Bhai bohot he awwla story likh rahe ho but bohot slow..yar drame ke tarah aik aik din or slow ker rahe ho..aik update mein 3 4 din tak toh kheencho..kahani lambi na kero but speed thore se tez kero.. baaqi yeh suggestion thy..kahani barhiya hae..waiting for next update as always
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Update-43
Pawan- aaj tera number hai cigarette lane ka
Daksh- Bhai yaar sath chalo
Sala akele jane ka man nahi hai
Pawan- lavda man bc
Kal main gaya tha akele lane
Daksh- Arjun tu chal le yaar
Arjun- kripya kahi aur gand maraye
Daksh- yaar koe to chal lo
Karan- chal chal nikal jaldi bc
Pawan- jaldi ja bc
Do gante se sukhe bathe hai
Daksh- ja raha hu madarchodo
Dekh lunga sabko
Hritik- nikal na be
Bc subah se tatti bhi nahi aae hai
Jaldi la
Daksh sabko galliya dete hue flat se nikla aur earphone laga ke sutte ki dukan ki taraf jane laga
Ab sala apartment me rahne ke yehi nuksaan hai
Yaha aas pass cigarette nahi milti kyuki family rahti hai esliye allow nahi hai
Esliye unhe thoda door jana padta hai
Jada nahi bas thoda
Daksh abhi kuch door hi nikla tha ki usne kuch unusual chhij notice ki aur usse samjhne me bilkul bhi time nahi laga ki kuch bhasad jarur hai
Esliye hi usne apna rasta change Kiya aur public place se thoda door hone ke liye tez tez chalne laga
Apne aapko sabki najar me aane se bachne ke liye aise hi phone par kisi se baat karne ka bahane banate hue vo jaldi jaldi nikalne laga
Uske sath bilkul parchai ki taraf uski musibaat bhi sath chal rahi thi
Fir usse dikha ek pahad uske flat ke opposite side tha aur ye log aksar nashe me sochte the ki ek baar espar jarur chadna hai
Abhi afternoon ka time tha esliye usne guess kiya ki vaha abhi koe nahi hoga esliye us side me jane laga
Aur uska andaaja bilkul sahi tha kyuki es time vo area bilkul sunsaan tha
Daksh pahado me gum gaya aur aage ka intezaar karne laga
Kareeb 5 minutes me vaha kafi log aagaye the aur unhe dekh ke hi Daksh samjh gaya ki aaj to maut hai
Usne jaldi se apna phone nikala aur ek message send kiya kisi ko aur fir switch off karliya
Vahi un aadmiyo me se ek jo sayad unka leader tha bola
Sab sath rahenge aur ek sath dundega
Agar koe akela hua to jaan gawa sakta hai
Aur yeh bol ke vo log ek sath pahad ki taraf chalne lage
Ab sala Daksh koe superman to tha nahi ki ek sath sabko hara de esliye usne plan banaya ki ek ek ko marega jisse uske liye easy ho
Esliye hi hide and seek khelne laga unke sath
Lekin problem ye thi ki sale sare ke sare jhund me gum rahe the
Aadmi- Bhai aise nahi milega vo
Alag alag jate hai aasani hogi
Leader- gand me ye pathar gussa gussa ke marega vo agar akela koe mil gaya to
Aadmi- chota chhota group bana ke jate hai aur sabhi aas pass rahenge
Leader- ye sahi idea hai
Unhone char char loge ke 5 group banaye aur alag alag dundne lage
Ye Daksh ke liye pehle se easy hogya tha
Lekin gand abhi bhi maari ja sakti thi uski
Esliye vo thodi der aur shant raha
Daksh martial arts me trained tha to uske liye ek advantage ye thi ki vo bina awaz kiye ek jagah se dusri jagah ja sakta tha aur sirf kadmo ki aahat se ye bata sakta tha ki kitne log uske aas pass hai
Esliye vo bina koe aawaz kiye ek group ke aas pass gumne laga aur bas mokke ki talash karne laga
Jo jaldi hi mil bhi gaya kyuki vo log Daksh ko dundne ke liye ek chhoti si gufa me gus rahe the aur jo last me gusne laga uska muh dabba ke galla tod diya aur bahut savadhani se usko niche patka ki kahi kisi ko aawaz na aajaye
Ab us aadmi se Daksh ko ek gun aur ek knife mil gaya tha
Gun ka vo use nahi kar sakta tha lekin emergency ke time ke liye rakh li aur firse chhup gaya
Dusra banda mara sir par pathar girne se jo upar chhupe Daksh ne feka tha lekin uchae par hone ke karan koe usse dekh nahi paya
Ab vo log aur jada chaukana hogaye aur charo taraf dekh dekh ke chalne laga
Lekin jaisa aksar dar ke time me hota hai hum bas apne aapko bachane ke chakkar me apno se hi door ho jate hai vaise hi ek ke sath hua aur vo Daksh ke dar se etna gum gaya ki usse pata hi nahi chala ki Kab vo apne group se alag ho gaya aur jaise hi usne piche mud ke apne group ko dekhna chaha
Uske piche Daksh khada tha aur uske bolne se pehle hi uska galla kat chuka tha
Dheere Dheere aise hi log Daksh ke hatho marte rahe aur last me sirf char bando ka ek group bach jata hai
Aadmi- boss vapas chalte hai
Ye sala jalaad hai
Kisi ko nahi chodega
Leader- vapas gaye to vo maar dega
Aadmi- matlab marna tai hai?
