Romance Mentality [Completed]

[Nevil singh]

Writer's Note​

Dosto ye tha Rahul aur Nisha ki kahani....Maine vaada kiya tha ki iss story ko complete karunga aur wo aaj kar hi diya umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aaya hoga.....Positive ho ya negative aap log apna review jarur dena....

Ye story ko maine jitna ho sake utna simple banane ka koshish kiya hai ha ho sakta hai kuch jagah par galti bhi ho....Aap sabko lag sakta hai ki story ko thoda aur badhaana chaahiye tha....But friends maine story ka end yahi tak ka socha that aur bas Rahul ki mentality ka change ko dikhaane ka koshish kiya tha....Story ko aur likhta to bevajah usse khinchna jaisa hota jisse story ka flow bigad sakta tha....Agar aage ka plot mila to sequel me baare me jarur sochunga....

At last, thanks to all my friends who supported me and read my story.....Our 4 months journey was only up to here in this story.

Behtreen update ke sath samapan Atulye hai.

 

[Nevil singh]

Writer's note on XF​

Socha to nahi tha ye story dobaara yaha post karunga...Aur jab post kiya tab regular update shuruwat mein post nahi kar saka jo ek problem aakhir tak bana raha...Uske liye aap sab se maafi maangna chahunga.

Jab ye story post kiya tha uss vakt laga ki 2-3 new readers bhi story ke saath judenge to ye ek achievement hoga...1st time ye story likhte vakt bhi jyada readers nahi thhe abhi bhi utna jyada to nahi hai lekin jo bhi readers ne story padha hai unhe kaafi pasand aaya ye khushi ki baat hai.

Aur issi ke saath mera iss forum mein bhi sabhi stories complete karne ka record maintain hi hai running story ko chhod kar.

Ek baar fir aap sabhi readers ka bahut bahut dhanyabaad jis vajah se mai apna story complete karne mein kaamyaab rehta hun. all.

Damdaar dost ko salam.

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

UPDATE 11​

Rahul:- Tum mera acchi aadat hi jaanti ho...Tumhe mera buri aadat ke baare me bilkul bhi pata nahi hai...Mera buri aadat mera gussa hain...Jab mujhe gussa aata hai to main bina kuchh soche action leta hu reaction ka mujhe koi parwaah nahi hota hai...Priya tum mera gussa kabhi bardasht nahi kar paogi.

Rahul ka yeh sab kehne ke picche bas ek hi reason tha...Wo Priya ko notice kar raha tha ki Priya usse kis tarah se baat karti hai...Priya ke baat me koi feelings hai ya nahi...Agar feelings nahi hui to ek baat saaf tha ya to Priya bas Rahul ke taraf attracted thi yaa fir koi chaal chal rahi hai...Rahul Priya se pyar karte hue bhi Priya pe biswaas bahi kar paa raha thaa...Agar Priya bhi usse pyaar kare to Rahul ke liye uska ek bahut bada sapna pura hona jaisa tha...Lekin wo jaldbaazi me koi faisala lena nahi chahta tha...Agar usne abhi jaldbaazi me Priya ka pyaar accept kar liya to usko baad me pachtana bhi pad sakta tha...Isiliye wo bas Priya ki baat karne ke tarike ko notice kar raha tha.

Priya:- Rahul maine tumse pyar kiya hai...Tumhari acchi aur buri aadat dono ko apna lungi...Koi bhi insaan puri tarah se perfect nahi hota hai...Sabhi me kisi na kisi cheez ki kami hoti hi hai....Mere liye to tum hi perfect ho.

Priya ne ye baat dil se kahi thi...Priya ke muhh se ye baat sunte hi Rahul ka khushi ka koi thikaana hi nahi tha...Khushi uske face me acchi tarah se dikh rahi thi...Fir usne Priya se kaha.

