Incest SAAND

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[aman rathore]

SAAND
UPDATE- 269
Ek Gahra Raaz​

Vahi dusri taraf kale kamre me qaid sheetal aur sadhana ek dusre ko apne apne dhang se sachchayi ka aaina dikhane ki koshish kar rahi thi.

Sheetal (shocked, chilla kar)—tumhe hosh bhi hai ki tum kya kah rahi ho…? Tumhe sharam nahi aati ek maa ko uske hi bete ki biwi kahte huye…? Raj ke Pyar me tum itni andhi ho chuki ho ki tumhe raj me kuch galti nazar nahi aa rahi..?

Sadhana (chilla kar)—mat kaho use meri maaaa….vo hamari maa nahi hai…

Ab aage……

Sheetal (gusse me)—chataaakkk…tum raj ke bahkave me aa kar pagal ho gayi ho..sahi aur galat ka fark samajh me nahi aa raha hai tumhe…itni galtiya batane ke baad bhi tumhari nazar me raj hi sahi hai aur main jo itni der se bol rahi hu, vo sab bakwas lag raha hai tujhe.

Sadhana—pagal main nahi balki tum ho gayi ho, sahi aur galat ka fark tumhe nahi dikhayi de raha hai..

Sheetal—achcha, to kya raj ne jo seema chachi, roopa chachi aur ritu ke sath jo kiya, kya vo sahi tha…? Jo maine use maa ke sath jo kuch karte dekha, kya vo uchit tha…? Jo usne gaon bhar ki ladkiyo ke sath kiya, kya vo sahi tha…? Mujhe to pushpa bua ke ladke ka baap bhi raj hi lagta hai, kya ye uchit tha…?

Sadhana—seema chachi ke sath raj ne kya kiya, ye main nahi janti, rahi roopa chachi ki baat, to unhone sab bata diya tha ki vo bhusa nikalte samay atari se gir gayi thi sidhi tootne se, isliye langda kar chal rahi thi. Jaha tak pushpa bua ki baat hai to raj mujhe bata chuka hai ki uss ladke ka baap vahi hai. Ritu ke sath jo bhi hua, vo sab anjane me huyi galti ke karan hua, isme kisi ka dosh nahi hai. Ab agar maa ki baat hai to maine kaha na ki maa hamare raj ki biwi hai, to agar raj ne unke sath kuch kar bhi liya to kya galat kiya…? Kya apni biwi ke sath kuch karna galat hai…?

Sheetal (chillate huye)—tumhari ankho me uss bahuroopiye ke pyar ka parda pada hua hai, isliye tumhe uske alawa kuch dikhayi nahi de raha hai.pyar andha hota hai, ye maine aaj dekh liya. Jo ek maa ko uske hi bete ki biwi banane par tuli ho.

Sadhana—main bana nahi rahi hu balki maa hamare raj ki biwi hai, sirf maa hi nahi balki arushi mami, thakurain, arti bhi raj ki biwi hain.

Sheetal (hairan)—kyaaaa…?

Sadhana—haan, aur isme raj ki koi galti nahi hai..baat ye hai ki..(phir sadhana ne ye sabhi raj ki biwi kaise bani, vo sab vistar se batane lagi.)

Sheetal (gusse me)—wah, isme tujhe uss kamine ki koi galti nazar nahi aati…? Arushi mami ko bahkaya usne, ritu ke gale me mangal sutra pahnaya usne, maa ki maang me sindoor bhara usne, thakurain ko rape kar ke pregnant kiya usne..phir bhi tujhe vo sahi lag raha hai…? Jabki ye sab uski pahle se sochi samjhi sazish ka hissa hai.

Sadhana—aisa kuch nahi hai..raj meri kasam dene ke baad jhuth kabhi nahi bolta.

Sheetal—meri bahan, tu samajhti kyo nahi... ? jis raj ko tum bachpan se pyar karti aa rahi ho, ye vah raj nahi hai..hamara vo raj mar chuka hai...ye uske hum shakal hone fayda utha raha hai, ye black star ka hi koi jasoos hai.

Sadhana (jor se)—ye vahi raj hai, jise maine bachpan se pyar kiya hai..main uske har ek sparsh ko achchi tarah se pahchanti hu...uski har ek chhuwan mere hriday patal par amit chhap ki tarah basi huyi hai. Uss sparsh ko pahchanne ke liye mujhe kisi ke praman ki avashyakta nahi hai. Mera dil uski har dhadkan ko bhali bhanti mahsoos karne me saksham hai. Door se aati huyi uski aahat ko bhi mera dil pahchan leta hai.

Sheetal (tension)—ab main tumhe kaise samjhau.. ? tumhari mati par to patthar pade huye hain…agar tumhe meri baat par vishwash nahi hai to na sahi, lekin kya tumhe papa ki baat par bhi vishwash nahi hai…? Jab unhone khud kah diya hai ki hamara raj mar chuka hai, ye hamara vo raj nahi hai tab bhi…? Isne hi maa ko bhadkaya hai papa ke khilaf..tumhe apne janam dene wale papa aur apni bahan se jyada uss naqli raj par yakin hai…?

Sadhana—haan, mujhe raj par yakin hai, uski har baat par yakin hai, sabse jyada, yaha tak ki khud se bhi jyada..(kuch yaad aate hi)..ek minute.. ek minute..kya kaha tumne…ki papa ne kaha hai…?

Sheetal—haan, kab se to main samjha rahi hu..

Sadhana—ohhh..sheetal, dhokha mujhe nahi balki tumhe hua hai, ya phir kahu to hum dono ko hua hai..

Sheetal—kya matlab….?

Sadhana—meri baat dhyan se sunna…dekh papa tujhe bhi mile aur mujhse bhi mile, lekin kya tumne dhyan diya iss baat par ki jo unhone tumse kaha, vo baat mujhe nahi batayi aur jo mujhse kaha unhone, vo baat tumhe nahi batayi.. iss baat par jara gour kar ki unhone hum dono se alag alag baate kyo kahi raj ke baare me…? Mujhe unhone khud raj ko ye video dikha kar use bachane ki baat batayi jabki tumhe bataya ki raj mar chuka hai…kyo…? Mujhse unhone ek bar bhi nahi kaha ki ye hamara raj nahi hai jabki tumhe bataya ki uska hum shakal hai..akhir kyo…? Hum dono ko ek hi admi ke baare me unhone alag alag opposite baate kyo batayi…?