Leader- agar esse maar diya to nahi
Aur agar esne maar diya to hai
Ab un logo ki jada faat chuki thi
Leader- sab sath rahenge
Vo etna hi bol paya ki unke samne Daksh aake khada hogya
Daksh jaise khud ke aaya tha sabki bunde chhodi ho gaye thi
Daksh- I will let you go only if you tell me the name of the person who sent you
Leader aur uske logo ne bina jawab diye Daksh par gun taan di
Daksh- fir aise hi sahi aur ek second me laat aur ghuso ki etni baarish hue ki leader ko chhod ke sab jamin par pade the
Aur unki gun Daksh ke pass thi
Daksh- ab bolega ya tu bhi marna chahta hai?
Leader bahut dar gaya tha aur bina der kiye usne sab ulag diya
Leader- aaditya Roy ne bejha tha
Hum to chhote motte gunde hai ghar chalane ke liye paise chahiye thi esliye ha kardi
Maaf kardo bhai
Aur vo Daksh ke pairo me gir gaya
Daksh- uth
Uth bc Daksh jor se chhilaya
Aur vo fataak se uth khada hua
Daksh- abhi yaha ek kachre wala aaega uski kachra saaf karne me madad karna aur fir uske sath chala jana
Agar city se bhagne ki kosis ki to main tere pariwar ko hie bolne chala jaunga
Leader- aap jo bologe vo hi karunga
Please mere pariwar ko kuch mat karna
Daksh- naam kya hai tera
Leader- bilal
Daksh- to sun bilal
Es sehar me rahega tu aur har us chhij par najar rakhega jisse mujhe khatra ho sakta hai
Kaise karega ye tu jane lekin koe bhi chutiya chhij mere pass nahi pahuchni chahiye
Badle me teri safety aur teri family ka pura dhayan main rakhunga
Leader- Ji bhai
Bahut daya hogi aapki
Daksh- main daya nahi karta
Chhod raha hu kyuki mujhe jarurat hai agar pith dikhae to kitni lashe bichega ye dekh lena
Aur Daksh usse vahi Chhod ke apne raste jane laga
Thodi der me khachra wala aaya jiski bilal ne sari dead body hatane me help ki aur fir uske sath chala gaya
Daksh vaha se nikal ke phone on Kiya aur ek number dial karne laga
Tring Tring tring
Hello samne se aawaz aae
Daksh- dar nahi lagta mujhse ha
Bilkul dar nahi lagta
Daksh ki aawaz bc kon nahi pahchan paega
Aaditya- daksh????
Uski aawaz me dar saaf dikh raha tha
Daksh- Pata tha mujhe chutiya harkate karna chhodega to nahi
Aakhir sikha bhi to kisse hai
Lekin mujhe ye samjh nahi aaya ki tujhe ek baar bhi apni beti ka khayal nahi aaya?
Aaditya- Daksh usko bich me mat gasito
Ye tumhre aur mere bich ka hai
Daksh- ye mere aur raichand ke bich ka tha
Tu bich me aaya hai aur ab main teri beti ko bich me launga
Lekin samjh me nahi aa raha ki kya karu uske sath
Aaditya- Daksh tujhe jinda gaad dunga agar meri beti ke ek kharoch bhi aae to
Daksh- hahahahha main to dar ho gaya
Jo log tune bejhe the vo kisi gande naale me pade hai
Aur agar fir bejega to fir vohi haal hoga
Aaditya- meri beti se door raha
Nahi to Bahut bura hoga tere sath
Daksh- tu sale raichand ki katputli hai
Jab tera baap mera kuch nahi bigad paya to tu kya bigad lega
Lekin mujhe aisi feeling kyu aa rahi hai ki ye tere akele ka kiya dhara hai
Matlab yaha to tujhe raichands se bhi help nahi milegi
Matlab gand dono taraf se marega
Jaha main teri beti ki marunga aur vaha raichands teri aur teri wife ke maarenge
Hahahahahahahaha bahut maza aane wala hai
Chal bye ha Kiran ka hostel aagya
Aur ye bol ke Daksh phone kaat deta hai
Daksh ke chehre par ek bahut badi muskaan thi aur usse pata tha ki usne ek bahut badi aag jala di hai lekin ye nahi pata tha ki uska natija kya hone wala hai
Vo sutte ki dukan par gaya aur cigarette kharid ke vapas flat aagaya
Pawan- madarchod cigarette lene gaya tha ya banane
Daksh- etni hi jaldi thi to sale khud le aata
Karan- Mc do gante se jada hogaye tujhe
Daksh- to bc chal ke gaya hu ud ke nahi
Aise hi ye ek dusre ko galliya dete rahe uske baad Hritik ruhi se, Arjun Kiran se aur Pawan Anjali se milne chale gaye
Karan- bc ye kya hua apne group ko?
Sala sab gayab hogaye
Daksh- karne de unko bhi majje bc
Karan- Bhai serious hona padega nahi to dono aise hi rah jaenge
Daksh- sale kami kis chhij ki hai
Bina faltu ki chhijo me pade chut mil to rahi hai
Karan- bc yaar humara bhi kisi se baat karne ka man hota hai yaar
Mujhe bhi vo babu thana thaya wali bakchodi karni hai
Daksh- hahahaha tu hi kar main kar chuka hu pehle hi aur ab nahi karni
Karan- chal fir apan bhi campus hi chal lete hai
Kya pata sikar mil jaye?
Daksh- tu to serious hone ki soch raha tha
Karan- pehle sikar karenge uske baad hi to serious honge bhai
Chal na yaar yaha pade pade kya karenge
Vaise bhi vo sale raat se pehle nahi aaenge
Daksh- chal bc ro mat
Fir ye dono bhi campus chale jate hai aur vaha ladkiya tadne lagte hai
Karan- chal ek ek ladki pasand karte hai aur fir jake approach karenge
Daksh- first year?
