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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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AB TAK
SAB APNE ROOMS M SOONE CHALE GAYE.MAIN BHI SOOTE HI JUNGLE PAHUCH GAYA.MAIN APNA 5TH CHAKRA JAGANE

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Abhi sabko apne apne room m gaye kuch hi der hua tha k koi mere room mai aaya aur dekhne laga k main soya hu k nahi. Mujhe soota hua pa kar wo mere room s bahar chala gaya aur kisi k room ka gate knock kiya. Thode der mai gate kula aur gate kholne wala bola "arre poonam tum iss waqt kya hua."
Maasi - Didi neend nahi aa rahi socha aapse kuch dair baat kar lu.
Mom- aisa kya, bol kaha baate karni hai yaha p to tere jiju so rahe hai aur tere room main Vikram hoga.
Massi- chalo di hum chat p chalte hai waha na to koi disturb hoga aur na hame karega.
Mom- chal thik hai chalte hai.
Fir dono bahne chat p aa jate hai
Mom- Choti ab jadli s bata kya puchna hai.Main acche s janti hu k tu mujhe yaha aese hi nhi laayi hai.
Maasi- Didi baat hi kuch aisi hai.Aapko pata nhi hoga jab aapka car blast wala kaand jo aap logo n kiya tha uske baad kya kya hua.
Mom - kya hua hoga Ghar p saare log khush hue honge Mummy hamesa ki tarah hi chup rahi hogi papa ka dil khusi s dance karne ka hoga aur mere bhai hunh unhe to sayad fark hi nahi pada hoga wo to apni business m hi busy rahe honge aur bhi agar kuch hua hoga to mujhe ab usme koi interest nahi hai.
Maasi - Didi main bhi unki baat nhi kr rhi hu main kisi aur ki baat kr rahi hu.
Mom- kisi aur ki kiski baat kr rhi hai tu janha tk mujhe pata chala tha bus mere aur tere jiju k dost aur unke kuch ristedar bas wahi log kuch din k liye dukhi hue the fir sab apni apni life main busy ho gaye.
Maasi - accha didi ek baat batao aapne kabhi mere baare m soocha tha.
Mom - Dekh choti tujse jhoot nhi bolungi pr uss waqt jo kuch bhi hamare sath hua tha na hum tum sabhi s gussa the kisi k bhi baare m nhi jaanna chahte the pr fir jab Reshma aur Digvijay aaye to unse pata chala tum logo k baare m Mummy-Papa k baare m jo socha tha wahi sach nikla aur bhaiyon k baare m bas ye bataya ki wo dono bus office m hi lage rahte hain aur tere baare m bas itna pata chala ki tu apni life main khush hai pr mummy papa aur baaki sab s saare riste tod diye the tune bus aur kuch nahi
Maasi-haa un logo n sahi bataya tha. Main bhi sayad us waqt tak sambhal chuki thi issi liye khush hogi.Ye chodo aapne sabke baare m sunna pr kya aapne Annuradha didi k baare m nhi pucha unse.
Mom- puchha tha na pr unhone bataya mere jaane k baad unhone bhi ghar s saare naate tod diye aur phir Jiju aur bachhiyo k jiju k gaon(shivpur) m chale gaye. Jiju(Pawan kashyap) n bhi aapne gaon s hi saare business handle krne lage.
Maasi- ye sab jaanne k baad aapka jee nahi kiya humse milne ka.
Mom- ha maan to karta tha pr phir Saurya aur Tiya & Tanya k baare m soch apne maan ko sant kr leti thi. Ek dar sa baith gaya tha maan m k agar tujhse aur didi s milne k chakar m mummy papa ko khabar lag gayi to phir s kahi mujhe mere bacche n khone pade.
Maasi-main samjh skti hu didi.
Mom-tu ye sab q puch rahi h wo bhi iss waqt. sach sach bata tu didi s milli hai na kya tune unse baat ki.

Maasi- Nahi didi maine to bus unko car s jaate hue dekha tha jiju bhi sath m the.Sayad wo log wapas yahi settle ho rahe honge unki betiyan bhi yahi XYZ collage m padti hai na toh sayad issi wajah s.
Mom-kya ab hame kya krna chahiye ?
Maasi - Didi agar wo wapas iss sahar m aayen hai to kabhi n kabhi to hamari mulakat ho hi jayegi.Mujhe lagta hai hame khud hi unse milkar unko saari sachayi bata deni chahiye.
Mom-choti mujhe iske baare m sochne k liye waqt chahiye aur sath hi tere jiju ki salah bhi agar wo kahenge tabhi m y karungi.
Maasi-thik h didi pr jo bhi karna jaldi karna.
Mom - thik hai choti. chal ab bahut raat ho gayi h soone chalte hai baaki baatein kal kr lenge.
Aur fir dono soone chali jaati hai.
Sabhi log ghar m aaram s soo rahe the pr unhe ye kanha pata tha k waha ek tufan aane wala hai jo sabko hilla k rakh dega.
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MOM AUR MAASI CHAT P APNI BAATEN KHATAM KAR APNE APNE ROOM MAIN SOONE CHALE GAYE PR AANE WALE TUFAN KA UNKO PATA NAHI THA

