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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

Black water

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"What.. ye kale kapdon me Ninja bankar aaya hai".. Jivisha fatak se apna sar upar karke uske chehre ko dekhi aur uska hath pakad kar bahar khinch kar le aayi… "Ye sab kya hai Nischal"..


Nischal:- Tumse wada jo kiya tha apna chehra nahi dikhaunga.. so ye Ninja look… aaj ek mauka aur milega kya..


Jivisha:- Aur aaj bhi fail ho gaye to…


Nischal:- Wade me tod nikal'kar, kal fir samne aa jaunga..


Jivisha, ander se khush hoti hui… "Aur kahin gayab hone ke liye kah di to"..


Nischal:- Fir Mike par jor jor se chillaunga… main Laila laila chillaunga kurta far ke…


Jivisha:- Pagal kahin ke.. upar ka mask hatao..


Nischal:- Dekho wade ke mutabik main tumhe apna chehra nahi dikhaunga, lekin yadi tum khud mask utarogi to iska matlab hoga ki main apne kaam se kahin bhi ghum sakta hun bina mask lagaye. Fir chahe tum hi kyon na ho wahan aas-pass.


Jivisha uska mask utar'ti hui… "Nautanki karna mera department hai, tumhara nahi.. ab ye batao ki ander kya pahne ho..


Nischal:- Itne tight kapde ke niche bhi koi kuch pahan sakta hai kya… only three kapde the sharir par... Ek utar diya tumne. Do tumhe dikh rahe honge..


Jivisha:- Pagal, fir main aise kapdon me tumhare sath nahi ghumne wali..


Nischal:- Thik hai fir kal ka program rakhte hain .. chalo class me..


Jivisha:- Oye ruko… Kal kyon .. kal meri engagement hai.. aaj ka hi mauka hai tumhare pass…


Nischal:- Fir tum hi kuch solution batao…


Jivisha:- Ammm ! Ek kaam karte hai, yahan se shopping mall wahan se change aur fir wahan se tumhare adhure samay ko pura mauka dena…


Nischal:- Haan kal raat 10 baje ka bol'kar mujhe sham ke 4 baje tak hi samay mila tha… ye baat dimag me rahti to Ninja look nahi lena parta.. waise tumhe yaad tha fir kyon kahi ab muh mat dikhana…


Jivisha:- Off O ab chalo bhi pakao mat…


Dono shopping mall pahunche, wahan Jivisha ne apne pasand ke kapde kharidi aur Nischal ko trial room bhej'kar change karke aane ke liye boli.. jab wo change kar'ke bahar aaya.. Jivisha usse dekhti rahi gayi… Dil kiya fatak se gale lag kar jhatak se apne arman kah de. Fir muskurati wo apne hi sar par hath marti khud se kahne lagi… "thoda usse hi mauka deti hun"


Jivisha bill counter par aage badh kar bill dene lagi aur piche se Jivisha ka pura khandan pahunch gaya… "Baap yahan hone wale dulhe ke liye shopping karne aaya hai.. aur beti ek nakara ke liye shopping kar rahi hai"..


Bill counter par kuch jyada hi bhid hoti hai.. har koi iss family drame me intrest lene laga… Jivisha jab apne papa ki baat suni to wo sah nahi payi.. juban ladana nahi chahti thi aur Nischal ki bejjati sun'na usse gawara nahi. Ander se usse mehsus ho raha tha ki wo na jane kya kar de abhi, khud usse bhi pata nahi. Isliye wo bina kuch bole wahan se chali gayi.


Idhar Nischal ke liye yah apman jaise jamir par chhap gaya tha. Pahne huye kapdon par sawal uthana.. khud me apmanit mehsus karte Nischal apna gussa pikar rah gaya. Un logon ke tane kewal aur kewal aisa lag raha tha jaise uske nakarepan ki kahani bayan kar rahi ho…


Kisi bhi chij ki hadd hoti hai, lekin kuch log bolne ke kram me har haden paar kar jaate hain. Ghar ke mahol ko pichhle kayi dino se Nandita bhi bhanp rahi thi... Wo bhi bahut kuch soch to rakhi thi, lekin majboori me kadam wahan par thehar jate jahan bus dimag me yahi chalta ki ab tak uski bachi ne kabhi apni khwaish nahi jatayi, ki usse Nischal ye pyar hai ya Nischal se vivaah hi karna hai...


Lekin abhi ka uske saas-sasur aur pati ki harkaten kisi bajaru se kam nahi tha.. aur yahi ladka hai jo apni izzat utarte dekh'kar bhi samne wale ko kuch kah tak nahi raha tha... Apne pariwar ke logon ka vaywahar dekh'kar Nandita ka para apne charam par pahunch gaya….


"Aap jise nakara kah rahe hain, aaj se, infact abhi se wo mera bhai hai.. mere pita ke dusri santan. Jaise wo Shresh apne baap ke paise par ek bahut bada kaam kaji ladka ho gaya waise hi aaj se ye bhi hai. Aur agar ab kisi ne mere bhai ke liye kuch bhi bola to acha nahi hoga".


Nandita apne hath jodti sabse kahne lagi… "Ab chalo sab yahan se, sabne bahut drama kar liye. Wo to bus shopping kar rahi thi, lekin aap sabko jaan bujhkar drama karna tha. Bhid me bejjati kar rahe ho.. ab chaliye aap log yahan se warna beti ko to khote ja rahe hain, kahin aisa na ho ki main bhi chirag ko lekar nikal jaun aur dobara kabhi uss chaukhat par kadam na rakhun"…


Nandita ne jab apne tevar badle tab jakar kahin sabko hosh aaya. Pura pariwar wahan se laut gaya. Idhar Nichal bhi apne dhime kadmon se parking ke ore badhne laga. Usse khud me ander se acha nahi lag raha tha... Nischal khud ki haalat par khud hi hans raha tha… Aaj tak jisne ek ulte shabd nahi sune the, wo baar-baar bejjat huye ja raha tha…


Vida lene se pahle apne aakhri kuch shabd Jivisha se kahne the, isliye uske kadam Jivisha ke piche chal diye… Yun to chand duri ke faslon par Jivisha najar aa rahi thi, lekin ander ke fasle jo paida ho gaye the, uski duriyan ab tay kar pana mushkil tha...


Jivisha, ki najar jaise hi Nischal par gayi, wo bhag kar uske pass pahunchi aur bechaini se uske chehre ko tham kar…… "Mujhe maaf kar do, mujhe tumhe yahan lekar nahi aana chahiye tha… bahut kuch suna gaye na… main maafi mangti hun.. please Nischal, aise udas na ho"..


Nischal, Jivisha ke hath ko hatate huye, uske chehre ko dekhne laga… Jivisha ko dekh'kar Nischal muskuraya…

"Main ek bhatkaw tha aur tum thehraw. Kash tum mili na hoti to mere yahan hone ki wajah nahi hoti. Ye dil bechain hona, kisi se na mil pane ki tarap aur haan, kisi ke baton ki chubhan kya hota hai kabhi pata hi nahi chalta, yadi tum se na mila hota."

"Mere yahan hone ki wajah tum thi. Shyad itna hi tumhe dekhna aur mehsus karna, meri kismat me tha Jivisha. Main ek aise khwaish ke piche para raha, jiski khwahishon kabhi main tha hi nahi."

"Janti ho tumhare papa ne kuch kaha, wo baat utni nahi chubhi, jitna tumhara wahan se chup-chap chale aana chubha. Aur ye chubhan koi pahli baar maine mehsus nahi kar raha tha. Lekin baat fir wahi ho jati hai, ek tarfa chahaten aur ek tarfa pyar. Main nahi janta, kabhi chhoti si feeling bhi tumhare ander thi ya nahi, bus aisa laga jaise tumhe apne manoranjan ke liye ek khilona chahiye tha… jab ji me aaya thode se pyar se baat karne ke baad uske satha ho liye aur uski bewakoofi par bahut enjoy kiya, aur baad me fir dhutkar bhi diye"

"Khair … Maine tumhe chaha hai .. aur chahta rahunga.. ye Sathya hai… thik waise hi, jaise aaj raat ke baad fir yahan rukne ki koi wajah nahi hogi. Alvida"…


Nischal apni baat kah'kar mud chala. Sab kuch luta'kar khud me khoya sa wo chala. Aise chala jaise sab alvida kah chala ho.


Nischal apne khoye se aalam me bahar ke ore ja raha tha aur Jivisha bhagti hui usse na khone ki chahat me announcing room mein pahunch gayi… Shopping mall me lage har speaker se ab Jivisha ke arman nikal rahe the jise sab sun rahe the….


