Fantasy Khamoshi - The Angel & Devil
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Abhi tk apne padha ki bhagwan ne brahamand ki utapati krne k liye socha aur us soch ka parinam nikla ek angel jiska naam unhone rkha samuel wahi unhone apne andar samai bura ko apne haath mein sthr krr liya aur samuel ko ashawasan diya ki wo uska ahit hi hone denge....... ab aage.........
Update - 2
Chapter - 1 : The light and the serpent (continued).....
"tum bahut shaanadaar aur samjhdar ho, meree pyaaree saamuel, aur ab mainne tumhaare jaise doosaron ko banaane ka phaisala kiya hai.
Haalaanki, ve aapakee chhav mein honge. Aap mere lie hamesha pasandeeda rahenge aur mujhe poornata ka upahaar dene vaala ekamaatr sheyar aapka hoga.
Mai unhe aapki svargadooton ki jaati bulaonga, aur ve mere or aapake saath anant kaal saajha karane ke lie dhany honge.
Namaskaar ho prabhu," namaskaar ke saath samel ne kaha.
Aur bhagavaan ne apne daahine haath ko aage kiya aur, ek hee jhapakee ke saath, ek chaandee aur chamakadaar shahar ko saamane le aaye, itana vishaal ki usane khud ke neeche maujood hawa ko bhar diya.
"yah svargadooton ka nivaas sthaan hoga. pahala svarg. saaree srshti isake neeche vidyamaan hogee. oopar, keval prabhu hee honge." Aur samuel ne silver city ke lie udaan bharee.
isakee deevaaron se ek naram aur sukhad prakaash utapan ho ha tha. aur samuel mehel k mukhy dvaar se gujara aur vishaal galiyaaron aur chamakadaar deevaaron ke vishaal baade ke paar kiya.
waha prr koi seedhiyaan nahin theen, pankhon vaale praaniyon ka unke lie koi upyog nahin tha. Imaarat ke mahima ko sankhyaon mein vyakt kiya gaya tha. Pachchees karod kamare the; vibhinn aakaaron ke aur chhah sau ninyaanabe hajaar halls; chaar sau aur ikkees hajaar storeroom; ek sau saintees hajaar kaaryashaalaen; chaudah hajaar varg; terah hajaar saarvajanik tovar; paanch hajaar aur chhah phorj; chaar hajaar aur paanch sau harbal gumbad; ek sau ikahattar sanrakshikaen; chaunsath deerghaen; baarah praant; aur ek kendreey mahal, jahaan se vahaan ki vishaal meenaaren ghoomatee hain, isake sheersh par shuddh oorja ke saat bade aur rahasyamayee muharon ka alankaran hai.
Samuel apne ghutno prr aaya, jo ki prabhu ke kaam se hairaan tha.
“utho, mere pyaare bete. abhee bhee bahut kuchh dekha jaana baakee hai. ”
Aur samuel ne shahar kee seema se pare udaan bharee aur pahale se neeche teen anay heavens, ye heavens ke astitv ko dekhakar stabdh rah gaya. ek ke baad ek, unake aayaam shahar jaise hee vishaal the.
Doosara svarg sundar hare-bhare kheton, saaph aur shaant pani ki jheelon ka ek maidaan tha.
Teesara svarg, naram saphed ret ka ek registaan, jismen thandee havayen beh rhi hotee hain aur phal aur paanee se bharapoor hote hain.
Chautha svarg, anaginat khaiyon aur prabhaavashaalee sundarata aur sadbhaav, ghane aur band jangalon aur kam taapamaan ke pahaadon kee ek mozek hai, lekin itana kam sukhad nahin hai. achambhit, samuel bhagavaan ke paas laut aaya, jo shaanadaar silver city par mandaraa rhe the. aur sarvashaktimaan ke daahine haath se doosara svargadoot aaya. aur bhagavaan ne unhen gaibriyal ka naam diya, jo sabase khoobasoorat aavaaj mein se ek thee.
