Romance LOVE WITH FIXERR (WITH SOME NEW FLAVOR) (Completed)
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Shukriya bhayio bus Damha se contact karne me time lag gaya warna update to ready tha wo writer note post karwana tha un se iss liye late ho gya deri ke liye mafi
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LOVE WITH FIXERR
UPDATE-32
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Aryan neeche gira huwa tha kadmo ki awaz kareeb ati ja rahi thi lekin Ruhi ghutno per baithi Aryan ki taraf daikh rahi thi UPDATE-32
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kuch he der me wo kadmo ki Awaze paas aa gayi Ruhi ke kandhe per ek haath aya jab Ruhi ne sar utha ker daikha to wo Afzal tha Afzal ko daikh Ruhi seedhe Afzal se lipat gayi
“Papa please Aryan ko bacha lo wo ankhe nahi khol raha” Ruhi ne rote huwe Afzal se kaha jis ko sun ker Afzal ne Aryan ki taraf daikha jis ko daikh ker ek pal ke liye Afzal bhi dhachka kha gaya
Lekin Afzal ne khud per kaboo kia aur apne saath aye logo ko Aryan ko Hospital le jane ko keh dia jis ko sun ker un logo ne Aryan ko uthaya aur wahan se le jane lage
“Beta tum ghar jao yahan main sab sambhal lu ga” Afzal ne Ruhi ko relax karte huwe kaha “Nahi Papa main Aryan ko chor ker nahi jane wali” Ruhi ne jane se mana karte huwe
Afzal ne Ruhi ko manane ki koshis ki lekin wo sunne ko tayar he nahi jis wajha se Afzal ne Ruhi ko Aryan ke saath jane dia Afzal ki Permission milte he Ruhi bhaag ker Aryan ke paas chali gayi
Wo log Aryan ko road per khari ek Ambulance me le gye Ruhi bhi apni car se apna saman le ker un ke saath baith gayi aur us ne Aryan ka haath pakar lia pure raaste Ruhi bus Aryan ke bachne ki dua karte ja rahi thi
Kuch he der me wo log Hospital pohanch gye jahan Aryan ko seedha emergency ward me le gye Ruhi bahir rakhe bench per baith gayi
Kuch waqt baad ek Nurse Ward se bahir ayi aur ek list Ruhi ko de di aur samaan lane ko keh dia jis ko le ker Ruhi med me chali gayi aur wo sab cheeze le li jab Ruhi ne paise dene ke liye apne purse ko khola to us ke haath me kangan aa gye
Ruhi ne paise diye aur ja ker saman unhe de dia aur wapis bench per baith gayi aur un kangno ko daikhne lagi Afzal bhi hospital me aa gaya Doctor se baat ker ke wo Ruhi ke paas aa ker baith gaya
“Ye kangan kis ke hai Ruhi?” Ruhi ko kangnoo me khoye daikh ker Afzal ne Ruhi se pucha “Aryan ki Maa ke” Ruhi ne kangnoo ko daikhte huwe kaha
“Tumhare paas kia ker rahe hai ye?” Afzal ne Ruhi se pucha “Esha Di ne diye the keh rahi thi Aryan ki Maa ne un ko zimedari di hai iss ko iss haqdar tak pohnachane ki iss liye unho ne apni zimedari puri ker di” Ruhi ne puri baat batate huwe kaha
“Kia tum khud ko haqdar samajhti ho?” Afzal ne sawalia nazro se Ruhi ko daikhte huwe pucha jis per Ruhi kuch der sochti rahi phir ek muskan ke saath us ne wo kangan pehan liye jis se Afzal ko jawab mil gaya
Afzal ne aage barh ker Ruhi ko gale laga lia Afzal ko Ruhi ka ye faisla sach me pasand aya tha
“Beta main ne Hassan ke waqt tumhe roka tha kiu ke mujhe pata tha wo tumhare liye sahi nahi hai lekin aj mujhe pata hai ke tum ne sahi Insaan ko chuna hai” Ye keh ker Afzal ne Ruhi ka matha choom lia tabhi Doctor ward se bahir aa gaya jis ko daikh ker Ruhi jaldi se un ke paas chali gayi
