Romance Kasam - Love is not Everything (Completed)

[Mahi Maurya]

UPDATE 61​

Atul Uncle...Atul Uncle

Ek bacche ki aawaj pure ghar me gunja...Dhire dhire ghar ki sabhi sadasya hall me jama ho gaye.

Kuch der sochne ke baad Atul samajh gaya ki ye Gaurav ka beta hai.

Dadi, Dada Atul Uncle aa gaye.

Issi tarah wo baccha sabhi se yahi baat keh raha tha...Uski maasum baatein sun kar Atul ki chehre me muskaan aa gaya.

Ek najar sabhi ko dekha Atul ne...Apne Papa, Bhaiya aur Bhabhi ko dekhte hi munh fer liya...Maa par najar padte hi najre wohi tham gaye.

Aankho ke jariye dil ko ek sukun sa mila...Aankho me aansu aur khushi ka koi thikaana nahi...Atul ka wohi haal tha jaise ek chhote bacche ka apne Maa se bahut dino ke baad milne par hota hai.

Atul apne Maa ke paas gaya.

A. Mom:- Tu to gaayab hi ho gaya? Ek baar bhi ham sab ka khayal nahi aaya?

Atul:- Maa...Aapko aur Didi ki to hamesha yaad karta hu...Dur rehne ki dard to mujhe bhi hota hai...Lekin kya karu ye sehar se jaise nafrat si ho gayi hai.

A. Mom:- Kaisa hai...Apna khayal bhi nahi rakhta?

Atul ki Maa Atul ki lambe lambe baal pakadti hui boli.

Atul:- Thik hu Maa.

(In his mind) Kisi tarah jee raha hu.

A. Mom:- Jhuth bolna abhi bhi nahi sikha...Kya thik hai...Itna duble patla ho gaya hai...Thik se khaana bhi nahi khata hoga tu.

Atul kuch jawaab deta usse pehle hi uski bhabhi bol padi. "Itna mote to hai devar ji...Aapko dubla patla kaise dikh rahe hai."

Atul ne jawaab me aisa ghura ki uska hosh bilkul hi udd gaya...Kuch bolne ki jarurat nahi pada...Aankho me hi itna nafrat tha ki saamne wala dar kar kaampne me majbur ho jaata.

A. Mom:- Mai bhi baato me hi ulajh gayi...Tu aaram kar...Mai lunch bana kar laati hu.

Itna keh kar wo lunch banane chali gayi.

Hello Uncle.

Iss maasum si aawaj ne Atul ka gussa ko pighla diya.

Atul:- Hello beta...Kya naam hai tumhara?

Aarav

Atul:- Bahut pyaara naam hai.

Aarav:- Thank you Uncle.

Atul:- Accha ye bataao Aarav...Tum mujhe kaise jaante ho.

Aarav:- Dadi ne bataya tha aapke baare me...Aap bahut bade doctor hai...Aur Uncle...Mai bhi bada ho kar doctor banunga.

Atul:- Bahut accha beta...Lekin iske liye tumhe bahut padhna padega.

Aarav:- Padhunga...Abhi se padh raha hu...Aapki books bhi padh raha hu lekin much samajh me nahi aa raha hai...Aap mujhe padhayenge naa?

Aarav ki iss baat par Atul ko hansi aa gaya.

Atul:- Jarur padhaunga...Ye bataao...Tum doctor kyu banna chahte ho?

Aarav:- Wo hamaare class me madam hai? Bahut homework deti hai...Nahi karne pa maarti hai...Mai bada ho kar doctor banunga...Aur unko injection laga dunga...Tab pata chalega dard kya hota hai.

Aarav ki iss maasum baat par Atul ke saath saath sabhi ki hansi chhut gaya.

Atul:- Aarav abb jaao khelo...Shaam me ham ice-cream khaane chalenge.

Aarav:- Thank you Uncle.

Fir Aarav jhumta hua waha se khelne chala gaya.

Atul bhi apne Maa se di ki room pucch kar milne jaane laga.

Gaurav:- Atul.

Atul vas wohi ruk gaya...Picche mud kar dwkha bhi nahi.

Gaurav:- Kuch baat karni hai.

Atul:- Lekin mujhe nahi karna hai.

Gaurav:- Lekin sunn to.

Abb Atul ka gusse par koi control nahi tha...Gaurav ke paas jaa kar.

Atul:- Kya sunu? Bol na? Kya sunu?

Atul gusse me bolta chala gaya...Gaurav ko bhi laga ye sahi vakt nahi hai Atul se baat karne ke liye.

Atul:- Tu sunn...Aur kaan khol kar sunn...Abb tera ek beta bhi hai...Aur mai nahi chaahta ki ek baap apne hi bete ke saamne pit jaaye yaa fir uski beizzati ho.

Maaf to pehle bhi nahi kiya tha aur naa hi kabhi karunga...Lekin abb jaan se maarna bhi pade to piche nahi hatunga.

Itna keh kar Atul waha se jaane laga...Fir ek baat yaad aaya.

Atul:- Beta bahut accha hai tera...Accha hua ki tera koi bhi gunn nahi hai usme...Aur ek salah deta hu apne jaise kabhi mat banana.

Fir Atul Di ki room me chala gaya...Andar ki jo haalat tha usse dekh Atul ko vishwash hi nahi hua.

Atul:- (In his mind) Ye kaise ho sakta hai...Ye ye ye nahi ho sakta.

Jor se chilla kar.

Atul:- Di.



Hello. Dr. Sameer.

Sameer here...But who is there?

Mai Nisha.

Nisha ko Sameer ki baat aaj bahut ajeeb lag raha tha.

Sameer:- Kaun Nishaaa? Ohh accha yaad aaya...Tum tum wohi ho naa jo mujhe medical ethics aur humanity ka lecture de rahi thi...Tumhara lecture waise bahut sahi tha.

Nisha:- Ha mai wohi hu...Lekin aapki aawaj ko kya hua hai?

Sameer:- I am drunk...Nashe me hu mai...Aaj mera off day hai...So aaj chill kar raha hu.

Boliye Dr. Kya baat hai? Aaj bhi koi lecture dena hai kya? Aaj ke din to jeene dijiye...Please.

Sameer aise hi bad bada raha tha phone me.

Nisha:- What?

Sameer:- Kya hua? Aap to shocked ho gayi? Boliye kya baat hai?

Nisha ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha...Itna emergency case hai aur Sameer nashe ki haalat me hai...Wo baat ko sun bhi nahi raha tha...Bas aise hi badbada raha tha nashe me.

Nisha:- Sir ek emergency case hai.

Sameer:- Wo to roj hota hai...Kuch naya kaho.

Nisha:- Dr. This is not a joke...Please samajhne ki koshish kijiye.

Sameer:- Hmm...Bolo.

Nisha:- Sir ek surgery karna hai...Emergency hai ... Please aap hospital aa jaaiye.

Sameer:- Baaki ki surgeon ko kya ho gaya...Unhe bolo...Muft ki roti khaane aate hai saale...Salary lete hai lekin kaam se dur bhaagte hai naalayak.

Nisha:- Nahi sir...Wo sab try kar chuke hai...Lekin unse nahi ho paa raha hai...Wo kehte hai yaa to patient ko refer karna padega...Yaa fir aap hi kar sakte hai surgery.

Sameer:- Lekin mai kaise...Mai to nashe me hu...Kaatna kuch hai aur kaat kuch aur hi dunga.

Nisha phone rakh deti hai.

Fir 2 min me hi Nisha ka phone aata hai Sameer ko.

Sameer:- Abb kya gaali dene ke liye phone kar rahi ho...You are irresponsible doctor...Aap ko nashe me nahi hona chaahiye...Yaa fir koi aur lecture.

Let me say something...Aaj maine kuch galat nahi kiya...Aaj mera chhuti hai...Ye mera din hai...Aaj enjoy karne ka pura hak hai mera...Aaj maine koi galti nahi kiya hai.

Sameer nashe ki haalat me bak bak kar hi raha tha.

Nisha:- Bas bas sir...Maine ye karne ke liye phone kiya tha ki baaki ke surgeon keh rahe thhe ki aap jitne bhi nashe me kyu naa ho surgery me mistake nahi karte.

Please sir jaldi se hospital aa jaaiye...Kisi ki jindagi ki sawal hai.

Sameer:- Ye ethics ke khilaaf nahi hai...Uss din to bahut lecture de rahi thi tum.

Nisha:- Please sir...Ye kisi ki jindagi ki sawal hai...Aap please hospital aa jaaiye.

Sameer:- Nahi mai hospital nahi aaunga...Tum patient ko lekar mere clinic me aao...5 minute dur hai hospital se...Address mai send kar raha hu.

Nisha:- (In her mind) Clinic me...Paise ke liye kuch bhi karega...Huh.

Hospital me kya problem hai sir.

Sameer:- Dont worry...Aaj paise ke liye nahi bula raha hu clinic me jaise tum samajh rahi ho...Hospital me kisi ne mujhe iss haalat me dekh liya to legal case ho sakta hai.

Clinic me chance kam hai...Waise bhi mai aise ilegal surgery to nahi karta...Lekin kisi ki jindagi ki sawal hai isliye.

Fir Sameer address sent kar deta hai message me.

Aur wo khud ko surgery ke liye khud ko taiyaar karne laga.

बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।।

अतुल घर मे केवल अपनी मां से मिला। भाभी ने तो मौका मिलने के बाद उसपर कसीदे कस दिए कि वो मोटा हो गया है। लेकिन माँ वो हमेशा ऐसी ही होती है। रियल जिंदगी हो या रील ज़िन्दगी। मा को हमेशा बाहर रहने वाला बेटा दुबला ही दिखता है। यही तो माँ की ममता होती है। अपने भतीजे से बहुत अच्छे से पेश आया। गौरव ने बात करनी चाहिए तो अतुल भड़क गया।।

उठाने अपनी दीदी के कमरे में किए को देख लिया जिसके कारण वो चौक गया। अब उसने क्या देख लिया ऐसा जिसके कारण उसे चौकना पड़ा।।

दूसरी तरफ एक अति आवश्यक मामला सामने आया है जिसमे मरीज के ऑपरेशन के लिए समीर की जरूरत है क्योंकि एक वही है जो इस ऑपरेशन को कर सकता है, लेकिन समीर ने अस्पताल जाने से मना कर दिया है और मरीज को अपने क्लोनिक बुलाया है।

 

[Mahi Maurya]

UPDATE 62​

Atul:- Di...Nidhi Di

Atul ki aawaj me thoda gussa aur thoda hairaani tha.