Rahul:- Haan Priya tumne sach kaha tha ki main bhi tumse pyar karta hu...Bas yakin nahi kar paa raha tha ki tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho...Jab se college me tumse baat ki hai tabhi se mere dil me tum ne apa jagah bana liya tha...Khud decide nahi kar paa raha tha ki ye love hai yaa attraction...Jab 3 din tak tumse nahi mil paaya tha tab mera bahut buraa haal ho gaya tha...Kuchh bhi karne ka man nahi karta tha...Tumhe phone karne me bhi dar lagta tha...Jis tarah se har vakt tum mere dil aur dimaag dono me aati thi aur tumhare liye fikar karna...Ye sab dekhke maine realize kiya ki ye pyar hai attraction nahi.

I love you too Priya.

Priya:- Achha to agar tum mujhse pyaar karte the to purpose kyun nahi kiya?

Rahul:- Kaise karta...Main khud hi sure nahi tha ki main tumse pyaar karta hu ya tumhare taraf attracted hu...Jab aaj sure ho ke aaya to socha ki tumhe purpose kar du lekin iss baat ka dar bhi lag raha tha ki agar tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti to fir tum mujhse baat bhi nahi karti...Isiliye main tumhaare dil ki baat jaane ki koshish kar raha tha...Par tumne to pehle hi mujhe purpose kar diya.

Priya:- (Muhh fulaate hue) Jab maine purpose kiya tab nahi keh sakte the ki tum bhi mujhse pyar karte ho..."Mujhe bahut gussa aata hai" aisi reply dene ka kya jarurat thi.

Rahul:- Sorry...Tab main khud apni kismat me yakin nahi kar paa raha tha...Samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya kahu issi liye muhh se wo baate nikal gayi.

Rahul ne saaf saaf jhuth bola tha...Wo Priya ko nahi kehna chahta tha ki usko Priya ke upar shak tha.

Priya:- Pehli baar hai iss liye maaf kar rahi hu...Fir se koi galti ki to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

Rahul:- OK thik hai...Ab se koi galti nahi karunga.

Priya:- Chalo kahi chalte hai ghumne ke liye.

Rahul:- Nahi nahi...Pehle koi hotel chalo...Bina kuchh khaye nikla hu hostel se...Bahut jor ki bhukh lagi hai...Subah bhi late se hi utha tha.

Priya:- To kya maine tumse kaha tha...Bina kuch khaye aane ko?

Rahul:- Are yaar...Bhadak kyu rahi ho...Tumhara deewana ban gaya tha isiliye tumse bina kuch khaaye hi milne chala aaya.

Fir Rahul aur Priya ek hotel me jaate hai naashta karne ke liye...Naashta karne ke baad dono din bhar ghumte rehte hai...Jab shaam hoti hai to Rahul apne hostel aur Priya apne ghar ke liye nikalne ke liye taiyaar the.

Rahul:- Priya aaj raat ko phone karunga 10:00 baje...Jaldi se soo mat jaana...Aur haa college ke park me kal jaldi hi aa jaana.

Priya:- Achha thik hai...Tum apna khayaal rakhna...Bye.

Rahul:- Tum bhi apna khayaal rakhna.

Iske baad Rahul waha se nikal jaata hai...Priya bhi waha se nikalne wali thi ki uske mobile me kisi ka phone aata hai.

Dusri taraf ek ladka tha.

Ladka:- Hi Jaan...Aaj ka din kaisa raha.

Priya:- Bahut boring...Uss Rahul ne to bheja fry kar diya...Bahut bore karke rakh diya...Kucch pal aur rukti uske saath to pakka paagal ho jaati.

Ladka:-Kya tumne usse apne jaal me fasa liya?

Priya:- Ha fas gaya...Usne bhi mera love purposal accept kar liya.

Ladka:- Well done Priya...Thanks a lot...Ab dikhata hu uss Kamine Rahul ko...Mujhse panga liya tha usne...Abb mai usse khoon ka aansu rulaunga.