Karan- vohi nahi janti mujhe
Baki sabko pata hai main kya karne jaunga unke pass
Daksh- chal thik to bata konsi
Karan- main teri batata hu tu meri bata
Jo number nahi la paya vo aaj ki daru sponsor karega
Daksh- done
Lekin dono le aaye to?
Karan- fir daru bhi dono hi laenge
Daksh- thik fir that blue denim jean wali girl for you
Karan- aur black suit wali teri
Beta Jo college me suite pahan ke aaye vo bahut chakkar katvati hai
Daksh- chehra dekh kitna pyaara hai uska
Kaat lenge uske liye to chakkar
Karan- chal ab ja and best of luck
Daksh- best of luck to you too
Aur dono apni apni wali ki taraf chale jate hai
Daksh wali ke pass do teen aur ladkiya bathi thi sayad sari juniors thi
Daksh- hie aur uske side me bath gaya
Vo sari Daksh ki hi taraf dekhne lagi kyuki unko laga ki senior ragging lene aaya hai
Daksh baki sari ladkiyo se
Tum log ja sakti ho ya agar rukna hai to ragging dene padegi
Etna sunte hi black suit wali ko chhod ke baki sab uth ke bhag gaye
Daksh- what's your name?
Ladki- kyu batau?
Daksh- you don't have manners?
Apne senior se kaise baat karte hai ye bhi nahi pata?
Ladki- aapke Dost ko konsa pata hai ki apne juniors se kaise baat karte hai?
Daksh shocked ki bc ye kiski baat kar rahi hai
Daksh- sorry, what?
Ladki- apne Dost se pucho
Daksh- kisse?
Thoda irritating wali tone me bola
Ladki- jisne aapko yaha bejha hai
Daksh ne mud ke Karan ki taraf dekha Jo Daksh ko dekh ke has raha tha
Daksh- galat game khel gaya bc
Ladki- kya bole?
Daksh- kuch nahi
Kya kiya hai usne?
Ladki- aap ussi se pucho
Daksh- dekho usne mujhse bet lagae hai ki agar main tumse tumhra number le aaya to vo meri ek baat manega
And if you give me your number then I will force him to apologize you
Ladki- don't play mind game with me
Daksh- tumhri marji hai
Lekin kya tum sach me chahti ho ek fourth year wala senior tumse gussa ho?
Fir uska kya natija hoga?
Ladki- what the hell does that mean?
Daksh- vo tum samjh jao
Okay bye
Aur Daksh uth ke jane laga tabhi
Ladki- main kaise maan lu ki aap sach bol rahe ho?
Daksh- kyuki tumhre pass option nahi hai esliye
Aur main kyu juth bolunga tum khud hi dekh lo usne mujhe fasaya hai
Ladki- Aur baad me aap mujhe pareshan karne lage to
Daksh- vo to main vaise bhi kar sakta hu
Number nikalana is not a big deal specially for a super senior
Vo Ladki kuch seconds chhup rahi aur fir
Ladki- okay but promise me ki vo mujhse maafi mangega
Daksh- first of all he is you senior so show some respect and secondly yes
Ladki- okay
Ye lo aur vo Daksh ko apna number dedti hai
Daksh- naam kya hai tumhra
Ladki- Neha
Daksh- okay Neha bye
Aur Daksh vaha se uth ke chalne laga
Neha- lekin aapne kaha tha ki vo mujhse sorry bolenge
Daksh- vo ye aapke sath ek chhota sa prank hua hai
Udar camera(karan ki taraf) ishare karke hath hilao
Aur Daksh hasta hua vaha se uth ke Karan ki taraf chala jata hai
Jo abhi bhi us Ladki se baat kar raha tha
Daksh jake
Oye tere ko bola tha na room saaf karne ko kiya nahi tune
Aur sale aaye hue do din nahi hue vo yaha ladkiya pata raha
Bhag jao sari ki sari nahi to eske sath sath tumhri bhi ragging lelenga
Ye sab etna jaldi hua ki Karan ko kuch bolne ka time hi nahi mila aur jab bolne laga tab tak sab Bhag khadi hue
Karan- madarchod kutte vo number dene hi wali thi
Daksh- mere sath mind game bc
Ye le number uska aur daru le aana nahi to gand faad dunga
Karan- usne number dediye?
Shock se
Daksh- tune kya kaand kiya hai uske sath?
Karan- kuch nahi be
Kal college jate time takra gaya tha to bc vo sar pe chad ke nachane lagi to maine suna diya aur sala rahi pahi kasar Hritik ne bich me aake nikal di
Daksh- esliye bc mujhe bejha tha uske paas
Karan- lekin usne number diya kaise?
Daksh- tera Bhai hai hi etna smart
Karan- bakchodi mat kar
Sach bata
Daksh- ye secret hai
Ye baat karte karte vapas ja rahe thi ki vahi ek ped ke niche Hritik aur ruhi bathe dikh gaye
Daksh- chal kabab me haddi bante hai
Karan- chal bc vaise bhi hume fun nahi mila to kisi ko nahi lene denge
Dono piche se unke aage khud jisse Hritik aur ruhi ek dam se dar se gaye
Karan unke bich me ek gand Hritik aur ek gand ruhi ke pair par rakh ke unke bich me shift hone laga
Ruhi- kya kar raha hai
Pagal ho gaya kya?
Karan- bath hi to raha hu
Bc eske chakkar me bahut thak gaya aaj
Daksh ruhi ke side me bath gaya aur Karan ruhi aur Hritik ke bich me
Hritik- yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Daksh- kyu bc hum nahi aa sakte kya
Hritik- sale bas puch raha hu
Daksh- hum bhi ladkiya dekhne aaye the
Ruhi- tujhe kabse ladkiya dundne ki jarurat padh gaye?