Nidhi:- Bahut jaldi aa gaya...Chal aa baith.

Atul:- Ye sab kya hai...Itna bada jhuth.

Nidhi:- Baith pehle.

Fir Atul andar bed me jaa kar baith jaata hai...Lekin gussa tha ki badhta hi jaa raha tha.

Fir Nidhi Atul ko gaur se dekhne lagti hai...Khush to bahut thi wo Atul ko itne saalo baad dekhne se...Aankho me kuch boond aansu bhi aa gaye.

Lekin fir Atul ka ye roop...Chehra kitna murjha sa gaya tha...Aankho me ek khaalipan bahut kuch keh raha tha...Di ko samajhte der nahi laga ki aaj bhi uska bhai wohi khada hai jaha wo 5 saal pehle tha.

Nidhi:- (Atul ke baalo par haath ferte hue) Tu to abhi tak waisa hi hai...Apna thoda to khayal kar.

Di ki aawaj me dard tha jo har kisi ko hota hai apno ko aise haal me dekh kar.

Atul:- (Dard ke saath) Jeene ki vajah hi chali gayi...Abb kyu khayal karu aur kiske liye?

Atul ne Di ki aankho me dekhte hue kaha.

Nidhi:- Himmat rakh...Sab thik ho jaayega.

Atul:- Aapko aisa lagta hai...5 saal ho gaye...Har dua har ummeed bekaar ho gayi...Abb to aadat ho gayi hai aise jeene ki...Bas ek dua abb bhi nikalta hai iss toota hua dil se...Meri Nishu...Jaha bhi rahe khus rahe.

Aankho me aansu aur hontho me muskaan...Ajeeb saa haalat ho gaya tha Atul ka.

Di fir Atul ki aansu ponchne lagti hai...Atul picche hat jaata hai.

Atul:- Lekin aapne bahut galat kiya...Mujhse jhuth.

Nidhi:- Yaad hai tujhe tere vaade...Har rakhsabandhan me yahi vaada karta tha...Di iss raakhi ka mai maan rakhunga...Aap par kabhi koi takleef aane nahi dunga...Aap jaha kahi bhi ho ek aawaj dena sab kuch chhod kar aa jaaunga.

Aaj wohi to kiya maine...Aaj mujhe apne bhai ki jarurat hai aur Maa ko ek beta ki...Kya abhi bhi tujhe bulaana galat hai?

Atul:- Lekin tabiyat kharaab hone ki bahana? Ek aawaj de deti aa jaata.

Nidhi:- Sach me? 5 saal se yahi sunn rahi hu ki kal aaunga, parso aaunga, jaldi aaunga...Lekin naa hi kal aata hai, naa parso aur naa hi tu...Aati hai to sirf ek jhuthi ummeed.

Di ki baat se Atul ka chehra jhuk gaya.

Nidhi:- (Atul ke sir uthaate hue) Ye sir jhukne ke liye nahi hai.

Tere saath saath ham bhi tadap rahe hai 5 saalo se...Mujhe bhi apne bhai ki fikr hai...Maa ko apne beta ki...Tu kya chala gaya saara khushiyan hi chali gayi...Mai abbapne puraana bhai ko dekhna chaahti hu...Bas issi liye tujhe bulaya hai.

Atul:- Lekin mai kar bhi kya sakta hu...Dum ghutta hai mera yaha.

Nidhi:- Jaanti hu...Lekin kab tak...Kabhi na kabhi to aage badhna hi padega.

Atul:- Koshish to kar hi raha hu naa.

Nidhi:- Koshish...Kitna kaamyaab ho paaya tu iss koshish me? Dur ho kar tu aur bhi alag hota jaa raha hai ham sab se...Pehle thoda bahut baat bhi kar leta tha...Abb to wo bhi nahi.

Atul:- Aap to sab jaanti hai na?

Nidhi:- Jaanti hu...Aur ye bhi jaanti hu ki abb tujhe aise akele nahi rehne dungi...Tujhe aage badhna hai...Nisha bahut acchi thi...Aur mujhe bhi tum dono ki jodi bahut accha lagta tha...Lekin abb kya kar sakte hai...Sacchai se munh to nahi fer sakte...Nisha aage badh gayi hai...Tujhe bhi aage badhna hoga.

Atul:- Lekin badh nahi paa rah hu...Aap jaanti hai na kitna pyar karta hu mai Nishu se...Nisha mujhse dur ho kar bhi mere paas hi hai.

Jaha jaha Atul ka wajood hai waha waha Nisha hai...Mobile ke password se lekar Clinic ke naam tak...AN Clinic...Har book ke har pages me...White Coat me...Clinic ke har instrument me...Apne room ke diwalo me.

Apne Khaalipan me...Apne khwaab me...Ateet me...Yaad me...Khwahish me...Dhadkan me...Har jagah Nisha hai.

Yaha tak ki aap agar Nisha ko har jagah se hataa bhi do to wo mere saanso me hai.

Itne andar tak basi hai Nisha mujhme...Itna gehra hai hamaara pyar...Jab tak Nisha hai tab tak Atul ka wajood hai...Bin Nisha ke Atul kuch bhi nahi.


Atul ka pyar dekh Di ko kabhi Atul par garv hota to kabhi Atul ki haalat dekh rona aata.

Nidhi:- Kya tu Nisha ko bhula kar aage badh nahi sakta?

Atul:- Koshish kiya tha...Lekin ehsas hua ki agar aisa sochu bhi to ye pyar kaisa...Pyar kiya hai maine...Saccha pyaar...7 janmo me saath rehne ki kasam khaane wale thhe ham...Aur mera pyar itna kamjor kaise ho sakta hai ki issi janm me mai Nishu ko bhulaane ki koshish karu.

Fir Di Atul ko samjhaane ki naakaam koshish karti rahi...Apne bhai par to hamesha se garv tha unko...Aaj bhi tha.

Itna to jaan gayi thi wo ki Atul Nisha se badh kar aage kuch nahi sochega...Atul ke saare dard ko mehsus karte hue wo bhagwan se ek hi dua kar rahi thi, "Kaash wo Atul ko uski Nishu se milaade."

Next Day

Aarav:- Bahut tasty hai ice-cream...Aap bhi khaaiye na uncle?

2 minute me pura ice-cream chatt kar gaya Aarav.

Atul:- Thik hai...Lekin ek shart par.

Aarav:- Kya?

Atul:- Yahi ki tum mujhe Uncle nahi Chacha bulaaoge.

Aarav:- Ok Chachu.

Aarav ki maasum baato se Atul muskuraaye bina nahi reh paaya.

Wo ice-cream lene hi wala tha ki aage se 2 baccho ki aawaj sunaayi diya.

Saamne ek chhota ladka aur ek ladki thi.

Ladki:- Bhaiya mujhe bhi ice-cream khaana hai?

Ladka:- Lekin paise nahi hai mere paas.

Ladki:- Mujhe khaana hai khaana hai.

Fir ladki rone lagti hai.

Ladka:- Maa ko aane do...Fir khaa lena.

Ladki:- Nahi mujhe abhi khaana hai.

Ye dekh Atul do ice-cream le kar baccho ke paas chala jaata hai...Aur dono ko de deta hai.

"Thank you Uncle" Bacche bahut khus thhe aur unki khushi dekh Atul bhi khus ho gaya.

Fir Aarav ke saath wo bhi ice-cream khaane lagta hai.

"Jyada der to nahi hua." Ek jaani pehchaani aawaj Atul ke kaano par pada.

Turant mud kar Atul uss taraf dekhne laga.

Ek aurat thhi karib 30 saal ki...Wo dono baccho ko lekar jaa rahi thi...Achanak hi Atul ki munh se nikla,

Atul:- Nisha

Wohi chaal aur wohi aawaj.

Fir wo aurat aage bheed me gaayab ho gaya...Atul bhi bechain sa uss bheed me se Nisha ko dhundne laga.

Kuch der baad wo aurat fir se dikhaayi di bacche ki saath...Lekin iss baar Atul ko sirf niraasha hi mila.

Wo aurat Nisha nahi thi.

Atul:- (In his mind) Hallucination...46 baar...Paagal ho gaya hu tumhaare pyar me.

Har jagah dikhti ho tum...Paas se ho kar nikal jaati ho...Pal bhar me karib aati ho aur pal bhar me gaayab...Kabhi to theher jaao...Jindagi bhar ke liye...Kabhi to pura karo saath bhar rehne ki kasam...Saath jeene ki kasam.

Please Nishu, Please...Jee nahi sakta tumhaare bin.

बहुत ही बेहतरीन।
अतुल की दीदी बिल्कुल ठीक है वो रक्षाबंधन के मौके पर उसे झूठ बोलकर बुलाया है उसने, क्योंकि अतुल हर बार आने के लिए बोलता है लेकिन घर नहीं आता। इसलिए माँ और बहन ने ऐसा किया।।

अतुल की हर बार में एक दर्द था और निशा के लिए बेपनाह प्यार , ऐसे प्यार करने वाले बहुत नसीब वालों को मिलते हैं जैसे निशा को अतुल मिला और अतुल को निशा मिली।। लेकिन दोनों की किस्मत में मिलना नहीं लिखा था इसलिए वो एक दूसरे से बिछड़ गए।।

 

[Mahi Maurya]

UPDATE 63​

Aaj kya complaint hai Dr. Nisha?

Nisha:- Complaint nahi sir...Thank you bolne aayi thi.

Sameer:- Thank you !!! Kis liye?

Nisha:- Wo aap itne nasha me hone ke baad bhi surgery ke liye taiyaar ho gaye...Aur itni complicated case ko bhi successfully handle kiya...Wo bhi bina koi paise ki...Agar aap nahi hote to...

Sameer:- To fir isme Thank you ki kya baat hai...Farz tha mera.

Nisha:- Sir shaayad aapke baare me galat sochti thi...Talented surgeon to aap hai hi saath me dil bhi hai aapke paas...Patient ke dard ko samajhte hai aur unke saath kaise counselling karna hai ye sab aapko pata hai.