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RAAT KA WAQT THA EK CAR SAHAR KI OOR AA RAHI THI. USME KUL 3 LOG THE EK AADMI , EK AURAT AUR EK LADKI.CAR LADKI DRIVE KAR RAHI THI. CAR M BAITHE SAARE LOG BADE HI KHUSH NAJAR AA RAHE THE.
CHALIYE DEKHTE HAI YE KAHA JA RAHE HAI.
AURAT-BETA ABHI KITNI DER AUR LAGEGI HAME WAHA JANE MAIN.
AADMI- BETA JARA APNI MUMMY KO BOLO SABR RAKHE HAM SUBAH TAK HI PAHUCH PAAYENGE.
AURAT- BETA TUM JARA APNE PAPA S BOLO MUJHSE BAAT KARNE KI JARURAT NAHI.
LADKI - KYA MUMMY PAPA YE KYA LAGA K RAKHA HAI EK TO RAAT H 3 BAJ RAHE HAI AUR AAP LOG BAS LADE JAA RAHE HO.
AURAT-BETA MAIN KAHA LAD RAHI HU TERE PAPA S MAIN TO INSE BAAT BHI NAHI KARNA CHAHTI PR EK YE HAI JO BAHANA BANA K MUJHSE BAAT KR RAHE HAI.
AADMI- ARRE MERI JAAN AB MAAF BHI KAR DO BHUL GAYA THA EXTRA TYRE RAKHNA MUJHE KYA PATA THA K CAR PUNCURE HO JAYEGI.
LADKI- HA MUMMY PAPA N THODI NA JAAN BUJH KAR TYRE PUNCURE KIYA THA TAKI HUM LATE HO JAYE.
AAURAT- DEKHO SURU HO GAYI AAPNE PAPA KI CHAMCHI.
LADKI- AB AAP MUJHSE JYADA PYAR SAIFALI(GUDIYA) S KARTI HO TO HAMNE BHI AAPNI TEAM BANA LI.
AADMI - AUR NAHI TO KYA.
AAURAT - THIK HAI TO TUM DONO WAHA TEAM - TEAM KHELTE RAHNA AUR MAIN AAPNI GUDIYA K SATH USKE YAHA HI RAHUNGI AUR TUM DONO KI WAHA PE ENTRY BHI BAND KRWA DUNGI.
LADKI- ESSE KAISE ENTRY BAND KRWA DOGI AAP MAIN BHI GUDIYA K PASS RAHUNGI,MAIN TO JAATE HI USKE ROOM M SIFT HO JAUNGI.AAP DONO KO JANHA MAN KARE WAHA CHALE JANA.
AADMI- HA YE SAHI HAI JINKE LIYE COLLAGE N GHAR DIYA HAI WAHI LOG US GHAR M NAHI RAHENGE WAAH TO MAIN KYA WAHA BAITH MACHHAR MARUNGA.
AURAT- AAPNE UNHE HAMRE AANE KI KHABAR DI THI NA.
AADMI- MAINE USSE AAJ S 2 DIN BAAD AANE KA BATAYA THA TAKI UNKO SURPRISE DE SAKE.
LADKI- WOW PAPA AB AAYEGA MAJA HUM NA SUBAH SUBAH WAHA JAKE UNKO SURPRISE DENGE. GUDIYA BHI KHUSH HO JAYEGI.
AAURAT- HA YE SAHI HAI.