Priya:- Jaan...Mujhe thanks kehne ki koi jarurat nahi hai...Tumhaare liye to main kuch bhi kar sakti hu...Fir Rahul ko fasana to koi badi baat nahi hai.

Yani ki ye sasur vijay ki gf h

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Rahul ko bahut bura lagta hai ki anjaane me hi sahi lekin usne Rahul ko dukh pahuchaya hai...

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Lekin apne age ke dost nahi mila tha....Kabhi koi dost nahi mila jiske saath wo khelta, baatein karta, jhagda karta ya fir masti karta....

Aur uski sister ke sath uski bonding ka to kuch btaya hi nhi

Ek bhool 2 me bhi rashmi ko importance nhi di gyi h

Yha to hero ki sister ka naam bhi nhi btaya khani me

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

UPDATE 35​

Rahul bhi Nisha ke piche piche jaldi se jaata hai.....Usko Nisha ko apne floor tak pahunchne se pehle hi rokna tha....Agar Nisha khud ke flat par pahunch jaati to Rahul ko bahut der intezaar karna padta...Kyu ki wo Nisha ke flat pe jaa nahi sakta tha....Issliye intezaar ke siwaa kuch nahi kar sakta....Wo chilla chilla kar Nisha ko rokne ka koshish kar raha tha....

Rahul:- Nisha....Please ruko....Sorry maine kuch jyaada hi bol diya....Please jo baat kehna hai jaldi se batao....

Lekin Nisha nahi rukti hai....Wo jaldi se apne flat ki taraf jaa rahi thi....

Abb to Rahul ko bas ek hi tarika tha Nisha ko rokne ka.....Rahul apni full speed me daud kar Nisha ko apne floor par hi Nisha ka haath pakad kar rok leta hai....

Rahul:- Abb bataao kya baat hai???Kuch important baat hai kya???Aur tum aise ro kyu rahi ho....Mai kuch jyaada bol gaya kya???

Nisha:- (Apna najar hatate hue) Haath chhodo mera...

Rahul Nisha ka kehne ke baad hi uska haath chhod deta hai.....Aur kehta hai....

Rahul:- Bas tumhe rokne ke liye pakda tha.....Agar buraa laga ho to sorry....Lekin tumhe kya baat kehna hai.....Jaldi bataao...

Nisha:- Kyu....Abb kya ho gaya ???Tab to keh rahe the ki tumhe koi baat nahi sunna hai....

Rahul:- Are yaar.....Tab mai gusse me tha....Baat karne me man nahi tha....Iss liye keh diya....Abb tumhaara reaction dekh kar lag raha hai ki important baat hai....Please bataao...

Nisha:- Jhuth....Jhuth bol rahe ho tum....Maine dekha tha tumhaare chehre pe aaj khushi tha....Iss liye tumse baat karne gayi thi....Lekin tum to har baar mujhe dekh kar gussa ho jaate ho...

Rahul:- (Serious ho kar) Ha baat to tumne sahi kaha....Tumhe dekh kar mujhe na chahte hue bhi gussa aur nafrat aa jaata hai....Tumne aaj tak mujhe jitni baar pareshaan kiya hai wo saari baat yaad aa jaata hai.....Khas kar wo thapppad baali baat....Lekin ye baat sab chhodo aur please bataao ki kya baat kehna chahti ho....

Nisha Rahul ka ye baat sun kar dukhi ho jaati hai....Uske aanko me na chahte hue bhi aansoo aa jaate hai.....Wo rote hue kehne lagti hai....

Nisha:- (Rote hue) Mai tumse maafi maangne aayi thi.....Mujhe ek misunderstanding ho gayi thi.....Mai tumhe ek galat ladka samajhta tha.....Iss liye tumhe pareshaan kar rahi thi.....Abb mujhe baat samajh aa gaya hai....Mujhe apne galti ka ehsaas hai....Iss liye maafi maangne aayi thi....Lekin tumne to mere baare me pehle se hi soch rakha hai ki mai tumhe kya kehne aayi hu....Aaj pata chal gaya ki tum mujhse kitna nafrat karte ho.....I think i deserve it....Agar ho sake to mujhe maanf kar dena....Abb aage se tumhe koi pareshaan nahi karungi....