Sameer:- Itna bhi galatfehmi me mat rahiye madam...Aaj bhi waisa hi hu jaisa aap samajhti thi...Money minded.

Nisha:- To fir kal kya tha...Free ka surgery.

Sameer:- Ha kal free me surgery kiya tha...Vajah hai meri Maa...Maa kehti hai paisa to aata rehta hai...Kabhi kisi jarurat mand logo ki muft me ilaaj karo...Dua milega.

Bas issi vajah se month ke last date hospital se leave le kar apne clinic me rehta hu...Aur kal wohi lucky last date tha.

Nisha:- Ye to bahut acchi baat hai...Aap ko nahi lagta ki jitne ilaaj aap muft me karenge utna hi duaa jyada milega.

Sameer:- (Smiling) To fir kamaaunga kaise...10 saal ka medical career...Din aur raat ki mehnat...Kya samaj sewa ke liye hai?

Paise sabhi ko acche lagte hai...Aur ye meri jarurat bhi hai...Mera maanna ye hai ki imaandaar raho apne duty se aur jitna kama sako kamaao.


Please dont mind...Aapko nahi keh raha hu...Lekin aap jaise log hote hai wo kehte hai ki gareeb ko jitna ho sake utna madad karo...Acchi baat hai.

Lekin problem ye hai ki akshar jo log ye baat kehte hai wohi log gareeb aur jarurat mand ka khoon chusne ki koi mauka nahi chhodte.

For eg, Agar SRK ko kisi movie me kuch crore paisa mile to log kahenge, "Itna paisa le kar kya karega...Kuch donate karega to kisi ka bhala ho jaayega." Lekin ye log wohi hote hai jinke saamne koi 2 rupaiya ke liye haath failaaye, roye aur cheeke ye laat maar kar nikal jaate hai.

Advice dena aashaan hai lekin jab khud par aaye to karna bahut mushkil.

Waise bhi aaj ye duniya itna teji se badh raha hai waha survive karne ke liye paisa chaahiye naa ki dua...Dua to bas apne Maa ki maan rakhne ke liye aur mental satisfaction ke liye karta hu.


Nisha bas Sameer ki baat sun hi rahi thi...Tabhi Sameer ko phone call aata hai.

Sameer:- (On phone) Bas aa raha hu 2 min...Vodka ready rakhna.

What? Beer? Aaj sirf vodka...Thak gaya hu beer peete peete.

Ok...Bye...Aa raha hu.


(To Nisha) Accha Dr. Chalta hu.

Nisha:- Itna bhi nashe me mat rahiye...Apna career ke baare me to sochiye...Itne talented aur skillfull hai aap aur aap apni hi jindagi ko barbaad kar rahe hai nashe me.


Lekin Sameer kuch jawaab diye bina hi waha se nikal jaata hai aur sochne lagta hai.

Sameer:- (In his mind) Career...Ye ladkiya...Career ke baare me samjhaati hai...Ek thi jo sab kuch chhod kar chali gayi...Har vaade...Kasme...Sapne...Career to kya jindagi barbaad kar diya.

Aur ye Nisha...Kehti hai jarurat mando ki madad karo...Lekin mera kya...Jab mujhe jarurat thi to sabhi jinhe apna kehta tha bich me chhod kar chale gaye...Kisi ne madad nahi kiya...Mai hi jaanta hu kitni mushkil se apne bimaar Maa aur Papa ka ilaaj kar raha hu.

Duniya swarthi hai...Jeena hai to khudgarz bano...Apne liye jeeyo.




Atul jab Aarav ke saath apne ghar waapas lauta to saamne maujud shakhs ko dekh kar gussa saatve aasmaan me chaddh gaya.

Atul:- Gaanw basa nahi ki lootere pehle hi aa gaye.

Atul khud se hi badbadaate hue apne room ki taraf jaane laga.

Bhabhi:- Are devar ji...Kaha jaa rahe hai aap...Preeti aayi hai...Aapse milne.

Pehle to Atul Aarav ko dhundh raha tha...Lekin wo apne room me chala gaya tha...Fir

Atul gussa se apne bhabhi aur Preeti ko dekhta hai fir saamne Gaurav se.

Atul:- Samjha de apni biwi ko...Jyada chaaplusi naa kare.

Bhabhi:- Chaaplusi...Aap kehna kya chaahte hai?

Preeti:- Atul.

Atul:- Chup...Agli baar mere saamne bhi dikhi naa to...

Fir Atul waha se apne room me chala jaata hai.

Preeti Atul ko jaate dekhte reh jaati hai...Aaj bhi Atul ka nafrat waisa hi hai jaisa 5 saal pehle tha...Vaada ka pakka tha Atul...Bas yahi baat Preeti ko yaad aa raha tha aaj bhi.

बहुत ही बेहतरीन।
यहां तो सब प्यार जैसी बीमारी के शिकार हैं।। अतुल नेहा समीर अजय अंजली काजल प्रीति सबको प्रेम रोग ने घेर रखा है। समीर ने जो बात कही वो कड़वी जरूर थी लेकिन सोलह आने सच थी, डॉक्टर की जिंदगी होती ही ऐसी है। किसी की मदद करने में हमेशा आगे आना चाहिए।।

समीर को भी शायद किसी लड़की ने धोखा दिया है जिसके चलते वो ऐसा हो गया है नहीं तो वो एक काबिल डॉक्टर हैं।। अतुल के घर मे प्रीति नामकी कोई लड़की मौजूद है जिससे अतुल नफरत करता है। लेकिन इसके पीछे क्या कारण हो सकता है।।​

 

[Mahi Maurya]

UPDATE 64​

Alag jagah, alag maahaul aur alag raat...Lekin wohi dard, wohi muskaan aur wohi yaadein.

"Oucchhh" Issi aawaj se Atul hosh me aaya.

"Saala abb to cigarette bhi saath nahi de raha hai." Atul ne cigareete ki tukda ko fenk kar dusra jalaya.

Wo abhi bhi ghar ki ek kona ko ghure jaa raha tha...Ghar hi badal gaya tha...Atul ki family shift ho chuke the...Abb to Nisha ke saath saath Nisha ki ghar bhi yaadein hi ban kar reh gaya tha.

Atul ko fir se yaad aane laga ateet ki unn yaadein...Jaha chhath ke ek kone me dono premi jodi raat ke andhere me mil kar baatein karte thhe aur apne bhavisya ki sunhere sapne dekhte thhe.

Nisha:- So Mr. AK...Congratulations.

Atul:- Congratulations...Kyu?

Nisha:- Now we are in Internship...Doctor wali feelings aa rahi hai.

Atul:- Hmm Sahi hai...Abb kuch vakt ke liye no pahaai no study...Only doctor giri.

Nisha:- Tum padhaai se kabse darne lage.

Atul:- Kaun kambakht darta hai padhne se...Ham to darte hai...darte hai...darte hai.

Nisha:- Aage bhi to bolo.

Fir Nisha hasne lagi.

Atul:- Haso mat yaar ...Dialogue bhul gaya.

Nisha:- (Atul ke gaalo me pinch karte hue) Bahut hi funny ho...Issi liye tum par itna pyar aata hai.

Atul:- Kitna pyar?

Nisha:- Bahut jyada?

Atul:- To fir prove karo?

Nisha:- Kaise?

Atul:- Ek mitthi si kissi do.

Nisha Atul ke gaalo par pyar se kiss karti hai.

Nisha:- Kar diya prove.

Fir Nisha Atul ko dekhti hai...Atul Nisha ko ghur raha tha...Nisha bhi vajah se acchi tarah waakif thi.

Atul:- Gaal par nahi lips me. Lip to lip...Bahut din ho gaye.

Nisha:- Na Baba Na.

Fir Nisha chhath se jaane lagti hai.

Atul:- Kaha jaa rahi ho...Pehle kiss to deti jaao.

Nisha baato ko sun kar bhi unsuna kar deti hai.

Atul:- Accha...Tum nahi to koi aur hi sahi.

Atul ki iss baat par Nisha daud kar waapas aati hai.

Nisha:- (Ghur kar) Kaun?

Atul:- (With smile) Preeti...Abhi bhi mere aage picche ghumti rehti hai.

Atul muskuraate hue kehta hai...Usse pata tha Nisha ka reaction kya hoga...Aur Nisha sach me jal bhun jaati hai.

Nisha:- Naam mat lo uss chuddail ka.

Atul:- Chuddail nahi bahut cute hai wo.

Jawaab me Nisha Atul ko maarne lagti hai.

Nisha:- Aur lo uska naam.

Atul:- Sorry...Sorry...Please...Please.

Nisha:- Uss chuddail ki aas paas bhi dikhe naa to taang tod dungi.

Abb Nisha maarna band kaarti hai.

Atul:- Fir mujhe dosh mat dena ki langda pati mila tumhe.

Atul ne bahut hi maasumiyat se kaha to Nisha ek dum se sharmaa gayi.

Nisha:- (Blushing) Tum bhi naa.

Atul:- Ho jaaye iss baat par ek meethi meethi kissi.

Fir dono premi apne pyar ko kiss ke jariye jaahir karne lagte hai...Kiss karte vakt bhi dono sirf ek dusre ke pyar mehsus kar rahe thhe.

Kiss ke baad hamesha ki tarah Nisha waha se bhaag jaati hai...Aur Atul picche khada muskuraata hua reh jaata tha...Aise hi chhote chhote pal dono ke pyar aur bhi gehra hota jaa raha tha.


"Aahh Aahh" Ek khaansi ke saath Atul fir se hosh me aata hai.

Pehle ke pal jitna suhaana thha abb ye yaadein utna hi dardnaak.

"Cigareete aur daaru to aise hi badnaam hai...Asli jaanlewa cheej to ye kambakht ishq hai...Adhuri ishq ki daastaan.

Atul ki aankhein fir bhar jaati hai.

Suni nighaawo se Atul chhath ki ek kone ko dekhe jaa raha tha iss jhuthi ummeed me ki shayad uski Nishu ki darshan ho jaaye...Shaayad.

Lekin sab jaante hue bhi wo ye nahi maan raha tha ki "Abb Nishu aur usse judi yaadein bahut dur jaa chuki hai...Abb wo kabhi nahi lautne wale."

