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Thriller Main Wapas Aawungi..............(A Suspense Thiller Story)

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"haan main........................tujhe kya laga ki tu mujhe maar diya aur tu chain se reh lega......................meri maut ka ek ek ka hisab tujhe aaj dena hoga..............marega to tu har haal mein..............magar jab tak tu apni maut ki bheekh nahin mangega tujhe main maut nahin doongi.................chal bhaag yahan se main bhi dekhti hoon ki tujhe bhaganey mein kitna maza aata hain..................yaad hain na............jaise tum sab ne milkar mujhe bhagaya tha................." aur ek baar sakshi ke thahakon ki awaaz se wo sara jungle poori tarah se tharaaa uthatha hain.......dekhna tha ki sakshi ki ye intekam ki aag kahan jakar aab rukney wali thi....................

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Mohanlal ko apni maut saaf nazar aa rahi thi...............wo wahan se cheekhta chillata hua idher udher bhatak raha tha..................jidher bhi wo jata usey har jagah sakshi hi nazar aati aur uske sameny aakar khadi ho jati................ye silsila tab tak nahin rukta jab tak mohanlal buri tarah se thak haar kar jameen par baith nahin jata..............mota hone ki wajah se wo aab theek se saans bhi nahin le paa raha tha..............tabhi uske samney sakshi aakar uske baju mein baith gayi aur uske taraf gussey se ghoorney lagi.............ye dekhkar mohanlal apne dono haath jodta hua sakshi se maafi mangney laga.............

magar aaj sakshi apne samney laachar aur bebus hue us insaan ko maafi dene ke mood mein to bilkul bhi nahin thi..............aaj to wo usey aisa maut dena chahti thi jisey sunkar sab dil dehal jaye...............

" tujhe bahut maza aata hain na kisi ke zazbaton ke saath khelna...............laashon ka karobaar karna.............besharaon ko takleef pahunchana.....................aaj tujhe apne sare karmon ki ek ek saza milegi............" aur sakhi ka chehra badalney lagta hain........uski aankhein gussey se laal hone lagti hain aur chehra poora safed hone lagta hain.........ye dekhkar mohanlal zoron se cheekh padta hain..............

" mujhe jane do sakshi.......mujhe maaf kar do......................" aur mohanlal wahin sakshi ke samney gidgidaney lagta hain wahin sakshi is baar thahaka lagakar zoron se hans padti hain...........

" marega to tu har haal mein mohanlal..............bus tu ye upar wale se duwa kar ki main tujhe aasan maut doon..............magar afsos aaj teri upar wala bhi nahin sunega..............kyon ki tujhe to aisi maut milegi ki jisey dekhkar teri rooh kaanp uthegi..............sakshi zoron se hanste hue apne haathon ki mutthi ko kholti hain aur uske haathon mein dher sara pin tha...............wo pin ji kagaz par lagaya jata tha.............ye dekhkar mohanlal ke chehrey par pasiney tapak padte hain..............

" ye pin dekh raha hain mohanlal................agar ye kisi ko chubh jaye to aisa lagta hain jaise shareer se pran hi nikal gaye ho..........itna dard deta hain ye...........tu soch agar ek pin chubhega to kitna darad hota hain..............agar itne sare pin tere jism mein ek saath chube to.............." aur sakshi apne haathon ko khol deti hain aur sare pin ko bade gaur se dekhney lagti hain............uske haathon mein rakhi sari pin sab ek line se hilti hui seedhi katar mein aati hain aur sabki nok samney baithe mohanlal ke taraf thi..............wo ek nazar uske taraf dekhti hui zoron se apne haathon par foonk marti hain aur agle hi pal sakshi ke haathon mein jitne pin they wo kisi bulllet ki raftaar se aagey badhtey hue mohanlal ke jism ke sabhi jagah par ek saath chubney lagti hain..........uske sir se lekar pawn tak.....yahan tak ki uski dono aankhon par bhi..............

wo dard se tadap uthatha hain.................itna dard ...itni takleef ki uske aankhon se aansoon chalak pade they..........uska jism chalni ho gaya tha...............pin kum se kum 100 se kum nahin hongey jo mohanlal ke jism ke sabhi jagah dhanse hue they............wo wahin dard se cheekh raha tha......chilla raha tha magar koi uski awaaz nahin sun paa raha tha.............wahin sakshi bade gaur se usey dekh rahi thi................wo fauran apni jagah se uthathi hain aur mohanlal ke sir ke balon ko kaskar pakadti hui.....usey kuch door tak usi sadap par ghaseetati hui.........kuch door le jati hain jahan ek lakdi ka taboot bana hua tha....................jo kisi insaan ko dafnaney ke liye rakha tha..............

" tujhe main itne aasani se marney nahin doongi............zara dekh na is taboot mein.......maine tere liye kuch rakha hain............waise tujhe ismein bahut sukoon ki neend aayegi..............iske baad tujhe kabhi uthney ka munn bhi nahin karega..........." aur sakshi zoron se cheekhtey hue mohanlal ke sir ke balon ko khenchti hui usey us taboot ke aur kareeb le jati hain aur jab mohanlal ki nazrein ander rakhe us taboot par padti hain uski jaise cheekh nikal jati hain...............aankhon mein pin dhase hone se wo theek se apni aankh bhi nahin khol paa raha tha................magar jaise taise wo thodi si apni aankh khol pata hain aur jab ander us taboot mein rakhe dhere sare bichoowon par padti hain uska shareer ek dum se peela padh jata hain...............

issey pehle mohanlal kuch kehta ya faryaad karta...................sakshi uske balon ko pakadkar us taboot ke ander dal deti hain jahan hazaron zehriley bichoo ander pehle se maujood they...............jaise hi wo ander girta hain bahut sare bichoo uske badan par toot padte hain aur mohanlal wahin zoron se cheekhney chilllaney lagta hain...........afsoso usey wahan koi bachaney nahin aane wala tha.............jaise hi mohanlal ander us taboot mein jata hain sakshi wahin lakdi ke char tukdey leti hain aur us taboot ko charon taraf se pack kar deti hain...............ander mohanlal cheekh chilla raha tha jissey sara jungle uski cheekhon se tharaa utha tha....................

ye cheekh kuch minute tak rahi aur fir sab kuch pehle ki tarah shant ho gaya.............wahin sakshi bade guar se us taboot ko dekh rahi thi................aakhirkar uske ankhon se aansoon chalak hi pade...................bhale hi wo apna inteqam le rahi thi magar jis takleef aur dard mein wo thi wo shayad kisi ko aab bayan nahin kar sakti thi................

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dusare din mohanlal ki maut ki khabar jungle mein kisi aag ki tarah poorey sehar mein fail gayi...................har kisi ke jubaan par bus yehi charcha tha.................ki aakhir mohanlal ko itni berahmi se kisney mara.................aur kyon mara................media wale to police ki izzat ki aab dhajiyaan uda rahe they..........wahin vinod apne kamrey mein chup chaap baitha apne sir par dono haath rakhe pareshan sa laachar baitha hua tha..............uski sari buddhi dhari ki dhari reh gayi thi................aaj subeh wo mohanlal ko arrest karney wala tha ussey pehle hi kisi ne usey berahmi se maar diya tha................yani kaatil unse bhi do kadam aagey ki chaal chal raha tha........................

bahut si baatein vinod ke dimag mein ghoom rahi thi..............aur wo bahut kuch aab soch raha tha..........................sari kadiyaan aab sakshi ki ore ishara kar rahi thi..............usey na jane kyon aab aisa lagney laga tha ki in sab ke peechay kahin sakshi ka haath to nahin..................magar police ki naukari mein dil se nahin balki...............dimag ki zyada suni jati hain................aur dimag baar baar kuch ore keh raha tha.....................vinod isi udherbun mein tha tabhi uska mobile fir se baj utha..................jab uske mobile par uski nazrein gayi uske chehrey par khushi ki lakheerein nazar aane lagi..................phone sakshi ka tha....................

" sakshi....................tum ho kaha................mujhe aabhi tumse milna hain.........bahut urgent hain mujhe tumse milna...............dekho naa mutt kehna.................hum jahan mile they wahin............main aabhi aa raha hoon............" aur vinod bina sakshi ki baat sune apne dil ki baat ussey kehney lagta hain wahin sakshi jawab mein dheere se muskura deti hain..............

" theek hain vinod................main tumse aab aakhiri baar milna chahti hoon..............ho sakta hain uske baad humari mulakat kabhi na ho..................." aur shaski ke aisa kehtey hi vinod ke chehrey par aayi khushi ek pal mein gayab ho jati hain wahin uska chehra udaas hota chala jata hain.........wo kuch der tak chup hi rehta hain......usey kuch samajh mein nahin aata ki wo kya kahe...................

