Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

[Damha]

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Umda

 

[karthik90]

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[Qaatil]

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[Qaatil]

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[Qaatil]

Chapter 2 - The Journey

Update 18

Mega Update​

Word Count: 3390
Estimated Reading Time: 00:18:00



Suhana: lekin sir aapko Aksh ke bare me kab pata chala?
Aman: darasal kuch dino pehle mujhe ye jaan ne mila ke ek nayi company ka construction ho raha he and all... Or jab mene inquiry ki to pata chala ye company Aksh ki he, or jab mene Aksh ke bare me pata lagana chaha or uske family ke bare me pata chala, tabb ye raaz mere samne aya....
Suhana: mujhe lagta he ke aapko Mansi ko out of country bhej dena chahiye.... Warna....
Aman: wo nahi manegi Suhana.... Mansi apna sheher chhod kar kahi nahi jayegi....
Suhana: lekin wo yaha rahi to fir Aksh se unki mulaqat hone ke pure chances he...
Aman: wahi darr mujhe khaye ja raha he.... Lekin mushkile yahi khatam nahi ho rahi.....
Suhana: me kuch samjhi nahi....
Aman: is raaz me sabse ehem kadi Aksh ki behen, Sakshi he..... Or mujhe pata laga he ke Aksh ki behen bhi usi college me padh rahi he jaha Mansi he....
Suhana: OMG.... Sir ye situation to batt se battar ho rahi he....
Aman: sahi kaha.... Mujhe ek hi darr khaye ja raha he ke is raaz ko samne lane me na jane kitni jane jayengi.....


Sakshi, Mansi or Aksh milkar Sakshi ke liye naye kapde kharidne ja rahe the, lekin Sakshi Aksh par bahot hi zyada gussa thi, kyu ke usne Aksh ko Mana karne ke liye kaha tha, lekin Aksh ne uski baat nahi mani. Isliye Sakshi Aksh ke baju me apna muh fulaye bethi hui thi, Aksh ko to Sakshi ka aisa haal dekh kar bahot maza araha tha. Or piche bethi Mansi ki bakbak chalu hi thi, lekin Aksh ko uski bakbak sunn ne me kafi accha lagg raha tha. Kareeb 20 minutes ke baad sab ek Mall pahoch gaye the, Sakshi fatak se utar kar Mansi ke saath aage badhne lagi, Aksh bhi aage akar Sakshi ka haath pakad leta he, jis se Sakshi ka sara gussa ek second me thanda ho gaya.

Mansi dono ko ek bahot hi shandar shop ki taraf le ja rahi thi, Sakshi to bahar se hi un kapdo ko dekh kar shock ho gayi thi.

Sakshi: Mansi..... Please meri baat suno, mujhe nahi accha lagta aise kapde pehen na....
Wo Mansi ka haath pakad kar roti shakal banate hue kehti he. Mansi bass ek dafa Aksh ki taraf dekhti he.
Aksh: Sakshi ab tu zyada kar rahi he..... yaar kya afat agayi isme?
Sakshi: Aksh tu to chup hi reh..... Mene is se pehle kabhi nahi pehne aise kapde to aaj kese.....
Mansi: okay.... Matt pehen na ye sare kapde.... Lekin me bhi iske aage kabhi tumse baat nahi karungi....
Wo apna daav fekte hue kehti he.
Sakshi: ye kya baat hui? Tum to sidha sidha blackmail karne lagi....
Mansi: waisa hi samjh lo..... Ab jaldi batao kya karna he tumhe? Mujhse Friendship khatam karni he ya aise kapde pehen na shuru karna he?
Ab Aksh or Mansi ke bich Sakshi lachar thi, Sakshi bina koi jawab diye Store ke andar jane lagti he. Uske maan jane se Mansi Aksh ko taali deti he, lekin Aksh Mansi ka haath anjane me pakad leta he. Mansi ispar zyada dhyan na dete hue Aksh ka haath thame Store ke andar chal padti he.

