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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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Nahi bhai me bs superman ka fan hu or uski tarah udna chahta hu logo ki help krna chahta hu or sbse badi baat puro dunia ghumna chahta khaskar upar se dekhna chahta hu
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UPDATE - 93

Ab tak

Dristi unn pancho ko kuch dikha rahi thi wahi main Earth pe aa gaya tha aur aage ke baare mein soch raha thaaur Kappa se discuss kar raha tha..

Aage

Chaliye pahle hum jinlok chalte hai jaha ab tak wo sabhi sab kuch dekh cukke the aur ab bas sabhi ke aankho mein aashu the. Unko samjh mein nahi aa raha tha kaise wo ek dusre ke khilaf ho gayi thi...

Varsha aur Alex jo waha par the wo unn sabhi ko shant karwate hai. Wo paancho badi muskil se shant hoti hai par shant hote hi unn sab ke chahro pe kuch tha jisko samajhna muskil tha.

Wo paancho hi ek dusre ki oor dekhti hai aur fir bas pancho waha se gayab ho jaati hai...

Ab pata nahi kya chal raha hai inke dimmag mein..

Alex aur Varsha bhi Dristi ko lekar wapas chale jaate hai..

Wahi Main jo Earth pe ta abhi RAW ke diye hue flat pe waha par wo pancho hi tapak padti hai..

Shilpa- Hame aur shakti chahiye..

Main- Pahle jo hai usko control karna sheekho...tum sabse jyada takatwaar ho par apni takat pe control nahi hai tumhara...Paridhi tum tum ab Rani Pari ho apni takat ko jaano aur uspe kaabu karo aur tum Mohini bahut takat aa gayi hai tumhare pass hame kal Vetallok ko jitna hai aur tumhe waha ki rani banana hai. ...

Jab main ye sab bol raha tha wo saare ekdum se shocked the muh kulla tha unka..

Puja- Didi inko kya hua y...

Shilpa- Pata nahi ye aise baatein kaise kar rahe...

Main- main serious hu abhi aur tum sab ko jo bola hai wo karna hoga ok. Ye tum sab ke liye hi hai...

Priya- hmm pata hai hame bas ye dekh rahe ki Dristi ki baatein sach thi..

Main- Kya dikhaya usne tum logo ko...

Puja-Hum sab ka milna aapki shadi Shilpa didi se phir paridhi didi se shadi fir hum dono se shadi sab kuch dikhaya usne ye bhi ki hum apne powers ko control nahi karne lage the aur bhi bahut kuch...

Main- Itna pahle se dikhaya usne tabhi to itna time laga..Accha chalo isko chodo aur meri baat sunno ab tum sab ko jo bhi bola hai karna shuru kardo...

Shilpa- Hmm thik hai.

Main- Chalo ab sabhi niklo apne apne ghar aur haa Mohini taiyaar rahna kal ke liye...

Priya- Hammme bhaga rahe ho..

Main- Arre nahi wo to kal ki taiyaari karni hai naa tum sabko bas issi liye aur waise bhi mujhe kisi ke pass jaana hai..

Sabse thoda der aur baat kiya fir sabhi chale gaye...

Wahi main nikal gaya waha se kisi ke pass jaane ke liye....

Raat ka waqt tha main sheeda uske room mein pahucha aur fir waha par apna kaam kiya aur nikal gaya waha se uske baad kisi aur ghar mein gaya waha bhi wahi kiya aur nikal gaya..

Waha se aa pahucha wapas RAW ke diye hue jagah pe....

Kappa- Chalo unn dono ka bhi kam kar diya ab bas wait karna hai thoda...

Main- Hmm wahi karna hai bas...Chalo ab baaki kal dekhte hai Vetallok ke safar pe..

Aur issi ke saath main soo gaya..

Next morning main utha jaldi aur dhyaan mein baith gaya... Karib subah ke 9 baje tak main taiyaar tha aur thik uske 15 minute baad Wo pancho aa gayi thi mere pass...

Main- To ready ho naa chalne ke liyeMohini tum ready ho naa..

Mohini- Haa main ready hu

Aur usne fir apni aankhe band ki aur ham sab ko usko chune ke liye bola...thode hi der mein hum sab ki aankhen khud band hui aur agle hi pal hum Vetallok mein the...

Main- Arre mujhe kahti main Portal khol deta..

Mohini- Nahi mujhe apni power check karni thi bas...

Main- Thik hai chalo ab ready to ho naa.

Mohini- Hmm ready...

Main- (bakki charon se.) Hame bas rasta banana hai iske liye aur kuch nahi...Vetalraj se ye khud ladegi...

Sabhi - ok

Fir kya tha hum aage badhene lage...aur hame log milne lage..Yaha bhi sabhi tarah ke log the acche burre har tarah ke..Jo hampe hamla karne aata uspe hm humla karte aur dekhte hi dekhte hum pahuch gaye mahel ki orr itne der mein naa jaane kitne hi logo se hamara saamna hua tha par...usnme se kisi mein bhi itna dum nahi tha ki meri Raniyon ko chu bhi sake...

Kuch to tha aaj unn pancho mein jiski wajah se aisa ho raha tha ab pata nahi kya...matlab ab ye Vetal log itne kamzor to nahi ho sakte ki wo......

Hum aage badhte gaye aur fir hamari nazar padi Vetallok ke Raja Vetalraj ki taraf....Wo darra hua tha..

Ajeeb hai naa wo bhala kyun dara hua tha...humse dara hua ho...saayad yaa pata nahi..

Mohini- Kaise hai Vetalraj..

Vetalraj- Tum mujhe maarne aaye ho naa jaldi se khatam karo mujhe aur niklo yaha se...

Ye baat sunke bada ajeeb laga mujhe matlab isko pata kaise chala aur maan lo usko kisi tarah pata chal bhi gaya ho to isne koi upay kyun nahi dhundha hume rokne ke liye...

Kappa- Saurya kuch to gadbad hai yaha...

Main- Mujhe bhi lag raha hai...par kya wo pata nahi hai..