" theek hain......main aa rahi hoon wahan.....................aap bhi aa jaiye....................milkar main aapko sari baat batungi..................." aur sakshi fir phone rakh deti hain wahin vinod ka kaleja zoron se dhadka utha tha....................wo bujhe munn se apne kapdey pehanta hua taiyaar hota hain aur seedha tezpur ki taraf chal padta hain................jahan aaj wo aakhri baar sakshi se milne wala tha...............pata nahin kyon uska dil bahut ghabraa raha tha...............wo aab sakshi ko khona nahin chahta tha...............shayad wo ussey kuch zyada hi lagaaav kar baitha tha........is liye takleeef uske dil ko ho rahi thi...............

thode der baad wo usi park mein pahunch jata hain jahan sakshi baithi hui uska pehle se intezar kar rahi thi...................sakshi ko pehle aata hua dekhkar vinod ke chehrey par ek pyar bhari muskaan aa jati hain aur wo aakar sakshi ke baju mein baith jata hain.................wahin sakshi usey dekhkar haule se muskura padti hain............

" aap badi jaldi aa gaye............mujhe laga ki aapko aane mein waqt lagega......................kafi fast ho................." aur sakshi haule se vinod ki taraf dekhti hui muskura deti hain wahin sakshi ne aaj bhi white rang ki suit pehni hui thi..............jismein wo humesha ki tarah behad haseen lag rahi thi................kuch der tak to vinod uske khoobsurat se chehrey ko bus niharta raha.............

" hona padta hain fast.................agar fast nahin rahengey to log pair rakhkar aagey badh jayengey...................aacha wo sab chodho tumne ye kyon kaha ki ye humari aakhiri mulakat hain..............iske baad tum mujhse kyon nahin mil sakti...................tum janti ho ki meri life mein tum kitni important ho.......................bhale hi tum meri lover na sahi....magar ek aacha dost bankar to meri saath humesha khadi rehti ho.................fir aisa kya ho gaya jo tum mujhe chodhkar jane ki baat kar rahi ho...................." aur vinod sakshi ke dono haathon ko haule se thamta hua uske haathon ko bade hi pyaar se sehlaney lagta hain wahin sakshi ek tuk uske chehrey ko bade hi pyaar se dekh rahi thi.........na hi wo apna haath vinod ke haathon se hatati hain aur na ussey door hatney ki koshish karti hain...................

" vinod.................har cheez ka ek samay hota hain........waise main aayi to thi yahan chuttiyon mein kuch din ke liye.......aab meri chutiyaan khatam ho gayi hain..............to mujhe wapas jana hoga................bahut aacha laga mujhe ki aap jaisa mujhe ek aacha dost mila...............main aapko zindagi bhar kabhi nahin bhoolungi..............ye mera aapse vaada hain............." aur sakshi haule se vinod ke haathon pr apne haath rakh deti hain aur bade gaur se uske chehrey ki taraf dekhney lagti hain..........wahin vinod ka chehra utar gaya tha.............uske chehrey par udasi ke badal gehraney lage they...........lafz ek bhi mooh se nahin foot rahe they..............wo kaise bhi karke sakshi ko apne se door nahin jane dena chahta tha.............

" jana zaroori hain kya...........tum ye job chodh do..................aur humesha ke liye yehi reh jawo....................mere paas...............main tumhein khona nahin chahta.............." aur vinod ruwanu hokar haule se bol padta hain...........uski aankhein aansoon se bhar aayi thi jo sakshi ke nazreion se nahin chup saki thi................
 

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" vinod..................main janti hoon ki aap mujhe pasand karte hain..............apna aacha dost bhi mante hain..............magar is duniya mein sabko har cheez nahin milti..............kuch cheez jo dikhti hain wo vastavik mein hoti nahin................is liye kehti hoon ki is bhram aur mayajaal se aap bahar nikaliye..................aur apni duty imandaari se kijiye..............main yakeen se kehti hoon ki kal tak aap is case ko 100% solve kar lengey..................agar aisa nahin hua to mera naam bhi sakshi nahin.............aur main aapko chodhkar kahin nahin jaa rahi............ye mutt bhooliye ki aapka bhi ek parivaar hain..........baachey hain...........aap un sabko sambhaliye ............mujhe nahin.................." aur itna kehkar sakshi vinod ke seenay se lipat jati hain wahin vinod na chahtey hue bhi apne aankhon se behtey hue un aansuwon ko nahin rok pata...........jisey wo bahut der se apne ander sambhaley hua tha.....................

" please....................roiye nahin..................main nahin chahti ki mere dost ko log kamzor kahe............usey koi ulta seedha taana mare...............main to aapko ander aur bahar se strong dekhna chahti hoon...............ye zindagi hain vinod.......yahan kuch pane ke liye kuch cheezon ka gala bhi ghontna padta hain.................bus itna samajh lo ki mera saath bus yahin tak tha..............aagey ke faasle aur raaste aapko khud hi tay karne padengey...................

aur haan.............jaate jaate bus itna hi kahungi ki jab main aapse pehli baar mili thi to maine aapko ek parichi di thi.........aapko yaad hain na...................us parchi par ek address bhi likha tha maine...........jiska pata main aapse pooch rahi thi................aur ye bhi aapko yaad hoga ki ye pata mera ghar tha.....................aap jab wahan jayengey to aapko aapke sare sawalon ke jawab mil jayenge............sab kuch dekhna aaiyney ki tarah ekdum saaf ho jayega...................main tumse milne zaroor aayungi vinod..............ye mera vaada hain aapse.............." aur vinod apne dimag par zor dalte hue sakshi ki kahi hui baateion ko sochney lagta hain wahin usey sari cheezien kuch kuch yaad aane lagti hain..............magar skshi ki baatein usey poori tarah se samajh mein nahin aayi thi...............

"haan sakshi mujhe sab yaad hain..................." aur vinod bujhe munn se bol padta hain..................wahin sakshi bade pyaar se uske chehrey ki taraf dekh rahi thi............

" to kya aap mere ghar par nahin chalengey...................waise agar aap mere ghar jayengey to aapko aapke sare sawalon ke jawab bhi mil jayengey..............jab aap meri maa se milengey......................aur main daave se kehti hoon ki aapka is case ko bhi solve kar lengey................kyon ..........kaise ............kya............kab............ye sab cheezien aap mujhse mutt poochiyega..............aur haan.......agar aapko sare sawalon ke jawab chahiye to aapko akele hi jana hoga...............na ki mere saath..................kyon ki main ghar se nikal chuki hoon aur meri bus bhi aab aane wali hain................mujhe der hogi..............chalti hoon vinod...............apna khyaal rakhna.................." aur is baar sakshi vinod ke kareeb aati hain aur hanskar uske gale lag jati hain wahin vinod ka chehra ruwasa ho jata hain...................

na hi wo aab sakshi ko rok sakta tha aur na hi usey apne se door jane se mana kar sakta tha................vinod ka dil ander hi ander toot gaya tha............wo sakshi jaisa dost aab khona nahin chahta tha.............thode der baad ek bus aakar ruki aur sakshi vinod ki taraf ajeeb nazreion se dekhti hui seedha us bus mein jakar baith gayi......................uski aankhon se bhi aansoon chalak pade they.....jisey vinod ne dekh liya tha........ye dekhkar uska dil buri tarah se machal utha tha.............aankhon se aansoon fir se chalak pade they..............judayi kya hoti hai aaj pehli baar vinod ko samajh mein aa rahi thi.......wo kitna dard aur takleef deti hain is waqt wo is cheez ko bayan nahin kar sakta tha.................

saskhi ko jaate tak wo bahut der tak usi jagah chup chaap se khamosh khada raha..................usey aab bhi munn mein vishwaas tha ki sakshi laut kar dubara aayegi.................magar jaise jaise waqt guzarta gaya sakshi na wapas aayi............kyon ki vinod ye baat shayad nahin janta tha ki mare hue log kabhi wapas nahin aate.................aur shayad sakshi sahi bol rahi thi..............

kuch der ke baad wo apne jeb mein apne purse nikalta hain to usey wahin parchi dikhayi deti hain jo pehli baar wo sakshi ne ussey milte waqt di thi...............

wo bade gaur se us parchi ko dekh raha tha..............jispar likha tha..............."aman villa.................bunglow no 26............tezpur" ye sochkar wo bujhe munn se sakshi ke ghar ke taraf chal padta hain............jaise jaise wo uske ghar ke nazdeek jata jaa raha tha uske dimag mein hazaron sawal uth rahe they........dimag mein jaise toofan sa utha hua tha..................wo do chaar logon se sakshi ke ghar ka pata poocha hua jaise hi ek ghar par pahuncha.............................

uspar bade aksharon mein likha tha...............aman villa.........bunglow no 26..........tezpur............." ye dekhkar vinod ke chehrey par thodi khushi to aayi magar agle hi pal sakshi ko yaad karke uska chehra fir se udaas ho gaya.......wo jaise hi us bunglow ke paas gaya wo charon taraf bade gaur se dekhney laga.............wahin usney door bell bajayi.......to kuch der baad ek 54 saal ki aurat bahar nikalkar aayi.........ye sakshi ki maa thi kavita.............jisey vinod bade gaur se dekh raha tha................

" jee kahiye ........kya kaam hain................aapko kissey milna hain............" aur kavita vinod ki taraf dekhti hui dheere se bol padi wahin vinod bade gaur se kavita ke chehrey ki taraf dekh raha tha..............