Sheetal (shocked)—arrey haan, ye baat to maine sochi hi nahi..papa ne aisa kyo kiya…?

Sadhana—iska matlab saaf hai ki raj ne papa ke baare me jo kaha vo ekdam sahi hai..

Sheetal—kya matlab..? akhir tu kahna kya chahti hai..ki hamare papa galat hain…?

Sadhana—mere kahne ya na kahne ki jarurat hi kaha hai..papa ne hum dono ko raj ke baare me alag alag baate bata kar ek dusre ke khilaf bhadkane wali harkat kar ke khud hi sabit kar diya hai ki koun sahi hai aur koun galat..

Sheetal (tension)—ho sakta hai ki kisi majburi me unhone tujhe sach na bataya ho…? Aur phir tune bhi to diary padhi hai, papa ke baare me bhi padha hai ki vo kitne nek dil insaan hain, phir bhi tu papa par shaq kar rahi hai…?

Sadhana—shaq to mujhe pahle tha lekin ab to poora yakin hai…diary me hamne sikke ka ek pahlu hi padha hai..dusra pahlu to padha hi nahi hai..

Sheetal (hairan)—kya matlab…?

Sadhana—matlab ye ki diary adhuri hai..usme poori baate nahi likhi huyi hain..

Sheetal (hairan)—meri to kuch samajh me nahi aaya ki akhir tera kahne ka matlab kya hai…?

Sadhana—matlab ye ki diary me aadha sach hi likha hai..poora sach nahi…aur vo baki ka aadha sach sirf raj hi janta hai.. diary likhne ko jitna pata tha, utna usne likha, baki ka use ya to pata hi nahi tha ya phir usne jaan bujh kar likha nahi..

Sheetal—diary to jarur pujari dada ki hi likhi huyi hogi..kyon ki vo bahut bade jyotishi bhi the..aur vaise bhi diary me jo kuch likha hai, uske baare me koi janta hi nahi hai. Lekin tum aisa kyo kah rahi ho ki usme aadha sach hi likha hai..? aur baki ka aadha sach raj hi janta hai..lekin raj kaise jaan sakta hai, use kaha se pata…?

Sadhana—diary me papa ki achchaiyo ke baare me likha hai lekin usme avinash ki family aur raghu ki family ke baare me kyo kuch nahi likha hai…? Jabki avinash aur raghu bhi to raj ke hum shakal hone ke sath sath hamare hi papa ki aulad hain, phir unke baare me kyo kuch nahi likha hai…? Dusri baat, diary kisne likhi hogi…? Kyon ki vo diary sheetal ke liye matlab ki tumhare liye likhi gayi hai…diary likhne wale ko tumhare sapno ke baare me pata tha, tum sadhana nahi balki sheetal ho, ye bhi vo janta tha…

Sheetal—maine bataya to ki ye kaam pujari dada ka hai…vo sab ke sapno ke baare me jaan lete the.

Sadhana—dekho baat sidhi si hai ki ye diary vahi likh sakta hai jise ki tumhare baare me aur hamari family ke baare me sab pata ho…pujari dada jyotishi the to jahir hai ki vo tumhare baare me sab jante honge lekin agar diary pujari dada ne likhi hai to phir unhone jaise tumhe vo lifafa diya, vaise diary bhi to de sakte the na..? aur unhone avinash, aur raghu ki family ke baare me kyo nahi likha…? Raj ke baare me aage kyo nahi likha…? jabki diary to tumhe kaale kamre me ghusne par mili, kale kamre me diary kaise pahuchi…?

Sheetal (tension)—hmmm..ye bhi ek point hai sochne wala..

Sadhana—dusri baat, agar pujari dada ne vo diary nahi likhi tab ye sawal ithta hai ki tumhare khwabo ke baare me pujari dada ko chhod kar aur koun koun janta tha…? Tum sadhana nahi balki sheetal ho, ye baat to sirf main, tum ya phir papa hi jante the, jisme se ki tumhari to yaad dast hi chali gayi thi..ab bache sirf main aur papa..isme bhi uss hadse ke baad to main janti bhi nahi thi ki tumhare sath kya hua…? Baad me itna pata chala ki tum mar chuki ho.

Sheetal (shocked)—omg..iska matlab ki papa..! sadhana, maine apne sapno ke baare me sirf ganga mousi ko hi bataya tha, aur uss kale kamre me jis admi ne mujhe diary di thi, use maine ganga mousi ke sath vaha par sex karte huye dekha tha.. vo admi aur koi nahi balki papa the..

Sadhana—ohhh..ab samajh me aaya..sirf papa hi the jinhe hamari family aur tumhare baare me sab pata tha, ye diary jarur unki hi likhi huyi hai isliye unhone apne kukarmo ki kahani isme nahi likhi. Raj ne unke baare me sahi hi kaha tha. Tumne apne sapno ke baare me ganga mousi ko bataya aur unhone papa ko...baki tumhare baare me to vo sab jante hi the, bas phir likh dali diary. Ab tumhi socho ki agar vo black star ki qaid me the uss samay to tumse milne gaon kaise aa sakte hain .. ? aur to aur yaha mujhse bhi mil sakte hain..? bahar nikal kar raj ko bacha bhi sakte hain aur tumse mil kar use mara hua bhi bata sakte hain..sach baat to ye hai ki raj unki asliyat jaan gaya tha, unhe darr tha ki kahi raj sab ko bata na de, isliye unhone tumhara sahara liya kyon ki unhe achche se pata tha ki main raj ke khilaf kuch sunungi hi nahi, vishwash karna to bahut door ki baat hai.

Sheetal—lekin hamara koi judwa bhai bhi hai, ye baat to papa ko pata nahi thi, phir vo diary me uske baare me kaise likh sakte hain…?

Sadhana—ye sab main nahi janti..ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki papa ko hospital me kaam karne wale kisi doctor ya nurse ne bataya ho…jo ki delievery ke samay moujud the.

Sheetal—chalo iss baat ko maan bhi liya jaye tab bhi papa ko golu madari ke baare me kaise pata ki usne hamare bhai ko dakuo se bacha liya…?

Sadhana—ye to golu madari ya phir papa hi bata sakte hain.

Sheetal—theek hai, tumne kaha na ki papa yaha tumse milne aane wale hain, to aane do unko main unse puchungi ki unhone mujhse ye jhuth kyo bola ki raj mar chuka hai jabki tumhe uske jinda hone ke baare me bataya…akhir kyo…? Unki aisi kya majburi thi ki unhone tumse jhuth bola…?

