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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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UPDATE - 65

Ab tak

Margret ruth gayi thi mere ko usko manana tha. B.S ne bola tha ke Saifali jo meri bahen thi usse akele mein millu uske pass kuch tha mere liye.Wahi dusri taraf Maarcuss ne iss baar Jordon ko bheja tha Earth ke shield ko todne ke liye.

Aage

Chaliye pahle hum Margret ke pass chalte hai jo muh fullaye apne room mein badbada rahi thi.

Margret(Khud se)- Ek to madad ki upar se mujhe hi sunna raha hai main hi pagal thi jo iske saath yaha aa gayi isse accha na main bhi Dadu ke saath rahti...Pata nahi main isko pasand kaise karne lagi iss gadhe ko haa wo sach mein attraction.....

Maine ussi wakt darwaja khatkhataya.

Margret(gusse mein) - Kon hai

Main- Margret main hu tumhara dost.

Margret - Dekho chale jao abhi nahi to main tumhe...tumhe ... pata nahi kya karungi tumhare saath issliye jao abhi aur main dost wost nahi hu tumhari.

Main- Arre yaar sorry ab nahi bolunga kuch tumhe ek baar darwaja to kholo plz.

Margret- Bola na nahi, Abhi jao yaha se tum

Main- Arre baba sorry bola naa maan bhi jao aur agar darwaja nahi khola to ghumne kaise jaogi yaar.

Margret(Kuch soch kar)- Mujhe nahi jaana kahi ghumne tum jao akele main yahi thik hu.

Main- Sach mein naa fir baad mein bolna mat mujhe ke ghumaya bhi nahi.

Margret- Thik hai nahi bolungi tum jao.

Main- Thik hai fir main jaata hu.

Main wahi chup chap khada raha aur mann mein counting karne laga.

Meri counting 3 tak hi pahuchi thi ki gusse mein tamtamati Margret bahar aayi aur binna meri oor dekhe nicche chali gayi chillate hue.

Margret- Saurya agar tum mere binna gaye naa to mein tumse kabhi baat nahi karungi.

Main- Arre par tum to nahi jaane wali thi naa.

Margret ne aoni chadi nikali aur meri oor karke ghumma di. Main jaha khada tha waha ek ke baad ek sadde hue tamatar ki barsat hone lagi aur main ussi se pura ganda ho gaya.

Main- Ye kya kiya tumne main bas majaak kar raha tha naa.

Margret- Tumne mujhe daata tha ye ussi ke liye hai upar se tumne mujhe pareshan bhi kiya hai uska abhi baaki hai.

Main- Arre par maine sorry bhi bola tha naa.

Margret- (Haste hue) Haa to main bhi ye karne ke baad naa sorry bolne hi wali hu.

Usne fir se chadi ghumayi aur iss baar sade hue anndo ki barshat ho gayi mere upar.

Mere pure body se itni gandi badbu aa rahi thi ke pucho hi maat. Issi badbu ki wajah se Rita aur N.mom bhi hamare pass aagaye.

N.mom- Saurya ye kya haal banna rakha hai apna kar kya rahe the tum.

Main- Ye sab iss Margret ne kiya hai dekho kya banna diya mujhe.

Margret- Haa to mujhe daanta kyun tha maine to bas tumhari help ki naa.

Main- Thik hai ab se nahi daantunga aur naa hi kuch kahunga tumko thik hai naa.

Main itna bol waha se nikal gaya iss baat se anjaan ki ye ladkiyan hamesha hi baato ka galat matlab hi nikalti hai.

Rita-(Margret se) Tujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha Margret dekh wo naaraz ho gaya.

Margret- Kya par main to bas... kya sach mein vo naaraz ho gaya.

Rita- Haa dekha nahi usne kya bola ab wo tujhse kabhi kuch nahi bolega.

N.mom- Arre par wo gussa nahi tha maine dekha tha usko.

Rita- Nahi aapne dhyaan se nahi sunna sayad usne bolla Margret ko ki ab se wo isko kuch nahi bolega matlab wo naraaz hai.

Rita pata nahi kya kya samjhati rahi Margret ko wahi mein chala gaya bathroom waha acche se ready hua naha do kar aur fir chal diya Pradeep ke office ki oor jaha se mujjhe Saifali(Bahan) ke baare mein pata karna tha.

Jab mein nikal raha tha uss waqt Margret aur Rita mujhe jaate hue dekh rahi thi. Maine bhi dono ki oor ek baar dekha bas aur nikal gaya.

Main pahuch gaya Pradeep ke office jaha par wo akela tha usse Saifali(Bahan) ke baare mein baat ki usse pucha ki wo kaha milegi.

Saifali ghar par nahi rahti thi uski naukri lagi hui thi kisi university mein wahi padhati thi wo.

Pradeep ne mujhe uska address diya aur pucha ki wo bhi chale kya to maine manna kar diya.

Main Pradeep ke diye hue address par chala gaya. Address Saifali ke ghar ka tha jaha wo akele rahti thi apne Maa papa se dur pata nahi kyun.

Main jab ghar ke pass pahucha to talla laga tha. Wo to accha hua ek padosi ne mujhe batta diya ke wo university mein millegi.

Main bhi chal diya university waha gaya to abhi classes chal rahi thi. Par wo hotte hai na har collage ya university ke wo launde jo class mein kam aur bahar jyada hote hai unhi mein se ek ko maine pakda aur usse Saifali ka pata puccha.

Ladke ne mujhe bola ki wo chemistry lab mein hogi.

Main chal pada chemistry lab ki oor waha pahucha to dekha bahut saare students ek ghera banna kar khade the aur ek tube ko dekhe jaa rahe the ki acchanak bahot hi khoosbudar smell fail gayi chaaro oor aur main wahi dher ho gaya yaani behosh ho gaya.