Atul:- Nishu...Aa jaao yaar...Please aa jaao...Nahi jee sakta tumhaare bin...Akela ho gaya hu...Kamjor ho gaya hu...Jeene ki chaah bhi khatm ho gayi hai...Tumhaari yaadein hi hai jo mujhe jinda rakh rahi hai...Ek ummeed hai... "Mai aur meri Nishu, hamaara chhoti si aur pyari si duniya...Tum Rani aur mai tumhara Raja...Ek chhoti si duniya"...Bas yahi ummeed ki sahare jee raha hu.

Please aa jaao jaan...Kahi meri jaan naa nikal jaaye...Andar se aur bhi toot ta jaa raha hu...Jindagi ka bhi koi bharosha nahi...Baahar se dikhta kuch aur hu aur andar se kuch aur hu...Toot raha hu...Har pal mar raha hu...Dil ka dard badhta hi jaa raha hai...Tum nahi jaanti kaise 5 saal gujaare hai maine...Tanhaayi me har pal mar raha hu...Please laut aao kahi sach me naa mar jaau.

Please Nishu...Please jaan...Hamaare pyar ki khaatir...Hamaare kasam ke khaatir...Hamaare sapno ki khaatir...Hamaari sanjoyi hui uss chhoti si duniya ki khaatir...Please.

Abb Atul apne pair par bhi khada nahi ho paata...Wo wohi niche gir jaata hai.

Picche khadi Nidhi se apna bhai ki haalat dekha nahi jaata...Jaldi se wo aa kar Atul ko sambhaalne lagti hai. Ek baar wo Atul ki aankho me dekhti hai...Atul usse laachar nighaawo se dekh raha tha...Ek haara hua aashiq ki tarah.

बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।।

आपने तो रुला ही दिया। अतुल की हालत अब मुझसे भी देखी नहीं जा रही है। कितना दर्द में जी रहा है। कुछ तो करिए ऐसा की कुछ पल के लिए ही उसे आराम आ जाये।

 

[Mahi Maurya]

UPDATE 65​

"Kyu bhai? Kyu kar raha hai aisa? Apne saath aur ham sab ke saath?"

Atul ka haal dekh Nidhi bhi ro padi.

Atul:- Nahi Di...Aap mat royiye.

Atul fir Nidhi ki aansu ponchne lagta hai.

Nidhi:- Lekin apna aansu kyu nahi ponchta tu kabhi?

Atul:- Behne dijiye...Kabhi kabhi hi to behte hai...Warna aankho se to jaise aansu sukh hi gaye hai.

Atul ne muskura kar kaha lekin muskaan ke picche ka dard Nidhi se chupa nahi paaya.

Nidhi:- Himmat rakh bhai...Vakt ke saath sab thik ho jaayega...Lekin khud ko itna taklif to mat de.

Atul:- Kya aapko sach me aisa lagta hai? Vakt sab thik kar dega...Vakt bhi mujhse aise ruth gaya hai jaise kismat...5 saal ho gaye hai Di lekin jo ghaaw hai dil me wo bharne ki jagah wo aur bhi gehra hota jaa raha hai...Aur iss naa bharne wali ghaaw jindagi bhar saath nibhaayega.

Atul chhath ka dusra kona me chala gaya...Aur aasmaan ki taraf dekh muskuraane laga...Usse aisa lag raha tha jaise ye "Chaand sitaare bhi uski iss haalat aur naa kaamyaabi par has rahe hai."

"Koshish to kar?" Tu haar kaise maan sakta hai? Mera bhai aisa nahi hai...Jo sochta hai kar ke dikhaata hai...Yaad hai mere kehne par hi tune MBBS padha tha.

"10th me tha tu...Mai bhi Doctor banna chaahti thi...Papa ne saaf mana kar diya...Aur mai kuch bol bhi nahi sakti thi...Scholarship bhi nahi mila tha...Kaise Papa ko mana sakti thi itne paiso ke liye jab unhone saaf inkaar kar diya tha.

Aur bas issi vajah se tune 11th se hi MBBS ko target kar ke din raat mehnat karne laga...Aur pehli baar me hi tujhe scholarship mil gaya...Fir Papa ke khilaaf jaa kar Doctor ban gaya tu.

Jaanta hai tujh se jyada khus mai thi...Meri adhuri iccha ko tune pura kiya...Aisa laga jaise mai naa sahi lekin mera bhai to Doctor banega."

Agar meri itni chhoti khwahish ke liye itna kar sakta hai tu fir meri iss khwahish ko kyu pura nahi karega jiski bahut jarurat hai.

Meri khwahish yahi hai ki tu jindagi me khush reh...Tanhaayi aur aisi dard se baahar nikal aur khul kar jindagi to jee."

Atul:- (With smile) Di aapko mai kabhi mana kar sakta hu kya? Bacchpan se le kar aaj tak aap mere saath hai aur hamesha rahengi...Kya kuch nahi kiya hai aapne mere liye...Bachpan me ek dost ban kar mujhe sambhala...Galtiya karta tha to Maa aur Papa se bachaati thi aur ilzaam khud par leti thi...Aur jawaani me kadam rakha to har buri aadat se dur rakha...Aur aaj tak aapne har mushkil vakt me saath nibhaya yaha tak ki aaj bhi.

Aap, Maa aur mera duty...Inke alawa mera abb hai hi kaun...Aapki khwahish puri karna mai bhi chaahta hu...Aakhir kaun chaahta hai itna dard me jeena? Lekin dard aur ye yaadein jo hai wo kabhi saath hi nahi chhodti.

Lekin koshish karunga Di...Koshish karunga...Jaise bhi aage badhne ki.


Atul ki iss baat par Nidhi kuch der sochti rahi...Usse samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya ye baat puchna sahi hai? Himmat kar ke pucchne ka faisla kiya.

Nidhi:- Bhai tu shaadi kar le...Fir sab thik ho jaayega.

Nidhi ne keh to diya lekin ye baat Atul ke liye kisi jhatka se kam nahi tha.

Atul:- Nahi.

Fir Atul dusre kone me chala gaya...Chehra me hairaani aur gussa ka mila jula bhaaw tha.

Nishi:- Aakhir kab tak? Umar bhi ho gaya hai abb to...30 ke karib ho gaya.

Lekin Atul chup hi raha.

Nidhi:- Nisha mujhe bhi acchi lagti thi...Bilkul "Made for each other" lagte thhe...Maine bhi bahut koshish kiya tha tum dono ke liye...Lekin abb ek hi jagah par to nahi reh sakta na tu bhi...Aage badhna to padega naa.

Atul:- Nisha ek vajah hai shaadi naa karne ki...Iske alawa mai khud bhi taiyaar nahi hu...Aur agar kisi se shaadi kar bhi liya to uski jindagi barbaad ho jaayega...Ye sirf naam ki shaadi hoga aur kuch nahi...Aise me kaun karna chaahega mujhse shaadi?

Aur saath hi mai bhi jabardasti ke shaadi aur jimmedaari ke bojh me nahi jee sakta.

Nidhi:- Ek ladki hai mere najar me jo tujhse shaadi karna chaahti hai...Bas jarurat hai to tujhe iss rishte ko vakt dene ki.

Atul:- Kahi aap Preeti ke baare me to nahi bol rahi hai?

Atul ne Nidhi ko ghurte hur pucha.

Nidhi:- Nahi...Uske saath to sochna bhi mat...Mai to....

Atul bich me hi bol pada.

Atul:- Nahi Di...Mujhe iss baare me kuch baat nahi karna...Aapki khwahish jarur pura karunga...Lekin bina shaadi ke bhi khush rahuna.

Maine khud se hi vaada kiya tha, "Nisha ke alawa kisi ke baare me sochunga bhi nahi." Abb aise me khud ki najro me gir jaaunga...Mera Kasam ka koi mol nahi rahega...Khud me hi ghut ghut kar mar jaaunga.

Aap mujhe khus dekhna chaahti hai na...To force mat kijiye...Aap hi sochiye "Khud ki najro me gira hua insaan kabhi khus reh paayega?" Thoda sa vakt dijiye...Koshish karunga jeene ki lekin Shaadi ke liye force mat kijiye.

Nidhi bhi samajh gayi ki Atul uski ye baat nahi maanega...Jor jabarjasti karne ka bhi koi matlab nahi.

Wo bas Atul ko hi dekh rahi thi...Atul chup tha aur iss shaadi ki baat sun kar dukhi bhi tha.

Tabhi Nidhi ko phone aata hai.

Atul:- Kiska phone hai?

Nidhi:- Tera bhanja...Lekin tujhe to kisi se koi matlab hi nahi.

Nidhi majaak me kehti hai tab Atul ko ehsas hota hai aur khud ke sar par maarta hai...Sach me usne apne alawa kisi se acche se baat bhi nahi kiya tha.

Atul:- Sorry.

Fir Nidhi phone uthaati hai..Aur kuch der phone karne ke baad Atul ko phone deti hai.

Atul bhi kuch der apne bhanja aur Jiju se baat karta hai...Bhanja se baat karte vakt uski maasum baato me Atul ki khoyi hui hansi fir se laut aati hai.

Ye dekh Nidhi ko bhi thoda thoda samajh me aata hai ki abb usse kya karna chaahiye.

Fir Nidhi se kuch der baat karke Atul apne room me chala jaata hai.

Iss baar uska dil halka ho jaata hai Nidhi se baat kar ke...Usse iss baat ki khushi tha ki uske paas bhi koi hai jo usse har haal me saath denge.

Apne room me pahunch kar.

Atul:- Dekha na Nishu...Abb shaadi ki baatein chal rahi hai...Di ki bhi koi galti nahi...Abb to har koi ye sawaal pucchega...Aur mai kya kya jawaab dunga aur kitno ko jawaab dunga?

Shaadi karne ji soch bhi kaise sakta hu...Aakhir mera Kasam ka kya? Mera vaada ka kya? Mere sapne me tum ho...Sirf tum...Tumhaare alawa kisi aur ke saath jindagi ka soch bhi nahi sakta...Tumhara tha aur tumhaara hi rahunga...Always love you jaan.


Dusri taraf ek ghar ke chhat me do aankhein aise thhe...Jo kahi khoye hue thhe aur aansu ki kuch boond se bhing gaya tha...Dil tha ki aaj kuch jyada hi bechain ho raha tha...Kisi ki yaado me...Kisi ki yaado me!!!

बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।

अतुल की हालत निधि से देखी नहीं जाती इसलिए वो अतुल को शादी करने की सलाह देती है लेकिन अतुल साफ इंकार कर देता है। अब यहां पर अतुल भी अपनी जगह सही है वो किसी लड़की की जिंदगी अपने चक्कर मे नरक नहीं बनाना चाहता है। निधि भी अपनी जगह सही है, क्योंकि उसे अपने भाई की उदासी और दर्द देखा नहीं जा रहा है।।

 

[Mahi Maurya]

UPDATE 66​

Aap abhi tak nahi soye? Aur khidki ke paas kya kar rahe hai?

Aadhi raat me Atul ke Papa ko khudki ke paas dekh kar uski Maa boli.

A. Dad:- Kuch nahi bas aise hi?

A. Mom:- Aap cigarette pee rahe hai?

A. Dad:- Please aaj mana mat karo.

Itna keh kar Atul ke Papa cigarette ka ek kas lagaate hai aur suni aankho se baahar dekhte hue dhua fenkte hai.

A. Mom:- Aap Atul se baat kyu nahi karte?

A. Dad:- Kya lagta hai tumhe...Wo mujhse baat karega...Yaha aane ke baad mujhe ek najar dekha tak nahi usne...Nafrat karta hai mujhse...Aur mujhme itna himmat nahi hai ki uske saamne jaa saku.

Atul ki Maa kuch nahi kehti...Haalaat ko dekh kar unhe bhi rona aa raha tha...Kaha wo apne ghar me khushiyon ka sapna dekhti thi...Khwahishein thi ki ghar ke sabhi log me pyar rahe.

Lekin darar iss tarah pad gaya tha ki Ek Beta apne Baap se nafrat karta hai...Baap dusre beta se gussa hai...Didi apne bhai se nafrat karti hai...Aur sabse badi baat ki wo apne bete ko aise Devdaas jaise dekh bhi nahi paa rahi hai...Maa ko majbur me chaahte hue bhi ye sab dekhna pad raha hai...Abb bas ek ummeed hi hai ki sab thik ho jaaye...Sirf Ummeed.

A. Dad:- Jaanti ho kitna badnaseeb hu mai...Bahut badnaseeb baap hu...Apna beta aur beti ke liye bahut kuch socha tha...Unke liye accha hi karna chaahta tha...Lekin anjaane me itni badi galti kar diya...Apni beti se uski sapna chheen liya...Beta se nahi chheen paaya to usse uski jindagi hi chheen liya...Wo bhi anjaane me...Abb to khud se hi nafrat hone lagi hai!

A. Mom:- Nahi....

A. Dad:- Mujhe bolne do...Aaj tak chup hi hu...Kahi iss khaamoshi me hi ghut kar mar na jaau.

Naa hi mai apne beta ko samajh paaya aur naa hi usne mujhe samjhaya.

Hamesha maine Atul me ek josh dekha tha...Bahut garv tha mujhe apne beta par...Aisa lagta tha ki ye bada ho kar kuch karega...Mehnat karega naam kamayega.

Jo mai nahi kar paaya ye wo kar dikhayega...Jaanti hi ho tum kitni mehnat se maine ek business start kiya...Socha mera beta isse aage badhayega...Aur uss mukaam tak le jaayega jo koi sirf soch hi sakta hai...Itna kaabiliyat tha usme.

Lekin usne saaf mana kar diya...Kaha ki Doctor banega...Lekin jis ghar me Gaurav jaisa naalaayak beta ho uss ghar me sukh shaanti kaise rahega.

Aur mai bewkoof bhi uski baato me aa gaya...Kehta tha Doctor banne ke baad itna paisa nahi hoga jitna business me hai...Mehnat aur Competition jyada hai aur kamaai kam....Nidhi ko bhi issi baat ke liye mana kar diya tha maine.

Lekin Atul usko mana nahi kar paaya...Man mutaaw hua lekin Atul ko rok nahi paaya...Atul bhi mujhse naraaj rehne laga...Bataya to bhaut baar usne ki wo Doctor kyu banna chaahta hai lekin samjha nahi paaya...Aur mai bhi samajh nahi paaya...Aur ye naarajgi yaha tak badh gaya ki aaj Baap Beta me itni duriyan hai.

Aur mera mentality...Shayad mai galat tha...Sochta tha Paisa hi khushiyan de sakta hai...Jitna kamayega utna khush rahega...Aur soch bhi puraani...Yahi maanta aaya ki business me hi sabse jyada paisa hai.

Aur duriyan badhaane ki kaam me Gaurav ne koi kami nahi rakha...Mai uski baatein maanta gaya aur Atul ko galat samajhte gaya.

Yaha tak ki usko uske pyar se alag bhi kar diya...Mujhe Nisha se koi problem nahi tha aur naa hi unke pyar se...Atul ke liye fir bhi Nisha ke Papa ke saamne jhuk jaata lekin Gaurav aisa hone de tab na.

Mai wo sab paap karta gaya jo Gaurav karwata raha...Aur mai Atul ki najro me girta gaya...Samajh me ye baat tab aaya jab Atul yaha se dur chala gaya.

Aaj pata chal raha hai pausa hi sab kuch nahi hota...Rishto me pyar aur khushiyan hona chaahiye.

Mera beta Doctor hai aaj bahut garv mehsus hota hai...Aaj log mujhe Doctor ke Pita ke roop me jaante hai aur izzat bhi kuch aur hai...Isse jyada khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai...Lekin ye sab baaton ka ehsas hua bhi tab jab bahut der ho gaya hai.

A. Mom:- Ye baat aap Atul ko kyu nahi bataate? Wo samajh jaayega.

A. Dad:- Bata kar bhi kya karunga...Kya uski khushiyan laut aayega?

Aur baat karne ki himmat bhi to nahi hai...Jab ubhi uska udaas chehra dekhta hu iska jimmedaar khud ko maanta hu.

A. Mom:- Lekin...

A. Dad:- Nahi rehne do...Shayad yahi saja hai mera.

Lekin tum se kuch maangna chaahta hu...Atul ki khushi.

Kisi tarah usko sambhaal ko...Bahut tuta hua hai wo...Pata nahi kab kya ho jaaye? Kisi tarah ghar basa do uski?

Ek bojh kam ho jaayega jindagi se.

Ye kehte vakt Atul ki Papa ki aankho me kuch boond aansu bhi aa gaye.

Wo jaldi se room se baahar nikal gaye...Apne patni ke saamne roo bhi nahi sakte thhe...Akele me aa kar unhone apne aansuo ko behne se nahi roka...Aaj unhone apne khaamoshi aur aansu ki baandh ko tod diya lekin fir bhi unka dard aur paschataap kam nahi ho raha tha...Hamesha ki tarah abhi bhi wo apne aap ko bahut majbur mehsus kar rahe thhe.


Next Day


Agli din Atul aise hi baahar nikla tha ghumne ke liye...Raat bhar ki tanhaai aur ghum se baahar nikalne ke liye.

Baahar aise hi baajaar me ghum raha tha ki saamne ek bheed dikhi...Wo bhi bheed me ghus gaya saamne ka najaara dekhne.

Lekin usne aage jo bhi dekha wo uske hosh udaane ke liye kaafi tha...Dil me dard ki lehar utth gayi...Din me bhi abb usse apni ateet yaad aa gaya.

Saamne ek insaan thhe...Sharir khun se lathpath...Behoshi ke haalath me apne jindagi se lad rahe uss insaan ko pehchaane me Atul ko vakt nahi laga.

Munh se itna hi nikla. "Oh my God!!! Nisha ke Papa."

Nafrat ka bhale hi koi inteha nahi tha...Lekin ek doctor ki farz aur Nisha ki yaad aate hi saamne ka najaara dekh uska dil bhi kaampne par majbur ho gaya.

बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।

तो आज अतुल के पापा को अपनी गलती का एहसास हो ही गया कि उन्होंने कितना गलत किया है अतुल के साथ। ऊपर से उन्हें गौरव की हकीकत भी पता चल गई थी। उन्हें पश्चाताप हो रहा था अपने किये पर, लेकिन तब तक इतनी ज्यादा देर हो चुकी थी कि इस गलती को सुधारा नहीं जा सकता था।।

अतुल के पापा के दुखों का इस समय पारावार नहीं था। बेटा और बेटी की नफरत झेल रहे थे वो। गौरव की बातों में आकर उन्होंने अपना हंसता खेलता परिवार खुद ही उजाड़ दिया।। उधर निशा के पापा की दुर्घटना में लहूलुहान हो गए हैं जिन्हें देखकर अतुल के मन मे नफरत ने घर कर लिया, लेकिन वो डॉक्टर के फ़र्ज़ के आगे मजबूर हो गया।।​

 

[Mahi Maurya]

UPDATE 67​

"Aap kab baat karenge Atul aur Preeti ki rishte ke liye?"

Gaurav ki biwi Riya ne Gaurav se pucha.

Jawaab me Gaurav kuch der Riya ko gusse se dekhta hai.

Gaurav:- Baat karu aur mai...Abhi samjha raha hu tum apni behan ko bhej do yaha se...Agar kisi ko uss ki vajah se koi problem hua to mujh se bura koi nahi hoga.

Riya:- Aap gussa kyu ho rahe hai...Preeti Atul se pyar karti hai...Aur shaadi ki baat karenge to kya galat hai.

Gaurav:- Iss pyar ki to.....

Kyu mujhe gaali dene par majbur kar rahi hai.

Tu apne kaam se matlab rakh...Jindagi me pehle hi itne galat kaam karwa chuki hai.

Riya:- To kya aap achanak se saadhu ban gaye...Jaante hai na kuch bhi karo apne liye karo...Apne liye jeeyo.

Gaurav:- Jindagi me bahut se galat kaam kiya hai lekin aurat par kabhi haath nahi uthaya...Agar jarurat pade to tujh jaisi aurat ki jaan lene se bhi piche nahi hatunga.

Baar baar samjha raha hu mujh se dur hi reh aur faaltu ki baat mat kar.

Itna keh kar Gaurav room se baahar nikal gaya.




Aaram se...Abhi aapko rest ki jarurat hai.

Nisha ki Papa ko hosh me aate aur halchal karte dekh Atul ne kaha...Man hi man usne bhagwaan ko shukriya kaha.

Jaise hi Nisha ki Papa ne aankh khola saamne Atul ko dekh unhe ek jhatka sa laga...Vishwas nahi hua to aankho ko band kar ke fir khola lekin saamne Atul hi tha.