Khair.... Mansi ek ke baad ek kapdo ko reject kar rahi thi, use Sakshi ke liye best se best Dress chahiye tha. Akhir kaar Mansi ko ek dress pasand aahi jata he.

Mansi: yess..... Dekho ye kitna accha dress he...
Wo dress ko Sakshi ke samne dikhate hue kehti he, us dress ko dekh kar to Sakshi ki saase hi atak jati he.
Sakshi: Mansi please tum dusra koi choose kar lo, lekin ye nahi....
Mansi: kyu? Ye kyu nahi, kitni acchi lagg rahi he...
Sakshi: Mansi please try to understand..... Iska gala kitna open he....
Wo Mansi ke nazdeek ja kar kafi dhimi awaz me kehti he, kyu ke waha Aksh bhi khada tha.
Mansi: Aksh..... Tumhe kesi lagi ye dress?
Aksh: bahot acchi.....
Mansi: Sakshi par jachegi na ye.... Batao use....
Aksh: yaar uspar to koi bhi kapde jachte he....
Aaj Sakshi ko Aksh par "beinteha Gussa" araha tha, wo Aksh ko kha jane wali nazro se dekhne lagti he.
Aksh: h.... Hello... Ha....
Wo Sakshi ka gussa dekh kar apni jeb se phone nikal kar jhut mut baat karne lagta he or dusri taraf chala jata he.
Mansi: chalo jaldi se ise try karo.....
Sakshi: Mansi tum maan jao na.....
Mansi: Sakshi bass karo ab.... Aaj kal to ye fashion he... Or ab tumne zyada notanki kari to me chali jaungi or kabhi tumse baat nahi karungi....
Wo narazgi se Sakshi ko ungli dikhate hue kehti he. Ab Sakshi bhi kya karti, usne Mansi se wo dress le liya or Changing Room me chali gayi, wahi Mansi Aksh ke saath milkar Sakshi ke liye roz marra kaam aye, waise kapde dekhne lagti he. Sakshi ne dress pehen liya tha, jisme wo katayi keher dha rahi thi, Mansi ja kar changing room ke paas ati he or Sakshi ko bahar ane ko bolti he, lekin Sakshi ko kafi sharm arahi thi. Mansi ki zidd par wo bahar ajati he, use dekh kar Mansi or Aksh dono hi use takte reh gaye the, Sakshi uske hatho se apne aap ko chupane ki nakam koshish kar rahi thi, jese hi uski nazar Aksh par gayi to Aksh use aakh maar kar muskurata he, Sakshi turant us se nazre fer leti he.
Mansi: wow My Hottie..... You look so Hot....
Uski baat par Sakshi Mansi ko gusse se aakhe dikhane lagti he, or turant andar chali jati he.
Mansi: yaar Aksh.... Tumhari behen sachme bahot sharmati he...
Aksh: sahi kaha tumne....
Fir Mansi apne liye bhi kapde lene lagti he, is waqt Sakshi changing room me hi apne dusre kapde try kar rahi thi, or yaha Mansi apne liye jo dress pasand ata use apne badan se laga kar Aksh se puchti ke wo kesi lagg rahi he, tabb Aksh bass muskurate hue use ishare kare ja raha tha ke wo acchi lagg rahi he. Waise Mansi bhi Aksh se kafi khul kar pesh arahi thi, wajah thi dono ki soch.

Khair, sabki shopping ho gayi thi, wo log bahar ek acche se restaurant me lunch bhi kar lete he, is doran Sakshi ne ek baar bhi Aksh se nahi mazre milayi, na hi us se koi baat ki, Aksh samajh gaya tha ke Sakshi uspar gussa he. Tino Restaurant me lunch karne ke baad car me beth gaye the, Aksh Mansi ko firse College ke paas hi drop karta he, kyu ke Mansi ki car College me hi thi.

Mansi: okay Guys.... Me chalti hu, or ha aaj raat ko Dinner ke liye mere ghar ana he tum dono ko....
Sakshi: okay hum ajayenge....
Mansi: okay then, or ha.... Sakshi jo mene dress pasand kiya tha, wahi pehen na....
Sakshi: thik he...