Inhe iss baat ka tanik bhi pata nahi tha ki bahar ek langda admi darwaje par kaan lagaye dono ki baate sun raha tha aur sun sun kar khush ho raha tha.Jaise hi usne suna ki dono uske hi aane ki pratiksha kar rahi hain aur usse kuch puchne wali hain to vah bhag kar door chala gaya.

Langda (mann me)--ab tumhare samne vo tumhara langda baap kabhi nahi ayega to puchogi kisse...? hihihihi

Usne jaldi se apne chehre par lagaya hua vivek ka mask utar kar dusra mask pahan liya aur apni langdi taang me naqli pair lagane ke baad phir se aa kar darwaje par apne kaan chipka diye.

Sadhana—video dekhne ke baad bhi tumhe yahi lagta hai ki raj mar chuka hai…?

Sheetal— main to ab bhi kahti hu ki ye hamara raj nahi hai..balki hamara raj mar chuka hai…kyon ki raj ne khud hi ye baad swikar ki hai ki vo hamara pahle wala raj nahi hai, iska matlab saaf hai ki hamara raj ya to iss duniya me nahi hai ya phir uss kamine bahuroopiye ne use kahi kidnap kar rakha hai…? Vo kamina khud ko hamara khoya hua dusra bhai bata raha hai jabki vo black star ki qaid me hai. Ek mar gaya ya kya kiya isne pata nahi uske sath..? phir ye hamara raj kaise ho sakta hai…?

Sadhana—tum ghum phir kar raj par hi kyo aa jati ho…? Ho sakta hai ki hamara pahle wala raj kidnap ho gaya ho aur ye hamara khoya hua raj hi ho..? balki hai.

Sheetal—kyon ki vo hamara raj nahi hai…tum hi socho, ki agar vo hamara khoya hua bhai hota to kya vo apne baare me kisi ko batata nahi…? Lekin kisi ko apni sachchayi batana to door, ulta vo khud hi raj ban baitha…Usne khud ka naam raj hi kyo rakha…? Jis din vo aaya ussi din hamara raj gayab ho gaya…kya isme tumhe koi sazish nazar nahi aati…? Agar ye hamara raj hota to kya apni hi bahan aur chachi ke sath aisi ghatiya giri huyi harkat karta…? Chalo inn sab ki baat chhod do, maa ke sath bhi..chheee..

Sadhana (bhadak kar)—bas bahut ho gaya, tum vahi sheetal ho, iss baat ka kya saboot hai…? Pahle wali sheetal to aisi nahi thi, vo to raj par jaan chhidakti thi..mujhe to lagta hai ki tum asli sheetal ho hi nahi, balki uski koi hum shakal ho jo sheetal ban kar hame dhokha de rahi ho…sidhi tarah se batao ki asli sheetal kaha hai…? Warna tumhari khopdi uda dungi..

Sadhana ne gusse me aa kar revolver nikal kar sheetal ke samne taan diya tha aur sheetal use hairani se dekh rahi thi.. mamla jyada ganbhir hote dekh bahar se darwaje par kaan lagaye khade admi ne beech me hastakshep karna jaruri samjha aur darwaje par dastak de di.

Darwaje par achanak huyi dastak se dono chounk gayi. Sadhana ne jaldi se revolver chhupa kar darwaja kholne chali gayi. Samne darwaje par vahi pahle vala admi khada tha jo ki sheetal aur sadhana ko yaha kamre tak le kar aaya tha.

Admi—arey abhi tak tum dono ne nasta nahi kiya... ? main to tum dono ke liye coffee le kar aaya tha..chalo jaldi se nasta khatam karo aur coffee pi lo warna sab thanda ho jayega.

Sheetal—papa nahi aaye milne... ?

Admi—pata nahi beti, shayad kahi busy honge... ? achcha tum dono nasta karo, main pata lagata hu..

Itna kah kar vo admi jaldi se khisak liya jate jate vah darwaja bhi bahar se band kar gaya, uske jate hi sadhana ek bar phir se sheetal ki taraf revolver taan di, shayad uska gussa abhi thanda nahi hua tha.

Sadhana—ab batao, kaha hai meri bahan…?

Sheetal—main bata to chuki hu ki main hu sheetal hu. Phir bhi agar tujhe yakin nahi hai to chalao goli aur khatam kar do mujhe. Lekin itna yaad rakhna ki mujhe khatam karne ke baad bhi mere sawalo se picha nahi chhuda paogi.

Sadhana—ye to tum kah rahi ho ki tum sheetal ho, phir kaise yakin kar lu…koi saboot hai tumhare paas…? Theek vaise hi raj bhi to bol raha hai ki vo hamara khoya hua bhai hai, tab tumhe yakin kyo nahi ho raha…?

Sheetal—kyon ki usne apni asliyat sabse chhupayi hai jabki maine chhupayi nahi. Tumse pyar karne ki itni badi badi baate karta hai, tumhe bataya usne apne baare me…? Mujhe sadhana samajhta tha, mujhe bataya usne…?

Sadhana—kyo kal usne bataya to tha na sab tumhe..agar uske mann me koi chor hota to kya vo tumhe batata…?

