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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

mashish

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Surpmarich:- Thanks yaar, bacha liye iss junior Nilayani se warna ye mere sawal ke jawab milne se pahle hi ye mujhe maar dalti… Dekho to baat aisi thi ki ek yogi jo apne dimag ko purn viksit kar chuka tha, wo ek jagah baith'kar apne dimag ko kahin bhi le ja sakta tha.. kamal ki siddhi thi uski.. kash wo siddhi mujhe mil jati… main to bus kewal target audience se hi baat kar sakta hun aur unhi ke ander ja sakta hun…


Main bahut si shaktiyon se ab bhi vanchit hun. Khair to uss Yogi purush ne rach di mere khilaf sajis aur Nilayani ko uss sidh yogi ka margdarshan mila.. Nilayani ne wo sab hasil kar lee, jis se mujhe harana bilkul halwa ho gaya tha…


Mere pass kewal chhal bacha tha aur Nilayani ko uljhane ki niti shuru ho gayi. Main apne issi thikane par aa kar chhip gaya. Uss waqt main dhundh raha tha ki koi to tod ho mere pass. Tab mujhe gyan hua 2 premi ke bare me, ek ka naam tha Jirth, Viggo samuday se aur dusre ka naam tha Mallsi, Dakshat samuday se.


Mallsi jo hai wo Siren ki purwaj hai… to hua ye ki science project ke medical section me dono kaam kar rahe the, jahan Jirth iss baat ki khoj me laga tha ki ek dead cell jo dobara generate nahi ho sakta, usse kaise repair karen. Wahin Mallsi kaam kar rahi thi ki chhote se energy source ke bada kaam kaise liya jaye… are wahi jise abhi nano technology bolte hain...


Science exhibition me dono ki mulakat hui thi aur wahin dono me pyar ho gaya tha… cute couple, dono ne chupke se apni jodi bhi banayi, aur kamal ki baat dekho, dono ki jodi maine hi banayi thi. Gift me maine Mallsi ko ek chhota khubsurat patthar diya tha… chhota source of energy, aur Jirth ko bhi ek patthar diya. Kafi rochak patthar tha wo, Nischal janta hai unki khubiyan.. jo shayad uss waqt Jirth nahi samjh paya tha. Uske sodh ke anusar ye ek aisa patthar tha, jo ek insan ke achhe cell ko dusre insan ke barbaad cell se replace kar sakta hai… critical condition me 2 body ko balance karke jaan bachayi ja sakti hai..


Khair mera gift pakar dono hi khush the aur paglon ki tarah din bhar dono lab me baith'kar, uss patthar par sodh kiya karte the. Universe me Massori grah aur Aaynek grah ki badhti jung ko dekhte huye, Dakshat kul ne socha ki kyon na Aizem par ek colony basayi jaye, taki Aizem aur Massori grah se jab ek sath Aaynek par humla hoga, tab puri tarah se Aaynek grah ko chaunkaya ja sakta tha aur haraya ja sakta tha.


Mallsi issi rajniti ke karan Aizem aa gayi, lekin wah issi shart par Aizem aayi thi ki usse jodi banane ke liye force nahi kiya jaye… Ab shayad tum samjh sakti ho ki kyon Serin se tumhara lagaw itna gahra hai Nischal, kyonki tum dono ek hi cross breed ke result ho aur shayad isliye unclassified bhi. Tumhe to bahut kuch apne bare me pata bhi hai, lekin Serin ko apne kul ki biti itihas pata hi nahi ki Mallsi aur Jirth ke milan se jo bacha paida hua tha ussi kul ke ek ladki se Behavan ne apni jodi banayi. Haan lekin Mallsi ke baad wali pidhi ka Viggo paksh lagbhag gayab ho gaya, kyonki Mallsi ki agli pidhi aur uske baad jitni bhi pidhiyan hui, unme se kisi ne Viggo ko jodi nahi banaya…


Khair come to the point … Aizem aur Massori ke bich to fut ki niti chal hi rahi thi. Fir jab Aaynek toota tab maine khud Jirth ko Aizem se nikalne me madad kiya aur natija tum sab ke samne tha… Mahamahim ka satta me aana fir Jirth dwara taiyar kiye device se Nilayani ki shaktiyan nikalna…


Bus ek baat jo shuru se mujhe khatak rahi thi ki maine kiya sab kuch sahi… Nilayani ko fasa bhi diya tha, kintu fir bhi uss Mittoso ke pass Nilayani ki aanshik shaktiyan hi kyon aayi, jabki mujhe uske jariye Nilayani ki purn shakti milni chahiye thi… ab shayad tum teeno samjh chuke hoge ki mujhe kaun sa jawab tum teeno se chahiye… Aakhir Nilayani ne uss waqt kiya kya tha?


