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Main is Story ko 3 Din k Ander Mai Complete Kro ya Na?

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    Votes: 8 88.9%
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mashish

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(Main Sab Reader ko Ye batana chahta ho k ye Meri Last Story ha is ke Baad me Koi bhi story nehi. Buhat se Log poch rahe the bhai ap is k baad kyu nehi koi Story likhe gye to me yeh bata dena chahta hoon k Main Study krta hoon or sath me part time Job bhi krta hoo isliye mere pass time nehi hota. Ab to na job pr ja raha hoon or Study ka to apko pata hi ha Carona ki Wajah se. Kuch Readers ko Maloom ho ga me ye 3 Mounth Pehle likhe Wala tha lekin me aise ek sabse Best story Banana chahta tha. Mujhe is Story ko likhte Waqt 3 Mounth lag gaye. Is Story k hr Update ko To be Point likha na Choti choti cheezo ko dekhaya jo Important tha wo hi likha jo Seedha Dil ko lage. Agr Main Chahta to is Story ki 200 Update Bana sakhta tha lekin Jaisa k ap sab Janty ha Quality is Better Than Quantity... )

Update: 58

Karan: Soham Kaha ha


Vinay: Wo le gayi ose

Karan: Kon

Vinay: Ritu or kon

Karan: Bewakoof

Vinay: Wo aisa kyu ha

Karan: kon

Vinay: soham wo ayi os ne ek dafa kaha or wo chal para

Karan: Oski Zindagi ritu se Shuro hoti ha or ritu pr hi Khatam hoti ha, apna to pata hi nehi ose kuch

Soham: Car drive kr raha tha ritu oski sath wali seat pr bethi thi. Ritu Baar baar ose Dekh rahi thi soham ko bhi ye Maloom tha. Kya Dekh Rahi hoon mujse

Ritu: Hadbada jati ha. ku..kuch nehi

Soham: Hans kr Janti ho 8 Saal Pehle Me bhi tumhe aise hi dekha krta tha

Ritu: Haan Mujhe Sab yaad ha kaise tum chup chup kr mujhe dekhty thy. phir Waqt ne kafi kuch Badal diya ha in 8 Saalo me

Soham: haan kuch Waqt ne Badal diya ha or kuch Apno ne. Akhari Word kehty hoye os ki awaz me dard thi

Ritu: Oski Baat sun kr Khamosh ho jati ha. Wo soham jo kabhi mujhe dekhe bina Soya nehi krta tha jise Nend tab ati thi jab wo ritu ko dekhta tha or aj kitna Badal gaya ha Baat tak bhi nehi kr raha bilkul Khamosh chehre pr dard.

Kafi deer Khamosh rehne k Baad ritu boli

Ritu: Ek Baat pocho

Soham: haan

Ritu: tumne bataya kyu nehi k tumne Shaadi kyu nehi ki

Soham: Main Shaadi nehi kr sakta tha. Main on logo mai se nehi ho k jin k dil toot jaye or wo kisi se bhi mil kr dobara jor le


Soham: Mai tumse itna pyaar krta raha k kabhi Shaadi k Khayal hi nehi aya. Agr aya bhi to

Ritu: to

Soham: To Mohabbat me Dusra Option nehi hota

Ritu: oski baat sun kr sir neechy juka leti ha

Kamre me ritu apne gale me pare locket ko dekh rahi thi. Dekhte Dekhte kab wo purani yaadon me kho gayi.

Soham: apni pocket se choti se dabi nikalta ha. Or ritu ko deta ha

Ritu: Ye kya ha

Soham: Gift ha tumhare liye laya hoon

Ritu: lekin abhi to maine cake nehi kata

Soham: Hans kr waha majood sab log tumhe Qimti cheeze de ge. Or mera ye gift to mamoli sa ha isliye tumhe pehle de raha hoon take tumhe yaad rahe


Ritu Maa: Kaise hoon

Soham: Main acha hoon

Ritu Maa: pocho ge nehi kyu bulaya ha

Soham: kyu bulaya tha

Ritu Maa: tumse Maafi mangni ha. Apne hath jorti ha hume maaf krde humne jo kiya

Soham: Are anti ap kyu maafi mang rahi ha isme apki kya Galti ha

Ritu Maa: Beta to ritu k papa ko bhi maaf krde unme itni himmat nehi k wo tera samna kr sake

Soham: Are anti main to kab ka onhe maaf kr chuka ho

Ritu Maa: Beta tumne Shaadi kyu nehi ki

Soham: Koi milli hi os jaisi

Ritu Maa: Agr tumhe ritu hi mil jaye to

Soham: Hans kr ye kaisa ho sakta ha

Ritu Maa: Me apni beti k liye tumhara hath mang rahi hoo

Soham: ekdam shocked ho jata ha

Ritu Maa:Beta oski khushi tumhari sath hi ha 8 Saal osne bohut dukh sahe ha

Soham: Wo Man jaye gi

Ritu Maa:kon ritu wo to tumhare ane se phir se jeene lag gayi ha. Oski khushi to tumhare sath thi or ha

Ritu Maa:Main tumhare age hath jorti ho. Meri beti ko apna lo

Soham: ye kya kr rahi ha ap hath pakr leta ha

Ritu Maa: Main tumse apni Beti ki Khushi Mang rahi hoon

Soham: Theek ha main ritu se Shaadi kro ga

Ritu Maa: Dekho main tumhare sath koi zabardasti nehi kr rahi

Soham: Inkaar to main bhi nehi kr sakta tha

Ritu Maa: Sach tum ritu se shaadi krna chahte ho

Soham: Ha main sach bol raha hoon



Soham: Good Morning

Ritu: Good Morning

Soham: Meri Ankoon main kya dekh rahi ho

Ritu: Dil Dekh rahi hoon

Soham: Wo to kab ka tumhare pass ha

Ritu: lekin maine ise toor diya ab ye samj nehi a raha k Galti kaise sudaro

Soham: Churo ose ye btao shaadi ki tayari kr li ha

Ritu: Sharam.. se haa. Tum jante ho aj main bohut khush ho k mujhe tum mil rahe hoon. Mujhe yakeen nehi ho raha k ye khawab ha ya sach

Soham: Sach ha main tumhare samne ho

Ritu: 8 Saal pehle yaad ha kaise Pagalo ki trah Mohabbat krte thy

Soham: Haan, Waise tumne kabhi pocha nehi k main kabse tumse mohabbat krta tha

Ritu: Jab tum mere driver the. Opps Sorry agr Bura laga ho to

Soham: Khara ho kr Nehi jis din tum kaka k sath Gerage me ayi thi. Tab tumhe pehli baar dekha tha tabse tumse mohabbat ho gayi thi