Main(bakki sab se)- Sab ruk jao koi uspe hamla nahi karega...

Sabhi meri oor dekhne lage..

Vetalraj- Agar marna hai to jaldi maaro warna niklo yaha se..

Main- Ye kkuch samajh nahi aa raha mujhe....tumhari baatein badi ajeeb hai...

Vetalraj- Main kah raha hu naa jo bhi karna hai jaldi karo aur niklo yaha se...

Priya- ab teri ye iccha to puri karni hi hogi...Mohini maar isko jaldi bada tadap raha hai naa.

Mohini meri oor dekhti hai par main to khud hi confuse hua pada tha iss Vetalraj ke aise kahne se....Main kya bolta usko...

Vetalraj ne apna haath aage kiya aur uske haath mein uski talwar aa gayi..

Vetalraj- Mohini agar tunne mujhe mara to pura Vetallok tera hoga aur agar nahi mara to ye lok mere saath hi khatam ho jaayega...

Itna bol usne talwar ko apni oor laga liya..

Mohini ne jaise hi ye deka wo ek baar meri oor dekhti ai aur jab usko main abhi tak confuse hi dikhta hu to wo apna haath aage karti hai aur uske haath mein talwar aa jaati hai aur wo seedha jaa kar Vetalraj ke upar war kar deti hai .

Ye bahut hi jaldi hua tha main ekdum se shocked tha...wahi Vetalraj nicche pada hua tha...usne Mohini ko apni oor bulaya aur Mohini chali bhi gayi...

Vetalraj- Aaj se tum iss Vetallok ki Rani ho baccha lo isko warna sab khatam ho jaayega..wo wapas aa chuka hai..

Bas itna bola aur apna mukut Mohini ke sar pe rakh kar wo mar gaya...

Hum sab ye dekh kar aur sun kar hairaan the..

Kappa- Saayad wo aa raha hai usko pata chal gaya hai time period collapse hone kaa ab hame sawdhan rahna hoga...

Mohini-(chilla kar) Shainikon yaha aao aur inka acche se antim sanskar karo..

Wahi uske baad do log aaye aur Vetalraj ki body le gaye waha se..

Mohini- Tum sab mere saaath chalo ab ujhe kuch check karna hai....yaad rahe agar main kuch ajeeb saa karu to ussi waqt maar dena mujhe....

Main- Ye kya ho raha hai...tum kya karne wali ho..

Mohini- kuch aisa jo jaruri hai ab kyunki agar mera shaq sahi hai to bahut badi gadbad honi hai yaha...

Hum sab bolte rahe par wo sunne ko taiyaar hi nahi thi aur fir hum bhi picche chale gaye uskke...

Wo ek bade se room ki oor gayi pata nahi waha kya tha par waha jaane se hi dil mein ek ajeeb si halchal ho rahi thi mere..

Kappa- control mein rakho khud ko

Main- Patta nahi kya ho raha hai mujhe..

Mohini- Tum sab waha khade ho jaao..

Hum sab khade ho gaye...

Mohini ne apna haath aage kiya aur uske hath mein ek kalla hira aaa gay usne wo hirra apne taj pe lagaya jiske baad wo hawa mein udhne lagi....

Hum uske pass jaane ko hue....

Mohini- Wahi rahna main thik hu...

Hum wahi rahe...

Mohini ko udte hue dekhte ajeeb tha ye mujhe aisa lag raha tha koi mujhse mera kuch cheen raha hai....pata nahi kya hua mujhe main bhi dhyaan mein baith gaya waha par aur Mohini ke upar dhyaan kendrit karne laga aisa lag raha tha koi usko usse hi alag kar raha hai...

maine jab dhyaan se dekha to uss hirre se kuch nikal raha tha...

Wo ghere jaa raha tha Mohini ko...ye mujhe galat lag rahha tha meri aankhen khuli aur main Mohini ke pass gaya aur uss hirre ko jhat se usse alag kiya jiske baad wo behosh ho gayi....Wahi wo Hirra gayab ho gaya tha.

Maine usko goad mein uthaya aur usko wahi mahel ke ek kamre mein le gaya jaha usko bed pe lita diya...baaki saare bhi mere picche aa gaye the..

Main- Paridhi isko thik karo jaldi se...

Paridhi- haa koshish karti hu...

Paridhi ne apni chadi nikali aur Mohini ke sar ke pass ghumane lagi..

Shilpa bhi apni aankhe band kar ke kuch karne lagi wahi Puja aur Priya bhi..

Karib aadhe ghante baad Mohini ki aankhen khuli...wo darri hui thi..

Main- Kya hua tha Mohini batao...

Mohini- Wo wo yaha aa raha tha wo heera rasta tha uska usko nast karo agar wo yaha aa pahucha to sab khatam ho jaayega abhi tak wo jaaga nahi hai par jaagne hi wala hai aur usko raasta chahiye...wo heera nast karo usko...

Wo aise hi bolti rahi main kuch jyada to samjh nahi paaya uski baaton se issliye usko aaram kaarne ka bol kar uss Heere ki talash mein nikal pada...abhi main waha ussi room mein wapas gaya hi tha

Main waha har jagah wo heera dhundh raha tha par wo nahi milla...

Kappa- wo jaa chuka hai Saurya ab koi faiyda nahi hai...ab bas taiyaari karo uske aane ki usse samna karne ki..

Main- Par abhi koi taiyaar nahi hai yaha naa to Margret aur baaki sab yaha aaye hai...aur Pradeep usko bhi waqt lagega kuch....Jwala ka bhi pata nahi hai abhi..

Kappa- Jo karna hai jaldi karna hoga kyunki wo har tarah se koshish karega jaldi aane ki..

Main- Inn sab mein waqt lagega Kappa tum bhi jaante ho abhi waqt saamna karne ka nahi balki usko rokne kaa hai koi upay dhundho jisse wo iss waqt main naa aa sake aur hame waqt mil jaaye...