Daksh- Hritik kya kiya hai eske sath?
Kaan kharab hogaye hai
Maine bola dekhne aaye hai
Ruhi- Matlab to ek hi tha na
Karan- mujhe lagta hai esse acha nahi laga bhai
Boyfriend jada important hogya hai
Hritik- teri kyu jal rahi hai fir?
Karan- kyuki es kutte ne aaj mera kaam bigad diya
Ruhi- ladkiyo ki respect karni sikho
Aur kya kaam bigad diya esne?
Karan- pehle baat to ye ki main kabhi disrespect nahi karta kisi ki
Aur dusri ye ki Daksh se hi etna pyaar kyu hai tujhe?
Hum bhi to Dost hai
Ruhi- teri kyu jal rahi hai fir
Karan- tum dono ek jaise hogaye ho
Sala baatein bhi same bolne lage ho
Daksh- yehi to pyaar hai bhai
Londa pura ghar basane ki planning kar chuka hai
Hritik- sale mujhe ek baat humesha main kyu bich me aajata hu
Karan- vo to nahi bataenge
Yaha kar kya rahe ho
Ab to flat bhi leliya hai
Aaram se privacy enjoy karo
Hritik- sabki soch teri jaisi nahi hoti na
Kisi ko baat karna, cuddling karna bhi pasand hota hai
Karan- meri image kuch jada kharab nahi hogaye hai
Daksh- jalta hai sala teri tarakki se
Ruhi- muh band karne ka kya loge
Karan- ek badi daru ki bottle, cigarettes and koe ladki bhi mil jati to jada acha hota
Daksh- daru to tu pilaega aaj
Karan- bahut kamina hai tu sach me bc
Ruhi- tere sath bhi khel gaya ye
Karan- khelna to main chahta tha lekin pata nahi esne kya goli khila di usko
Ruhi- kisko
Daksh- bc mere sath mind game ha?
Apni Gand ki bilkul parvah nahi hai tujhe
Ruhi- Ladki bathi hai kuch to saram karlo
Daksh- sorry Hritik
Hritik- sale fir main
Karan- Daksh Bhai chalte hai
Esko acha nahi lag raha humara yaha bathna
Hritik- ha nahi lag raha niklo
Daksh- Ab to nahi jaenge bc
Karan- ruhi yaar ek help karde
Ruhi- main nahi kara rahi tera kisi se bhi intro
Karan- Maine to aisa kuch bola bhi nahi
Ruhi- bolna to yehi chahta tha na
Karan- please yaar
Dost nahi hai kya
Ruhi- nikal pehli fursat se nikal
Daksh- meri Dost hai meri help karegi
Ruhi- dono niklo
Main nahi kar rahi kisi Ladki ki jindagi kharab
Vo baat kar hi rahe the ki samne se unhe Arjun Aur Kiran aate dikhe
Unhe dekh ke
Daksh- chal Karan chalte hai
Yaha apna kaam nahi banane wala
Ruhi- to sirf yehi kaam tha tum dono ke
Tab tak Arjun aur Kiran unke pass aagaye the
Daksh- ha yehi tha
Karan chal raha hai kya
Karan bhi situation samjh gaya tha
Karan- ha chal
Ruhi- kaha jaoge
Etni der se bakwas kar rahe the thodi der aur sahi
Karan- vo daru lane jana tha
Tu aaja Hritik ke sath
Aur fir Daksh aur Karan nikal gaye
Daksh ne Kiran ke hie ka bhi reply nahi kiya
Ruhi- esse kya hua?
Tum dono(kiran) ka jhagda hua hai kya
Kiran- nahi to
Kuch kaam hoga
Ruhi- hie ka bhi reply nahi kiya usne
Kiran- suna nahi hoga
Ruhi- aaj chalo tum bhi flat par
Aur time spend karne ka mokka mil jaega Arjun ke sath
Hritik aur Arjun ek sath bole
Nahiii
Ruhi- ye kya matlab hai nahi?
Kyu nahi aa sakti
Arjun- are extra bed nahi hai na
Ek do din me mangva lenge
Ruhi- kya chhupa raha hai tu mujhse?
Arjun- kuch bhi to nahi
Ruhi Arjun ki coller pakad ke
Sach sach batata hai ya nahi
Arjun- are kuch nahi chhupa raha
Tum dono chalo
Hum bc niche se jaenge
Ruhi- good boy
Kiran- it's okay
Vaise bhi hostel me kuch kaam tha
Ab vo pagal to thi nahi ki kuch nahi samjhi hogi
Ruhi- hum bas chal rahe hai aur ye final hai
Ruhi ko bhi pata chal gaya tha ki kuch gadbad hai esliye hi usne kiran ko bola taki sab kuch sort karane me help kar sake
Aur fir thodi bahut der baad sab flat ki taraf chal diye....