Sheetal (nam ankhe, mann me)..mujhe maaf karna meri bahan, main jo bhi kar rahi hu, vo tumhe aur raj ko bachane ke liye hi kar rahi hu. Agar main raj ke sath aisa bartav nahi karti to vo pagal mujhe chhodta hi nahi aur piche piche kale kamre tak pahuch jata, jo main nahi chahti thi, kyon ki vo harami black star bhi to yahi chahta hai,ki raj kisi bhi tarah se yaha aaye aur aate hi uske bichhaye jaal me phans jaye.Isliye raj ko iss manhoos jagah se door rakhne ke liye mujhe usko jalil karna pada yaha tak ki maine hath bhi uthaya uss par, mujhe maaf kar dena raj..apni iss sheetal didi ko maaf kar dena. Aur sadhana, main tujhe bhi aise ghut ghut kar nahi marne dungi, kyon ki tum mere raj ki jaan ho. Main tumhe black star ke iss changul se bahar nikalne ke liye hi yaha aayi hu, mere lakh mana karne ke bavjud bhi tum yaha aa gayi. Tumhari vajah se mujhe yaha aana pada warna, main to pahle uss harami chacha abhay ka sarvanash karne wali thi. Meri bahan, jab tumhara ek premika ka dil apne raj ki dhadkan ko pahchan leta hai to phir uss par jaan chhidakne wali iss bahan ka dil apne bhai ko kaise nahi pahchanega…? Jaisa dil tumhare seene me dhadakta hai, vaisa hi mere seene me. Fark sirf itna hai ki ek ko vah pagal apni premika samajh kar pyar karta hai to dusri ko apni bahan samajh kar uski pooja karta hai. Lekin sach to ye hai ki hum dono hi usse pyar karti hain. Bas tumhara pyar jag jahir hai aur mera pyar, uski bahan hone ke karan, mere seene me hi dafan hai. Mujhe kisi bhi tarah se tumhe iss jagah se bahar nikalna hai, ye black star ka area hai, ho sakta hai ki vo kuch tarike se hamari baate bhi sun raha ho, isliye mujhe tumse iss tarah se baate karni pad rahi hai. Chinta mat karo sadhana, main tumhe aur raj ko kuch nahi hone dungi. Meri kisi bhi kadwi baat se agar tumhare dil ko thes lagi ho to mujhe maaf kar dena. Lekin tum dono aur hamare khoye huye bhai ko bachane ke liye mera aisa karna jaruri hai.

Sadhana—usne mujhse kabhi kuch nahi chhupaya, uss din mandir me apne baare me pahle hi sab kuch bata chuka hai vo. Aur usne mujhe jo bhi bataya, vo sab tumhare dhokhe me sadhana samajh kar mujhe bataya tha. Tumhe pata hai uss din kya kaha tha usne..

Sheetal—kyaaa…?

Sadhana—uss din jab main raj ke sath mandir gayi thi tab…

Phir sadhana uss din ki yaado me khoti chali gayi aur sath me sheetal ko batati ja rahi thi…

Sheetal (meri samajh me sadhana)—raj, ab jaldi se meri maang me devi maa par laga hua sindoor bhar do aur gale me mangal sutra baandh kar apni sheetal didi ki khwahish poori kar do..

Raj—sadhana, ye meri sheetal didi ki khwahish hai to poori jarur karunga…main tumhe bahut pyar karta hu sadhana.. aur pyar me koi parda nahi hota…main tumhare gale me mangal sutra aur maang me sindoor bhar kar apni biwi ka darza du usse pahle main tumhe apne vishay me sab kuch bata dena chahta hu…

Sheetal—main kuch nahi janna chahti..main to bas itna janti hu ki maine jab se hosh sambhala hai, tab se sirf aur sirf tumse hi pyar kiya hai…kisi aur purush ki taraf dekhna to door maine kabhi socha tak nahi hai.

Raj—isliye mera batana aur bhi jyada jaruri ho jata hai…main tumhare yogya nahi hu sadhana…mere baare me agar sab jaan logi to shayad ho sakta hai ki tum mujhse nafrat karne lago…kintu phir bhi mere liye sach batana avashyak hai.

Sheetal—lekin main kuch nahi janna chahti…main ye janti hu ki tumhara aur bhi kayi ladkiyo ke sath sambandh hai… phir kyo mujhe bata kar taklif dena chahte ho…?

Raj—sadhana, insaan dusro se jhuth bol sakta hai kintu apne aap se kabhi jhuth nahi bol sakta…insaan dusro ki nazro me gir kar koi bhi achcha kaam kar ke phir se unki nazro me uth sakta hai..lekin agar vo ek bar apni hi nazro me gir gaya to phir jeevan paryant kabhi nahi uth sakta..uska vo jhuth aajivan use andar hi andar deemak ki bhanti khokhla karta rahta hai…do pyar karne walo ke rishte ki buniyad jhuth par nahi rakhi ja sakti …sach ko kitna bhi chhupaya jaye, kabhi na kabhi kisi na kisi roop me vo samne aa hi jata hai….main nahi chahta ki mera sach tumhe dusro se pata chale..uss din shayad tum mujhe jhutha aur dhokhebaaz samajhne lag jaogi.

Sheetal—main aisa kuch nahi samjhungi..

Raj—aaj mujhe bol lene do sadhana, agar aaj bhi nahi bol paya to shayad phir kabhi nahi bol paunga…aur na hi tumhe vaisa pyar de paunga jiski tum haqdar ho..

Sheetal—main tumhe bachpan se pyar karti aa rahi hu, mujhse jyada tumhe koun jaan sakta hai…? Phir bhi tum batana chahte ho to batao..main sun rahi hu..

Raj—sadhana, main tumse sachcha pyar karta hu…lekin koi aur bhi hai jise main bahut chahta hu…aur vo hain meri.. sheetal didi…haan, sadhana, main apni sheetal didi se bahut pyar karta hu..

Sadhana (khush)—to isme pareshan hone jaisi kya baat hai…? Har bhai apni bahan ko pyar karta hai..

Raj—nahi sadhana, yahi to nahi hai…main sheetal didi ko…vaise hi pyar karta hu jaisa ki tumhe…ye pyar kab ho gaya, kaise ho haya..? ye sab nahi janta….tumhare jane ke baad main toot sa gaya tha…tumhari yaado me nain bimar tak rahne laga…tab mujhe sheetal didi ne sambhala…unko jab bhi dekhta to mujhe tum hi nazar aati…aisa lagta ki meri sadhana mere samne khadi hai…aur aisa lagna swabhavik bhi tha kyon ki sab kuch to vaisa hi tha unme jaisa ki maine tumhare andar mahsoos kiya tha…aaj bhi jab unhe dekhta hu aur unhe apni baho me leta hu to mere dil me bas ek hi awaz uthti hai ki ye meri vahi sadhana hai…magar ankhe kahti hain ki nahi, ye teri sheetal didi hain…sach kahu to sheetal didi ke bina meri zindagi theek vaisi hi hai jaise ki pani bina machhli…main janta hu ki tumhe ye jaan kar dukh hua hoga ki ek bhai kaise apni bahan se iss tarah ka pyar kar sakta hai…? Lekin main kya karu sadhana, iss dil par to mera koi ikhtiyar nahi hai na…dil hi to hai bas apni bahan par hi qurban ho gaya..main tum dono ke bina bilkul adhura hu…main jitna tumhe chahta hu, usse kahi jyada main apni sheetal didi ko pyar karta hu..

