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Shukriya Rizwan bhai.Welcome veer g
Shukriya Rizwan bhai.Welcome veer g
waitingNext Update Likh Raha Hu. Complete hote hi jaldi post karne ki koshish karunga.
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Aisa nahi hai Raaz bhai. Maine koi story band nahi ki hai. Isme focus isliye kar raha hu kyon ki ye ending par hai, bas kuch updates me ye end hone wali hai. Iske baad saajan ko speed de dunga. Saajan mere liye behad special hai. Uska update likhne ke liye mujhe sabse pahle khud ko dikhaye jane wale scene me poori tarah se dubona padta hai, vo jis tarah ki story hai, uska update likhne ke baad iska update likhne ka mann nahi hota. aur iska update likhne ke baad uske update me mind focus nahi ho pata. isliye pahle isko khatam kar raha hu. Naag Mani aur saajan ko ek sath chalane me koi dikkat nahi hai kyon ki dono hi love story hain vaise hi Rishabh Mohini bhi Triangular Love Story hai... isliye dono ke update me mind divert ho jata hai magar ye hot story hai to mind divert nahi ho pata jaldi unke update likhne me. anyway saajan ka update kal (aaj night) me mil jayega.anandsngh12 bhai sahab last 1.month se koi update nahi hai sirf saand pe hi aapki update Hotey Hai aur woh sirf ek sex base story hai jis me maza nahi aata lekin jo story hum pad rahe hai yani. SAAJAN CHAMATKAR AUR NAAG MANI woh 3 no story aapne lagbhag band kar di hai. I mean Chamatkar beech me ruki hui hai 2nd part ke liye nagmani ko to zamana ho gaya latke huay aur shayad ab Saajan bhi usi category me aa gayi hai. Bhaisahab hum sai kuch ghalti ho gayi hai to bata dijiye warna itni berukhi acchi baat to nahi hum to aapke admirer Mai sai hai. AP bhai aur aapki wajah se to hi hum is forum pe aaye hai warna pichlay forum ke baad to bus chor hi diya thaa sab kuch
mail id to yahi hai aur active bhi hai. pata nahi kyo aapka mail send nahi hua..?Bhai aapki story bahut shandaar h ...aap ise kaha pe aur post karte ho please bataiye ...
Ok bhaiNext Update Likh Raha Hu. Complete hote hi jaldi post karne ki koshish karunga.
Bhai mujhe ek baat kehna hai......sadhana ( sheetal) jab gunga mousi ke pash thi tab ek admi kale libash me kandh pe ullu bithaye aaya or pinjere me kaid ek ullu ke sath pijere bhi gunga mousi ke noukrani ko diya tha or jab noukrani uska naam pucha to us admi ne kaha tha BLACK Star...... Is admi or golu madari dono hi samehbaat hai jo hai kandhe pe ullu......Sadhana malti se nafrat nahi karti hai, maine ye kahi nahi dikhaya ki vo usse nafrat karti hai ya phir uss par kisi bhi prakar ka doubt karti hai. usne to bas yahi kaha ki vo hamari janam dene wali maa nahi hai jo ki satya hai. Iss update to sirf teeno ke maa ki kahani thi ki sheetal ne ye kyo kaha ki malti uski maa nahi hai, iska jawab tha.
Golu madari par apka shaq kaha tak sahi hai, ye aage kuch updates me pata chal jayega. Vaise bhi maine pahle hi bataya tha ki kahani jab kale kamre me enter karegi to buri tarah se ulajh jayegi tabhi to maine isko black star ka makad jaal ka naam diya tha. Iss makad jaal se jitna bahar niklo, vo utna hi ulajhta jata hai jab tak ki poori tarah se usse bahar na nikal jao.