Kappa - Ye bhi tumhe hi karna hoga Saurya tum Alex se baat karo yaa kisi aur se...

Main - Thik hai main dekhta hu ye sab...

Main waha se wapas sabhi ke pass gaya...

main- Hame chalna hoga yaha se...Mohini tum ab thik ho naa..

Mohini- Haa Saurya main thik hu uss waqt pata nahi...

Main- Koi baat nahi....Chalo ab yaha se nikalte hai tum sab wapas jao Earth pe...

Shilpa- Tum nahi aa rahe...

Main- Main aaunga par ahi nahi abhi tum sab waha jaao aur haa ek baat aur waha jaa kar naa sabhi apne apne ghar mein Bade dada aur Bade nana ka jikar karna saath hi Shrapit gaon ki bhi..

Kappa- Tu pagal hai kya..

Main- Inka dhyaan bhatkana jaruri hai Kappa inko abhi wahi lage rahne do iss mamle ko main khud samjh lu fir inko bataunga..

Kappa- Thik hai..

Maine fir unn sab ko bataya ki kya kuch karna hai...

Bade dada aur gaon ke baare mein unn sab ko Dristi ne batla diya tha...

Bas fir kya tha maine portal khola sabhi Earth pe aur apne apne jagah pe....wahi main chala gaya Niharika ke planet pe waha pahucha to Alex Dristi ke saath khel raha tha saath hi Kaal sarp bhi tha unke saath...

Maine Kaal sarp ko bulaya usko sab kuch bataya to usne bola ki agar usko yaha aane se rokna hai to Jwala ko lana hoga...

Main- Matlab Alex aur Varsha ko batana hga..

Kaal sarp- Haa

Main - Thik hai tum unse baat karo iss baare mein main jarra Rani Pari se bhi puch aaun iss baare mein..

Waha se main nikal gay aur shidha pahuch gaya Parilok main jaha Pihu se sabse pahle mulakat hui usse kuch der baaat ki maine aur fir Rani Pari ke room mein chala aaya wo abhi kamjoor thi to bahar nahi aati ythi..

Main- Rani pari...

Rani pari- Arre Saurya beta aao aao main to kab se tumse milna chahti thi par...

Main - Maaf kijiyega par abhi inn sab mein waqt jaaza naa kar hum mudde par aate hai...Kya hum kisi ko time travel karne se rok sakte hai..

Rani pari ne mujhe pahle to acche se dekha uske baad apni aankhen band ki aur thodi der mein unke haath mein ek kitab aa gayi thi...Unhone wo kitab mujhe de diya...

Main- ye kya hai..

Rani pari- Kitab hai tumhari hi hai par tumhe milli nahi thi abhi tak isko padho sab samjh jaaoge...

Main- Meri hai se kya matlab..

Rani pari - Khass tumhare liye likhi gayi hai ye iss kitab ko dhyan se padhna aaram se koi jaldbazzi nahi samjhe...

Main- waqt ki hi to kammi hai...

Rani pari( Haste hue)- Wahi to khatam karni hai naa..isko padhna shuru karo sab samajh jaaoge..

Main-thik hai..

Itna bol waha se kitab lekar chala gaya..

Earth pe aaya to sham ho rahi thi...

Abhi aaya hi tha aur mera phone bajne laga..

Maine dekha phone mom ka tha maine unse baat ki unhone kaha ki wo jagah safe hai unpe bharosha kar sakte saath mein ye bhi kaha ki waha meri choti maasi ke alawa aur bhi log aa rahe hai jaise meri badi bua meri badi maasi ye sab...

Mom- Beta abhi main inhe tere baare mein batane ka soch rahi hu...

Main- Mom please thoda aur ruk jao maine kuch socha hai please please..

Mom- Haa bata kya socha hai..

Main- aapko khud pata chal jaayega waise badi maasi kab aa rahi hai..

Mom- Wo parso tak aa jaayegi pata hai abhi unko hamare yaha hone ka pata chala naa to kitna bawal hua tha..arre kya bataun....

Fir MOm ne mujhe wo saare emotional kisse sunaye jo waha hue the aur bhi bahut kuch aur issi tarah phone pe baaat karte hue hi sham se raat ho gayi maine kitab ko palat ke bhi nahi dekha tha...

Mom ne call cut kiya aur main jaldi se pahuch gaya RAW ke diye hue flat par..waha jaa kar abhi baitha hi tha ke dimmag mein kuch aaya aur maine kitab ko side kiya aur dhyaan mein baith gaya.....

Aaj ke liye itna hi bahut kuch hua hai iss update mein autr hum dhere dhere badh rahe hai iss part ke annt ki oor pahle hi bata deta hu annt Iss time period ke Maarcuss ke aant se hogi saaath hi hamare nayye villan ke samne aane se ye issliye likh raha ki koi ye naa kahe ending nahi sochi hai saath hi kuch suggetions ke liye agar aap chahte ho ki ending change ki jaaye to jarur baataiye waise change hone wali nahi hai maine soch rakha hai...haa par unn suggetions se jo agla part hoga usme madad ho jaayegi meri...Ab yaha Readers ye hi kahenge Writer to comments dekhta bhinahi hai to aisa nahi hai doston aap sab ke comments main dekhunga aur reply bhi karunga....To bane rahiye...

Ek baaar sabhi Readers ko dil se shukriya kahna cahunga saath bane rahne ke liye..

Agle update mein dekhte hai ye naya kitab kya hai aur saath hi Jwala ko laane ki taiyaari aur Bansoa se sabhi shathiyon ka bhi aana......
Mast update bro
 

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UPDATE - 93

Ab tak

Dristi unn pancho ko kuch dikha rahi thi wahi main Earth pe aa gaya tha aur aage ke baare mein soch raha thaaur Kappa se discuss kar raha tha..

Aage

Chaliye pahle hum jinlok chalte hai jaha ab tak wo sabhi sab kuch dekh cukke the aur ab bas sabhi ke aankho mein aashu the. Unko samjh mein nahi aa raha tha kaise wo ek dusre ke khilaf ho gayi thi...