Ritu: has kr yani tum muj pr pehle se latto the

Ritu: Ekdam Serious ho kr Waise tumne bataya nehi k os raat kya hoa tha

Soham: Tum Sun Nehi Payogi

Ritu: Tumhe meri kasam tum sab sach bataoge

Soham: main tumhe ye kabhi na btata agr tum mujhe apni kasam na deti


Jab tum jungle main gayi main or raj car k pass the. Phir Achanak tumhari cheek ki awaz ai.
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Soham ye awaz sun kr jungle ki tarf Bagha waha dekha to Ritu zameen pr behosh pari thi os ka sir niche pathar se laga tha or os ke sir se khoon nikal raha tha. Jab soham ritu k pass jane lagta ha to dekhta ha k samne Wolf hota ha. Soham ose dekh kr dar jata ha wo wolf ritu k pass hi a raha tha ab soham bhaag kr ritu k pass jata ha lekin tab tak oske samne bhediya a jata ha. Soham bhediya or ritu ke bech a jata ha wo janta tha aj oska akri din ha kyuke wo bhediya jeet nehi sakta lekin wo ritu ko bhi kuch nehi hone dena chahta tha is se pehle k bhediya os pr hamla kare soham os ki oper khud geya. Wo bhediya ki ank nikalna chahta tha take wo dekh na sake lekin wo is main kamyab nehi hoa. Os ne 2 teen tange mari lekin bhediya uth gya. is baar wo Soham pe Jappat para os ne apna panja mara to soham ke kapre k sath sath os ka Chest ka Mas bhi nikal diya. Soham ko bohut dard ho raha tha os ke jism se khoon nikal raha tha. Bhediya os ke samne khara tha os pr hamla krne wala tha osne soham pr chalang laga di soham niche zameen pr gir giya bhediya os ki Chahti pr tha os ne Moun Khola or soham ki garden pr katne laga lekin soham ne apna bazon age kr diya bhediya ne os ke bazon ko kata. Soham ki Nazr ekdum ritu pr gyi jo zameen pr behosh thi agr main Mar gya to ye ose bhi nehi chore ga. Ekdam os ne bhediya ko dakka diya wo os ke oper se peechy ja gira soham khara hoa to dekha zameen pr lakri pari hoi ha jo kafi moti thi os ne wo pakri or bhediya pr tooth para ose zara hosh nehi tha wo bas os lakri se ose mari ja raha tha. Achanak bhediya Peeche ho gya soham ne socha kahi ye phir se hamla na kr de wo os ki tarf japka lekin bhediya waha se bhaag gaya. Soham se bari mushkil se khara hoa ja raha tha. Wo ritu k pass gya ose uthaya isme ose bari mushkil hoi kyuke os ka bazon pori trah zakhmi tha.os ne lakri bhi pakri hoi thi is dar se k kahi wo bhediya na ajye.

Wo ritu ko le kr car ke pass aya waha Raj nehi tha. Ose samaj nehi a rahi thi ke kya kare oski car bhi kharab ha or to or wo is halat me ritu ko utha kr bhi hospital nehi le ja sakta tha.

Achanak ose apni Tarf ek car ati hoi Nazr ai. Wo car os ke khareeb a kr ruki . Os car me se 4 larken nikle 4 hathe kathe the soham onhe dekh kr gabra gya.

Larka1: Koi help ki zaroorat ha os ne ritu k tarf ghandi nazr se dekh kr kaha

Soham: Nehi main theek ho

Larka2: Dekh kr lagta to nehi poore jism pr chot lagi ha

Soham :Bola na theek ho tum log jao

Larka2: Hum nehi beta to jaye ga is larki ko yaha chor kr

Soham: tum se pehle bhi kisi larkoon ne koshish k thi. Or on ka maine jo hal kiya tum soch bhi nehi sakte lekin Farq ye ha k wo meri Dost thi or ye mera pyar. Is liye tumhare liye acha yehi ho ga k chup chap yaha se chale jao

Larka3: to Dekhte ha k tum apna pyar kaise bachate hoon wo bhi is halat me

Soham: ritu ko zameen pr litaya os ki pass lakri rak di

Larka1: larka4 ko ishara krta ha

Larka4: soham k pass ata ha

Soham: os k pass ate hi os k peet pr laat marta ha jis se wo jukh jata ha. Jese hi wo jukta ha soham os ka bazo apni tangon me pasa kr tangain ghuma deta ha jis ek tukkk ki awaz ati ha larke ka bazon tooth gaya tha. Wo zameen pr gir gaya soham itne pr rukta nehi wo os ke sir pr laat marta ha jisse os ka sir zameen pr lagta ha or wo behosh ho jata ha

3 larkon ki halat ye dekh kr kharab ho gayi thi. Wo apas me kuch ishara krte ha jis se 3 larke soham pr khud prte ha.Soham pehle os larkoon ko mar raha tha lekin phir ek larka soham ki chestpr muka mrta ha jaha zakhm hota ha jisse soham niche gir jata ha or wo soham pr toot parte ha.Soham on se larne ki halat me nehi tha os se muskhil se khara hoa ja raha tha lekin ab to wo bhi nehi. Os k sir se khoon or jism se nikal raha tha

Larka1: Kya bola tha tere pyar ko hath bhi laga kr dikhaye. Ab dekh tere samne tere pyar k sath hum kya krte . ise zameen pr litao

Larka2 soham ki ek tarf or larka3 soham ki dusri tarf khare ho jate ha.Dono Soham ka ek ek Bazon Pakarte hain or apni ek ek tang soham ki peeth pr rakh dete ha.

Larka1: Ritu k pass jata ha or soham ki tarf dekh k ab dekh main is k sath kya krta hoon

Soham: Khuda ki kasam agr meri ritu ko hath bhi lagaya to tere or mere bich puri duniya bhi a jaye to main tumhe mar ke hi dam loon ga

Larka1: To fikr mat kr main hath nehi lagao ga balke poora khelo ga. Itna bol kr wo ghutno k bal beth jata ha

Soham: Chatpata raha tha or larkoon se chutne ki koshish kr raha tha lekin os ka jism os ka sath nehi de raha tha. Ritu zameen pr abhi bhi behosh thi

Larka1: Ritu k jism pr hath pherta ha or phir apni pocket se chaku nikal kr ritu k bazon se kapra pharne lagta ha or soham ki tarf dekh kr hasta ha

Soham: Larke 2 se apni bazon chuda kr larke3 ko dakka deta ha or khara ho jata ha. Wo seedha larke2 ki tarf jata ha os ke moun pr mouke mari jata ha larka 3 piche se ata ha or soham ke peeth pr mouka marta ha. Soham larke2 ko dakka deta ha larke3 k gale se pakr kr car tak le jata ha wo os ka sir car k seeche se marta ha seecha tooth jata ha or lake k sir se khoon nikal raha hota ha.

