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Fantasy Karmyudh ( Completed )

ashish_1982_in

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UPDATE 34

Surya jab rocky ke thinane par pahucha tab monty ke bataye raste se sidha uske basement wale poojaghar me pahucha.

Rocky wahin lal dhoti pehne kuch matra budbuda raha tha uske aur maa patal bhairvi ki murti ke beech bane hawankund ke paas hi sukanya behosh padi thi. Meghna shyad aaj wahan nahi thi.

Surya dahaad kar bola “ROCKY….”

Rocky ne mudkar dekha aur bola “kaun hai tu jo apni maut ko awaz de raha hai au yahan kaise pahuncha.”

S – jise tune mara hai aur jiski tu bali dene jar aha hai , dono mere apne hain aur unki ye halat karne ke evaj me maut to tujhe mai doonga, vaise bhim tere jaise darinde ke liye maut ki saja bhi kam hai.

R – aisa kyaa, aa jara dekhu tujhme kitna dam hai

Surya ne wahi se jump li aur hawa me flip karte hue apne dono per uske seene par de mare. Wo ladkhadata hua jaakar diwar se takraya. Gusse se bhanbhanate hue rocky uth khada hua.

R – manna padega ladke jaan to hai tujhme

S – abhi to shuruaat hai..

Rocky bhagta hua surya ki taraf aaya aur niche ko jhukte hue usne apne kandhe ka prahaar surya ke pet me kiya. Jisse surya k paanv ukhadgaye. Isse pehle ki surya girta usne apne kohni ka jordar prahaar rocky ki peeth par kiya. Roky k muh se karaah se nikal gayi, surya ne bina mauka ganvaaye apna ghutna uski chin par mara. Fir uske samhalne se pehle ek round kick jad di. Itni maar rocky ne aaj tak nahi khaayi thi kyoki wo bhi ek trained fighter tha….

Gusse ke mare usne apni tamsik shakti ka prahaar surya par kiya. Ek laal roshni si surya ki taraf lapki par surya alert tha ki ye ek tantrik bhi hai. Surya ne apni yog shakti se ek sunehri roshni si chhodi jinke apas me takrate hi na sirf rocky ka prahaar vifal hua balki ek jordar shakti prahaar hu Rocky par, jisse wo udta hua piche diwar se ja takraya. Usme muh se khoon aa gya.

Is prahaar se Rocky ye to samajh gya ki ye koi mamuli insaan nahi hai, balki koi divya shakti dharak hai. Ab ki baar rocky ne apni poori takat se ek tej laal kaali roshni ka prahaar surya par kiya jo lagataar uske haathon se nikalti ja rahi thi , Surya ne bhi adhiktam shakti prayog karte hue use apne hatho se nikal sunehri urja se roka, dono shaktiyo ke takraane se chingariyan si nikal rahi thi. Takkar barabari ki thi. Lagataar dono apni urja prayog kiye ja rahe they, aakhir jakhmi hone ki wajah se Rocky kamjor padne laga.

Achanak ek jordaar dhamake ke sath surya ki shakti ne us tamsik shakti ko chhinn bhinn kar diya. Us haal me charo taraf teevra roshni si fail gayi. Roshni kam hone par surya ne dekha ki Rocky lahuluhan niche pada hai wo uski aur badhne laga tabhi uski najar sukanya par padi jispar is ladai ki wajah se kaafi chote aa gayi thi. Uski karahat sunkar surya pehle use lekar bahar gaadi me bithane aaya fir laut kar Rocky ko lene aaya to wo wahan nahi thi darasal usi samay wahan meghna bhi aa gayi thi aur najuk halato ko samajhte hue wo Rocky ko chupchap lekar kisak gayi…


Sukanya k baare me soch kar Surya bhi wahan nahi ruka aur use lekar hospital nikal gya….
Very nice update bhai
 

ashish_1982_in

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UPDATE 35

Surya sukanya ko lekar hospital pahucha jahan dr ne sukanya ko first aid diya chunki jyada gehri chote nahi thi isliye use admit nahi kiya.