Jab meri aakhen khulli to main ek room mein ek bistar par pada tha.
Deewar par ek ghadi lagi thi jo tic tic tic karti jaa rahi thi abhi koi 3 baje the uss ghadi mein yaani mein 5 ghante se yahi pada hua tha.

Main jaldi se utha aur idher udher dekhne laga kuch samajh naa aaya to maine portal khol wapas jaane ki soonchi par portal khulla hi nahi.

Maine Mohini se Alex se Pradeep se sab se contact karne ki kosis ki par kuch bhi nahi hua. Thodi der baad darwaja khula uss room ka aur Saifali(Bahan) waha se ander aayi.

Saifali(Gusse mein)- To waqt mil gaya mere liye ??

Main- Saifali kya tum mujh....

Saifali- Chup ekdum chup rahna aaj sirf main bolungi aur aap nahi tum sunnoge.

Main chup ho gaya.

Saifali- Tum logo mein jarra bhi sayam naam ka chiz to hai nahi naa har chiz jaldi honi chahiye bas yahi dimmag mein rahta hai tum logo ke. Kya jarurat thi uss Pihu ki bacchi ko tumhari yaaddast wapas laane ki itni jaldi sab kuch ussi ki wajah se shuru hua aur fir wo tumhari pyaari Shilpa usne bhi kam kaand nahi kiye... Par inn dono se bhi jyada doshi to wo bhudda hai ussko rokna chahiye tha tum logo ko par nahi wo to saath deta raha tumlogo ka aur dekho uska natiza sab kuch idher udher bikhar gaya hai pata nahi ab kaise sambhalungi sab kuch.

Itna bol wo baith gayi aur fir meri oor dekhne lagi.

Saifali- Ab chup kyun ho bolo bhi kuch.

Main- Main kya bolu mujhe to tumhari koi baat samajh naa aayi.

Saifali ne ye sunte hi apna sar pit liya.

Saifali- Oo Mother Elika kis musibat ko mere bhagya mein likh diya aapne ab isko kaise samjhau main.

Saifali- Haa par inn logo ne to sab bigad diya hai naa ab batao aap hi kya karu main.

Saifali- Thik hai par main innlogo ke saath nahi rahungi plz Mother Elika plz plz.

Saifali- Ye aap galat kar rahi ho mere saath aisa mat karo naa plz.

Main- Tum kisse baatein ka.....

Saifali- Chup raho tum dekh nahi rahe baat kar rahi hu main.

Main fir se chup ho gaya.

Saifali- Thik hai Mother Elika par iske baad aap mujhe kuch naa kahogi main khud dekhungi ki ye kaabil hai mere ki nahi samjhi aap.

Saifali fir khush ho gayi aur mere pass aa gayi main usko hi dekhe jaa raha tha.

Saifali- Ab kya dekhte hi rahoge yaa kuch bologe bhi.

Main- Tum thik to ho naa matlab tumhe koi pares....

Saifali- Thik ho naa se kya matlab hai tumhara.

Main- Kuch nahi main to bas aise hi puch raha tha par ye tum kya sach mein Mother Elika se baat kar rahi thi.

Saifali- Haa unhi se kar rahi thi.

Main- Par wo to mera matlab wo to nahi rahi naa.

Saifali- Accha aur ye kisne bol diya tumse.

Main(Shocked)- Kya matlab hai tumhara wo abhi bhi jinda hai.

Saifali- ummm ye naa thoda complicated sawal hai aur mujhe aisa lagta hai ki tumhe ye samajh mein bhi nahi aayega lekin fir bhi kosis karti hu wo jinda hai bhi aur nahi bhi.

Main- Maltab ???

Saifali- Puri duniya ke liye wo maar chuki hai par mere liye wo jinda hai wo mujhse baat karti hai mujhe dikhayi deti ha....

Main- Saifali tum kabhi kahi giri thi kya aur tumhare sar mein chot lagi ho aisa kuch hua tha kya.

Saifali- Nahi to pa...tum mujhe pagal kah rahe ho thik hai jao main bhi mada...Par Mother Elika ye mujhe pagal bol raha hai.

Main- Dekho saifa.....

B.S- Chutiye wo sach bol rahi hai usko Mother Elika dikhti hai ab agar tu chup nahi raha naa to main tere upar hawi ho kar deewar par tera sar maar maar kar maar jaunga samjha ab chup chap sun usko.

Saifali- B.S tum bhi ho yaha.

Main- Tum B.S ko bhi sun sakti ho tum ho kaun.

Saifali- Tum mujhe nahi jaante B.S tumne isko nahi bataya mere baare mein.

B.S- Mauka hi nahi milla mujhe aur sach kaho to main bhi ek baar bahak gaya tha.

Saifali- B.S tumse ye ummid nahi thi Mujhe. Saurya main hu Mother Elika ki jaadui chadi.

Main- Kya jaadui chadi par wo to unke school mein hai naa jo gayab ho gayi hai.

Saifali- Haa main wahi thi par jab Manjulika ki maut hui thi naa jisko Maarcuss ne marwaya tha ussi waqt main uss School se bahar aa gayi taki aage se uski raksha ka jimma mein le aur maine waisa kiya bhi uske agle janam main maine jitna mujhse ho sakka usko bachaya par tum logo ki jaldbazi ke kaaran sab bigad gaya.

Main- Tum Mother Elika ki jaaduyi chadi ho thik hai par tum aur Saifali dono ek tarah hi kyun dikhte hai.

Saifali- Main usko bacchane aayi thi naa to socha tha ki agar uski jaisi dhikhungi to dusmano ko chakma de sakti hu par tum saare itne bade bewkoof nikloge maine soocha bhi nahi tha.