N. Dad:- Tum?

Fir Atul kisi tarah Nisha ke Papa ko unke accident ki baare me bata deta hai.

Nisha ki Papa hairaani se usse dekh rahe thhe.

N. Dad:- Tum mujhe yaha lekar aaye?

Atul:- (Muskura kar) Uss vakt Dr. Atul ko aap mile thhe...Bas apna farz hi yaad tha usse uss vakt...Aur aapko patient ke roop me hi dekh raha tha wo...Makshad yahi tha aapko kisi tarah bachana...Aur shayad issi vajah se aap par koi khatra nahi aaya.

Agar Atul ko aap milte to shayad wo kuch der sochta kuch vakt leta lekin fir bhi aapko bachaane ki koshish karta.

Atul baatein to mushkuraate hue kar raha tha...Lekin baato me kahi dard chhupaa hua tha...Uski muskaan Nisha ke Papa ko asahaj mehsus karwa raha tha.

N. Dad:- Police case ka dar bhi nahi? Agar mujhe kuch ho jaata to tumhe saja ho sakta tha?

Atul:- (In his mind) Sajaa...Jindagi hi ek sajaa ban gayi hai.

Lekin wo kuch bolta nahi.


N. Dad:- Kaise ho?

Kuch der ki khaamoshi ko todte hue Nisha ki Papa bole.

Atul:- Bahut accha...Sab kuch sahi chal raha hai jindagi me...Jo kuch bhi khoya tha abb sab mil gaya hai...Kehte hai bhagwaan ke ghar der hai andher nahi.

Atul ne confidently kaha...Wo ek pal bhi Nisha ke Papa ke saamne tootna nahi chaahta tha.

(In his mind) Ha sab kuch mil gaya hai...Dard, tanhaayi, Paagalpan aur naa jaane bahut kuch.

Idhar Nisha ke Papa apne soch me hi vyast thhe.

Atul ne apna farz to nibhaya lekin abb usse waha raha nahi jaa raha tha...Har pal ke saath uski ateet ki yaadein taaja ho raha tha...Wo dard aur wo gussa jisse aaj tak Atul bhula nahi paaya tha...Usse bhi badhkar uski laachari...Aaj bhi laachaar tha wo ki kuch kar nahi sakta tha.

Atul jaake Nisha ke Papa ke pair chhu kar kehta hai.

Atul:- Abb ijaajat dijiye...Chalta hu.

Hicchakte hue Nisha ki Papa apna haath Atul ki sir par rakh dete hai aashirvaad dene ke liye.

Aur wo Atul ko kuch sawaal bhari nigaaho se dekhne lage.

Atul:- Kehna bhul gaya...Maine sirf aapko yaha tak vakt par laaya hi hai...Aapka ilaaj Rahul sir kar rahe hai.

Itna keh kar Atul gate se nikla hi tha ki wo fir se pucche mud kar Nisha ki Papa se puchta hai.

Atul:- Nisha kaisi hai?

Bahut himmat jutaane ke baad Atul ye sawaal puch paaya tha...Aur jawaab sunne ke liye uska dil dhadak raha tha.

N. Dad:- Wo bhi acchi hai.

Ye jawaab sun Atul ki khushi ki koi thikaana nahi raha...Aankho me khushi ki aansu ke saath wo room se baahar nikal gaya.

Atul:- (In his mind) Thanks God...Nisha ki khushi ki dua aur apni dard ne hi to jindaa rakha hai aaj mujhe...Kaash meri Nishu aise hi khush rahe...Hamesha hamesha ke liye.


Atul room se to nikal gaya lekin Nisha ke Papa ke paas sochne ke liye bahut kuch chhod gaya...Atul ka sanskaar uska farz sab kuch dikh gaya aaj unhe...Ek baar apne faisle par sawaal bhi kiya unhone...Lekin abb pachhtaane se kya hoga jab chhidiya chug gayi khet.


"Hey Romeo!" Ye sunte hi Atul picche mud gaya...Picche Rahul sir thhe.

Atul:- Sir...Aapko hi dhund raha tha.

Dr. Rahul:- Chal cabin me...Bahut saal ho gaya tujhse baat kiye.

Fir Atul Rahul sir ke saath unke cabin me chala gaya.

बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।

अतुल ने एक अच्छे डॉक्टर होने का फर्ज निभाया और निशा के पापा को बचा लिया, निशा के पापा को ये सोचने पर मजबूर कर दिया कि उन्होंने कितनी बड़ी गलती कर दी आतुर और निशा के रिश्ते को ठुकराकर।। देखते हैं आगे क्या होता है।।

 

[Mahi Maurya]

UPDATE 68​

Waah! Sir..Aaj bhi aapke haatho me jaadu hai...Itna complicated surgery ko bhi kitni aasani se kar diya.

Dr. Rahul:- 10 saal se yahi to karta aa raha hu...Padhaata bhi aa raha hu aur har case ke saath kuch seekh bhi raha hu.

Ye sab chhod aur bata kaha gaayab hai tu aaj kal...Phone number bhi change aur social media me bhi nahi hai tu.

Rahul sir ki baat sun Atul kuch der chup raha..Usse samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kaha se suru kare aur kaha khatm.

Dr. Rahul:- Koi problem hai kya?

Atul kuch der Rahul sir ko dekhta hai air fir.

Atul:- Sir abb aap se kya jhuth bolu...Life hi problem ban gayi hai.

Rahul sir Atul ki baat ko samajhne ki koshish kar rahe thhe...Tabhi unhe kuch yaad aaya.

Dr. Rahul:- Nisha kab aayegi? Uski Papa ka accident hua hai aur wo abhi tak nahi aayi yaha.

Atul:- Aayegi...Jab usse pata chalega...Shayad unhone call kar diya hoga...Aa jayegi kuch der me.

Dr. Rahul:- Unhone call kiya hoga? Matlab? Tune nahi bulaya.

Atul ne koi jawaab nahi diya.

Dr. Rahul:- Tum dono saath to ho naa?

Abb Rahul sir ki dhadkan bhi tej hone laga...Unhe dar tha Atul ki naa me jawaab sunne ka...Aur unka dar sach bhi ho gaya.

Atul:- Nahi sir...Bahut pehle hi ham dono alag ho gaye hai.

Rahul sir bas Atul ko hi dekh rahe thhe...Unhe yakin hi nahi ho raha tha Atul ki baaton par. Man me khud se hi sawal puch rahe the,

"Aakhir itna pyar karne wale jodi kaise alag ho sakte hai? Wo bhi itni aasani se?"

Atul ka udaas chehra dekh abb unhe bhi yakin hone laga tha.

Dr. Rahul:- Kab? Kaise? Aur kyu?

Ek hi pal me sab kuch jaana chaahte the wo.

Dr. Rahul:- Bata aakhir aisa kya hua?

Fir Atul ek lambi saans le kar bataana suru kar deta hai...Vakt ke saath saath Atul ke chehre me bhi kayi saare bhaaw aate jaate rahe.

Atul apni baat khatm kar ke ekdam se chup ho gaya...Wo bas niche ki taraf hi dekh raha tha.

Rahul sir ko bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki ye sab kya se kya ho gaya? Kabhi unhe lagta ki ye sab Atul ki galti hai to kabhi lagta ki haalaath ki vajah se ye sab ho gaya.

Atul ki haalath par unhe bhi bahut dukh ho raha tha...Atul sirf unka student hi nahi wo Atul ko apna bhai jaisa maante thhe.

Aur jis Atul ko wo itne din se dhund rahe thhe aaj mila bhi to kis haalath me...Ek devdas ke roop me...Ek haara hua insaan ke roop me...Jise wo ek bada, kaamyaab aur jimmedaar Doctor ke roop me dekhna chaahte the wo aaj insaan ke roop me hi haar gaya tha.

Dr. Rahul:- Kaash tune koshish kiya hota?

Atul:- Haalaath hi aisa ho gaya tha sir...Kuch samajh nahi paaya...Naa hi apno ki saajish aur naa hi vakt ko...Dekhte hi dekhte Nisha mujhse dur ho gayi.

Abb Atul ki aankho me aansu aane laga.

Atul:- Sir aapko Meri aur Nisha ki love story yaad tha? Bhule nahi aap?

Dr. Rahul:- Kuch batein aur kuch insaan ko kabhi bhula nahi jaata...Jaise ki tu aur tera friend circle.

Tera love story bhi unique tha...Jitne bhi couples ko dekha hai yaa to wo study me average hote hai yaa fir poor...Lekin tum dono ki to baat hi aur thi...Kabhi tu top karta tha to kabhi Nisha?

Padhaai ke alawa bhi sports aur baaki ke extracurricular activities. Jab bhi tum dono ko saath dekhta to ek hi baat munh se nikalta "Made for Each Other."

Jawaab me Atul sirf muskuraane ki koshish karne laga.


Dr. Rahul:- Nisha sach me lucky hai...Bahut kam log hi hote hai jo aaj kal saccha pyar karte hai...Aur bahut hi kam jo pyar me Devdas ban jaaye.

Atul:- Sir sach kahu to Nisha nahi mai lucky tha ki Nisha ne mujhse pyar kiya.

Sir aap to meri haalath jaante hai...Lekin mai Nisha ko bina dekhe bina mile hi yakin ke saath keh sakta hu...Nisha jaha kahi bhi hogi uska haal bhi mera jaisa hi hoga...Aur yahi baat mujhe aur pareshaan karta hai.

Nisha ka patience bhi alag hi level ka tha...Ye jaante hue bhi ki mujhe pyar me viswas nahi hai...Ye jaante hue bhi ki mera pehla pyar wo nahi Kajal thi...Ye jaante hue bhi ki mujhe uska pyar saayad hi kabhi dikhe.

Usne mujhse pyar karna kabhi nahi chhoda...Wo mujhse pyar karti rahi jab tak mujhe uska pyar nahi dikha.

Sir agar Nisha ki jagah mai hota to jal bhun kar usse alag ho jaata...Aur aisa hua bhi tha.

Sir kuch to baat thi Nisha me...Jisne mujh jaise naastik ko Devdas bana diya...Pyar karna sikhaya, Pyar ka matlab bataya...Pyar par viswas aur intejaar karna sikhaya.