Jivisha:- Tunhare maut ka intzam…


Surpmarich:- Areee ruko yaar maar lena mujhe, lekin suspence me nahi marna… jawab de do fir ladai shuru karte hain.. ..


Nischal:- Jivisha marne wale ki aakhri ikchha purn kar do…


Jivisha:- Isse jo jawab chahiye tha, wo mil gaya hai Nischal… bahut shatir hai ye… hume yahan tak lane ka matlab hi tha isse wo raaj jaan'na, jis se Nilayani ne apni shaktiyon ko shurakshit kiya tha.


Surpmarich:- Aahhhh ! Ye purvanuman… cool haan.. dekho wade ke mutabik mujhe mere sawalon ka jawab bus Jivisha ke man me chal rahe soch se mil chuka hai, ki Nilayani ne apni shaktiyon ko apni har bahan me aanshik roop se bant'kar unhe alag-alag grah par bhej diya tha… Khair mere sawal ka jawab mil chuka hai... Chalo upar chalkar ab iss khel ko bhi khatm kiya jaye.. tum log yudh ka bigul bajao..


Charo upar aa gaye.. ek ore Surpmarich to dusri ore ye teeno… Jivisha ne yudh ka aagaj kiya aur apne dono hath failayi… Jivisha ne jaise hi apne dono hath failaye.. Surpmarich badi teji ke sath Jivisha ke karib pahuncha aur uske pure sar ko apne panje me kaid kiya hi tha, ki uske sharir se Serin ke dhardar electronic blade takraye..


Blade takrane ke sath hi chur ho chuka tha. Nischal apne pure veg se daurta hua aaya aur pure force se Surpmarich ko dhakka laga diya… Nischal ko aisa laga jaise wo lohe ki moti chadar se ja takraya. Surpmarich ko to koi fark nahi para lekin Nischal uss jordar takkar ke karan pura ander tak hil chuka tha. Surpmarich ke humle se Jivisha ko bachane ki kosis purntah nakam ho chuki thi, aur jab Surpmarich ne Jivisha ke sar se hath hataya wo behosh hokar niche gir gayi.


Jivisha ko jaise hi uss Surpmarich ne chhoda Nischal ne Serin ko apne pichhe kiya aur khud aage aa gaya… "Kosis bekar hai Nischal, aur mujhe itne kamjor pratidwandi se ladne me koi dilchaspi nahi… Jivisha ko support do .. warna 10 minute me wo mar jayegi… Usse khada karo, jabtak main intzar kar raha hun..."


Nischal:- Serin, Jivisha ko Drink pilao.. aur usse medical support do.. sath me 400 volt ka chhota sa jhatka bhi… Surpmarich yudh ka bigul to baj gaya hai, tumhe intzar to nahi karwa sakta…


Nischal apni baat khatm karte huye Surpmarich par lapka… biljli ki raftaar se bhi 10 guna jyada raftaar me Nischal apne khanjar chalane laga… Dono hath uske teji me aise chal rahe the mano wo pure gayab hi ho gaye ho…


Uss se bhi kamal to Surpmarich tha jo Nischal ki gati se bhi tej apna bachaw kar raha tha.. dayen aur bayen ore se uth rahe Nischal ke tej raftaar hath ko, wo matr apne bayen hath se rok raha tha. Raftaar ka adbhut namuna… Nischal ki gati se lagbhag 4 guni jyada speed. Aur fir apni dusre hath se Nichal ke sine par jor ka pura panja chala diya…


Nischal par pranghati humla, lekin tabhi Jivisha ne apni dono hatheli ko samne karke push ki aur Surpmarich jatka kha'kar pichhe hata… Nischal ne ankhen mundi, dhyan lagaya aur muskurate huye apni aakhen khol liya…


Jabtak idhar Jivisha ki nili chamak rahi aakhen apne pure uffan par thi… "Ahhhh ! Nilayani ka roop dikh raha hai tum me Jivisha… Aao iss khel ko khatm karen. Yudh ka maidan hoga ab Nilayani ka dimag"..