" jee.......main inspector vinod................yahan ka naya inspector..............ghabraiye nahin.............main yahan kisi cheez ki talashi karney nahin aaya...........da-sal main aap logon se milne aaya hoon........mujhe sakshi ne aapke paas bheja hain.............." aur vinod ki aisi baateion ko sunkar kavita bade gaur se vinod ke chehrey ki taraf dekhney lagi..........usey yakeen nahin ho raha tha ki samney khada insaan hosh mein hain.........ya nahin............

" aap sahi pate par aaye hai.............ye sakshi ka hi ghar hain................magar wo aab yahan nahin rehti................." aur kavita baat ko na badhatey hue apne darwaze ko band karney lagti hain ye dekhkar vinod fauran usey rokney lagta hain.............

" haan mujhe pata hain ki wo yahan nahin hain is waqt.......main kuch der pehle ussey milkar aa raha hoon...............wo aabhi bus mein baithkar sehar chali gayi hain.............." aur vinod apni baat khatam karta hain wahin kavita bade gaur se vinod ke chehrey ko niharney lagti hain............

" ek baat kahun beta..............tum bura to nahin manogey na..................kya tumne is waqt koi nasha kiya hain kya jo tum ulti seedhi baatein kar rahe ho................" aur kavita vinod ko ghoorti hui haule se bol padti hain wahin vinod bura sa mooh banata hain.......kavita ki baatein usey samajh mein nahin aayi thi..........

" jo hain hi nahin ussey kya milogey beta........................aawo ander main tumhein sab samjhati hoon...................." aur kavita vinod ko ander bulati hain aur jaise hi wo ander aata hain samney ek bahut bada haal tha jahan sofey lage they..................vinod aakar us sofey par baith jata hain .......................

" tum yahin baitho main tumhare liye pani lekar aati hoon............." aur kavita ke ander jate hi vinod bade gaur se us ghar ko dekhney lagta hain aur jab uski nazrein samney deewar par tangi tasveer par pati hain wo apni jagah se aise uchalta hain jaise uske pichwade kisi ne 440 volt ka current chuwa diya ho................ek 3*3 ki badi si tasveer sakshi ki tangi hui thi jispar bada sa phoolnon ka har bhi chada hua tha....................jispar uske DOB ( date of birth) ke saath saath uske marney ki taarikh bhi likhi hui thi.........aur ye taarikh thi.......26- october...........2021

vinod ka dimag sunn ho gaya tha.....wo apne sir ko pakadta hua wahin sofey par dham se baith jata hain.......................uske aankhon se aansoon chalak padte hain aur wo bahut kuch sochta chala jata hain..............dekhna tha ki usey uske sare sawalon ka jawab mil pata hain ya nahin............................

To Be Continued..........................................................
 
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" bahadur...............ye 26 ka chaakar meri samajh mein nahin aa raha...................kuch to raaz chupa hua hain in numberion ke peechay................aakhir ye 26 number ho kya sakta hain...............yahan bhi laash ka number 26...............tumhare hisab se agar wahan koi rooh hain bhi to wo kyon logon ko alag alag tarike se maar rahi...................jahan tak maine suna hain ki rooh ek hi tarike se logon ko marti hain...............

dusara sawal...............kahin us 26 number se wo rooh humein is baat ka to ishara nahin kar rahi thi ki agla jo maut hua tha wo 26 number ke laash ne unhein mara hain......................ya unhi sab ki wajah se..............26 to kisi ki umra bhi ho sakti hain.............26 us jagah se kisi jagah ki doori bhi............26 koi bank ya locker ka number bhi........sala dimag ghoomakar rakh diya hain is case ne...............agar ye maut ka silsila yu hi chalta raha to police ki badnaami bahut jald honi shuru ho jayegi...............is liye humein jald se jald koi thosh kadam uthana padega............." aur vinod lumbi saans chodhta hua apni baat khatam karta hain wahin bahadur bhi apne soch mein doobta chala jata hain..........

bahadur issey pehle kuch kehta.................tabhi vinod ka mobile baj uthatha hain..................vinod fauran apne jeb se mobile phone nikalta hain aur samney usey us doctor brijnarayan ka number nazar aane lagta hain..................

" kya baat hain doctor saheb......................postmortem ki report aa gayi kya!!!!!" aur vinod cigar ke dhuwon ko fir chota hua dheere se bol padta hain wahin brij fir aagey kehna shuru karta hain............

" haan aa to gayi hain.................magar main aapko is waqt koi bhi baat phone par nahin bata sakta...............aapko agar janana ho to aap fauran mere phorensic lab par chale aaiye.................main aapko sab kuch detail mein samjha bhi dunga aur........ dikha bhi doonga................" aur itna kehta hua brij fir apna phone cutt kar deta hain wahin vinod apni car leta hain aur fir fauran us doctor se milney uske lab ki taraf chal padta hain...........

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kamrey mein is waqt gehri khamoshi chayi hui thi...........na hi vinod kuch bol raha tha aur na hi bahadur.......aur na hi samney baitha hua wo doctor.............haan samney bed par 4 laashein rakhi hui thi................jo kal ke hue us ghatna ko fir se ujagar kar rahi thi..................

" in laashon ko dekh rahe ho na inspector...................aab jo main tumhein batane jaa raha hoon usey sunakar tumhare hosh udd jayengey....................kyon ki jo inke saath hua hain wo kisi normal insaan ka kaam to ho hi nahin sakta.................." aur brij itna kehkar fir se chup ho jata hain wahin vinod taktaki lagaye brij ke chehrey ko dekhney lagta hain..............wahin bahadur bhi baitha hua chup chaap se us doctor ko dekhey jaa raha tha....

" kal hue jawed aur moin ki mautein ki wajah sirf ye dono hain.....................in dono ne hi inhein mara hain........aab tum chahe yakeen karo ya na karo..............magar ye sach Hain........." aur brij itna kehta hua fauran apni kursi se uth jata hain aur ek ek kar un laashon ke mooh aur haath par se us kafan ko hataney lagta hain.............wahin vinod aur bahadur bhi uske peechay peechay chal padte hain...................wahin vinod ka chehra is waqt dekhney layak tha...............wo fati hui aankhon se brij ke chehrey ko bade ajeeb dhang se ghoor raha tha...........

" what do you mean..........!!!! ye aap kya bak rahein hain doctor.................bhala kya kabhi koi laash kisi insaan ka katal kar sakti hain................its impossible.................kahin aisa bhi to ho sakta hain ki aapki ye report galat ho..........................." aur vinod ke chehrey par hairani ke badal fir se umad padte hain.............wo bade gaur se brij ke chehrey ko ghoorey jaa raha tha..............

" tumhara kehna sahi hain inspector......................aisa ho sakta hain ki meri banayi report galat ho................magar kya ek hi report ko baar baar test karney par kya same result nahin aayega...........ofcourse aayega.................agar sare tests sahi ho to.........................ismein fir shaq ki koi gunjayish nahin............" aur brij agey badhta hua un sare report ko vinod ke haathon mein fir thama deta hain wahin vinod bade gaur se un sare reports ko ek ek kar padhney lagta hain...........poorey reports ko dekhney ke baad uske chehrey ka rang jaise feeka padh jata hain...............

" ye dekh rahe ho in do laashon ke haathon ko.................aur is ladki ko bhi dhyaan se dekho...............is ladki par lage haathon ke nishan inhi dono ke hain.............ji ladki ko inke jism mein ghopa gaya...........aur fir unhein mara gaya..........................main janta hoon ki aisi baateion par vishwaas karna bahut muskhil hain magar ye sach hain.......jaise bhi ho magar kal raat wahan Jo kuch hua kuch waise hi tha...................." aur brij apne sare tarkh rakhta hua apni baat khatam karta hain wahin vinod ke chehrey ka rang uda hua sa nazar aata hain.................

" magar................aisa ho nahin sakta................." aur vinod ka maatha poori tarah se ghoom jata hain.......wahin brij fir aagey kehna shuru karta hain..........

" ek cheez aur.................ye dekho inke pet aur peeth ke hisson ko..............jo poori tarah se kale padh gaye hain.................ander se.............aur bahar se bhi............aise kale nishan moin ke pet aur peeth par bhi hain jaise jawed ke hain.................yani ki inka dil bhi ander se jalaya gaya hain..................magar is case mein thodi asamaanta hain...............inke marney ke baad jaise inka dil jalaya gaya tha............balki abdul wale case mein uski maut dil ke jal jane se hui thi...............bus yehi difference hain....................aur inke blood ke sample se ye bhi pata chala hain ki inki maut ka dusara wajah zyada matra mein drugs lene se hui.............aur us waqt tum hi kaho ki inke paas itni aadhik matra mein drugs kahan se aayi.............

nahin jante naa....................main batata hoon tumhein.................in laashon ke zariye..................kyon aur kaise.................ye to bus upar wala hi janta hain..............sach kehta hoon aise cases ke postmortem report banakar to mera bhi dimag ander se hil gaya hain..................jin cheezon ko doctors nahin maantey aab mujhe bhi aisi cheezon par vishwaas karna padh raha hain....................." aur brij lumbi saans chodhta hua taktaki lagaye vinod ke chehrey ki taraf dekhney lagta hain...............wahin vinod ke chehrey ka rang feeka padh chuka tha...................usey khud samajh mein nahin aa raha tha ki wo aab kya bole............

magar jo bhi tha................jaisa bhi tha................aab vinod apne badhaye hue kadam peechay nahin karna chahta tha.........anjaam chahe jo bhi ho..............jaisa bhi ho.........itne salon ki naukari mein aab tak usney apni poorey carrier mein na hi aisa case pehle kabhi suna tha..............aur na hi kabhi dekha tha....................usey to yakeen nahin ho raha tha ki wo is case ko kahan se fir chanbeen kare....................jo bhi wo idea laga raha tha sab uske iradon par jaise pani fir jata..............case jahan ka taha tha...................aab tak usey ek bhi safalta nahin mili thi.........mili thi to bus un lashon ke saudagar ke bare mein.................