Shayad yahi vajah hai ki aaj bhi mujhe Nishu ka intejaar hai...Ek jhuthi aash ke saath.


Rahul sir Atul ki baat ko bahut dhyan se sun rahe thhe.

Dr. Rahul:- Tera pehla pyar...Kajal?

Atul:- Ha sir...Isse bewkoofi hi keh lijiye lekin ye sach hai.

FLASHBACK​

What's going on Mr. AK?

Oh! Nisha tum?

Atul ne picche mud kar kaha.

Nisha:- Ha..Leki tum kya kar rahe ho...Itni raat ko...Raat ke 10:00 pm baj rahe hai.

Atul:- Kuch nahi..Bas aise hi...Thoda ghabraahat ho raha tha to aise hi chhat par aa gaya.

Nisha:- Tum bhi na...Exam ko lekar itna ghabra rahe ho...Result accha hi aayega.

Atul:- Nahi result ki koi dar nahi.

Nisha:- To fir?

Atul:- Abb tum se kya chupaana?

Nisha:- Bataao kya baat hai?

Atul:- I think I am in Love.

Atul ne himmat kar ke bata hi diya.

Jaise hi Nisha ne ye suna uska khushi ka koi thikaana hi nahi raha...Aaj Atul ko uska phar dikh hi gaya...Lekin ek shikaayat bhi thi, Atul ka propose.

Nisha:- Who is that lucky girl?

Formality ke liye Nisha ne pucha...Lekin usse kya pata tha ki Atul ka jawaab uskil dil ka tukda tukda kar dega.

Atul:- Kajal.

Himmat karke Atul ne jawaab diya...Jawaab sun kar Nisha ko yakin hi nahi hua...Atul ko pyar ka ehsas to hua lekin kaun...Kajal?

Man hi man toote hu dil se Nisha ne sawal kiya.

Nisha:- (In her mind) Mera pyar to tumhe dikhta hi nahi?

Lekin kar bhi kya sakti thi bechari...Naa hi roo paa rahi thi aur naa hi Atul ke liye khush ho paa rahi thi.

Atul:- Mujhe pata tha...Tum shocked ho jaaogi...Tumne socha tha ki mujhe kabhi pyar nahi hoga...Mai bhi aisa hi sochta tha...Lekin vakt aur soch ko badalte vakt nahi lagta.

Nisha:- Acchi baat hai.

Atul: Nisha ek help karogi?

Nisha:- Kya help?

Atul:- Pyar to karne laga hu Kajal se...Lekin kaise propose karu samajh me nahi aa raha hai...Ladkiyo ko kya pasand hai kya nahi ye bhi pata nahi? Please kuch suggest karo naa.

Sirf tum hi meri help kar sakti ho...Please.

Atul ki ye baat Nisha ki jakhm me namak ka kaam kar raha tha...Itna taaqat to nahi tha Nisha me ki wo iss baat me Atul ka help kar sake? Lekin Atul ko mana bhi nahi kar sakti thi...Aakhir kaar Atul ki khushi ke liye wo taiyaar ho gayi.

Nisha:- Ok...Thik hai.

Atul:- Thank you...Thanks a lot...Mujhe pata tha tum mera help jarur karogi...Once again Thank you.

Itna keh kar Atul excited ho kar Nisha ko gale laga liye Aur khush ho kar apne room me chala gaya...Aur picche chhod gaya tooti hui Nisha ko...Abb ek aansu hi tha jo Nisha ka saath de raha tha iss vakt.

Bhige hue Aankho se wo Atul ki room ki taraf dekh rahi thi bebasi se.

बहुत ही बेहतरीन।

ये क्या था। अतुल काजल से प्यार करता था। ये तो किसी झटके से कम नही है। निशा के लिए तो बिल्कुल भी नहीं। जिसे उसने प्यार करने का मतलब सिखाया उसी ने किसी और से प्यार कर लिया।। निशा का दिल ही टूट गया अतुल की इस बात को लेकर।।

 

[Mahi Maurya]

UPDATE 69​

Kis soch me khoye ho?

Atul:- Soch raha hu...Propose kaise karu...Kabhi vakt aur jagah sahi nahi hota to kabhi himmat hi nahi kar paa raha hu.

Pyar karna aashaan hai propose usse bhi mushkil.

Nisha:- Sidhe jaa kar bol do apni dil ki baat...Pyar kiya to darna kya?

Atul:- Ye sabhi dialogue film me hi acche lagte hai...Yaha hakikat me bahut fat rahi hai.

Nisha:- Kya baat hai? Kabhi kisi se nahi darne wala Atul ki baato me aaj dar?

Atul:- Insaan hu yaar...Bhoot pret aur pyar se dar lagta hai.

Nisha:- Mountain dew peeyo aur suru ho jaao...Dar ke aage jeet hai.

Atul:- Kya tum bhi...Meri help karne ki jagah mera hi majaak udaa rahi ho.

Hmm...Idea!

Nisha:- Kya idea?

Atul:- Mountain Dew se yaad aaya...Kajal ko dhokhe se vodka pila deta hu...Fir karta hu propose...Agar inkaar bhi karegi to nashe me gussa nahi hogi...Mujhe bahut dar lagta hai yaar uske gussa se.

Fir Atul Nisha ki taraf dekhne lagta hau...Nisha usse hi ghur rahi thi.

Atul:- Kaisa laga mera idea?

Nisha:- Bakwaash.

Abb Nisha se raha nahi jaa raha tha...Atul ki help karne ke liye uss par kya beet rahi thi ye sirf wohi jaanti thi...Lekin naa jaane kyu wo bhi Atul ke saath majaak karne lag gayi thi.

Anjaane me hi dono ka dosti itna gehra ho gaya tha ki Nisha ke liye Atul ka saamne rehna hi kaafi tha...Haalaath jaisa bhi ho Atul ka saath aur Atul ki baaton me aise kho jaati ki wo apna saara dukh dard bhul kar bas saamne chal rahe pal me jeene lagti thi.

Atul:- Please help karo naa.

Nisha:- Tum majaak kar rahe ho naa?

Dil se ek dua nikli ki Atul haa bol de.

Atul:- Nahi...Sach me pyar karta hu Kajal se.

Nisha:- Lekin aisa lag to nahi raha hai...Tum tabhi se majaak hi kar rahe ho...Abhi propose karne ki baat kar rahe thhe...Fir ussi baat ka majaak bana rahe thhe?

Atul:- Wo to bas dil ka dar ko halka karne ke liye...Abb serious hu.

Fir achanak se Atul serious dikhne laga aur saath hi Nisha ko yakin.

Kuch der ki khaamoshi ko tod kar Atul ne kehna suru kiya.

Atul:- I think...Itne vakt ho gaye ham dono ko saath me...Abb to ek dusre ko acche se jaante bhi hai...Pata nahi ye dosti kab pyar me badal gayi...Shayad Kajal mujhe pehle se hi acchi lagti thi...Lekin uss vakt ye ehsas kabhi nahi hua...Jab se pyar ko jaana hai, mehsus kiya hai tab pata chala "I love her. I love her so much."

Really its wonderful feeling...Bata nahi sakta din raat bas Kajal ke baare me hi sochna, uski fikr karna...Chhoti chhoti khushiyon me jeena.

Thanks a lot Nisha...Agar tum mujhe pyar ke baare me nahi bataati to shayad hi kabhi mujhe iss baat ka ehsas hota...You are my bestesttttt friend...Thanks a lot.

Atul excitement me bole jaa raha tha aur uski har baat Nisha ki dil me chubh rahi thi.


Nisha:- Mai kaise help kar sakti hu?

Atul:- Pyar to karta hu but abhi bhi jyada kuch pata nahi...Kajal ko kaise propose karu...Impress karu ye sab acche se jaanta nahi.

Please bataao na...Ladkiyo ko kya jyada pasand aati hai...Kaise wo impress hoti hai...Unki kya khwahish hoti hai ki koi unse aise propose kare.

Nisha:- Lekin mujhe kya pata Kajal ki choice kya hai?

Atul:- Tum apne baare me bataao...Yaa fir generally kisi ladki ki baare me...Sample samajh kar koshish karunga.

Nisha:- Ok thik hai...Raat me bataaungi...Tumhe kya karna hai?

Dil par patthar rakh kar Nisha ne haa keh diya...Ye baat wo bhi jaanti thi ki Atul uski pasand ki har cheej karega lekin fir bhi uska kabhi nahi ho paayega...Wo jaanti thi ki uski dil kis tarah se tootegi fir bhi wo taiyaar ho gayi...Shayad Atul ki khushi ke liye.

Atul ne ek baar fir Nisha ko excitement me gale laga liya.

Atul:- Thanks...Thanks a lot...Mujhe pata tha sirf tum hi mujhe help kar sakti ho.

Nisha:- Accha abb chalti hu...Ghar me kuch kaam hai.

Fir Nisha waha se nikal jaati hai...Atul kuch sochte hue usse piche se dekhta rehta hai jab tak wo Atul ki aankho se ojhal naa ho gayi...Usse thoda ajeeb bhi lag raha tha...Aur khud se hi ek sawaal "Kya wo sahi hai yaa fir sahi kar raha hai?"

Jiska jawaab abhi bhi usse pata nahi tha.


Ye sab kya chutiyapa hai?

Gusse se Ajay ne Atul ko pucha...Tab usse yaad aaya.

Atul:- Kya hua?

Ajay:- Tujhe nahi lagta tu kuch jyada hi badal gaya hai?

Atul:- Hmm...Sach me bahut badal gaya hu...I am in love...May be that's why.

Ajay:- Kis se? Kajal se?

Atul:- Yes bro.

Ajay:- Tujhe ye galatfehmi kyu ho raha hai?

Atul:- Kya galatfehmi?

Ajay:- Tujhe lagta hai tu Kajal se pyar karta hai?

Atul:- Haa.

Ajay:- Lekin tum dono ko dekhne se aisa bilkul bhi nahi lagta.

Atul:- Ye tu kaise keh sakta hai?

Ajay:- Common sense naam ki bhi koi cheej hoti hai...Notice kar raha hu 2 months se jab se tour se waapas aaye hai...Pyar jaisa kuch hai hi nahi tum dono ke bich.

Atul:- Abb tujhe mere baare me mujhse jyada pata chal gaya?

