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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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Update:-6​



After cold war :- Nischal aur Jivisha....

Dono alag-alag disha me nikal chuke the. Nischal jab Jivisha ko chhor kar aage badha to usse pata nahi kyon kuch achha nahi lag raha tha. Usse aisa laga jaise usne koi galti ki ho. Uske liye sayad zindgi me ye pahla ehsaas tha jab khud me wo kuch bura mehsus kar raha tha..... "Aakhir ye ladki hai kaun, iske liye mujhe kyon bura lag raha hai?"


Khair Nischal bhi aage chal diya. Idhar Jivisha bhi alag rasta pakar li. Wo bas chalti hui yahi soch rahi thi ki uske wajah se Nandni ka break-up ho gaya. Nandni ko kayi sari padesaniya uthani pari jab wo sath college me the.



Jivisha ko rah-rah kar ye feel hota raha. Tannnn.... jaise dimag ki batti jali ho. Turant cyber cafe me gayi aur fb account se Saroj ka number nikaal layi.... Jivisha, Saroj ko call lagati hui....


Saroj.... Hello kaun..

Jivisha..... Main hun Jivisha...

Saroj.... Jivishaaa !!! Tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe call karne ki. Rakh phone...

Jivisha.... Wait, wait, wait... call disconnect mat karna. Ek jaroori information deni hai...

Saroj.... Jaldi bolo... mere pass time nahi...

"Kamina, samne se call kari to kitna bhaw kha raha hai".......... Jivisha.... "Nandu ab bhi tumhe chahti hai, aur tumhare liye usne aaj mujh se jhagra bhi kiya. Sorry meri bachkana harkaton se tum dono alag ho gaye.

Saroj.... Hmmm ! Iss baat ka ehsaas tumhe tab hua hota. Kash uss waqt tumhari buddhi itni bharsht na hoti, to aaj humari ek pyari si duniya hoti.

Jivisha.... Bas ussi pyari si duniya ke khatir call ki hun. Nandu ki shadi kal tay hone wali hai. Tum fatafat Indore aa jao aur bacha lo apne pyar ko. Tumhare bina to wo mar jayegi....

Saroj.... Nahi…. main aisa bilkul bhi nahi hone dunga. Tum fatafat adress likhwa do, main abhi Indore ke liye flight le raha hun.


Fir kya tha Jivisha ne Nandni ka adress likhwa diya, aur Saroj bhi Pune se Indore ke liye turant rawana ho gaya..... "Hmmm !! Chalo jo bigara tha, wo to sudhar diya, ab jarra main apne ghar ki bhi soch lun. Pata nahi wahan ka mamla kab tak sudhrega"...


Idhar Saam ko jab ghar me Nandni ne Jivisha ko dhundha to wo gayab thi. Nandni bahut jyada shocked thi, usse yakin nahi ho pa raha tha Jivisha ne bhi baton ko seriously lena sikh gayi hai. Usse rona aa gaya apni harkat par....


Wo apne kamre me baith kar ro rahi thi, tabhi uska bhai Ashis wahan aa pahuncha. Ashis ne Nandni ko rote dekh uss se puchh diya... Nandni ne bhi Jivisha ki tragic story roti hui suna di, kaise wo ghar se bhagi, fir Kalyan station ka har wakya.....


Ashish, usse dilasa dete huye kahne laga.... "Koi baat nahi abhi jyada waqt nahi hua hai, chal, chal kar dhundhte hain sayad Jivisha ab bhi Indore me he ho."....


Dono nikal gaye dhudhne un dono ko. Idhar Jivisha aur Nischal dono he bhatkte-bhatkte pahunch chuke the bus stand par. Bus stand k eek gate se Nischal to dusre gate se Jivisha nader ghus rahi thi. Dono lagbhag ek hi samay par alag-alag raste se bus stand mein kadam rakh rahe the, aur dono apne he dhun me chal rahe the...