INKO AAPNE RASTE JAANE DETE HAI CHALIYE TAB TK HUM KAHI AUR CHALTE HAI

EK VAN HAI JO KI BADI HI TEJ RAFTAR M JAA RAHI HAI ISS VAN M KUCH LOG BAITHE HUE HAI AUR 3 BOORIYAN BHI HAI ISME TO. VAN EK BADE GHAR K SAAMNE S GUJARTI HAI AUR 3 NO BOORIYON KO WAHI GIRA K CHALI JAATI HAI.GHAR KA GUARD YE DEKH CHILLATE HUE USS VAN K PICHHE BHAGTA HAI PR WO VAN TO KABKI AANDERE M GAYAB C HO GAYI THI.
GUARD WAPAS AATA HAI UN BOORIYON K PAAS AUR DARTE HUE UNKO KHOLNE K LIYE JATA HAI BOORIYA KHOLTE HI DAR K MAARE USKA KHOON SUKH JAATA HAI. WO TURANT PHONE NIKALTA HAI AUR GHAR K ANDER CALL LAGATA HAI SURU MAIN TO KISI N PHONE NAHI UTTAYA PR DOBARA TRY KARNE PR KISSI N CALL PICK KIYA.
GUARD-(KAPTE HUE) SAAB BAHAR CHOTE SAAB KI LASH PADI HAI BORI M
JISNE CALL UTHAYA THA USKO TO YAKIN HI NAHI HO RAHA THA JIS BHAI KI JIS BHAI KI W DIN PAHLE BLAST M MOUT HO GAYI USKI LAASH KAHA S AA GAYI.
UDHAR S - YE KYA BAAK RAHE HO MADAN .
GUARD(MADAN) - SAAB MAIN SACH KAH RAHA HU IDHAR 3 LAASH PADE HAI GATE P EK VAN S KISI N YAHA CHODA AUR BHAG GAYE. EK LAASH CHOTE SAAB KI HAI EK UNKE DOST SANJAY SAAB KI AUR EK PATA NAHI KISKI HAI.
UDDHAR S- MADAN TUM UNKO AB TOUCH BHI NAHI KAROGE MAIN AA RAHA HU.
CALL CUT

ABHI CALL CUT HI HUA THA K USKA PHONE PHIR BAJA.
PHONE- MIL GAYI AAPNE BHAI KI BODY. USKE SATH NA 2 AUR KO BHI BHEJA HAI TERE LIYE MLA SURENDER SINGH.
SURENDER - KON BOL RAHA HAI MADAR***D.
PHONE- ARRE TERI JUBAN TO TERE KARNAMO KI TARAH HI KAALI HAI.CHAL BATA TA HU K MAIN KAUN HU, MAIN HU TERE BHAI KO BERAHMI S MARENE WALA TU JB USKI BODY DEKHEGA NA TO TUJHE PATA CHALEGA K MAIN KYA CHIZ HU.
SURENDER- BSDK ABHI TERE KO PATA NHI KI KISSE PANGA LIYA HAI TUNNE AB APNI MOUT K DIN GINNA SURU KR LE. MERE BHAI KO MAAR K TUNE SAHI NHI KIYA.
PHONE-ABE OO CHUTIYE TU TO MUJHE SAHI GALAT MAT HI SIKHA. KYA TERI FAMILY KO PATA HAI K TU DON HAI AGAR TU CHAHTA HAI K PATA N CHALE UNHE AUR TERA YE DHONG CHALTA RAHE TO MERI BAAT SUNO IN LAASHO K BAARE M SIRF TERE KO AUR ANKIT KAPOOR(SANJAY KAPOOR KA BHAI) KO HI PATA CHALNA CHAHIYE WARNA SAARI DUNIYA K SAMNE TUM DONO KI POLL KHOL DUNGA LAASHO K SAATH EK PEN DRIVE BHI BHEJI HAI JISSE ANKIT K SAATH HI DEKHNA TAKI DONO EK SAATH HI SAMAJH JAO.
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SURENDER(MAAN M)- YE KON SA DUSMAN AAGAYA AB HAMARE MUJHE SABHI KO BULANA CHAHIYE WO APNE ROOM M GAYA JANHA USKI BIWI SO RAHI THI.SURENDER N ALMARI K SAFE S EK PHONE NIKALA AUR USME EK "URGENT MEETING NOW" TYPE KR SABKO BHEJ DIYA. MESSAGE BHEJNE K BAAD WO BAHAR NIKLA AUR UN LAASHO K PASS PAHUCHA. APNE BHAI KI LAASH KI ESSI HALAT DEKH WO GUSSA AUR EMOTIONAL HO GAYA PR FIR KHUD KO CONTROL KR LAASON KO DEKHNE LAGA. USKO EK PENDRIVE MILLA JISPE "K" LIKHA THA. USNE PEN DRIVE NIKALI AUR MADAN S BOL KR 3 NO LAASHON KO APNI CAR M RAKHNE KO BOLA AUR KHUD TAIYAAR HONE CHALA GAYA.