"Aji aise kaise aap Jivisha ke dimag me ghus sakte hain"… Nischal khud to uske samne aaya hi, aur sath me chala aaya Nischal ki chetna (Nischal ki chetna se arth hai uska wo roop jab Nischal apna hath paun gawa kar kursi par baitha rahta aur uski chetna charo ore bhraman karti)… Nischal, Jivisha aur Surpmarich ke bich khade hokar iss bar apne hath chalana shuru kiya..


Surpmarich lekin iss baar bachaw nahi kar raha tha, balki wo bhi humla kar raha tha… kintu Nischal thehra unclassified, Surpmarich shayad aankne me galti kar gaya… aisa laga raha tha Nischal ke ek sarir na hokar do sarir the aur ek hath ke niche, sath-sath dusra hath bhi chal raha ho..



Right-left, right-left… hathon ki raftar lagatar tej aur tej aur bhi jyada tej hone lagi… Surpmarich bhi apne purn gati aur bal ke sath humla kar raha tha. Nischal, Surpmarich ke na jane kitne war apne sarir par jhel gaya aur Surpmarich fati aakhon se bus ye karishma hote dekh raha tha… tabhi Nischal ne apne dono panje uske sine se tika kar ek tej dhakka mara..


Aisa laga jaise uske sina aur fefra uske pith se takra gaya ho.. wo khud takriban 1-2 kilometer dur jakar gira aur jab wo khada hua tab uske sine par … dayen hath ke 5 ungliyon se chipke 5 aur ungliyon ke nishan the aur thik aisa hi bayen hath ki ungliyon ke sath bhi tha…


Surpmarich apne dono hath itni teji se bhumi par mara ki wahan ke barf ki chadar fat gayi, Jivisha palatwar karti bus gol ghum gayi aur lagbhag ek bada ilaka jahan Jivisha aur uska 200 kilometer ke kshetr me faila viman khada tha, wo puri jagah, apni jagah kabij thi aur baki charo ore se kayi hazar fit ki gahri khayi ban chuki thi..


Surpmarich teeno ke ore daur laga diya… Nischal thik uske samne khada tha, iss baar Surpmarich ne Nischal par humla nahi kiya, balki wo Nischal ke humle ko jhelta raha aur apne dono hath ke ishare se, ek hath se Jivisha, to dusri hath se Serin ko hawa me utha liya..


Jivisha uske iss action par muskurai. Wo apni dono hatheli ko samne rakh'kar jnattedar tali bajayi aur apni dono hatheli ko jode rakhi… idhar Jivisha ki hatheli se dhuan uthne laga aur udhar Surpmarich ke kan se lekar side ke sar ke dono hisse puri tarah laal hokar jalne laga…


Udhar Serin ka lagbhag dum ghutne hi wala tha tabhi Nischal ne sar ghuma kar ek baar Serin ko dekha.…. "Nayyyyyyyyy".. Nischal ki gahri chinkh, Nischal ne Surpmarich ka gala pakda. Usse hawa me utha'kar ulta ghumaya aur niche jamin me ghusa diya….


Nischal ne usse itna tej ander ghusaya ki ki wo niche gaddha karke na jane kitne fit ander tak chala gaya tha.. jaise hi wo bhumigat hua, waise hi uski shaktiyan hati aur Nischal Serin ke niche girne se pahle hi lapak liya. Nischal uska chehre ko dekhte huye puchhne laga… "Tum thik to ho na Serin"..


Serin:- Haan thik hun… lekin ek pal ke liye laga ki abhi to jina shuru hi kiya tha...


Nischal, paglaye sa charo ore dekhte huye... "Aise kaise usne tumhe marne ki himmat kar di" ..


Nischal baukhlaya charo ore dekhne laga, tbhi usne dekha ki samne se Surpmarich fir se Jivisha ke sar par hath dale tha… "Serin chalo iska khel khatm kiya jaye.. apni aakhen mundo aur Jivisha ka hath thamo"..


Serin ne Jivisha ka hath thama aur Nichal ne Serin ka… agle hi pal Nischal Serin ke diamg me ghuste huye, fir wahan se Serin ke achet abterman ke sath sidha Surpmarich ke dimag me pahunch gaya…


Bade-bade kale rakh tile ab bhi the wahan, jaisa Mahamahim ke dimag me tha... Lambi-lambi rakh ke tile aur uspar halki law jalti hui… "Jivisha samjo ki tum Jaal mahal me ho aur wo jagah ab aisi ho gayi hai… ab Jaal mahal ko punah banana shuru karo. Yahan dimag ki gati kaam karegi, isliye tum agar soch lo to mujh se bhi jyada tej ho sakti ho. Waqt nahi hai humare pass jaldi karo"..