"Oye Jungli, apni chahat bata gaye.. jane se pahle meri chahat to sunte jao.…. Tum khade the kisi deewano ki tarah, charo ore aise dekh rahe the jaise ye jahan tumne pahli baar dekh rahe the… main train se bhag rahi thi anjano ki tarah.. aur meri kismat mujhse takra rahi thi"..

"Wo pahli najar ka hi pyar tha jab tum mujhse takraye the... Koi second thought nahi tha, isliye apne pyar ko main chum rahi thi… be-jhijhak aur be-hichak…"



"Haan galtiyan hui mujhse. Thodi duriyan thi lekin kuch meri majbooriyan thi. Tumse kitni chahte hain, ye dil me dabi thi, najron me chhipa tha. Lekin haal-e-dil kabhi izhar nahi kar payi aur najron se kabhi wo pyar jata nahi payi."

"Main nahi janti ki tum mujhe chhod'kar kahan jaoge, lekin yadi tum dur jaoge to wo tarap main jhel na paungi. Wada hai tumse kabhi tumhara dil na dikhaungi.. Jahan itni baar mujhe maaf kar chuke, kya ek baar aur maafi nahi milegi."

"Rok lo apne kadam, mud jao piche, aaj fir ek baar, jahan tarpe hain ek duje ke bina itne din, sath jine ka bhi maza lete hain. Bus ek tum mil gaye to samjhungi sara jahan mil gaya."

"Ab aa bhi jao Nischal, tumhare liye bahut royi hun, ab aur rone ki himmat nahi bachi hai. Ab aa bhi jao na.. please.. Ya fir wo chand shabd hi sunkar samjhoge jo log izhar me kahte hain"…


"Aur mukhiya ji ka kya, jo mujhe bhadi sabha me nakara kahte hain".. Nischal thik Jivisha ke samne, muskurate huye khada tha…


Wo najron ke samne jaise Jivisha ki puri khushiyan khadi thi… fir to khud ko rok pana bhi muskil ho raha tha… kadam daud chale khushiyon ke ore… yun lipti aaj dub kar Nischal me, ki uski ho kar rah jana hai… tej dhadkane Jivisha ki bechani bata rahi thi wahin paglon ki tarah uske chehre ko chumna uske vyakul mann ki shanti ko jata raha tha…


Fir se wahi sama tha, ek baar fir wahi najara tha.. Jivisha apni vyakulta shant karke, poori tarah toot chuki thi. Nischal apna ek hath uske kamer me dal'kar Jivisha ko thame khada tha aur dusre hath se chehre par aaye bikhre baal ko hata raha tha..


Aakhon ke samne wahi najara pahli mulakat ki thi bus fark itna tha ki aaj dono ek dusre ko dekh'kar itni pyari muskan de rahe the ki in muskano me dub'kar puri umr kati ja sakti thi..


Jivisha apni aeriyon ko unchi karti Nichal ke hothon tak apni honth lekar aayi aur apne hoton se Nischal ke hont ko sparsh karti, apne pyar ke sparsh ka wo pahla ehsas Nichal ko kara gayi.


Hont ko saparsh karke kuch inch dar fasle par dono ke honth alag the. Shwans ek dusre ke chahere se takra rahi thi aur aakhen aaj band hokar iss pyare se ehsaas me dub chuka tha…


Jivisha ke hothon ka pyara asprash ab bhi Nischal ke dil me utar raha tha. Chahten fir se deewani hokar hoton ke sparsh ko mehsus karne ke arman jaga gaye aur dono ke honth ke inch dar fasle khatm hokar, ek dusre ke hoton ko chumte chale gaye… shwans lambi aur gahri hoti rahi.. dhadkane bekabu hokar dhadkane lage aur dono ke pyar ko wahan maujood log mehasus karte taliyan banane lage..


Taliyon ke aawaj ne dono ke bojhil aakhon ko kholne par majboor kar diya.. Jivisha khadi bhid ko jab samne dekhi to sharmakar apne chehre ko Nischal ke sine me chhipa lee.. tabhi bhid ko side karte wahan police pahunch gayi…
Awesome update bhai
Jivisha ka ishq ka ijhaar fabulous tha ab raat me nischal kese rajo ko maat dega dekhna padega
 

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Nischal:- Tu to bada hi close ho raha hai.. ladva kar dobara meri pasli tudwane ka plan hai, ya mujhe marwa dene ka…


Jatin:- Aap ko khud kuch bhi andaza hi nahi tha ki Jivisha ke ander koi shakti bhi ho sakti hai.. ussi ka parinam tha wo pasli tootna… warna aap aam Viggo to nahi ho... Main jab aap se pahle din mila tha, mujhe laga bhi tha ki aap ek aam sahjade nahi ho sakte… lekin baat ko maine tul isliye nahi diya, kyonki aap ke bhai ya uske jasoos ne kabhi nahi bataya ki aap ek Viggo ho.. Kya hua tha wahan ke Viggo ke sath, aap aur aap ki maa pahchan kyon chhipaye hain..


Nischal:- Tu beta jitne mere sawal ke jawab na diye, uss se jyada sawal to mere bare me puchh liya… chutiye tu Zoren me baith kar Aizem ki afwah ache se yaad kiye hai, lekin sala tujhe apne grah ki ek bhi baat pata nahi..


Jatin:- Sala… Acha laga sunkar.. meri ek bahan hai "baby".. uss se jode banwa lo Viggo.. fir to aap hi wahan ke Mahamahim hoge..


Nischal:- sale nich .. tu chahta hai main teri tarah maans noch-noch kar khane wala banu..


Jatin:- Humara narbhakshi samuh nahi tha Viggo.. Maine to 2 mahine se koi shikar bhi nahi kiya, fir bhi jivit hun.. ye sab Mahamahim ki maya hai… Malkia ki puri shakti to unhi ke ander nihit hoti hai…


Nischal:- To kya tumlog bagawat nahi kar sakte apne Mahamahim se..


Jatin:- Mahamahim hai wo, uss se bagawat.. hahaha.. Aisa to khyal bhi shayad hi kisi kis ko aata hoga aur jise aata bhi hoga wo chupchap jakar atmhatya kar leta hoga... Kyonki Mahamahim ke darbar ki saza jhelne se acha hai aatmhatya karna…


Nischal:- Ek baat batao sala tumlogon ko pata kaise chalta hai ki yahi Malkia hai, aur usse fasne ke liye kya-kya tarike apnate ho… 12 Malkia ko le gaye ho to jara fasne ke tarike par bhi gaur farma le…


Jatin:- koi 15 ya 18 sal me ek yog banta hai.. Sabhi grahon ki ek vises stithi hoti hai aur tabhi Malkia ka janm hota hai… Malkia ka janm hua hai ye kewal Mahamahim ko pata hota hai. Mahamahim khud prithvi par aate hain… Unke ghar kisi sadhu ke vesh me jate hain aur kahte hain ki upyukt samay par yadi ladki ka vivah na hua aur uska kamurya ko bhang na kiya gaya to iske ander ki shakti sampurn vinash kar degi…


Nischal:- Kya baat kar raha hai.. Matlab Jivisha ki kamurya bhang aur udhar uski shakti gayi..


Jatin:- Kya Viggo, Inheritance power ka sex se kya lena dena hai… kayi baar to rashmon ke chakkar me kayi khoji ko yahin Malkia ke sath suhaagrat manani padi thi….


Nischal, Jatin ko khinch kar ek thappad marte huye…. "Sala ye shadi aur suhaagrat wali baat batani jaroori thi. Samjh to gaya tha main inheritance power. Tu aage bata…


Jatin, Nischal ke chehre ke bhaw ko dekh'kar hanste huye aage batana shuru kiya….

"Mahamahim apna kaam karke chale jate hain. Fir yahan humari 2 khoji team hai.. Ek Apini ki aur ek meri. Humara kaam hota hai, Malkia ki soyi ikchha shakti ko jagrit hone ke purv unhe yahan se Zoren ki seema tak pahunchana. 14-15 sal baad hume bataya jata hai ki Malkia kaun hai… Hum sabhi sambhawna par gaur karte hain aur jis-jis ladke se shadi ho sakti hai, usko badal diya jata hai… Dar ka mahol to gharwalon me pahle se rahta hai, isliye kuch samay baad kisi ek ladke se shadi ho gayi aur fir humara kaam aasan."