Karib 15 min baad Surender apni car leke nikal gaya aur kuch dur jaane k baad ek hotel m pahuch gaya. Hotel k bahar lagbhag abhi 20 log hatho m guns leke khade the .
Surender utra aur unme s kuch ko laasho ko meeting room m laane ko bol chala gaya.
Meeting room m uske alawa 3 aur log the.ye sabhi Dons the alag alag illako k.Inme Ankit kapoor bhi tha.
(Baaki dono ko main D1 aur D2 kahunga)
D2 jo in sab ka boss tha wo bola.
D2-Bolo surender(surn) tumne raat k 11 baje hame yaha q bulaya wo bhi itna urgentlty.
Surn.-(Ankit ki oor dekh bola) Ankit tumhara bhai kaha hai abhi.
Ankit-wo to kuch din phle kisi deal k liye gaya tha Shivpur fir sayad wapas chala gaya ho Delhi.
Surn.-kya tumne usse baat ki hai uske baad .
Ankit - arre abhi kuch dino s ek tender k picche pada tha isliye usse baat hi nhi kr paya.
D1-Surender tum isse ye sub q puch rahe ho aur ye meeting q bulayi hai.
Abhi D1 ki baat khatam hi hui thi k room ka darwaja kula aur kuch log ander laashon ko leke aaye aur chale gaye.
Ankit apne bhai k laash ko dekh kr usse bahut bada jhatka laga wo apne bhai k bahut hi close tha aur uski essi halat dekh wo baukhla gaya aur Surender ka gala pakad liya. Wahi baki k dono ko samaj nhi aa raha tha k ye hua kya hai.Phir un done n Surender ko Ankit k pakad s chudwaya aur fir
D2- saant ho jao Ankit yaha p sirf Sanjay ki hi nahi balki lucky ki bhi laash hai.Mujhe nahi lagta k issne inko kuch kiya hoga.
D1- Ha boss aap sahi kahte hai pr in dono k sath iss Guddu ki laash yaha kaise.
Surender fir unhe saari baat batata hai sath hi call wali baat bhi.
Ankit ye sun aur gussa ho jatta hai pr kuch krta nhi.Fir sabhi log pendrive m kya hai dekhne ko taiyaar ho jaate hai.
Pendrive k ander kuch documents the aur ek audio file tha.
jab sabhi n documents khole to unka to dimag hi ghum gaya ye documents m sabut the Ankit aur Surender k khilaf k kaise wo gair kaanoni kaam karte hai.
Fir us Audio clip ki baari thi.
Clip- Ha to Surender mujhe lagta hai tunne aur Ankit ne apne bhaiyon ki laashen dekh li hogi aur tum dono k khilaf k saare sabut bhi. Ab dhyan s meri baaton ko sunno tum dono ko kissi bhi tarah s Pankaj Chauhan ko India wapas laana hoga aur haa agar apni pahchan duniya k saamne nhi lana chahte to in 3no k baare m kisi ko kuch pata nhi chalna chahiye jab tak pankaj India n aajae.Uske baad tum dono ki jaise aur jo bhi ichha ho karo in laashon ka pr agar kisi aur ko pahle pata chala to..
Aur haa Main apna naam to batana hi bhul gaya Main hu King.

{ Ye saare kaam karne to maine Sameera dinner k baad room m anne k baad bola tha krne ko taki mujhe Pankaj mil sake jinda ussi ki madad s to main apne pariwar ko ek kar sakta hu }

Audio file sunne k baad ander baithe logo n king ki baat maan ni hi sahi samji.

Next Morning

Aaj bhi wahi sab hua tha mere sath wo dard, ray bla...bla...bla...

Aaj bhi main 4 baje uth gaya jab main utha to mujhe bahut si aawaje sunayi de rahi thi jaise m kisi k kharate ki pani k tap tap ki aur bhi choti choti chizo ki awaze.Ye sab sun main baith gaya k tabhi mujhe mera gym room dikhai dene laga.pr ye kaise ho sakta hai yaha to diwaar thi mere kuch samajh m nahi aaya main dhere dhere gym k taraf badne laga todhe door jane p mere sir p chot lagi jo ki diwar s lagi thi.Main us diwar ko dekh nhi sakta tha pr chu skta tha ye mere ko bada ajeeb laga ab main fir s ghooma bathroom ki or aur yaha bhi same tha no diwar main fir aage bada aur iss baar bhi mujhe chot lagi diwar s chot lagne k baad mujhe kisi k hasne ki aawaje sunayi dene lagi. Ye awaj Didi ki thi.
Shilpa Didi- arre aap to bilkul buddhu ho wo bhi bahut bade ek baar jab chot lag gai to fir q gaye chot khane.
Main - Didi ye kya ho raha hai mujhe ye diwaae dikhai q nhi de rahi hai jabki mai unhe chu skta hu kya hai ye sab?
Didi- Aap bhi na arre aapko apne 5th chakra jagane k baad aapki ye purani power "Super vision or Super listening ability" milli hai.
Main - kya
Didi - haa ab jab bhi aap kisi darwaje ya diwaar ko gaur s dekhoge to unke aar paar dekh sakte ho aur waha ki awaje bhi sun sakte ho.
Main-oooh.Pr abhi aapne kaha tha purani power uska kya matlab hai.
Meri ye baat sun Didi toda paresan ho gayi k unhone galti kr di hai pr khud ko sambhal kr.
Didi- arre maine aisa kab kaha lagta hai aapke kaan baj rahe hai.
Main- Sayad aur ek baat aap sun lo ab na aap mujko ye aap-aap nhi bologi samjhi bada hi ood lagta hai yaar aapko meri kasam.
Meri ye baat sun Didi ka para chad gaya wo apni power s shidha pahuch gayi mere room m aur aate hi ek laafa jad diya.
Chaaataaak .
Aur boli.
Didi- Aainda s ye kasam de k baate mat manwaya karna warna dekh lena pahle tujhe maarungi fir khud ko.
Main-(gaal sahalate hue) arre aap to aise baate kr rahi ho jaise aap meri patni ho.
Didi(apne maan m)-Patni hi to hu m