Update - 2
Chapter - 1 : The light and the serpent (continued).....
"tum bahut shaanadaar aur samjhdar ho, meree pyaaree saamuel, aur ab mainne tumhaare jaise doosaron ko banaane ka phaisala kiya hai.
Haalaanki, ve aapakee chhav mein honge. Aap mere lie hamesha pasandeeda rahenge aur mujhe poornata ka upahaar dene vaala ekamaatr sheyar aapka hoga.
Mai unhe aapki svargadooton ki jaati bulaonga, aur ve mere or aapake saath anant kaal saajha karane ke lie dhany honge.
Namaskaar ho prabhu," namaskaar ke saath samel ne kaha.
Aur bhagavaan ne apne daahine haath ko aage kiya aur, ek hee jhapakee ke saath, ek chaandee aur chamakadaar shahar ko saamane le aaye, itana vishaal ki usane khud ke neeche maujood hawa ko bhar diya.
"yah svargadooton ka nivaas sthaan hoga. pahala svarg. saaree srshti isake neeche vidyamaan hogee. oopar, keval prabhu hee honge." Aur samuel ne silver city ke lie udaan bharee.
isakee deevaaron se ek naram aur sukhad prakaash utapan ho ha tha. aur samuel mehel k mukhy dvaar se gujara aur vishaal galiyaaron aur chamakadaar deevaaron ke vishaal baade ke paar kiya.
waha prr koi seedhiyaan nahin theen, pankhon vaale praaniyon ka unke lie koi upyog nahin tha. Imaarat ke mahima ko sankhyaon mein vyakt kiya gaya tha. Pachchees karod kamare the; vibhinn aakaaron ke aur chhah sau ninyaanabe hajaar halls; chaar sau aur ikkees hajaar storeroom; ek sau saintees hajaar kaaryashaalaen; chaudah hajaar varg; terah hajaar saarvajanik tovar; paanch hajaar aur chhah phorj; chaar hajaar aur paanch sau harbal gumbad; ek sau ikahattar sanrakshikaen; chaunsath deerghaen; baarah praant; aur ek kendreey mahal, jahaan se vahaan ki vishaal meenaaren ghoomatee hain, isake sheersh par shuddh oorja ke saat bade aur rahasyamayee muharon ka alankaran hai.
Samuel apne ghutno prr aaya, jo ki prabhu ke kaam se hairaan tha.
“utho, mere pyaare bete. abhee bhee bahut kuchh dekha jaana baakee hai. ”
Aur samuel ne shahar kee seema se pare udaan bharee aur pahale se neeche teen anay heavens, ye heavens ke astitv ko dekhakar stabdh rah gaya. ek ke baad ek, unake aayaam shahar jaise hee vishaal the.
Doosara svarg sundar hare-bhare kheton, saaph aur shaant pani ki jheelon ka ek maidaan tha.
Teesara svarg, naram saphed ret ka ek registaan, jismen thandee havayen beh rhi hotee hain aur phal aur paanee se bharapoor hote hain.
Chautha svarg, anaginat khaiyon aur prabhaavashaalee sundarata aur sadbhaav, ghane aur band jangalon aur kam taapamaan ke pahaadon kee ek mozek hai, lekin itana kam sukhad nahin hai. achambhit, samuel bhagavaan ke paas laut aaya, jo shaanadaar silver city par mandaraa rhe the. aur sarvashaktimaan ke daahine haath se doosara svargadoot aaya. aur bhagavaan ne unhen gaibriyal ka naam diya, jo sabase khoobasoorat aavaaj mein se ek thee.
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Writer ji aapki story achhi hai but mistek jayeda hone ke karan maza nahi aa rha hai isme sudhar kijiye waiting for next update
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Sorry... To all guys.. kuch official commitment ki wajah se Mai update nhi de paya.. but aaj se regular update aayenge.
Thanks for supporting me... Story views reached 1000 above.. hope so it will increase day by day.
Thanks for supporting me... Story views reached 1000 above.. hope so it will increase day by day.
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