"Lekin eklauti Jivisha aisi thi, jiski umr lagbhag 21 ki hui, tab jakar uske ghar wale shadi ke liye jaage.. wo bhi tab jab humne apne shikar ko jaan bujh kar pune me fekna shuru kiya. Is ghatna se uske pitaji ko lagne laga ki anhoni ghatnayen shuru ho chuki hai… Upar se samsya ye bhi thi ki Jivisha kisi ladke ko pasand bhi nahi karti aur na hi uske pitaji kabhi charcha karte ki Jivisha ki shadi kis ladke se karni hai".

"Shadi ki baat clear hote hi hume ladke ki detail pata chal gayi thi, aur hum sari taiyarion ko pukhta karne ke baad, bus shadi khatm hone ka intzar kar rahe the. Humara kaam lagbhag ban chuka tha, lekin lagbhag aadhi shadi ke baad Malkia bhag gayi… shayad unki soyi ikchha shakti ne unhe aagah kiya hoga… uske baad kya hua wo to aap ko bhi pata hai Viggo.. Humari kismat me aap aa gaye .. aur mujhe ab lagta hai, wapas Zoren jana to dur ki baat hai.. jinda bachunga ya nahi uspar bhi shanka hai"..


Nischal:- Tere se baat karke laga ki tu utna bhi bura nahi hai lekin masoomo ko to mara hi hai.. ek hi baat kahunga… Kasak se dur ho ja aur apni jindgi bacha le… Tumlog ek aise apradh me samlipt ho, jisme koi mafi nahi milegi… Haan lekin yadi wada karo ki dobara Kasak ko apne moh jaal me nahi fasaoge, to main tumhe jivit jane dunga…


Jatin:- Maine Kasak ke liye moh jaal ka istamal nahi kiya tha Viggo, lekin jane do. Puri kosis karunga ki main ab Kasak ke najdik bhi na aaun. Lekin Viggo aapke dimag me chal kya raha hai… aapne device bana lee… humari tukdi ki information bhi nikal liye… Shayad aap yahan ke logon ki madad se abhi ke liye unhe wapas bhaga bhi do… lekin tab kya hoga jab Mahamahim aamne-samne ki ladai me honge…


Nischal:- "Tab tum apni Malkia ki shakti ko pahli baar apne aakhon se dekh paoge. Mehsus hoga Jivisha ke ander ki shaktiyan, jab wo Mahamahim se lad rahi hogi… Mujhe yah to yakin tha ki tumhe kitni jankari hogi Jivisha ke shakti ke bare me.. Lekin ummid thi ki iss shakti ke origin ka tumhe pata hoga"

"Khair koi nahi.. Mujhe pata hai ki Jivisha ke shakti ka origin ka kaise pata lagana hai aur kaise main Jivisha ko uski shaktiyon par kabu karna sikha sakta hun...


Jatin:- Aur aap ka pyar Viggo..


Nischal:- Shayad adhura hai... Khair samay kitna ho gaya Jatin wo to bata de…


Jatin:- Viggo 10.10 baj gaye.. waise ek varshon ki jigyasa hai jiske jawab ke liye main bahut vyakul hu… please sun lo..


Nischal:- Abe main tujhse jankari nikal raha hun ya tu mujh se…


Jatin:- "Bus yun hi ek jigyasa thi man me kahin dabi. Aaynek planet ke tabah hone ke baad, Viggo ka ek samuday jo khud ko Hayfa Viggo batata tha.. wo humare yahan migrant tha. Chhota sa samuh tha aur aapas me kafi pyar se rahte the.. Tab jo Mahamahim the Salvik, unka ek sainik hua karta tha Mittoso.. Mittoso ne badi hi chalaki se un chand mutthi bhar Hayfa Viggo ko apne sath milaya .. aur tab ke tatkalik Mahamahim aur Rijo ko usne Viggo ki madad se samapt kar diya…"

"Khair uss waqt humari seema bhi chhoti thi aur sainya bal bhi, kintu itna bhi kam nahi tha ki mahaj 100 log unhe dwast kar jaye. Lekin 100 Viggo ke samne koi nahi tika… Mittoso jo aaj ka Mahamahim hai. Usse Mahamahim banane me Viggo ka pura yogdan tha... Zoren ki puri tecnology ke janak wahi log hai... Mahamahim ek cross breed chahte the.. Viggo aur apna … lekin Viggo wo cross breed ke liye raji nahi huye, kyonki unke hisab se Mahamahim ne kewal unka istamal kiya tha apne bharm ke kshmta par, aur aise me unhe cross breed swikar nahi tha"..

"Wo Viggo chahte to Mahamahim ka badi aasani se takhta palat kar sakte the… naye generation ke Viggo iske liye taiyar bhi the, lekin unke purane generation ne Zoren ko chhodne ka faisla kar liya… Bechare… jis viman me sawar the ussi me malwa ho gaye"

"Aisa hi kuch humne Aizem aur Miyaka planet ka bhi suna tha.. wahan to Viggo ke 2 generation ke bich, aapas me hi matbhed itna badh gaya ki sabhi lad'kar mar gaye, lekin ek bhi cross breed sambhaw nahi ho paya.. Mujhe ye bata do.. aap logon ke pass kashmta hote huye bhi aap kyon nahi ladte.. aap ka itna bara samuday Aaynek se palayan hokar Zoren, Aizem, Miyaka, Yahan tak Luceto bhi gaye.. Chahte to in sabhi par Viggo ka hi Raj hota, fir bhi koi pagalpan ki bimari thi jo sab kuch chhod kar mar gaye"

"Marna hi tha to Aaynek jab tabah ho raha tha, wahin mar lete. Wahan se fir bhage kyon?"


Nischal:- Aur daru rakha hai kya yahan.. wo pilayega tab main jawab dunga iska…


Jatin daud kar daru le aaya… Nischal bade maze se aadha khambha gatakne ke baad thodi shwans liya… "Abe aise aakhen kyon faad rara hai"..


Jatin:- Viggo wo jawab..


Nischal:- Tu pahle time bata…


Jatin:- 10.20…


Nischal:- Tune jo sawal puchna na Jatin, uska jawab bhi tere baton aur teri kahani me hai… thoda sochega to mere khyal se pata chal jayega.. Thik hai ab main ja raha hun... Kasak ko ghar bhi chhodna hoga..


Jatin:- Acha suno to bhai .. 2 min ruk to jao….. ek baat aur janne ki jigyasa hai… waise to sanka mujhe ussi ka ho raha hai, lekin fir bhi aapke muh se sun lun to.. aap kaun se varn ke Viggo ho..


Nischal:- wahi jo tu samjh raha hai… Viggo Sigma .. Alpha, unidentified first class..


Jatin hairani se Nischal ko dekhne laga… aur Nischal bade aaram se bachi hui bottol khali karne laga… jaise hi Nischal ki bottol khali hui…. "Abe pagal fir aise ghur raha hai. Ja jakar so ja"


Jatin:- Bhai ek request hai…


Nischal:- bol sun raha hun…


Jatin :- Yadi Malkia se baat nahi bani to kya aap meri bahan ko chun sakte ho…


Nischal uski ore dekhte huye hasne laga…. "Tera Viggo puran me kya jawab hai iske bare me jara bata"….


Jatin:- Ek Jindgi Aur Ek partner… Itihas nahi aisa ki ek jindgi me kisi Viggo ne 2 partner banaye ho. Shayad yahi ek badi wajah hai ki Viggo kabhi kisi dusre samuday me cross breed ke liye taiyar nahi hote, kyonki wahan partner badlna samanya si ghatna hoti hai, jabki ek Viggo ne kisi ko pasand kiya to fir uske baad koi dusra na to usse chhal se jit sakta hai na bal se… marna pasand karte hain lekin partner badal jaye, aisa khyalon me bhi nahi hota…


Nischal:- Shabash.... Ab tu ye bata tujhe itni jankari kaise Viggo ke bare me..


Jatin:- Mera 2rd generation pariwar se Rijo rahe hai mere ghar ek sadsya. Ussi ne Viggo ko Zoren par basaya tha.
Unhi ki kahani sunte hum bade huye hain... Aur unki sabhi kahani me Viggo hi the.…


"Thik hai Jatin ab main ja raha.. ab teri soorat dekh kar bore ho gaya… jabtak Jivisha ko na dekhun chain na milega. Baki tu mera sandesh Rijo tak pahuncha dena ki maine parso sham ke waqt, baatchit ka prastaw rakha hai, aur main khud akele aaunga baatchit karne. Sath me mere device ke bare me bhi sangyan dena, jise maine ab tak kisi manav ko nahi diya hai… Ek aur baat, Kasak se dur rah, teri lambi umr hogi"…


Nischal, Kasak ko utha'kar wahan se le gaya aur sidha uske kamre me lita diya. Jivisha ko bahut dhundha lekin wo apne kamre me nahi thi... Dekhne ko vyakul man usse hall me taak- jhank karne par majboor kar raha tha..