Varsha aur Alex jo waha par the wo unn sabhi ko shant karwate hai. Wo paancho badi muskil se shant hoti hai par shant hote hi unn sab ke chahro pe kuch tha jisko samajhna muskil tha.

Wo paancho hi ek dusre ki oor dekhti hai aur fir bas pancho waha se gayab ho jaati hai...

Ab pata nahi kya chal raha hai inke dimmag mein..

Alex aur Varsha bhi Dristi ko lekar wapas chale jaate hai..

Wahi Main jo Earth pe ta abhi RAW ke diye hue flat pe waha par wo pancho hi tapak padti hai..

Shilpa- Hame aur shakti chahiye..

Main- Pahle jo hai usko control karna sheekho...tum sabse jyada takatwaar ho par apni takat pe control nahi hai tumhara...Paridhi tum tum ab Rani Pari ho apni takat ko jaano aur uspe kaabu karo aur tum Mohini bahut takat aa gayi hai tumhare pass hame kal Vetallok ko jitna hai aur tumhe waha ki rani banana hai. ...

Jab main ye sab bol raha tha wo saare ekdum se shocked the muh kulla tha unka..

Puja- Didi inko kya hua y...

Shilpa- Pata nahi ye aise baatein kaise kar rahe...

Main- main serious hu abhi aur tum sab ko jo bola hai wo karna hoga ok. Ye tum sab ke liye hi hai...

Priya- hmm pata hai hame bas ye dekh rahe ki Dristi ki baatein sach thi..

Main- Kya dikhaya usne tum logo ko...

Puja-Hum sab ka milna aapki shadi Shilpa didi se phir paridhi didi se shadi fir hum dono se shadi sab kuch dikhaya usne ye bhi ki hum apne powers ko control nahi karne lage the aur bhi bahut kuch...

Main- Itna pahle se dikhaya usne tabhi to itna time laga..Accha chalo isko chodo aur meri baat sunno ab tum sab ko jo bhi bola hai karna shuru kardo...

Shilpa- Hmm thik hai.

Main- Chalo ab sabhi niklo apne apne ghar aur haa Mohini taiyaar rahna kal ke liye...

Priya- Hammme bhaga rahe ho..

Main- Arre nahi wo to kal ki taiyaari karni hai naa tum sabko bas issi liye aur waise bhi mujhe kisi ke pass jaana hai..

Sabse thoda der aur baat kiya fir sabhi chale gaye...

Wahi main nikal gaya waha se kisi ke pass jaane ke liye....

Raat ka waqt tha main sheeda uske room mein pahucha aur fir waha par apna kaam kiya aur nikal gaya waha se uske baad kisi aur ghar mein gaya waha bhi wahi kiya aur nikal gaya..

Waha se aa pahucha wapas RAW ke diye hue jagah pe....

Kappa- Chalo unn dono ka bhi kam kar diya ab bas wait karna hai thoda...

Main- Hmm wahi karna hai bas...Chalo ab baaki kal dekhte hai Vetallok ke safar pe..

Aur issi ke saath main soo gaya..

Next morning main utha jaldi aur dhyaan mein baith gaya... Karib subah ke 9 baje tak main taiyaar tha aur thik uske 15 minute baad Wo pancho aa gayi thi mere pass...

Main- To ready ho naa chalne ke liyeMohini tum ready ho naa..

Mohini- Haa main ready hu

Aur usne fir apni aankhe band ki aur ham sab ko usko chune ke liye bola...thode hi der mein hum sab ki aankhen khud band hui aur agle hi pal hum Vetallok mein the...

Main- Arre mujhe kahti main Portal khol deta..

Mohini- Nahi mujhe apni power check karni thi bas...

Main- Thik hai chalo ab ready to ho naa.

Mohini- Hmm ready...

Main- (bakki charon se.) Hame bas rasta banana hai iske liye aur kuch nahi...Vetalraj se ye khud ladegi...

Sabhi - ok

Fir kya tha hum aage badhene lage...aur hame log milne lage..Yaha bhi sabhi tarah ke log the acche burre har tarah ke..Jo hampe hamla karne aata uspe hm humla karte aur dekhte hi dekhte hum pahuch gaye mahel ki orr itne der mein naa jaane kitne hi logo se hamara saamna hua tha par...usnme se kisi mein bhi itna dum nahi tha ki meri Raniyon ko chu bhi sake...

Kuch to tha aaj unn pancho mein jiski wajah se aisa ho raha tha ab pata nahi kya...matlab ab ye Vetal log itne kamzor to nahi ho sakte ki wo......

Hum aage badhte gaye aur fir hamari nazar padi Vetallok ke Raja Vetalraj ki taraf....Wo darra hua tha..

Ajeeb hai naa wo bhala kyun dara hua tha...humse dara hua ho...saayad yaa pata nahi..

Mohini- Kaise hai Vetalraj..

Vetalraj- Tum mujhe maarne aaye ho naa jaldi se khatam karo mujhe aur niklo yaha se...

Ye baat sunke bada ajeeb laga mujhe matlab isko pata kaise chala aur maan lo usko kisi tarah pata chal bhi gaya ho to isne koi upay kyun nahi dhundha hume rokne ke liye...

Kappa- Saurya kuch to gadbad hai yaha...

Main- Mujhe bhi lag raha hai...par kya wo pata nahi hai..

Main(bakki sab se)- Sab ruk jao koi uspe hamla nahi karega...

Sabhi meri oor dekhne lage..

Vetalraj- Agar marna hai to jaldi maaro warna niklo yaha se..

Main- Ye kkuch samajh nahi aa raha mujhe....tumhari baatein badi ajeeb hai...

Vetalraj- Main kah raha hu naa jo bhi karna hai jaldi karo aur niklo yaha se...

Priya- ab teri ye iccha to puri karni hi hogi...Mohini maar isko jaldi bada tadap raha hai naa.

Mohini meri oor dekhti hai par main to khud hi confuse hua pada tha iss Vetalraj ke aise kahne se....Main kya bolta usko...