Soham:Larka 1 ki tarf dekhta ha jo ritu k pass khara tha. Phir wo ritu ki tarf dekhta ha os ke kapre 2 teen jagah se pate the. Soham ki ankeen gusse se lal ho jati ha wo apni muthi ko itni zor se band krta ha. Os ke poore bazon se khoon behta hoa muthi se zameen pr gir raha tha. Wo larka 1 k tarf jata ha raste me larka 1 a jata ha soham os ke moun pr itni zor se mukka marta ha k os ki Jabra tootne ki awaz bhi ati ha or wo wahi gir jata ha

Larka1: Soham ka Gussa dekh kr dar jata ha os k hath se chaku bhi gir jata ha

Soham: os ke pass jane lagta or wo peeche hone lagta ha. Ritu k kharib a kr wo zameen pr pari hoi Lakri uthata ha or larke 1 k pass jata ha or seedha os ke sir pr marta ha .wo zameen pr gir jata ha soham lakri phenk kr os pait k oper beth jata ha or os k moun pr Mouke marne lag jata ha 30 40mouke marne k baad wo khara hota ha or larke1 ki tarf dekhta ha to oske pore moun se khoon nikal raha tha. Or wo hath jor kr soham se maffi mang raha tha osse kuch bola nehi ja raha tha

Soham ritu k pass gya waha se chaku uthaya or larke1 k pas wapis a gya. Soham in hathon se meri ritu ko hath lagaya tha na full onchi awaz me

Larka1: Maaf kr do bhai

Soham:to mujhe jan se mar deta to be main tumhe maaf kr deta lekin tumne ritu ko hath lagaya itna bol kr chaku sedha os ke ek hath pr marta ha

Larka1: Itni Zoor se Cheekta ha k poore jungle tak oski awaz jati ha

Soham:inhe hatho se chuya tha na ritu ko. Itna bol kr wo dusre hath me bhi chaku marta ha. Is baar bhi larke1 ki bhari dhardnaak cheek nikalti ha. Soham os k hath se chaku nikalta ha or os ke seene me mrne lagta ha

Larka1: Tumhe Ritu ki kasam mujhe maaf krdo. Mujhe maaf kro please

Soham: Ritu ka Naam Liya is liye chor raha hoon. Warna jan se maar deta. Jate waqt os ki jeeb se car ki chabi le leta ha

Soham ritu ko godh me utha kr unlogo ki car bethata ha. Or apna mobile nikalta ha sab se oper anjali ka number hota ha wo ose call krta ha

Soham:He..h Hello Anjali

Anjali: Kya hoa soham

Soham: tum jaldi se hospital a jao

Soham: wo baad me btao ga

Soham: Ritu ko godh me uthaye hospital lata ha os ke sare jism se khoon nikal raha hota ha. Doctor.Doctor…Doctor chillata ha

Doctor: Kya hoa jab Soham ki tarf dekhta ha O MY GOD tumhari halat to bohut kharab ha

Soham: Main theek ap ise dekhe ritu ko pass pare strecter pr lita kr bolta ha

Doctor: patient ko room me le chalo

Anjali: O MY GOD kya hoa tumhe

Doctor: Apki halat bohut kharab ha

Soham: ose kuch nehi hona chehiye itna hi bolta ha or zameen pr gir jata ha

Doctor: Jaldi se I.C.U me le Chalo

‘’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’

Soham: Os ke Baad to tumhe Maloom hi ha. Wo Raat Meri Zindagi ki sab se Manhoos raat thi osne mujh se mera sab kuch cheen liya

Ritu: Poora Chehra Ansoon se Bigha tha subak subak ke Roo Rahi thi or Pachtaw bhi rahi thi.

Ritu: Apni Shirt utaro

Soham: kyu

Ritu: Maine bola ha ab please koi sawal nehi shirt utaro

Soham: Apni shirt utarta ha to os ke jism pr aj bhi 8 saal purane nichan the

Ritu: Oske pass jati ha or on Nichan pr hath lagati ha oski ankoon se ansoon nikal rahe the.

Kis Duniya ke Insan ho kis Darje ki Mohabbat kr Bethe zara bhi na socha tumhe bhi kuch ho sakta tha. Ye bhi ki tumhari Jaan bhi ja sakti thi. Mere liye apne ap ko hi Qurban kr dala. Ye bhi na socha k tumhari apni bhi koi zindagi ha.

Soham:Mohabbat me apne ap ko nehi dekha jata osme to jisse mohabbat krte ha oski Khushi k liye Jeete ha

Ritu: oski baat sun kr rote hoye apne kamre me chali gye

Apne kamre me tumne mujse itni mohabbat ki or badle main maine tumne kya diya 8 Saal tumhe os Gunah ki saza de jo tumne kiya hi nehi. Tum mere age rote rahe lekin maine tumhari ek na suni. Phir ritu ko hospital ka scence yaad a jata ha.

Soham: Ye sab juth ha. Ye report bhi juthi ha or ye kamina bhi juth bol raha ha

Ritu: Sab juth bol rahe ha, Raj juth bol raha ha, Report juth bol rahi ha to kya tum sach bol rahe ho. Koi proof ha tumhare pass

Soham: Ritu k kharib jata haan. Meri Ankoon main dekho ritu kya ye joth bol rahe ha k main tumse mohabbat nehi krta.Dekho meri ankoon me.

Ritu: Os ki Ankoon main dekhti ha

Soham: Ritu kya mere Ansoon ye nehi bata rahe k main beGunah hoon

Soham: Kya mere chehre ka dard ye nehi bata raha k tumhe chot lagne se mujhe dard hoti ha

Soham: Ritu ka hath pakar kr apne dil pr rakhta ha. Kya yeh mera dil nehi bata raha k dhadkta ha to sirf tumhare liye. Kya ye sab juth ha ritu

Ritu: haan ye sab jhoot ha ye sab jhoot ha. Main Janti hoon k tum ek Rapist hoon

Soham: Ghutno k pal beth jata ha or ritu k age hath jorta ha Mera Yakeen mano ritu Main ye sab soch bhi nehi sakta. Tum to janti ho na main tumne kitni mohabbat krta hoon. Roote hoye Tumhari kasam ritu Maine

Ritu: Mat Khao meri juthi kasam. Or Nafrat krti hoon Main tumse Nafrat.





Ritu: In saabko yaad krke bohut roti haan. Mujhe Maaf krdo soham maine tum pr yakeen nehi kiya lekin ab mera wada ha k Ek kya Hazar Anjali bhi ajaye to main kabhi bhi os pr yakeen nehi kro gi.
 