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raat ke 12baj rahe they........................aab un chaar laashon ko fir se paas ke ek chote se morgue room mein shift kar diya gaya tha aur..............mohanlal jis morgue ko chalata tha usey seal kar diya gaya tha..............aur uski chabi aab vinod ke paas thi....................us chote se kamrey mein sirf wahi 4 laashein rakhi hui thi...............is waqt wahan ghanghor andhera tha..............bahar ek choti si bulb jal rahi thi.................jissey bahut kum ujala nazar aa raha tha............

tabhi us morgue room mein ek hulchal hui....................moin jo is waqt laash ki tarah pada hua tha achanak se uski ek ungli dheere se hilney lagi............tabhi thode der baad jawed ke jism mein bhi hulchal hone lagi........................aur uski bhi ungli ek ek kar hilney lagi................achnak ek tezz gurhaahat ke saath pehle moin apni jagah se uthkaar us bed par baith gaya...................aur fir thode der baad jawed bhi usi andaaz mein uthkar baith gaya..................aur dono ek dusare ki taraf dekhtey hue fir dheere se muskura pade.....................................

Till Continued.................................................................
Rongtey khade karni wali story hai bhai yah. Mazedar chal Rahi hai.
 
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sehar mein ho rahi maut se sab log pareshan ho gaye they.....................to vinod bhi chup nahin baithney wala tha............ek ke bad ek maut....................kal fir se do doctors ki maut ki khabar ko sunkar vinod ander se poori tarah baukhlaa sa gaya tha..................iska jimmedar wo khud apne police ke kuch officers ko maan raha tha jo apna kaam theek se imandari se nahin karte they................unse to wo baad mein nibat leta magar jo samasya is waqt uske samney mooh khole khadi thi uska kya kare usey koi raasta nahin soojh raha tha.............magar karna to tha hi...........chahe jo karna pade.........jis haal mein karna pade..........

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shaam ke 7 baj rahe they......................is waqt sardi ke mausam ki wajah se log apne gharon se bahar nahin nikalte they..............upar se itni thand...............aur is sehar mein ho rahe aaye din vardaat..............logon ke dilon mein khauff to hona hi tha.................fir jisey kaam bhi rehta to bhi wo bahar nahin jata.............bhala kisey apni jaan pyari nahin hoti............usi raat mein kavita dheere se apne kamrey se bahar nikli aur apne samney wali ghar par jakar kuch der tak chup chaap si khadi ho gayi..................aur taktaki lagaye samney ke darwaze ki taraf dekhney lagi..............

wo kuch der tak samney band darwaze ki taraf dekhti rahi fir kuch sochkar uspar dastak di...............thode der bad ek 25 ya 30 saal ka ek naujawon samney khada dikhayi diya jo kavita ko dekhkar muskuraney laga...........

" arey kavita aunti ji...............aap...............aur is waqt yahan.....................koi kaam tha kya.............aaiye na ander................." aur wo saksh haule se muskurata hua kavita ko ander aane ka ishara karta hain wahin jawab mein kavita naa mein apni gurden hilati hui usey ander aane se saaf inkaar kar deti hain.............

" kaam tha tabhi to aayi hoon main tumhare paas................tumhari biwi hain kya is waqt................." aur kavita bade gaur se samney khade us saksh ke chehrey ko niharney lagti hain wahin wo saksh dheere se muskurata hua naa mein jawab deta hain..............

" aapko mujhse kaam hain ya fir meri biwi se............waise wo aaj hi subeh apni mayke chali gayi thi ...............baachon ke saath..............mere sasurji ki tabiyat thodi kharab thi is wajah se...............kahiye na baat kya hain.............sab theek to hain naa..........." aur wo saksh agal bagal dekhta hua dheere se bol padta hain wahin kavita apne ghar ki taraf ek baar peechay ki taraf mudati hain aur fir haan mein dheere se apni gurden hila deti hain..........

" kaam to tumse hi tha...........agar kaam na hota to kya main aati is waqt yahan.................chalogey mere saath ek jagah chalni hain...........suresh..............yahan se kuch door par..............mujhe kisi se milne jana hain............." aur kavita gehri saans lete hue apni baat kehti hain wahin samney khada saksh ajeeb si nazreion se kavita ke taraf dekhney lagta hain............wo bahut aachey se janta tha ki uski pados mein rehti kavita aunti kaisi aurat hain.............fir raat mein kisi se milney jana.............thoda to ajeeb lagega hi.............

" kissey milne jana hain......aur kahan.........bataiye to............." aur suresh fir se sawal karta hain wahin is baar kavita thoda zor se bol padti hain............

" tum apne kam se kam rakho........jagah thodi door hain aur raat mein saadhan nahin milta aise jagahon par..............agar lekar chal sakte ho to chalo..........nahin to koi baat nahin beta............main kisi aur ko dhoodh loongi..........aur itna kehtey hue kavita peechay mudati hui wapas jane lagti hain wahin suresh dheere se bol padta hain.........

" aap naraz kyon hoti hain aunti.............main chalunga aapko lekar.......kab aur kahan......bus mujhe ye bata dijiye.............." aur kavita apne seenay mein rakhi ek kale dhaagey mein badha kuch cheez nikati hui samney khade suresh ko deti hain wahin suresh bade dhyaan se uski taraf sawal bhare nazreion se dekhney lagta hain........

" ye kya hain aunti..........." aur suresh dheere se apna ek haath aagey ki taraf badha leta hain wahin kavita ek nazar uski taraf dekhti hui aagey kehna shuru karti hain.....

" ye taabiz hain beta..............isey tum apne gale mein pehan lo............baad mein bhale hi tum isey nikalkar fenk dena........magar jab tak tum mere saath rahoge bhagwaan ke liye isey tum apne jism se alag mutt hone dena............nahin to bahut dikkat ho jayegi................aur hum jayengey raat mein 11 baje jab meri beti soo jayegi tab.................humein tezpur se bahar us jungle mein jana hain wahan koi mera apna hain...............mujhe usi se milna hain...........aab please main tumhare aagey haath jodti hoon zyada sawal jawab mutt karna main baad mein tumhein sab kuch bata doongi.......

tum apni motorcycle nikalkar samney us chauk par khade rehna.....main theek 11 baje aa jawungi............" aur kavita bina sawal jawab kiye seedha apne ghar ke taraf chal padti hain wahin samney khada suresh taktki lagaye bus kavita to apne se door jata hua dekh raha tha..............jab tak wo apne ghar ke ander nahin chali gayi wo wahan bahar hi chup chaap khada raha...........apne haath mein taabiz liye hue..........

raat ke 11 baj rahe they........................sardi kafi thi aur sadkein poori tarah se soonsaan............is mausam mein siyaron ki bhoonkney ki awaazein lagataar goonj rahi thi jo is mahool ko aur bhi bhayanak bana rahi thi...............tabhi kavita ka darwaza khula aur kale shawl mein lipti wo dheere dheere chalti hui seedha samney ke chawk par jane lagi...............kuch door par usey ek kinare suresh apni bike liye khada mila........usney bhi overocat aur mooh par mufler pehan rakha tha...........haathon mein dastaney jo is kadkadi thand mein usey bacha rahi thi..........

jaise hi kavita suresh ke paas aayi wo usey ek 500 ka note dete hue uski gaadi par baith gayi......wahin suresh us note ko lene se saaf inkaar kar diya.......

" ye kis liye aunti................kya main aapke itna bhi kaam nahin aa sakta kya............" wahin kavita kuch nahin kehti aur chup chaap se suresh ke bike par baith jati hain aur suresh apni bike tezi se chalaney lagta hain...............

" tumne wo tabeez pehni to hain na suresh...............thode door pahunchkar kavita ne suresh se fir sawal kiya wahin suresh haan mein apni gurden dheere se hila diya.........

"ek baat poochon aunti.................aap bura to nahin manengi na..............." aur suresh bike chalata hua peechay baithi kavita se achahanak sawal pooch baitha..............wahin kavita ne usey poocheney ki anumati de di...........

" kya sakshi ki maut ek accident thi........................ya fir hatya................mujhe to aisa lagta hain ki kisi ne uski hatya ki thi................itni pyari aapki baachi thi magar bhagwaan ne usey aise............." aur suresh bike chalatey hua apne munn mein shak ko bhi door karney ki koshish karta hain wahin kavita kuch der tak khamosh rehti hain..............