Nichal ne jab hall me dekha, tab uske chehre ki khili muskaan byan jar rahi thi ki wo Jivisha ko dekh'kar kitna khush hai, lekin ye matr ek chhanik khushi thi… kyonki hall me sabhi pariwar ke log khushiyan mana rahe the… karan Jivisha ne Shresh ke sath shadi ke liye haan kar di thi…


Nischal ko ek pal me hi jaise laga ho ki uski sari khushiyan bikhar gayi ho. Gum ye nahi tha ki Jivisha ne ek aise aadmi ko chuna, jo ek behrupiya tha aur uska marna to tay tha… dukh to iss baat ka tha ki Jivisha bhi iss shadi ke liye raji thi. Mayus hi wo lauta aur khamoshi ke sath apne bistar par jakar let gaya…



Idhar Nandni



Nischal Apini ko uske bhadkane ki saja dene baad, badi teji se bahar nikal raha tha aur uske piche-piche Nandni bhi bahar nikli. Jaise hi wo mukhya dwar se bahar nikli uske paun ke niche Nischal ka mobile gira aur wahan Nischal ka koi pata bhi nahi tha...


Nandni mobile utha'kar bhadkti hui jor-jor se kahne lagi… "Aa tu wapas fir batati hun. Jab pachti nahi hai to pi kyon leta hai kamina… Nischal.. Nischal"..


"Wo nahi hai yahan, Kyon chilla rahi ho"… Ansh pichhe se kahndhe par hath rakhte huye kahne laga...


Nandni:- Batao pagalpan ki had hoti hai.. ek to public place par jhagra karta hai, upar se attitude dekho bhai sahab ke.. Paun me mobile fek kar bhag gaya hai… Iski to main puri khabar lungi…
Bahut hi sunder shabdo se Nishchal ki manovaytha ka chayankan kiya hai bandhu nai. Atisunder update mitr.
 

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Nandni:- Batao pagalpan ki had hoti hai.. ek to public place par jhagra karta hai upar se attitude dekho bhai sahab ke.. Paun me mobile fek kar bhag gaya hai… Iski to main puri khabar lungi…


Ansh:- Lekin Nandu usne Shresh se jhagra kab kiya tha..


Nandni:- Jab wo Shresh ke sath jhagra kar raha tha, tab kya kisi ladki ko tar rahe the?


Ansh:- Usne Shresh se jhagra nahi kiya tha.. balki Shresh ko to usne gala pakad kar uthaya aur dharam se bar counter par patak diya… yahan dhyan dene wali kuch baaten hain.. pahli baat to ye ki Nischal ne ek hath se Shresh ka gala pakda tha aur thik uss waqt dusre hath me uske wine ki glass thi … dusra paun jamin me touch nahi kar rahe the.. teesra wo apni jagah se bina hile ye karnama kar chuka tha…


Nandni, Ansh ko ghurti hui… "Tumhe tv serial ki bimari lagi hai kya, jo ek saas ki tarah behave kar rahe ho aur bahu ki har bariki ko janch-partal me lage ho"..


Ansh:- Pagal ho gayi ho tum Nandu.. Wo koi insan nahi lagta.. mujhe to koi alian lagta hai.. dekhi nahi bina koi pakad banaye kaise usse utha kar patak diya..


Nandni:- Mere ander bhi ek alian wali power hai, jante ho kya?


Ansh:- Kya?


Nandni:- Apne aakhon ke ishare se tumhe raat bhar bahar sula sakti hun.. dekhna pasand karoge kya… pata nahi tumhare dimag me ye sab bakwas baaten aati kahan se hai…


Ansh:- lekin Nandu..


Nandni:- ekdum chup, yadi uss bare me ek shabd bhi nikale to tumhe alian banakar space ship me dalwa dungi…


Ansh ki baat par puri tarah se naraj hokar, Nandni, Ansh ko akele chhod'kar, wahan se car lekar nikal gayi. Ansh bhi uske pichhe-pichhe bhaga lekin Nandni usse ansuni karke nikal gayi…


Piche se taxi lekar Ansh bhi flat pahuncha… "Kya bachpana hai yaar, aise naraj hokar chali aayi"…


Nandni, apne kapde nikalti… "Tum analysis karte raho ki kaun alian hai aur kaun insan"…


Ansh, Nandni ka hath pakad kar uske kadmo me baith'te… "Sorry baba, ab mujhe jo laga wahi to maine kaha tumse.. Ab main tumse nahi share karunga to kis se karunga…


"Isse baat share karna nahi kahte hain Ansh. Baat mazak ki ho to hansi me kahin jati hai, lekin tum jis tone me kah rahe the usse yakin ke sath shaq hona kahta hain".... Nandni apni baat kahti hui, bijli ka bilkul halka jhatka Ansh ko de di.. Ansh jhatke se apna hath khincha aur hairan hokar dekhne laga ki ye jhatka kahan se laga..


Ansh jabtak jhatke aur aashraya se uabarta, tabtak Nandni apne upar kapde dal'kar kitchen me pahunch chuki thi… Ansh bhi Nandni ke piche-piche kitchen tak aaya, lekin Nandni usse jakar hall me baithkar tv dekhne bol di.


Takriban ghante bhar baad Nandni pasine se tar hoti hui kitchen se nikli… tabhi siti ke awaz ke sath… "Pasine me naha'kar aur bhi namkin ho gayi ho"… Nandni ko apne kano par yakin nahi hua tha.. wo ander he ander hanti hui khud se hi kahne lagi… "What… Doctor ne comment kiya.. ye kab se sudhar gaya"..


Baharhaal Nandni bika koi pratikriya diye sidhe jakar bathroom me ghus gayi. Nandni jaise hi ander kamre me gayi , thik ussi waqt Ansh, mukhya darwaja band karke sidha bathroom me ghus gaya… tabhi ek aur siti ki awaz aur… "gore badan par ye kali bra kayamat lag rahi hai"..


Nandni:- Chhi aisi baton ka koi tuk bhi banta hai kya… aur tum bathroom me kya kar rahe ho... Nischal aa jayega kabhi bhi..


Ansh:- Kaise aayega, maine mukhya dwar band kar diya hai..


Nandni:- To uske pass hamesa key hoti hai ek... Samjhe…


Ansh:- What, uske pass key hai.. koi nahi main yahan ka gate band kar'ke aata hun..


Nandni apne bache kapde utar'ti hui shawar chalayi… "uske pass mere room ki key bhi hai"..


Ansh… What ??? Iss room ki key..


Nandni:- Haan iss room ki key…


Ansh:- Lekin kyon???


Nandni:- Bharosa hai isliye... Kyon jaisi kya baat hai..


Ansh:- Aur kabhi hum dono sath huye exactly jaise abhi tum ho to…


Nandni:- Litrally ye tumhari query hai?


Ansh thoda gussa hote huye… "bhadosa, dosti aur close hone ke naam par kya tum kuch bhi karogi"..


Nandni, Ansh ki baat par thodi bhadki jaroor thi lekin shanti se uski stithi ko aakalan karne ke baad, aaram se puchhne lagi…. "Hmmmm ! Yadi mere mammi papa aa gaye aur hum dono ander huye fir kya hoga Ansh..


Ansh:- Wo to mammi papa hai yaar … wo honge to hum aisa karenge hi kyon ..


Nandni:- Aur Nischal hoga to koi fark nahi padega … manate raho rangraliya…


Ansh:- Haan to kisne kaha tha usse sath rakhne ke liye… Humari sari privacy chali gayi..


Nandni:- U know mr Ansh .. tumhe insecurity feel ho rahi hai. Nischal hai isliye tum ho iss ghar me Ansh, warna main yahan akeli hi thik thi..


Ansh:- Ye kuch jyada nahi ho raha hai kya?


Nandni:- Tum itna chidh kyon rahe ho Ansh. Main to aaram se baat kar rahi hun na... Ek baat batao kya humari shadi ho gayi Ansh..


Ansh:- Aaj na kal to ho hi jani hai..


Nandni:- Aur agar main abhi break up kar lun fir…


Ansh:- Yahi to hai tum ladkiyon me, kuch bhi ho to break up kar lo… lekin apni galti mat mano..