Serin Nischal ki baat sunkar utni hi teji dikhati hui kaam karti hui kahne lagi… "Pal bhar me isse main abhi Jaal mahal bana deti hun"…


Serin aur Nischal wahan jo bhi vastu soch rahe the wo vastu ban jati. Second ke 100th hisse me, Serin ne ek cleaner tayar kiya aur dekhte hi dekhte utni hi teji me, wahan ke wo raakh ke tile ko saaf karti, uss pure jagah ko saaf-suthra khali maidan bana di. Idhar Nischal bhi utni hi teji se robotics technology developed karte huye, kayi sare robots taiyar kar liye jo wahan ke surface se khudai karke dhatu nikal rahe the aur ek bada sa reactor taiyar jar chuke the… Jaise hi Nischal ne wo reactor chalaya…..
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mashish

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"Aahhhhh" Surpmarich ke sar me pagal kar dena wala dard sa utha. Usse aisa mehsus hua, mano dimag ke ander maujood har sanayu tantu me, kisi ne high voltage current daura diya ho. Turant hi Surpmarich bhi wahan pahuncha aur uske sath Jivisha bhi thi, jo akeli tab se apne dimag ke ander Surpmarich se lad rahi thi, haalat uski achhi to nahi thi, lekin fir bhi wo tiki hui thi aur jaise hi Surpmarich Jivisha ko chhod'kar bhagne laga Jivisha bhi uska hath tham sath chali aayi…


Jivisha ko dekhte hi Nischal ne apne robots ko Surpmarich ke upar chhodte huye Jivisha ke ore bhaga… "Tum thik to ho na Jivisha"..


Jivisha:- Baby ye bahut bada kamina hai... Isne hume yahan bula'kar fasaya hai. Ye dikhane ke liye to hum teeno ke sath lad raha tha lekin planning iski kuch aur hi thi.. hum teeno ke dimag me ek-ek karke ghusta… aur humari shaktiyon ko nigalte huye hume maar deta… Ab bhi iske shakti pane ki lalach miti nahi… yudh ke liye bahut sahi jagah ka chunaw kiya hai love…


Jivisha apni baat samapt hi ki thi, tabhi teeno ko ek sath jhatka laga aur teeno hi dur jakar gire… Nischal khada hokar apna gala idhar se udahr hilaya aur ek hi chhalang lagakar Surpmarich ke pass pahuncha. Jitni tej uchhal'kar wo Surpmarich ke pass pahuncha, utni hi teji se Surpmarich ne Nischal ko gale se pakad kar fir se dur fenk diya…


"Ab tak to hat'kheli chal rahi thi, lekin na to tum ram ho aur na hi tumhare pass koi vibhishan .. iss Lanka se kaise nikloge…"


Jivisha khadi hokar hath ko golakar banayi, jaise-jaise gola purn hote ja raha tha, wahan ke charo ore ki hawa khinch rahi thi… "Ravan kitna bhi balsali aur buddhiman kyon na ho, Lanka dahan to ussi ka hua tha Surpmarich".. kahti hui Jivisha ne wo gola de mara…


Dahakta hua gola Surpmarich ke ore badhne laga, lekin jaise hi wo Surpmarich se takrane wala tha, usne bus ek chutki baja'kar apne ungli ko upar kiya aur wo gola fatkar charo ore pusp varsha karne lagi. Agle hi pal usne apne hath ke ishare se Jivisha ko badi teji ke sath apne pass khinch'kar, apne kanda se uske sine itna tej humala kiya ki Jivisha dur jakar giri aur uske muh se khun nikalne laga…


Wahin dusri ore se usne Nischal ko bhi khinch liya aur usse to apne kandhe se, Jivisha se 10 guna jyada tej prahar kiya… aisa laga jaise Nischal ke ander se dil gurde sab fat gaye ho…


Serin teji se daurti hui uski ore badhi.… "Mere bhai aur babhi ke sath khelna band karo"..