Itna keh kar Nisha jor se rone lagti hai....Rahul Nisha ke iss behavior se hairaan tha....Rahul ne kabhi socha nahi tha ki Nisha itna emotional ho sakti hai.....Rahul chahe Nisha se jitna bhi nafrat kare lekin usko iss tarah se rota hua nahi dekh paa raha tha....Usne Nisha ko upar uthaya aur kuch sochne laga....

Rahul:-(Apne man me) To Nisha ko shaayad kuch misunderstaanding hua tha iss liye mujhe pareshaan kar rahi thi....Mai to iss se badla lene ka soch raha tha....Nahi nahi mai Nisha se badla nahi lunga....Ye apni galti maan rahi hai aur maafi bhi maang rahi hai....Ye bahut hi emotional ladki lagti hai....Misunderstanding aur galti to sabhi se hota hai...Lekin isko kaisa misunderstanding hua....

Rahul:- Nisha....Please rona band karo.....Aur ye bataao ki tumhe kaisa misunderstanding hua hai....

Nisha Rahul ke iss baat ko sun kar soch me pad jaati hai ki Rahul ko bataaye ya nahi....Agar batati to usko Aditya ke baare me bhi batana padta aur shaayad Rahul ko yakeen nahi hota....Iss liye usne socha ki abhi ye baat batane ka sahi time nahi hai...Wo baad me bataayegi Rahul ko Aditya ke baare me....

Nisha:- (thoda sisakte hue) Rahul mai tumhe iss baare me baad me bataaungi.....Abhi ye baat bataane ka time nahi hai....Please yakin rakho mujhpar mai jald hi bata dungi tumhe...

Rahul:- Ok....Thik hai.....Agar tumhe nahi batana hai to mat batao....Mai force nahi karunga.....Abb to rona band kar do....Mujhe accha nahi lagta jab mere saamne koi rota hai to...

Rahul ki iss baat pe Nisha thodi si mushkuraati hai aur kehti hai.....

Nisha:- Pehle tum ye bataao ki tumne mujhe maaf kiya ya nahi....

Rahul:- Ha....Maanf kar diya.....Tumne apni galti accept kar liya....Tumhe koi misunderstanding hua tha iss liye tumne ye sab kiya....Chalo koi baat nahi....Aage se mujhe pareshaan mat karna.

Ye sun kar Nisha bahut khush ho jaati hai....Wo bas itna hi keh paati hai...

Nisha:- Thanks Rahul....Tumne mujhe maaf kar diya....Mujhe to laga tha ki tum meri baat samjhoge yaa nahi....

Rahul iss baat ka koi jawaab nahi deta hai....Wo kuch sochne lagta hai aur fir himmat jutaa kar keh deta hai....

Rahul:- Tumne sahi time me mujhe ye sab bataa diya.....Mai to tumse badlaa lene ke baare me soch raha tha....Agar tum mujhse ye sab nahi kehti to mai badla lekar hi rehta...

Nisha iss baat se hairaan ho jaati hai aur kehti hai....

Nisha:- Badlaa....Wo bhi itni si baat ke liye...

Rahul:- Haa badlaa lena chahta tha tumse....Mere liye ye itni si baat nahi thi....Bachpan se hi mai short tempered hu ....Bahut jald gussa aa jaata hai....Tumhaare pareshaani ne mere ego ko hurt kiyaa tha...Apne ego aur gusse ke kaaran mai bas sahi mauke ka intejaar kar raha tha tumse badlaa lene ke liye....Bas tumhaari ek galti ka intejaar tha....Lekin abb fikar mat karo.....Abb mera aisa iraada nahi hai....Tumhe maaf kar diya to abb badle ka khayaal bhi dimaag se hataa diya hai...

