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Bas bhai ab likhne ja raha hu. Jyada time nahi lagega kyon ki hot update hai. Story likhne me jyada time lagta hai, sex likhne me nahi.bhai 270 kab ayega
Bas bhai ab likhne ja raha hu. Jyada time nahi lagega kyon ki hot update hai. Story likhne me jyada time lagta hai, sex likhne me nahi.bhai 270 kab ayega
Index update kar diya tha bhai page 1 par.New Kaha post kiya bhai aapne page btao plzz
Bhai yaha uski family hai aur sabse badi baat ki uski apni bahan sheetal hai, to apno ke paas to rahega hi.Ek aur shandar update Anand Bhai..Iska Matlab hai ki bachpan se raaz ko Saab kuch pata hai ye bhi pata hai ki vo asli nahi hai phir yahan rehna ka bajah Kya ho sakta hai ..tab se jab usko ye nahi pata that ki khud raaz hi uska judwa Bhai hai..ab asli sadhna ko too sare raaj pata hai..jab Ghar par seetal (asli sadhna) Sadi Karne mandir gaya thaa tab se pata thaa vo kisi se bhi iss baat ka jikra nahi Kiya usee pata thaa ki sayad raaz ki jaan ko khatra ho isiliye kisi ko nahi bataya ho..ab bakt agya hai ki sare raaj sabhi Jane keliye...waise bhi diry ki last page Sadhna me padh Kar apne pass rakhliya hai usse bhi koi raaz ho Jo khud sadhna ne Jana ho...SAB JAGHA JHOL HAI..??
han main bhi wahi soch raha tha... naina akhir gai kahan hai... or agar yaha golu madari galat insaan hai to mujhe lagta hai... naina uss raj ko leke bhag gai hai... madari jab raj ko ye sachai bta raha tha to... usne naina ke bare me kuchh btaya... yaa phir raaj kabhi milne gaya.... ye to aage hi pata lagega...Jo starting se Malti thi use maine malti hi likha hai aur jo nayi malti thi, use maa likha hai. Jaisa ki maine pahle bhi kaha tha ki kahani jab kale kamre me jayegi to black star ke makad jaal me ulajh kar rah jayegi. makad jaal se jitna bhi bahar nikalne ki koshish karo, vo utna hi ulajhta chala jata hai, tabhi maine ise makad jaal kaha hai. Chaku kisne mara, ye aage pata chal jayega.Golu madari iss kahani ko suljhane me ek bada turning point hai, lekin ek kirdar aur bhi hai jis par kisi ne dhyan nahi diya, Naina. Golu madari par shaq to banta hi hai. sabse pahla shaq to issi baat par jata hai ki usne uss bachche ka naam raj hi kyo rakha, jabki uske judwa bhai ka naam bhi raj tha to..? koi dusra naam kyo nahi rakha...? Manav nirmit star to kisi bhi rang ka ho sakta hai.
Shukriya Shah40 bhai for liking the story.Kya kahu aanand bhai jab bhi mast update bhai aur ab to har tarah se raaj khul rahe hai jald hi pata chal jaayegaa mom hi asaliyat bus update thoda aur jaldi dete rahe
Aap ke update ke intjaar me kai baar khud ki story bhi achche se nahi likh pata hu
tanu ka udghatanBas bhai ab likhne ja raha hu. Jyada time nahi lagega kyon ki hot update hai. Story likhne me jyada time lagta hai, sex likhne me nahi.
Maine update me likha to hai bhai ki sadhana aur baki sab ke pyar ke chakkar me raj naina ko bhi bhul gaya. Yahi vo turning character hai jise main piche use karna chahta tha, ye aap uski kahi baato se samajh hi gaye honge ki usne last me kya kaha tha..? khair aage uska role ayega.han main bhi wahi soch raha tha... naina akhir gai kahan hai... or agar yaha golu madari galat insaan hai to mujhe lagta hai... naina uss raj ko leke bhag gai hai... madari jab raj ko ye sachai bta raha tha to... usne naina ke bare me kuchh btaya... yaa phir raaj kabhi milne gaya.... ye to aage hi pata lagega...
Index updated on page 1raat se subah ho gai... Aai na koi khabar update ki
hmmm bhai, tanu ki band pitari bhi khol hi dete hain ab.tanu ka udghatan
Bhai ji dusri jagah ke bare me bhi batlaye sayad aapki kalpnashakti ki chupi hui koi durlabh shakti se bhi prichye ho jaye. Aage aapki ichha, me aapko badhye nahi karunga.Duniya kare sawal to hum kya jawab de taki aishi sithti na aaye.Haan bhai, dusri jagah par bhi post kar raha hu aur vaha story vaisi hi hogi jaisi maine sochi thi kyon ki yaha kuch change kiye hain jinke karan confusion kuch jyada hi ho raha hai.