Surpmarich ne Serin par bhi apne dono hath ka humla kiya lekin tej chot lagne ke bawjood bhi wo khadi rahi… "kyon beta jhatka kha gaya na" .. kahti hui Serin ne apna laat uthayi aur jhatke se uske sine par aisa jama dee, ki wo kahin dur jakar gira… khun uske muh se bhi aane laga…. Serin tej-tej shwans leti hui kahne lagi… "Dono uth jao bewakoofon.. hum dimag ke ander hain aur yahan atmbal ke sath dimag ko bhi majboot rakho.. war jhelo yah sochte huye ki ye humara kuch bigar nahi sakta.."


Serin ki awaz par dono khanste huye uthe. Zoom se current gujri ho jaise ussi teji ke sath Nischal Surpmarich ke samne pahuncha. Uska ek jordar prahaar jhela aur apni puri kshmata se usne apna panja, Surpmarich ke sar ke upar maar diya… pure panje kaa chhap uske sar ke upar nikal aaya tha, jiske charo ore baal the. Udhar Serin ek patli sharp rassi lekar uske gale me fasayi aur uss paar kud gayi…


Nischal aage se Surpmarich ke dono hath pakad kar, apne ore khinchne laga. Jivisha ne uske paun ko apni jagah jama dee aur Serin uske pith par apne paun jamati hui, apne dono hath se, gale me fasi patli dhatu ki rassi ko piche ke ore khinchne lagi ..


Surpmarich bebas hone laga tha. Teeno ka ek sath humla usse dhire-dhire maut ke karib le jane laga. Dhire-dhire Surpmarich ki aakhen bahar aane lagi. Jaan to hakakh me atki thi, lekin Surpmarich ki dahakti aakhen jaise hi Jivisha par pari.. Jivisha ki shwans rukne lagi… tabhi Nischal ne apna panja, uske panje se fasaya aur Nischal apne sar se uske aankh oar jordar takkar marte… "Bahut lambi jindgi ji liye tum dost, ab marne ka samay aa gaya hai"…


Tabhi Surpmarich jor se hansa… aakhri shabd uske juban se kisi tarah nikle…. "Mujhe apne mirtu ka purvanuman ho chuka tha… tum teeno ka dhanywad"..


Kisi tarah wo apni baat kah gaya. Dhatu ki rassi lagatar apna pura khinchaw uske gardan par banati ja rahi thi. Dekhte hi dekhte rassi gale ko kat'ti hui, uski gardan niche utar di… jaise hi uska gardan kat kar niche gira… Nischal ne uske sar par itna tej paun mara ki uska pura sir niche chipak gaya.. wahin Jivisha ne turant uske sharir me aaga laga di…


Nischal bina koi der kiye doni ko lekar dimag se bahar aa gaya. Lekin idhar bahar to alag hi kahani chal rahi thi. Serin jab aankh kholi, tab Nischal ke pass khade uske sharir se HuYu lipta hua tha aur uske honth Serin ke honth se lage huye the…


Serin chaukar apni puri aankh kholi aur khud se chipke HuYu ko tej jhatka dekar khud se dur ki. Lekin HuYu bhi Serin ka hath pakde tha aur wapas uske upar aaya, fir se honth se honth lagakar chumne laga… Serin uski iss adaa par fida hoti hui ander se musukrai aur wo bhi sath dene lagi. Jabki Serin ke bilkul karib khade, Nischal aur Jivisha ki jaise hi aakhen khuli, unki najar Surpmarich ke badan par pari…


Dono ka pura dhyan udhar hi tha. Dono uske pass pahunch'kar bade dhyan se uske sine me ghusa khanjar dekhne lage. Chamkila khanjar jo thik dil ke bicho-bich ghusa hua tha…


Nischal uss khanjar ko sine se bahar nikalte huye, pichhe muda… Jivisha bhi pichhe mudi… "Oye ye kya ho raha hai"..


Nischal ki awaz sunkar dono teji se alag huye… Serin thodi sharmati hui kahne lagi… "Wo mujhe laga main ab bhi uske dimag me he hun aur ye kalpnik image hai"..


Nischal:- Haddiyan kadki hui hai.. medical ki jaroorat paregi.. upar se Surpmarich ke sine me utara gaya khanjar. Ye wahi khanjar lagta hai, jo kal raat se HuYu bana raha tha. Mera dimag dard se fata ja raha hai. Surpmarich ke iss jagah ko bhi dekhna hai. Itne sari baton aur sawalon ke bich tum iss gadhe ko chum rahi ho. Upar se sharmana aur nautanki karna.. puri shagird ban jao apni bhabhi ki.