Ajay:- Jab tujhe khud ke baare me hi pata nahi to obviously mujhe hi jyada pata hoga...Agar pata hota to tu aise khud ko hi dhokha nahi deta.

Atul kuch jawaab nahi deta...Bas Ajay ko hi dekhta rehta hai.

Ajay:- Meri baat maan...Abb aur khud se jhuth mat bol...Maan le ki tu Nisha se pyar karta hai...Aur ye dikh bhi raha hai.

Atul:- Nahi aisa kuch nahi hai aur nahi ho sakta.

Ajay:- Kyu nahi ho sakta?

Atul:- Kyu ki Nisha kisi aur se pyar karti hai...Aur wo meri sirf best friend hai...Mai sirf Kajal se pyar karta hu.

Fir itna keh kar Atul bhi apne ghar ke liye nikal jaata hai...Ajay sirf dekhta hi reh jaata hai aur uski munh se itna hi nikalta hai.

"Bewkoof...Iska kuch nahi ho sakta."

Room me pahunch kar Atul 2 cigarette nikaal kar jalaa leta hai.

Atul:- Ye sala pyar bhi pata nahi kya hai...Kabhi kabhi to lagta hai pyar se jyada chutiyapa aur kuch nahi.

Nisha se kuch aur kehna chaahta hu kehta kuch aur hu...Ajay ki sawaalo ka jawaab dene ki himmat nahi.

(Cigarette ko dekh kar) Kajal proposal accept kare yaa naa kare lekin drugist jarur bana dega ek din.

Jab se pyar ka ehsas hua hai 2 months se har roj cigarette peene laga hu...Har weekend ghar walo se chhupa kar vodka...Pata nahi ho kya raha hai aur kyu ho raha hai.

बहुत ही बेहतरीन और शानदार महोदय।

अपने प्यार को अपने ही हाथों किसी और को देना इससे बड़े दुःख और दर्द की बात कोई हो ही नहीं सकती है।। निशा पर इस समय क्या बीत रही होगी वो तो बस निशा ही जानती है।। अतुल निशा से प्यार करता है ये अतुल के अलावा सब जानते हैं, लेकिन अतुल मानने को तैयार नहीं हैं।
देखते हैं आगे क्या होता है।।

 

[Mahi Maurya]

UPDATE 70​

At 10 pm

Baar baar Atul Nisha ki chhat ki taraf hi dekh raha tha...Aaj Atul se Nisha ka intejaar kiya bhi nahi jaa raha tha...Issi intejaar me chhat ki kayi chakkar kaat chuka tha wo.

Jab usse raha nahi jaata to chhat ke ek kone me jaake cigarette jala leta hai...Ek...Do...Teen...Chaar...Paanch.

Atul!!!

Picche se gusse se bhari Nisha ki aawaj se wo waapas hosh me aaya.

Nisha ko dekhte hi Atul ki hontho me muskaan aaya.

Atul:- Aa gayi tum.

Nisha ke paas jaa kar Atul ne bahut pyar se kaha.

Nisha:- Ye sab kya hai?

Atul ki haath ki taraf ishaara kar ke Nisha ne pucha.

Atul:- Oh ye to...Aise hi.

Fir Atul cigarette fenk deta hai.

Nisha Atul ko ghur rahi thi...Yaa fir Atul ko samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi...Naa jaane kitni badlaaw aa gaya tha Atul me.

Nisha:- Kab se?

Atul:- Bas kuch hi din.

Nisha:- Kyu?

Atul:- (In his mind) Pyar me haara hu...Aisa lag raha hai jindagi se hi haar gaya hu...Seh nahi paa raha hu ye dard...Nahi jee sakta aise jhuthe muskaan ke saath...Nahi jee sakta aise jhuthi umeed ke saath ki tum sirf meri ho...Mere liye bani ho aur mai tumhare liye.


Dar hai ki kahi pyar me haar naa jaau...Yahi dar sukoon se jeene nahi de raha hai.

Nisha:- Tum bhi naa...Buddhu ho ek number ke.

Nisha hanste hue boli...Makshad ek hi tha...Atul ko bhi hasaana aur iss ghutan se baahar nikaalna...Lekin Atul alag hi duniya me jee raha tha...Kuch bhi fark nahi pada uske bhaaw me.

Nisha:- Pehle propose karo...I am sure...Kajal jarur haa kahegi...Lekin tum kuch jyada hi dar rahe ho...Itna bhi pessimistic kya hona?

Nisha bhi abb yahi dua kar rahi thi ki kaash Kajal haa keh de...Propose se pehle hi Atul ka ye haal hai to agar usne naa keh diya to Atul ki kya haal hoga...Abb yahi dar Nisha ke dil aur dimaag me chaa ne laga.


Nisha:- So Mr. AK!!! Tabhi aap kya kar rahe thhe?

Atul:- Kya kar raha tha?

Nisha:- Kuch foonk rahe thhe?

Atul:- Ohh Cigarette...Wo to bas aise hi...Tension me.

Nisha:- So tension ka treatment cigarette hai...Mujhe to laga tha anti-anxiety drug hai?

Atul:- Kya tum bhi....

Atul isse aage kuch bolta usse pehle hi...

Nisha:- Ye aakhri baar tha...Aage se kabhi maine kabhi smoking karte dekha naa to....

Atul:- To tum se chhupaa kar smoking karunga.

Nisha:- Matlab smoking karoge? Agli baar pata chala na to jaan se maar dungi?

Atul:- (In his mind) Pehle hi mar mitaa hu.

Gusse me bhi tum khubsurat lagti ho.

Dhire se hi sahi dil ki baatein bolne se Atul khud ko rok nahi paaya.

Nisha:- Samajh gaye naa...Agli baar smoking kiya to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

Atul:- (In his mind) Agar itni pyar se kahogi to kuch bhi karunga.




Apne room me aa kar.

Atul:- (To himself) Kyu har raat ka ant (end) itni pyari nahi ho sakti? Kyu saccha pyaar ka yahi anjaam hota hai? Dil me dard, aankho me aansu aur jindagi bhar ki tanhaayi.

Majbur bhi iss tarah hu ki Nisha ko apni dil ki baat bata bhi nahi sakta...Bata nahi sakta kitna pyar karta hu mai usse? Pal pal toot raha hu.

Kitna khus tha mai...Kisi se pyar karne ka socha hi nahi tha...Bas jee raha tha...Abb pyar hua bhi to kisse? Nisha se? Ye jaante hue bhi ki wo meri kabhi ho hi nahi sakti ... Kya kismat hai?



Next Day


Aa gaya tu?

College pahunchte hi Ajay mil gaya...Fir dono saath me class jaate hai.

Atul:- Aaj kya ho gaya hai sab ko? Sab idhar udhar kar rahe hai?

Ajay:- (Kuch der Atul ko ghur kar) Aaj result hai.

Atul:- Ohh Haa...Bhul gaya tha.

Ajay:- Tujhe kya matlab result ki...Sure shot pass jo hai.

Atul:- Pass hona badi baat nahi hai.

Ajay:- Wo tere jaise ke liye?

Atul:- What tere jaise? Gf, Pubg aur Fb se baahar nikal...Mujhse accha marks laayega.

Ajay:- Bhai aaj to chhod de...Hamesha taana maarta rehta hai.

Atul:- Kaam hi aisa karta hai.

Fir dono sabhi dosto ke saath result lene jaate hai.

Atul:- Are waah...Pass ho gaya.

Ajay:- Lekin tujhse ye expect nahi tha...Kya kaha tha tujhse? Kuch bhi kar lekin Ravi se picche mat aana...Lekin tujhe beizaaati karwaane ki kuch jyada hi shaukh hai.

Atul:- Kya fark padta hai...Mujhe knowledge se matlab hai ranking se nahi...Expectation jitna tha marks bhi utna hi hai.

Fir dhire dhire sabhi ka result pata chalne lagta hai.

Atul:- 2nd, Kajal:- 5th, Anjali:- 9th, Ajay:- 40th.

Nisha abhi bhi result lene ke liye taiyaar nahi thi.

Atul:- So Miss Nisha...Mujhe to bahut samjha rahi thi ki dar ke aage jeet hai...Boliye mountain dew kaise peena chaahengi..Can me , Glass me ya Plastic me?

Nisha:- Tum chup raho...Pehle hi ghabraahat ho rahi hai aur tum ho ki majaak udaa rahe ho.

Ajay:- Aa gaya kamina.

Ravi ko aata dekh Ajay ne Atul se kaha.

Ravi:- Agli baar dekh lunga.

Atul:- Matlab tune top nahi kiya?

Ravi:- Nahi 3rd...Agli baar dekhunga.

Atul:- Best of Luck.

For Ravi gussa me waha se chala jaata hai...Har baar Atul se haarne se uska frustration bhi badhta hi jaa raha tha.

Atul ko to result se kuch khaas matlab nahi tha lekin Ajay sabhi ka result pata kar raha tha.

Itnr me Nisha daud kar aayi aur sabke saamne Atul ko gale laga liya.

Nisha khushi ke maare kuch bol to nahi rahi thi lekin uski marksheeet sab kuch bol rahi thi.

Atul:- Congrats Miss Topper.

Atul ki khushi ka bhi koi thikaana nahi tha...Itna khush tha wo Nisha ke liye ki usse apne topper hone par bhi nahi hota.

Duniya jahan se bekhabar Atul Nisha ko baahon me utha kar pura ek chakkar ghumaata hai...Bina kisi parwah ke ki kaun kya sochega aur samjhega.

Pal bhar ke liye apne dard aur gham ko bhul kar dono ek dusre me hi khoye thhe...Ek dusre par bahut pyar aa raha tha...Lekin kisi me taaqat nahi tha ki dil ki baatein jubaan tak laa sake.

बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।।

तो अतुल कशमकश में है कि वो काजल को प्यार का इजहार करे या नहीं क्योंकि उसके दिल मे निशा का कब्जा है और वो प्यार का इज़हार काजल से करने वाला है। मुझे तो लगता है कि अतुल खुद को तसल्ली दे रहा है कि जब निशा किसी से प्यार करती है तो वो भी काजल से प्यार कर ले।।

परीक्षा का परिणाम उम्मीद के मुताबिक ही रहा रवि फिर से अतुल को हराने में नाकाम रहा। इस बार निशा ने बाजी मारी। खुशी निशा के चेहरे पर देखते ही बनती थी।।​