Pawan- aaj tera number hai cigarette lane ka
Daksh- Bhai yaar sath chalo
Sala akele jane ka man nahi hai
Pawan- lavda man bc
Kal main gaya tha akele lane
Daksh- Arjun tu chal le yaar
Arjun- kripya kahi aur gand maraye
Daksh- yaar koe to chal lo
Karan- chal chal nikal jaldi bc
Pawan- jaldi ja bc
Do gante se sukhe bathe hai
Daksh- ja raha hu madarchodo
Dekh lunga sabko
Hritik- nikal na be
Bc subah se tatti bhi nahi aae hai
Jaldi la
Daksh sabko galliya dete hue flat se nikla aur earphone laga ke sutte ki dukan ki taraf jane laga
Ab sala apartment me rahne ke yehi nuksaan hai
Yaha aas pass cigarette nahi milti kyuki family rahti hai esliye allow nahi hai
Esliye unhe thoda door jana padta hai
Jada nahi bas thoda
Daksh abhi kuch door hi nikla tha ki usne kuch unusual chhij notice ki aur usse samjhne me bilkul bhi time nahi laga ki kuch bhasad jarur hai
Esliye hi usne apna rasta change Kiya aur public place se thoda door hone ke liye tez tez chalne laga
Apne aapko sabki najar me aane se bachne ke liye aise hi phone par kisi se baat karne ka bahane banate hue vo jaldi jaldi nikalne laga
Uske sath bilkul parchai ki taraf uski musibaat bhi sath chal rahi thi
Fir usse dikha ek pahad uske flat ke opposite side tha aur ye log aksar nashe me sochte the ki ek baar espar jarur chadna hai
Abhi afternoon ka time tha esliye usne guess kiya ki vaha abhi koe nahi hoga esliye us side me jane laga
Aur uska andaaja bilkul sahi tha kyuki es time vo area bilkul sunsaan tha
Daksh pahado me gum gaya aur aage ka intezaar karne laga
Kareeb 5 minutes me vaha kafi log aagaye the aur unhe dekh ke hi Daksh samjh gaya ki aaj to maut hai
Usne jaldi se apna phone nikala aur ek message send kiya kisi ko aur fir switch off karliya
Vahi un aadmiyo me se ek jo sayad unka leader tha bola
Sab sath rahenge aur ek sath dundega
Agar koe akela hua to jaan gawa sakta hai
Aur yeh bol ke vo log ek sath pahad ki taraf chalne lage
Ab sala Daksh koe superman to tha nahi ki ek sath sabko hara de esliye usne plan banaya ki ek ek ko marega jisse uske liye easy ho
Esliye hi hide and seek khelne laga unke sath
Lekin problem ye thi ki sale sare ke sare jhund me gum rahe the
Aadmi- Bhai aise nahi milega vo
Alag alag jate hai aasani hogi
Leader- gand me ye pathar gussa gussa ke marega vo agar akela koe mil gaya to
Aadmi- chota chhota group bana ke jate hai aur sabhi aas pass rahenge
Leader- ye sahi idea hai
Unhone char char loge ke 5 group banaye aur alag alag dundne lage
Ye Daksh ke liye pehle se easy hogya tha
Lekin gand abhi bhi maari ja sakti thi uski
Esliye vo thodi der aur shant raha
Daksh martial arts me trained tha to uske liye ek advantage ye thi ki vo bina awaz kiye ek jagah se dusri jagah ja sakta tha aur sirf kadmo ki aahat se ye bata sakta tha ki kitne log uske aas pass hai
Esliye vo bina koe aawaz kiye ek group ke aas pass gumne laga aur bas mokke ki talash karne laga
Jo jaldi hi mil bhi gaya kyuki vo log Daksh ko dundne ke liye ek chhoti si gufa me gus rahe the aur jo last me gusne laga uska muh dabba ke galla tod diya aur bahut savadhani se usko niche patka ki kahi kisi ko aawaz na aajaye
Ab us aadmi se Daksh ko ek gun aur ek knife mil gaya tha
Gun ka vo use nahi kar sakta tha lekin emergency ke time ke liye rakh li aur firse chhup gaya
Dusra banda mara sir par pathar girne se jo upar chhupe Daksh ne feka tha lekin uchae par hone ke karan koe usse dekh nahi paya
Ab vo log aur jada chaukana hogaye aur charo taraf dekh dekh ke chalne laga
Lekin jaisa aksar dar ke time me hota hai hum bas apne aapko bachane ke chakkar me apno se hi door ho jate hai vaise hi ek ke sath hua aur vo Daksh ke dar se etna gum gaya ki usse pata hi nahi chala ki Kab vo apne group se alag ho gaya aur jaise hi usne piche mud ke apne group ko dekhna chaha
Uske piche Daksh khada tha aur uske bolne se pehle hi uska galla kat chuka tha
Dheere Dheere aise hi log Daksh ke hatho marte rahe aur last me sirf char bando ka ek group bach jata hai
Aadmi- boss vapas chalte hai
Ye sala jalaad hai
Kisi ko nahi chodega
Leader- vapas gaye to vo maar dega
Aadmi- matlab marna tai hai?
Leader- agar esse maar diya to nahi
Aur agar esne maar diya to hai
Ab un logo ki jada faat chuki thi
Leader- sab sath rahenge
Vo etna hi bol paya ki unke samne Daksh aake khada hogya
Daksh jaise khud ke aaya tha sabki bunde chhodi ho gaye thi
Daksh- I will let you go only if you tell me the name of the person who sent you
Leader aur uske logo ne bina jawab diye Daksh par gun taan di
Daksh- fir aise hi sahi aur ek second me laat aur ghuso ki etni baarish hue ki leader ko chhod ke sab jamin par pade the
Aur unki gun Daksh ke pass thi
Daksh- ab bolega ya tu bhi marna chahta hai?