" pata nahin beta.............jab wo humare beech hain hi nahin to aab sawal jawab karke kya fayda............" aur kavita zyada intrest na dikhatey hue apni baat khatam karti hain wahin suresh fir se agla sawal karta hain.............

"aapne kya kabhi police complain nahin ki.............."suresh aab us jungle ke paas pahunch gaya tha jahan us jungle ki aab shurwaat hoti thi..................

"police kuch nahin karegi..........ye sochkar maine koi karyawahi nahin ki............." aur kavita itna kehkar fir se khamosh ho gayi...........

" ye to wahin area hain na jahan har roz pichley kuch dinon se murder hote aa rahe hain..............to aap aise jagah par itni soonsaan jagah par aise kissey milne jaa rahi hain.............kya ye ki kaatil hain............aise jagah to shareef insaan reh hi nahin sakte......." aur suresh mazakiye andaaz mein kehta hua dheere se hans padta hain wahin kavita chup hi rehti hain.........

" kuch aisa hi samajh lo............" aur kavita baat ko bewajah badhana nahin chahti thi is liye usney chup rehna hi theek samjha.............

" beta..............aacha hoga ki tum apna mooh band karo..............kyon apni maut ko bulwa de rahe................is tarah kehney par suresh chup to ho jata hain magar uske dimag mein hazaron sawal uthney lagte hain........wo soch liya tha ki kavita kissey milney jayegi wo sab kuch chupkar aakhir dekhega...........aur sach ka pata lagaeyega.................

thode door jane par wahin jagah mili jahan par likha tha............"tezpur 26km........" jaise hi wo jagah par suresh pahuncha achanak se uski bike band padh gayi aur uske chehrey par ghabrahat aur durr badhney laga............wahin kavita charon taraf dekhti hui bike se utarkar khadi ho gayi.....................

" dhaat teri ki..................ye bike ko bhi aabhi kharab hona tha..............pata nahin hum aab wapas ghar kaise jayengey..........upar se itni thand................aur as paas kahin koi nahin..........aur kitni door jana hain humein............" aur suresh ke chehrey par pareshani ke badal umadney lagte hain wahin kavita poori tarah se khamosh thi aur wo bade dhyaan se idher udher dekh rahi thi..........

" humein jahan aana tha hum aa gaye hain suresh..............aab tum yahin par isi jagah ruko.........aur yahan se kahin mutt jana.............mujhe jissey milna hain wo mujhe yahin par milegi............jab main ussey mil loongi tumari bika bhi apne aap sahi ho jayegi............." aur kavita ki nazrein charon taraf idher udher bhatak rahi thi wahin suresh uske mooh ko niharey jaa raha tha..............ek pal to usey aisa laga ki ye aurat pagal ho gayi hain..............aise soonsan jagah par yahan kaun aayega yu milne.............

" magar........hain yahan kaun??????? jissey aap milne itni door aayi hain............mujhe to koi dikh bhi nahin raha..........." aur suresh bade dhyaan se apne charon taraf dekhney lagta hain wahin kavita uski baateion ko nazarandaaz karke kuch door aagey paidal chal padti hain.........thode door jane par usey suresh bhi nazar nahin aata........kyon ko kohra ghana tha aur upar se gehri andheri raat..............hawa dheere dheere chal rahi thi magar aab kuch hi palon mein tezz ho gayi thi..........

" main aa gayi hoon beti.................kaha ho meri baachi.............jawab do..............tum mujhe sun rahi ho naa...............dekho aaj ek maa khud chalkar apni beti se milne itni door aayi hain.............." aur kavita ki baat khatam hoti tabhi aas paas ke pedon ke pattey tezi se hilney lagte hain aur dhund jo gehra tha wo kum hote hue wahin stir ho jati hain..............tabhi ek awaaz us waadi mein goonj uthathi hain jo us veeraney ko poori tarah se jhakjhod deti hain.........aur wo shabdh tha..........................mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa............................................................"


To Be Continued.............................................................
Bhai bohat hi zabardast update aur bohat hi zabardast thriller story hai maza aa gaya. Ab shayad woh Raaz khuley jab Kavita apni beti ki aatma se miley.
 
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" main aa gayi hoon beti.................kaha ho meri baachi.............jawab do..............tum mujhe sun rahi ho naa...............dekho aaj ek maa khud chalkar apni beti se milne itni door aayi hain.............." aur kavita ki baat khatam hoti tabhi aas paas ke pedon ke pattey tezi se hilney lagte hain aur dhund jo gehra tha wo kum hote hue wahin stir ho jati hain..............tabhi ek awaaz us waadi mein goonj uthathi hain jo us veeraney ko poori tarah se jhakjhod deti hain.........aur wo shabdh tha..........................mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa............................................................"

Ab Aage........................................................................

Awaaz itni dardnaak aur dil ko dehlaa dene wali thi ki ek pal to kavita ka bhi durr se gala sookhney laga..............uska bhi dil dehal gaya...............us awaaz mein itni kashish thi...................itni dard thi ki usey bus ek maa hi samajh sakti thi...................jaise hi kavita apne peechay ki taraf mudi uski aankhein hairat se badi hoti chali gayi................wahin dil mein dard...............durr..........shikayat.............apnapan...........aur ek maa ki mamta...............aur apni jaan se pyari beti se milne ki chaah aur aas bhi to thi ..............jo aaj usey yahan kheech layi thi..................kavita ke dil se to maut ka khauff bhi nikal chuka tha............wo is waqt bus apne mamta ke aagey poori tarah se vivas thi.................

shayad isi wajah se is duniya mein maa ka darza sabse upar hota hain..........kyon ki wo apne baachon ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti thi...........bina apni maut ki parwaah kiye bhi..............

kuch door par sakshi usi safed suit mein.................jameen se kareeb 1 foot upar hawa mein.........................aankhon mein dard aur takleef liye badi hi bebasi se apni maa ko tukur tukur dekh rahi thi......................shayad is wajah se aaj uski aankhon mein aansoon bhi aa gaye they.......................jab kavita ki nazar apne beti par padi wo apne zazbateion ko sambhal nahin payi aur fauran apne beti ke taraf aagey badhney lagi................jaise wo usey apni bahon mein tham lena chahti ho.............jo har maa apne baachon se door bichandey par aksar karti hain..................

magar sakshti to bus ek hawa thi...............ek chalawa thi..........ek rooh thi................aur rooh ko koi kabhi bhi choo nahin sakta...................bus mehsoos kiya ja sakta hain.............jaise hi kavita sakshi ko apne seenay se lagane ke liye aagey badi wo uske aar paar se hoti hui aagey nikal gayi...............fir wo wapas mudi aur dubara se usey apne bahon mein kaid karna chaha magar parinaam wahi hua.............jo hona tha............

"Mmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....................aab main aapki beti nahin rahi.......................bulki ek rooh ban chuki hoon.................aur rooh kabhi kisi insaan ke hua nahin karte...............unka kisi se naata nahin hota................aakhir kab tak aap is baat ko mananey se inkaar karengi...................kab tak.........................." aur sakshi ki aakhon se aansoon ki dhara foot padti hain wahin kavita ke aankhon se bhi aansoon ki dhara beh jati hain..............dil mein uth rahi us teesh ko kaise wo pal pal seh rahi thi...............ye ussey behtar aur kaun jaan sakta tha....................

" aisa mutt bol beta.......................aisa mutt bol...............mujhe kuch nahin chahiye..............bus tu kaise bhi karke wapas aa jaa............mere paas..............meri god mein..............jaise maine tujhe bachpan mein pala tha..................tujhe apne god mein main sulaya karti thi...........aur jab tak tu meri god mein sooti nahin thi tab tak tujhe neend nahin aati thi................fir aaj aisa kya hua.........jo tu mere bagair mujhse door reh rahi hain.............." aur kavita fafak fafak kar roo padti hain wahin sakshi ki aankhon se bhi aansoonwon ki dhara thamney ka naam nahin le rahi thi................

" maaaaaa.................ye to naseeb naseeb ki bus baat hain................aab mujhe kabhi wo sukh........wo sukoon nahin milega................main humesha aise hi tadapti rahungi............apni mukti ke liye dar dar bhatakti rahungi...............aur jab tak mujhe mukti nahin milegi...............meri takleef kabhi kum nahin hogi.................." aur sakshi apni maa ko samjhatey hue dheere se bol padti hain........wahin kavita bade dhyaan se uski baateion ko sun rahi thi.............

" main tujhe dilaungi mukti..........bol beta.............mujhe kya karna hoga...................." aur kavita jaise apni beti ka sara takleef apne upar le lena chahti ho.............ander hi ander wo bhi tadap uthi thi................wo nahin chahti thi ki aab uski beti ko zara si bhi takleef ho...............