Nisha Rahul ke baat ko sun kar shocked thi.....Usse bilkul umeed nahi tha ki Rahul aisa soch sakta hai....

Nisha:- Sorry Rahul.....Mujhe nahi pataa tha ki meri harkat tumhe itna pareshaan kar sakta hai ki tum mujh se badla lene ka sochoge....

Rahul:- Abb sorry kehne ki koi jarurat nahi hai....Maine tumhe pehle hi maaf kar diya hai....Bas ek hi request hai aafe se bina matlab mujhe pareshaan mat karna....Mai apne gusse pe bilkul control nahi kar sakta....

Nisha:- Ok....Mai tumhe abb pareshaan nahi karungi....Rahul kya ham friends ban sakte hai???

Rahul:- No..

Rahul ki iss answer se Nisha shocked ho jaati hai aur uska chehra udaas ho jaata hai.

Gajab

Lazwab story h mja aa gya abhi tak ki story me

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

UPDATE 79



Next day​

Rahul ne soch liya ki aaj wo Nisha ke saath ussi riverside area me jaayega jaha wo pehli baar Nisha ke saath ghumne gaya tha....Aur wahi par wo apna dil ki haal Nisha ko bata dega....Abb uska pyaar accept hoga ya nahi yaa fir Nisha kya kahegi isse Rahul ko koi parwaah nahi tha....

Bas usne soch liya ki wo aaj Nisha ko propose karke hi rahega.....Bahut din bit gaya tha Rahul ka ye soch kar ki kaise wo Nisha ko propose karega....Agar uska proposal reject hoga to kya hoga....Agar Nisha sirf mujhe apna accha dost maanti hai to???Agar Nisha ne kaha ki "Do chaar baar tumse hass ke baat kya kar liya tum to isse pyaar samajh baithe....Mere dil me tumhaare liye aisi feelings nahi hai"....Bas yahi soch soch kar Rahul dar kar Nisha ko propose nahi kar paa raha tha....

Lekin Rahul aaj himmat jutaa kar faisla karta hai ki aaj wo har haal me apni feelings Nisha ko batayega....Aur kitne din issi soch me ghut kar jeeta rahega....Ek na ek din to propose karna hi hai....Agar Nisha nahi maani to koi baat nahi lekin dil ka bojh to utar jaayega....Nisha ki feelings to jaan paayega...."Agar Nisha nahi maani to mai uski khushi ke liye uski jindagi se dur chala jaaunga....Aur ye jaruri to nahi ki agar mai Nisha se pyaar karta hu to wo bhi mujhse pyaar kare....Maine to Nisha se niswarth pyaar kiya hai....Uski khushi hi mere liye sab kuch hai" "Aur agar maan gayi to kabhi uska saath nahi chhodunga....Marte dam tak uska saath nibhaaunga....Uski khushi ke liye kuch bhi karunga".....Bas issi soch ke saath Rahul ne soch liya ki aaj wo Nisha ko propose karke hi rahega.....


Aur dusri taraf Nisha ne bhi decide kar liya ki wo bhi aaj Rahul ko propose karegi....Kuch der sochne ke baad usne decide kiya ki aaj wo Rahul ko yahi garden par propose karegi jaha pe unn dono ne bahut saari pyaar bhari baatein kiya hai....Wo jaanti thi ki Rahul uska pyaar jarur apnaayega.....Rahul ki aankho me apne liye jo pyaar tha usko Nisha ne bahut pehle hi dekh liya tha.....Wo jaldi se nicche garden par jaati hai aur acche se sar safayi karti hai....Nisha ne soch ki aaj wo garden ko acche se sajaayegi aur uski sajaawat me koi kami nahi hogi.....Acche se saaf karke garden ko manage karne ke baad wo waapas apne room me jaati hai aur aage ki sochti hai....