"Main tumse na to chidh kar puchh rahi hun aur na hi mera tone high hai. Ek sawal puchhi jawab do"… Nandni apna badan ko tauliye se pochhti hui puchne lagi…


Ansh:- Mujhe nahi pata… yadii break up hua to main ji nahi paunga…


Nandni:- wo to tumhara side hua… aur mere sath jo sex kiye … wo to bina relation ke maze lekar nikal jana hi hua na…


Ansh:- Hadd bewakoof ho tum Nandni… relation hai tab to hum aage badhe na… ek Nischal naam ke complication ke karan yadi tum break up karti ho, aur fir ye sawal puchhti ho to kahan tak jayaj hai…


Nandni, apne upar kapde dal chuki thi.. Ansh ko apne pass bulayi aur usse bistar par bitha'kar uske balon ko bikherti hui kahne lagi….


"Ansh pyar to bahut karte ho tum mujhse lekin fir bhi relation insecure hai"….. "Nahi aisi baat nahi hai Nandu, wo to bus Nischal ko lekar"…. "Now let me finish first" .


Nandni:- "Ek insecure relation, fir wajah chahe jo bhi rahe. Aaj wajah Nischal hai to kal Jivisha ho sakti hai. Fir ye bhi ho sakta hai ki tum apne hospital me pura samay do, aur tumhare pass aaj ke itna kal samay na ho… To break up ki wajah to kuch bhi ho sakti hai na baby… Center kewal Nischal hi kyon?"..

"To ek insecure relation me, main tumhare secure pyar ko feel karti, jab main secure ho sakti hun… Fir to Nischal ke sath mera complete relation hai. Purn viswas samjhte ho. Ruko samjhati hun kitna viswas hai. Main yadi achet awastha mein, complete nude bhi hoti hun to bhi uski najar nahi fisal sakti hai. Tane de dega meri haalat par openly.. ho sakta hai mujhe tease bhi kar de, lekin bhadosa itna hai ki uska meri ore dekhna, mujhe incesure nahi kar sakta."

Bhadose ka bahut bada aur shayad ghatiya example diya hai tumhe…. Shayad thoda asamajik example tha, lekin Nischal ke prati mere viswas ki kahani tum nahi samjh sakte aur na ye samjh sakte ho ki hum me dosti ke alawa koi relation ki feeling tak nahi. Waqt parne par mere liye wo maa bhi hai, baap bhi hai.. bhai bhi hai .. aur un sab se kahin badh'kar ek sacha dost hai"..

"Fir tum kaise soch sakte ho ki main bina shadi ke husband and wife wali privacy kar dun aur usse apne kamre me aane se mana kar dun"..


Ansh:- I am sorry Nandu..


Nandni:- Kamal hai Ansh, yadi mere mammi papa yahan honge to tab tum kyon mere sath romance karoge.. kyonki wo mere blood relation hai, aur abhi hum unmarried. Humari shadi bhi hui hoti, to bhi hum kuch aise rahte jaise unhe kuch pata na chale… lekin baat agar Nischal ki ho to tumhare dimag me sirf itna hi hota, ek anjaan ladka yahan kya kar raha hai…


Ansh, sharminda hote… "Baby I am sorry"


Nandni:- Tumhre dimag ke channel me to yahi chalta hoga na Nandni apne ghar ke kapde aise pahnti hogi, waise pahnati hogi.. pata na uss ladke ki najar hamesa kahan rahti hogi… lekin wahi yahan mera bhai ya baap hota, to Ansh babu ko koi fikr nahi hoti, kyonki ek ladki ka kapda pahn'na relation par depend karta hai… Bhai baap hoga to ache se kapde pahnegi … Aur yadi koi dost hoga jispar pura badhosa hai… oh sorry chhota sa correction… Flat me Nandni ke sath koi anjaan ladka ho to Nandni badan dikhati firegi…


Ansh, uth'kar Nandni ke pass baith'te huye usse side se pakad kar…. "Hey cutieeee… main apni baton ke liye behad sharminda hun… Gadha hun main jo gusse me kuch bhi kah gaya"…


Nandni:- Gusse me nahi nikla hai Ansh, jo khyal dimag me chalte hain, wahi juban par aa gayi tumhare... Kamal hai na Ansh, baap aur bhai apni kuwari beti ya bahan ke kamre me aa jaye to koi objection nahi, lekin Nischal hota kaun hai… Abhi nikal do usko. Tum to abtak humare physical relation ke bare me bhi soch chuke ho... My friend Nischal … Main tumse abhi baat karna chahti hun … please kisi tarah mujhse contact karo… just contact me any how….


Ansh:- Nandu main bahut sharminda hun…


Nandni:- Khana khao Ansh.. thanda ho jayega...


Abhi 10 minute bhi nahi huye the… Ek unknown number se ghanti bajne lagi. Nandni ki aakhen bhar aayi aur wo call utha'kar bus "hello" ki awaz ka intzar karne lagi. Nandni ko jaise hi pata chala dusri ore se Nischal hai...... "Nischal tumhe yahan aane ki koi jaroorat nahi hai.. tum ab apna kahin aur intzam dekh lo…"


Nandni, Nischal se baat karke call disconnet kar di aur apne kamre ko band karke lagatar roye ja rahi thi. Ansh darwaje par khada knock karne laga, lekin kafi der tak knock karne ke baad bhi jab Nandni ne koi jawab nahi diya tab Ansh khud ki baton par guilt feel karte, wo Nischal ko dhundhne ke liye Sawalker ki madad lene chala gaya.


Sawalker thane me nahi tha. Isliye uss se milne ke liye wo uske ghar chala gaya… Sawalker apni patni jyoti ke sath baithkar fursat ke pal bant raha tha aur dono pyar se ek dusre se baaten kar rahe the…


Tabhi unke ghar ke darwaje ki ghanti baji… "Are doctor sahab aap.. aaeye ander aaeye"…


Jyoti, Ansh ko dekhti hui puchhne lagi, "ye kaun hai".. Sawalker bhi uska parichay dete huye Ansh ke vishay me sari jankari de diya. Ek chhote parichay ke baad Sawalker, Ansh se uske aane ka karan puchhne laga…

Ansh kya kahe aur kya nahi… Dabe huye shabdon me bus itna kaha ki kuch gadbad ho gayi hai aur Nandni ne Nischal ko flat par wapas aane se mana kar diya…


Jyoti jise mamle ke bare me kuch bhi nahi pata tha.… "Doctor sahab humare shadi ko 12 sal ho gaye hain.. aur mera pati ek police wala hai. Police wala ka matlab samjhte ho aap. Main batati hun, kisi par yakin nahi karna. Aap ke pass baitha hai mera pati, puchh lo ki yadi Nandni ke jagah wo humare sath rahta to wo kya sochta"..


Sawalker:- Nischal ke case me sochna jaisa to kuch bhi hai hi nahi. Wo to dwapar yug ka koi balak lagta hai jiski bhasha aur najar dono me koi chhal nahi... Pahle din wo raat ke 2 baje mujhe sadak par mila tha deewano ki tarah bhatkte.. bus uss waqt usse 2 line suna tha aur samjh gaya sab kuch uske bare me..


Jyoti:- Itne salon me ek wahi hai jise main ghar me aana allowed nahi ki, balki uske yahan aane ya jane se koi fark hi nahi parna hai. Aisa lagta hai pariwar me ek pyara sadsya ne entry le lee hai. Bus iss piyaakad ne uss bache ko bigad diya hai..


Ansh:- Mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi. Nandni ne khana bhi nahi khaya aur darwaje lagakar soyi hai..


Jyoti:- Soyi nahi hogi ro rahi hogi. Jyada socho nahi Ansh, yah ek aam ghatna hai… dampatti jivan me aisi samsya to hote rahti hai… Lekin riston ke bich jhagra aur pyar hi rakhna .. nafrat aur shaq nahi. Ab jao tum Nandni ko manao, Nischal ko bura lagega to bhi wo flat wapas aayega.. aur bura nahi lagega to bhi wo flat wapas aayega…


Ansh:- Bura laga hoga to kyon aayega wo wapas..


Sawaker:- Kyonki wo sacha dost hai, usse samjh me aa gaya hoga ki Nandni gusse me hogi, isliye uss se jhagra karega usse 4 baten sunayega, lekin wapas aayega…


Sawalker aur Jyoti se milne ke Ansh ko apne dil ka bojh kuch halka sa lagne laga… wah flat wapas gaya, lagbhag 1 ghante lage honge usse khade-kahde darwaje par tab kahin jakar Nandni ne darwaja khola…
Khubsurat paheli hai dost ye rishte bhi in rishto ke jaal me vivek hi bhul jata hai prani. Babu moshaye mast-mast rachnakriti laye hai lutf uthaye ish bhavparsang ka.
 