“Doctor Aryan kaisa hai?” Ruhi ne Doctor se pucha Ruhi ka dil bohat ghabra raha tha saanse dheeme hoti ja rahi thi “Fikar ki koi baat nahi hai he is out of danger now” Doctor ki baat sun ker Ruhi ki saans me saans ayi us ki ankho se phir ansoo behne lage Afzal ne aage barh ker Ruhi ko gale laga lia
“Aye pagal larki khusi me bhi roti hai gham me bhi roti hai kia kahe ga Aryan kaisi rondu larki mili hai use” Afzal ki baat sun ker Ruhi ko hansi aa gayi kuch he der me Aryan ko ward se room me shift ker dia gya
Kuch der baad he Ruhi Aryan ke paas chali gayi saamne he Aryan ankhe band kiye leta huwa tha Ruhi us ke paas chali gayi aur us ke chehre ko pyaar se daikhne lagi
Dheeme se apna haath le ja ker Aryan ke chehre ko chune lagi Ruhi kisi ke saparsh ke Ehsaas hote he Aryan ne apni ankhe khol li Apne saamne Ruhi ko daikh ker us ke chehre per muskan aa gayi
Aryan ne Ruhi ka haath thaam lia tabhi us ki nazar Kangan per gayi jis ko daikh ker Aryan herani se Ruhi ko daikhne laga jis per Ruhi ne muskura ker haan me sar hila dia
After 6 Months
“Noor aa bhi jao cake kaatna hai” Soniya ne Noor ko awaz dete huwe kaha jis ko sun ker Noor bhaagte huwe wahan aa gayi “Kia Maa thora to wait kar lia karo”
Noor ke ate he Khuram aur Soniya ne Ek cake table per rakh dia jis per “Happy Birthday Pari” Likha huwa tha
“Kia Maa aik saal me 2 birthday cake katwate ho” Noor ne shikayat karte huwe kaha jis per Soniya ka chehra utar gaya “Kia karo beta jis ki Birthday hai us ke saath to celebrate ker nahi sakti iss liye ye cake bhi tujh se he katwa leti hu” Soniya ki ankho me ansoo aa gye the jis ko us ne poch liye
“Kia Maa ap bhi har baat per emotional ho jati ho” Noor ne Soniya ko gale lagate huwe kaha tabhi door bell baj gayi “itni subha subha kon aa gaya” Soniya ne ghari ki taraf daikhte huwe kaha
“Tum log candle lagao main tab tak daikh ker ati hu” ye keh ker Soniya Darwaza kholne chali gayi Darwaza khol ker jab Soniya ne saamne daikh to us ke paon wanhi tham gye aur wo ghutno per gir gayi
Ek saath ansoo ke qatre us ki ankho se behne lage us ko apni ankho per yaqeen nahi ho raha tha ke iss waqt us ki ankho ke saamne Pari khari hai
Soniya seedhe Pari se lipat gayi aur us ka chehra choomne lagi jaise use dar ho ke ye koi khawab hai aur us ki ankh kisi pal bhi khul sakti hai lekin ye haqeeqat thi Pari bhi itne waqt baad apni Maa ka saparsh pa ker us se lipat gayi
Kafi der se Soniya ko wapis na ata daikh Khuram aur Noor bhi bahir aa gye jaise he Khuram ki nazar Pari per gayi wo bhi chaunk gaya aur khud ko girne se rok na paya
Pari Soniya se alag huwi aur aage barh ker us ne khuram ko uthne me madad karne lagi itne saalo baad Pari ko apne paas daikh ker Khuram phoot phoot ker rone laga jis ke Ansoo Pari ne apne nanhe haatho se ponch diye
“Kitne waqt se iss lamhe ka intezar kia aj roo lene de bohat waqt se roka hai in Ansoo ko” ye keh ker Khuram bhi Pari se lipat gaya Noor ne kabhi Pari ko daikha to nahi tha lekin mahool daikh ker wo use pehchaan gayi thi aur khusi se muskuraye ja rahi thi
“Papa itne saalo baad hamari princess ayi hai gate per he le ker baithe raho gye” ye kehte huwe Noor Pari ke paas neeche baith gayi “thak gayi hu tumhari jagha cake kaat kaat ker ab apni zimedari sambhalo” ye kehte huwe Noor ne plastic knife Pari ko de di