{Ek baat clear kr deta hu Didi mere maan ki baat sun sakti hai pr main unke maan ki baat nhi jaan sakta}

Didi-tum aaj k baad mujhe bhi aap- aap nhi bologe ab tumhe meri kasam hai aur aage s ye kasam wali baate mat karna.
Main-Thik hai didi jaise aap kaho pr aapko bhi apne boss p haath nhi uthana chahiye(majak m)
Didi- Ab s tu koi boss woss nhi hai mera main badi hu na tere s ab tu jo bhi karega mujhse puch k hi karega.
Main-thik hai pr base p meri kuch izzat hai usko rahne dena fir main aapki saari baate manuga. Chalo ab aur kuch baaki hai yaa main fresh hone jaun abhi ek baat to baski hai pr wo main tujhe car m bataungi.aaj s tu mere saath hi base p jayega.
Main-aur fufa ji unka kya.
Didi-unko main sambhal lungi.chal ab main chalti hu.
ye bol wo mere room s gayab ho gayi aur main fresh ho kr gym room m chala gaya. Fir karib 5:40 m ghar s nikal gaya park ki taraf.
Mere ghar s niklte hi kuch essa hua ghar m ki .....
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CHARACTER INTRO:
LUCKY SINGH - YE APNE SAHAR M DRUGS MAFFIYA KA HEAD HAI ISNE LAGBAG YAHA K SAARE COLLAGES M APNEE NASHE KI DUKAN LAGA RAKHI HAI.

SANJAY KAPOOR - YE BANDA DELHI S OPERATE KARTA HAI. YE WAHA KA SABSE BADA DRUGS AND WEAPONARY KA DEALER HAI.

PANKAJ CHAUHAN- YE BANDA EK SCIENTIST HAI AUR INDIA M RUSSIAN MAAFIYA KA SAARA KAAM DEKHTA HAI.

{YE TINO BAHUT HI ACCHE DOST H AUR INKA BUSINESS BHI AAPAS M RELATED HAI}

GUDDU - YE EK DRUGS AND WEAPONARY PROVIDER HAI . IS BANDE K ANDER KUCH AESE GAON THE JAHA P AFFEM KI KHETI HOTI THI AUR YE UNKO FIR BADE DEALERS KO SUPPLY KARTA.

SURENDER SINGH - YE SAHAR KA MLA H.ISME NETA WALE SAARE GUUN KUT KUT K BHARE HAI(LEADER WALE NAHI)
YE APNE PARIWAR WALO K LIYE KISI FARISTE S KAM NAHI PR ASHAL M YE EK DON HAI. ISKE FAMILY M S YE BAAT SIRF ISKE BHAI LUCKY SINGH KO HI PATA HAI.

ANKIT KAPOOR- YE BANDA IS SAHAR KA MAYOR H. ISME BHI NETA K SAARE GUN HAI YE BHI EK DON HAI PR APNE PARIWAR K LIYE ISNE BHI ACHHAYI KA MUKHAUTA LAGA RAKHA HAI. ISKI SACHAYI BHI KEWAL ISKA BHAI SANJAY KAPOOR KO PATA HAI.

{YE DONO EK HI GROUP M THE AUR INKA EK HI BOSS THA JISKI MYSTRY KUCH UPDATES M KHUL JAYEGI}

DIVYA THAKUR- YE RESHMA RAJPOOT AUR DEEP GUPTA KI BADI BAHAN HAI.YE PALAMPUR K COLLAGE M DEAN THI.WAHI APNE PATI AUR BETI K SATH RAHTI THI. YE HAMARI SAIFALI(GUDIYA) KI CHACHI BHI HAI JO KI USPE JAAN CHIDAKTI HAI.