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Soham ye awaz sun kr jungle ki tarf Bagha waha dekha to Ritu zameen pr behosh pari thi os ka sir niche pathar se laga tha or os ke sir se khoon nikal raha tha. Jab soham ritu k pass jane lagta ha to dekhta ha k samne Wolf hota ha. Soham ose dekh kr dar jata ha wo wolf ritu k pass hi a raha tha ab soham bhaag kr ritu k pass jata ha lekin tab tak oske samne bhediya a jata ha. Soham bhediya or ritu ke bech a jata ha wo janta tha aj oska akri din ha kyuke wo bhediya jeet nehi sakta lekin wo ritu ko bhi kuch nehi hone dena chahta tha is se pehle k bhediya os pr hamla kare soham os ki oper khud geya. Wo bhediya ki ank nikalna chahta tha take wo dekh na sake lekin wo is main kamyab nehi hoa. Os ne 2 teen tange mari lekin bhediya uth gya. is baar wo Soham pe Jappat para os ne apna panja mara to soham ke kapre k sath sath os ka Chest ka Mas bhi nikal diya. Soham ko bohut dard ho raha tha os ke jism se khoon nikal raha tha. Bhediya os ke samne khara tha os pr hamla krne wala tha osne soham pr chalang laga di soham niche zameen pr gir giya bhediya os ki Chahti pr tha os ne Moun Khola or soham ki garden pr katne laga lekin soham ne apna bazon age kr diya bhediya ne os ke bazon ko kata. Soham ki Nazr ekdum ritu pr gyi jo zameen pr behosh thi agr main Mar gya to ye ose bhi nehi chore ga. Ekdam os ne bhediya ko dakka diya wo os ke oper se peechy ja gira soham khara hoa to dekha zameen pr lakri pari hoi ha jo kafi moti thi os ne wo pakri or bhediya pr tooth para ose zara hosh nehi tha wo bas os lakri se ose mari ja raha tha. Achanak bhediya Peeche ho gya soham ne socha kahi ye phir se hamla na kr de wo os ki tarf japka lekin bhediya waha se bhaag gaya. Soham se bari mushkil se khara hoa ja raha tha. Wo ritu k pass gya ose uthaya isme ose bari mushkil hoi kyuke os ka bazon pori trah zakhmi tha.os ne lakri bhi pakri hoi thi is dar se k kahi wo bhediya na ajye.

Wo ritu ko le kr car ke pass aya waha Raj nehi tha. Ose samaj nehi a rahi thi ke kya kare oski car bhi kharab ha or to or wo is halat me ritu ko utha kr bhi hospital nehi le ja sakta tha.

Achanak ose apni Tarf ek car ati hoi Nazr ai. Wo car os ke khareeb a kr ruki . Os car me se 4 larken nikle 4 hathe kathe the soham onhe dekh kr gabra gya.

Larka1: Koi help ki zaroorat ha os ne ritu k tarf ghandi nazr se dekh kr kaha

Soham: Nehi main theek ho

Larka2: Dekh kr lagta to nehi poore jism pr chot lagi ha

Soham :Bola na theek ho tum log jao

Larka2: Hum nehi beta to jaye ga is larki ko yaha chor kr

Soham: tum se pehle bhi kisi larkoon ne koshish k thi. Or on ka maine jo hal kiya tum soch bhi nehi sakte lekin Farq ye ha k wo meri Dost thi or ye mera pyar. Is liye tumhare liye acha yehi ho ga k chup chap yaha se chale jao

Larka3: to Dekhte ha k tum apna pyar kaise bachate hoon wo bhi is halat me

Soham: ritu ko zameen pr litaya os ki pass lakri rak di

Larka1: larka4 ko ishara krta ha

Larka4: soham k pass ata ha

Soham: os k pass ate hi os k peet pr laat marta ha jis se wo jukh jata ha. Jese hi wo jukta ha soham os ka bazo apni tangon me pasa kr tangain ghuma deta ha jis ek tukkk ki awaz ati ha larke ka bazon tooth gaya tha. Wo zameen pr gir gaya soham itne pr rukta nehi wo os ke sir pr laat marta ha jisse os ka sir zameen pr lagta ha or wo behosh ho jata ha

3 larkon ki halat ye dekh kr kharab ho gayi thi. Wo apas me kuch ishara krte ha jis se 3 larke soham pr khud prte ha.Soham pehle os larkoon ko mar raha tha lekin phir ek larka soham ki chestpr muka mrta ha jaha zakhm hota ha jisse soham niche gir jata ha or wo soham pr toot parte ha.Soham on se larne ki halat me nehi tha os se muskhil se khara hoa ja raha tha lekin ab to wo bhi nehi. Os k sir se khoon or jism se nikal raha tha

Larka1: Kya bola tha tere pyar ko hath bhi laga kr dikhaye. Ab dekh tere samne tere pyar k sath hum kya krte . ise zameen pr litao

Larka2 soham ki ek tarf or larka3 soham ki dusri tarf khare ho jate ha.Dono Soham ka ek ek Bazon Pakarte hain or apni ek ek tang soham ki peeth pr rakh dete ha.

Larka1: Ritu k pass jata ha or soham ki tarf dekh k ab dekh main is k sath kya krta hoon

Soham: Khuda ki kasam agr meri ritu ko hath bhi lagaya to tere or mere bich puri duniya bhi a jaye to main tumhe mar ke hi dam loon ga

Larka1: To fikr mat kr main hath nehi lagao ga balke poora khelo ga. Itna bol kr wo ghutno k bal beth jata ha

Soham: Chatpata raha tha or larkoon se chutne ki koshish kr raha tha lekin os ka jism os ka sath nehi de raha tha. Ritu zameen pr abhi bhi behosh thi

Larka1: Ritu k jism pr hath pherta ha or phir apni pocket se chaku nikal kr ritu k bazon se kapra pharne lagta ha or soham ki tarf dekh kr hasta ha

Soham: Larke 2 se apni bazon chuda kr larke3 ko dakka deta ha or khara ho jata ha. Wo seedha larke2 ki tarf jata ha os ke moun pr mouke mari jata ha larka 3 piche se ata ha or soham ke peeth pr mouka marta ha. Soham larke2 ko dakka deta ha larke3 k gale se pakr kr car tak le jata ha wo os ka sir car k seeche se marta ha seecha tooth jata ha or lake k sir se khoon nikal raha hota ha.

Soham:Larka 1 ki tarf dekhta ha jo ritu k pass khara tha. Phir wo ritu ki tarf dekhta ha os ke kapre 2 teen jagah se pate the. Soham ki ankeen gusse se lal ho jati ha wo apni muthi ko itni zor se band krta ha. Os ke poore bazon se khoon behta hoa muthi se zameen pr gir raha tha. Wo larka 1 k tarf jata ha raste me larka 1 a jata ha soham os ke moun pr itni zor se mukka marta ha k os ki Jabra tootne ki awaz bhi ati ha or wo wahi gir jata ha

Larka1: Soham ka Gussa dekh kr dar jata ha os k hath se chaku bhi gir jata ha

Soham: os ke pass jane lagta or wo peeche hone lagta ha. Ritu k kharib a kr wo zameen pr pari hoi Lakri uthata ha or larke 1 k pass jata ha or seedha os ke sir pr marta ha .wo zameen pr gir jata ha soham lakri phenk kr os pait k oper beth jata ha or os k moun pr Mouke marne lag jata ha 30 40mouke marne k baad wo khara hota ha or larke1 ki tarf dekhta ha to oske pore moun se khoon nikal raha tha. Or wo hath jor kr soham se maffi mang raha tha osse kuch bola nehi ja raha tha

Soham ritu k pass gya waha se chaku uthaya or larke1 k pas wapis a gya. Soham in hathon se meri ritu ko hath lagaya tha na full onchi awaz me

Larka1: Maaf kr do bhai

Soham:to mujhe jan se mar deta to be main tumhe maaf kr deta lekin tumne ritu ko hath lagaya itna bol kr chaku sedha os ke ek hath pr marta ha

Larka1: Itni Zoor se Cheekta ha k poore jungle tak oski awaz jati ha

Soham:inhe hatho se chuya tha na ritu ko. Itna bol kr wo dusre hath me bhi chaku marta ha. Is baar bhi larke1 ki bhari dhardnaak cheek nikalti ha. Soham os k hath se chaku nikalta ha or os ke seene me mrne lagta ha