Fir sukanya ke kehne par wo use Virat se milane le gya. Lekin virat so raha tha to bas use dekhkar sukanya ghar jane lagi par surya ne mana kar diya aur wo khud use chhodne gya.

Next day jab surya acharya ji se mila aur unhe sab bataya to unhone dhyaan me jakar Rocky ke baare me pta lagaya to unhone surya ko Rocky ka poora parichay diya aur btaya ki yahi wah paapi hai jiske sanhaar ke liye tumhara janm hua hai. Ye jaankar Surya wapas Rocky ko ji jaan se dhoondne laga par wo to yu gayab ho gya tha jaise gadhe ke sir se seeng. Kuch din me Virat bhi theek ho gaya.

Fir kuch samay tak inki jindgi theek thak chalne lagi. Is beech Rocky ki side dekhte hain kya hua, ghayal Rocky ko jab hosh aaya to wo baukhla sa gaya ki aise kaise ho gya, ye kaun hai jo uspar meri tantrik shaktiyaan tak beasar ho gayi…

Thoda samhalte hi rocky ne ek khaas anushthan aarambh kiya jisse use surya ke baare me sab pta lag jaaye.

Anushthan poora hone par khud maa patal bhairvi ki awaj wahan goonji.

PB – bolo putra kya janna chahte ho

R – maa aap sarvgyani ho, kirpya mujhe ye bataye ki bachpan se kade yudhabhyasso aur aapki pooja se mili aseem shakti ke baawjood main ek manav se haar gaya. Aisa kaise ho gya maa.

PB – wo balak mrityu hai teri murakh, swayam devtao ne use tere manorath ko todne ke liye bheja hai. Uske hote tu ye siddhi kabhi poori nahi kar paayega.

R – nahi …. Itna bada shadyantra. Mai use safal nahi hone de sakta… pidhiyo ke intjaar ke baad ab hamara manorath purn hone wala hai, to mai use yu barbaad nahi hone de sakta…

PB – uski divya shaktiyo ke samne tumhari shaktiya bahut kam hai, tum usse nahi lad sakte…

R - ye nahi ho skta , mujhe use harana hi hoga, Bal se nahi to chhal se. aap mujhe koi aisi shakti bataye maa jisse mai uska sanhaar kar saku.

PB – waise to niyati ne tumhari mrityu usi ke hath likhi hai par fir bhi mai tumhe ek marg batati hu, yadi tum wo kar paaye to shayad parinaam bhinn ho.

R – maa mai aapka rini rahunga maa

PB – tujhe kam se kam 2 varsh tak ghor tap karna hoga aur usse ………………………….. sath hi koi aisi yukti lagani hogi jisse uski shaktiya ksheen ho jaye.

R – jo aagya maa. JAI MAA PATAL BHAIRVI….

Aur fir Rocky ne kisi gupt stan par 2 varsh ke liye ghor tap prarambh kar diya.


Is beech surya aur uske dosto ki graduation bhi poori ho gyi…
very nice update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
 

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UPDATE 35

Surya sukanya ko lekar hospital pahucha jahan dr ne sukanya ko first aid diya chunki jyada gehri chote nahi thi isliye use admit nahi kiya.

Fir sukanya ke kehne par wo use Virat se milane le gya. Lekin virat so raha tha to bas use dekhkar sukanya ghar jane lagi par surya ne mana kar diya aur wo khud use chhodne gya.

Next day jab surya acharya ji se mila aur unhe sab bataya to unhone dhyaan me jakar Rocky ke baare me pta lagaya to unhone surya ko Rocky ka poora parichay diya aur btaya ki yahi wah paapi hai jiske sanhaar ke liye tumhara janm hua hai. Ye jaankar Surya wapas Rocky ko ji jaan se dhoondne laga par wo to yu gayab ho gya tha jaise gadhe ke sir se seeng. Kuch din me Virat bhi theek ho gaya.