Jis ko le ker Pari Noor aur Khuram andar chale gye Soniya ne bahir chaaro taraf daikha lekin use wahan koi aur nahi dikha tabhi us ke phone per call ayi unknown number se jis ko Soniya Attend ker lia
“Kaisa laga surprise” Dusri taraf se Aryan ki awaz ayi jis per Soniya ki ankho se dobara ansoo nikal aye “Mujhe pata hai tum bohat chaunki ho gi aise Achanak ye sab daikh ker tumhe lag raha ho ga ye koi khawab hai but believe me its true”
“Per kaise” Soniya ke muh se bus itna he nikla us se kuch bola he nahi ja raha tha
“Kaise?” Aryan ne Soniya ka lafz dobara bola “Tumhari jagha main hota to main bhi ye he puchta ke ye kaise huwa sach me main bhi itne saalo se ye he soch raha tha ye kaise ho ga kiu ke main ek darpok insaan tha duniya ke liye to main fixerr tha lekin apni life ko he main kabhi fix nahi ker saka ulta uljhata raha lekin ye nahi samajh saka Fixerr can not fix his own life us ke liye mujhe apni life ka fixerr chahiye tha jis ko dhoondne me waqt to laga lekin mujhe wo mil gaya jis ne mujhe bataya ke na tumhari galti itni bari thi jis ko maaf na kia ja sake aur na meri galti aisi thi jise sudhara na ja sake”
Aryan ki baat sun ker Soniya je chehre per khusi ki muskan aa gayi
“To bus main ne us ki baat maan li aur tumhari galti maaf ker ke apni galti sudharne ki koshis karne laga Lekin” Aryan ne rukte huwe kaha “Lekin ye baat kabhi nahi badle gi ke Pari meri beti thi aur rahe gi bus ye us ka Birthday gift hai aj se us ko 2 Maa ka air 2 Baap ka pyaar mile ga” Aryan ki baat sun ker Soniya ki khusi ka koi hisaab nahi tha
“Tum yahan kiu nahi ho” Soniya ne gehri saans lete huwe pucha
“Mujhe waqt lage ga wo sab Bhoolane me lekin main aoo ga zaroor aur yaad rakhna Pari ka jab dil chahe ga wo tum logo ke paas jaye gi jan dil chahe ga hamare paas aye gi koi rok nahi ho honi chahiye use” Aryan ne muskurate huwe kaha “Ab jao apni beti ke saath ke lamho ko khul ke geo”
“Thank you” Soniya ne Aryan se kaha aur phone band ker ke apni beti ke paas chali gayi wanhi Aryan ne call cut hote he phone jeb me dal lia aur saamne daikhte huwe bola
“Han ji Mrs Aryan agar gol gape kha liye ho to chale” Aryan ki baat sun ker Ruhi jo golgapa muh me daalne he wali thi us ne jaldi se golgape khaye aur muskura ker Aryan ke saath us ki bike ke paas aa gayi
“Tum ne kiu nahi khaye” Ruhi ne Aryan se pucha jis per Aryan bike ke saath tik ke khara ho gya aur musmura ker Ruhi ko daikhne laga “Mere khane ka style thora alag hai”
Ye keh ker Aryan ne Ruhi ki kamar me haath daala aur apna chehra us ke kareeb le jane laga Ruhi ne bhi ankhe band ker li dono kareeb ate gye tabhi wahan se ek truck guzra jis ne tez horn dia jis se Ruhi dar ker peeche ho gayi
“Ek to ye kameene truck wale ko bhi galat waqt per ana hota hai” Aryan ne gusse me tilmilate huwe kaha jis per Ruhi ki hansi choot gayi “Hans kia rahi ho ek to pareshan ho gya hu jab lagta hai hone he wali hai tab he koi siyapa per jata hai”
Aryan gusse me tilmilate huwe Bike per baith gaya aur kick maar ker bike start ker lo aur Ruhi ko baithne ka keh dia Ruhi chalte huwe Aryan ke paas ayi aur us ne Aryan ka haath handle se hata diye aur bike ke fuel tank per Aryan ki taraf chehra ker ke baith gayi
