Romance Mohabbat Se Nafrat

[Rock~Devir]

So nice end

 

[JUGNU BHAI]

So nice end

Aisa End Jise Likhte Waqt Main Khud Rone lag gaya tha..

 

[win_sam201]

nice update bro waiting for next

 

[JUGNU BHAI]

nice update bro waiting for next

ye last update tha story Complete

 

[Rock~Devir]

So em

Aisa End Jise Likhte Waqt Main Khud Rone lag gaya tha..

So emotional

 

[kingkhankar]

Sach mein tum ek great writer ho. Lekin ending tedhi kar di. Enjoyed the sad ending.

 

[mashish]

Last Update

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Aj Shaadi ka din hota ha Ghar main Khushi ka Mahool Tha. Ritu kamre main Tyar ho rahi hoti ha kriti baar baar ose tang kr rahi hoti ha.

Kriti: Are aj to tum Bohut Khush ho rahi ho. Waise hona bhi chahiye Love Marriage Ha

Ritu: Hmm

Kriti: ye bar bar Ankeen band or Khol kyu rahi hoon

Ritu: Hans Kr Mujhe Yakeen nehi a raha baar baar Ankeen khol kr Yakeen kr rahi hoon

Kriti: Madam yakeen kr lijiye

Ritu: Hans parti haan



Soniya: Are Waah Jijo ap tyar ho gye kasam se aj bhi otne hi handsome ho

Soham: Smile krta ha

Soham: Acha tum mera ek kam kro gi

Soniya: Haan Bole

Soham: Wo Mujhe Ritu ko Kuch Gift Dena ha to kya tum ose kamre me mere baad bejho gi

Soniya: Are ye kya baat kr rahe ho Suhagraat ko Dulhan Pehle Kamre Me jati ha. Ap gaye to sab ap ko Dulhan Samjhe Gaye .. hasne lag jati ha

Soham: to tum mera kam nehi karo gi

Soniya: Theek ha

Soniya: Waise Suhagraat ko kya Gift De rahe ho

Soham: Something Special



Soniya: Ritu ke Room ke jati ha Are Wah Di Kasam se bohut pyari lag rahi ho

Ritu: Main Chahti ho k wo sirf Mujhe Dekhe

Soniya:Kasam se itni pyari lag rahi ho na k jab soham dekhe ga Jaan nikal jaye gi

Ritu: Sharma jati ha

Soniya: Acha di soham chahta ha k apko Room me oske Baad bejha jaye

Ritu: Kyu

Soniya: Wo apko ko Surprise Dena Chahta ha

Ritu: acha..ye soch kr sharmane lag jati ha



Aise hi Shaadi ho jati ha Soniya ritu ko pakr kr soham ke kamre tak le jati ha

Soniya: Akhir ap ko apki Mohabbat mil hi gaye. Ab jao bhi kamre me wo kab ka apka intzaar kr raha ho ga

Ritu: Mujhe Sharam ati ha

Soniya: Ab sharmana chor do or jao. Itna bol kr soniya chali jati ha

Ritu: Kamre main jati ha to kamre ki sari lights off hoti ha.

Lights kyu off ki dekho tum mujhe jo bhi Surprise dena chaha ho wo baad me dena abhi mujhe Sharam a rahi ha. Main Lights On krne wali hoon

Ritu: itna bol kr Lights on krti ha. Tu ose kamre me koi nehi dekhta

Ritu: Soham soham kaha ho tum wo bed k pass jati ha to Dekh kr Heiran ho jati ha

Soham: Bed ke Peechy betha tha Zameen pr os ki Ankoon Main Ansoon the or hath se Khoon Nikal raha tha niche Zameen pr Chaku gira tha

Ritu: Soham Bagthe hoye os ke Pass Jane Lagti ha

Soham: Ruk Jao Ritu Wahi Ruk jao

Ritu: Wahi ruk jati ha

Soham: Samne Khari ho jese ek Mujrim Gunaghar ke Samne Khara hota ha

Ritu: Ankoon se ansoon nikal jate ha

Soham: Hans kr Achi lag rahi ho bilkul 8 Saal pehle ki trah. So..Soniya kehti ha k ritu Casual me bhi Dulhen Lagti ha

Ritu: Apni ankeen ko band krti ha

Soham: Hans kr Kaisa Laga Surprise bolo. haha..ha Dar gyi na.