Leader bahut dar gaya tha aur bina der kiye usne sab ulag diya
Leader- aaditya Roy ne bejha tha
Hum to chhote motte gunde hai ghar chalane ke liye paise chahiye thi esliye ha kardi
Maaf kardo bhai
Aur vo Daksh ke pairo me gir gaya
Daksh- uth
Uth bc Daksh jor se chhilaya
Aur vo fataak se uth khada hua
Daksh- abhi yaha ek kachre wala aaega uski kachra saaf karne me madad karna aur fir uske sath chala jana
Agar city se bhagne ki kosis ki to main tere pariwar ko hie bolne chala jaunga
Leader- aap jo bologe vo hi karunga
Please mere pariwar ko kuch mat karna
Daksh- naam kya hai tera
Leader- bilal
Daksh- to sun bilal
Es sehar me rahega tu aur har us chhij par najar rakhega jisse mujhe khatra ho sakta hai
Kaise karega ye tu jane lekin koe bhi chutiya chhij mere pass nahi pahuchni chahiye
Badle me teri safety aur teri family ka pura dhayan main rakhunga
Leader- Ji bhai
Bahut daya hogi aapki
Daksh- main daya nahi karta
Chhod raha hu kyuki mujhe jarurat hai agar pith dikhae to kitni lashe bichega ye dekh lena
Aur Daksh usse vahi Chhod ke apne raste jane laga
Thodi der me khachra wala aaya jiski bilal ne sari dead body hatane me help ki aur fir uske sath chala gaya
Daksh vaha se nikal ke phone on Kiya aur ek number dial karne laga
Tring Tring tring
Hello samne se aawaz aae
Daksh- dar nahi lagta mujhse ha
Bilkul dar nahi lagta
Daksh ki aawaz bc kon nahi pahchan paega
Aaditya- daksh????
Uski aawaz me dar saaf dikh raha tha
Daksh- Pata tha mujhe chutiya harkate karna chhodega to nahi
Aakhir sikha bhi to kisse hai
Lekin mujhe ye samjh nahi aaya ki tujhe ek baar bhi apni beti ka khayal nahi aaya?
Aaditya- Daksh usko bich me mat gasito
Ye tumhre aur mere bich ka hai
Daksh- ye mere aur raichand ke bich ka tha
Tu bich me aaya hai aur ab main teri beti ko bich me launga
Lekin samjh me nahi aa raha ki kya karu uske sath
Aaditya- Daksh tujhe jinda gaad dunga agar meri beti ke ek kharoch bhi aae to
Daksh- hahahahha main to dar ho gaya
Jo log tune bejhe the vo kisi gande naale me pade hai
Aur agar fir bejega to fir vohi haal hoga
Aaditya- meri beti se door raha
Nahi to Bahut bura hoga tere sath
Daksh- tu sale raichand ki katputli hai
Jab tera baap mera kuch nahi bigad paya to tu kya bigad lega
Lekin mujhe aisi feeling kyu aa rahi hai ki ye tere akele ka kiya dhara hai
Matlab yaha to tujhe raichands se bhi help nahi milegi
Matlab gand dono taraf se marega
Jaha main teri beti ki marunga aur vaha raichands teri aur teri wife ke maarenge
Hahahahahahahaha bahut maza aane wala hai
Chal bye ha Kiran ka hostel aagya
Aur ye bol ke Daksh phone kaat deta hai
Daksh ke chehre par ek bahut badi muskaan thi aur usse pata tha ki usne ek bahut badi aag jala di hai lekin ye nahi pata tha ki uska natija kya hone wala hai
Vo sutte ki dukan par gaya aur cigarette kharid ke vapas flat aagaya
Pawan- madarchod cigarette lene gaya tha ya banane
Daksh- etni hi jaldi thi to sale khud le aata
Karan- Mc do gante se jada hogaye tujhe
Daksh- to bc chal ke gaya hu ud ke nahi
Aise hi ye ek dusre ko galliya dete rahe uske baad Hritik ruhi se, Arjun Kiran se aur Pawan Anjali se milne chale gaye
Karan- bc ye kya hua apne group ko?
Sala sab gayab hogaye
Daksh- karne de unko bhi majje bc
Karan- Bhai serious hona padega nahi to dono aise hi rah jaenge
Daksh- sale kami kis chhij ki hai
Bina faltu ki chhijo me pade chut mil to rahi hai
Karan- bc yaar humara bhi kisi se baat karne ka man hota hai yaar
Mujhe bhi vo babu thana thaya wali bakchodi karni hai
Daksh- hahahaha tu hi kar main kar chuka hu pehle hi aur ab nahi karni
Karan- chal fir apan bhi campus hi chal lete hai
Kya pata sikar mil jaye?
Daksh- tu to serious hone ki soch raha tha
Karan- pehle sikar karenge uske baad hi to serious honge bhai
Chal na yaar yaha pade pade kya karenge
Vaise bhi vo sale raat se pehle nahi aaenge
Daksh- chal bc ro mat
Fir ye dono bhi campus chale jate hai aur vaha ladkiya tadne lagte hai
Karan- chal ek ek ladki pasand karte hai aur fir jake approach karenge
Daksh- first year?
Karan- vohi nahi janti mujhe
Baki sabko pata hai main kya karne jaunga unke pass
Daksh- chal thik to bata konsi
Karan- main teri batata hu tu meri bata
Jo number nahi la paya vo aaj ki daru sponsor karega
Daksh- done
Lekin dono le aaye to?
Karan- fir daru bhi dono hi laenge
Daksh- thik fir that blue denim jean wali girl for you
Karan- aur black suit wali teri
Beta Jo college me suite pahan ke aaye vo bahut chakkar katvati hai
Daksh- chehra dekh kitna pyaara hai uska
Kaat lenge uske liye to chakkar
Karan- chal ab ja and best of luck
Daksh- best of luck to you too
Aur dono apni apni wali ki taraf chale jate hai
Daksh wali ke pass do teen aur ladkiya bathi thi sayad sari juniors thi
Daksh- hie aur uske side me bath gaya
Vo sari Daksh ki hi taraf dekhne lagi kyuki unko laga ki senior ragging lene aaya hai
Daksh baki sari ladkiyo se
Tum log ja sakti ho ya agar rukna hai to ragging dene padegi
Etna sunte hi black suit wali ko chhod ke baki sab uth ke bhag gaye
Daksh- what's your name?
Ladki- kyu batau?