“Ab jo bhi ho jaye rukna mat” ye keh ker aone hont Aryan ke honto per rakh diye Aryan ne tez race de ker bike aage barha di jis per Ruhi thori hil gayi lekin phir muskura dobara apne hont Aryan ke honto se mila diye
Iss tarha Akhir hosh ne in ka pehla kiss ho he gaya aur in ki zindgi ki nayi shurwat ho gayi
~THE END~
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🎙Hello Hello mic testing 1....2...3 han sahi hai pehle to sorry Musafir tumhara ye pura style coply karne ke liye per mujhe acha laga iss liye socha iss me he likhu writer note To guys kaise hai ap log to chalte hai iss kahani ki journy ki taraf is kahani ki shurwat huwi USC se matlab (Ultimate Storie contest 2019) se jahan per iss storie ko as a short storie likhne ki sochi gayi aur mehnat ke baad iss ko November 1 ko contest me daal di gayi jab ye post ki gayi to laga ye master piece hai lekin main galat tha jis wajha se ye storie jeet na saki aur jeet bhi kaise pati itni bari storie ko 6000 word limit me likha tha soch lo kitna kuch miss kia ho ga jinho ne daikhna ho yahan ja ker daikh lo (USC) to phir main ne socha iss ko thora set ker SS me post kia jaye aur dobara ek galat soch sochi ke main iss ko 1 hafte me pura ker du ga lekin jab iss storie ko likhna shuru huwa to pata chala ye soch se thori lambi hai lekin itna waqt le gi socha na SS me ye storie 7 December 2019 me shuru ki thi aur kareeb 1.5 saal baad ye storie aj complete huwi hai lekin shayad complete na hoti agar hamare pyaare dost Musafir hamari madad na karte unho ne he iss storie ko complete kia hai jis ki main dil se izzat karta hu mere liye to ye storie hamesha masterpiece rahe gi ap log zaroor batana ke ye safar kaisa raha aur Musafir ki storie LOVE AJ KAL per bhi pyaar barsana
Shukriya!
Shukriya!
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Ye story mene baad me padhi, bohot he achhi story likhi he tumneI appreciate your writing, agli baar ke liye best of luck. Aur agar isko wapas improve kar ke likhna chahte ho to detail me likhna taki tasalli se padh sake
Awesome update bro
Storie completed please read and give your valuable review
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Hello Ashish bhai hope ap ko nura na laga ho itna intezar karwane ka bhai ap se ek baat karni thi Musafir ke liye main pehla insaan tha jis ke saath us ne baat ki thi kisi Adult forum per meri request per us ne meri storie complete karne me help ki Puri Storie dobara read ker ke us ko discuss kia phir update likhe jis ki wajha se wo apni storie per time nahi de saka us ko bohat bura laga ke us ne apne ek reader ka dil dukhaya aur wo the ap lekin agar wo ap ko batata to aisa lagta jaise wo bahana ker raha ho iss liye main ne use kaha ke storie complete ker le pehle jis se baki bhayio ko bata sake ke wo kahan busy tha ap daikho jo kisi ki storie ko itne ache se likh sakta hai to wo apni per kya kare ga iss liye us ko maaf ker dena aur mujhe bhi kiu ke galti meri thi
Bhai abi meiny read nahi ya wali story jahan py update bd huwy thy waha tha parhi ha lakin ab dubara sy sari parhni pary gi.
Lakin ap plzzz LOVE AJ KAL bh likhyn lakin mujy to ap ki story jis ka naam Shetaan (Evil) us ka intzar ha k wo kb start hoti ha. Ab wapas aa gy ho to plzz wo bh jaldi sy start kr do.
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