"Na Jane Itni Mohabbat Kaha Se Aayi Hai Uske Liye,
Ki Mera Dil Bhi Uski Khatir Mujhse Rooth Jata Hai.”​

Sheetal (nam ankhe)—kya ye baat sheetal ko pata hai…? Sheetal to tumhe itna maarti hai, fatkarti hai..sabke samne jalil karti hai..phir bhi usse pyar karte ho…?

Raj—mujhe nahi pata ki didi janti hain ya nahi…

Sheetal—to tumne sheetal ko bata kyo nahi diya ki tum usse itna pyar karte ho, ek premi ki tarah…? (mann me)..ek bar tum apne pyar ka izhar kar ke to dekho raj…sheetal tumhari baho me daudi chali ayegi…pagal, jis sadhana se tum pyar karte ho, vo sadhana main hi hu aur jis sheetal se tum itni mohabbat karte ho, tumhari vo sheetal didi bhi main hi hu.. lekin kya karu, tujhe ye bata bhi nahi sakti, kyon ki mere paas samay hi to nahi hai raj..

“Mere Dil Me To Aaj Bhi Sirf Tum Hi Ho,
Ye Aur Baat Hai Ki Hath Ki Lakiro Ne Dhokha de Diya.”​

Raj (nam ankhe)—darta hu main…ki kahi ye baat sun kar vo mujhse nafrat na karne lage…? Main unki maar aur daant to bardast kar leta hu, kyon ki vo sirf meri galtiyo par hi maarti hain mujhe…sheetal didi jitna bahar se kathor dikhti hain, asal me sach to ye hai ki vo dil ki bahut kamjor hain…vo gusse me mujhe maar to jarur deti hain lekin mere so jane ke baad ghanto mere gaalo ko, jaha par unhone mara tha, usko sahlate huye mere paas baith kar roti rahti hain…gusse ke baad sheetal didi ke pyar karne ka ye tarika meri sari tension, sara dard pal bhar me hi gayab kar deta hai…sheetal didi ke aise pyar ke liye to main 24 ghante unki daant aur maar khane ke liye taiyar hu..

Sheetal (nam ankhe)—ek baar bol kar to dekho sheetal se…ho sakta hai ki vah bhi tumhare baare me aisa hi sochti ho jaisa ki tum uske baare me sochte ho…? Vo bhi tumhe vaisa hi ek premika ki tarah hi pyar karti ho…?

"Tere Har Dukh Ko Apna Bana Lu,
Tere Har Gum Ko Dil Se Laga Lu,
Mujhe Karni Aati Nahi Chori Warna,
Main Teri Ankho Se Har Aanshu Chura Lu."​

Raj—nahi, main unhe taklif me nahi dekh sakta..main nahi chahta ki meri kisi baat se unhe taklif ho..

Sheetal—jaisi tumhari marzi…khair chalo ab meri maang me sindoor bhar kar mangal sutra pahna do…aur apni didi ki ichcha poori karo..

Raj—abhi meri baat khatam nahi huyi sadhana..ab jo batana chahta hu use dhyan se suno…kyon ki ab jo main batane wala hu, vo janna tumhare liye jaruri hai…

Sheetal—theek hai sunao kya sunana chahte ho jo main nahi janti…?

Raj—main tumhara vo raj nahi hu, jise tum janti ho…balki raj ka hum shakal judwa bhai hu aur sanyog se mera bhi naam raj hi hai.

Sheetal (real sadhana)—(shocked)..whatttt..! ye kaise ho sakta hai…? Kya mazaak hai ye raj..? mujhe aisa majaak bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai..

Sadhana—golu madari uss ladke ko dakuo se bachane ke baad apni basti me le gaya aur apni ladki jiska naam naina tha, uske sath sath palan posan karne laga. Uss bachche ka naam golu madari ne kuch soch kar rakha raj. kuch din baad vah dono ki dekh bhal ke liye ek aurat ko le aaya, jo ki khubsurat hone ke sath sath mansik roop se kuch vikshipt bhi thi. Sanyog se uska naam bhi malti hi tha. Uss aurat ke aane se golu madari jyadatar bahar hi rahne laga tha. Ek bar vo uss aurat ko bhi apne sath uska ilaz karwane ke liye le gaya to dubara vo vapis louti hi nahi. Puchne par golu madari ne bataya ki vo aurat aur koi nahi balki hamari maa thi.

Short flashback

Raj—baba, vo chachi nahi aayi aapke sath…?

Golu—beta aaj main tumhe ek sachchayi batana chahta hu..

Raj—kaisi sachchayi baba…?

Golu—beta, tum mujhse hamesha puchte the na ki meri maa kaha hai…? To beta, aaj main tumhe sab bataunga, shayad aaj sach batane ka waqt aa gaya hai..vo aurat vastav me tumhari apni maa thi, tumhe janam dene wali maa.

Raj (shocked)—kyaaa….?

Golu—haan, ye sach hai.

Raj (shocked)—phir aapne aaj tak mujhse ye baat chhupa kar kyo rakhi…?

Golu—kyon ki ye baat mujhe khud bhi abhi kal hi pata chali hai ki to tumhari maa hai.

Raj (sisakte huye)—baba, kaha hai meri maa…? Mujhe maa ke paas jana hai….?

Golu—haan beta, main tumhe tumhare pariwar walo ke paas le jaunga..lekin tumhe ek vada karna hoga.

Raj—kaisa vada…?

Golu—yahi ki tum apne baare me kisi ko kuch nahi bataoge, kabhi bhi..

Raj—lekin kyo…?

Golu—jis din tum sab samajhne layak ho jaoge, uss din main tumhe sab bata dunga. Bas itna samajh lo ki isse tumhari bahan ki jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai.

Raj (shocked)—meri bahan..?

Golu—haan, tumhari badi bahan sheetal..agar tumne sab bata diya to uski jaan bhi ja sakti hai..aur haan, tumhara ek soutela bhai aur do bahan aur bhi hain souteli..

Raj—kyaaa…?

Golu—haan

Raj—lekin meri maa kaha hai…?

Golu—beta, main tumhe uss devi se to nahi mila sakta kintu tumhe tumhare pariwar tak jarur pahucha sakta hu.

Raj (sisakte huye)—kyo nahi mila sakte…? Mujhe apni maa ke paas jana hai baba..mujhe maa ke paas jana hai..mujhe le chalo baba maa ke paas.

Golu—beta, vo…vo..tumhari maa, ab iss duniya me nahi rahi..