Jisvisha ki wahi purani aadat, chal kahin aur rahi thi, dekh kahin aur... wahi haal Nischal ka bhi tha, wo chalet huye aas-pass ke logon ke baat karne ka tarika samjhte huye chala aa raha tha.... aur chalte huye fir se dono takra gaye...... Ek baar fir Jivisha, Nischal ke bahon me jhul rahi thi, aur Nischal uske kamar me hath dale usse thame hua tha.....


Jivisha.... Ab aise he pakre rahoge, ya main khadi ho jaun...

Nischal.... Pichhli baar aise situation me tumne mujhe kiss kiya tha, socha iss baar bhi kahin koi jugad lag jaye.

Jivisha..... Tum kyon mujhe itna paresan kar rahe ho. Kuch der pahle to kahe the ki tum meri shakal tak nahi dekhoge, aur mera pichha karte-karte yahan tak bhi pahunch gaye….

Nischal.... Tum ladkiyon ki problem kya hai, haan.... yahi baat main kahun to kaisa lagega... ki tum mera pichha kar rahi thi, main to apne raste tha...

Jivisha..... Tum itna akad kar mujh se kyon baat karte ho. Tumhe main pasand nahi aur mujhe tum, to baat he khatam karte hai na, baat badhane se kya fayda.

Nischal..... Mujhe aise he baat karni aati hai. Tumhe yadi problem hai to mujhe sikha do.

Jivisha..... Jab kah rahi hun ki baat badhane se koi fayada nahi, fir bhi jabardasti ka topic utha kar jabardasti lage pare ho. Main kyon tumhe kuch sikhaungi jungli. Wapas jao jis jungle se aaye ho. Chipku kahin ke, tum se to chillakar he baat karo to achha hai. Tabhi tum bhagoge.


Nischal.... Chilla kar to dekh, muh na tod dun tera...

Jivisha.... Sadak chhap kahin ke, bolne bhi nahi aata. Tamij he nahi ki khoobsurat ladkiyon se kaise baat karte hain.

Nischal.... Tujhe bahut tamij hai, isliye ladkon ki tarah chillati rahti hai. Tu ladki bhi hai kya ?

Jivisha.... Ab ek aur sabd bola to main tumhara khun pi jaungi....

Nischal.... Lagti he hai dayan ki tarah, tabhi to khun pine ki baat kar rahi ho... chudail kahin ki.


"Bas bahut hua band karo kutte-billi ki tarah ladna. Aise koi sadak par jhagra karta hai kya”. Nandni ko achanak hi bus-stand par dekh Jivisha soch me pad gayi…. “Ye achanak yahan kaise pahunch gayi, koi pir baba ka chamtkar hua tha kya".


Jivisha.... Bahut bara nautnaki hai ye Nandu. Ye bol bhi sakta hai aur sun bhi sakta hai, fir bhi situation ka maza utha raha tha. Mujhe to ye koi bahut bara fraud lagta hai.

Nischal.... Teri to, ye kya bakwas kiye ja rahi hai....

Itna kah kar Nischal ne to iss baar Jivisha ka collor he pakar liya. Sab shocked ho gaye... Public place upar se aisa tamasa, ek ladki ke kamij ka collar pakadna .... Ab to bhid ke sath-sath police bhi pahunchi wahan.


In dono ke jhagre me kai bus ruki pari thi. Sab ke nikalne ka time ho raha tha, par dono to uss jagah se hilne ka naam he nahi le rahe the. Upar se masaallah public, wo to chatkara maar kar iss jhagre ka luft utha rahe the.


Police bhid ko bhagati, dono ko apne sath le jane lagi. Ab to teeno ki he fat gayi.... Jivisha ne socha kahin police ne puchh-tachh aur I'D mangi to ghar par pata chal jayega... Jivisha turant he Nischal ke gale lagti, roni awaz me jor se chillane lagi....