Fir Mansi college ke andar chali jati he, or Aksh gadi apne ghar ke raste chalane lagta he, is bich Sakshi Aksh ko bahot gusse bhari nighao se dekhne lagti he.

Sakshi: Aksh gadi rok.....
Wo sapat lehze me Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: kya hua?
Sakshi: mene kaha gadi rok....
Uski baat par Aksh gadi rok deta he, Sakshi apni seat belt hata kar sidha Aksh par tut padti he.
Sakshi: besharam..... Tujhe samajh nahi ata, mene kaha tha na mana karde, lekin tu to..... Bavlat.....
Wo gusse me Aksh ka gala dabate hue Kehti he. Aksh uske haath pakad kar apne se dur karne me laga tha.
Aksh: ahh...... Ya... Yaar.... Ye kya baat hui.... Ahh... Gala Chhod to sahi Sakshi..... Ahhh......
Fir Sakshi Aksh ko azad kar ke apna muh fulaye beth jati he.
Aksh: yaar... Yaar isme itna gussa hone wali konsi baat he?
Sakshi: mujhe nahi accha lagta waise kapde pehen ne.... Or upar se tu.... Meri baat ka saath dene ki bajaye tu Mansi ke saath hi mil gaya....
Wo roti hui shakal bana kar Aksh se kehti he, uspar Aksh Sakshi ka haath kas kar pakad leta he.
Aksh: ab mazak band..... Dekh Sakshi, agar tu ye sab kapde pehenti bhi he to koi problem nahi he.... Tu na bewajah pareshan ho rahi he... kya afat ajayegi is se?
Sakshi: lekin..... Mene pehle kabhi....
Aksh: to ab pehen na shuru kar de, ek hi to baat he na?
Wo Sakshi ki baat ko kaat te hue kehta he.
Aksh: ab zyada sochna chhod.....
Fir wo dono apne ghar nikal jate he.

Waha College hostel ki chatt par 5-6 ladke khade hue the, or un sabki umar 18-20 ke bich thi, tabhi waha Shahid apne chelo ke saath ajata he.

Shahid: or batao.... Kesa raha aaj ka din?
Wo un sab ladko ke samne khada ho kar puchta he. Sablog uski baat ka jawab dete he ke badhiya.
Shahid: koi pareshani ho to batao mujhe.... Apna bada bhai samajhna mujhe...
Ladka: bhai me garib ghar se aya hu yaha padhne, agar ho sake to mera kuch kharch nacha dijiye...
Shahid: hmm..... Chal ek kaam kar, Canteen me tere se koi bhi khane ka paisa nahi lega.... Jab bhi dil kare chale Jana me waha bata dunga ke tere se paise na le.... Tabb to kuch kharch bach jayega na?
Ladka: ha bhai bahot kharch bach jayega.... Thank You bhai thank you.....
Wo ladka khushi se apne haath jodkar kehta he.
Shahid: are ye thanks rehne de, mene kaha na apna bada bhai samajhna mujhe....
Fir baki ladke bhi apni apni pareshani bata dete he, jise Shahid asan kar deta he. Kuch der baad Shahid apne kaam par lagg jata he, matlab wo apni jeb se Drugs ka packet nikal leta he, jise wo sare ladke badi herani se dekh rahe the.
Shahid: are dekh kya rahe ho? Ajao ek ek shot laga lo....
Ladka: bhai kya ye drugs....
Shahid: ha bhai.... Ye drugs he.. chal aja, maza ayega....
Ladka: na.... Nahi bhai.... Me.....
Shahid: are darr matt.... Bahot maza ata he isme...
Ladka: nahi.... Bhai....
Shahid: yaar ye to galat he na? Mene tum sabke liye itna kuch kiya, or tum log meri baat nahi maan rahe? Bhai ki baat nahi manoge?
Wo sab ladko ko Emotionally blackmail kar raha tha, ab wo ladke apni pareshniya dur hone se khush the, or uski wajah Shahid tha, to wo log Shahid ki baat maan kar Drugs lene ke liye razi ho jate he. Shahid bhale hi dusro ko Drugs ki latt lagvata tha, lekin wo khud kabhi Drugs nahi leta. Wo sirf samne wale ko bewakuf bana ne ke liye jhut mut ki acting kar leta. Is baar bhi usne bass acting ki drugs lene ki, or baki ladko ko sachme Drugs de diya. Pehli baar drugs ka nasha un ladko ko satve asman par le gaya tha. Un ladko ko kuch samajh hi nahi araha tha. Tabb Shahid apne chelo se kehkar un ladko ko apne apne rooms me le jane kehta he, kr saath hi un sabko kuch drugs bhi de deta he.