Rahul bhi apne soch me iss tarah gumm tha ki usse ye pata bhi nahi chala ki Nisha kab garden me gayi aur kab waapas aayi.....Wo to bas apne soch aur sapna me vyast tha....Aur wo apna dress ka selection kar raha tha jisko pehan kar wo aaj Nisha ko propose karne waala tha....Lekin koi bhi dress usse accha nahi lag raha tha....Har dress me koi na koi kami najar aa raha tha....Bahut der tak sochne ke baad wo ek accha sa dress selection kar leta hai.....Abb intejaar tha to bas shaam hone ki jab wo Nisha ko propose karne waala hai....

Nisha bhi garden ko acche se saaf karne ke baad apne room me aakar sochti hai ki aur kya kya karna hai.....Pehla pyaar ka pehla izhaar sabhi ke liye bahut khaas hota hai aur wo iss din ko aur bhi special banana chahti thi....Wo soch rahi thi ki aaj ka din ko wo itna special banayegi ki jindagi bhar uss pal ko nahi bhul paayegi....Kuch der sochne ke baad usko ek idea mila kyu na kuch chamchamaati bulbs lagaaya jaaye garden me jo shaam ke vakt bahut suit karegi.....

Jab shaam hua tab Nisha nikal gayi market ki taraf nikal jaati hai bulbs kharidne.....Aur yahi se suru hua Rahul aur Nisha ka pyaar ka bad luck.....Nisha market me pahunchi hi thi ki Rahul ka phone aata hai....

Nisha:- Ha Rahul bolo kya baat hai???

Nisha ne bahut pyaar se kaha aur Rahul ye sunne ke baad kuch pal to kho gaya Nisha ki baato me...Wo kuch nahi bol paaya....

Nisha:- Rahul tum sun rahe ho mai kya keh rahi hu??

Rahul ki reply na milne se Nisha Rahul se kehti hai....Aur iss baar Rahul bhi hosh me aata hai....

Rahul:- Ha ha sun raha hu...

Rahul thoda hadbada kar bola...

Nisha:- Tumhe koi baat karni hai mujhse?

Nisha ne fir se pyaar se puccha aur iss baar Rahul thoda himmat karke bola....

Rahul:- Nisha tum kaha ho abhi???Yaha room me nahi mili to phone kiya....

Nisha:- Mai abhi market me hu....Kuch kharidne aayi thi....Lekin ktum ye kyu pucch rahe ho...Koi kaam tha kya???

Nisha ki iss baat par Rahul ka himmat thoda kam ho gaya lekin wo khud ko sambhaal kar kehta hai...

Rahul:- Kaam to nahi hai lekin aaj fir se ussi nadi ke kinaare jaane ka man kar raha tha tumhaare saath....Kya tum chalogi???

Rahul ne ye baat pucch to liya lekin abb usse dar lag raha tha ki Nisha kya kahegi....

Nisha:- Accha thik hai.....Tum bhi market me aa jaao ham yahi se saath chalte hai...

Nisha Rahul ko thoda ghabraata hua dekh usko aur pareshaan nahi karna chahti thi sawaal pucch kar....Usne apna propose ka program shaam se raat ke liye postpone kar diya....

Iske baaad Nisha bulbs kharid kar Rahul ka wait karti hai ki tabhi kucch der baad wo saamne se aata hua Vijay ko dekhti hai....

Vijay ko dekhte hi Nisha ko Rahul ki baat yaad aa gayi aur saath me Vijay aur Priya ki kartut....Wo Vijay ko ignore karke waha se jaana chahti thi lekin Vijay ki aawaj usse rok leta hai.....

Vijay:- Nisha ek baat karni thi tumse....

Nisha picche mud kar gusse se ek najar Vijay ko dekhti hai aur gusse se kehti hai....