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Sawalker aur Jyoti se milne ke Ansh ko apne dil ka bojh kuch halka sa lagne laga… wah flat wapas gaya, lagbhag 1 ghante lage honge usse khade kahde darwaje par, tab kahin jakar Nandni ne darwaja khola…


Uske baad lagbhag 2 ghanton tak wo Nandni ko manate raha… aur apni bewakoofi aur gusse me kahe gaye baton ke liye sharminda hota raha. Nandni muskurai jaroor lekin uski muskurahaton me wo baat nahi thi. Khair kisi tarah Nandni ko sulane ke baad Ansh bhi so gaya…


Nandni jab subah jagi, tab Nischal apne kamre me he tha. Sayad raat ke waqt kafi let aaya ho, gahri nind me so raha tha. Usse apne kamre me soya dekh Nandni ka chehra khil gaya aur aakhon se aashu chhalak aaye…


Nandni uske sir ke pass baith kar uske balon par hath ferne lagi. Aashu ki kuch bunde Nischal ke chehre par giri aur Nischal had-bada kar uth'te huye Nandni ko gaur se dekhne laga... Nischal, utha'kar baith'te huye, Nandni ke aashu saaf kiya.. aur uska chehra thoda upar karke, ek thappad laga diya..


Nandni gusse me usse ghurti, uske baal pakad kar jitni takat se ho sakti thi, utni takat laga kar pakar kar khinch di… "Aao.. pagal kahin ki ganja ho jaunga.".. Nandni usse dekhkar hansti hui apne pass bulayi aur uske gale lag kar kahne lagi…. "Soory yaar, kal gusse me main kuch bhi kah gayi thi".. unke bich Ansh bhi aate huye… "Me too sorry.. in sab mamlon ke piche main hi tha... Yaar thodi jagah mujhe bhi de do"..


Nandni:- Nischal doctor ko bol de yahan se chala jaye.. warna main kuch bhi bol dungi to muh chhota sa ho jayega.


Nischal, ek side se thoda alag hote Ansh ko bhi bich me le liya… Ansh bich me ghuskar hanste huye kahne laga… "Muh chhota ho ya dil chhota ho jaye.. ab tumhe hi sun'na hai aur tumhe hi jhelna hai sweetheart"..


Nischal:- Kya baat hai doctor sahab lage hain, lage raho.. aur ek baar pyar ho jaye to umr bhar pyar aise hi jatate raho… waise subah ki latest news ye hai ki Jivisha ne Shresh ke sath shadi ke liye haan kar di hai… aur apna pack up…


"Teri raat ki harkaten gadhe"…. Nandni, Nischal se alag hoti gusse se usse ghurne lagi lekin kuch bol nahi rahi thi, kewal gusse me ghurti rahi…. "Ab tum kya chahti ho main sorry kahun. Kyon doctor sahab aap ko kya lagta hai.. mujhe sorry kahna chahiye kya?"


Ansh apne dono hath jodte… "tum dono ka mamla hai, tum dono samjho.. main chala hospital"… Ansh apni baat kahte wahan se nikal gaya…


Nandni….. Raat ko khana khaye the.


Nischal….. Bhukh nahi thi….


Nandni…. Kal wahan se chale kyon aaye?


Nischal…. Maine Ansh ko msg kiya tha, wo bade bhaiya ne mujhe bula liya tha, to jana para.


Nandni…. Sawalker ne bula liya haan, jhuthe Ansh kal tumhe dhundte unke ghar gaya tha. Ab bolo….


Nischal….. Ab jane bhi do na, chhodte hain iss baat ko…..


Nandni, Nischal ka utra chehra dekhti…. Gadha kahin ka. Jivisha ka hone wala pati hai Shresh, abhi hua nahi hai. Itni si baat ke liye tu himmat harega.


Nischal….. Nahi himmat harne wali baat nahi hai, bas pata nahi kyon mere dil me ajib si jalan ho rahi hai uss Shresh ke naam se…


Nandni….. Tu to giyo beta, aaj kal jalan bhi ho rahi. Kya baat hai. Waise ek baat bata….


Nischal…. Kya ?????


Nandni….. Tumhe to shaq tha ki Jivisha ke jagah koi alien hai, fir tu uss alien ke liye itna emotion kyon dikha rahe.


Nischal…. Nahi mera shaq be-buniyad tha. Wo Jivisha he hai. Tujhe pahle bhi to bataya hai uske bare me..


Nandni….. Haan tabhi to tumhare emotion uss ke liye fut-fut kar nikal rahe the. Oye devdas aage kya karna hai socha hai….


Nischal…… Socha to bahut kuch tha. Badi muskil se aaj apne sath jane ke liye raji bhi kiya usse, par….


Nandni….. Par kya ….


Nischal…. Sidhe shabdon me kahun to meri fat rahi hai.


Nandni…. Oye fattu, waise to mar-pit me bara mard banta hai, aur ladki ke sath jane par fat rahi. Yaad hai na kis shart par wo tumhare sath jane ke liye taiyar hui hai….


Nischal….. Haan pata hai, tabhi to itni fati hai. Kahin aaj main fail ho gaya to….


Nandni…. Aisa kuch nahi hoga, tu mast ready ho kar ja, aur baki sab kismat par chhod de.


Nischal, Nandni ki baat mante pure josh me taiyar hua. Sabhi log college pahunche. Sab ek jagah ekant me baithe the aur khamosh sa mahol tha… Kasak Nischal ko dekh'kar chidti hui kahne lagi… "Kal tum Jatin ke bunglow par kya bakwas kar rahe the.. wo sex aur noch'kar khane wali baat".


Nandni:- Kya ??? Disco se sidha bunglow… kafi fast haan..


Kasak, wahan ke mahol ko dekh'kar jhenp gayi… usse kuch samjh me hi nahi aaya wo kya jawab de… "Ye pagal ho gayi hai… Raat ko sapna bhi dekho tab bhi mujhe ghasit lo. Ye puri pagal ho gayi hai".


Kasak:- Sorry, thodi confuse ho gayi thi. Shayad raat ko kuch jyada hi ho gaya tha.. Mujhe ye tak yaad nahi ki main ghar kaise pahunchi…


Jivisha jo khamoshi se sabko sun rahi thi.. uski najar baar-baat Nischal par hi tik jati .. Ghar walon ki khushi ke liye Jivisha ne bhale hi haan kah diya tha, lekin ander se usse apne pyar par pura yakin tha… Ek baar pahle bhi haan kar chuki thi, ek baar aur haan kar di. Haan karne se yadi sabko khushi milti hai to harj he kya hai… Baki raat bhar to wo aaj ke hi bare me soch kar romanchit ho rahi thi. Na to Jivisha ke man me koi second though thi aur na hi koi doubt. Sab clear tha…


Jivisha ka dil baiman, Nischal ko dekh'kar ander ke arman hasraten bharne lagi.."Hay mera sona.. love you.. Umaahhhhh"…. Jaise hi uske arman dil se nikle, Nischal apni najar ghuma kar Jivisha ko dekh'kar muskurane laga… Jivisha ko ek pal ke liye aisa laga jaise Nischal ne uski dil ki baat sun lee ho… wo turant apni najar idhar-udhar karti.. apna dhyan Nischal ke upar se hatayi… Thodi der baad Nandni aur Kasak wahan se chali gayi.. aur ye dono car me aa gaye…


Jivisha….. Haan to hum pahle kahan ja rahe hain….


Nischal….. Aaj tum bahut pyari lag rahi ho. Tumhare chehre se najar he nahi hat rahi.


Jivisha…… Tumhari marji hai, tum chaho to aaj pura din mujhe dekh sakte ho.


Nischal, khushi se uchhalte huye….. "Wakai, kya ye sach hai".


Jivisha……. Haa tum ne bilkul sahi suna, bas apna promise yaad rakhna, yadi aaj impress na kar paye to dobara apni shakal mat dikhana.


Nischal…… Hmmm ! Samajh gaya. Achha subah ki suruwat tum se karte hain. Chalo tumhare pasand ke kisi jagah par chalte hain.


Jivisha, kuch sochti hui….. "Chalo Shresh se milne chalte hain. Kal raat uss bechare ki bina baat ke pitai ho gayi thi".