Serin:- Tum log thakte nahi itna lamba-lamba bol'kar, chalo medical section…


Sabhi viman ke ander pahunche… Serin khud thodi kam damage thi, isliye usne khud ke sath sab ko scan ki. Kamal ke scan results the. Serin ne sab ko mana kar diya purane koi bhi liquid lene se. Filhaal ke liye Serin ne dono ko kuch naye dawa ka prayog karne kahi. Dawa lene ke kuch der baad sab achha mehsus karne lage…


Nischal Surpmarich ke mirt sarir ko surakshit kar'ke, prayogsala me dal diya aur khud naha dho kar hall me pahunch gaya.


Hall me sabhi log pahle se baithe the aur jigyasa purwak HuYu ko hi dekh rahe the…. Nischal aate hi wo khanjar table par rakhte huye…. "Iske bare me bataoge jarra"..


HuYu:- Main thoda late ho gaya … kyonki Surpmarich ya koi bhi aisa prani jo khud ko prakritik bataye, uska ye ilaj hai… mere pass ek pustak hai jisme aise logon ko marne ka pura sodh likha hai… bus ek hi dikkat hai…


Nischal:- Kya…


HuYu:- Uske khun lagne ke karan, ye khanjar ek hi baar kaam karta hai… yadi dil me na ghop kar, kahin aur khanjar ghopte ho to wo nahi marega… ..


Nischal:- Tum nahi bhi ye khanjar chalate, to bhi wo marta hi.


Serin:- Ab chhodo bhi, khanjar ne usse kamjor kiya aur hum usse marne me safal rahe, ya khanjar lagne ke karan uske pran nikal rahe the aur iss wajah se hum uske dimag ke ander jit rahe the, iss baat par bahas karne se kya fayda. Wo mar gaya na, bus baat khatm. Haan lekin marte-marte sala kand kar gaya…


Nischal:- Kaisa kand…


Serin:- Humare sarir ki lagbhag 40% kashmta ko permanently le urra hai…


HuYu:- Tumlog apne 10% kshmta ke sath bhi khatarnak ho, fir to tunhare pass ab bhi 60% kashmta bacha hua hai…


Nischal:- Surpmarich jaison ko marne ke liye, yadi kashmta minus bhi ho jati aur aage ki jindgi kamjor aur nirbal hokar bhi gujarna hota, to gujar leta… Khair... Uske thikane ka purn awlokan karne ke baad, hum log yahan se niklenge…


Lagbhag 2 din lag gaye un charon ko, pura wo jagah dekhne me. Wahan par jitni bhi kaam ki chijen ho sakti thi unhe utha'kar viman me dale aur wahan se sabhi urr chale…


Nischal ne apna viman Himalya ussi kshetr me punah park kiya jahan pahle kiya tha. Aur sidha sampark Nandni se hua… Nandni ne sabko indore hi bula li, sath me ye suchna bhi de di ki Jivisha ka pura khandan yahin indore me khunta gade baithe hain...


Jivisha sab ko warning deti hui kahne lagi…. "Dhyan se suno sabhi, khaskar tum baby. Jo kuch bhi bolenge mere ghar wale, wo chup chap sun lena.. jitna safai doge, utni baat badhegi.. iss se acha hai ki sorry bol lo aur sar jhuka kar baat sun lo"..


Jivisha ki baat sun'kar sabhi "jee" bolkar apna sar haan me hila diye. Chhote se viman me sawar hokar Indore khufiya thikana. Wahan Nandni ne sabke aane ke liye pahle se car bhi chhod rakhi thi… fir wahan se car me Nandni ke ghar jahan ek baar fir shadi ka mahol tha…


Jaise hi dono Durga devi ke dwar aaye.. Nischal, Jivisha ko dhakka dete aage kar deta aur khud pichhe ho jata, to Jivisha bhi wahi karti aur dakka-mukki karte huye dono, aage-pichhe karte huye, dhire-dhire aage badh rahe the. Jivisha, Nischal ko aanhen dikhati hui…


"Had hai baby, aage jao na"…. "Jisa ye tunhare gharwale hain, tum se hi sunege"….. "Baby tum hone wale jamai ho, aur jamai matlab bhagwan. Jamai jo ek baar bol de, to log sawal nahi karte"….. "Gaya wo jamana jahan jamai ke paun dho kar pite the. Jab se film ke madhyam se, jamai ko hawasi aur jaydad ka lalachi dikhaya gaya hai, tab se jamai ko jute parte hain. Example ke liye mera bita past utha lo. Tumhare Rawan khandan ko main pasand to tha, lekin mujhe kabool nahi kar rahe the"….. "Baby wo tab ki baat thi, ab to tum carorepati ho aur sath me dil ke achhe bhi"…