Main- To ab aage ka kya socha hai tumne.

Saifali- Aage ka nahi abhi meri baatein khatam nahi hui hai ab ye batao kisne wo jaadu kiya jisse Shilpa aur Saifali ki kuch taakatein unko mill gayi hai kon tha wo murkh.

Maine usko sab bataya ki kaise Margret meri help karna chah rahi thi aur ye sab ho gaya.

Saifali- Hmm thik hai ab ye galti jab tum saare kar hi chuke ho to jaldi se unn sabhi ko unki puri yaadast wapas lao.

Main- Thik hai par wo Saifali aur Shilpa hai kaha.

Saifali- Dekho uss Saifali ka naam badal gaya hai uska naam Shuhani hai aur wo mere hi university mein padti hai aur wo tumhari Shilpa ek number ki nakchadi ho gayi hai wo bhi mere hi university mein padti hai dono ko jaldi se sab yaad dilao aur mujhe mukt karo.

Main- Mukt karo par tumpe to mera addhik...

Saifali- Aaee jyadaa uchlo mat samjhe Mother Elika se baat ho gayi hai meri. Main tabhi tak tumhare saath hu jab tak tum unn sabhi ki yaadast wapas naa le aao uske baad ka mere mood par depend karta hai agar mera maan hua tabhi main rahungi tumhare saaath haa ek baat aur hum dono ke bich kuch nahi hone wala samjhe.

Main- Kuch nahi hone wala ?? Matlab.

B.S- Abbe ye wo baat bol rahi hai s...

Saifali- B.S tumhe sharam nahi aati mere saamne ye sab bolte hue.

B.S- Sorry Saifali ji sorry aage se nahi bolunga.

Saifali- Chalo ab Deep ko bulao.

Main- Deep ko par wo to soo raha hai na

Saifali- Aaee tum kya pagal wagal ho akal naam ki chiz hai hi nahi naa tumme. Wo soo raha hai to usko jaga nahi sakte kya.

Main(Chillakar)- Deeeeeeep.

Saifali- Chilla kyun rahe ho ab dhere se nahi utha sakte usko.

Main- Arre wo Alex ne bola tha jor se chillane par aata hau ye.

B.S hasne laga aur Saifali gusse mein bolne lagi.

Saifali- Saare budhhu mere hi palle pade hai.

Itne mein mere haath mein Mother Elika ki talwar aa gayi thi.

Main - Ye lo aur mujhe ab budhhu bolna band karo accha nahi lagta hero hu main story ka.

B.S-(Haste hue) Ghanta hero hai tu

Issi baat par Saifali bhi hasne lagi.

Saifali ne talwar li aur fir usko ek baar dhyaan se dekha.

Saifali - Isko use bhi kiya karo ab dekho bechara kaise sookha hua hai.

Main- Par iske wo saare pathar unke binna kya ye kaam karenga.

Saifali- Haa karega wo saare pather naa bas iske shakti ko kayi gunna jyada badha dete hai baaki abhi jo iski takat hai naa mujhe nahi lagta tumse sambhal bhi paayega ye.

Main- Tum ab mera majak udda rahi ho.

B.S- Wo tab se wahi kar rahi hai

Saifali- B.S kaash tum iss budhhu se alag hote tumhara bhi koi wajood hota to hamare beech jaroor kuch ho sakta tha

B.S- Sacchi

Main- Arre tum dono kya kar rahe ho yaar.

Saifali- Kuch nahi ab se dhyaaanrakhna iss talwar kaa hi use karna samjhe.

B.S- Saifali iske paas Black sword aur Kappa ki talwar bhi hai.

Saifali- Waah chalo kuch kaam ki chijein bhi laaye ho tum chalo wo bhi nikalo.

Maine wo dono talwar bhi de diye usko. Saifali ne dono talwaron ko Mother Elika ke talwar ko upar rakha aur fir apni aakh bandkar usko chua. Jiske baad 3no talwar hi chamakne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte hawa mein udne lage aur fir tinno hi ek ho gaye.

Main- Ye kya hua wo 3no 1 kaise ho gaye.

Saifali- Jaadu mere dost jaadu se chalo ab isko apne haath mein lo aur dekho iska kammal.

Maine jaise hi talwar ko haath mein liya uss talwar mein bilji bahne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte ek tej bilji nikli talwar se aur shidde uss kamre se nikalte hue aasman ki oor chali gayi.

Saifali- Dekha kitna shaktishali hai ye abb bass wo saare manni isme lag jaayein uske baad to iski shakti ki koi seema hi nahi hogi koi bhi hathiyar nahi tikkega iss talwar ke aage.

Main- Waah ye to kammal ka hai Saifali tumne to kammal hi kar diya.

Saifali- Chalo ab ho gaya ye sab ab tum lag jao kaam par sabhi ki yaadast wapas le aao.

Main- Thik hai waise ek baat puchu kya tumse ?

Saifali- Dekho main jaanti hu tum kis baare mein baat karna chahte ho aur iska jawab ye hai ki mere liye bas Mother Elika hi sabse priya hai unke alawa koi bhi nahi

Main- Par massi aur Mausa ji ka bhi to kuch soocho.

Saifali- Soocha hai unke baare mein hi nahi balki sabhi ke baare mein soocha hai par uske liye abhi waqt nahi aaya hai. Ek baat aur agar unhe kabhi kuch hota hai to tum yaa koi aur jisko jaadu aata ho wo unki koi sahayata naa kare wo sab unki niyati hai aur wo sab unke liye accha bhi hoga.

Main- Thik hai main iss baat ka dhyaan rakhunga.

Saifali- Chalo ab tum jao yaha se aur ek baat aur abhi tumhare alawa kisi ko mere baare mein pata naa chale.