Nischal ka bujha sa jawab…. "Haan thik hai chalo chalte hain".


Dono jane ke liye taiyar the. Nischal side seat par baith kar usse dekhte rahne ki ikchha jatayi aur Jivisha ko car drive karne bol diya.


Nischal bas apne man me yahi soch raha tha ki…. "Baar-baar ye Shresh uski kundli me kaise chala aata hai". Jabki Jivisha, Nischal ki haalat par ander he ander hase ja rahi thi.…. "Hayyyy, chhota sa muh banaye kitna pyara lag raha hai. Ye bhi na, main kya uss gadhe se shadi karungi. Lekin fir bhi pata na ye itna insecure kyon feel kar raha"?


Gari chal pari thi. Shresh ke office ja kar dono mile, jahan Jivisha Shresh ke zakhmon ke sath kuch jyada he close ho rahi thi.


Jivisha ka "sorry-sorry" kah kar touch karna aur Shresh ke liye itna jyada emotion dikhana…. Ufffff jal kar bechara Nischal bhun chuka tha, aur usse jalane me Jivisha koi kasar nahi chhod rahi thi.


Jab Jivisha ko laga ki ab jyada ho raha hai tab wo Shresh ko bye bol kar Nischal ke sath chali aayi. Car sadak par chal rahi thi aur kahan jana hai Nischal ne ab tak nahi bataya tha.


Achanak he Nischal….. "Jivisha meri pasliyan bhi suzi hui hain"


Jivisha….. Dr to tumhare flat me he rahta hai, tab bhi ab tak ilaj nahi karwaye.


Jivisha tirchhi najar ghuma kar ek baar Nischal ko dekhi, aur uss ka latka hua muh dekh kar…. "Hayyyy inna sona".


Nischal ko laga Shresh jaisi sympathy usse bhi milegi, magar yahan to usse mur kar dekhi tak nahi Jivisha. Nischal jhunjhlate huye…. "Kahan ja rahe hain hum"?


Jivisha….. Mujhe kya pata, Tum ne he aaj ka din maga tha. Tum jano.


Nischal kuch der shant raha, fir Jivisha ko car rok kar side seat par aane ke liye kaha aur khud drive karne laga.


Gari ab Mumbai pune ke highway ke ore chalne lagi. Jivisha…. "Itni teji se kahan ja rahe ho. Wapas sahar ke ore chalo".


Nischal…… Meri najron se tum nature ko dekhna. Jitni pawitarta, aur swakshta uss jagah tumhe milegi, utni he pawitrata meri mohabbat me hai. Jitna manmohak wahan ka drishya hai, utni he manmohak humare pyar ki kahani hogi. Bas ek mauka do, wahan chalo mere sath, uss jagah ki wadiyon me tumhe bhi mujh se pyar ho jayega.


Jivisha….. Nischal, tum baat samjhne ki kosis karo, main wahan nahi ja sakti. Wahan mukhiya ji ke site ka kaam chal raha hai. Main wo jagah kayi baar ghum chuki hun.


Nischal…… Nahi main ek nahi sunuga, wahan chahe koi bhi ho, tumhe darne ki koi jaroorat nahi. Mera viswas karo, main hun na.


Jivisha…… Nischal, kya bachpana hai ye.


Nischal, car ko side me laga kar, Jivisha ka hath apne hatho me le liya. Uss ke aakhon me jhakte huye…… "Thoda bachpan jinda rahne do. Thoda pagalpan kar lene do. Janti ho khushi ke lamhon ke liye bahut tarsa hun, thoda khush ho lena do".


Khamosh sama me, apni dil ki gahrai se, apne arman kahne ke baad, Nischal khamosh, Jivisha ko dekhne laga.


Dono khamosh bas ek dusre ko dekhte rahe. "Thoda risk hai, par ye ishq hai", Jivisha, khud se kahi aur Nischal ko aakhon se ishara kar di, chalne ke liye.


Nischal behad khush tha, usse laga jaise aaj he Jivisha uss ke pyar ko haan kah degi. Uske chehre ki chamak se saaf pata chal raha tha ki wo ander he ander jit ki khushi mana raha hai.
Saanu ishq da lagya rog meri bachne di naiyo ummid. Do premi duniyo walo se dur apne nishwarth prem ka ijhaar kar rahe hai khamosh najro se. In durlabh kshano ko canvash per utarkar NAIN mahoday laaye hai prem dhun pe sabko nachane ke liye. Shadho vaad.
 

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Nischal behad khush tha, usse laga jaise aaj he Jivisha uss ke pyar ko haan kah degi. Uske chehre ki chamak se saaf pata chal raha tha ki wo ander he ander jit ki khushi mana raha hai.

Lekin Jivisha ka mood to kuch aur he tha. Usse Nischal ko chidhane me maza aa raha tha aur wo usse khub chidha rahi thi.


Dono jab site scene ke liye pahunche, Nischal jab bhi kahta "ye dekho Jivisha", tab wo tedha muh jawab deti, isme dekhne jaisa kya tha. Raste ke jit ki khushi yahan aa kar jaise fus ho gayi ho.


Nischal pura mayus ho gaya. Usse lag gaya ki ye pyar uss ke bas ki baat nahi. Jivisha hans kar uss se baat to kar sakti hai, lekin pyar nahi.


Jivisha aage ki ore pahad ki khai dekh rahi thi aur Nischal piche raste ko dekhta, apne pyar ke nakami par mayus khada tha….


Nischal…… Jivisha pichhe mudo..


"Isme dekhne jaisa.… kya hai". Jivisha khai ke ore dekh'kar jaise hi pichhe mudi… Tabhi samne se awaz aayi….. "Haan mujh me dekhne jaisa kya hai. Baap matlab ghar ka naukar hota hai, jo sab ke liye achha soche aur sab usse he dhutkaro. Tum iss fraud ke sath kya kar rahi ho. Ek ladka ko shadi ke liye haan kah'kar, dusre ladke ke sath ghum rahi. Sharm naam ki chij hai ki nahi tum me".


Nischal…. Nahi uncle wo mere jid ke karan….


Himanshu….. "Ek sabd bhi nahi, chup ho jao aur jao yahan se. Aur tu khadi-khadi kya sun rahi hai"….


Raat ke waqt…. Nischal jab se wahan se lauta tha, man me yahi soch raha tha…… "Kuch bhi achha nahi ho raha. Filmon me aise situation banane wale mil jaye to main usse goli mar dun. Impress hona to dur ki baat hai, ab to lagta hai mujhse kabhi baat bhi nahi karegi. Phone kar ke puch to lun, meri wajah se usse sab padesan to nahi kar rahe".


Nischal, darte huye Jivisha ko call lagaya…. Jivisha, Nischal ka call dekhti….. "Dobara fir kabhi mujhe call mat karna, aur jo wada kiya tha uss par kayam rahna. Tum fail huye aur ab humare bich kuch nahi".


Nischal, Jivisha ki baat sunkar pure aawesh me aate huye khud se hi kahne laga…. "Bhad me jao tum Jivisha.. Bahut ho gaya tumhara natak"…


Ussi Raat, Rajeev gandhi zoological park, Pune…


Rijo aur uske sath aayi sainya tukdi ki purn vayvastha karne ke liye, Apini aur uski puri team ne 3-4 din me hi pura park me aatank machaye huye the… Saanp aur Sheron ke humle se pura park prashashan sakte me aa gayi thi aur pure park ko agle aadesh tak ke liye band kar diya gaya tha..


Rijo, Apini se Malkia ke vishay me purn jankari lekar, aaj ki raat ke plan ko jald se jald pura karne ke liye logon ko taiyar kar raha tha… Jivisha ke ghar ke har sadsya ke roop ke liye bahrupiye ki puri team ban chuki thi, jise khud Rijo lead karne wala tha…


Apini aur uske pure team ko rest diya gaya tha... Siway Josefer aka Jatin ko. Josefer ko 400 khatrnak tukdi aur 200 adrishi janwar ke sath Nischal par humla karke, ya to usse raat bhar tak uljhaye rakhna tha ya fir usse mar'kar jit ki khushkhabri deni thi…


Back up plan ke hisse me, yadi Josefer fail hota hai to bache sainya bal… 600 khatarnak tukdi aur 300 adrishi janwar ke sath Apini, Nischal par purn humla karke adhura kaam pura karega… Rijo ke dimag me yah baat bhi thi ki kahin dono hi fail ho gaye to bhi usse itna waqt mil hi jayega ki wo bharma kar Jivisha ko viman tak le aayega…


Sari planning lagbhag tay ho chuki thi. Sab log apni puri taiyari kar chuke the.. Josefer bhi taiyar hokra wahan pahunch chuka tha…


"Rijo, Apini mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai… tukdiyon ko kuch samay vishram ka aadesh de"… Josefer ghutne par baith'te huye sar jhuka kar apni baat kahi...