"Aa jao hum log, hum kuch nahi kahenge. Hume pata hai kuch bhi kar len, bita waqt lautega nahi. Khushi iss baat ki hai ki dono sath me bahut pyare lag rahe ho. Aur sath me yahi hai tumhari bahan jamai babu. Nandni ne jab hume bataya to yakin nahi hua, ab dekh rahi hun to pura yakin ho gaya".. Jivisha ki maa Priya mahol ko halka karti hui kahne lagi…


Priya ki baat kisi marham se kam nahi thi… itna sukoon to ye log Surpmarich ko marne ke baad bhi nahi mehsus kiye the, jitna sukoon ab kar rahe the. Mahol khushiyon ka tha aur 2 din ke extension par chal rahi shadi, finally ab hone ja rahi thi. Nischal ko thodi der se inke aane ki khabar lagi, lekin jab khabar mili tabhi Ansh prakat bhi ho gaya. Ansh, Nischal ka hanth khinchte… "Chal dost, tum baraat ke sath aaoge"…


Nandni, Nischal ka dusra hath khinchti… "Aise kaise ye tumhare sath jayega… mere shadi me rahega, kyon Nischal"..


Jivisha:- Nandu, jane de na … dekh tu hi kahi thi na, ladka apne baap ke bina shadi kar sakta hai, lekin dost ke bina nahi…


"Jivisha, Jhalli… tu kab badi hogi re"… Nandni fusfusahati hui uske kaan me kahi aur jab Jivisha ne samne dekha… kya najara tha… Nandni aur Jivisha ke sare gharwale unhi ko ghur rahe the…


Jivisha bilkul kadak adaa se…. "Sab ghur kyon rahe ho… bhag kar shadi hoti dono ki, to hum hi sath hote, koi baap bhai nahi hota sath me. Rasta do jarra mujhe. Main apne Love ko 2 din ki vidai de aaun … 48 ghante baad surat dekhungi"..


Jivisha Nischal ka hath tham'kar bina mude sidhe darwaje me nikal gayi. Usse jate dekh, har koi hanste huye ek hi baat kahne lage…. "Welcome back, nautanki"


Pahle shadi ki rahshmen fir shadi ki dhamaal… Nandni ki shadi attend karne, Mumbai police commissioner ko bhi aana para, apni beti Aarsi ki wajah se jo Chirag ke sath aise chipki thi, jaise fevicol se nanak chipak gaya ho…


Idhar Jyoti aur Sawaker bhi shadi attend karne pahunche... Jaise hi Nischal un dono ke samne aaya… dono ne thappad maar-maar kar Nischal ka gaal suja diya. Thoda gila-sikwa hua.. thode aanshoo aur milne ki dher sari khushiyan chehre par chamak rahi thi…


Nandni ki shadi ho gayi aur shadi me utna hi hungama bhi hua. Shadi ki khushiyon ka double dose tab ho gaya, jab pata chala ki Jivisha aur Nischal ki shadi bhi next hafte hi ho jani hai…


Nandni iss khabar se sabse jyada khush hui, kyonki 2-4 din to shadi ke baad ki rashmon me lag jani thi aur uske baad sidha Pune aur fir wahin se honeymoon…


Khushiyan aise charo ore chhayi rahi, ki kuch din pahle kya kuch saha tha sabne, pura bhul chuke the. Serin aur HuYu ke liye ye pahla awsar tha, jab wo log prithvi ke logon ke karib the… Unka apnapan dekh'kar to dono hasrat hi karne lage… "Aisa nahi ki yahan ke log achhe ya bure nahi hote honge, lekin dikhane ke liye hi sahi, khushiyon ke bich kya gair kya apne, sab sath me mehfil jamate hain..


Ye pura mahina aisa bita jaise har gum aur padesani ka payback mil raha ho… Ek khushal si jindgi jo pyar aur pariwar ke bich itne shandar tarike se gujar rahi thi, jiska koi jawab hi nahi tha..


Lekin kahte hai na kuch bhi shaswat nahi hota hai. Mahine din ki khushiyan aisi thi ki usme beete waqt ki kadwi yaden to gayab ho gayi thi, lekin aane wali musibat fan failaye aamantran de rahi thi.


