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Fantasy Karmyudh ( Completed )

ragish7357

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UPDATE 36

final year k papers ka aaj aakhiri din tha, hum sabhi khush they ki aaj hum free ho jayenge. To hum logo ne outing ka prograame banaya.

Virat – ye dekho yaar mujhe kal hi kisi ne brochure diya tha is resorts ka yahan se *** km door bada hi romantic hill station hai, kyu na wahi chale. Maine net par aur bhi photos dekhe hain us jagah ke.

Dono ladkiya (sukanya aur kiran )- haan surya please please chalo na.

S – muskra kar – ok done

V – chalo fir tay raha hum log kal hi niklenge.

Agle din hum log wahan ke liye nikal pade, lamba safar karne ke karan thak gaye they aur pahado me shaam bhi jaldi dhalne lagti hai to hune kal ghoomne ka decide kiya aur sone chale gaye. mai aur Virat ek room me aur sukanya aur kiran dusre room me ruke they.

V – bhai ek baat bolu

Me – bol

V – yaar…. wo kya hai na… ki na….. am…. I love sukanya

Me – kuch naya bola ye to hum jante hain

V – kya par maine kab bola

Me – tu nahi bolega ghonchu to pta nahi lagega kya, aur aise atakega uske aage to lag gayi teri lanka hahaha.

V – abe mai tujhse propose karne ke tip poochna chahta hu tu pehle hi nervous kar de

Me – hahaha nalayak ye tip vip sab bakwas funde hain just go aur sidhe sidhe shabdo me apne dil ka haal suna daal.

V – keh to aise raha hai jaise khud ne kitne jhande gaadh rakhe ho. Aaj tak tujhse Kiran ko propose to hua na, ab ye na kehna kit u use nahi chahta.

Me – nahi kahunga , mai use chata hu aur janta hu ki wo bhi mujhe chahti hai, aur hamara pyar izhaar ka mohtaaj nahi hai. Mera janm ek khaas uddeshya ki purti ke liye hua hai aur usme khatre bahut hain isliye jab tak wo maksad poora nahi ho jata mai is baare me aage nahi badh sakta, kyoki mai nahi chahta ki kisi pratikul parinam ke natije kiran ko bhugatne pade.

V – bas bas jyada drama na kar, kaise bhi halaat ho tere aage ye Virat dhal banker khada rahega.

S – mujhe yakeen hai mere dost,

Aur aage badhkar use gale laga leta hai, fir dono so jaate hai nextday resorts me brakefast kar ke ghoomne ke baare me decide karte hain tabhi ek vaiter inke paas aata hai

Vaitor – sir may I help you

Virat – haan yaar ye bta ki aaspaas kuch hatkar unique sa kuch hai to bta.

Vaitor – ji sir yahan resort ke gate ke paas se hi ek kachha rasta andar jungle ki taraf gya hai, wahan takreeban aadha ghante ke raste par ek natural waterfall hai, wahan logo ki aawajahi na ke barabar hai.

Virat – fine…. To hum pehle wahin chal rahe hain

Hum sabne ok kaha aur nikal pade jungle ke liye. Jungle me lagbhag ghante bhar baad hum wahan pahuche , pahadiyo ke beech, raste ki masti aur jungle me naye hone ki wajah se thoda jyada time laga.

Wahan ka scene wakayi mast kar dene wala tha. beautiful scenery , mast hawa, shant mahaul , shayad yahan jyada log aate jaate nahi they. sirf hum log they wahan , hum log jharne me nahaye bhi aur kuch der jungle ka maja liya , thodi der me Virat mere paas aya aur bola, “kya kehta hai bhai yahin propose kar du use.”

S – “shubhasya sheeghram.”

Wo muskara kar bola “par tu kiran ko to alag bula”

S – ok bhai … KIRAN jara yahan aana.

Kiran jo ki thodi doori par jharne ke paas ek chattan par sukanya ke sath baithi thi meri awaaz par uthkar meri taraf aane lagi,

K – haan bolo surya

S – jara mere sath wahan tak chalo (thodi door ki aur ishara kiya)

K – kyu kya hai wahan

S – chalo to batata hu

Fir maine Virat ko ishara kiya to Virat sukanya ki taraf badh gaya. Maine use fir ishara kiya ki jungli foolo k podhon taraf. To wo mudkar fool lene chala gya.