ROSHAN THAKUR- YE HAI APNI DEAN MADAM K PATI JO UNSE BAHUT PYAR KARTE H. YE THAKUR HAI PADHE LIKHE TO HAI HI PAR APNI FAMILY K KHATIR APNA BANA BANAYA CARRIER CHOD APNE PUSHTAINY JAMINO P KHETI KARWA K APNI JIWANYAPAN KARTE HAI .

PARIDHI THAKUR- YE HAI APNI DEAN MADAM KI BETI SHAADI KI UMAR HO CHUKI HAI PR ABHI AUR PADHNE KA KAHTI HAI. YE BHI PALAMPUR K COLLAGE SABSE YOUNG LECTURER THI.

NOTE- VIKRAM AUR ROSHAN CHACHERE BHAI HAI PR INKE BICH KA PYAR APNE BHAIYON S BHI BADH KR HAI. IN DONO KI FAMILY M BHI BAHUT PREM BHAW HAI. SAYAD YAHI WAJAH HAI KI YE LOG EK SATH HI RAHNA PASAND KRTE HAI.



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MAIN JAB UTHA TO MUJHE MERI AAJ K POWER K BAARE M DIDI N BATAYA AUR UNHE USE KARNA BHI AUR KAH K GAYI K AAJ S MUJHE UNKE SATH HI BASE P JANA HAI.MAINE BHI HAA KR DIYA AUR PHIR WAHI GYM M EXERCISE KI AUR NIKAL PADA PARK KI TARAF...

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MAIN AAJ KUCH PAHLE HI PARK PAHUCH GAYA THA ABHI YAHA P LAGBHAG N K BARABAR LOG THE MAIN BHI AAPNI JOGGING M LAG GAYA.
JOGGING K BAAD JAB MAIN GHAR JANE LAGA TO MUJHE SAPNA AUR PREMA MIL GAYI.
PREMA - HI SAURYA AAJ JALDI HI JA RAHE HO.
MAIN-WO KYA HAI NA MAIN AAJ PAHLE HI AA GAYA THA TO BUS APNI JOGGING BHI JALDI KHATAM KAR LI ISSI LIYE JALDI JA RAHA HU.
PREMA-OO ACHA YESI BAAT HAI.
SAPNA - PREMA TU NA BAATO KO GHUMAYA MAT KR SIDHE POINT P AA.
MAIN - POINT P? KYA BAAT HAI.
PREMA - WO ACTUALLY HUMNE NA NEWS P DEKHA HAI K WO JO LUCKY THA NA WO GUNDA JISKE BAARE M HAMNE TUMHE BATAYA THA.
MAIN-HA TO USKA KYA
PREMA- USKI NA USSI DIN MAUT HO GAYI USKE FARMHOUSE M.
MAIN-KKYYYYAAA! KAB MAUT HUI USKI.(SHOCK KA NATAK KARTE HUE)
PREMA- USSI DIN JAB HAMNE TUMHE BATAYA THA SHAM K WAQT.
SAPNA- AUR HAME SHAQ HAI K ISME TUMHARA HI HAATH HAI BAS TUMSE CONFIRM HONA CHAHTE HAI.
PREMA- HA AGAR AISA HAI TO TUM HAME BATA DO WAISE BHI HUM THODI NA KISI KO BATAYENGE.
MAIN- DEKHO TUM LOG NA KUCH JYADA HI SOCH RAHE HO. YE TO BUS EK ACCIDENT HOGA AUR KUCH NAHI.
PREMA- HAA HO SAKTA HAI. ACHHA SUNO AAJ NA HUM LOG EK PARTY DE RAHE HAI SHAAM KO
.... HOTEL M. TO TUMHE BHI WAHA AANA HAI OK
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SAPNA- TUM NE HAMARI JAAN BACHAYI THI BAS USKE LIYE HI EK THANKSGIVING SAMAJH LO AANA JAROOR.
MAIN-OK MAIN AA JAUNGA.
ITNI BAATEN KAR MAIN PARK S GHAR AA GAYA GHAR M SAB NORMAL THA AAJ BHI MAINE AUR SHILPA DIDI N UN TINO KO SCHOOL DROP KIYA FIR GHAR AAYE.TAB TK FUFA JI BASE K LIYE NIKAL CHUKE THE.
MAIN AUR DIDI BHI NIKAL GAYE APNI CAR S BASE KI OOR. HUM JA HI RAHE THE KI DIDI BOLI.
SHILPA - ARRE HA TERE KAL WALE POWER K BAARE M TO BATANA HI BHUL GAYI.
MAIN- ARRE HAA DIDI MAIN BHI BHUL GAYA THA JAB BHI MERA KOI CHAKRA JAGRIT HOTA HAI TO USKE SAATH HI KOI POWER BHI AATI HAI PR 4TH CHAKRA K WAQT KOI POWER NHI MILLI.
DIDI-POWER TO MILLI HAI TUMHE PR TUMHE USKE BAARE M PATA HI NAHI HAI.
MAIN- ACHHA AB AAP HI BATA DO KYA POWER HAI.
DIDI- TU NA APNE KISI FAVORATE ACTOR/ACTORESS K BAARE M IMAGINE KR.