Main- Kyun ??

Saifali ne itna sunte hi mujhe gusse se ghurne lagi.

Main- Arre thik hai nahi bataiunga accha ab main jaata hu.

Maine fir se portal kholne ki kosis ki par fir se nahi khul saki.

Main- Yaar ye meri powers kaam kyun nahi aa rahi yaaha.

Saifali- Ye ghar mere magic se banna hua hai yaha mere alawa kisi ka bhi koi power kaam nahi karta.

Saifali ne ek portal khola mere liye aur main usse hote hue pahuch gaya ghar par jaha kuchh aur hi chal raha tha.

Main pahucha to Margret ne apna saaman pack kar rakha tha uska chahra aashuon se bhara hua tha. Wo Rita ko galle lagaye hue thi.

Rita - Arre Margret tum maat jao naa hum usko mil kar manna lenge.

Margret- Nahi Rita tumne bhi dekha tha naa kaise wo mujhse naraz ho gaya tha aur mujhse baat bhi nahi karna chahta ab. Main bhi ab....

Main- Ooye kya chal raha hai ye Margret ye samman pack kar kaha jaa rahi ho.

Margret- Saurya mujhe maaf kar do aur ajj ke baad mujhse tumhe koi pareshani nahi hogi.

Main- Pareshani,Maafi ek min tum kya baatein kar rahi ho ye

Rita- Tum isse naraz ho gaye the naa bas issiliye ye jaa rahi hai Headmaster ke pass.

Main- Main naraz aur isse ye kab hua main kab naraz ho gaya isse ye to itni acchi dost hai meri.

Margret- Tum mujhse naraz nahi ho to uss waqt kabhi kuch naa bolne ka kyun kaha tha.

Itne mein waha Mohini aur Varsha aa gayi.

Mohini- Haa to ready ho naa sabhi ghumne ke liye...Margret tum kya kahi jaa rahi thi.

Main- Haa ye jaa rahi hai apne Daadu ke pass chalo main isko chod kar aata hu.

Mohini- Lar hamari training uska kya hoga.

Margret- ek min ruko Saurya tum sach mein mere se naraz nahi ho.

Main- Nahi pagal

Margret ne khusi se uchalte hue mujhe gale laga liya par maine usko khud se alag kiya aur ek portal khola.

Main- Chalo jao ab apne daadu ke pass.

Margret- Nahi main nahi jaa rahi kahi mujhe yahi rahna hai tumsabhi ke saath.

Main- Nahi ab to tumhe jaana hi ho...

Mohini- Kyun pareshan kar rahe ho usko ab chodo bhi aur hame late ho raha hai jaane ke liye.

Main- Thik hai Margret chalo ab jaldi se ready ho jao hum shoping ke liye jaa rahe hai. (Varsha se) Ye Alex nahi aaya kya.

Varsha- Nahi wo kisi kaam se gaye hai.

Main- Haa wo gadha bas kaam mein hi laga rahe yaha tum dono ki shadi karani hai uss gudiya ko nast karna hai par usko to inn sab ki paddi hi nahi hai.

Itne mein Alex bhi waha aa gaya.

Main- Alex chal aaj teri shaddi ki shoping karni hai.

Alex- Abhi ??

Main- Haa abhi chal ab jaldi se .

Hum sabhi nikal gaye waha se fir ghumne ke liye Mall ki oor P&P mall ki oor.

Chaliye insab ko yahi chod hum chalte hai Pritvi ke bahar uss kawach ke pass jaha Jordon thodi jakhmi haalat mein padda hua tha.

Hua ye tha ki Jordon Pritvi ke kawach ke charo oor ghum raha tha uski jaanch kar raha tha aur ussi waqt ek bijli ka tez jhatka laga usse aur wo ussi se jakhmi ho kar chaand ke satah par girra pada tha.

Ye wahi bijli thi jo Saurya ke talwar se nikli thi. Jordon ko jab hosh aata hai to wo turant yaha waha dekhne lagta hai par usko koi bhi nahi dikhta. Jordon fir se kawach ki oor jaata hai wo try bhi karta hai bahut kuch par kuch bhi kaam nahi aata ulata uski takat khatam hone lagti hai aur wo ussi jakhmi halat mein hi chala jaata hai Maarcuss ke pass. Jab Maarcuss uske wo jakhm dekhta hai to usko pata chal jaata hai ke ye jakham Mother Elika ke talwar se hi hua hai.

Maarcuss- Jordon jaao aur apni marham patti karwao.

Jordon chala jaata hai aur wahi Maarcuss baith jaata hai dhyaan mein pata nahi kyun par aaj uske chahre par ek ajeeb si khushi thi ek rahasyamayi muskaan jiska patta sayad sirf usse hi ho.

Wahi dusri taraf ek baat aur bhi hui thi. Jab chand ki satah par Jordon gira tha tab Headmaster ko uska pata chal gaya tha par ye patta nahi challa unko ki Jordon jakhmi hua to hua kaise. Headmaster master ne iska patta lagana chaha par wo naakam rahe aur ye naakamiyabi unko pareshan kar rahi thi.

Wo wapas apni jagah par jaa kar khud se hi baatein karte rahe bahut dair tak par unko kuch bhi samajh naa aaya unhone aise waar ke baare mein sunna to tha par waisa honna yaha par naamumkin tha unke annusar.

Annt mein pareshan ho kar unhone tay kiya ki iss baare main Alex se baat karenge





Aaj ke liye itna hi ek baat aur Saifali jo ki Hero ki maa thi pichle janam mein ab uska naam Shuhani hai
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Update - 66

Ab tak

Main Saifali se milla usne mujhe Shilpa aur Shuhani ke baare mein bataya aur saath hi meri tinno talwaron ko ek kar diya. Issi bich Jordon jo Earth ke Kawach ko dekh raha tha usko ek tej bilji ka jhatka laga jo maine hi anjaane mein maara tha. Wo Maarcuss ke paas chala jaata hai aur usko sab kuch batata hai jiske baad Maarcuss ke chahre par ek ajeeb si rahasyamayi muskan aa jaati hai.