Fir kuch samay tak inki jindgi theek thak chalne lagi. Is beech Rocky ki side dekhte hain kya hua, ghayal Rocky ko jab hosh aaya to wo baukhla sa gaya ki aise kaise ho gya, ye kaun hai jo uspar meri tantrik shaktiyaan tak beasar ho gayi…

Thoda samhalte hi rocky ne ek khaas anushthan aarambh kiya jisse use surya ke baare me sab pta lag jaaye.

Anushthan poora hone par khud maa patal bhairvi ki awaj wahan goonji.

PB – bolo putra kya janna chahte ho

R – maa aap sarvgyani ho, kirpya mujhe ye bataye ki bachpan se kade yudhabhyasso aur aapki pooja se mili aseem shakti ke baawjood main ek manav se haar gaya. Aisa kaise ho gya maa.

PB – wo balak mrityu hai teri murakh, swayam devtao ne use tere manorath ko todne ke liye bheja hai. Uske hote tu ye siddhi kabhi poori nahi kar paayega.

R – nahi …. Itna bada shadyantra. Mai use safal nahi hone de sakta… pidhiyo ke intjaar ke baad ab hamara manorath purn hone wala hai, to mai use yu barbaad nahi hone de sakta…

PB – uski divya shaktiyo ke samne tumhari shaktiya bahut kam hai, tum usse nahi lad sakte…

R - ye nahi ho skta , mujhe use harana hi hoga, Bal se nahi to chhal se. aap mujhe koi aisi shakti bataye maa jisse mai uska sanhaar kar saku.

PB – waise to niyati ne tumhari mrityu usi ke hath likhi hai par fir bhi mai tumhe ek marg batati hu, yadi tum wo kar paaye to shayad parinaam bhinn ho.

R – maa mai aapka rini rahunga maa

PB – tujhe kam se kam 2 varsh tak ghor tap karna hoga aur usse ………………………….. sath hi koi aisi yukti lagani hogi jisse uski shaktiya ksheen ho jaye.

R – jo aagya maa. JAI MAA PATAL BHAIRVI….

Aur fir Rocky ne kisi gupt stan par 2 varsh ke liye ghor tap prarambh kar diya.


Is beech surya aur uske dosto ki graduation bhi poori ho gyi…
superbb update bro
 

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UPDATE 36

final year k papers ka aaj aakhiri din tha, hum sabhi khush they ki aaj hum free ho jayenge. To hum logo ne outing ka prograame banaya.

Virat – ye dekho yaar mujhe kal hi kisi ne brochure diya tha is resorts ka yahan se *** km door bada hi romantic hill station hai, kyu na wahi chale. Maine net par aur bhi photos dekhe hain us jagah ke.

Dono ladkiya (sukanya aur kiran )- haan surya please please chalo na.

S – muskra kar – ok done

V – chalo fir tay raha hum log kal hi niklenge.

Agle din hum log wahan ke liye nikal pade, lamba safar karne ke karan thak gaye they aur pahado me shaam bhi jaldi dhalne lagti hai to hune kal ghoomne ka decide kiya aur sone chale gaye. mai aur Virat ek room me aur sukanya aur kiran dusre room me ruke they.

V – bhai ek baat bolu

Me – bol

V – yaar…. wo kya hai na… ki na….. am…. I love sukanya

Me – kuch naya bola ye to hum jante hain

V – kya par maine kab bola

Me – tu nahi bolega ghonchu to pta nahi lagega kya, aur aise atakega uske aage to lag gayi teri lanka hahaha.

V – abe mai tujhse propose karne ke tip poochna chahta hu tu pehle hi nervous kar de

Me – hahaha nalayak ye tip vip sab bakwas funde hain just go aur sidhe sidhe shabdo me apne dil ka haal suna daal.

V – keh to aise raha hai jaise khud ne kitne jhande gaadh rakhe ho. Aaj tak tujhse Kiran ko propose to hua na, ab ye na kehna kit u use nahi chahta.