Vetalraj ne apna haath aage kiya aur uske haath mein uski talwar aa gayi..

Vetalraj- Mohini agar tunne mujhe mara to pura Vetallok tera hoga aur agar nahi mara to ye lok mere saath hi khatam ho jaayega...

Itna bol usne talwar ko apni oor laga liya..

Mohini ne jaise hi ye deka wo ek baar meri oor dekhti ai aur jab usko main abhi tak confuse hi dikhta hu to wo apna haath aage karti hai aur uske haath mein talwar aa jaati hai aur wo seedha jaa kar Vetalraj ke upar war kar deti hai .

Ye bahut hi jaldi hua tha main ekdum se shocked tha...wahi Vetalraj nicche pada hua tha...usne Mohini ko apni oor bulaya aur Mohini chali bhi gayi...

Vetalraj- Aaj se tum iss Vetallok ki Rani ho baccha lo isko warna sab khatam ho jaayega..wo wapas aa chuka hai..

Bas itna bola aur apna mukut Mohini ke sar pe rakh kar wo mar gaya...

Hum sab ye dekh kar aur sun kar hairaan the..

Kappa- Saayad wo aa raha hai usko pata chal gaya hai time period collapse hone kaa ab hame sawdhan rahna hoga...

Mohini-(chilla kar) Shainikon yaha aao aur inka acche se antim sanskar karo..

Wahi uske baad do log aaye aur Vetalraj ki body le gaye waha se..

Mohini- Tum sab mere saaath chalo ab ujhe kuch check karna hai....yaad rahe agar main kuch ajeeb saa karu to ussi waqt maar dena mujhe....

Main- Ye kya ho raha hai...tum kya karne wali ho..

Mohini- kuch aisa jo jaruri hai ab kyunki agar mera shaq sahi hai to bahut badi gadbad honi hai yaha...

Hum sab bolte rahe par wo sunne ko taiyaar hi nahi thi aur fir hum bhi picche chale gaye uskke...

Wo ek bade se room ki oor gayi pata nahi waha kya tha par waha jaane se hi dil mein ek ajeeb si halchal ho rahi thi mere..

Kappa- control mein rakho khud ko

Main- Patta nahi kya ho raha hai mujhe..

Mohini- Tum sab waha khade ho jaao..

Hum sab khade ho gaye...

Mohini ne apna haath aage kiya aur uske hath mein ek kalla hira aaa gay usne wo hirra apne taj pe lagaya jiske baad wo hawa mein udhne lagi....

Hum uske pass jaane ko hue....

Mohini- Wahi rahna main thik hu...

Hum wahi rahe...

Mohini ko udte hue dekhte ajeeb tha ye mujhe aisa lag raha tha koi mujhse mera kuch cheen raha hai....pata nahi kya hua mujhe main bhi dhyaan mein baith gaya waha par aur Mohini ke upar dhyaan kendrit karne laga aisa lag raha tha koi usko usse hi alag kar raha hai...

maine jab dhyaan se dekha to uss hirre se kuch nikal raha tha...

Wo ghere jaa raha tha Mohini ko...ye mujhe galat lag rahha tha meri aankhen khuli aur main Mohini ke pass gaya aur uss hirre ko jhat se usse alag kiya jiske baad wo behosh ho gayi....Wahi wo Hirra gayab ho gaya tha.

Maine usko goad mein uthaya aur usko wahi mahel ke ek kamre mein le gaya jaha usko bed pe lita diya...baaki saare bhi mere picche aa gaye the..

Main- Paridhi isko thik karo jaldi se...

Paridhi- haa koshish karti hu...

Paridhi ne apni chadi nikali aur Mohini ke sar ke pass ghumane lagi..

Shilpa bhi apni aankhe band kar ke kuch karne lagi wahi Puja aur Priya bhi..

Karib aadhe ghante baad Mohini ki aankhen khuli...wo darri hui thi..

Main- Kya hua tha Mohini batao...

Mohini- Wo wo yaha aa raha tha wo heera rasta tha uska usko nast karo agar wo yaha aa pahucha to sab khatam ho jaayega abhi tak wo jaaga nahi hai par jaagne hi wala hai aur usko raasta chahiye...wo heera nast karo usko...

Wo aise hi bolti rahi main kuch jyada to samjh nahi paaya uski baaton se issliye usko aaram kaarne ka bol kar uss Heere ki talash mein nikal pada...abhi main waha ussi room mein wapas gaya hi tha

Main waha har jagah wo heera dhundh raha tha par wo nahi milla...

Kappa- wo jaa chuka hai Saurya ab koi faiyda nahi hai...ab bas taiyaari karo uske aane ki usse samna karne ki..

Main- Par abhi koi taiyaar nahi hai yaha naa to Margret aur baaki sab yaha aaye hai...aur Pradeep usko bhi waqt lagega kuch....Jwala ka bhi pata nahi hai abhi..

Kappa- Jo karna hai jaldi karna hoga kyunki wo har tarah se koshish karega jaldi aane ki..

Main- Inn sab mein waqt lagega Kappa tum bhi jaante ho abhi waqt saamna karne ka nahi balki usko rokne kaa hai koi upay dhundho jisse wo iss waqt main naa aa sake aur hame waqt mil jaaye...

Kappa - Ye bhi tumhe hi karna hoga Saurya tum Alex se baat karo yaa kisi aur se...

Main - Thik hai main dekhta hu ye sab...

Main waha se wapas sabhi ke pass gaya...

main- Hame chalna hoga yaha se...Mohini tum ab thik ho naa..

Mohini- Haa Saurya main thik hu uss waqt pata nahi...

Main- Koi baat nahi....Chalo ab yaha se nikalte hai tum sab wapas jao Earth pe...

Shilpa- Tum nahi aa rahe...

Main- Main aaunga par ahi nahi abhi tum sab waha jaao aur haa ek baat aur waha jaa kar naa sabhi apne apne ghar mein Bade dada aur Bade nana ka jikar karna saath hi Shrapit gaon ki bhi..