" nahin maa.......................aabhi nahin............aabhi sahi waqt nahin aaya hain..................jinhone mujhe aaj is mukaam par pahunchaya hain unhein bhi to in sab ka ek ek hisab chukta karna hoga................uske baad hi meri rooh ko tab jakar mukti milegi.....................aap chali jaiye maa......yahan se....................aapka aana yahan theek nahin................." aur sakshi bade gaur se apni maa ke chehrey ki taraf dekhney lagti hain wahin kavita aas lagaye apni baachi ki taraf bus dekhey jaa rahi thi..............usey is baat ki takleef thi ki aaj kyon uski beti khud usey yahan se jane ke liye keh rahi.............

" kya.....................maine yahan aakar koi gunaah kar diya kya beti..................kya ek maa apni baachi se bhi nahin mil sakti..............ye haq to mujhse upar wala bhi nahin cheen sakta..........to fir ye jamana kya rokega mujhe...............aur tu bata.........kaun hain in sab ka jimmedar................main unhein saza dilwakar rahungi.................main bade bade adhikari.......neta ke paas jawungi aur tujhe insaaf dilaungi..............." aur kavita apne dil mein uth rahe zazbateoin ke samundar ko khangaltey hue dheere se bol padti hain wahin sakshi ka chehra gussey se aab tamtamey lagta hain...................kuch der pehle jo sakshi zazbati ho rahi thi aab is waqt uske dil mein jaise koi lava dhadak rahi thi..............

" maaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..........koi kuch nahin karega.................sab upar se neechay mile hue hain.......aur meri maut ke jimmedar bhi ye sab hain.....main sabko maar doongi.........aur aisi dardnaak maut doongi ki unki rooh bhi durr se thar thar kaanp uthegi........................,main kisi ko nahin chodungi................kisi ko nahin...................." aur sakshi lagbhg cheekhtey hue wahan se gayab ho jati hain wahin kavita ghutnon ke bal baithi hui apne behtey hue aansoowon ko nahin rok pati aur fir se fafak fafak kar roo padti hain...............uske dil ki vidmabana koi nahin samjah sakta tha.................

na hi sakshi usey khulkar kuch batana chahti thi.........aur na hi usey kuch karney ko bol rahi thi................5 minute tak kavita aise hi us jagah par foot foot kar roti hain tabhi uske kandhon par kisi ka haath mehsoos hota hain...............agle hi pal uske dil mein armaan fir se jal uthathey hain......shyayad apni beti se milne ki dubara se chaah mein................magar jaise hi wo apni gurden peechy ki taraf ghumati hain to uske theek peechay suresh khada tha jo usey bahut hi ajeeb si nazreion se dekh raha tha................

jaise hi suresh ki nazar kavita par padti hain aur jab wo usey roota hua dekhta hain wo bhi kuch pal ke liye mano thithak sa jata hain.............magar kavita apne aankhon se behtey un aansowon ko poochti hain aur apna mooh apne haathon se poochti hui apni jagah se uth khadi hoti hain..............uske dil ke armaan apni beti se aab aur milne ke bus armaan reh gaye they..................

" kya hua hain aapko aunti..........aap is tarah road par baithi hui roo kyon rahi hain..........aur aap kissey milne aayi thi..............main wahin ped ke kinarey chup kar aapko dekh raha tha aap na jane hawa mein kissey baatein kiye jaa rahi thi.....................aap jissey milney aayi thi kya aap ussey mili bhi ya nahin.............raat bahut ho gayi hain...........dekhiye 1 bajney wale hain.............sardi bhi badh gayi hain..........aab humein yahan se chalna hoga.............." aur suresh kavita ke haathon ko pakadta hua usey apni bike ke taraf le jane lagta hain wahin kavita bilkul chup thi...................poori tarah khamosh thi...............

jaise hi suresh apni bike ke paas aata hain wo apni bike ko ek zordaar kick marta hain aur agle hi pal uski bike ek hi baar mein start ho jati hain wahin suresh ke chehrey par khushi to jhalak padti hain magar utni hi zyada hairani bhi..............wo kavita ko bade gaur se dekhey jaa raha tha.............uske jehan mein kavita ki wo baat yaad aa gayi jo usney ussey bike se utartey waqt kahi thi........

bike ke chalu ho jane par kavita baith jati hain aur suresh fir tezi se apni ghar ke taraf chal padta hain................wo poorey raaste bhar badadta jaa raha tha.................kavita se sawal karta jaa raha tha magar kavita chup thi.................aakhirkaar jab wo apne ghar pahunchti hain to suresh ko bardaast nahin hota aur wo faryaad karta hua kavita se fir bol padta hain...........

" dekhiye aunti ji..........main aapke aagey haath jodta hoon..............bhagwan ke liye bus ek baar to bata dijiye ki aap is tarah se aise sunsaan jagah par kissey milne gayi thi............." aur suresh badi aas lagaye kavita ke chehrey ki taraf dekhney lagta hain wahin kavita kuch der tak khamosh rehti hain fir wo dheere se bol padti hain............

" main tumhein uska naam batungi to tumhein yakeen nahin hoga........is liye jane do suresh............apne kaam se kaam rakho............" aur kavita fir se apni baat tal deti hain magar suresh bhi aaj jaise zidd par aa gaya tha.................

" mera yakeen mano ......main kisi se kuch nahin kahunga...............kabhi koi baat nahin batunga................bus ek baar bata do ki.............." aur suresh badi utshukta se dubara kavita ki taraf dekhta hua fir se bol padta hain wahin kavita kuch der chup rehney ke baad dheere se bol padti hain............
Bohat hi Dil dukhane wala update thaa boss. Ek maa ke Dil ki Karuna n Mamta ki vayakhaya bade acche se ki magar sakshi ke Dil ka dard kaun samjhey jo mar bhi nahi payi coz usko mukti nahi mili is duniya se.
 
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" vinod..................main janti hoon ki aap mujhe pasand karte hain..............apna aacha dost bhi mante hain..............magar is duniya mein sabko har cheez nahin milti..............kuch cheez jo dikhti hain wo vastavik mein hoti nahin................is liye kehti hoon ki is bhram aur mayajaal se aap bahar nikaliye..................aur apni duty imandaari se kijiye..............main yakeen se kehti hoon ki kal tak aap is case ko 100% solve kar lengey..................agar aisa nahin hua to mera naam bhi sakshi nahin.............aur main aapko chodhkar kahin nahin jaa rahi............ye mutt bhooliye ki aapka bhi ek parivaar hain..........baachey hain...........aap un sabko sambhaliye ............mujhe nahin.................." aur itna kehkar sakshi vinod ke seenay se lipat jati hain wahin vinod na chahtey hue bhi apne aankhon se behtey hue un aansuwon ko nahin rok pata...........jisey wo bahut der se apne ander sambhaley hua tha.....................

" please....................roiye nahin..................main nahin chahti ki mere dost ko log kamzor kahe............usey koi ulta seedha taana mare...............main to aapko ander aur bahar se strong dekhna chahti hoon...............ye zindagi hain vinod.......yahan kuch pane ke liye kuch cheezon ka gala bhi ghontna padta hain.................bus itna samajh lo ki mera saath bus yahin tak tha..............aagey ke faasle aur raaste aapko khud hi tay karne padengey...................

aur haan.............jaate jaate bus itna hi kahungi ki jab main aapse pehli baar mili thi to maine aapko ek parichi di thi.........aapko yaad hain na...................us parchi par ek address bhi likha tha maine...........jiska pata main aapse pooch rahi thi................aur ye bhi aapko yaad hoga ki ye pata mera ghar tha.....................aap jab wahan jayengey to aapko aapke sare sawalon ke jawab mil jayenge............sab kuch dekhna aaiyney ki tarah ekdum saaf ho jayega...................main tumse milne zaroor aayungi vinod..............ye mera vaada hain aapse.............." aur vinod apne dimag par zor dalte hue sakshi ki kahi hui baateion ko sochney lagta hain wahin usey sari cheezien kuch kuch yaad aane lagti hain..............magar skshi ki baatein usey poori tarah se samajh mein nahin aayi thi...............

"haan sakshi mujhe sab yaad hain..................." aur vinod bujhe munn se bol padta hain..................wahin sakshi bade pyaar se uske chehrey ki taraf dekh rahi thi............