Daksh- you don't have manners?
Apne senior se kaise baat karte hai ye bhi nahi pata?
Ladki- aapke Dost ko konsa pata hai ki apne juniors se kaise baat karte hai?
Daksh shocked ki bc ye kiski baat kar rahi hai
Daksh- sorry, what?
Ladki- apne Dost se pucho
Daksh- kisse?
Thoda irritating wali tone me bola
Ladki- jisne aapko yaha bejha hai
Daksh ne mud ke Karan ki taraf dekha Jo Daksh ko dekh ke has raha tha
Daksh- galat game khel gaya bc
Ladki- kya bole?
Daksh- kuch nahi
Kya kiya hai usne?
Ladki- aap ussi se pucho
Daksh- dekho usne mujhse bet lagae hai ki agar main tumse tumhra number le aaya to vo meri ek baat manega
And if you give me your number then I will force him to apologize you
Ladki- don't play mind game with me
Daksh- tumhri marji hai
Lekin kya tum sach me chahti ho ek fourth year wala senior tumse gussa ho?
Fir uska kya natija hoga?
Ladki- what the hell does that mean?
Daksh- vo tum samjh jao
Okay bye
Aur Daksh uth ke jane laga tabhi
Ladki- main kaise maan lu ki aap sach bol rahe ho?
Daksh- kyuki tumhre pass option nahi hai esliye
Aur main kyu juth bolunga tum khud hi dekh lo usne mujhe fasaya hai
Ladki- Aur baad me aap mujhe pareshan karne lage to
Daksh- vo to main vaise bhi kar sakta hu
Number nikalana is not a big deal specially for a super senior
Vo Ladki kuch seconds chhup rahi aur fir
Ladki- okay but promise me ki vo mujhse maafi mangega
Daksh- first of all he is you senior so show some respect and secondly yes
Ladki- okay
Ye lo aur vo Daksh ko apna number dedti hai
Daksh- naam kya hai tumhra
Ladki- Neha
Daksh- okay Neha bye
Aur Daksh vaha se uth ke chalne laga
Neha- lekin aapne kaha tha ki vo mujhse sorry bolenge
Daksh- vo ye aapke sath ek chhota sa prank hua hai
Udar camera(karan ki taraf) ishare karke hath hilao
Aur Daksh hasta hua vaha se uth ke Karan ki taraf chala jata hai
Jo abhi bhi us Ladki se baat kar raha tha
Daksh jake
Oye tere ko bola tha na room saaf karne ko kiya nahi tune
Aur sale aaye hue do din nahi hue vo yaha ladkiya pata raha
Bhag jao sari ki sari nahi to eske sath sath tumhri bhi ragging lelenga
Ye sab etna jaldi hua ki Karan ko kuch bolne ka time hi nahi mila aur jab bolne laga tab tak sab Bhag khadi hue
Karan- madarchod kutte vo number dene hi wali thi
Daksh- mere sath mind game bc
Ye le number uska aur daru le aana nahi to gand faad dunga
Karan- usne number dediye?
Shock se
Daksh- tune kya kaand kiya hai uske sath?
Karan- kuch nahi be
Kal college jate time takra gaya tha to bc vo sar pe chad ke nachane lagi to maine suna diya aur sala rahi pahi kasar Hritik ne bich me aake nikal di
Daksh- esliye bc mujhe bejha tha uske paas
Karan- lekin usne number diya kaise?
Daksh- tera Bhai hai hi etna smart
Karan- bakchodi mat kar
Sach bata
Daksh- ye secret hai
Ye baat karte karte vapas ja rahe thi ki vahi ek ped ke niche Hritik aur ruhi bathe dikh gaye
Daksh- chal kabab me haddi bante hai
Karan- chal bc vaise bhi hume fun nahi mila to kisi ko nahi lene denge
Dono piche se unke aage khud jisse Hritik aur ruhi ek dam se dar se gaye
Karan unke bich me ek gand Hritik aur ek gand ruhi ke pair par rakh ke unke bich me shift hone laga
Ruhi- kya kar raha hai
Pagal ho gaya kya?
Karan- bath hi to raha hu
Bc eske chakkar me bahut thak gaya aaj
Daksh ruhi ke side me bath gaya aur Karan ruhi aur Hritik ke bich me
Hritik- yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Daksh- kyu bc hum nahi aa sakte kya
Hritik- sale bas puch raha hu
Daksh- hum bhi ladkiya dekhne aaye the
Ruhi- tujhe kabse ladkiya dundne ki jarurat padh gaye?
Daksh- Hritik kya kiya hai eske sath?
Kaan kharab hogaye hai
Maine bola dekhne aaye hai
Ruhi- Matlab to ek hi tha na
Karan- mujhe lagta hai esse acha nahi laga bhai
Boyfriend jada important hogya hai
Hritik- teri kyu jal rahi hai fir?
Karan- kyuki es kutte ne aaj mera kaam bigad diya
Ruhi- ladkiyo ki respect karni sikho
Aur kya kaam bigad diya esne?
Karan- pehle baat to ye ki main kabhi disrespect nahi karta kisi ki
Aur dusri ye ki Daksh se hi etna pyaar kyu hai tujhe?
