Pondy
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Thanks for reading bhai . Karan kya karega wo aap ko thodi hi der me pata chal jayega . Story shape le rahi hai to aap sabhi ki salaah ka swagat haiSuperb sir jee....
Story bahut hi acchi ban rahi hai.....
Kya karan saloni ko bacha payega....
Waiting for next update....
Thanks for reading and liking the update bhai Swara bht cute hai par abhi jadu me kachchi pari hai, karan ko bahut dikkat hone wali hai uske sathWhenever I hear the name Swara, automatically have a smile on my face. Swara is a very sweet and innocent angel, but our Karan is mad, cannot understand it. I also like a quarrel between the two. Now let's see if Karan can save Saloni.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Kabeele wale apne jungle ke sher hain lekin aap sahi ho gaaw walon ne niptane ki bahut koshish ki hai unko par kya kare aafat ko khatm karna aasan nahi hota hai Karan aur Swara ki tana tani lagi hi rahegiGaon wale log in kabile walo maar kyun nahi dete . .. kissa hi khatam kar deni hain..
na ye kabile wale rahenge naa hi koi gayab hoga basti se ... ab dekhiye... ye saloni ke ghar tak aa gaye... hadd hain
karan ye baar baar kaise baat kar raha hai swara se... are jaan bachai hai karan k....
aur woh hain ke..
Khair.
Let's see karan aur swara saloni aur uske ghar walo ko bacha pate hai ki nahi...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill
Update aayega bhaiAre kal hi agayi thi update to aj bhi shaam ko ayegi
Haan bhai swara abhi kachchi pari , uske jadu adhoore hain isi liye wo madad kam karti hai musibat jyada karti haiFinally Kabile waale aur Ganw waalo ka milan hoga fight ke saath lekin shayad Raftaar aur Chandrika dono ladenge nahi inse, aur swara to hai hi ganw waalo ko bachane ke liye lekin dikkat ye hai uski shakti kamjoor hai, ab dekhte hai kya hoga hai kidnapping ho paayega ya bacha lenge... Superb update