Idhar main kiran ke sath thodi aage aakar “wo actually virat sukanya ko propose karne ja raha hai”

K – to mai kya pakad rahi thi

S – hahaha mera matlab wo nahi tha yaar

K – hahaha samajhti hu par use chhedne me maja aata

S – rehne do badi mushkil to bechare ne himmat kari hai.

K – huh , tum ladke to ye hi chahte ho ki ladkiya khud aakar tumhe I love you bole.


Mai uska tanj samajhkar muskrat utha tabhi ek cheekh goonji. Maine palat kar dekha to stabdh reh gya.
superbb update bro
 

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UPDATE 37

Maine palat kar dekha to stabdh reh gya kyoki pichhe sukanya ki garden par chaku rakkhe Rocky khada tha. isse pehle ki koi kuch karta Rocky ne uska gala ret diya.

Hum teeno …SUKANYAAAAAAAAAA……….

Meri aankho me khoon utar aaya, mai apni power ka use karte hue lagbhag udta hua wahan pahuncha par Rocky gayab ho gya tha. Maine sukanya ko samhala aur pulse check karne laga itne me Virat aur Kiran bhi daudte hue wahan pahuche. Kiran prashanwachak drishti se mujhe dekhne lagi to aansu bahate hue maine naa me gardan hila di.

Virat to ye sab dekhte hue baura gaya tha. “nahi meri sukanya mujhe aise chhodkar nahi ja sakti.”

Surya – samhalo khud ko Virat, kiran tum dono sukanya ko yahan se lekar jao, wo kameena yahi kahi hai. Mai usse nipat kar aata hu.

Kiran – lekin surya tum akele us dhurt ke paas mat jao.

Surya – mai use pehle bhi sabak sikha chukka hoon, tum ghabrao mat, tum Viraj ka khyaal rakhna.

Tabhi pichhe se atthas ki awaz aane par maine palat kar dekha to kaafi doori par ek chattan par wo kameena Rocky khada has raha tha.

Gusse se daant bheenchta hua mai bola, “aaj tune bahut badi galti kar di Rocky.”

Rocky – “tu kya soch raha hai mai yahan achanak aaya hu, ye sab jo hua mera hi plan tha, wo brochure wo waitor hahaha , mai yahan tumhe jaan boojhkar laya tha.

“AAAAAAA……… “ Aaur maine uski aur chalaang laga di aur usne jungle ke andar ki taraf.

S – bhagta kyo hai ab kayar, dam hai to mukabla kar”

R – hahaha , haste hue aur andar le gya.

Maine apni sunahri shakti kiran se uspar prahaar kiya par wo ek tarf kood ke bach gaya aur kiran jaakar ek ped se takrayi wo pura jal utha. Fir ek taraf aakar wo khada h gaya, maine fir se ek sunehri kiran uski aur chhodi par achanak wo gayab ho gya aur is baar kiran jaakar ek mitti ke teelenuma dher se ja takraayi aur ek visfot k sath hawa me charo taraf mitti mitti fail gayi.

“KAUN HAI DUSHT”

Ek garjdaar awaaz goonji

Krodh ke vashibhoot maine bhi paristhiti na samajhte hue awaz ki disha me prahaar kar diya. (ab tak mai apni hi speed me wahan pahuch gaya tha) Tabhi dhool chhanti to dekha ek aghori baba niche gire pade hain.

aghori – “DUSHT divya shakti dharak hote hue bhi tumne na sirf mera tap bhang kiya apitu mujh par prahaar bhi kiya. Ja mai tujhe shrap deta hu kit u in divya shaktiyo se rikt ho jaaye. tu apni ye shaktiya kho baithega, aur wo bhi tab jab baat teri jindgi aur maut ki hogi.”