Ritu: Rote hoye ha main dar gye

Soham: Soham ki ankeen band hone lagti ha or moun se bhi khoon nikalne lag jata ha

Ritu: Rote hoye soham ke pass jati ha ose pakarti ha

Ritu: Rote hoye ye tumne kya kr liya

Soham: Sans ukharne lag jati ha or Ankeen band hone lag jati ha, hath main ek kagz hota ha wo bed pr rakhta ha

Ritu: rote hoye So..ham Soh..am utho na pl..zz utho soham

Ritu: Darwaze ke pass ja kr Chilla kr Soniya Kriti ko awaz deti ha phir wapis soham ke pass ati ha jo behosh para tha

Karan, Soniya,kriti sab kamre me ate ha karan soham ke pass jata ha

Soham S..oham ye ky..a hoa jaldi se Ambulance bulao Jaldi se Karan Chilla kr Kehta ha

Ritu: soham ko Gale lagaye Roo Rahi thi

Hospital main Soham ko I.C.U main le jate ha. I.C.U Ke Bahr Vinay,Karan or ritu ki mom hoti ha

Ritu Sediyon se Nichy utharti ha nichy Hall me sab log the Soniya or ritu ki Sari Friends or ritu ke Dad bhi. Akhir Wali Sediyon me a kr beth jati ha

Ritu: Ankeen band kr ko sab ko bolti ha WO.. MAR…. GAYA.. HA. WO MAR GAYA

Sab logo ke hosh udd jate ha

Ritu: Rote hoye wo mar gaya hath apne sir pr marti ha wo mar gaya ha soniya. Or Sabuk Sabuk kr Rone Lag jati ha

Sab log Sdme a jaty ha kisi ko bhi yakeen nehi ho raha hota. Sab log khamosh thy pore hall me bas Subakne ki Awazen a rahi thi. Kuch deer k Baad Ritu boli

Ritu: Jate… hoye ek letter chor gaya ha. Sunao.

Soniya: Rote hoye Ha Suna..o

Ritu wo letter kholti ha

“Ritu Tum Dar Gayi na Ha……ha…Haaaa tum dar gyi. Kesa Laga Surprise hain Surprise me Jaan dedi Maine


Are ab ki baar tumne Shaadi k liye haan kyu boli abki baar yakeen ho gya tumhe k main tumse Mohabbat krta ho Acha Batao 8 Saal Pehle jab tum mujhe Rapist bol rahi thi to kahi nehi laga tumhe k tum galat kr rahi hoon thora sa bhi nehi yakeen hoa Mujh pr”

“Tumne sirf wo Pics or Report Dekhi or os pr yakeen kr liya. Meri Ankoon main apne liye Pyaar na dekha Mere Ansoon Jo Cheek Cheek kr Bol rahe the K Main BeGunnah ho tumne os phr bhi Yakeen nehi kiya,Mera Dil jo tumhare Nam se Dhark Raha tha ose bhi nehi Suna. Tumne to Haar man ke Haar jane wale larke ko apne Pairon Talen Rond Diya. Tumne os larke k dil ke itne Tukre kr diye jis ke Dil me Sirf Tum thi”

Ritu: Itna Parh kr bohut zyada rone lag jati ha oski awazen sab ko sunai de rahi thi

“Agr Tumhari Jaga main hota to ek kya Hazar anjali bhi a kr bolti to Khuda ki kasam main tumhari Ankoon main apne liye Mohabbat dekhta to sab ko Pairo Tale Rond kr Chala jata lekin tumhe na kabhi chorta.

Nikli na wahi Ameer zadi Mohabbat to hogi tumhe lekin Mohabbat krni nehi ayi tumhe. Mar Gaya ho to ye Mat Samjna k tumse Badla Liya ha Tumhe Bas Dekhaya ha K Jisse Pyar karo ospe itbaar Karo Warna Shaadi to kisi se bhi ho jati ha Phir Mohabbat krne ki kya zaroorat.

