Romance Parijaat : A Romantic Fantasy

[Notebook]

Aapko salah ki jarurat hi nhi hai....
Aap khud hi itni acchi trah se story likh rahe hai ki aap ko salah dena mere bas ki baat nhi hai. Or waise v mujhme itni kabiliyat nhi hai ki mai aapko salah de saku.....
Mujhe pata nhi tha aapka writing skills itni jabardast hai warna ab tak to mai aapki sari story padh chuka hota. ye pahli apki story hai jo mai padh raha hu....or ab apki har story pe aapke sath milunga...

Thanks bhai aap logo ka sath hi story aur writer ka award hota hai

 

[Naina]

 

[Naina]

ek baar phir jaan bachai usne.... sawra na hoti toh kya hota karan ka aur karan hai ke uspe vishwas hi nahi karta......
Yeh saitaan kyun aaya hain ?
kya chahiye ushe ?
Khair
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill

 

[John Cena]

O teri ki ya raftar hero ko shetan keh raha ha boht bada twist daal diye han dost keep it up

 

[Pondy]

Mujhe samajh me nahi aaya, wo shaitaan kaun hai jise Raftaar ne dekha?
Karan hai wo shaitaan? Ya Swara? Swara ne Karan ko khinch liya uske baad kya hua ye suspense hai, mere khayal se shaitaan koi alag hi jo Swara ke Karan ke khinch lene ke baad aaya, aur kya is Shaitaan ka Karan ke papa se koi lena dena hai?

Jabardast update bhai, aaj ke update ka intejar rahega besabri se

 

[Notebook]

Behtareen update

Shukriya bhai

 

[Notebook]

I think it would be better if Swara and Karan become friends and both are together. At least get friendship first, first friendship then love. Saloni probably have feelings for Karan. Who did Saloni see? Maybe the demon has arrived. Lovely Swara saves Karan's life, wow! Suspense intact.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Thanks for reading and liking bhai . Dosti to hogi par pyaar ke liye to wakt kharab hai waise bhi Saloni jyada tej bhagegi abb

 

[HarRy GoYaL]

wow bro nice update, your writing skills are to good..
keep posting..
Intjar rahega ki aage kya hota hai, Kon tha vo jise dekh raftar dar gya, or karan ko kisne khencha, Or Kya karan me bhi koi special power hai kyuku uske uper vo blue rays jo pdi thi,
or swra ke sath kya hota hai aage....



Waiting for next..

 

[s khan]

Nice story.....
Boht intazair kraya....
Waiting for next update ? ? ?

 

[Naina]

Intezaar....