Shahid ka ek kaam ho gaya tha, ab wo college ke rayis ladke ladkiyo ko drugs bechne nikal jata he. In sabka funda clear tha, ke garib ladko ke paas to Drugs kharidne ke paise hote nahi, to unko is drugs ki addiction lagva kar Rana ke hawale kiya jaye, or jo rayis log hote unko drugs bechkar munafa kamaya jaye. Matlab ke koi bhi tarah se Rana apna ghata nahi karvata tha. Or Shahid ye nahi janta tha ke Abdul kiske saath juda hua he, usne kabhi Rana ko nahi dekha tha, wo to bass Abdul ke kehne par har ek chiz karta.


Waha dopehar ke waqt Anant or Abhinav ke bich koi baat chal rahi thi.

Abhinav: Anant mujhe lagta he ke hume Aksh se kehkar is system me thode ferbadal karne chahiye...
Anant: Ferbadal? Matlab kis tarah sir?
Abhinav: dekhi Anant, filhal ye system kese kaam karta he, ke ye drugs ko detect kar ke us truck ki information hume dega, lekin me kya soch raha hu ke is system me GPS tracking bhi lagayi jaye, jis se hum sidha in Drug Smugglers ki location jaan payenge....
Anant: yes sir.... Ye bilkul thik kaha aapne, or kya pata in sab ke bich Rana bhi ho sakta he....
Abhinav: Exactly Anant...... Mujhe pura yakeen he ki Rana bhi isme include hoga...
Anant: right sir.... Me Aksh se is bare me baat kar lunga...
Abhinav: nahi.... Me abhi Surat hi ja raha hu kuch investigation ke liye, to wahi par Aksh se milkar sari baate kar lunga...
Anant: okay sir....



Waha Sakshi kamre me bethe padhai kar rahi thi, or Aksh bhi uske saath hi uske kamre me betha hua Sakshi ko nihar raha tha. Pata nahi Aksh ke dimag me kya ajata he, wo sidha uthkar Sakshi ke paas agaya or Sakshi ke haath se kitab le kar use table par rakh diya, Sakshi to kuch samajh nahi payi, lekin tabhi Aksh ne uske haath pakad kar Sakshi ko khada kar diya or zor se Sakshi ko hug kar liya. Aksh ke is humle se Sakshi puri tarah dher ho gayi, uske aakhe bass band si hone lagi or haath apne aap Aksh ko kasne lage. Kuch seconds takk ek dusre ki baho me rahat milne ke baad Aksh Sakshi se alag ho jata he.