Kappa- Tu pagal hai kya..

Main- Inka dhyaan bhatkana jaruri hai Kappa inko abhi wahi lage rahne do iss mamle ko main khud samjh lu fir inko bataunga..

Kappa- Thik hai..

Maine fir unn sab ko bataya ki kya kuch karna hai...

Bade dada aur gaon ke baare mein unn sab ko Dristi ne batla diya tha...

Bas fir kya tha maine portal khola sabhi Earth pe aur apne apne jagah pe....wahi main chala gaya Niharika ke planet pe waha pahucha to Alex Dristi ke saath khel raha tha saath hi Kaal sarp bhi tha unke saath...

Maine Kaal sarp ko bulaya usko sab kuch bataya to usne bola ki agar usko yaha aane se rokna hai to Jwala ko lana hoga...

Main- Matlab Alex aur Varsha ko batana hga..

Kaal sarp- Haa

Main - Thik hai tum unse baat karo iss baare mein main jarra Rani Pari se bhi puch aaun iss baare mein..

Waha se main nikal gay aur shidha pahuch gaya Parilok main jaha Pihu se sabse pahle mulakat hui usse kuch der baaat ki maine aur fir Rani Pari ke room mein chala aaya wo abhi kamjoor thi to bahar nahi aati ythi..

Main- Rani pari...

Rani pari- Arre Saurya beta aao aao main to kab se tumse milna chahti thi par...

Main - Maaf kijiyega par abhi inn sab mein waqt jaaza naa kar hum mudde par aate hai...Kya hum kisi ko time travel karne se rok sakte hai..

Rani pari ne mujhe pahle to acche se dekha uske baad apni aankhen band ki aur thodi der mein unke haath mein ek kitab aa gayi thi...Unhone wo kitab mujhe de diya...

Main- ye kya hai..

Rani pari- Kitab hai tumhari hi hai par tumhe milli nahi thi abhi tak isko padho sab samjh jaaoge...

Main- Meri hai se kya matlab..

Rani pari - Khass tumhare liye likhi gayi hai ye iss kitab ko dhyan se padhna aaram se koi jaldbazzi nahi samjhe...

Main- waqt ki hi to kammi hai...

Rani pari( Haste hue)- Wahi to khatam karni hai naa..isko padhna shuru karo sab samajh jaaoge..

Main-thik hai..

Itna bol waha se kitab lekar chala gaya..

Earth pe aaya to sham ho rahi thi...

Abhi aaya hi tha aur mera phone bajne laga..

Maine dekha phone mom ka tha maine unse baat ki unhone kaha ki wo jagah safe hai unpe bharosha kar sakte saath mein ye bhi kaha ki waha meri choti maasi ke alawa aur bhi log aa rahe hai jaise meri badi bua meri badi maasi ye sab...

Mom- Beta abhi main inhe tere baare mein batane ka soch rahi hu...

Main- Mom please thoda aur ruk jao maine kuch socha hai please please..

Mom- Haa bata kya socha hai..

Main- aapko khud pata chal jaayega waise badi maasi kab aa rahi hai..

Mom- Wo parso tak aa jaayegi pata hai abhi unko hamare yaha hone ka pata chala naa to kitna bawal hua tha..arre kya bataun....

Fir MOm ne mujhe wo saare emotional kisse sunaye jo waha hue the aur bhi bahut kuch aur issi tarah phone pe baaat karte hue hi sham se raat ho gayi maine kitab ko palat ke bhi nahi dekha tha...

Mom ne call cut kiya aur main jaldi se pahuch gaya RAW ke diye hue flat par..waha jaa kar abhi baitha hi tha ke dimmag mein kuch aaya aur maine kitab ko side kiya aur dhyaan mein baith gaya.....

Aaj ke liye itna hi bahut kuch hua hai iss update mein autr hum dhere dhere badh rahe hai iss part ke annt ki oor pahle hi bata deta hu annt Iss time period ke Maarcuss ke aant se hogi saaath hi hamare nayye villan ke samne aane se ye issliye likh raha ki koi ye naa kahe ending nahi sochi hai saath hi kuch suggetions ke liye agar aap chahte ho ki ending change ki jaaye to jarur baataiye waise change hone wali nahi hai maine soch rakha hai...haa par unn suggetions se jo agla part hoga usme madad ho jaayegi meri...Ab yaha Readers ye hi kahenge Writer to comments dekhta bhinahi hai to aisa nahi hai doston aap sab ke comments main dekhunga aur reply bhi karunga....To bane rahiye...

Ek baaar sabhi Readers ko dil se shukriya kahna cahunga saath bane rahne ke liye..

Agle update mein dekhte hai ye naya kitab kya hai aur saath hi Jwala ko laane ki taiyaari aur Bansoa se sabhi shathiyon ka bhi aana......
Mohini vetalraj ko maar kar vetallok ki rani banti hai aur surya apni sabhi raniyo ko earth per bhej deta hai khud Niharika M aur Raani pari se milta hai v Rani pari ushe time period ke collepesh ke bare me janne ke liye ek kitab deti hai jishe lekar apne RAW wake flait me surya pahunch jata hai aur dhyan me baith jata hai.
Bahut hi marmsaparshi shabdo se likhi gai ek aur manmohini update laaye hai Surya bhai.
 

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Dristi unn pancho ko kuch dikha rahi thi wahi main Earth pe aa gaya tha aur aage ke baare mein soch raha thaaur Kappa se discuss kar raha tha..

Aage

Chaliye pahle hum jinlok chalte hai jaha ab tak wo sabhi sab kuch dekh cukke the aur ab bas sabhi ke aankho mein aashu the. Unko samjh mein nahi aa raha tha kaise wo ek dusre ke khilaf ho gayi thi...

Varsha aur Alex jo waha par the wo unn sabhi ko shant karwate hai. Wo paancho badi muskil se shant hoti hai par shant hote hi unn sab ke chahro pe kuch tha jisko samajhna muskil tha.

