ho kya .

Shaks har si manta hua kahta hai .

Shaks – theek hai mai gadi nikal ke lata hu tu mera kala wala bag nikal le .

Rahul – magar gadi toh kharab hai .

Chhote – tum kya samjhte ho sirf tumhari hi gadi hai apne paas bhi hai kyu guru .

Wo shaks koi jawab nahi deta aur garage ke bahar chala jata hai uske jate hi ek ladki chhote ko kiss kar leti hai .

Chhote apna gal poochte hue kahta hai .

Chhote – dekho mai pahle hi bata deta hu mujh pe line mat maro meri already hi ek girlfriend hai aur han ek aur baat guru se jayad bakwas mat karne .

Rahul – accha theek ab chale .

Chhote – pahle apna naam batao .

Toh ek ladki kahti – mera naam nidhi hai ye rahul ye rohan aur jo tum pe line mar rahi uska naam hai nisha .

Sabhi andar bate kar rahe the aur wo shaks bahar aake ek gadi se kapda hata deta hai yeek self modified hunter jeep thi kale rang ki model kafi purana tha magar kafi maintain ki hui thi wo shaks us jeep ko start karta hai aur garage ke samne jake rok deta hai aur horn bajata hai sabhi log Scorpio me se saman nikal kar bahar aate hai sabhi ke muh se ek sath waao nikal jata hai tabhi chhote kahta hai .

Chhote – are hato mujhe rasta do ye bag kitna bhari hai guru uthao ise mujhse nahi uth raha pata nahi kya bhar rakha hai isme aaj tak mujhe nhi dikhaya .

Wo shaks chhote ke paas ata hai aur kahta .

Shaks – la de jab waqt ayega tab dikha bhi dunga ki isme kya rakha .

Wo us bag ko bade aram se utha leta hai usne is waqt ek blue lower aur black t shirt pahn rakhi thi bag uthane se uska daya bazu phool gaya tha nisha uska bazu badi hairani se dekh rahi thi .

Shaks – ab chalna hai ki nahi .

Sabhi log jeep me baith jate nisha driver ki bagal wali seat pe baith jati aur rohan rahul aur nidhi peeche baith jate hai toh chhote kahta hai .

Chhote – mai kaha baithu .

Nisha – meri god me .

Chhote apne mathe pe haath rakh ke kahta hai .

Chhote – maine bola na meri ek girlfriend hai.

Kah kar wo seedhe rohan ki god me baith jata hai jisse sabhi log hasne lagte hai siway us shaks ke .

Chhote – mai baith gya guru ab gadi chalao .

Wo shaks gadi dauda deta .

Kaun hai ye shaks kyu hai ye itna khamosh kya hoga jungal me kyu shiva ke aane ki khabar sunke rahman hai pareshan kya hoga jungal janne ke liye saath bane rahe.
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Shiva – agar tum logon ko sarvanash se bachna hai toh mujhe mar do ghalti se agar mai zinda Bach gya toh Aisa bisan vidhwans hoga ki khud mahakal bhi tumhe nahi bacha payenge mai tum sab ko mar dunga
DR – dekhte hai kaun kise Marta hai
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Veenu archan aur baki sabhi log matlab Mr James Mr yung 3 ghante ki lagatar drive ke baad ek bahut hi purane lagbhag khandar ho chuke air base par pahuchte hain Aslam aur veenu us jagah ko bade gaur se dekhte hai bahar koi security wala bhi nahi gadi air base par pahuchte hi unke paas ek admi ata hai.
Admi – aap logon ki flight ready hai
Veenu aur Aslam ek dusre ko achambhe se dekhte hai kyuki Jo halat us air base ki thi waha se koi flight Lena impossible tha tha archan dono ki manodasha samjhte hue kahte hai
Archan – beta rasta bahut lamba sari baaten ho jayengi magar abhi hume niklna hoga
Sabhi log run way kj taraf chal padte Hain
Idhar commissioner krishnamurti home minister sahab ke office me baithe the aur bahut jyada pareshan bhi the
Home minister sahab – toh ab kya socha hai
Unki pareshani dekhte hue home minister sahab ne bahut atmiyata se sawal Kiya
Commissioner krishnamurti – mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha ki karun toh karun kya Shiva ka koi ata pata nahi veenu Aslam aur archan bhi gayab hain kuch samjh nahi aa ke kya karun upar se wo humla dimag kharab ho Gaya hai
Home minister sahab – tumhe kis baat ka dar hai shuva ki fikar to tumhe hogi nahi kyuki hum sab jante Hain ki wo akela ek fauj ke barabar hai toh tum pareshan kyu ho
Commissioner krishnamurti – mujhe dar hai ki veenu Aslam aur archan ke aane se pahle agar Shiva aa gya toh Mai use kya jawab dunga aur uske baad wo kitni tabahi machayega maut aapne haath pasar legi itni lashen girengi ki unhen jalne aur dafnane ke liye Zameen bhi Kam pad jayegi yamraaj ka yam paash bhi Chhota pad jayega un atmayon ko le Jane ke liye
Commissioner krishnamurti me kuch is tarah se kaha ki ek baar home minister sahab bhi ghabra gye kyuki wo jante the jo commissioner krishnamurti lah rahe Hain wo bilkul sach hai.
Idhar safe house me Deva aur baki sab bhi baith pareshan the unki pareshani ki wajah bhi wahi thi Jo commissioner krishnamurti ki thi aziz Deva se kahta hai
Aziz – yar Shiva ko dhondna hoga
Deva – magar kaise koi rasta bhi nahi
Surya – magar hum aise chupchap bhi nahi baith sakte
Williams jo ab Tak chup tha kahta hai
Williams – ek rasta Hai
Sabhi log uski taraf chaunk kar dekhte hai
Veenu aur Aslam is waqt archan aur unke dono sathiyon ke sath ek private plane me the veenu archan se kahti
Veenu – apne bataya nahi
Archan – kya nahi bataya
Veenu – yahi ye plane wagaira
Archan muskurate hain aur kahte hain
Archan – ye sab humara hi hai mere Kai students hain Jo acchi posts par Hain toh ye sab un mese ek ne hi arrange Kiya
Mr James Jo abhi Tak chup the bolte Hain
Mr James – hume Shiva ko bachane ke bare me sochna chahiye
Mr yung – han warna hume koi nahi bacha payega
Veenu aur Aslam unki taraf hairani se dekhte hai
Aslam – matlb
Mr yung archan aur Mr James ki taraf dekhte Hain toh archan unhe ishare se sahmati dete hain
Mr yung – dekho Mai is bare me sure toh nahi hun magar shayad Shiva ke zariye wo log dusri duniya ka darwaza khol kar kuch bahut zyada vinashkari cheez is duniya me lana chahte hai
Ye sab sun kar aslam aur veenu buri tarah ghabra jate Hain
Veenu – agar Aisa hua toh kya hoga
Mr yung – jo hum soch bhi nahi sakte
 

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