Aage

Kahne ko to hum shoping karne gaye the par mein waha hokar bhi waha nahi tha bas dimmag mein ye chal raha tha ki kaise sabko ek jagah karu aur unki yaadast wapas laaun.

Ab mujhe jo bhi karna tha jaldi karna tha kyun ki unki kuch powers aur saath hi kuch yaadein bhi unke paas aa gayi thi. Ye ek pareshan karne wali baat thi jaisa maine Paridhi ke saath dekhatha agar waisa hi kuch baakiyon ke saath ho to ye naa to unke liye sahi hoga aur na unke aas pass walo ke liye.

Maine inhi khayalon mein gum tha ke Mohini ne mujhe hillate hue pucha.

Mohini- Tumhe sunnayi nahi de raha kya kab se puch rahi hu ye kaisi lagegi.

Wo apne haath mein ek green colour ki dress liye khadi thi.

Main- Arre acchi hai tum par khub jachegi.

Mohini ne mujhe ghurte hue dekha.

Mohini(gusse mein)- Tum meri baat nahi sun rahe the naa main ye Varsha ke liye puch rahi hu.

Main- Mohini main kuch soch raha tha iss liye aisa hua par aage se aisa nahi hoga.

Mohini - Soch rahe the kya koi pareshani ki baat hai mujhe bhi batao sayad main help kar saku.

Main- Haa baat pareshani ki hai aur tumhe meri madad bhi karni hi hogi.

Mohini- Haa to batao naa mujhe kya karna hoga.

Main- Yaha nahi jaan hum ghar par baat karenge abhi shoping kar lo.

Mohini- Nahi naa mujhe abhi jaanna hai.

Main- Arre abhi nahi jaan baad mein batata hu na.

Mohini ne mujhe ek baar dekha upar se niche aur chali gayi wapas shoping ke liye.

Main bhi iss baar Alex aur Henry ke sath shoping mein lag gaya.

Shoping karte karte hi pura waqt gujar gaya fir hum ghar gaye. Waha pahunche to Mohini mujhe khinchte hue room mein le gayi.

Main- Arre yaar aaram se.

Mohini- Chalo batao ab kyun pareshan ho rahe ho tum.

Main- Mujhe Shilpa aur Shuhani ka pata chal gaya.

Mohini- Shuhani ?? Ye kaun hai?

Main- Arre wo jo Saifali thi naa uska naam iss janam mein Shuhani hai.

Mohini- Ooh par ye to acchi baat hai naa hame sabhi ke baare mein pata chal gaya ab bas unki yaadast wapas laani hai.

Main- Jaan sabhi alag alag jagah hai aur waqt bhi jyada nahi laga sakta naa kya pata wo sab kisi ko nuksan pahucha de yaa khud ko kahi kuch kar le bas yahi baat pareshan kar rahi hai mujhe.

Mohini- Haa baat to pareshan karne wali hi hai. To iske baare mein shocha hai kya kuch tumne.

Main- Nahi naa jaan meri to ye bhi samajh nahi aa raha ki kon kon si shaktiyan unn logo ki unko milli hogi .

Mohini- Hmm Paridhi ka to pata hai naa wo elements ko kaabu kar rahi hai bas.

Main- Elements ?? Usne to bas aag ko kaabu kiya hai naa.

Mohini- Mujhe nahi lagta wo bas aag ko hi control kar sakti pakka uske pass baaki elements wale powers bhi aa chuke honge.

Main- Tum ye kaise kah sakti ho?

Mohini- Aap dekh lena kal jab wo aayegi aur waise bhi wo pari hai pari unko naa bachpan....ek min sayad main jaanti hu unki kaun kaun si powers aayi hai unke pass.

Main- Kya ?? Par kaise ??

Mohini- Paridhi pari hai pariyon mein janam se hi 5 elements control karne ki power hoti hai agar issi tarah dekhe to Shilpa didi Jinn hai to unke pass dusron ki maan ki baat sunne ki aur unko apne vash mein karne ki power honi chahiye waise hi Priya Didi jo....

Main- Oo meri James Bond kuch soch kar bola karo yaar abhi tak Paridhi ke pass sirf aag ko control karne ki power hai.

Mohini- (Chidte hue) Dekho maine jo bola hai naa wahi hoga tum dekh lena haa.

Main- Thik hai yaar gussa kyun hoti ho chalo ab late ho raha hai tum jao.

Mohini- Kyun mera yaaha rukna tumhe accha nahi lagta.

Main- Arre nahi aisa kab kaha maine wo to main iss liye bol raha tha ki.....

Mohini- Sab pata hai mujhe tum chahte hi nahi ke main ruku yaha. Thik hai main ja rahi hu.

Main- Arre jaan tum bhi naa binna baat ke gussa ho jaati ho.

Mohini- Waah ab main gussail bhi ho gayi thik hai...

Maine uska haath pakda aur apni oor khincha.

Main- Maine aisa to nahi kaha naa jaan ab agar tum chahogi bhi naa tab bhi jaane nahi dunga tumhe main.

Mohini- Chodo mujhe jaane do chodo.

Main- Sach mein chod du.

Mohini ne naa mein gardan hilla di.

Chaliye inko yaha rahne dete hum chalte hai Girl's hotel mein. Yaha par ek ladki baithi hui hai apne room mein apne kaano ko takkiyon se dakke hue.