Sakshi: k...... Kya... Kya hua Aksh?
Aksh: kuch nahi.... Bass bethe bethe soch raha tha ke agar tu meri life me na hoti to aaj me is jagah na hota....
Wo Sakshi ka chehra apne haatho me thamkar kehta he.
Sakshi: mene pehle bhi kaha tha na tujhse.... agar me na hoti to koi or hota... Kyu ke jo log kisi ka bura nahi chahte unke saath bhi kabhi kuch bura nahi hota....
Aksh: nahi Sakshi..... Agar tu na hoti to or koi bhi meri life me aisa na hota.... Sach keh raha hu Sakshi, teri jagah meri life me koi bhi nahi le sakta... Kisi bhi kimat par nahi le sakta....
Sakshi: or mene bhi tujhe kaha tha, ke me apni jagah kisi ko nahi dungi, kisi bhi kimat par nahi dungi.....
Uski baat par Aksh muskura deta he. Tabhi Aksh ko Abhinav ka call ajata he, jise dekh Aksh thoda heran sa reh gaya.
Aksh: hello.....
Abhinav: hello Aksh.... Kese ho bhai?
Aksh: sir me bilkul thik hu, aap bataye kese call kiya?
Abhinav: tumhe ye batane call kiya ke aaj shaam 7 baje takk me ek case ke silsile me Surat araha hu, or tumse kuch baat bhi karni thi, to socha ye accha moka he...
Aksh: okay sir.... To ghar par ajaye na aap.....
Abhinav: ghar par nahi Aksh.... Me tumhe adress bhej dunga wahi milte he....
Aksh: okay sir, jesa aap kahe.....
Abhinav: thik he to fir.... Sham ko milte he...
Aksh: okay sir...
Uske baad Aksh call kaat deta he.
Sakshi: kya hua Aksh?
Aksh: are yaar Abhinav sir ka call tha, wo sham ko Surat arahe he kisi kaam se, to mujhe unse milne jana padega....
Sakshi: accha? Fir hume Mansi ke ghar bhi jana tha Dinner ke liye....
Aksh: ohh... Yaar mujhe to nahi lagta me apaunga.... Tu akeli chali jana...
Sakshi: akeli? Is se accha fir kabhi chale jate he....
Aksh: nahi aisa accha nahi lagega.... Usne apne ghar bhi bataya hoga, tu chali ja.. me Mansi se maafi maang lunga....
Sakshi: thik he fir.......



Mansi: Mom..... Mom......
Wo Kiran ke kamre me daud te hue use pukar rahi hoti he.
Kiran: yahi hu beta.... Kya hua?
Mansi: are Mom...... Aaj na meri friend or uska Bhai Dinner ke liye ane wale he, me to aapko batana hi bhul gayi thi...
Kiran: konsi friend he?
Mansi: mene nahi bataya tha meri dost jo yaha padhne ke liye ayi he... To wahi arahi he Dinner par....
Kiran: thik he beta......
Mansi: waise Dad abtak kyu nahi aye?
Kiran: tumhare Dad to keh rahe the kuch important kaam he unhe....
Mansi: kya? Family se zyada important kya ho gaya unhe? Ruko abhi call kar ke puchti hu....
Or wo apne phone se Aman ko call kar deti he.

Waha gehri soch me betha Aman jab Mansi ka call dekhta he to use firse bure khayal ane lagte he, or wo kisi tarah call pick kar leta he.
Aman: h.... Ha... Mansi.... Bolo...
Mansi: aap itne busy kabse ho gaye jo time se ghar ana dhyan nahi raha aapko?
Aman: sorry beta.... Kaam me busy ho gaya....
Mansi: wo me nahi janti.... Thodi der me aap ghar ane chahiye....
Aman: okay beta.... Me bass kuch der me ajaunga....
Mansi: hmm... Yahi thik hoga aapke liye...
Fir Mansi call kaat deti he.



Shaam ke 7 bajne ko aye the, Sakshi apne kamre tayar ho rahi thi, usne wahi dress pehni thi jo Mansi ne aaj uske liye liya tha. Waise to Sakshi khud maan rahi thi ke wo is dress me jach rahi he, lekin aaj wo pehli baar in kapdo me ghar se bahar kadam rakhne wali thi. Aksh bhi Abhinav se milne ke liye tayar ho chuka tha, or wo ja kar Sakshi ke kamre me chala jata he. Lekin jese hi Aksh ne Sakshi ko dekha to wo bass use dekhte hi reh gaya. Aksh ke aise dekhne se Sakshi sehem jati he. Or apne aap ko cover karne lagti he, Aksh muskurate hue Sakshi ke samne akar uske haath thame aakho me aakhe dale khada ho jata he.