AB MUJH MASOOM KO TO PATA NHI THA K POWER HAI KYA MAINE BHI APNI AAKHEN BAND KR APNI EK FAVORITE PORNSTAR KO IMAGINE KIYA.MUJHE MERE BODY M KUCH CHANGES NAZAR AAYI. ABHI MAIN APNI BODY KO DEKHTA USSE PAHLE HI CAR TEZZI S RUKI AUR
CHAAAAATAAAAK CHAAATAAAK CHAAAATAAK
PATA NHI KITNE HI TAPAD PADE MUJHE. MUJHE KUCH SAMAJH HI NAHI AA RAHA THA DIDI NE PHIR GUSSE M EK CHUTKI BAJAYI AUR MUJHE CAR S DHAKA DE BAHAR NIKAL DIYA AUR CAR LE KAR CHALI GAYI. MERE KO KUCH SAMAJH NAHI AAYA KI UNHONE MUJHE MAARA Q AUR AB BICH SADAK P CHOD KR Q BHAG GAYI.
ABHI MAIN YAHI SAB SOCH RAHA THA K TABHI EK LADKA MERE PAAS AAYA AUR BOLA
LADKA-AAP AAP YAHA OH MY GOD KYA AAP SACH M YAHA HO YA MERA THARAK MERE SIR CHAD GAYA HAI AUR MAIN PAGAL HO GAYA HU JO AAP MUJHE YAHA DIKH RAHI HO.
MAIN-ARE BHAI KYA HUA TU ESSE Q BAAT KR RAHA HAI JAIS... ARRE MERI AWAJ MERI AWAJ LADKIYON K JAISI KAISE HO GAYI(APNE HATH DEKHTE) MERE HAATH BHI BADAL GAYE (APNE CHAHRE KO TOUCH KARTE HUE) MERI SAKAL MERI SAKAL BHI CHANGE HO GAYI.
MAINE AAPNA PHONE NIKAL USKA FRONT CAMERA ON KIYA AUR GAUR S KHUD KO DEKHA AUR .
MAIN(CHILLATE HUE)- NAAHHIIII YE NAHI HO SAKTA MERE SATH.
AB TAK MUJHE DEKH WAHA P BAHUT SAARE US PORN STAR K FANS WAHA PAHUCH GAYE THE AUR LALCHAYI NAZARON S MUNHE DEKH RAHE THE.EK TO SAALA ES POWER KI WAJAH S M AISA HO GAYA THA JISSE MERI FATTI PADI THI UPER S UN SABHI KO MERI OOR AISA DEKHTE HUE DEKH TO MUJHE AISA LAGNE LAGA KI AAJ MERI IZZAT LUTNE WALI HAI. MAINE DIMAG S KAAM LIYA AUR APNE SUPER SPEED KO USE KAR WAHA S BHAGNE KI KOSIS KI PR YE KYA MAIN JITNA BHI TEJ BHAGNE KI KOSIS KARTA UTNA HI DHIRE CHAL PA RAHA THA. YE JAAN K TO MERI RAHI SAHI HIMAT BHI TUT GAYI