Uss ladki ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha ke uske saath ho kya raha hai. Usko bahut saari aawajeen sunnayi de rahi hai alag alag aawajein. Jab usse raha nahi gaya to usne apna phone nikaala aur kisi ko phone kiya.

Call pick hua.

Phone se- Haa Shilpa beta bolo iss waqt kaise call kiya.

Shilpa- Doctor uncle mujhe aawajein sunnayi de rahi hai alag alag logo ki pata nahi kya ho raha hai mujhe.

Doctor- Beta aapne medicines li thi ke nahi.

Shilpa- Li thi uncle li thi par koi asar nahi ho raha kya ye mere dipression ki waj...

Doctor- Saayad ho sakta hai ek kaam karo wo jo nayi dawayi di thi naa maine uska ek tablet kha lo sab thik ho jaayega tum bilkul thik ho jaogi.

Shilpa- Ji uncle

Call cut


Shilpa ne apna bag khola jisme uski dawayi rakhi hui thi usse apni dawayi nikali aur ek goli khaa gayi.
Yahi koi aadha ghanta hua tha ke usko aur ajeeb lagne laga usko saans lene mein dikkat hone lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte usko chakar sa aane laga. Wo to accha hua wo apne room ke gate ke pass hi thi aur usne apna darwaja khol diya aur fir wo gir gayi uske muh se jhaag nikalne laga. Ye accha isliye hua kyun ki usko turant hi uske bagal wale room ki ladki ne dekh liya uss halat mein aur jaldi se hospital mein le gayi.

Ye baat turant hi pure collage hostle ko pata chal gayi aur waise hi Saifali ko bhi. Saifali jaldi se apne ghar se nikli aur chal padi uss hospital jaha Shilpa ko bharti kiya gaya tha.

Wahi dusri taraf iss baat ka pata Shilpa ki Maa( iss janam ki) ko bhi pata chala par unki oor se koi aisa reaction nahi aaya jisse pata chale ki wo chintit hai.

Hospital mein pahuch kar Saifali ne pahle pata kiya ki Shilpa ko kaha rakha gaya hai. Staff se patta chala ki jahar khane se ye sab hua hai. Saifali ko kuch samajh mein nahi aaya ki Shilpa jahar kyun khaayegi aur abhi wo ye sab samajhna bhi nahi chahti thi wo turant O.T ke baahar pahuchi aur fir kuch mantra padhe jiske baad O.T se ek doctor baahar aaya aur Saifali ko ander jaane ko bola uss baat ko dekh waha khade baki saare log hairan rah gaye par Saifali sabko ignore karti hui ander chali gayi aur jaate hi Shilpa ke pass pahuch aur uske sar par haath rakh kar kuch budbudane lagi. 2 sec bhi nahi laga hoga Shilpa uth kar baith gayi bed par saare doctors aur nurse to pahle se hi Saifali ke control mein the waha unko koi fark naa pada.

Shilpa apne aas pass dekhne lagi to usko bas Saifali hi dikhi jo jaani pahchani thi.

Shilpa- Ma'm main yaha kaise aur ye...

Saifali- Baad mein batati hu abhi ruko tum. (Doctors se) Bahar jao aur bolo food poisoning tha bas.

Doctors bhi bahar chale gaye aur wahi bola jo Saifali ne bolne ko kaha tha. Shilpa bas dekhe jaa rqhi thi ye sab.

Saifali- Chalo ab batao kyq hua tha tumko aur ye jahar ye sab kya hai.

Shilpa(Shocked)- Jahar ??

Saifali- Haa jahar wahi jahar jo tumne khaya tha ab batao kyun.

Shilpa- Ma'm maine koi jahar nahi khaya maine to bas daway.... Kya uss dawayi mein jahar tha par wo to doctor uncle ne diya tha mujhe.

Saifali- Chalo ab shuru se batao ye dawayi ka kya chakar hai.

Shilpa- Ma'm main apne Papa ke death ke baad se dipressed thi. Mera ilaz bhi chal raha hai 3 saal se...

Saifali- jab tumhara treatment chal raha to tum ye hostle mein kyun rahti ho apni Mom ke saath raho apne ghar mein issi sahar mein hai naa wo.

Shilpa- Wo meri Mom nahi hai wo mere Papa ki dusri wife hai jisko main bilkul pasand nahi karti aur ussi ke wajah se to main yaha aa gayi wo characterless hai uska chakar chal raha hai kayi logo ke saath.

Saifali- Aisa nahi bolte accha wo chodo aur batao ye dawayi wala kya kissa hai.

Shilpa- Kal se mujhe logo ki awajein sunnayi de rahi hai wo bhi binna unke bolle. Mujhe laga ye mere dipression ki wajah se hai kal to maine kisi tarah khud ko sambhal liya tha par aaj nahi sambhal paayi maine apne doctor uncle ko phone kiya aur unse iss baare mein baat ki. Unhone kuch din pahle hi nayi dawayi bheji thi mujhe aur phone par wahi dawayi lene ko bola jisko lene ke baad mujhe koi hosh nahi raha aur jab hosh aaya hai to aap mere saamne ho.

Saifali-Hmm to ye baat hai. Jarra apne unn Doctor uncle ka naam patta batana mujhe

Shilpa ne Saifali ko sab kuch bataya wahi Saifali ne usko ye bola ki wo abhi hospital mein hi rukke ek din baaki wo sambhal legi. Shilpa ke maan mein hazaron sawal the par koi jawab nahi milla usko. Wahi Saifali ne usko kuch pinne ke liye de diya jisse usko logo ki aawajein aani band ho gayi.

Saifali waha se nikli aur pahle to Shilpa ke upar kuch aur jaadu kar diya fir ghar chali gayi.
 

