Romance Mohabbat Se Nafrat

[mashish]

Ye Meri Last Story ha is Forum pr is k Baad me Koi Story nehi likho ga

what but why

 

[JUGNU BHAI]

Nice update..........

Story is slowly coming to en end.

Abhi 3 Update ha phir Last Update ho Ge

 

[JUGNU BHAI]

Yeh julm mat karo friend.

You are a talented writer. Keep writing.......

Sorry But mere pass time nehi hota.Is Story ko likhte waqt me jitna time spend kiya ha wo mujhe Maloom ha

 

[JUGNU BHAI]

what but why

ye meri First and Last story ha and Don't Worry ye Story ap ko Itni Jaldi nehi bolegi

 

[mashish]

ye meri First and Last story ha and Don't Worry ye Story ap ko Itni Jaldi nehi bolegi

are writer ji aap agli story kyo nahi likhoge koi to khas bajhe hogi bas bo janna chahte hai

 

[JUGNU BHAI]

Next Update Posted few Min

 

[JUGNU BHAI]

(Main Sab Reader ko Ye batana chahta ho k ye Meri Last Story ha is ke Baad me Koi bhi story nehi. Buhat se Log poch rahe the bhai ap is k baad kyu nehi koi Story likhe gye to me yeh bata dena chahta hoon k Main Study krta hoon or sath me part time Job bhi krta hoo isliye mere pass time nehi hota. Ab to na job pr ja raha hoon or Study ka to apko pata hi ha Carona ki Wajah se. Kuch Readers ko Maloom ho ga me ye 3 Mounth Pehle likhe Wala tha lekin me aise ek sabse Best story Banana chahta tha. Mujhe is Story ko likhte Waqt 3 Mounth lag gaye. Is Story k hr Update ko To be Point likha na Choti choti cheezo ko dekhaya jo Important tha wo hi likha jo Seedha Dil ko lage. Agr Main Chahta to is Story ki 200 Update Bana sakhta tha lekin Jaisa k ap sab Janty ha Quality is Better Than Quantity... )

Update: 58

Karan: Soham Kaha ha

Vinay: Wo le gayi ose

Karan: Kon

Vinay: Ritu or kon

Karan: Bewakoof

Vinay: Wo aisa kyu ha

Karan: kon

Vinay: soham wo ayi os ne ek dafa kaha or wo chal para

Karan: Oski Zindagi ritu se Shuro hoti ha or ritu pr hi Khatam hoti ha, apna to pata hi nehi ose kuch

Soham: Car drive kr raha tha ritu oski sath wali seat pr bethi thi. Ritu Baar baar ose Dekh rahi thi soham ko bhi ye Maloom tha. Kya Dekh Rahi hoon mujse

Ritu: Hadbada jati ha. ku..kuch nehi

Soham: Hans kr Janti ho 8 Saal Pehle Me bhi tumhe aise hi dekha krta tha

Ritu: Haan Mujhe Sab yaad ha kaise tum chup chup kr mujhe dekhty thy. phir Waqt ne kafi kuch Badal diya ha in 8 Saalo me

Soham: haan kuch Waqt ne Badal diya ha or kuch Apno ne. Akhari Word kehty hoye os ki awaz me dard thi

Ritu: Oski Baat sun kr Khamosh ho jati ha. Wo soham jo kabhi mujhe dekhe bina Soya nehi krta tha jise Nend tab ati thi jab wo ritu ko dekhta tha or aj kitna Badal gaya ha Baat tak bhi nehi kr raha bilkul Khamosh chehre pr dard.

Kafi deer Khamosh rehne k Baad ritu boli

Ritu: Ek Baat pocho

Soham: haan

Ritu: tumne bataya kyu nehi k tumne Shaadi kyu nehi ki

Soham: Main Shaadi nehi kr sakta tha. Main on logo mai se nehi ho k jin k dil toot jaye or wo kisi se bhi mil kr dobara jor le


Soham: Mai tumse itna pyaar krta raha k kabhi Shaadi k Khayal hi nehi aya. Agr aya bhi to

Ritu: to

Soham: To Mohabbat me Dusra Option nehi hota

Ritu: oski baat sun kr sir neechy juka leti ha

Kamre me ritu apne gale me pare locket ko dekh rahi thi. Dekhte Dekhte kab wo purani yaadon me kho gayi.