"Hay daiyya, main lut gayi barbaad ho gayi... ek to mera pati mujhe chhor kar ja raha hai, upar se ye police wale, ye nahi ho raha ki mere pati ko samjhaye ki wo apni iss eklauti biwi ko chhor kar na jaye... to ulte hume he hawalat le jana chahte hain"


Bas fir kya tha, ladki ka rona dekh kar kai ladies ab Jivisha ke bachaw mein aa gayi. Haan fark itna tha ki police se sari ladies sirf itna kah rahi tui ki... "aise patiyon ki hawalat me le ja kar dande mar kar samjhana chahiye".


Kaun uljhe ladies se. Police bhi dono ko bhid se bahar la kar harkane lagi.... "Ghar ke jhagre ghar me kyon nahi suljhate. Chalo, tum dono ki baat main police station me he sunuga"....


Ashis..... Arre sir, kahan aap inhe hawalat me le jaoge. Ab aap ki bhi to shadi hui he hogi, to aap samjh he sakte ho, in patniyon ke jid. Bas issi baat par dono ki bahas hui, aur mera dost ruth kar bhagne laga.


Police.... Kamal ka banda hai ye to. Sach me daring wala hai. Biwi se ruth kar ja raha tha aur biwi yahan tak aayi manane ke liye. Wow yaar, iski ek photo lene do, main subah saam iss daringbaaz pati ki tasveer dekhunga. Lekin fir bhi, public place me humgama kiya hai to thane to le jana he hoga...


Ashish, 500 ka ek note badhate kahne laga .... "Sir ab to public place par humgame ka matter solve ho jayega na"...


Police..... Nah, manhgai badh gayi hai, itne se kya hoga. Par iss ladkey ki daring ke karan main itne paise me matter close karta hun. Jao sab ke sab ab bhago yahan se.


Sabhi bina ruke nikle wahan se. Charon ghar pahunche.... Nandni pure raste Jivisha ko bhrikuti (eyebrow) tane use ghurti hui aa rahi thi, mano kah rahi ho tug har chal tujhe main batati hun..... Lekin Nandni ke iss gusse par hall mein hi viram lag gaya jab uske mom-dad ne charon ko ek sath aate dekh liya…… "Tum sabhi kahan gaye the"


Iss sawal ke jawab me Nandni kuch bolti, uss se pahle he uske darwaja par knock hui.... Samne Saroj khara tha. Saroj ko dekh kar Nandni ki mano sasen he ruk gayi ho. Nandni shocked, ab ye yahan kaise tapak para. Nandni ki maa gate par khadey Saroj ko gaur se dekhti kahne lagi..... "Ye to wahi tasveer wala ladka hai"




Shock par shock.... Pune wale sare rahu-ketu ek sath ab Nandni ke ghar par the. Nandni bhrikuti tane, dono aakhen bari ki hui.... Jivisha ki taraf aise ghuri jaise wo abhi usse kha jayegi....


Idhar Nandni ki maa Durga devi Saroj ko gaur se dekhtey huye uske pass pahunch gayi.... Saroj ko ghurti hui kahne lagi.... "Tum Nandni ke sath padhte the na"


Nandni, Jivisha se fusfusate..... "Ye teri he harkat hai na duffer"


Jivisha, chhota sa muh banaye, haan me jor-jor se apna sir hila di. Mamala garbar hote dekh ek baar fir Jivisha ne dimag laga diya..... Teji se wo gate ke ore gayi aur Saroj ko dekh kar kahne lagi..... "Aunty ye mera bhai hai, aaj saam me jab baat hui to maine he isse bula liya"


Jivisha ki baat par Nandni ki maa kahne lagi...... "Tune saam ko bula liya aur ye urr kar yahan chala aaya. Tumhari koi gangue to nahi, jo ek-ek kar ke mere ghar pahunchoge aur loot kar nikal loge".

Jivisha.... Aap bhi na, achha mazak kar leti hain aunty ji.