Aksh: sahi kaha tha Mansi ne..... You Look So Hot....
Aksh ke muh se is tarike ki baat sunkar Sakshi to heran si reh gayi thi, uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Wo apne haath Aksh se chhuda kar uska collar pakad leti he.
Sakshi: besharam..... Bavlat... K.... Kya... Keh raha he tu?
Wo gusse me Aksh ko jhunjlate hue kehti he.
Aksh: yaar ye kya baat hui? Tu khud mujhse sawal karti he ke agar hum Bhai Behen na ho kar sirf dost hote to? Or jab me Dosto ki tarah baat karne laga to gussa kar rahi he mujhpar....
Ab ye baat sunkar Sakshi chup ho jati he or Aksh ka collar chhod kar dusri taraf muh kar ke khadi ho jati he.
Aksh: Sakshi.... Please yaar samajh baat ko, tu sachme in kapdo me bahot Khubsurat dikh rahi he....
Wo piche se Sakshi ke kandho par haath rakhte hue kehta he. Is baar Sakshi sharma jati he.
Aksh: chal ab.... Tujhe waha drop kar ke me nikal jata hu...
Fir wo dono hi gadi me bethkar nikal jate he. Ab jo dress Sakshi ne pehna tha, wo uske ghutno takk tha, or jab wo car ke andar bethi thi to uske per kafi hadd takk exposed the, or wo baar baar apna dress sahi kar rahi thi, uski is harkat par Aksh mann hi mann has raha tha. Kuch der baad Aksh Sakshi ko Mansi ke. Ghar ke bahar chhod deta he.
Aksh: accha Dinner ke baad mujhe call karna... Me lene ajaunga.....
Sakshi: thik he...
Wo itna kehkar jaldi se car ke bahar utar jati he, or tezi se ghar ke gate ke andar dakhil ho jati he.

Aksh: mujhe Bavlat kehti he.... Khud pagal he yaar Sakshi tu....
Fir Aksh bhi Abhinav ki batayi jagah par chala jata he.

Waha Sakshi ka intezar Mansi door par khade hokar kar rahi thi.
Mansi: Hi Sakshi.... Aksh kaha he?
Sakshi: sorry Mansi lekin use bahot important kaam agaya to wo nahi apaya.... Uski taraf se me maafi chahti hu...
Mansi: please maafi mangne ki koi zarurat nahi he....
Mansi: waise Sakshi.... Shukar karo me ladki hu, agar me ek ladka hoti to pata nahi tumhare saath kya kar deti....
Wo ek shaitani hasi ke saath Sakshi ki butt par haath marte hue kehti he.
Sakshi: Mansi tum.....
Wo gusse me aakhe badi kar Mansi ke haath par thappad marte hue kehti he.
Fir Mansi use ghar ke andar le jati he, jaha Kiran or Aman saath me bethe hue the.

Mansi: Mom... Dad..... Miliye meri best friend se, Sakshi......

Jese hi Aman piche mud kar Sakshi ko dekhta he to uske pero tale se zameen hi khisak jati he.

To Be Continued.......

 

[Mahi Maurya]

दूसरे अध्याय का चौदहवाँ भाग

अक्ष समाचार में ड्रग्स के फैलते कारोबार और युवाओं की नशे की लत और CBI की इनको रोक पाने की नाकामी की खबर सुनता है साहसा उसे एक नया व्यवसाय शुरू करने का उपाय नज़र आता है और वो था कृत्रिम अन्वेषक का।

अपने व्यवसाय के पंजीकरण के लिए वो सूरत जाता है और दो दिन में अपना पंजीकरण करवाकर वापस मुम्बई लौट जाता है उधर साक्षी खाने पीने में अनियमितता बरतने लगी। जिससे उसकी तबियत खराब हो गई और वो बेहोश हो गई। साक्षी अब अक्ष से प्यार करने लगी थी और उसी के बारे में दिन रात सोचती रहती है।

उधर अक्ष ने बहुत मेहनत करने के बाद सीबीआई के एक अधिकारी को मिलने के लिए राजी कर लिया।

बहुत बढ़िया। अब देखते हैं अक्ष कैसे उस अधिकारी को अपने उपाय बताता है और उसे अपने साथ मिलाता है।

 

[Qaatil]