Me – nahi kahunga , mai use chata hu aur janta hu ki wo bhi mujhe chahti hai, aur hamara pyar izhaar ka mohtaaj nahi hai. Mera janm ek khaas uddeshya ki purti ke liye hua hai aur usme khatre bahut hain isliye jab tak wo maksad poora nahi ho jata mai is baare me aage nahi badh sakta, kyoki mai nahi chahta ki kisi pratikul parinam ke natije kiran ko bhugatne pade.

V – bas bas jyada drama na kar, kaise bhi halaat ho tere aage ye Virat dhal banker khada rahega.

S – mujhe yakeen hai mere dost,

Aur aage badhkar use gale laga leta hai, fir dono so jaate hai nextday resorts me brakefast kar ke ghoomne ke baare me decide karte hain tabhi ek vaiter inke paas aata hai

Vaitor – sir may I help you

Virat – haan yaar ye bta ki aaspaas kuch hatkar unique sa kuch hai to bta.

Vaitor – ji sir yahan resort ke gate ke paas se hi ek kachha rasta andar jungle ki taraf gya hai, wahan takreeban aadha ghante ke raste par ek natural waterfall hai, wahan logo ki aawajahi na ke barabar hai.

Virat – fine…. To hum pehle wahin chal rahe hain

Hum sabne ok kaha aur nikal pade jungle ke liye. Jungle me lagbhag ghante bhar baad hum wahan pahuche , pahadiyo ke beech, raste ki masti aur jungle me naye hone ki wajah se thoda jyada time laga.

Wahan ka scene wakayi mast kar dene wala tha. beautiful scenery , mast hawa, shant mahaul , shayad yahan jyada log aate jaate nahi they. sirf hum log they wahan , hum log jharne me nahaye bhi aur kuch der jungle ka maja liya , thodi der me Virat mere paas aya aur bola, “kya kehta hai bhai yahin propose kar du use.”

S – “shubhasya sheeghram.”

Wo muskara kar bola “par tu kiran ko to alag bula”

S – ok bhai … KIRAN jara yahan aana.

Kiran jo ki thodi doori par jharne ke paas ek chattan par sukanya ke sath baithi thi meri awaaz par uthkar meri taraf aane lagi,

K – haan bolo surya

S – jara mere sath wahan tak chalo (thodi door ki aur ishara kiya)

K – kyu kya hai wahan

S – chalo to batata hu

Fir maine Virat ko ishara kiya to Virat sukanya ki taraf badh gaya. Maine use fir ishara kiya ki jungli foolo k podhon taraf. To wo mudkar fool lene chala gya.

Idhar main kiran ke sath thodi aage aakar “wo actually virat sukanya ko propose karne ja raha hai”

K – to mai kya pakad rahi thi

S – hahaha mera matlab wo nahi tha yaar

K – hahaha samajhti hu par use chhedne me maja aata

S – rehne do badi mushkil to bechare ne himmat kari hai.

K – huh , tum ladke to ye hi chahte ho ki ladkiya khud aakar tumhe I love you bole.

Mai uska tanj samajhkar muskrat utha tabhi ek cheekh goonji. Maine palat kar dekha to stabdh reh gya.
 

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ashish_1982_in

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UPDATE 36

final year k papers ka aaj aakhiri din tha, hum sabhi khush they ki aaj hum free ho jayenge. To hum logo ne outing ka prograame banaya.

Virat – ye dekho yaar mujhe kal hi kisi ne brochure diya tha is resorts ka yahan se *** km door bada hi romantic hill station hai, kyu na wahi chale. Maine net par aur bhi photos dekhe hain us jagah ke.

Dono ladkiya (sukanya aur kiran )- haan surya please please chalo na.

S – muskra kar – ok done

V – chalo fir tay raha hum log kal hi niklenge.

Agle din hum log wahan ke liye nikal pade, lamba safar karne ke karan thak gaye they aur pahado me shaam bhi jaldi dhalne lagti hai to hune kal ghoomne ka decide kiya aur sone chale gaye. mai aur Virat ek room me aur sukanya aur kiran dusre room me ruke they.