Surya - hatprabh sa, hath jod wahi ghutno par baith gaya – BABA aisa na kahe baba. Jo hua anjane me hua. Mai to ek dusht ka sanhaar karne hetu uska pichha kar raha tha. aap to sarvgyani hai baba, kirpya apna shraap wapas le maharaj.

Surya ko samajh aa gya tha ki usne galti se ghor anarth kar dala hai aur shayad Rocky ne ye sab usse jaanboojhkar karwaya hai, par kehte hain na , ab pachhtay hot kya jab chidiya chug gayi khet.

Aghori baba ne apni aankhe band kar li aur apni divyadrishti se sab dekha fir aankhe khol kar bole, putra ye wastava me hamse ghor bhool ho gayi, par ab mai diya hua shraap wapas nahi le sakta haa iska asar jarur kam kar sakta hu, ye shaktiya ek varsh baad punah tum prapt kar sakte ho.

S – parantu prabhu is ek varsh me wo agar mujhse takraya to kya mai use rok paunga.

Baba – nahi putra, kyoki maine divya drishti se dekha hai ki usne tumhara ant karne ke liye, pichhle do warsh ke ghor tap se ek amogh shakti devi patal bhairvi se prapt ki hai. Yadi usne wah tum par prayog kar di to tumhara bachna mushkil hai.

S – to mere liye kya aagya hai prabhu

B – neelgiri ke jungle me mera aashram hai, jahan koi bhi dushtatma ya unka hathiyar pravesh nahi kar sakta, tum jakar ek varsh wahi sadhna karo.

S – jo aagya prabhu.

B – aur ek baat wahan pahuchne ke liye tumhare paas matra 24 ghante hain, uske baad mere shraap ka prabhav shuru ho jayega.

S – main samajh gaya maharaj.

B – ab der na karo putra.

Surya maharaj ko pranaam karke wahan se turant nikal gya.


Udhar rocky jo chhupkar sab dekh aur sun raha tha , apni shaitani hasi hasta hua budbudaya, “ab tujhe mujhse kaun bachayega, bada aaya tha mera kaal banne.”
 
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UPDATE 37

Maine palat kar dekha to stabdh reh gya kyoki pichhe sukanya ki garden par chaku rakkhe Rocky khada tha. isse pehle ki koi kuch karta Rocky ne uska gala ret diya.

Hum teeno …SUKANYAAAAAAAAAA……….

Meri aankho me khoon utar aaya, mai apni power ka use karte hue lagbhag udta hua wahan pahuncha par Rocky gayab ho gya tha. Maine sukanya ko samhala aur pulse check karne laga itne me Virat aur Kiran bhi daudte hue wahan pahuche. Kiran prashanwachak drishti se mujhe dekhne lagi to aansu bahate hue maine naa me gardan hila di.

Virat to ye sab dekhte hue baura gaya tha. “nahi meri sukanya mujhe aise chhodkar nahi ja sakti.”

Surya – samhalo khud ko Virat, kiran tum dono sukanya ko yahan se lekar jao, wo kameena yahi kahi hai. Mai usse nipat kar aata hu.

Kiran – lekin surya tum akele us dhurt ke paas mat jao.

Surya – mai use pehle bhi sabak sikha chukka hoon, tum ghabrao mat, tum Viraj ka khyaal rakhna.

Tabhi pichhe se atthas ki awaz aane par maine palat kar dekha to kaafi doori par ek chattan par wo kameena Rocky khada has raha tha.

Gusse se daant bheenchta hua mai bola, “aaj tune bahut badi galti kar di Rocky.”

Rocky – “tu kya soch raha hai mai yahan achanak aaya hu, ye sab jo hua mera hi plan tha, wo brochure wo waitor hahaha , mai yahan tumhe jaan boojhkar laya tha.

“AAAAAAA……… “ Aaur maine uski aur chalaang laga di aur usne jungle ke andar ki taraf.

S – bhagta kyo hai ab kayar, dam hai to mukabla kar”

R – hahaha , haste hue aur andar le gya.

