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Next reply aapka hi hai. ...New update aaj shaam tak.Cham ji meri comment ki reply nahi
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Next reply aapka hi hai. ...New update aaj shaam tak.Cham ji meri comment ki reply nahi
Waiting for new update....
Thanks for your support and review Naina ji...Ajay bechara ka duniya hi loot gaya hai ...Aisa to hoga hi uske saath.I think, ajay like a angry young man...par itna gussa health aur wealth ke liye achhi nahi hai .... Ek baat achhi hui ki, hero ko love bali feeling a hi gai...
Aur ye kya Cham ji itni choti update... Update kam se Kam 5000words ka dijiye... Btw Brilliant update...
Welcome Sweet Pie dost on story...Jaan kar accha laga ki aapko story pasand aaya...Story me Magic aur Fantasy ke alawa sab hai...Ummeed hai aage bhi aapko story pasand aayega.Aabhi padhna shuru Kiya hai .....
I like Stories.... Jisme pyaar.... Emotions.... Magic.... Fantasy aur suspense ho.....
very nice....start... Atul Ko sapna aata hai.... Aur usme joh ladki hai.... Uske bare me sochta hai.... aur attitude.... Jis tarah see.... Bataya hai.... Superb....
Very nice update..... Jisme interest hi na ho us... Rah par chalke koi faydaanahi....
Waise yeh... college mein huva reaction.... Aage update mein patah.... Chalega...
Thanks for your support and reviews Sweet Pie ...Aapko story pasand aa rahi hai ye jaan kar bahut accha laga...Aage bhi aise hi saath bane rahiye.Update 3 nice hai....
Doh friends.... Kaise hoteh hai... Aur kaise ek dusre see.... Apni problem aur mann ki Baat kehte hai....
Superb..... Nice story line .....
Thanks Aryan bhai for your support and comment...Aise hi saath bane rahiye bhai.Awesome Update
Next Update kuch hi der me...Approx 20 minutes...Thanks for your comment.Waiting.... Champ ji ek din me kam se Kam 2-3 updates dijiye... Waiting waiting waiting waiting...
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