V – bhai ek baat bolu

Me – bol

V – yaar…. wo kya hai na… ki na….. am…. I love sukanya

Me – kuch naya bola ye to hum jante hain

V – kya par maine kab bola

Me – tu nahi bolega ghonchu to pta nahi lagega kya, aur aise atakega uske aage to lag gayi teri lanka hahaha.

V – abe mai tujhse propose karne ke tip poochna chahta hu tu pehle hi nervous kar de

Me – hahaha nalayak ye tip vip sab bakwas funde hain just go aur sidhe sidhe shabdo me apne dil ka haal suna daal.

V – keh to aise raha hai jaise khud ne kitne jhande gaadh rakhe ho. Aaj tak tujhse Kiran ko propose to hua na, ab ye na kehna kit u use nahi chahta.

Me – nahi kahunga , mai use chata hu aur janta hu ki wo bhi mujhe chahti hai, aur hamara pyar izhaar ka mohtaaj nahi hai. Mera janm ek khaas uddeshya ki purti ke liye hua hai aur usme khatre bahut hain isliye jab tak wo maksad poora nahi ho jata mai is baare me aage nahi badh sakta, kyoki mai nahi chahta ki kisi pratikul parinam ke natije kiran ko bhugatne pade.

V – bas bas jyada drama na kar, kaise bhi halaat ho tere aage ye Virat dhal banker khada rahega.

S – mujhe yakeen hai mere dost,

Aur aage badhkar use gale laga leta hai, fir dono so jaate hai nextday resorts me brakefast kar ke ghoomne ke baare me decide karte hain tabhi ek vaiter inke paas aata hai

Vaitor – sir may I help you

Virat – haan yaar ye bta ki aaspaas kuch hatkar unique sa kuch hai to bta.

Vaitor – ji sir yahan resort ke gate ke paas se hi ek kachha rasta andar jungle ki taraf gya hai, wahan takreeban aadha ghante ke raste par ek natural waterfall hai, wahan logo ki aawajahi na ke barabar hai.

Virat – fine…. To hum pehle wahin chal rahe hain

Hum sabne ok kaha aur nikal pade jungle ke liye. Jungle me lagbhag ghante bhar baad hum wahan pahuche , pahadiyo ke beech, raste ki masti aur jungle me naye hone ki wajah se thoda jyada time laga.

Wahan ka scene wakayi mast kar dene wala tha. beautiful scenery , mast hawa, shant mahaul , shayad yahan jyada log aate jaate nahi they. sirf hum log they wahan , hum log jharne me nahaye bhi aur kuch der jungle ka maja liya , thodi der me Virat mere paas aya aur bola, “kya kehta hai bhai yahin propose kar du use.”

S – “shubhasya sheeghram.”

Wo muskara kar bola “par tu kiran ko to alag bula”

S – ok bhai … KIRAN jara yahan aana.

Kiran jo ki thodi doori par jharne ke paas ek chattan par sukanya ke sath baithi thi meri awaaz par uthkar meri taraf aane lagi,

K – haan bolo surya

S – jara mere sath wahan tak chalo (thodi door ki aur ishara kiya)

K – kyu kya hai wahan

S – chalo to batata hu

Fir maine Virat ko ishara kiya to Virat sukanya ki taraf badh gaya. Maine use fir ishara kiya ki jungli foolo k podhon taraf. To wo mudkar fool lene chala gya.

Idhar main kiran ke sath thodi aage aakar “wo actually virat sukanya ko propose karne ja raha hai”

K – to mai kya pakad rahi thi

S – hahaha mera matlab wo nahi tha yaar

K – hahaha samajhti hu par use chhedne me maja aata

S – rehne do badi mushkil to bechare ne himmat kari hai.

K – huh , tum ladke to ye hi chahte ho ki ladkiya khud aakar tumhe I love you bole.


Mai uska tanj samajhkar muskrat utha tabhi ek cheekh goonji. Maine palat kar dekha to stabdh reh gya.
nice update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
 
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