Raj (rote huye, jor se)—nahiii..tum jhuth bol rahe ho baba…aisa nahi ho sakta…meri maa mujhe chhod kar phir se nahi ja sakti…

Golu—beta, jane wale lout kar nahi aate, tumhe abhi bahut kaam karna hai, unke adhure sapno ko poora karna hai aur iske liye tumhe apne pariwar walo ke paas jana hoga.

Raj (rote huye)—kya hua tha meri maa ko…?

Golu—maine kaha na ki waqt aane par sab bata dunga..tab tak dhairya rakho aur vaha ja kar apni bahan ka khyal rakhna.

Raj (sisakte huye)—theek hai baba…main jaunga, apni bahan ke liye..main uski hifazat karunga. Kab jana hoga…?

Golu—aaj main sab kuch dekh kar aata hu, vaha se lout kar phir chalte hain..achcha abhi jata hu, kal chalenge..

Raj—theek hai..

Uske baad golu madari apne kandhe par ullu ko bitha kar vaha se chala gaya..uske jate hi naina mere paas aa kar mere anshu pochne lagi jabki vo khud bhi ro rahi thi.

Raj (sisakte huye)—tum kyo ro rahi ho…?

Naina (sisakte huye)—isliye ki tu ro raha hai.

Raj—main to tere se chota hu lekin tu to mere se badi hai..

Naina (sisakte huye)—to kya hua.. ? achcha raj, kya tu sach me mujhe chhod kar chala jayega…?

Raj—vaha meri didi hai, mujhe unka khyal rakhna hai..

Naina—aur yaha mera khyal koun rakhega…?

Raj—tumhara khyal rakhne ke liye baba hain..lekin vaha meri didi akeli hai.

Naina (sisak kar)—lekin vaha ja kar tu mujhe bhul to nahi jayega na…?

Raj—tu bhi koi bhulne ki cheez hai..?

Naina—agar vaha ja kar tune kisi dusri ladki se dosti kar li to... ?

Raj—aisa kuch nahi hoga..

Naina—pakka vada

Raj—vada

Naina (sisakte huye)—soch lena, agar tune kisi ladki ki taraf dekha bhi na to main usko jaan se maar dungi.

Raj—makkhi se darti hai aur jaan le legi..

Naina (seene se lag kar)—main sach bol rahi hu..main sach much uss ladki ko jaan se maar dungi jo bhi tujhe phansane ki koshish karegi..

Aise hi nok jhok me vah din nikal gaya. Agle din golu madari apne sath raj ko le kar uske apne gaon saajanpur aa gaya aur raj ko ek jagah rukne ka bol kar na jane kaha chala gaya. Raj poora din vahi baithe baithe golu madari ke vapis aane ki raah dekhta raha lekin vo nahi aaya.

Shaam ka andhera gahrane laga tha, raj pareshan ho kar vahi ek jagah baitha apni maa ki yaado me khoya hua tha ki tabhi apne kandhe par kisi ke makhmali hatho ke sparsh ko mahsoos karte hi vo hosh me aa gaya. Iske pahle ki vo kuch samajh pata, uss shakhs ne use apne gale se lipta liya.

"Raj, tu kaha chala gaya tha…? Pata hai, main tujhe kab se dhoond rahi hu..aur tu hai ki yaha aa kar baitha hua hai. Meri to jaan hi nikalni baki rah gayi thi"

Raj ne chounk kar uski taraf dekha to hairan rah gaya, bina palak jhapkaye uski taraf dekhta raha, use yakin nahi ho raha tha ki uski ankhe jo dekh rahi hain, vo sach hai ya phir koi sapna hai.. ?

“Aise kya dekh raha hai... ? school se sidhe ghar kyo nahi aaya…? Yaha baith kar kya kar raha hai…?”

“Lagta hai ki teri pitayi se naraz ho gaya hai…?” ek awaz aur aayi.

Raj ghum kar awaz ki disha me dekha to ek bar phir se jhatka kha gaya. Vo dono ladkiyo ko bari bari se hairani se dekhne laga, uska to dimag hi chakra gaya tha.

‘’ Apni didi se itna naraz ho gaya..? achcha sorry, ab nahi marungi..chal ghar chal…maa ka ro ro ke bura haal hai. Chal.”

Raj (chounk kar)—maa..!

Ye dono aur koi nahi balki sheetal aur sadhana hi thi, jinki ek jaisi surat dekh kar raj hairan rah gaya tha. Sabse badi baat ki dono ki shakal maa se bilkul milti thi. Sheetal ki ankhe anshuo se bhari huyi thi.

Sadhana—aise ghur ghur ke kya dekh raha hai..? ankhe nikal lungi samjha.

Iss tarah se raj apni family me pahuch gaya. Malti ko dekh kar use maa ki yaad aa gayi. Sab use behad pyar karte the. Malti ki ankho ka tara tha vo. Vaise bhi sheetal ki vajah se kisi ki himmat hi nahi hoti thi ki vo raj ko kuch kahe halanki vo khud din bhar uski dhunayi karti rahti thi. Sath me khelte khelte sadhana aur raj kab ek dusre se pyar karne lage, unhe khud hi kuch pata nahi chala. Sab ka pyar pa kar raj apni pichli jindagi jaise bhul hi gaya tha.yaha tak ki vo naina ko bhi bhul chuka tha.

Magar kahte hain na ki samay kabhi ek jaisa nahi hota, samay kabhi bhi kisi ke liye ek jagah nahi rukta, kaal ka pahiya nirantar chalta hi rahta hai. Sadhana ke sath huyi uss durbhagya poorn ghatna ke baad raj bimar rahne laga tha. Malti usko le kar apni bahan lalita ke yaha chali gayi. Jaha pahli bar raj ke hatho se lalita ke jeth ka qatl hua.

Lekin tabhi uski nazar khidki se use khoon karte huye dekhte ek shakhs par gayi to vah hadbada kar vaha se jane laga lekin bahar nikalte hi vo shakhs uske samne aa kar khada ho gaya.

raj—koun ho tum…?

“Mujhe nahi pahchana beta…? Main hu tumhara baba…golu madari..itna jaldi bhul gaye beta mujhe…?”

Raj (dimag par jor dalte huye)—ohhh,,baba tum..? kitna badal gaye ho tum..?

Raj ki yaad dast bahut tez thi. Ek bar jis cheez ko vah dekh leta ya sun leta, vo baat uske dimag me ghar bana leti thi. Ye alag baat hai ki gujarte samay ki jung bhale hi lag jaye kintu dimag me jor dalne par uss jung ki parat utarne me jyada samay nahi lagta tha.