Ek hasin sham thi. Jivisha aur Nischal nayi relese picture "Kis-Kis ko pyar karun" dekh kar aa rahe the. Nischal pure mood se tha aur Jivisha ko lagatar teen shadi ke liye chhede ja raha tha, wahin Jivisha puri tarah chidhkar film makers ko galiyan par galiyan diye ja rahi thi, aur sath me Nischal ko utne hi gusse me apni aakhen bhi dikha rahi thi.... Tabhi rajeev gandhi zoological park se Sawalker ka emergency sandesh aaya….


Nischal:- Jisa bade bhaiya musibat me hain.. bula rahe..


Jivisha:- Location share karte jao…


Nischal location share karte huye.. bina kisi ke najar me aaye teji se bhagte huye Zoological park me pahuncha… Police ki bahut badi tukdi, bahut hi buri haalat me ghayal thi.. aur Sawalker kisi lambe kad kathi wale admi ke hatho me tha.. Nischal teji se daurte huye uske pass pahucha aur apne dono hath se pura force dekar usse dhakka diya…


Jaise hi uss aadmi ko dhakka laga… wo kuch dur pichhe gaya… Usne Nischal ko upar se niche dekha aur apni raftaar ka najara, Nischal ko pesh karte huye wahan se bhag gaya…


Sawalker behosh hone se pahle Nischal se uss aadmi ka sandesh kahte huye behosh hua, jo Nischal ko dekhne ke baad dhime se kah gaya…..


"Usse se kahna iss baar mujhe dhundhna uss ke bus ki baat nahi. Isliye apni khush'haal jindgi pyar se jite rahe… wo jahan rahega hum wahan nahi honge. Ek dusre ke pichhe na aaye ye santulan bana rahna chahiye warna yadi wo parchhayi ka pichhe karna chahta hai to most welcome.


Sawalker uski baat dohra'kar behosh ho gaya aur Nischal hairan hokar bus sochta rah gaya…. "Had hai janu, hospital le jane ke badle aise pakde huye ho bade bhaiya ko"..


Nischal:- Ye thik hai inhe kuch nahi hua… commissioner ko call kar do, aur bolna ambulance bhi bhijwa dene…


Jivisha:- Tum itne hairan kyon ho Nischal…


"Baby.. Zindgi ke abhi mukam aur baki hai… jise hum anth samjh baithe the.. uss anth se hi ek surwaat abhi baki hai… jo jung hai to ab jung hi sahi… khud ko taiyar kar lo abhi ek jung aur baki hai"…


Jivisha:- Matlab…


"Matlab … Ab hum apne romance ke bich ek romanchit safar par jane wale hain… Bus kuch din aur intzar kar lo"…
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Final samiksha ... Overall story ko lekar ... Aur haan pet bhar kar writer ki tarif me shabd jaroor kahen ... 😂😂😂😂
ji jarur aapka hukum sar ankho per writer ji
 

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Wo sab to thik hai .... Fir ye jo "Too Young !! Too Old" par 2 dino se gayab hai .. U ka kya? Late fine ab sochta hun charge kar dun...
gayeb isliye the ki aapki is story ko read kar rahe the read karte karte kisi aur story ka dheyan hi nahi aaya aage aapki marji ki fine charge karte ho ya nahi
 

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Thankooo sooo much... Baki fine reserve rakhte hain ... Jab main forum se final settlement karunga tab fine charge dunga :hug:
ha ha ha thik hai writer ji bese ham to chahate hai ki aap forum se settlement hi na karo barna ham jese reader ko aesi story kha padne ko milengi yha ager 100 writer hai to 99 to sex story likhte hai aap jese kuch gine chune writer hai jo saf suthri story likhte hai jinhe ham ham pasand karte hai
 

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ha ha ha thik hai writer ji bese ham to chahate hai ki aap forum se settlement hi na karo barna ham jese reader ko aesi story kha padne ko milengi yha ager 100 writer hai to 99 to sex story likhte hai aap jese kuch gine chune writer hai jo saf suthri story likhte hai jinhe ham ham pasand karte hai
Hahaha ... Ji shukriya reader ji... :hug:
 
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Superb.. mast rahi story... ab parchhaiyon ki talash me niklenge... yeh surpmarich jo 40% permanent shakti le gaya.... usse hi parchhai wala to nhi ban gaya.... dekhte h part 2 me kya hota h
 
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