Durga Devi.... Nahi main bilkul mazak nahi kar rahi. Tu gori chitti hai, aur ye sawla. Dono kahin se bhi dekhne me bhai bahan nahi lagte. Kal jab main tasveeren dekh rahi thi, tab to tumne nahi kaha ki ye tera bhai hai. Kuch to mujh se chhipaya ja raha hai. Ashis... Ashis....


Ashis..... Kya hua, chilla kyon rahi ho...


Durga devi.... Ashis jarra in dono ko dekh kar bata to, kya sakal se dono bhai-bahan lagte hain...


Ashis.... Ab isme bhai bahan nahi lagne jaisa kya hai. Sirf rang he nahi milta na, baki nain-naksh sab milte to hain. Chhote mamu to kitne kale lagte hain, to kya wo aap ke bhai nahi.... Aur Jivisha ko maine he kaha tha isse bula lene, bechari bahut miss kar rahi thi apne bhai ko.


Durga devi.... Mujhe sab garbar kyon lag raha hai. In dono ki shadi hui, aur pati-patni alag-alag the. Train me bhi iss ladki ko kai log dhundh rahe the, mujhe laga iski love marriage hui hai. Jab love marriage hui to ye apne bhai ko kaise bula sakti hai. Aur jab arrange marrige hui hai to ye dono bhag kyon rahe the.... Nah mujhe bilkul yakin nahi. Tum sab mile huye ho aur koi na koi khichdi pak jaroor rahi hai....


Ashis.... Haan khichdi pak rahi hai to aap usse pet bhar kar kha lo. Maa tum na budhape me sathiya gayi ho....


Durga devi.... Ab main he pagal ho gayi. Main he budhi ho gayi. Mujh par he chillayega....


Ashis.... Mom... mom... please mujhe 2 min do aur shanti se pahle baat sun lo... ye lo line par Jivisha ke papa hain...


Ashis ki baat sun kar sab shocked..... Idhar Nandni ki mom ne call pick kee .... udhar se...


"Sorry bahan ji mere wajah se aap sab ko taklif hui. Darasal meri beti ki jo shadi hui hai usse humare backward samaj walon ne kabool nahi kiya, aur wo un dono ko mar dena chahte hain. Isliye majboori me mujhe un dono ko bhagana para. Maine suna ki aap mujh se kuch baat karna chah rahi thi".....


Durga devi.... Haan, main baat karna chah rahi thi. Main bhi ek beti ki maa hun. Bache jab ghar se bhag jaye, upar se intne sandeh jab paida kar rahe ho to guardian se baat karna hi sab jyada sahi vikalp hai. Aap ko sunne ke baad mujhe bahut santusti mili, aur sare sandeh bhi dur ho gaye. Aap ke faisle par mujhe garv mehsus ho raha hai. Ek gunge-bahre ko aap ne apna jamai banaya, iss se bari insaniyan kya ho sakti hai.


Call disconnect aur Durga devi, Jivisha se hath jor kar manfi mangti hui kahne lagi....."Mujhe manf kar do beta, tum pahle se itni paresan thi aur maine tum par shaq kiya.... aao beta ander aao tum ab tak bahar kyon khare ho.... Jivisha beta tumhari shadi kal he hui hai na….. Jivisha "Haan" me sir hilane lagi....


Durga devi..... Haan to thik hai tumhare shadi ke baad ki rashmen hum yahan puri karenge. Yun samjho ki tum bhi meri he beti jaisi ho. Nandni, Ashis... Hum bahar ja rahe hain shadi ke baad ki rashmen jo hoti hai usse pura karne ke liye pandit ji ko bulane... dhyan rahe tab tak ye dono sath na rahe....


Durga devi apne pati ke sath ussi waqt market chali jati hai... idhar ghar me...


Ashis.... Koi batayega ye tum logon ka kya naya natak chal raha hai.. Nandni enough, main kab tak tumhe save karta rahunga..... hamesa tumhari he problem tumhari he tragedy... tumhare karan mujhe ghar me 100 jhoot bolne parte hain.