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Ye storie main ne bookmark me save ki thi parhne ke liye jab ye shuru huwi thi lekin phir yaad he nahi raha aj bookmarks khole to saamne ye storie aa gayi sach me kabile tareef storie hai parhte parhte main ne socha ke iss ko pehle kiu nahi parha lekin ab lag raha hai is ko abhi parh ker galti ker di ab intezar he jan le ga iss ke ek update parhne ke baad dusra update kholne me jitna time lag raha tha wo waqt he mujhe zehar lag raha tha Ab to samjho intezar ho ga he nahi Main itna acha review de nahi sakta jitne ki ye storie haqdar hai bus ye kahu ga speechless har kirdar bohat ache tareeke se paish kia hai ap ne har feeling ubhar ke saamne ayi hai ek ek scene dil ko chune wala tha bohat arse baad aisi storie parhne ko mili hai sab updates parh liye hai iss liye hai ye ek naya reader jur gaya hai ab ap ke saath jaldi jaldi update do waiting for next update

Waiting Qaatil sir

Ok bhai

Nice update

Waiting

Mast update hai

Nice introduction.......

Jhakaasssss

Super

Next update Qaatil sir aap kab de rho ho

Awesome update

lajwaab update bro

Fantastic update. There seems to be only love between the siblings. Agar lust bhi hota toh aur bhi maza aata.
But please continue as per your story.
I am enjoying it. Thanks

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aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

sure @Qatil99 bhai aapki story hi itni interesting hai ke banda khud ba khud juda rehta hai...keep writing bro...we readers will definitely support you.

Super update
Ye turning update h
Keep posting

Very good starting and nice script
Full paisa wasool performance.
Waiting for the next update.

Nice update waiting for next

Atulniya Update sirji


Most beautiful scene of this Update ❤

N
Nice start bro

Super se bhi uper update

shandar update

𝐰𝐞𝐥𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤 𝐛𝐡𝐚𝐢

𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐧𝐢𝐜𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠

𝐛𝐫𝐨

Lajawab update

Nice

Superb Starting bro keep it up

Ohhh sirf poster be hi mera lund kada kiya

Awesome update

Super

Bahut badhiya update bhai

Good name of story.

Me janta hu ke me bht late hu but Congratulations for the story, or kasam se bht hi shandar likh rhe ho, agle update ka intezar he.

Superb update bhai......

Fantastic update..bhai

nice update .waise santosh ne zabardasti science me daal diya aksh ko ..
aur teacher to wakai me ghatiya type tha ,pehle hi din hausla badhane ki jagah taane maarne laga aur maa baap se complain bhi kar di ..
ab aksh class change karna chahta hai isse sakshi naraj ho gayi par aksh ko ghar aane se bura kyu lagta hai .

Bdiya update bhai ji

Update padte padte kab khtm ho jata h pta nhi chalta

Bhai mere hisab se do updates ikathe diya karo to story padne me bhi dilchaspi rhegi chahe do din ke baad update do

Age apki marzi

Nice update..

Aksh does not want to study but he wants to be a successful man, that's a good thing. I have said this before and now I am saying here again that there is no fault of anyone, just need to understand each other and it is not good to have controversy again and again. Sakshi is intelligent and good, taking everyone along and caring. Send that teacher to me, I teach him. If someone says something wrong to Aksh, Sakshi does not like it, reflect her love in anger.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

Shandar Dumdar UpdateAksh Kahin per Bhi galat nahi hai, maa baap ko apne faisle kuch had tak apne baccho per thopna kam kar dene chayiye unhe apne baccho ko moivate karna chayiye saath dene chayiye agar bacche bhatag bhi jaye tho unhe sahi raaste mein lane ka kartawya bhi maa baap ka hai jo ki santosh aur radha mein nahi dekha de rahi hai aur ek taraf yeh zalim zamana to kisis ko bhi chain se zene nahi dete aksar school life mein college life mein, humhe demotivate karna aam baath hogayi log puchthe unhi ko hai zo intelegent, smart, hota hai. Aksh ke saath bhi wahi ho raha hai.
Dekthe hai Aksh ke behaviour mein kya changes aate hai....
Kya aksh apni manzil per pouch payega ya fir yunhi batag tha rahe ga.???
dekthe aage kya hota.....
Waiting for next.....