Golu—tum bhi to bahut badal gaye ho beta…?

Raj—aapne to mujhe dara hi diya tha…kaha the itne din…? Mujhe to aap chhod kar gayab hi ho gaye the..

Golu—bas beta mat puch…kuch jaanch padtal me laga hua tha.

Raj—kaisi jaanch padtal…? Aur Poori huyi ki nahi…?

Golu—poori ho gayi tabhi to tumhare samne hu..tumhare sawal ka jawab dene ke liye..

Raj—kya matlab…? Achcha tumne apne baare me kisi ko kuch bataya to nahi na…?

Raj—nahi, lekin baba iss tarah kisi ko dhokha dena kya sahi hai…? Uss maa ke sath aisa karna kya uchit hai jo mujhe apna beta samajh kar apni jaan se bhi jyada chahti hai…? Vo bahne jo khud bhukhi rah jati hain taaki main bhukha na rahu aur dono chachi, jo mujhe apni sagi aulad se bhi jyada pyar karti hain.

Golu—beta, vo sab theek hai jo tumne kaha. Lekin agar tum sach bata doge to kya tab bhi vo tumhe utna hi pyar karenge..? aur sabse badi baat ki sheetal ki hifazat karni hai. Sach jaan kar shayad vo bhi tumhari baat par yakin na kare, aur ho sakta hai ki ulta nafrat karne lage. Phir tum kaise uski hifazat karoge…?

Raj—kyo koun maarna chahta hai meri didi ko..? naam batao, main uski ankhe phod dunga.

Golu—tumhara chacha abhay, tumhari aur sheetal ki jaan ka dushman hai…(phir property ke baare me batate huye).

Raj (gusse me)—uski maa chod dalunga agar usne meri didi ki taraf dekha bhi to..

Golu—beta tumne ek din mujhse apni maa ke baare me pucha tha na ki uske sath kya hua…?

Raj (chounk kar)—haan baba, batao na..kya hua tha maa ke sath…?

Golu—beta, tumhara baap kaam ki talash me aksar rajasthan aaya jaya karta tha. Uske sath uska dost akash bhi jyadatar hota tha.Vahi uski mulaqat ek ladki se huyi jiska naam bhi malti hi tha. Uska iss duniya me koi nahi tha sirf ek souteli maa thi jo uss par raat din zulm karti rahti thi. Vivek uski khubsurtti me kho gaya. Vo jab bhi rajasthan aata malti ko dekhe bina vapis nahi jata tha. Uski souteli maa ka bhai, jiski niyat malti par kharab thi, ek bar mouka pa kar usne uski izzat lootne ki koshish ki lekin vivek ke vaha aa jane se uski ye mansha adhuri hi rah gayi. Iss ghatna se malti bhi vivek ki taraf akarshit ho gayi. Dono ke beech sharirik sambandh bhi sthapit ho gaye. Yaha ghar me vivek ki biwi ne ek din uske paas malti ki photo dekh li, puchne par pahle to vah aana kani karta raha lekin baad me use sab sach batana hi pada. Jiske baad dono miya biwi me kafi bahas huyi. Malti dil ki bahut achchi thi. Tumhari maa jab bhi shadi ki baat karti to vivek taal jata. Malti uss samay pet se thi jab uske muh bole mama ne ek bar phir se uski asmat par hamla kiya aur iss bar uski souteli maa ne bhi apne bhai ka hi sath diya iss kaam me. Lekin usne apni izzat to nahi lutne di par iss chakkar me uske hatho uss kalyugi kansh mama ka vadh jarur ho gaya. Iss ghatna se vo mansik roop se vikshipt ho gayi. Adalat ne use umra qaid ki saza suna kar uski mansik halat dekhte huye pagal khane bhej diya. Jab ye baat malti ko pata chali to usne uski hone wali aulad ke achche bhavishya ke liye khud ko jhutha hi pet se hone ka sab ko bata diya. Iss tarah se sheetal ko malti ne apni beti ke roop me apna liya. Lekin ek din vo Pagal khane se ek do logo ka sir phod kar bhag nikli aur dar dar ki thokre khane lagi. Vo apni beti aur vivek ki talash karte huye iss gaon tak ja pahuchi. Jaha vivek se uski mulaqat gaon ke bahar hi ho gayi. Lekin use uska haq dene aur ghar le jane ki bajaye vivek usko gaon ke bahar bane khandahar me le gaya aur vahi rahne ko bol diya. Iss dauran vo phir se garbhvati ho gayi . Malti use ghar lana chahti thi lekin vivek ko apni aur apne pariwar ki izzat ka khyal tha, jiske chalte vo razi nahi hua. Ussi samay ek bar phir se malti ke garbhvati hone ki baat sunne me aayi. Jab ye baat abhay ko pata chali to uske kahne par dakuo ne tumhe hospital se utha liya.

Uss din main tumhari maa ko le kar uska haq dilane hi gaya tha. Gaon me khandahar ke paas hi usko rok kar maine ishare se usko sheetal aur raj ke baare me bata diya, jo vaha se thodi doori par khel rahe the. Usko bhukh lagi thi to main uske khane ke liye kuch lene thoda market tak aa gaya. Sheetal aur raj ko dekhte hi ek maa apni barso se pyasi mamta ko nahi rok payi aur daudte huye ja kar dono se lipat gayi aur phut phut kar rone lagi. Jab kuch gaon walo ki nazar uss par padi to unhone use pagal aur bachcha churane wali samajh kar poore gaon me hungama kar diya. Tumhare ghar wale bhi ye sun kar ki koi unke raj ko liye ja rahi hai, sab bhagte huye vahi pahuch gaye aur uss bechari ko maarne peetne lage.

Maa (rote huye)—mujhe mat maro…ye mere bachche hain..main inki maa hu..mujhe mat maro…mere bachcho ko lag jayegi.

