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Sorry par ye story romantic kam aur rough zyada hogi jaise ki mai already tag dala he hoon domination ka isme ek dum tadke se bhari hui aur ye aap ne kaha padha ki hero apni maa ki kasam todne ki baat kar rha hai ye aap please mujhe zaroor batayiega.Thanks for the explanation but abhi bhi lagta hai hero ko thoda badal na chaiye kyun ki jindegi mein sex toh sab kuch nahi hota aur woh maa ka kasam leke bhi usse todne ki baat kar raha hai aur jab woh apne dost ko uske bahan ke saath hot scene dekha hei toh ab woh bhi apne ghar mein najar gadayega magar it should be romantic na ki manipulate karke woh apne maa bahan ke needs ko samjhe na ki khud ki garmi bujhane ke liye istemal kare hope this story will go long.story apki hai aur aap story jaise soche hain waise hin likhe bas ye mera pov tha,i respect your writing skills![]()
Par ek baat ki guarantee hai jaise kuch kahaniyo me hota hai waise meri kahani me kuch bhi ek dum achanak se nahi hoga uska koi na koi reason zaroor rahega wo alag baat hai ki kahani ki demand ke hisab se mai use bad me reveal karu ya us ghatna ke sath me.
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