Maine apni sunahri shakti kiran se uspar prahaar kiya par wo ek tarf kood ke bach gaya aur kiran jaakar ek ped se takrayi wo pura jal utha. Fir ek taraf aakar wo khada h gaya, maine fir se ek sunehri kiran uski aur chhodi par achanak wo gayab ho gya aur is baar kiran jaakar ek mitti ke teelenuma dher se ja takraayi aur ek visfot k sath hawa me charo taraf mitti mitti fail gayi.

“KAUN HAI DUSHT”

Ek garjdaar awaaz goonji

Krodh ke vashibhoot maine bhi paristhiti na samajhte hue awaz ki disha me prahaar kar diya. (ab tak mai apni hi speed me wahan pahuch gaya tha) Tabhi dhool chhanti to dekha ek vyovradh sadhu niche gire pade hain.

Sadhu – “DUSHT divya shakti dharak hote hue bhi tumne na sirf mera tap bhang kiya apitu mujh par prahaar bhi kiya. Ja mai tujhe shrap deta hu kit u in divya shaktiyo se rikt ho jaaye.”

Surya - hatprabh sa, hath jod wahi ghutno par baith gaya – BABA aisa na kahe baba. Jo hua anjane me hua. Mai to ek dusht ka sanhaar karne hetu uska pichha kar raha tha. aap to sarvgyani hai baba, kirpya apna shraap wapas le maharaj.

Surya ko samajh aa gya tha ki usne galti se ghor anarth kar dala hai aur shayad Rocky ne ye sab usse jaanboojhkar karwaya hai, par kehte hain na , ab pachhtay hot kya jab chidiya chug gayi khet.

Sadhu baba ne apni aankhe band kar li aur apni divyadrishti se sab dekha fir aankhe khol kar bole, putra ye wastava me hamse ghor bhool ho gayi, par ab mai diya hua shraap wapas nahi le sakta haa iska asar jarur kam kar sakta hu, ye shaktiya ek varsh baad punah tum prapt kar sakte ho.

S – parantu prabhu is ek varsh me wo agar mujhse takraya to kya mai use rok paunga.

Baba – nahi putra, kyoki maine divya drishti se dekha hai ki usne tumhara ant karne ke liye, pichhle do warsh ke ghor tap se ek amogh shakti devi patal bhairvi se prapt ki hai. Yadi usne wah tum par prayog kar di to tumhara bachna mushkil hai.

S – to mere liye kya aagya hai prabhu

B – neelgiri ke jungle me mera aashram hai, jahan koi bhi dushtatma ya unka hathiyar pravesh nahi kar sakta, tum jakar ek varsh wahi sadhna karo.

S – jo aagya prabhu.

B – aur ek baat wahan pahuchne ke liye tumhare paas matra 24 ghante hain, uske baad mere shraap ka prabhav shuru ho jayega.

S – main samajh gaya maharaj.

B – ab der na karo putra.

Surya maharaj ko pranaam karke wahan se turant nikal gya.


Udhar rocky jo chhupkar sab dekh aur sun raha tha , apni shaitani hasi hasta hua budbudaya, “ab tujhe mujhse kaun bachayega, bada aaya tha mera kaal banne.”
Nice updates bro
 

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UPDATE 37

Maine palat kar dekha to stabdh reh gya kyoki pichhe sukanya ki garden par chaku rakkhe Rocky khada tha. isse pehle ki koi kuch karta Rocky ne uska gala ret diya.

Hum teeno …SUKANYAAAAAAAAAA……….

Meri aankho me khoon utar aaya, mai apni power ka use karte hue lagbhag udta hua wahan pahuncha par Rocky gayab ho gya tha. Maine sukanya ko samhala aur pulse check karne laga itne me Virat aur Kiran bhi daudte hue wahan pahuche. Kiran prashanwachak drishti se mujhe dekhne lagi to aansu bahate hue maine naa me gardan hila di.

Virat to ye sab dekhte hue baura gaya tha. “nahi meri sukanya mujhe aise chhodkar nahi ja sakti.”

Surya – samhalo khud ko Virat, kiran tum dono sukanya ko yahan se lekar jao, wo kameena yahi kahi hai. Mai usse nipat kar aata hu.

Kiran – lekin surya tum akele us dhurt ke paas mat jao.