AB MERI SAMAJH M AA RAHA THA K DIDI Q MUJHE GUSSE M MARE JA RAHI THI. MAINE MAAN S DIDI KO CONTACT KARNE KI KOSIS KI PR KAR NA SAKA.WAHI BHEED KI HALAT ESSI HO GAYI THI KI SAALE SAARE THARKI BICH SADAK P MUJHE GHERE HUE THE JIS WAJAH S WAHA JAM LAG GAYA THA AUR ISS JAM KO HATANE AAYE POLICE WALE BHI MERI TARAF AANE LAGE.YE DEKH MAIN MAAN HI MAAN BAS YAHI MAANG RAHA THA BHAGWAN S K AAJ BACHA LE FIR KABHI PORN NHI DEKHUNGA.
ABHI MAIN YE MANNAT HI MAAN RAHA THA K MAIN JUNGLE MAIN BABA K SAMNE GAYAB HOKE PAHUCH GAYA. MAINE KHUD KO YAHA PA KAR ITNA KHUS HO GAYA K DODTE HUE JAA KE BABA K GALE LAD GAYA WO BHI BAHUT JOR S.
BABA- SAURYA TUM YE KYA KR RAHE HO CHODO HAME. NAHI TO HUM TUMHE FIR WAHI SADAK P BHEJ AAYENGE.
MAIN - NAHI BABA JI AAP ESSA JULAM NA KARE MERE SAATH WARNA WO LOG MUJHE KACCHA CHABA JAYENGE.
DIDI- TERE JAISE LADKE K SATH ESSA HI HONA CHAHIYE BABA AAP INSE WAHI CHOD DO DEKH RAHE HO AAP MAINE ISSE KISI K BHI BAARE M SOOCHNE KAHA TO ISKE BHEJE M SIDHA IIS CHUDAIL KA KHAYAL AAYA.ISSI WAJAH S MAINE ISKI SAARI SHAKTIYAN LOCK KR DI AUR WAHI CHOD AAYI.
MAIN- ACCHA TO TUMNE MERE POWERS KO LOCK KR DIYA AGAR UN LOGO N MERE SATH WAHA KUCH KR DIYA HOTA TO.MAIN TO KAHI MUH DIKHANE LAYAK N RAHTA.
BABA-BAS KARO DONO EK DUSRE S LADNA SAIFALI ISKI POWERS KO UNLOCK KR DO.
DIDI- MAIN ABHI UNLOCK KARTI HU PR MERI EK SHART H JO ISSE MANNI PADEGI YE AAJ KA PURA DIN IISI RUP M RAHEGA
MAIN - NAHI DIDI ESSA MAT KARO AAP NA KUCH BHI AUR MAANG LO PR YE NHI MAIN ISS ROOP M KABHI NAHI RAH SAKTA AAP KUCH BHI AUR MAANG LO.
DIDI - THIK HAI MAANG LUNGI PR ABHI NAHI WAQT AANE PR AUR TU MUKAR BHI NAHI SAKTA WARNA TERI SAARI SHAKTIYAN MAIN HAMESA K LIYE LOCK KR DUNGI AUR TAB KOI BHI TERI MADAD NAHI KR PAAYEGA KOI BHI NAHI.
MAIN -THIK HAI DIDI
FIR DIDI N CHUTKI BAJAYI AUR MAIN NORMAL HO GAYA
BABA - SAURYA TUMHE TUMARI HR EK SHAKTI K BAARE M AUR USKA UPYOG KAISE KARNA HAI YE SHILPA BATAYEGI. ITNA BOL WO CHALE GAYE AUR HUM DONO BHI PAHUCH GAYE APNI CAR M.

MERE ROAD P S ACHANAK GAYAB HONE K BAAD EK TEJ WHITE LIGHT WAHA P FLASH HUI AUR SABHI K DIMAG S ABHI K SAARE BAATE NIKAL GAYI.

HUM DONO BHAI BAHAN BHI BASE P PAHUCH GAYE AUR APNE KAAMO MAIN LAG GAYE.
ABHI HAME KAAM P LAGE KUCH HI WAQT HUA THA KARIB SUBAH K 11 BAJ RAHE THE KI MERA AUR DIDI K PHONE EK SAATH HI BAJA. DUSRE TARAF KI BAATE SU HUM DONO K HI CHAHRE P CHINTA K BALDAL CHA GAYE .
KARIB 10 MIN BAAD FUFAJI MERE PAAS AAYE DIDI K SATH AUR BOLO
FUFAJI- KING HUM DONO KO ABHI YAHA S JANA HOGA KUCH PERSONAL PROBLEMS AA GAI HAI JINKO SOLVE KARNA JARORI HAI.
MAIN - OK AGENTD YOU MAY GO.
FUFA JI MERE ITNE JALDI MAANNE KI WAJAH S MUJHE GHURNE LAGE UNKO LAG RAHA THA K MAIN UNKO ITNI JALDI NAHI CHODUNGA.UNDONO K NIKALNE K BAAD MAIN BHI NIKAL GAYA GHAR KI OOR .

FRIENDS AAP LOG GUESS KR K BATAO K KYA HUA HOGA GHAR MAIN AUR HA APNE ADVICES BHI DETE RAAHNA TAKI MAIN APNI WRITING ABILITY M AUR SUDHAR KR SAKU
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superb update :superb:
 

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