Wo paancho hi ek dusre ki oor dekhti hai aur fir bas pancho waha se gayab ho jaati hai...

Ab pata nahi kya chal raha hai inke dimmag mein..

Alex aur Varsha bhi Dristi ko lekar wapas chale jaate hai..

Wahi Main jo Earth pe ta abhi RAW ke diye hue flat pe waha par wo pancho hi tapak padti hai..

Shilpa- Hame aur shakti chahiye..

Main- Pahle jo hai usko control karna sheekho...tum sabse jyada takatwaar ho par apni takat pe control nahi hai tumhara...Paridhi tum tum ab Rani Pari ho apni takat ko jaano aur uspe kaabu karo aur tum Mohini bahut takat aa gayi hai tumhare pass hame kal Vetallok ko jitna hai aur tumhe waha ki rani banana hai. ...

Jab main ye sab bol raha tha wo saare ekdum se shocked the muh kulla tha unka..

Puja- Didi inko kya hua y...

Shilpa- Pata nahi ye aise baatein kaise kar rahe...

Main- main serious hu abhi aur tum sab ko jo bola hai wo karna hoga ok. Ye tum sab ke liye hi hai...

Priya- hmm pata hai hame bas ye dekh rahe ki Dristi ki baatein sach thi..

Main- Kya dikhaya usne tum logo ko...

Puja-Hum sab ka milna aapki shadi Shilpa didi se phir paridhi didi se shadi fir hum dono se shadi sab kuch dikhaya usne ye bhi ki hum apne powers ko control nahi karne lage the aur bhi bahut kuch...

Main- Itna pahle se dikhaya usne tabhi to itna time laga..Accha chalo isko chodo aur meri baat sunno ab tum sab ko jo bhi bola hai karna shuru kardo...

Shilpa- Hmm thik hai.

Main- Chalo ab sabhi niklo apne apne ghar aur haa Mohini taiyaar rahna kal ke liye...

Priya- Hammme bhaga rahe ho..

Main- Arre nahi wo to kal ki taiyaari karni hai naa tum sabko bas issi liye aur waise bhi mujhe kisi ke pass jaana hai..

Sabse thoda der aur baat kiya fir sabhi chale gaye...

Wahi main nikal gaya waha se kisi ke pass jaane ke liye....

Raat ka waqt tha main sheeda uske room mein pahucha aur fir waha par apna kaam kiya aur nikal gaya waha se uske baad kisi aur ghar mein gaya waha bhi wahi kiya aur nikal gaya..

Waha se aa pahucha wapas RAW ke diye hue jagah pe....

Kappa- Chalo unn dono ka bhi kam kar diya ab bas wait karna hai thoda...

Main- Hmm wahi karna hai bas...Chalo ab baaki kal dekhte hai Vetallok ke safar pe..

Aur issi ke saath main soo gaya..

Next morning main utha jaldi aur dhyaan mein baith gaya... Karib subah ke 9 baje tak main taiyaar tha aur thik uske 15 minute baad Wo pancho aa gayi thi mere pass...

Main- To ready ho naa chalne ke liyeMohini tum ready ho naa..

Mohini- Haa main ready hu

Aur usne fir apni aankhe band ki aur ham sab ko usko chune ke liye bola...thode hi der mein hum sab ki aankhen khud band hui aur agle hi pal hum Vetallok mein the...

Main- Arre mujhe kahti main Portal khol deta..

Mohini- Nahi mujhe apni power check karni thi bas...

Main- Thik hai chalo ab ready to ho naa.

Mohini- Hmm ready...

Main- (bakki charon se.) Hame bas rasta banana hai iske liye aur kuch nahi...Vetalraj se ye khud ladegi...

Sabhi - ok

Fir kya tha hum aage badhene lage...aur hame log milne lage..Yaha bhi sabhi tarah ke log the acche burre har tarah ke..Jo hampe hamla karne aata uspe hm humla karte aur dekhte hi dekhte hum pahuch gaye mahel ki orr itne der mein naa jaane kitne hi logo se hamara saamna hua tha par...usnme se kisi mein bhi itna dum nahi tha ki meri Raniyon ko chu bhi sake...

Kuch to tha aaj unn pancho mein jiski wajah se aisa ho raha tha ab pata nahi kya...matlab ab ye Vetal log itne kamzor to nahi ho sakte ki wo......

Hum aage badhte gaye aur fir hamari nazar padi Vetallok ke Raja Vetalraj ki taraf....Wo darra hua tha..

Ajeeb hai naa wo bhala kyun dara hua tha...humse dara hua ho...saayad yaa pata nahi..

Mohini- Kaise hai Vetalraj..

Vetalraj- Tum mujhe maarne aaye ho naa jaldi se khatam karo mujhe aur niklo yaha se...

Ye baat sunke bada ajeeb laga mujhe matlab isko pata kaise chala aur maan lo usko kisi tarah pata chal bhi gaya ho to isne koi upay kyun nahi dhundha hume rokne ke liye...

Kappa- Saurya kuch to gadbad hai yaha...

Main- Mujhe bhi lag raha hai...par kya wo pata nahi hai..

Main(bakki sab se)- Sab ruk jao koi uspe hamla nahi karega...

Sabhi meri oor dekhne lage..

Vetalraj- Agar marna hai to jaldi maaro warna niklo yaha se..

Main- Ye kkuch samajh nahi aa raha mujhe....tumhari baatein badi ajeeb hai...

Vetalraj- Main kah raha hu naa jo bhi karna hai jaldi karo aur niklo yaha se...

Priya- ab teri ye iccha to puri karni hi hogi...Mohini maar isko jaldi bada tadap raha hai naa.

Mohini meri oor dekhti hai par main to khud hi confuse hua pada tha iss Vetalraj ke aise kahne se....Main kya bolta usko...

Vetalraj ne apna haath aage kiya aur uske haath mein uski talwar aa gayi..