Shandar Bhai

Khubsurat Update Qaatil bhai ❤
Pyar, dard, kuch karne ka junun sabka kamal combination tha, Next Update ka intezar rahega bhai ❤

For completed 25k views on your story thread.....

hum mera manna hai baap login ko bete ki bhi sunni chahiye wo kya chahta hai kuch usko uske hisaab se bhi aage badhne dena chahiye jabardasti har baat thopna nai chahiye uspar lekin kuch mamle me jaise study me wo kya chahta hai karna kaam kya pasand usko koi bhi subject chota nai hota ok..ab aate hain nibbi par to nibbi na wo chutiya hota hai sayad

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb

Waiting bro

Intazar rahega bhai
Or kya chapter 2 me inke pyar ki Shuruwat hogi?

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Tu hi hai meri jeene ki ummid ,
tujhse judi hai dil ki preet.
Tu hasen to bahare gulzar ho,
Aur roye to jeena hi duswar ho.

Ho sakta hai bhavishya me akash ko kafi muskilo ka samna karna pade lekin jab tak sakshi ka hath sath fir darne ki kya baat hai.
jaise kahani ka title hai us hisab se akash aur sakshi ka rishta aage kya karwat lega ye to bhavishya ki gart me chhupa hai.

Ab kahta hu ek bhai ke point of view se ki bachpan se abtak ke jeevan ke safar me sakshi ne akas ke liye ek bahan se badhakar maa aur best friend ka hak ada kiya hai.
vaise dono bhai bahan ka prem hai adbhut.
Hum kahani aur lekhak mahodaya ke achchhe bhavishya ki kamna karte hai.
Love you dear brother
Waiting for the next update.

Superb update bro

Fabulous update bro

Good story

Bohot hi badiya update bhai muje laga sakshi Akash se apne pyar ka Izhaar kar degi par nahi kia ab age dekhte h kya hota h

Waiting bro

नमस्कार सर जी।
कहानी का पहला भाग आज पढ़ा।

कहानी की शुरुआत देखकर लगता है कि आकाश और साक्षी के माता पिता राधा और संतोष की किसी ने हत्या कर दी है।

अच्छा साक्षी और आकाश के जन्म में बस एक मिनट का अंतर है और दोनों बड़े शरारती है।
पूरा घर सिर पर उठा रखा है दोनों ने।

लेकिन दोनों भाई बहन में बहुत प्यार भी है।।

कहानी की शुरुआत बहुत अच्छी है।
बहुत जल्द पूरी कहानी पढूंगी।

behatrin story bro....................

mene aapki 1st story read ki thi....kafi acchi story thi

but iss story ka to level hi alag h 1st story se kafi improvement kiya h aapne............

hero k emotions uski feelings or life ke sangharsh ke sath sath uski apne sapne ko pura krne ki lalak ko kafi acche se describe kiya h aapne............

sat hi villen ki darindgi or samaj m jahar gholte drugs k bare m kafi acche se likha h .................

whi ek successful businessman ke roop m aman ko bhut acche se prastut kiya h jisme uska ground se juda hona bhi dikhaya h .......

sath hi apni 1st deal pura nhi hone jo ese ldke ne mna kiya tha jiska ye startup tha usse hone wali becheni or life k prati uski najariya ko bdlne wale pal bhi kafi khubsurat the.......................

overall outstanding story till continued update................

next update ka intzar rahega bro.....................

Bhai next update kab ayega?

Waiting for the update qaatil bhaai please post the next update soon.....

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Zabardast update bht hi kamal ki story writing. Mansi or Sakshi twins hain or dono aksh ki sisters hain agr ye twist hay to bhai bht bara dhamaka honay wala hay, eagerly waiting for next update bhai keep up the fantabolous work

Baught hi shaandaar update h
❤

Umda

Romance is oozing in this story.

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the story maker