Soham: apni pocket se choti se dabi nikalta ha. Or ritu ko deta ha

Ritu: Ye kya ha

Soham: Gift ha tumhare liye laya hoon

Ritu: lekin abhi to maine cake nehi kata

Soham: Hans kr waha majood sab log tumhe Qimti cheeze de ge. Or mera ye gift to mamoli sa ha isliye tumhe pehle de raha hoon take tumhe yaad rahe


Ritu Maa: Kaise hoon

Soham: Main acha hoon

Ritu Maa: pocho ge nehi kyu bulaya ha

Soham: kyu bulaya tha

Ritu Maa: tumse Maafi mangni ha. Apne hath jorti ha hume maaf krde humne jo kiya

Soham: Are anti ap kyu maafi mang rahi ha isme apki kya Galti ha

Ritu Maa: Beta to ritu k papa ko bhi maaf krde unme itni himmat nehi k wo tera samna kr sake

Soham: Are anti main to kab ka onhe maaf kr chuka ho

Ritu Maa: Beta tumne Shaadi kyu nehi ki

Soham: Koi milli hi os jaisi

Ritu Maa: Agr tumhe ritu hi mil jaye to

Soham: Hans kr ye kaisa ho sakta ha

Ritu Maa: Me apni beti k liye tumhara hath mang rahi hoo

Soham: ekdam shocked ho jata ha

Ritu Maa:Beta oski khushi tumhari sath hi ha 8 Saal osne bohut dukh sahe ha

Soham: Wo Man jaye gi

Ritu Maa:kon ritu wo to tumhare ane se phir se jeene lag gayi ha. Oski khushi to tumhare sath thi or ha

Ritu Maa:Main tumhare age hath jorti ho. Meri beti ko apna lo

Soham: ye kya kr rahi ha ap hath pakr leta ha

Ritu Maa: Main tumse apni Beti ki Khushi Mang rahi hoon

Soham: Theek ha main ritu se Shaadi kro ga

Ritu Maa: Dekho main tumhare sath koi zabardasti nehi kr rahi

Soham: Inkaar to main bhi nehi kr sakta tha

Ritu Maa: Sach tum ritu se shaadi krna chahte ho

Soham: Ha main sach bol raha hoon



Soham: Good Morning

Ritu: Good Morning

Soham: Meri Ankoon main kya dekh rahi ho

Ritu: Dil Dekh rahi hoon

Soham: Wo to kab ka tumhare pass ha

Ritu: lekin maine ise toor diya ab ye samj nehi a raha k Galti kaise sudaro

Soham: Churo ose ye btao shaadi ki tayari kr li ha

Ritu: Sharam.. se haa. Tum jante ho aj main bohut khush ho k mujhe tum mil rahe hoon. Mujhe yakeen nehi ho raha k ye khawab ha ya sach

Soham: Sach ha main tumhare samne ho

Ritu: 8 Saal pehle yaad ha kaise Pagalo ki trah Mohabbat krte thy

Soham: Haan, Waise tumne kabhi pocha nehi k main kabse tumse mohabbat krta tha

Ritu: Jab tum mere driver the. Opps Sorry agr Bura laga ho to

Soham: Khara ho kr Nehi jis din tum kaka k sath Gerage me ayi thi. Tab tumhe pehli baar dekha tha tabse tumse mohabbat ho gayi thi

Ritu: has kr yani tum muj pr pehle se latto the

Ritu: Ekdam Serious ho kr Waise tumne bataya nehi k os raat kya hoa tha

Soham: Tum Sun Nehi Payogi

Ritu: Tumhe meri kasam tum sab sach bataoge

Soham: main tumhe ye kabhi na btata agr tum mujhe apni kasam na deti

Jab tum jungle main gayi main or raj car k pass the. Phir Achanak tumhari cheek ki awaz ai.

 

[Chinturocky]

Behtareen update

 

[kingkhankar]

Majedaar update

Soham ko sayad uska goal mil jayega.

 

[JUGNU BHAI]

Majedaar update

Soham ko sayad uska goal mil jayega.

Ritu ko apni Mohabbat Mil hi Gayi. dekhte ha next update me