Larka1: Tumhe Ritu ki kasam mujhe maaf krdo. Mujhe maaf kro please

Soham: Ritu ka Naam Liya is liye chor raha hoon. Warna jan se maar deta. Jate waqt os ki jeeb se car ki chabi le leta ha

Soham ritu ko godh me utha kr unlogo ki car bethata ha. Or apna mobile nikalta ha sab se oper anjali ka number hota ha wo ose call krta ha

Soham:He..h Hello Anjali

Anjali: Kya hoa soham

Soham: tum jaldi se hospital a jao

Soham: wo baad me btao ga

Soham: Ritu ko godh me uthaye hospital lata ha os ke sare jism se khoon nikal raha hota ha. Doctor.Doctor…Doctor chillata ha

Doctor: Kya hoa jab Soham ki tarf dekhta ha O MY GOD tumhari halat to bohut kharab ha

Soham: Main theek ap ise dekhe ritu ko pass pare strecter pr lita kr bolta ha

Doctor: patient ko room me le chalo

Anjali: O MY GOD kya hoa tumhe

Doctor: Apki halat bohut kharab ha

Soham: ose kuch nehi hona chehiye itna hi bolta ha or zameen pr gir jata ha

Doctor: Jaldi se I.C.U me le Chalo

‘’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’

Soham: Os ke Baad to tumhe Maloom hi ha. Wo Raat Meri Zindagi ki sab se Manhoos raat thi osne mujh se mera sab kuch cheen liya

Ritu: Poora Chehra Ansoon se Bigha tha subak subak ke Roo Rahi thi or Pachtaw bhi rahi thi.

Ritu: Apni Shirt utaro

Soham: kyu

Ritu: Maine bola ha ab please koi sawal nehi shirt utaro

Soham: Apni shirt utarta ha to os ke jism pr aj bhi 8 saal purane nichan the

Ritu: Oske pass jati ha or on Nichan pr hath lagati ha oski ankoon se ansoon nikal rahe the.

Kis Duniya ke Insan ho kis Darje ki Mohabbat kr Bethe zara bhi na socha tumhe bhi kuch ho sakta tha. Ye bhi ki tumhari Jaan bhi ja sakti thi. Mere liye apne ap ko hi Qurban kr dala. Ye bhi na socha k tumhari apni bhi koi zindagi ha.

Soham:Mohabbat me apne ap ko nehi dekha jata osme to jisse mohabbat krte ha oski Khushi k liye Jeete ha

Ritu: oski baat sun kr rote hoye apne kamre me chali gye

Apne kamre me tumne mujse itni mohabbat ki or badle main maine tumne kya diya 8 Saal tumhe os Gunah ki saza de jo tumne kiya hi nehi. Tum mere age rote rahe lekin maine tumhari ek na suni. Phir ritu ko hospital ka scence yaad a jata ha.

Soham: Ye sab juth ha. Ye report bhi juthi ha or ye kamina bhi juth bol raha ha

Ritu: Sab juth bol rahe ha, Raj juth bol raha ha, Report juth bol rahi ha to kya tum sach bol rahe ho. Koi proof ha tumhare pass

Soham: Ritu k kharib jata haan. Meri Ankoon main dekho ritu kya ye joth bol rahe ha k main tumse mohabbat nehi krta.Dekho meri ankoon me.

Ritu: Os ki Ankoon main dekhti ha

Soham: Ritu kya mere Ansoon ye nehi bata rahe k main beGunah hoon

Soham: Kya mere chehre ka dard ye nehi bata raha k tumhe chot lagne se mujhe dard hoti ha

Soham: Ritu ka hath pakar kr apne dil pr rakhta ha. Kya yeh mera dil nehi bata raha k dhadkta ha to sirf tumhare liye. Kya ye sab juth ha ritu

Ritu: haan ye sab jhoot ha ye sab jhoot ha. Main Janti hoon k tum ek Rapist hoon

Soham: Ghutno k pal beth jata ha or ritu k age hath jorta ha Mera Yakeen mano ritu Main ye sab soch bhi nehi sakta. Tum to janti ho na main tumne kitni mohabbat krta hoon. Roote hoye Tumhari kasam ritu Maine

Ritu: Mat Khao meri juthi kasam. Or Nafrat krti hoon Main tumse Nafrat.





Ritu: In saabko yaad krke bohut roti haan. Mujhe Maaf krdo soham maine tum pr yakeen nehi kiya lekin ab mera wada ha k Ek kya Hazar Anjali bhi ajaye to main kabhi bhi os pr yakeen nehi kro gi.
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Soham ye awaz sun kr jungle ki tarf Bagha waha dekha to Ritu zameen pr behosh pari thi os ka sir niche pathar se laga tha or os ke sir se khoon nikal raha tha. Jab soham ritu k pass jane lagta ha to dekhta ha k samne Wolf hota ha. Soham ose dekh kr dar jata ha wo wolf ritu k pass hi a raha tha ab soham bhaag kr ritu k pass jata ha lekin tab tak oske samne bhediya a jata ha. Soham bhediya or ritu ke bech a jata ha wo janta tha aj oska akri din ha kyuke wo bhediya jeet nehi sakta lekin wo ritu ko bhi kuch nehi hone dena chahta tha is se pehle k bhediya os pr hamla kare soham os ki oper khud geya. Wo bhediya ki ank nikalna chahta tha take wo dekh na sake lekin wo is main kamyab nehi hoa. Os ne 2 teen tange mari lekin bhediya uth gya. is baar wo Soham pe Jappat para os ne apna panja mara to soham ke kapre k sath sath os ka Chest ka Mas bhi nikal diya. Soham ko bohut dard ho raha tha os ke jism se khoon nikal raha tha. Bhediya os ke samne khara tha os pr hamla krne wala tha osne soham pr chalang laga di soham niche zameen pr gir giya bhediya os ki Chahti pr tha os ne Moun Khola or soham ki garden pr katne laga lekin soham ne apna bazon age kr diya bhediya ne os ke bazon ko kata. Soham ki Nazr ekdum ritu pr gyi jo zameen pr behosh thi agr main Mar gya to ye ose bhi nehi chore ga. Ekdam os ne bhediya ko dakka diya wo os ke oper se peechy ja gira soham khara hoa to dekha zameen pr lakri pari hoi ha jo kafi moti thi os ne wo pakri or bhediya pr tooth para ose zara hosh nehi tha wo bas os lakri se ose mari ja raha tha. Achanak bhediya Peeche ho gya soham ne socha kahi ye phir se hamla na kr de wo os ki tarf japka lekin bhediya waha se bhaag gaya. Soham se bari mushkil se khara hoa ja raha tha. Wo ritu k pass gya ose uthaya isme ose bari mushkil hoi kyuke os ka bazon pori trah zakhmi tha.os ne lakri bhi pakri hoi thi is dar se k kahi wo bhediya na ajye.