Ritu: ye baat sun kr phoot phoot kr rone lag jati ha

Janti hoon Dil to mera 8 Saal Pehle os Hospital main hi Tham gya tha jab tumne Mujhe Rapist bola tha lekin Main Sochta tha k Main Zinda Kyu ho lekin ab pata chala k main tab mar jata to main Rapist samja jata. 8 Saal Baad jab me Tumse Milla To Laga k Me phir se Jeene lag gya ho kyuke Marne k liye Zaroori tha k ek bar phir se Zinda ho Jao.

Shaadi ki bat sun kr tumhare Chehre ki Muskarahat dekhi to 8 Saal pehle jab tumne apni mohabbat ka izhar kiya to mujhe apna hasna yaad a gaya. Jese tumhe Yakeen nehi ho raha tha ki Tumhe tumhari Mohabbat Mil Gayi ha Waise hi 8 Saal Pehle Mujhe Bhi Yakeen nehi ho Raha tha k tum Mujhe Mil Gayi hoon. Osi Khushi main tum Mujh se Bichar gayi or is Kushi me Main tumse Bechar gya ha na Coincidence. Tab tumhe laga tha k main tumhe Deserve nehi krta ab Mujhe Laga tum Mujhe Deserve Nehi Krti or Sach to ye ha Ritu jo log Pachtawe ko Daleel Samjte ha wo log Mohabbat ko Deserve hi nehi krte.

Ritu: Itna Parh kr letter os k hath se gir jata ha or os k hath kamp.. rahe hothe ha chehra poora ansoon se bigha hota ha. Waha Majoob sab logo ka Roo Roo kr bura haal tha

Ek Kamre Me Band Ritu Soham ki tasveer hath me pakr kr Dekh rahi thi. Wo soham k chehre k oper hath pheer rahi thi.

“Mere Baad Mere Jane ka Dukh Tumhe Tadpaye to Tadap kr Logon ko Bataya krna Tumne Jo Dukh Zindagi bhar Jhelna Ha Wo Mere os ek pal ki Dukh se bhi Kam ha jo tumhari Shaadi ki khabar sun kr Mujh pr hoa tha. Tumne jo Mere Sath kiya oske liye Main tumhe Maaf kr k ja raha hoon lekin jate hoye Soch Raha ho k tumhe is baat ki Maafi kon De ga k tumhari Wajah se main 8 Saal Mohabbat se Nafrat krta Raha”

Moral of the Story


Jisse Pyar Karo Os pe Aitbaar Karo


Mohabbat krna to asan hota ha lekin Mohabbat nibana Mushkil hota ha​

awesome update

 

[JUGNU BHAI]

Sach mein tum ek great writer ho. Lekin ending tedhi kar di. Enjoyed the sad ending.

Bhai isse Zabardast End ho hi nehi Sakta tha

 

[Qaatil]

Story Was fabulous. First when i saw the title "Mohabbat Se Nafrat" it feels something different.
Ending was very emotional.
Love is made up of four unconditional properties in equal measure.
Trust
Acceptance
Understanding
Appreciation
Remove any one of the four and the relation falls apart.

Keep Writing heart warming Stories. ?​

 

[JUGNU BHAI]

Story Was fabulous. First when i saw the title "Mohabbat Se Nafrat" it feels something different.
Ending was very emotional.
Love is made up of four unconditional properties in equal measure.
Trust
Acceptance
Understanding
Appreciation
Remove any one of the four and the relation falls apart.

Keep Writing heart warming Stories. ?​

Thanks For Your Review. jab main is story ka End likh raha tha to mujhe laga k Mujhe Galiyan parhe gi. but maine phir bhi ye likha

jisse mohabbat hoti hai toh usspe aitbar b karna seekho kisi ke kehne pe ya Koi galat famy hojaye toh wo mohabbat bhool jate hai jo Umar bhar ki thi ..... Umar bhar ki mohabbat bas ek pal main Khatam karjate hai