Nandni.... My sweet bhaiya, ab ek he to bahan hai tumhari to kya mujhe nahi bachaoge to apni gf ko bachaoge. Aur meri ek he to dost hai, haan thodi pagal hai par uske liye 7 khoon manf.


Ashis.... Aur in dono ladkon ka kya....


Saroj.... Mujhe to yahan Jivisha ne bulaya, kahi Nandni ki shadi tay ho rahi hai aur wo mere bina mar jayegi....


Ashis.... For your kind information Mr Saroj, Nandani ki shadi pahle se tay ho chuki hai, wo bhi ussi ke pasand ke ladkey se. Aur uske liye isne mujh se 100 tarah ke jhoot aur 200 tarah ke kukarm karwaye hain isne. Dusri baat ye ki tum ek bhai ke samne khade ho kar ye jata rahe ho ki tum uski bahan ko pasand karte ho. Tum ek reason batao ki main tumhara muh kyon na tod dun.


Jivisha, Ashish ki baten sunte he chupke se kadam badha kar wahan se khisakne lagi, tabhi wahan Ashis ki awaz gunji.... "Pichhe se aap kahan nikal rahi hain mohtarma"


Jivisha.... Maine socha aap ke aur Nandu ke bich baat chal rahi hai, bhala yahan mera kya kaam.


Nandni... Bhaiya, aap apna jarra sawal jabaw baad me karoge. Mujhe abhi thoda hisab kitab karna hai...


Ashis... Thik hai kar lo...


Nandni.... Jisa tu ghar se kyon gayi....


Jivisha.... Bas mujhe realise hua ki maine aaj tak tumhare liye kuch kiya nahi, ulte padesani khari karti aayi hun. Bas yahi soch kar chali gayi....


Nandni.... Jyada over smart ho gayi hai na... kuch bol diya mazak me to tere dil me chhed lag gaya.


Jivisha.... Bas baba sorry... ab to khush.. chal hans bhi de. Mujh se tu muh fula kar rahe ye mujhe achha nahi lagta....


Nandni.... Mera ego satisfy nahi hua, chal murgi ban fir mera ego satisfy hoga.


Jivisha charo ore najar ghumayi.... Ashis, Saroj, Nischal.. sab hall me he khadey the..... "Nandu, yahan sab ke samne"


Nandni.... Haan yahan, abhi... sab ke samne....


Jivisha.... Tu sach me serious hai....


Nandni.... Haan sach me serious hun, aur jis tarah se tune mera dil dukhaya hai, yadi murgi na bani to teri kasam main tere se baat nahi karungi.


Jivisha..... Huhh ! Aisa bhi kya ego... sab ke bich murgi ban'ne kah di... tumhe yahi achha lagega to yahi sahi...


Jivisha bhi tau me aati apne dono kaan pakar kar position me aane he wali thi ki tabhi Nandni ne usse roka..... "Bas baba, aur sorry jo tumhe uss waqt ulta bola aur abhi tumhe aisi saza di"


Jivisha.... Ab formality band bhi kar... aur mujhe ye bata ki teri shadi ho rahi aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi....


Saroj, jo ab tak chup tha..... "Tum aise kaise kar sakti ho shadi, main tumhare liye he itni dur se aaya hun"


Ashish.... Tum dono ka bharat milap ho gaya ho to dono me se koi ye batayega ki ye ladka yahan kya kar raha hai....


Nandni, Jivisha ko aakhen dikhati.... "Ab tera ye kaun sa naya drama tha tu jarra samjhayegi. Subah tu aayi aur saam ko ye aa dhamka"


Jivisha.... Ab tune mujhe itna taunt kiya to mujhe laga mere wajah se tera pyar dur ho gaya, isliye maine Saroj ko call laga di. Kitna bhaw khaya ye jab maine isse call ki to. Lekin tere wajah se maine wo bhi sah liya....