Surya – mai use pehle bhi sabak sikha chukka hoon, tum ghabrao mat, tum Viraj ka khyaal rakhna.

Tabhi pichhe se atthas ki awaz aane par maine palat kar dekha to kaafi doori par ek chattan par wo kameena Rocky khada has raha tha.

Gusse se daant bheenchta hua mai bola, “aaj tune bahut badi galti kar di Rocky.”

Rocky – “tu kya soch raha hai mai yahan achanak aaya hu, ye sab jo hua mera hi plan tha, wo brochure wo waitor hahaha , mai yahan tumhe jaan boojhkar laya tha.

“AAAAAAA……… “ Aaur maine uski aur chalaang laga di aur usne jungle ke andar ki taraf.

S – bhagta kyo hai ab kayar, dam hai to mukabla kar”

R – hahaha , haste hue aur andar le gya.

Maine apni sunahri shakti kiran se uspar prahaar kiya par wo ek tarf kood ke bach gaya aur kiran jaakar ek ped se takrayi wo pura jal utha. Fir ek taraf aakar wo khada h gaya, maine fir se ek sunehri kiran uski aur chhodi par achanak wo gayab ho gya aur is baar kiran jaakar ek mitti ke teelenuma dher se ja takraayi aur ek visfot k sath hawa me charo taraf mitti mitti fail gayi.

“KAUN HAI DUSHT”

Ek garjdaar awaaz goonji

Krodh ke vashibhoot maine bhi paristhiti na samajhte hue awaz ki disha me prahaar kar diya. (ab tak mai apni hi speed me wahan pahuch gaya tha) Tabhi dhool chhanti to dekha ek vyovradh sadhu niche gire pade hain.

Sadhu – “DUSHT divya shakti dharak hote hue bhi tumne na sirf mera tap bhang kiya apitu mujh par prahaar bhi kiya. Ja mai tujhe shrap deta hu kit u in divya shaktiyo se rikt ho jaaye.”

Surya - hatprabh sa, hath jod wahi ghutno par baith gaya – BABA aisa na kahe baba. Jo hua anjane me hua. Mai to ek dusht ka sanhaar karne hetu uska pichha kar raha tha. aap to sarvgyani hai baba, kirpya apna shraap wapas le maharaj.

Surya ko samajh aa gya tha ki usne galti se ghor anarth kar dala hai aur shayad Rocky ne ye sab usse jaanboojhkar karwaya hai, par kehte hain na , ab pachhtay hot kya jab chidiya chug gayi khet.

Sadhu baba ne apni aankhe band kar li aur apni divyadrishti se sab dekha fir aankhe khol kar bole, putra ye wastava me hamse ghor bhool ho gayi, par ab mai diya hua shraap wapas nahi le sakta haa iska asar jarur kam kar sakta hu, ye shaktiya ek varsh baad punah tum prapt kar sakte ho.

S – parantu prabhu is ek varsh me wo agar mujhse takraya to kya mai use rok paunga.

Baba – nahi putra, kyoki maine divya drishti se dekha hai ki usne tumhara ant karne ke liye, pichhle do warsh ke ghor tap se ek amogh shakti devi patal bhairvi se prapt ki hai. Yadi usne wah tum par prayog kar di to tumhara bachna mushkil hai.

S – to mere liye kya aagya hai prabhu

B – neelgiri ke jungle me mera aashram hai, jahan koi bhi dushtatma ya unka hathiyar pravesh nahi kar sakta, tum jakar ek varsh wahi sadhna karo.

S – jo aagya prabhu.

B – aur ek baat wahan pahuchne ke liye tumhare paas matra 24 ghante hain, uske baad mere shraap ka prabhav shuru ho jayega.

S – main samajh gaya maharaj.

B – ab der na karo putra.

Surya maharaj ko pranaam karke wahan se turant nikal gya.


Udhar rocky jo chhupkar sab dekh aur sun raha tha , apni shaitani hasi hasta hua budbudaya, “ab tujhe mujhse kaun bachayega, bada aaya tha mera kaal banne.”
fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
 

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Mind-Blowing Update Bhai...............
 
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