Rijo, Josefer ko utha'kar puchne lage… "kya ye baat itni jaroori hai"..


Josefer:- Yah main tay to nahi kar sakta ki baat kitni jaroori hai? Lekin mujhe itna jaroori to lag hi raha hai ki 2 minute ka vishram lekar aap meri baat suno..


Rijo ne sabko vishram ka ishara diya aur Josefer ko baithne ka ishara karte huye..… "Haan Josefer, kaho apni baat"..


Josefer:- Nischal Viggo Sigma hai. Wo bhi Alpha, unidentified first class…


Josefer ki baat sunkar sab log hasne lage…. "Viggo itihas me kewal 2 he Viggo Sigma huye.. aur tum kah rahe ho ki wo upar se Alpha unidentified first class bhi hai.. mujhe lagta hai uska khauff tumhare dil me baith gaya hai Josefer. Jinke itihas me aaj tak ek bhi Alpha ne nahi janm liya, usme tum Alpha, wo bhi unidentified first class bata rahe ho.. Ye zene kya aasman se tapak padi. Faltu ka hunra samay nasht kiya tumne"..


Apini:- Rijo, Josefer ki baat jhut bhi to nahi kah sakte.. Jis tarah usne hume pareshan kiya hai, uske Viggo hone se to main bhi inkar nahi kar sakta…


Rijo:- To kya humari itni badi sainya tukdi se wo akela bidh jayega…


Josefer:- Rijo usne ek device banaya hai, jo humare body micro praticle ko orignal shape me dikha sakta hai.. wo ye brihat paimane par bana chuka hai.. sath me ek khatre ke alert alarm system bhi Malkia aur apne doston ke ghar me laga chuka hai… Yadi usse lagega ki wo safal nahi ho pa raha hai, tab aisi soorat me wo humare yahan hone ke saboot prithwi ke rakhwalon ko de dega..


Rijo thoda chinta jahir karte… "Annhhhh ! Iss Viggo ko bhi iss aakhri kaam ke bich me hi aana tha… Aur koi jankari Josefer"


Josefer:- Haan ! Usse pata hai ki hum sab kahan hai.. kal raat wo yahan baith'kar baat karne aa raha hai..


Rijo:- Usse jankari hai ki hum yahan hain.. fir to wo sainya tukdi ke sath aayega… Jab yahan ke sainya tukdi se ladna hi hai, to aaj raat hi ye risk kyon na liya jaye…


Josefer:- Rijo usne sahmati dee hai ki wo akele hi baat karne aayega aur baat karke masle ka hal nikalega…


Rijo:- Uss Viggo Nischal ne sach me apni sahmati diya hai ki wo akela aayega…


Josefer:- Haan Rijo…


Rijo:- Josefer, tumhari suchna kamal ki hai… Thik hai tum uss Viggo par najar diye raho… Sabhi tukdi kal raat tak vishram karegi… Kal ke baat-chit ke baad, dobara se ranniti tay hogi…


Rijo ke aadesh par Josefer, Nischal par najar rakhne chal diya. Idhar Josefer ke jate hi Rijo aur Apni ki ek behad aham baithak hui jisme yah tay kiya gaya ki kal baat-chit ke dauran Nischal ki chhal se bali leni hai…


Idhar Josefer, Nischal par najar kya rakhne jayega, aisa lag raha tha jaise bhagwan se milne bhakt ja raha ho… Josefer sidha flat ka bell bajaya… Nandni darwaja kholi, fir jhat se darwaja band ki aur fir wapas se darwaja kholi… "Ji kahiye"..


Josefer:- Nischal se milna hai mujhe..


Nandni:- Aaeye ander aaeye… Akele hain ya aur bhi koi aaye hain...


Josefer:- Main samjha nahi…


Nandni:- Aap aaram se baith jaeye bhaiya.. pani piyenge…


Josefer nahi kahta rah gaya lekin Nandni steel ke glass me pani le aayi… Josefer, Nandni ke vyawhar se hairani me tha. Fir bhi ab wo samne glass hath me pakdi thi, to majboori me usse hath badhana hi para..


Jaise hi Nischal ne wo glass pakda, achha tej jhatka khaya aur wo bijli ke jhatke se piche feka gaya. Pahle jakar deewar se takraya fir 1-2 flower pot toote, aur finally wo lakdi ke table se takrane ke baad, dhamn se niche jamin par land hua…


Ab itni tej awaz ho aur Nischal ko sunai na de…. "Kya patak rahi hai Nandu"… kamre ke ander se hi awaz lagate Nischal bahar aaya… aur floor par Josefer ko dekh'kar, Nischal apne muh par hath rakhkar usse hi dekhne laga…


Nandni, Nischal ke kandhe par apne hath tikati… "Dekha kaise iss janwar ko sidha maut ka jhatka de di"


Nischal dhire se apna gardan ghuma kar dekhte huye… "Meri maa maut ka jhatka kyon de di.. aur itna bada jhatka dene ke liye kya khyal layi thi"…


Nandni:- Mujhe laga ye sala mere ander ka body organ chaba-chaba kar kha raha hai… aur wo bhi mere sath wo sab karte.. chi chi chi... Bus fir dil me josh aur hathon me shakti.... Aur natija dekh le, mitti me mil gayi iski hasti."


Nischal hawa ki furti me gayab hua aur 2 minute baad bahut sare saman ke sath wapas aaya… jaldi se Josefer ke sine me ek chhota sa surakh banaya aur apne hont se uske muh me hawa dene laga... Sath me uske sine ko bhi pump karne laga..


Takriban 10 minute ke upchar ke baad Josefer bahut hi jar-jar ki stithi me jaga.. Nischal medicine ke kuch ghol taiyar karke, ek glass me rakha aur usme apne sath laye ek chhote se patthar ko uske ander dal kar 2 minute tak chhod diya..


Kuch der tak patthar ko ander dubaye rakhne ke baad Nischal ne wo ghol chhan kar pani Josefer ko diya aur patthar apne bag me rakh aaya… Wo pani pine ke baad Josefer apne sharir me kuch takat mehsus karte, farsh se utha aur sofe par baith gaya…


Nandni to bus tukur-tukur Nischal ko hi dekh rahi thi… "Kamine tu apne grah ka doctor hai kya?"..


Nischal:- Sab samjha dunga kaun sa main bhaga ja raha hun…


Nandni:- Kutte ki dum, aaj tak to bataya nahi ki aisa kya hua tha jo tu yahan pahuncha. Upar se aur ek sawal dimag me store karne bol raha hai…


Nischal:- Koi ghar me aaya hai.. tu sabke samne aise bol rahi..


Nandni:- Kaun ye… ye wahi Jafar hai na jo ladkiyon ke sath kukarm karke uske maans ko kha jata hai.. iss sale ko tune bachaya kyon..


Josefer…. 1.2 decimal, bole to 12000 volt ka jhatka wo bhi still ke ek glass se current pass karwa diya… Viggo ye aap ki he tecnology ho sakti ha,i aur usse istamal karne wali bhi kamal ki hai.. Kya santulan hai uske pass.. kya timing hai.. aur kya knowledge hai ki marna kitne power me hain..


Nandni:- Tarif ka shukriya lekin iss pagal ne tumhe bacha liya... Ab raaj se koi parda hatayega ki tum dono ek sath kaise ho?


Nischal, idhar udhar dekhte… "doctor kahan hai Nandu"


Nandni:- Shayad hospital hai.. uss se naraj hun na, isliye 2-4 din ghar par kam hi rahega. Kafi intelligent hai mera doctor, usse pata hai ki gusse ke waqt main kuch nahi sunti, isliye 2-4 din gusse ke thande hone ka intzar karta hai.


Josefer:- Ye teeno film ki deewani ladkiyan… baat kuch bhi shuru ho.. khinch kar bakwas par hi le jayegi..


Khinch kar ek uddta hua chappal Josefer ke muh par para aur Nandni pil gayi, pass pari jhadu le kar… Nischal usse pakadte huye…. "Chhod de usse, bacha hai wo, usse pata nahi kahan kaun sa communication karna hai. Basically pahli baar mazak try kar raha hai"..
khubsurat shabdo se saji hui ek aur dil khush karne vali update hai mitr.
 
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