" to kya aap mere ghar par nahin chalengey...................waise agar aap mere ghar jayengey to aapko aapke sare sawalon ke jawab bhi mil jayengey..............jab aap meri maa se milengey......................aur main daave se kehti hoon ki aapka is case ko bhi solve kar lengey................kyon ..........kaise ............kya............kab............ye sab cheezien aap mujhse mutt poochiyega..............aur haan.......agar aapko sare sawalon ke jawab chahiye to aapko akele hi jana hoga...............na ki mere saath..................kyon ki main ghar se nikal chuki hoon aur meri bus bhi aab aane wali hain................mujhe der hogi..............chalti hoon vinod...............apna khyaal rakhna.................." aur is baar sakshi vinod ke kareeb aati hain aur hanskar uske gale lag jati hain wahin vinod ka chehra ruwasa ho jata hain...................

na hi wo aab sakshi ko rok sakta tha aur na hi usey apne se door jane se mana kar sakta tha................vinod ka dil ander hi ander toot gaya tha............wo sakshi jaisa dost aab khona nahin chahta tha.............thode der baad ek bus aakar ruki aur sakshi vinod ki taraf ajeeb nazreion se dekhti hui seedha us bus mein jakar baith gayi......................uski aankhon se bhi aansoon chalak pade they.....jisey vinod ne dekh liya tha........ye dekhkar uska dil buri tarah se machal utha tha.............aankhon se aansoon fir se chalak pade they..............judayi kya hoti hai aaj pehli baar vinod ko samajh mein aa rahi thi.......wo kitna dard aur takleef deti hain is waqt wo is cheez ko bayan nahin kar sakta tha.................

saskhi ko jaate tak wo bahut der tak usi jagah chup chaap se khamosh khada raha..................usey aab bhi munn mein vishwaas tha ki sakshi laut kar dubara aayegi.................magar jaise jaise waqt guzarta gaya sakshi na wapas aayi............kyon ki vinod ye baat shayad nahin janta tha ki mare hue log kabhi wapas nahin aate.................aur shayad sakshi sahi bol rahi thi..............

kuch der ke baad wo apne jeb mein apne purse nikalta hain to usey wahin parchi dikhayi deti hain jo pehli baar wo sakshi ne ussey milte waqt di thi...............

wo bade gaur se us parchi ko dekh raha tha..............jispar likha tha..............."aman villa.................bunglow no 26............tezpur" ye sochkar wo bujhe munn se sakshi ke ghar ke taraf chal padta hain............jaise jaise wo uske ghar ke nazdeek jata jaa raha tha uske dimag mein hazaron sawal uth rahe they........dimag mein jaise toofan sa utha hua tha..................wo do chaar logon se sakshi ke ghar ka pata poocha hua jaise hi ek ghar par pahuncha.............................

uspar bade aksharon mein likha tha...............aman villa.........bunglow no 26..........tezpur............." ye dekhkar vinod ke chehrey par thodi khushi to aayi magar agle hi pal sakshi ko yaad karke uska chehra fir se udaas ho gaya.......wo jaise hi us bunglow ke paas gaya wo charon taraf bade gaur se dekhney laga.............wahin usney door bell bajayi.......to kuch der baad ek 54 saal ki aurat bahar nikalkar aayi.........ye sakshi ki maa thi kavita.............jisey vinod bade gaur se dekh raha tha................

" jee kahiye ........kya kaam hain................aapko kissey milna hain............" aur kavita vinod ki taraf dekhti hui dheere se bol padi wahin vinod bade gaur se kavita ke chehrey ki taraf dekh raha tha..............

" jee.......main inspector vinod................yahan ka naya inspector..............ghabraiye nahin.............main yahan kisi cheez ki talashi karney nahin aaya...........da-sal main aap logon se milne aaya hoon........mujhe sakshi ne aapke paas bheja hain.............." aur vinod ki aisi baateion ko sunkar kavita bade gaur se vinod ke chehrey ki taraf dekhney lagi..........usey yakeen nahin ho raha tha ki samney khada insaan hosh mein hain.........ya nahin............

" aap sahi pate par aaye hai.............ye sakshi ka hi ghar hain................magar wo aab yahan nahin rehti................." aur kavita baat ko na badhatey hue apne darwaze ko band karney lagti hain ye dekhkar vinod fauran usey rokney lagta hain.............

" haan mujhe pata hain ki wo yahan nahin hain is waqt.......main kuch der pehle ussey milkar aa raha hoon...............wo aabhi bus mein baithkar sehar chali gayi hain.............." aur vinod apni baat khatam karta hain wahin kavita bade gaur se vinod ke chehrey ko niharney lagti hain............

" ek baat kahun beta..............tum bura to nahin manogey na..................kya tumne is waqt koi nasha kiya hain kya jo tum ulti seedhi baatein kar rahe ho................" aur kavita vinod ko ghoorti hui haule se bol padti hain wahin vinod bura sa mooh banata hain.......kavita ki baatein usey samajh mein nahin aayi thi..........

" jo hain hi nahin ussey kya milogey beta........................aawo ander main tumhein sab samjhati hoon...................." aur kavita vinod ko ander bulati hain aur jaise hi wo ander aata hain samney ek bahut bada haal tha jahan sofey lage they..................vinod aakar us sofey par baith jata hain .......................

" tum yahin baitho main tumhare liye pani lekar aati hoon............." aur kavita ke ander jate hi vinod bade gaur se us ghar ko dekhney lagta hain aur jab uski nazrein samney deewar par tangi tasveer par pati hain wo apni jagah se aise uchalta hain jaise uske pichwade kisi ne 440 volt ka current chuwa diya ho................ek 3*3 ki badi si tasveer sakshi ki tangi hui thi jispar bada sa phoolnon ka har bhi chada hua tha....................jispar uske DOB ( date of birth) ke saath saath uske marney ki taarikh bhi likhi hui thi.........aur ye taarikh thi.......26- october...........2022

vinod ka dimag sunn ho gaya tha.....wo apne sir ko pakadta hua wahin sofey par dham se baith jata hain.......................uske aankhon se aansoon chalak padte hain aur wo bahut kuch sochta chala jata hain..............dekhna tha ki usey uske sare sawalon ka jawab mil pata hain ya nahin............................

To Be Continued..........................................................
Yah kaun sa angle jod diya bhai ab to aur bhi khatarnak wala intrest developed ho gaya hai bhai.
 
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Update-15 (B) (Megha Update)

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shaam ka samay tha....................vinod ghar par aakar aaram kar raha tha..............tabhi uske mobile par phone ki ring baji...................phone rajesh ka tha.........................

"sir...................is case se judi ek aham saboot humare haath lagi hain.......................wo murdaghar ka chaukidaar hain na..................ram singh..............uska call trace ho gaya hain...................aaj wo seth mohanlaal se baat kar raha tha....................usney ussey contact kiya hain.......aur un dono ke beech jo bhi baat hui wo sab record bhi hua hain...............main aapko wo clip aapke paas bhej deta hoon......................" aur rajesh phone cutt kar deta hain wahin aaj pehli baar vinod ke chehrey par ek umeed ki kiran jaag uthi thi...............

thode der baad ek msg vinod ke mobile par aata hain aur wo us msg ko fir dekhney lagta hain...............

" main...............main ramsingh bol raha hoon malik.................apna dhanda to police walon ne band kar rakha hain..............mere paas paise bhi khatam ho gaye hain.......aap kuch madad kar dijiye nahin to mere parivaar ka kya hoga............." fir udher se awaaz aayi jo ki mohanlaal ki thi..................

" tujhe maine mana kiya tha na mere number par call karney ke liye.................kaisa policewala hain tu...........jo itni si baat nahin samjhata......................wo log tera number trace kiye honge............kisi din marwayega tu............jo bhi baat karni ho mere ghar par shaam ko aa jana...............wahin baithkar baat kar lengey........aur haan sun...............dubara is number pe call mutt kariyo"................. aur phone disconnect ho jata hain wahin vinod ke chehrey par ek vijayi muskaan aa jati hain.............

" beta mohanlaal........................ab to tu gaya kaam se......................aab main bhi dekhta hoon ki tujhe mujhse kaun bachata hain.........................." aur vinod fauran apne saade kapdey pehanta hua seedha apne ghar se bahar nikal jata hain......................police station..................

" ramsingh.....................mere saath aabhi chalo is mohanlaal ke ghar..........................aakhir main bhi to dekhun ki ye seth mohanlaal hain kya cheez..............aur is ram singh ko fauran apni girafft mein le lo.............ram singh ki girafftari ka warrant apne saath lete chalna............ye aab bachna nahin chahiye.................jis kaam ke liye maine isey itne din tak chodha tha wo kaam lagbhag ho gaya..............."aur vinod rajesh ko apni bullet par baithakar seedha mohanlaal ke ghar ki taraf nikal padta hain wahin uske dimag mein fir e bahut se sawal uth rahe they..............

"ye sakshi to badi kamal ki ladki hain ..............ye koi zyotish wagerah janti hain kya jo isey pehle se pata tha ki mujhe is case se judi saboot mil jayengey...............khair jab milegi to itmenaan se poochunga..............." aur vinod sari baatein sochta hua seedha mohanlaal ke ghar ki taraf chal padta hain....................kuch door jane par usey ek bada sa bunglow nazar aata hain...................jo ki seth mohanlaal ka tha................us bunglow ke samney ek bada sa gate tha jahan do pehredaar haath mein gun liye us ghar ka..........ya uske maalik ki pehredari kar rahe they..................poori imandaari se..................

vinod apni bullet ko rokta hua seedha us gate ki taraf chal padta hain jahan do pehredaar bade gaur se vinod ko apni taraf aata hua dekh rahe they............jaise hi vinod gate par pahuncha ek pehredaar usey rokta hua bol pada................

" aap ander nahin jaa sakte...................kaun hain aap..............."wahin vinod mazakiye andaaz mein us watchman ki taraf dekhta hua dheere se bol pada...............