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Main Saifali se milla usne mujhe Shilpa aur Shuhani ke baare mein bataya aur saath hi meri tinno talwaron ko ek kar diya. Issi bich Jordon jo Earth ke Kawach ko dekh raha tha usko ek tej bilji ka jhatka laga jo maine hi anjaane mein maara tha. Wo Maarcuss ke paas chala jaata hai aur usko sab kuch batata hai jiske baad Maarcuss ke chahre par ek ajeeb si rahasyamayi muskan aa jaati hai.

Aage

Kahne ko to hum shoping karne gaye the par mein waha hokar bhi waha nahi tha bas dimmag mein ye chal raha tha ki kaise sabko ek jagah karu aur unki yaadast wapas laaun.

Ab mujhe jo bhi karna tha jaldi karna tha kyun ki unki kuch powers aur saath hi kuch yaadein bhi unke paas aa gayi thi. Ye ek pareshan karne wali baat thi jaisa maine Paridhi ke saath dekhatha agar waisa hi kuch baakiyon ke saath ho to ye naa to unke liye sahi hoga aur na unke aas pass walo ke liye.

Maine inhi khayalon mein gum tha ke Mohini ne mujhe hillate hue pucha.

Mohini- Tumhe sunnayi nahi de raha kya kab se puch rahi hu ye kaisi lagegi.

Wo apne haath mein ek green colour ki dress liye khadi thi.

Main- Arre acchi hai tum par khub jachegi.

Mohini ne mujhe ghurte hue dekha.

Mohini(gusse mein)- Tum meri baat nahi sun rahe the naa main ye Varsha ke liye puch rahi hu.

Main- Mohini main kuch soch raha tha iss liye aisa hua par aage se aisa nahi hoga.

Mohini - Soch rahe the kya koi pareshani ki baat hai mujhe bhi batao sayad main help kar saku.

Main- Haa baat pareshani ki hai aur tumhe meri madad bhi karni hi hogi.

Mohini- Haa to batao naa mujhe kya karna hoga.

Main- Yaha nahi jaan hum ghar par baat karenge abhi shoping kar lo.

Mohini- Nahi naa mujhe abhi jaanna hai.

Main- Arre abhi nahi jaan baad mein batata hu na.

Mohini ne mujhe ek baar dekha upar se niche aur chali gayi wapas shoping ke liye.

Main bhi iss baar Alex aur Henry ke sath shoping mein lag gaya.

Shoping karte karte hi pura waqt gujar gaya fir hum ghar gaye. Waha pahunche to Mohini mujhe khinchte hue room mein le gayi.

Main- Arre yaar aaram se.

Mohini- Chalo batao ab kyun pareshan ho rahe ho tum.

Main- Mujhe Shilpa aur Shuhani ka pata chal gaya.

Mohini- Shuhani ?? Ye kaun hai?

Main- Arre wo jo Saifali thi naa uska naam iss janam mein Shuhani hai.

Mohini- Ooh par ye to acchi baat hai naa hame sabhi ke baare mein pata chal gaya ab bas unki yaadast wapas laani hai.

Main- Jaan sabhi alag alag jagah hai aur waqt bhi jyada nahi laga sakta naa kya pata wo sab kisi ko nuksan pahucha de yaa khud ko kahi kuch kar le bas yahi baat pareshan kar rahi hai mujhe.

Mohini- Haa baat to pareshan karne wali hi hai. To iske baare mein shocha hai kya kuch tumne.

Main- Nahi naa jaan meri to ye bhi samajh nahi aa raha ki kon kon si shaktiyan unn logo ki unko milli hogi .

Mohini- Hmm Paridhi ka to pata hai naa wo elements ko kaabu kar rahi hai bas.

Main- Elements ?? Usne to bas aag ko kaabu kiya hai naa.

Mohini- Mujhe nahi lagta wo bas aag ko hi control kar sakti pakka uske pass baaki elements wale powers bhi aa chuke honge.

Main- Tum ye kaise kah sakti ho?

Mohini- Aap dekh lena kal jab wo aayegi aur waise bhi wo pari hai pari unko naa bachpan....ek min sayad main jaanti hu unki kaun kaun si powers aayi hai unke pass.

Main- Kya ?? Par kaise ??

Mohini- Paridhi pari hai pariyon mein janam se hi 5 elements control karne ki power hoti hai agar issi tarah dekhe to Shilpa didi Jinn hai to unke pass dusron ki maan ki baat sunne ki aur unko apne vash mein karne ki power honi chahiye waise hi Priya Didi jo....

Main- Oo meri James Bond kuch soch kar bola karo yaar abhi tak Paridhi ke pass sirf aag ko control karne ki power hai.

Mohini- (Chidte hue) Dekho maine jo bola hai naa wahi hoga tum dekh lena haa.

Main- Thik hai yaar gussa kyun hoti ho chalo ab late ho raha hai tum jao.

Mohini- Kyun mera yaaha rukna tumhe accha nahi lagta.

Main- Arre nahi aisa kab kaha maine wo to main iss liye bol raha tha ki.....

Mohini- Sab pata hai mujhe tum chahte hi nahi ke main ruku yaha. Thik hai main ja rahi hu.

Main- Arre jaan tum bhi naa binna baat ke gussa ho jaati ho.

Mohini- Waah ab main gussail bhi ho gayi thik hai...

Maine uska haath pakda aur apni oor khincha.

Main- Maine aisa to nahi kaha naa jaan ab agar tum chahogi bhi naa tab bhi jaane nahi dunga tumhe main.

Mohini- Chodo mujhe jaane do chodo.

Main- Sach mein chod du.

Mohini ne naa mein gardan hilla di.

Chaliye inko yaha rahne dete hum chalte hai Girl's hotel mein. Yaha par ek ladki baithi hui hai apne room mein apne kaano ko takkiyon se dakke hue.