Wo ritu ko le kr car ke pass aya waha Raj nehi tha. Ose samaj nehi a rahi thi ke kya kare oski car bhi kharab ha or to or wo is halat me ritu ko utha kr bhi hospital nehi le ja sakta tha.

Achanak ose apni Tarf ek car ati hoi Nazr ai. Wo car os ke khareeb a kr ruki . Os car me se 4 larken nikle 4 hathe kathe the soham onhe dekh kr gabra gya.

Larka1: Koi help ki zaroorat ha os ne ritu k tarf ghandi nazr se dekh kr kaha

Soham: Nehi main theek ho

Larka2: Dekh kr lagta to nehi poore jism pr chot lagi ha

Soham :Bola na theek ho tum log jao

Larka2: Hum nehi beta to jaye ga is larki ko yaha chor kr

Soham: tum se pehle bhi kisi larkoon ne koshish k thi. Or on ka maine jo hal kiya tum soch bhi nehi sakte lekin Farq ye ha k wo meri Dost thi or ye mera pyar. Is liye tumhare liye acha yehi ho ga k chup chap yaha se chale jao

Larka3: to Dekhte ha k tum apna pyar kaise bachate hoon wo bhi is halat me

Soham: ritu ko zameen pr litaya os ki pass lakri rak di

Larka1: larka4 ko ishara krta ha

Larka4: soham k pass ata ha

Soham: os k pass ate hi os k peet pr laat marta ha jis se wo jukh jata ha. Jese hi wo jukta ha soham os ka bazo apni tangon me pasa kr tangain ghuma deta ha jis ek tukkk ki awaz ati ha larke ka bazon tooth gaya tha. Wo zameen pr gir gaya soham itne pr rukta nehi wo os ke sir pr laat marta ha jisse os ka sir zameen pr lagta ha or wo behosh ho jata ha

3 larkon ki halat ye dekh kr kharab ho gayi thi. Wo apas me kuch ishara krte ha jis se 3 larke soham pr khud prte ha.Soham pehle os larkoon ko mar raha tha lekin phir ek larka soham ki chestpr muka mrta ha jaha zakhm hota ha jisse soham niche gir jata ha or wo soham pr toot parte ha.Soham on se larne ki halat me nehi tha os se muskhil se khara hoa ja raha tha lekin ab to wo bhi nehi. Os k sir se khoon or jism se nikal raha tha

Larka1: Kya bola tha tere pyar ko hath bhi laga kr dikhaye. Ab dekh tere samne tere pyar k sath hum kya krte . ise zameen pr litao

Larka2 soham ki ek tarf or larka3 soham ki dusri tarf khare ho jate ha.Dono Soham ka ek ek Bazon Pakarte hain or apni ek ek tang soham ki peeth pr rakh dete ha.

Larka1: Ritu k pass jata ha or soham ki tarf dekh k ab dekh main is k sath kya krta hoon

Soham: Khuda ki kasam agr meri ritu ko hath bhi lagaya to tere or mere bich puri duniya bhi a jaye to main tumhe mar ke hi dam loon ga

Larka1: To fikr mat kr main hath nehi lagao ga balke poora khelo ga. Itna bol kr wo ghutno k bal beth jata ha

Soham: Chatpata raha tha or larkoon se chutne ki koshish kr raha tha lekin os ka jism os ka sath nehi de raha tha. Ritu zameen pr abhi bhi behosh thi

Larka1: Ritu k jism pr hath pherta ha or phir apni pocket se chaku nikal kr ritu k bazon se kapra pharne lagta ha or soham ki tarf dekh kr hasta ha

Soham: Larke 2 se apni bazon chuda kr larke3 ko dakka deta ha or khara ho jata ha. Wo seedha larke2 ki tarf jata ha os ke moun pr mouke mari jata ha larka 3 piche se ata ha or soham ke peeth pr mouka marta ha. Soham larke2 ko dakka deta ha larke3 k gale se pakr kr car tak le jata ha wo os ka sir car k seeche se marta ha seecha tooth jata ha or lake k sir se khoon nikal raha hota ha.

Soham:Larka 1 ki tarf dekhta ha jo ritu k pass khara tha. Phir wo ritu ki tarf dekhta ha os ke kapre 2 teen jagah se pate the. Soham ki ankeen gusse se lal ho jati ha wo apni muthi ko itni zor se band krta ha. Os ke poore bazon se khoon behta hoa muthi se zameen pr gir raha tha. Wo larka 1 k tarf jata ha raste me larka 1 a jata ha soham os ke moun pr itni zor se mukka marta ha k os ki Jabra tootne ki awaz bhi ati ha or wo wahi gir jata ha

Larka1: Soham ka Gussa dekh kr dar jata ha os k hath se chaku bhi gir jata ha

Soham: os ke pass jane lagta or wo peeche hone lagta ha. Ritu k kharib a kr wo zameen pr pari hoi Lakri uthata ha or larke 1 k pass jata ha or seedha os ke sir pr marta ha .wo zameen pr gir jata ha soham lakri phenk kr os pait k oper beth jata ha or os k moun pr Mouke marne lag jata ha 30 40mouke marne k baad wo khara hota ha or larke1 ki tarf dekhta ha to oske pore moun se khoon nikal raha tha. Or wo hath jor kr soham se maffi mang raha tha osse kuch bola nehi ja raha tha

Soham ritu k pass gya waha se chaku uthaya or larke1 k pas wapis a gya. Soham in hathon se meri ritu ko hath lagaya tha na full onchi awaz me

Larka1: Maaf kr do bhai

Soham:to mujhe jan se mar deta to be main tumhe maaf kr deta lekin tumne ritu ko hath lagaya itna bol kr chaku sedha os ke ek hath pr marta ha

Larka1: Itni Zoor se Cheekta ha k poore jungle tak oski awaz jati ha

Soham:inhe hatho se chuya tha na ritu ko. Itna bol kr wo dusre hath me bhi chaku marta ha. Is baar bhi larke1 ki bhari dhardnaak cheek nikalti ha. Soham os k hath se chaku nikalta ha or os ke seene me mrne lagta ha

Larka1: Tumhe Ritu ki kasam mujhe maaf krdo. Mujhe maaf kro please

Soham: Ritu ka Naam Liya is liye chor raha hoon. Warna jan se maar deta. Jate waqt os ki jeeb se car ki chabi le leta ha

Soham ritu ko godh me utha kr unlogo ki car bethata ha. Or apna mobile nikalta ha sab se oper anjali ka number hota ha wo ose call krta ha

Soham:He..h Hello Anjali

Anjali: Kya hoa soham

Soham: tum jaldi se hospital a jao

Soham: wo baad me btao ga

Soham: Ritu ko godh me uthaye hospital lata ha os ke sare jism se khoon nikal raha hota ha. Doctor.Doctor…Doctor chillata ha

Doctor: Kya hoa jab Soham ki tarf dekhta ha O MY GOD tumhari halat to bohut kharab ha

Soham: Main theek ap ise dekhe ritu ko pass pare strecter pr lita kr bolta ha

Doctor: patient ko room me le chalo

Anjali: O MY GOD kya hoa tumhe

Doctor: Apki halat bohut kharab ha

Soham: ose kuch nehi hona chehiye itna hi bolta ha or zameen pr gir jata ha

Doctor: Jaldi se I.C.U me le Chalo

‘’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’

Soham: Os ke Baad to tumhe Maloom hi ha. Wo Raat Meri Zindagi ki sab se Manhoos raat thi osne mujh se mera sab kuch cheen liya

Ritu: Poora Chehra Ansoon se Bigha tha subak subak ke Roo Rahi thi or Pachtaw bhi rahi thi.