" kya naam hain tumhara .........barkhurdaar.................apne maalik ke talwe chatatey kitne baras beet gaye.............main jo bhi hoon..............wo tumhara janana zaroori nahin bus mujhe tumhare maalik se ek baar milna hain.............jawo aur jakar usey khabar kar do..............." aur vinod apne jeb se sigar nikalta hain aur usey mooh mein rakha hua............fir machis jalakar ek lumbi si kaash leta hain aur sara dhuwaan samney khade us pehredaar ke mooh par chodhney lagta hain..............ye dekhkar wo pehredaar baukhlaa jata hain..........

" ye kya badhtameezi hain...............kaun ho tum................." aur wo watchman gussey se jhalaata hua bol padta hain wahin vinod ko jaise uski baateion ka koi fark nahin padh raha tha...............

" aab kya tumhare baap log ko bhi aise chote mote gundon se milne ki permission leni padegi..............chal hutt..........." aur vinod samney khade us pehredaar ka collar ko pakadta hua usey apne se door kar deta hain aur rajesh ke saath seedha ander daakhil ho jata hain wahin wo pehredaar bus chup chaap se khada tha...............shayad aab uske ander vinod se ulajhney ki aab himmat nahi thi......................

jaise hi vinod ander gaya samney ek bahut bada ground tha................wahin agal bagal kuch ped bhi they..................wahin beechon beech ek mota huuta kutta aadmi baitha hua tha aur uske baju mein do teen log apna haath jodey khade they..................unmein se ek ram singh bhi tha..................jaise hi uski nazar vinod par padti hain uske chehrey ka rang feeka padh jata hain wahin samney seth mohanlaal baitha hua tha......................jab uski nazar vinod aur rajesh par padti hain uske chehrey ka rang utar sa jata hain............vinod to kahin se dekhkar bhi police wala nahin lagta tha magar saath mein rajesh police ki vardi mein tha...............jissey mohanlaal ko ye andaza ho gaya tha ki ye zaroor iska senior officer hain..................

ya fir ye wahi hain jo iska aacha khasa bussiness ko thap kar rakha hain...............vinod bahut ajeeb si nazreion se seth mohanlaal ko ghoor raha tha .............na hi seth kuch keh raha tha.................aur na hi mohanlal................

" arey barkurdaar.....................sara sehar tumhe dhoondhey hum.................gali gali..............aur tum mile is seth ke baagichey mein...........iske gali gali...................!!!!!!!arey wah!!!!!! ye to sher ban gaya..............waise mujhe shayri ka koi shauk nahin magar kabhi kabhi main kar leta hoon...............arey chup kyon ho ramsingh.....................apne seth mohanlaal se mera parichay to karwawo...........dekho main kitni door se milne aaya hoon inse.............aur ek tum ho ki bus mujhe ghoore jaa rahe ho..............ghabrawo nahin main tumhein kha nahin jawunga...................." aur vinod sigar ka kaash kheechta hua apna sir upar ki ore karta hua dheere dheere apne mooh se dhuwaan chodhney lagta hain wahin mohanlaal aur wahan maujood baki log sab usey bahut gaur se dekh rahe they.................

" ye.................vinod hain...........seth.........maine aapko baytaya tha na.............wo murdaghar..........." aur ramsingh itna bolkar chup ho jata hain wahin vinod ke chehrey par hansi aa jati hain..........

" chup kyon ho gaye barkhurdaar.................aab bo hi rahe to to sab kuch saaf saaf bak do..................main bura thodi na manunga..................dekho main is waqt vardi mein bhi nahin hoon............" aur vinod bade gaur se seth mohanlaal ke taraf dekhney lagta hain..........wahin seth kuch der tak khamosh baitha hua tha............

" kaise insaan ho barkhurdaar...............ghar aaye mehmaan ko baithney ke liye bhi nahin poochtey..................." aur vinod khade rehtey hi mohanlaal ki taraf dekhta hua dheere se vyang karta hain...............wahin seth usey aur rajesh ko samney ki kursi par baithney ka ishara karta hain..........

" shukriya barkhurdaar...............waise laashon ka karobaar karte karte aapne itni badi haveli achi khasi bana rakhi hain.................mehnat kum aur aamdani bahut zyada..............magar maine to aapka ye dhandha seal karwa di............to kya socha hain koi naya dhandha shuru karne ke bare mein............" aur vinod kaash leta hua dheere se bol padta hain wahin seth mohanlaal kuch der tak khamosh tha...............

" dekho inspector...............tum yahan naye aaye ho to tum mujhe theek se jante nahin ho...............meri pahunch bahut upar tak hain...............kuch le de ke mamla rafa dafa karo...........tum bhi chain se rahogey.................aur hum bhi................" aur mohanlaal dheere se apni baat khatam karta hain wahin vinod uski baateion ko sunkar hans padta hain...........

" aisa dialogue to main aksar filmon mein sunta aaya hoon.................waah..................maza aa gaya...........sach mein.............aacha nahin janta main tumhare bare mein.................to bata do ki tum kaun ho..............." aur vinod dher sara dhuwaan hawa mein chodhta hua apni baat kehta hain wahin mohanlaal kuch der tak khamosh rehta hain...........vinod apne jeb se mobile nikalta hain aur wo recording ko uske samney chala deta hain jissey mohanlaal ke chehrey ka rang feeka sa padh jata hain.............

"is bare mein tumhara kya khyaal hain barkhurdaar................aab ye mutt kehna ki ye tum nahin bol rahe.............tum si sehar mein jitne bhi illegal drugs heroine,charas ke dhandhey karte ho na..............mujhe sabki khabar hain...............mere paas tumhare khilaaf saboot bhi hain........main to bus ye chahta hoon ki tere sir par kiska haath hain bus mujhe uska naam bata...............kyon ki mujhe aachey se pata hain ki tu sirf mohra hain.................asli badhshaah to koi aur hain......................is baar to main bus tujhse milne aaya hoon..........agli baar jab bhi aawunga tujhe doli mein saath lekar jawunga aur teri aachey se khatirdaari karunga...................filhaal to main tere is chamchey ko le jaa raha hoon............aabhi to iski sewa aachey se karni hain............." aur vinod fauran apni jagah se uth khada hota hain aur ramsingh ka collar pakadta hua ..............usey kheenchta hua seedha apne saath policestation ki ore le chalta hain............

wahin seth mohanlaal khamosh khada bus vinod ko jata hua bus dekh raha tha........gussa to usey bahut aa raha tha magar wo ye baat bahut aachey se janta tha ki police walon par haath uthaney ka matlab kya hota hain..............wahin sabhi log khade khade bus tamasha dekh rahe they........................

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raat ke 12 baj rahe they...........................avni bister par soo rahi thi......................tabhi uske darwaze par dheere se aahat hui..............aur us kamrey ka darwaza dheere se khulta chala gaya..................ek tezz aahat ke saath avni apne bister se hadbadakar uthi to uske baju mein sakshi ko baitha hua paya....................jo humesha ki tarah safed suit mein mayoos baithi hui avni ke sir ke balon ko bade hi pyaar se sehlaa rahi thi.................jab sakshi par uski nazar gayi wo ajeeb si nazreion se apni behan ki taraf ek tuk dekhney lagi..................

"dddddiiddddiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ......aaappppppppppppp.....................aap to murr chuki hain naa..........................." aur avni kaanptey hue awaz mein dheere se bol padi wahin sakshi bade gaur se avni ke masoom se chehrey ko bus dekhey jaa rahi thi...............

" avni...................main to bus tujhe dekhney aayi hoon................tu ghabra mutt main tujhe kuch nahin karungi.............................jinhone mera ye harsha kiya hain unhein aab bari bari se marna hoga.......................marna hoga................." aur ek tezz awaaz us soonsaan raat mein goonj uthi jo kisi ke dil ko dehlaa dene ke liye bus kafi thi.........wahin avni apne dono kaan par haath rakhi hui................durr se apni aankhein band kar leti hain...........wahin uske aankhon se aansoon nikal pade they..........................dekhna tha ki aane wale waqt ko kya manzoor tha..............

To Be Continued...........................................
Mazedars update aakhir sakshi se vinod ka rishta ghera hota jaa raha hai aur sath sath koi to Mila jis per sakshi ka kehar nahi gir raha warna jo bhi uske changul me aaya hai woh bus apni maut ke hawale hua hai siwaye 3 log ke kavya avni n vinod. Do to uski family members they magar Vinod pe meharbani shayad uski acche kirdaar ki wajah se hain.
 

Ajaykumar82

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Bhai bohat hi zabardast update aur bohat hi zabardast thriller story hai maza aa gaya. Ab shayad woh Raaz khuley jab Kavita apni beti ki aatma se miley.
Rongtey khade karni wali story hai bhai yah. Mazedar chal Rahi hai.
Thank you so much for reading bhai...aagey bahut se climax aane baki hain ...sare Raaz se dheere dheere parda uthega
 

Ajaykumar82

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Bohat hi Dil dukhane wala update thaa boss. Ek maa ke Dil ki Karuna n Mamta ki vayakhaya bade acche se ki magar sakshi ke Dil ka dard kaun samjhey jo mar bhi nahi payi coz usko mukti nahi mili is duniya se.
thanks bhai for reading this story..................aab jaise jaise kahani aagey badhti jayegi ek ek kar sare raaz khulte chale jayengey..............

is kahani ka agla update kal doonga................keep reading bhai.
 
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