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Fantasy Khamoshi - The Angel & Devil

mashish

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PART – I : THE PERFECT ANGEL

CHAPTER 1: The light and the serpent

Samay se pahale, anant kaal tha. aur isake ant mein, yah sab bacha rahega. anant kaal ke lie ek bhagavaan ka samay hai. usaka saar aur usaka vaas. aur shaashvat shoonyata aur andhakaar mein, bhagavaan shuddh aur sabase shaktishaalee roop mein jaanate the ki ye do taakaten kabhee bhee astitv mein theen, ek doosare se khud ko mukt karane ke lie prabhu ke dil mein yuddh ladate hue.
brahmaand ka bhaagy, abhee tak banaaya jaana tha, is pradhaan ladaee mein tay kiya gaya tha, jab achchha ant mein majaboot saabit hua aur prabal hua. is prakaar, bhagavaan ne khud ke bheetar se buraee ko bhula diya aur use apane baen haath mein majabootee se kaid kar liya taaki vah kabhee bach na jae. ghrna aur niraasha kee ek tarkaheen chhaaya, judaee se kamajor aur haar se apamaanit, ek hee ichchha ke saath bhagavaan kee ungaliyon ke beech chupake. badala.
buraee se mukt, bhagavaan shakti aur prem mein badhe. lekin usake lie pyaar karane ke lie kuchh bhee nahin tha. tab usane apana daahina haath oopar uthaaya, aur usamen se roshanee aaee. ek phlaish itana teevr tha ki prabhu kee aankhen band ho gaeen, yah samay ka janm tha jaisa ki ham jaanate hain. prakaash ke lie, jise shaashvat hona chaahie, shaant ho gaya. aur isake mool bindu par, bhagavaan ke daahine haath kee vishaal hathelee par, ab sabase sundar chhota praanee tha. srshtikarta ke samaan siddh. ek naajuk bachcha, kaale baalon vaalee naaliyon ke saath aur khud ke naram prakaash mein lipate hue. vah apane sarvashaktimaan pita kee chhavi aur samaanata mein tha, usane apanee peeth par kie gae naajuk pankhon kee jodee ko chhodakar, ek saphed ke pankhon ke saath itanee ujjval hai ki ve chamakate dikh rahe the.
chhote ne nirmal prem kee muskaan mein apanee aankhen kholeen aur bhagavaan ko aanand se rote dekha. ek khushee jise unhonne nahin socha tha vah sambhav tha. nyoophaund bhaavana se aage badhakar, prabhu ne apane pahale shabdon ko, pyaare bete ko apana pavitr naam prakat kiya. bhagavaan kee krpa se usake dil mein baadh aa gaee, bachche ne pahalee baar apane chhote pankhon ko haraaya aur ud gaya. unhonne golee maaree, phusaphusae, chadh gae, aur khushee ke unmatt nrty mein utar gae. unhonne prem ke nirvivaad roop se prashansa mein, bina ruke prabhu ka naam doharaaya. vah hamesha ke lie apane bhagavaan ke chaaron or udana chaahata tha.
aur vah ud gaya aur samay beetane ke saath ud gaya aur vah paripakv ho gaya, bachche ko ek ladake mein badalane ke lie. bhagavaan ke lie, yah ek bachche ke roop mein khud ko dekhane jaisa tha.
prabhu kee aseemata par udate hue, achaanak pankhon vaale ko pyaar kee tulana mein ek alag bhaavana ka anubhav kiya gaya tha, jise vah ab tak jaanata tha. ek andhere aur damanakaaree chhaaya us par ek labaade kee tarah utaree.
oopar dekhate hue, unhonne dekha, ek aseem dooree par, bhagavaan ke vishaal haathon mein se ek ne ek kaalee aatma ko pakad liya jo khud ko mukt karane ke lie ek avishvasaneey sangharsh mein jhijhak aur hil gaya.
ladaka vahaan khada tha, acharaj mein tairata hua, us ash‍leel roop ke saath aashchary aur ajeeb aakarshan ke mishran mein.
"yah jaanavar hai jo mere bheetar ghir gaya," bhagavaan ne khulaasa kiya. "isase daro mat, kyonki main ise tumhen chot nahin pahunchaane doonga."
"aisa bhala kaise srshtikarta ke bheetar ho sakata hai, jo keval achchhaee, kaaran aur sundarata hai?"
"bhagavaan kee prakrti aapakee samajh se pare ek rahasy hai."
"haan, mere bhagavaan," ladake ne apana sir jhukaate hue kaha, "mainne keval us pyaar aur chinta ke lie poochha jo mere paas hai."
“yaad rakho, mera beta. meree poornata ke saath, mainne aapako gyaan diya. buraee ko pahachaanane aur rokane ke lie isaka upayog karen yadi yah kabhee bhee ise praapt karane ke lie door se hee aapake dil ya upakramon mein pravesh karata hai. mahaanatam prem aur gyaan kee shaktiyaan hain. unake khilaaph rosh aur shaury kee koee shakti nahin hai.
” ladake ne prabhu ke upahaaron ko sveekaar kiya. lekin buraee kee gavaahee mein, usane apanee maasoomiyat kho dee aur nagn hone ke lie sharm mahasoos kee. yah mahasoos karate hue, nirmaata ne use ek kaale baage ke saath pradaan kiya, jo ek naram aur majaboot kapade se bana tha, pahanane ke lie.
bhagavaan ne tab apane baen haath ko ladake kee drshti se baahar kar diya, jisane apanee shakti, buddhi aur sundarata ke sheersh par vayask banane ke lie prabhu ke chaaron or apanee udaan phir se shuroo kee.
unakee rachana se santusht hokar, bhagavaan ne unhen ek naam diya. "main aapako param snehee Samael, sabase priy putr kahoonga."
khushee ke aansoo rone ke lie samael kee baaree thee. vah apane pita ke prati garv aur aabhaaree mahasoos karata tha.

Prem prem hai koi sauda nhi,
jisne kiya whi jaane,
prabhu bhi bach paye nhi,
moh hi ye aisa jagaye.
nice start & nice update but mistake bahut hai ise sahi kariye writer ji
 
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Nice start
 
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