Uss ladki ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha ke uske saath ho kya raha hai. Usko bahut saari aawajeen sunnayi de rahi hai alag alag aawajein. Jab usse raha nahi gaya to usne apna phone nikaala aur kisi ko phone kiya.

Call pick hua.

Phone se- Haa Shilpa beta bolo iss waqt kaise call kiya.

Shilpa- Doctor uncle mujhe aawajein sunnayi de rahi hai alag alag logo ki pata nahi kya ho raha hai mujhe.

Doctor- Beta aapne medicines li thi ke nahi.

Shilpa- Li thi uncle li thi par koi asar nahi ho raha kya ye mere dipression ki waj...

Doctor- Saayad ho sakta hai ek kaam karo wo jo nayi dawayi di thi naa maine uska ek tablet kha lo sab thik ho jaayega tum bilkul thik ho jaogi.

Shilpa- Ji uncle

Call cut


Shilpa ne apna bag khola jisme uski dawayi rakhi hui thi usse apni dawayi nikali aur ek goli khaa gayi.
Yahi koi aadha ghanta hua tha ke usko aur ajeeb lagne laga usko saans lene mein dikkat hone lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte usko chakar sa aane laga. Wo to accha hua wo apne room ke gate ke pass hi thi aur usne apna darwaja khol diya aur fir wo gir gayi uske muh se jhaag nikalne laga. Ye accha isliye hua kyun ki usko turant hi uske bagal wale room ki ladki ne dekh liya uss halat mein aur jaldi se hospital mein le gayi.

Ye baat turant hi pure collage hostle ko pata chal gayi aur waise hi Saifali ko bhi. Saifali jaldi se apne ghar se nikli aur chal padi uss hospital jaha Shilpa ko bharti kiya gaya tha.

Wahi dusri taraf iss baat ka pata Shilpa ki Maa( iss janam ki) ko bhi pata chala par unki oor se koi aisa reaction nahi aaya jisse pata chale ki wo chintit hai.

Hospital mein pahuch kar Saifali ne pahle pata kiya ki Shilpa ko kaha rakha gaya hai. Staff se patta chala ki jahar khane se ye sab hua hai. Saifali ko kuch samajh mein nahi aaya ki Shilpa jahar kyun khaayegi aur abhi wo ye sab samajhna bhi nahi chahti thi wo turant O.T ke baahar pahuchi aur fir kuch mantra padhe jiske baad O.T se ek doctor baahar aaya aur Saifali ko ander jaane ko bola uss baat ko dekh waha khade baki saare log hairan rah gaye par Saifali sabko ignore karti hui ander chali gayi aur jaate hi Shilpa ke pass pahuch aur uske sar par haath rakh kar kuch budbudane lagi. 2 sec bhi nahi laga hoga Shilpa uth kar baith gayi bed par saare doctors aur nurse to pahle se hi Saifali ke control mein the waha unko koi fark naa pada.

Shilpa apne aas pass dekhne lagi to usko bas Saifali hi dikhi jo jaani pahchani thi.

Shilpa- Ma'm main yaha kaise aur ye...

Saifali- Baad mein batati hu abhi ruko tum. (Doctors se) Bahar jao aur bolo food poisoning tha bas.

Doctors bhi bahar chale gaye aur wahi bola jo Saifali ne bolne ko kaha tha. Shilpa bas dekhe jaa rqhi thi ye sab.

Saifali- Chalo ab batao kyq hua tha tumko aur ye jahar ye sab kya hai.

Shilpa(Shocked)- Jahar ??

Saifali- Haa jahar wahi jahar jo tumne khaya tha ab batao kyun.

Shilpa- Ma'm maine koi jahar nahi khaya maine to bas daway.... Kya uss dawayi mein jahar tha par wo to doctor uncle ne diya tha mujhe.

Saifali- Chalo ab shuru se batao ye dawayi ka kya chakar hai.

Shilpa- Ma'm main apne Papa ke death ke baad se dipressed thi. Mera ilaz bhi chal raha hai 3 saal se...

Saifali- jab tumhara treatment chal raha to tum ye hostle mein kyun rahti ho apni Mom ke saath raho apne ghar mein issi sahar mein hai naa wo.

Shilpa- Wo meri Mom nahi hai wo mere Papa ki dusri wife hai jisko main bilkul pasand nahi karti aur ussi ke wajah se to main yaha aa gayi wo characterless hai uska chakar chal raha hai kayi logo ke saath.

Saifali- Aisa nahi bolte accha wo chodo aur batao ye dawayi wala kya kissa hai.

Shilpa- Kal se mujhe logo ki awajein sunnayi de rahi hai wo bhi binna unke bolle. Mujhe laga ye mere dipression ki wajah se hai kal to maine kisi tarah khud ko sambhal liya tha par aaj nahi sambhal paayi maine apne doctor uncle ko phone kiya aur unse iss baare mein baat ki. Unhone kuch din pahle hi nayi dawayi bheji thi mujhe aur phone par wahi dawayi lene ko bola jisko lene ke baad mujhe koi hosh nahi raha aur jab hosh aaya hai to aap mere saamne ho.

Saifali-Hmm to ye baat hai. Jarra apne unn Doctor uncle ka naam patta batana mujhe

Shilpa ne Saifali ko sab kuch bataya wahi Saifali ne usko ye bola ki wo abhi hospital mein hi rukke ek din baaki wo sambhal legi. Shilpa ke maan mein hazaron sawal the par koi jawab nahi milla usko. Wahi Saifali ne usko kuch pinne ke liye de diya jisse usko logo ki aawajein aani band ho gayi.

Saifali waha se nikli aur pahle to Shilpa ke upar kuch aur jaadu kar diya fir ghar chali gayi.
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