Nisha:- Lekin mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karna hai.....Tumhaara aur uss Priya ki assliyat jaan chuka hu mai....Kitna bure insaan ho tum dono jo Rahul ki jindagi ke saath khilwaad kar rahe the....Yakin nahi hota tum jaise insaan bhi iss duniya me hote hai....Dekhna ek din tum dono ko apne kiye ki sazaa jaroor milegi...

Nisha ne ye baat bahut hi gusse me kaha aur waapas mudkar aage jaane lagi.....Vijay ki aankhon me aansu aa gaya kuch soch kar aur wo dukhi aawaj me kehne laga....

Vijay:- Saza mil gaya hai mujhe....Bahut badi saza aur mujhe apni galti ka jindagi bhar afsos rahega.....Tabhi mujhe apni galti ka pata chala ki maine kya galti kiya hai....Bas tabhi se sudhar gaya hu.....Bas ek baar Rahul se maafi maangna chahta hu.....Please meri baat ek baar suno tumhaare bhalaayi ke liye hi keh raha hu....

Vijay ki dard se Nisha par jyaada fark nahi pada....Wo to abhi bhi Vijay se gussa thi....Bas ek baar picche palat ti hai to dekhti hai ki Vijay ki aankho me aansu hai....Wo sochti hai ki ek baar baat sunne mekya problem hai....

Nisha:- Ha bolo.....Kya kehna chahte ho....

Vijay :- Aditya se thoda saawdhaan rehna....Mai uss par najar rakh raha hu....Wo abb apne badle ke liye paagal ho raha hai....Aur baar baar naakaamyab hone ki vajah se uska paagalpan aur bhi badh gaya hai....Wo tumse apna badla lene ke liye kisi bhi hadd tak jaa sakta hai....Mai jaanta hu ki tum Rahul se pyaar karti ho....Aditya tum dono ke liye planning kar raha hai lekin har baar uska plan chaupat ho jaata hai....Abb vakt aa gaya hai tum Rahul ko Aditya ki assliyat bata do aur acche se samjaa do taaki der na ho jaaye....

Vijay itna keh kar waha se nikal gaya aur Nisha soch me padd gayi ki abb kya karna chahiye.....Wo sochti hai ki aaj wo Rahul ko propose karne ke baad Rahul ko Aditya ke baare me bata degi.....

Lekin iss baat se wo puri tarah anjaan thi ki picche khada Rahul gusse se Vijay aur Nisha ko baat karta dekh raha tha....Bhale hi usne kuch nahi sunaa lekin Vijay aur Nisha ke baat karta dekh usko bilkul bhi accha nahi laga....Bahut dino se dabi huyi gussa Vijay ko dekh kar fir se jaag gaya tha aur Nisha ka usse baat karna uske dil me Nisha ke liye gussa aur galatfehmi paidaa kar raha tha.....Abb to usko shak bhi hone laga ki kahi Vijay fir se Nisha ka use karke usse aur badla to nahi lena chahta....

Rahul ko apna dil fir se toot ta hua mehsoos ho raha tha.....Wo apna gussa aur dard ke saath waapas apne flat ki aur laut ta hai......Aankho me gussa aur aansu dono maujood tha....Fir se pyaar khone ka dard kya hota hai wo Rahul ka chehra dekh koi bhi bata sakta tha....Usse abb Vjay, Priya aur Nisha teeno se bahut gussa aa raha tha aur wo yahi maan raha tha ki Nisha ne bhi uske saath dhokha kiya hai.....Ek gehri pyaar jo uske dil me tha Nisha ke liye ek pal ki galatfehmi se sab khatam ho gaya tha.....Jaise taise aankho me aansu liye wo apna room me aata hai aur apna door lock kar leta hai....Aaj Rahul ussi jagah par pahunch gaya tha jab pehli baar Priya ke saath huyi bewafai ke baad pahuncha tha....Nisha ko lekar jo sapne dekhe the pal bhar me sab khatam ho gaya....Room me aane ke baad wo bed par girkae aankho ko cover karke jor jor se rone lagta hai.....Ye chhota sa misunderstanding Rahul aur Nisha ki life me kitna bada toofan laane waala hai isse to Rahul aur Nisha dono hi anjaan the