Lekin kisi ne uski baat nahi suni, use maarte rahe, peette rahe yaha tak ki uss bechari ko unhone randi, vaishya, rakhail, chor, pagal na jane kya kya bhaddi bhaddi gaaliya di. Vo roti rahi apne bachcho ke liye magar uski pukar sunne wala vaha koi nahi tha. Jab laat ghuso aur gaaliyo se unka mann nahi bhara to uske upar patthar utha utha kar maarne lage.Gaon ka shayad hi koi aisa bacha hoga jisne uss abla par hath na uthaya ho ya use gaaliya na di ho. Yaha tak ki tumhari chachiya, chacha, bahne tak shamil thi sirf sheetal aur sadhana ko chhod kar. Vo dono tumhari maa ko bachane ki koshish kar rahi thi jabki tumhari maa unko bachane ki koshish me khud maar kha rahi thi.Par tabhi vaha thakur pahuch gaya aur tumhari maa ki sundarta ko dekh uski niyat dol gayi.

Thakur—ruk jao, isko saza hum denge aur aisi saza denge ki kabhi aisi gustakhi nahi karegi ye..

Thakur tumhari maa par toot pada. Lekin tabhi vaha malti pahuch gayi jo ki shayad abhi abhi nadi se aa rahi thi. Usne jaise hi tumhari maa ko dekha to vah thakur se bhid gayi. Thakur ki nazar to pahle se hi malti par thi lihaza usne jamin par bejan padi tumhari maa ko chhod kar malti ko daboch liya. Ye dekh kar tumhari maa malti ko bachane ke liye kisi tarah bhagi magar tabhi sheetal ka phenka hua ek patthar sidhe thakur ke sir me laga jiske karan vo tilmilate huye vaha se chala gaya aur itne me hi kisi ne tumhari maa ke pet me chaku ghop diya. Malti ne bhag kar tumhari maa ko check kiya lekin itni der se maar khate khate vo pahle hi adhmari ho chuki thi aur phir chaku lagne se uski saanse pal bhar me hi tham gayi. Uss bechari ko jeevan me na to mata pita ka sukh mila, na hi pati ka aur ant me apni aulad ko seene se lagane ki tadap me tadapte huye usne jaan de di.

Raj (rote huye)—kyaaa...itna sab hua meri maa ke sath... ?

Golu—haan beta, inn gaon walo ne uski jaan le li.

Raj (rote huye gusse me)—maa, mujhe teri ankh se nikalne wale anshuo ke ek ek boond ki saugandh, tere jism se bahne wale khoon ke ek ek katre ki kasam hai. Aaj se pahle na to aisi kasam kisi ne li thi aur na kabhi lega. Maa, aaj main kasam khata hu, jin gaon walo ne tujhe randi, aur rakhail ka tana diya hai, teri jaan li hai, aaj ke baad main unhe bataunga ki randi kya hoti hai, rakhail kise kahte hain. Aaj ke baad iss gaon me kisi ki doli nahi uthegi, har ladki, har aurat sirf tere iss bete ki rakhail ban kar sirf mere hi bachche paida karengi. Har ladki bin byahi maa banegi. Jab tak main jinda hu, iss gaon ki kisi bhi bur me tere iss bete ke alawa koi dusra lund nahi ghusega.phir chahe vo meri khud ki maa bahan hi kyo na ho. Ye aaj se meri shapath hai.

Golu—lekin beta, isme malti ka koi kasoor nahi hai, usne to sheetal aur raj ko apni hi aulad samjha hai hamesha. Kabhi unhe ye ehsaas nahi hone diya ki vo unki maa nahi hai balki sunne me to yaha tak aaya hai ki iss ghatna ke baad to usne vivek se apna andruni rishta hi khatam kar diya tha.

Raj (gusse me rote huye)—main kuch nahi janta baba, aaj se main khud ko aisa saand banaunga jo sirf chodna, khana aur ladna bhar hi janta ho. Iske alawa kuch nahi.

Golu—lekin beta sheetal.

Raj (gusse me)—meri sheetal didi ki taraf uthne wali har ankh phod dunga, phir chahe vo koi bhi ho.

Golu—aur ek baat, raj tumhara apna hi judwa bhai hai.

Raj (shocked)—kyaaa…?

Golu—haan beta, yahi sach hai

Raj—kaha hai vo…? Use kidnap kisne kiya tha…?

Golu—use maine hi kidnap kiya tha, lekin use mere paas se bhi kisi ne kidnap kar liya.

Raj—kyaaa…?

Vahi Dusri Taraf.....

Raj—arrey didi, jyada se jyada mujhe maar hi dega na..? maar dene do..

Tanu (muh me hath rakh kar)—nahi raj, aisa mat bolo..main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi ab..

Raj—to kya kahta ki theek hai, main apni tanu didi ko chodunga…? Jaise ki main tumse chudwane ko kahta aur tum mujhse chudwane ko taiyar ho jati..?

amazing update hai anand bhai,
Behad hi shandaar aur lajawab update hai bhai,
to ye maalti raj ki maa nahin hai uski maa pahle hi mar chuki hai,
gaon walon ne uski maa ko berahami se maar daala isi liye raj ne aisa Sapath liya tha,
aur ye naina ka aage koi kirdaar hai kya?,
Vahin golu madari ka kirdaar bhi abhi tak poori tarah se suspence bana hua hai,
ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

 

[Nadan Dill]

Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha

 

[aman rathore]

Next Update Likh Raha Hu. Complete hote hi jaldi post karne ki koshish karunga.

Besabri se intazar rahega bhai

 

[Rizwan]

Shukriya Rizwan bhai for this encouragement.

Welcome veer g

 

[Rizwan]

Shukriya Rizwan bhai for this encouragement.

Thanks apka veer jo hamra entertemed k liey ap mehnat kar rahy ho

 

[anandsngh12]

amazing update hai anand bhai,
Behad hi shandaar aur lajawab update hai bhai,
to ye maalti raj ki maa nahin hai uski maa pahle hi mar chuki hai,
gaon walon ne uski maa ko berahami se maar daala isi liye raj ne aisa Sapath liya tha,
aur ye naina ka aage koi kirdaar hai kya?,
Vahin golu madari ka kirdaar bhi abhi tak poori tarah se suspence bana hua hai,
ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

Raj ke iss tarah ka character wala admi banne ke piche yahi vajah hai.
Naina ka jab naam aaya hai to role bhi jarur ayega, vo kahani ko suljhane me ek aham kadi sabit hogi.
Golu madari ke updar shaq karna to banta hi hai, na jane kya khichdi pak rahi ho uske dimag me...?

 

[anandsngh12]

Thanks apka veer jo hamra entertemed k liey ap mehnat kar rahy ho

bhai ek hath se kabhi taali nahi bajti. Aap sab ka sath hai to main hu. Writer aur Reader dono hi ek dusre ke poorak hain.