Ritu: Apni Shirt utaro

Soham: kyu

Ritu: Maine bola ha ab please koi sawal nehi shirt utaro

Soham: Apni shirt utarta ha to os ke jism pr aj bhi 8 saal purane nichan the

Ritu: Oske pass jati ha or on Nichan pr hath lagati ha oski ankoon se ansoon nikal rahe the.

Kis Duniya ke Insan ho kis Darje ki Mohabbat kr Bethe zara bhi na socha tumhe bhi kuch ho sakta tha. Ye bhi ki tumhari Jaan bhi ja sakti thi. Mere liye apne ap ko hi Qurban kr dala. Ye bhi na socha k tumhari apni bhi koi zindagi ha.

Soham:Mohabbat me apne ap ko nehi dekha jata osme to jisse mohabbat krte ha oski Khushi k liye Jeete ha

Ritu: oski baat sun kr rote hoye apne kamre me chali gye

Apne kamre me tumne mujse itni mohabbat ki or badle main maine tumne kya diya 8 Saal tumhe os Gunah ki saza de jo tumne kiya hi nehi. Tum mere age rote rahe lekin maine tumhari ek na suni. Phir ritu ko hospital ka scence yaad a jata ha.

Soham: Ye sab juth ha. Ye report bhi juthi ha or ye kamina bhi juth bol raha ha

Ritu: Sab juth bol rahe ha, Raj juth bol raha ha, Report juth bol rahi ha to kya tum sach bol rahe ho. Koi proof ha tumhare pass

Soham: Ritu k kharib jata haan. Meri Ankoon main dekho ritu kya ye joth bol rahe ha k main tumse mohabbat nehi krta.Dekho meri ankoon me.

Ritu: Os ki Ankoon main dekhti ha

Soham: Ritu kya mere Ansoon ye nehi bata rahe k main beGunah hoon

Soham: Kya mere chehre ka dard ye nehi bata raha k tumhe chot lagne se mujhe dard hoti ha

Soham: Ritu ka hath pakar kr apne dil pr rakhta ha. Kya yeh mera dil nehi bata raha k dhadkta ha to sirf tumhare liye. Kya ye sab juth ha ritu

Ritu: haan ye sab jhoot ha ye sab jhoot ha. Main Janti hoon k tum ek Rapist hoon

Soham: Ghutno k pal beth jata ha or ritu k age hath jorta ha Mera Yakeen mano ritu Main ye sab soch bhi nehi sakta. Tum to janti ho na main tumne kitni mohabbat krta hoon. Roote hoye Tumhari kasam ritu Maine

Ritu: Mat Khao meri juthi kasam. Or Nafrat krti hoon Main tumse Nafrat.





Ritu: In saabko yaad krke bohut roti haan. Mujhe Maaf krdo soham maine tum pr yakeen nehi kiya lekin ab mera wada ha k Ek kya Hazar Anjali bhi ajaye to main kabhi bhi os pr yakeen nehi kro gi.
Penultimate update, but bahut hi achha likha aur us raat ka suspense bhi over.

Writer saab ne bahut mehnat ki hey yeh update mein jo saaf saaf dikh raha hey.

Kudos bro. Keep writing stories. You have a very imaginative brain and you successfully convert your thoughts into beautiful words.....
 

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Penultimate update, but bahut hi achha likha aur us raat ka suspense bhi over.

Writer saab ne bahut mehnat ki hey yeh update mein jo saaf saaf dikh raha hey.

Kudos bro. Keep writing stories. You have a very imaginative brain and you successfully convert your thoughts into beautiful words.....
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Aj Shaadi ka din hota ha Ghar main Khushi ka Mahool Tha. Ritu kamre main Tyar ho rahi hoti ha kriti baar baar ose tang kr rahi hoti ha.

Kriti: Are aj to tum Bohut Khush ho rahi ho. Waise hona bhi chahiye Love Marriage Ha

Ritu: Hmm

Kriti: ye bar bar Ankeen band or Khol kyu rahi hoon

Ritu: Hans Kr Mujhe Yakeen nehi a raha baar baar Ankeen khol kr Yakeen kr rahi hoon

Kriti: Madam yakeen kr lijiye

Ritu: Hans parti haan



Soniya: Are Waah Jijo ap tyar ho gye kasam se aj bhi otne hi handsome ho

Soham: Smile krta ha

Soham: Acha tum mera ek kam kro gi

Soniya: Haan Bole

Soham: Wo Mujhe Ritu ko Kuch Gift Dena ha to kya tum ose kamre me mere baad bejho gi

Soniya: Are ye kya baat kr rahe ho Suhagraat ko Dulhan Pehle Kamre Me jati ha. Ap gaye to sab ap ko Dulhan Samjhe Gaye .. hasne lag jati ha

Soham: to tum mera kam nehi karo gi

Soniya: Theek ha

Soniya: Waise Suhagraat ko kya Gift De rahe ho

Soham: Something Special



Soniya: Ritu ke Room ke jati ha Are Wah Di Kasam se bohut pyari lag rahi ho

Ritu: Main Chahti ho k wo sirf Mujhe Dekhe

Soniya:Kasam se itni pyari lag rahi ho na k jab soham dekhe ga Jaan nikal jaye gi

Ritu: Sharma jati ha

Soniya: Acha di soham chahta ha k apko Room me oske Baad bejha jaye

Ritu: Kyu

Soniya: Wo apko ko Surprise Dena Chahta ha

Ritu: acha..ye soch kr sharmane lag jati ha



Aise hi Shaadi ho jati ha Soniya ritu ko pakr kr soham ke kamre tak le jati ha

Soniya: Akhir ap ko apki Mohabbat mil hi gaye. Ab jao bhi kamre me wo kab ka apka intzaar kr raha ho ga

Ritu: Mujhe Sharam ati ha

Soniya: Ab sharmana chor do or jao. Itna bol kr soniya chali jati ha

Ritu: Kamre main jati ha to kamre ki sari lights off hoti ha.