Nandni apne hath jorti..... Sun meri maa aage se na tu meri yadi bhalai karna chahe to ek baar mujhe bata diya kar, ki main tere liye kuch achha karne ja rahi hun, taki main mentally prepare ho jaun ki mujh par koi bijli girne wali hai. Bhaiya iss namune ko kah do yahan se jaye.


Saroj.... Aisa to na kaho Nandni, tumhare liye main kitni dur se aaya hun.


Nandni.... Tumhe yahan aane ki jaroorat nahi thi Saroj, chup-chap wapas laut jao....


Saroj... Nandni ek baar meri baat to suno...


Ashis..... Suna na Nandni ne kya kaha, ab chup-chap bahar nikal jao....


Saroj.... Ye tum achha nahi kar rahi ho Nandni. Bilkul he galat ho raha hai ye....


Ashis usse ek thappad lagata...... Galat hai to galat he sahi, abhi tu nikal warna ab jute bhi parenge...


Saroj ko dhakke maar kar Ashis ne bahar kar diya. Nandni ke chehre par mayusi saaf najar aa rahi thi aur wo khud ke thake hone ka natak karti sidha sone chali gayi. Nischal bhi Ashis ke sath bahar nikal gaya, akeli bachi Jivisha...


Koi kaam nahi tha, Jivisha tv on kar ke baith gayi.... Tv jaise he on ki wahan bhi khabren Pune se he aa rahi thi.... Pune me kisi bhayanak jungli janwar ke lagatar humle ho raha tha, jisme 2 dino me 2 lashen mili thi. News ke anushar ab tak janwar pakda nahi gaya tha aur logon ko raat ke sannate mein ya kisi sunshan jagah na jane ki salah di jar ahi thi.
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Very very nice story. Six update tak padh daali main. Sach me bahut maja aaya. Jivisha ke sath bahut bura hua but ye bhi hai ki ye khud uski hi vajah se ho raha hai. Anyway jivisha aur nischal dono hi majedar lage hain. Pahle main soch rahi thi ki nischal ko yaha ki basha kyo nahi samajh aa rahi fir pata laga ki wo yah ka hai hi nahi. Free hote hi fir s padhugi ise and apni story ka update aaj nahi likhugi.
 
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Ye agar Nishchal ka normal power hai to Nishchal ke grah ke high level ke sipahiyo ka kaisa power hoga:eek1:

Jivisha ke ghar walo ke dimag me abhi-abhi hi Nishchal ki image achchhi hui hai kahi esa naa ho ki wapas koi galatfahmi ho jaye.:D bechara Nishchal :D

Baki ka drama next episode me dekhte hai.

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Nain11ster ji kal din me aur rat me jab bhi main free hui to sirf apki story padhi. Sach me bahut achi story lagi mujhe. Abhi tak man me story ki sari baat ghum rhi hain. Nischal ko ab love ki feelings ka pata hai aur wo nivisha ko pane ke kya kya nahi kar raha. Nandini uska full support kar rahi hai. Dusre grah wale bahut khatarnak hain jo logo ka shikar karte hain ye padh kar to mere rogte khade ho gaye the. Bechari sapna ke sath bahug bura hua. Nischal ke charo taraf khatra hi hai uske apne grah ke log uske dusman hain jo apini se mile huye hain. Ek taraf nischal akela aur dusri taraf ye khatarnak log upar se nivisha ke ghar me hi wo bhesh badal kar rahne lage. Kasak ki jagah koi dusri kasak aa gai thi aur ab to jossefer bhi pet ban kar rahega waha. Udhar college me bhi nivisha ke sath apini bhesh badal kar student ban kar aa gaya. Chirag to bechara marte marte bacha. Last me nischal ke sath jo hua wo shocking tha aur nischal ko lagta hai ki nivisha ne uska ye haal kiya but use nahi pata kaise. Nain11ster ji mujhe apki story bahut achi lagi. Ab ye janna chahti hu ki aage kya hoga.
 
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