Hum bhi to Dost hai
Ruhi- teri kyu jal rahi hai fir
Karan- tum dono ek jaise hogaye ho
Sala baatein bhi same bolne lage ho
Daksh- yehi to pyaar hai bhai
Londa pura ghar basane ki planning kar chuka hai
Hritik- sale mujhe ek baat humesha main kyu bich me aajata hu
Karan- vo to nahi bataenge
Yaha kar kya rahe ho
Ab to flat bhi leliya hai
Aaram se privacy enjoy karo
Hritik- sabki soch teri jaisi nahi hoti na
Kisi ko baat karna, cuddling karna bhi pasand hota hai
Karan- meri image kuch jada kharab nahi hogaye hai
Daksh- jalta hai sala teri tarakki se
Ruhi- muh band karne ka kya loge
Karan- ek badi daru ki bottle, cigarettes and koe ladki bhi mil jati to jada acha hota
Daksh- daru to tu pilaega aaj
Karan- bahut kamina hai tu sach me bc
Ruhi- tere sath bhi khel gaya ye
Karan- khelna to main chahta tha lekin pata nahi esne kya goli khila di usko
Ruhi- kisko
Daksh- bc mere sath mind game ha?
Apni Gand ki bilkul parvah nahi hai tujhe
Ruhi- Ladki bathi hai kuch to saram karlo
Daksh- sorry Hritik
Hritik- sale fir main
Karan- Daksh Bhai chalte hai
Esko acha nahi lag raha humara yaha bathna
Hritik- ha nahi lag raha niklo
Daksh- Ab to nahi jaenge bc
Karan- ruhi yaar ek help karde
Ruhi- main nahi kara rahi tera kisi se bhi intro
Karan- Maine to aisa kuch bola bhi nahi
Ruhi- bolna to yehi chahta tha na
Karan- please yaar
Dost nahi hai kya
Ruhi- nikal pehli fursat se nikal
Daksh- meri Dost hai meri help karegi
Ruhi- dono niklo
Main nahi kar rahi kisi Ladki ki jindagi kharab
Vo baat kar hi rahe the ki samne se unhe Arjun Aur Kiran aate dikhe
Unhe dekh ke
Daksh- chal Karan chalte hai
Yaha apna kaam nahi banane wala
Ruhi- to sirf yehi kaam tha tum dono ke
Tab tak Arjun aur Kiran unke pass aagaye the
Daksh- ha yehi tha
Karan chal raha hai kya
Karan bhi situation samjh gaya tha
Karan- ha chal
Ruhi- kaha jaoge
Etni der se bakwas kar rahe the thodi der aur sahi
Karan- vo daru lane jana tha
Tu aaja Hritik ke sath
Aur fir Daksh aur Karan nikal gaye
Daksh ne Kiran ke hie ka bhi reply nahi kiya
Ruhi- esse kya hua?
Tum dono(kiran) ka jhagda hua hai kya
Kiran- nahi to
Kuch kaam hoga
Ruhi- hie ka bhi reply nahi kiya usne
Kiran- suna nahi hoga
Ruhi- aaj chalo tum bhi flat par
Aur time spend karne ka mokka mil jaega Arjun ke sath
Hritik aur Arjun ek sath bole
Nahiii
Ruhi- ye kya matlab hai nahi?
Kyu nahi aa sakti
Arjun- are extra bed nahi hai na
Ek do din me mangva lenge
Ruhi- kya chhupa raha hai tu mujhse?
Arjun- kuch bhi to nahi
Ruhi Arjun ki coller pakad ke
Sach sach batata hai ya nahi
Arjun- are kuch nahi chhupa raha
Tum dono chalo
Hum bc niche se jaenge
Ruhi- good boy
Kiran- it's okay
Vaise bhi hostel me kuch kaam tha
Ab vo pagal to thi nahi ki kuch nahi samjhi hogi
Ruhi- hum bas chal rahe hai aur ye final hai
Ruhi ko bhi pata chal gaya tha ki kuch gadbad hai esliye hi usne kiran ko bola taki sab kuch sort karane me help kar sake
Aur fir thodi bahut der baad sab flat ki taraf chal diye....
First-time see Daksh in action mode
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Aaditya Roy bahut bada chutiya hai. Daksh ko majboor kar raha hai Kiran ke Saath naa chahte hue bhi kuchh karne ke liye. Daksh ki bahan kab aayegi?
Waah Bhai... Saala kya update chape ho purane saare Update pad dale... Saare ke saaare ek se bad ker ek he..... Matlab kya likhte ho bhai.... Bakchodi toh dosto ke bich kamal ki chal rahihe .... Sath hi saala suspense bhi jordaar diya he.... Lawda dimag ke ghode chala liye per abhi tak ye nhi pata chala dushmani kis chij ki he bc.... Daksh ke maa baap zinda bhi he kya mar gaye.... ki lawda Raichand ke sath kya rishtedaari he, iska bhi ata pata nhi bc.... Waise bhai sabhi laundo ko unki loundiya dila rahe ho... Aur sala hum yaha per single mar rahe ye galat he bhai 
..... Waise bhai is kahani me heroine he bhi ya nhi lawda me kab se meri dilbara ki raah dekh raha hu abhi tak mili hi nhii bc..... Chodo wo sab story mahol ja rahi.... Bas bhai story me college life thoda aur jyada dikhav jaise ki bakchodi, college me lafde, senior launda laundiyo se fight....ye sab bhi aa sakta he to dal ke dekho... Baki sab aap ki marji... Waise nhi bole toh bhi storyekdum rapchik mode me jaa hi rah hei.... And I am big fan of your story...
So keep writing and Keep posting........
..... Waise bhai is kahani me heroine he bhi ya nhi lawda me kab se meri dilbara ki raah dekh raha hu abhi tak mili hi nhii bc..... Chodo wo sab story mahol ja rahi.... Bas bhai story me college life thoda aur jyada dikhav jaise ki bakchodi, college me lafde, senior launda laundiyo se fight....ye sab bhi aa sakta he to dal ke dekho... Baki sab aap ki marji... Waise nhi bole toh bhi storyekdum rapchik mode me jaa hi rah hei.... And I am big fan of your story...So keep writing and Keep posting........