Lights kyu off ki dekho tum mujhe jo bhi Surprise dena chaha ho wo baad me dena abhi mujhe Sharam a rahi ha. Main Lights On krne wali hoon

Ritu: itna bol kr Lights on krti ha. Tu ose kamre me koi nehi dekhta

Ritu: Soham soham kaha ho tum wo bed k pass jati ha to Dekh kr Heiran ho jati ha

Soham: Bed ke Peechy betha tha Zameen pr os ki Ankoon Main Ansoon the or hath se Khoon Nikal raha tha niche Zameen pr Chaku gira tha

Ritu: Soham Bagthe hoye os ke Pass Jane Lagti ha

Soham: Ruk Jao Ritu Wahi Ruk jao

Ritu: Wahi ruk jati ha

Soham: Samne Khari ho jese ek Mujrim Gunaghar ke Samne Khara hota ha

Ritu: Ankoon se ansoon nikal jate ha

Soham: Hans kr Achi lag rahi ho bilkul 8 Saal pehle ki trah. So..Soniya kehti ha k ritu Casual me bhi Dulhen Lagti ha

Ritu: Apni ankeen ko band krti ha

Soham: Hans kr Kaisa Laga Surprise bolo. haha..ha Dar gyi na.

Ritu: Rote hoye ha main dar gye

Soham: Soham ki ankeen band hone lagti ha or moun se bhi khoon nikalne lag jata ha

Ritu: Rote hoye soham ke pass jati ha ose pakarti ha

Ritu: Rote hoye ye tumne kya kr liya

Soham: Sans ukharne lag jati ha or Ankeen band hone lag jati ha, hath main ek kagz hota ha wo bed pr rakhta ha

Ritu: rote hoye So..ham Soh..am utho na pl..zz utho soham

Ritu: Darwaze ke pass ja kr Chilla kr Soniya Kriti ko awaz deti ha phir wapis soham ke pass ati ha jo behosh para tha

Karan, Soniya,kriti sab kamre me ate ha karan soham ke pass jata ha

Soham S..oham ye ky..a hoa jaldi se Ambulance bulao Jaldi se Karan Chilla kr Kehta ha

Ritu: soham ko Gale lagaye Roo Rahi thi

Hospital main Soham ko I.C.U main le jate ha. I.C.U Ke Bahr Vinay,Karan or ritu ki mom hoti ha

Ritu Sediyon se Nichy utharti ha nichy Hall me sab log the Soniya or ritu ki Sari Friends or ritu ke Dad bhi. Akhir Wali Sediyon me a kr beth jati ha

Ritu: Ankeen band kr ko sab ko bolti ha WO.. MAR…. GAYA.. HA. WO MAR GAYA

Sab logo ke hosh udd jate ha

Ritu: Rote hoye wo mar gaya hath apne sir pr marti ha wo mar gaya ha soniya. Or Sabuk Sabuk kr Rone Lag jati ha

Sab log Sdme a jaty ha kisi ko bhi yakeen nehi ho raha hota. Sab log khamosh thy pore hall me bas Subakne ki Awazen a rahi thi. Kuch deer k Baad Ritu boli

Ritu: Jate… hoye ek letter chor gaya ha. Sunao.

Soniya: Rote hoye Ha Suna..o

Ritu wo letter kholti ha

“Ritu Tum Dar Gayi na Ha……ha…Haaaa tum dar gyi. Kesa Laga Surprise hain Surprise me Jaan dedi Maine


Are ab ki baar tumne Shaadi k liye haan kyu boli abki baar yakeen ho gya tumhe k main tumse Mohabbat krta ho Acha Batao 8 Saal Pehle jab tum mujhe Rapist bol rahi thi to kahi nehi laga tumhe k tum galat kr rahi hoon thora sa bhi nehi yakeen hoa Mujh pr”

“Tumne sirf wo Pics or Report Dekhi or os pr yakeen kr liya. Meri Ankoon main apne liye Pyaar na dekha Mere Ansoon Jo Cheek Cheek kr Bol rahe the K Main BeGunnah ho tumne os phr bhi Yakeen nehi kiya,Mera Dil jo tumhare Nam se Dhark Raha tha ose bhi nehi Suna. Tumne to Haar man ke Haar jane wale larke ko apne Pairon Talen Rond Diya. Tumne os larke k dil ke itne Tukre kr diye jis ke Dil me Sirf Tum thi”

Ritu: Itna Parh kr bohut zyada rone lag jati ha oski awazen sab ko sunai de rahi thi

“Agr Tumhari Jaga main hota to ek kya Hazar anjali bhi a kr bolti to Khuda ki kasam main tumhari Ankoon main apne liye Mohabbat dekhta to sab ko Pairo Tale Rond kr Chala jata lekin tumhe na kabhi chorta.

Nikli na wahi Ameer zadi Mohabbat to hogi tumhe lekin Mohabbat krni nehi ayi tumhe. Mar Gaya ho to ye Mat Samjna k tumse Badla Liya ha Tumhe Bas Dekhaya ha K Jisse Pyar karo ospe itbaar Karo Warna Shaadi to kisi se bhi ho jati ha Phir Mohabbat krne ki kya zaroorat.

Ritu: ye baat sun kr phoot phoot kr rone lag jati ha

Janti hoon Dil to mera 8 Saal Pehle os Hospital main hi Tham gya tha jab tumne Mujhe Rapist bola tha lekin Main Sochta tha k Main Zinda Kyu ho lekin ab pata chala k main tab mar jata to main Rapist samja jata. 8 Saal Baad jab me Tumse Milla To Laga k Me phir se Jeene lag gya ho kyuke Marne k liye Zaroori tha k ek bar phir se Zinda ho Jao.

Shaadi ki bat sun kr tumhare Chehre ki Muskarahat dekhi to 8 Saal pehle jab tumne apni mohabbat ka izhar kiya to mujhe apna hasna yaad a gaya. Jese tumhe Yakeen nehi ho raha tha ki Tumhe tumhari Mohabbat Mil Gayi ha Waise hi 8 Saal Pehle Mujhe Bhi Yakeen nehi ho Raha tha k tum Mujhe Mil Gayi hoon. Osi Khushi main tum Mujh se Bichar gayi or is Kushi me Main tumse Bechar gya ha na Coincidence. Tab tumhe laga tha k main tumhe Deserve nehi krta ab Mujhe Laga tum Mujhe Deserve Nehi Krti or Sach to ye ha Ritu jo log Pachtawe ko Daleel Samjte ha wo log Mohabbat ko Deserve hi nehi krte.

Ritu: Itna Parh kr letter os k hath se gir jata ha or os k hath kamp.. rahe hothe ha chehra poora ansoon se bigha hota ha. Waha Majoob sab logo ka Roo Roo kr bura haal tha

Ek Kamre Me Band Ritu Soham ki tasveer hath me pakr kr Dekh rahi thi. Wo soham k chehre k oper hath pheer rahi thi.

“Mere Baad Mere Jane ka Dukh Tumhe Tadpaye to Tadap kr Logon ko Bataya krna Tumne Jo Dukh Zindagi bhar Jhelna Ha Wo Mere os ek pal ki Dukh se bhi Kam ha jo tumhari Shaadi ki khabar sun kr Mujh pr hoa tha. Tumne jo Mere Sath kiya oske liye Main tumhe Maaf kr k ja raha hoon lekin jate hoye Soch Raha ho k tumhe is baat ki Maafi kon De ga k tumhari Wajah se main 8 Saal Mohabbat se Nafrat krta Raha”








Moral of the Story


Jisse Pyar Karo Os pe Aitbaar Karo


Mohabbat krna to asan hota ha lekin Mohabbat nibana Mushkil hota ha
 
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