Lovely story
Ab yha story padna band karna padega aj ke liye subah se pad rha hu aur kal padta hu

Jab story complete ho to padne ka mja hi kuch aur h

Lgta h bas padte hi jao

Relaxation time for eyes

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Lovely story
Ab yha story padna band karna padega aj ke liye subah se pad rha hu aur kal padta hu

Jab story complete ho to padne ka mja hi kuch aur h

Lgta h bas padte hi jao

Relaxation time for eyes

Bahut padh liya aapne aaj...79%...Chaliye abb thandi hawaa mein 79% Oxygen ke maje ...Thanks for these reviews and reactions.

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Lo bhai ho gyi khtm story
Aur sabse pehle to sorry Champ_AK_81 bhai ki har update ka review nhi de paya

Kyuki story complete thi to ek bar padne lag gya to padta hi gya, socha last me puri story ka review de dunga

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Superb romantic stories kaho ya fir Champ_AK_81 kaho , dono ka matlab ek hi h
Romantic story yani champ bhai
Champ bhai yani Romantic story




Sahi me bhai agar Romantic story likhne me writer ka naam aye xforum par to No. 1 par champ bhai h mere liye


Ab ate h khani par


Khani bhut hi lazwab thi, acha hua apne yha post kiya varna pad hi nhi pate itni bdiya story


Story emotional h, pyari h. ....
Story bina sex ke, bina kisi adultery language ke kese likhi jaye, ye champ bhai ki har story me dekhne ko milta h jaisa ki is story me bhi h
Sex name ka koi word nhi h story me, ek dum pure story h


Mentality title ko puri trah se justify karti hui story
Mere hisaab se gusse ko do trah se kabu ya khtam kiya ja sakta h
Pehla h kisi ladki se sacha pyaar
Dusra Nature ki madad se (shor gull se durr , apne aap ko mehsoos karke, apne aap ko jan kar)


Yha rahul bhi agar apne gusse pe kabu kar paya to vo sirf Nisha ke pyaar ki vjah se mumkin hua


Main points of story (jo hume story se sikhne chaiye) :-
1. Second Chance-->> Apki har story real life se hi related hoti h, har khani se kuch sikhne ko milta h
Is story se bhi pta lgta h ki har insaan se galti hoti h, usme achai ur burai dono hoti h, Second Chance har person deserve karta h
2. Listen properly, patiently -->> Dusra ye ki dusro ki puri baat sune bina life me kitni problm ho sakti h, jaise ki story me rahul ne yhi mistakes ki aur nisha se judai jelni padi fir last me nisha ne rahul ki bat nhi suni aur pactana pada isiliye pehle dusre ki suno fir koi faisla lo


Gusse wali bat to ho hi chuki h, aur mere hisab se ye to human nature ka hi part h koi gusse pe control rakhta h, kisi ko nhi hota .....simple
Main chiz ye h ki ap kese use behtar dhang se control kar sakte h


Story ki khasiyat ye bhi rhi ki ye sirf rahul nisha pe hi focus nhi rhi
Raj aur Riya ke bare me bhi detailed me likha gya h


Adhi story ke bad to lagbhag har update ke baad hi twist ane lge


Last me story ke liye teen shabd
Simple , Sweet , Superb

Meri traf se story ko 10 me se 10 number

Bas ek guzarish h champ bhai stories likhna na chodiyega , Aap ek umda writer ho

Mante h samay ki kami hoti h sabke pass....
Thoda thoda karke likhte rahiye
Taki hume bhi romantic stories padne ka mauka milte rahe


Aur ek bhool 2 par update jaldi dijiye