Vetalraj- Mohini agar tunne mujhe mara to pura Vetallok tera hoga aur agar nahi mara to ye lok mere saath hi khatam ho jaayega...

Itna bol usne talwar ko apni oor laga liya..

Mohini ne jaise hi ye deka wo ek baar meri oor dekhti ai aur jab usko main abhi tak confuse hi dikhta hu to wo apna haath aage karti hai aur uske haath mein talwar aa jaati hai aur wo seedha jaa kar Vetalraj ke upar war kar deti hai .

Ye bahut hi jaldi hua tha main ekdum se shocked tha...wahi Vetalraj nicche pada hua tha...usne Mohini ko apni oor bulaya aur Mohini chali bhi gayi...

Vetalraj- Aaj se tum iss Vetallok ki Rani ho baccha lo isko warna sab khatam ho jaayega..wo wapas aa chuka hai..

Bas itna bola aur apna mukut Mohini ke sar pe rakh kar wo mar gaya...

Hum sab ye dekh kar aur sun kar hairaan the..

Kappa- Saayad wo aa raha hai usko pata chal gaya hai time period collapse hone kaa ab hame sawdhan rahna hoga...

Mohini-(chilla kar) Shainikon yaha aao aur inka acche se antim sanskar karo..

Wahi uske baad do log aaye aur Vetalraj ki body le gaye waha se..

Mohini- Tum sab mere saaath chalo ab ujhe kuch check karna hai....yaad rahe agar main kuch ajeeb saa karu to ussi waqt maar dena mujhe....

Main- Ye kya ho raha hai...tum kya karne wali ho..

Mohini- kuch aisa jo jaruri hai ab kyunki agar mera shaq sahi hai to bahut badi gadbad honi hai yaha...

Hum sab bolte rahe par wo sunne ko taiyaar hi nahi thi aur fir hum bhi picche chale gaye uskke...

Wo ek bade se room ki oor gayi pata nahi waha kya tha par waha jaane se hi dil mein ek ajeeb si halchal ho rahi thi mere..

Kappa- control mein rakho khud ko

Main- Patta nahi kya ho raha hai mujhe..

Mohini- Tum sab waha khade ho jaao..

Hum sab khade ho gaye...

Mohini ne apna haath aage kiya aur uske hath mein ek kalla hira aaa gay usne wo hirra apne taj pe lagaya jiske baad wo hawa mein udhne lagi....

Hum uske pass jaane ko hue....

Mohini- Wahi rahna main thik hu...

Hum wahi rahe...

Mohini ko udte hue dekhte ajeeb tha ye mujhe aisa lag raha tha koi mujhse mera kuch cheen raha hai....pata nahi kya hua mujhe main bhi dhyaan mein baith gaya waha par aur Mohini ke upar dhyaan kendrit karne laga aisa lag raha tha koi usko usse hi alag kar raha hai...

maine jab dhyaan se dekha to uss hirre se kuch nikal raha tha...

Wo ghere jaa raha tha Mohini ko...ye mujhe galat lag rahha tha meri aankhen khuli aur main Mohini ke pass gaya aur uss hirre ko jhat se usse alag kiya jiske baad wo behosh ho gayi....Wahi wo Hirra gayab ho gaya tha.

Maine usko goad mein uthaya aur usko wahi mahel ke ek kamre mein le gaya jaha usko bed pe lita diya...baaki saare bhi mere picche aa gaye the..

Main- Paridhi isko thik karo jaldi se...

Paridhi- haa koshish karti hu...

Paridhi ne apni chadi nikali aur Mohini ke sar ke pass ghumane lagi..

Shilpa bhi apni aankhe band kar ke kuch karne lagi wahi Puja aur Priya bhi..

Karib aadhe ghante baad Mohini ki aankhen khuli...wo darri hui thi..

Main- Kya hua tha Mohini batao...

Mohini- Wo wo yaha aa raha tha wo heera rasta tha uska usko nast karo agar wo yaha aa pahucha to sab khatam ho jaayega abhi tak wo jaaga nahi hai par jaagne hi wala hai aur usko raasta chahiye...wo heera nast karo usko...

Wo aise hi bolti rahi main kuch jyada to samjh nahi paaya uski baaton se issliye usko aaram kaarne ka bol kar uss Heere ki talash mein nikal pada...abhi main waha ussi room mein wapas gaya hi tha

Main waha har jagah wo heera dhundh raha tha par wo nahi milla...

Kappa- wo jaa chuka hai Saurya ab koi faiyda nahi hai...ab bas taiyaari karo uske aane ki usse samna karne ki..

Main- Par abhi koi taiyaar nahi hai yaha naa to Margret aur baaki sab yaha aaye hai...aur Pradeep usko bhi waqt lagega kuch....Jwala ka bhi pata nahi hai abhi..

Kappa- Jo karna hai jaldi karna hoga kyunki wo har tarah se koshish karega jaldi aane ki..

Main- Inn sab mein waqt lagega Kappa tum bhi jaante ho abhi waqt saamna karne ka nahi balki usko rokne kaa hai koi upay dhundho jisse wo iss waqt main naa aa sake aur hame waqt mil jaaye...

Kappa - Ye bhi tumhe hi karna hoga Saurya tum Alex se baat karo yaa kisi aur se...

Main - Thik hai main dekhta hu ye sab...

Main waha se wapas sabhi ke pass gaya...

main- Hame chalna hoga yaha se...Mohini tum ab thik ho naa..

Mohini- Haa Saurya main thik hu uss waqt pata nahi...

Main- Koi baat nahi....Chalo ab yaha se nikalte hai tum sab wapas jao Earth pe...

Shilpa- Tum nahi aa rahe...

Main- Main aaunga par ahi nahi abhi tum sab waha jaao aur haa ek baat aur waha jaa kar naa sabhi apne apne ghar mein Bade dada aur Bade nana ka jikar karna saath hi Shrapit gaon ki bhi..

Kappa- Tu pagal hai kya..

Main- Inka dhyaan bhatkana jaruri hai Kappa inko abhi wahi lage rahne do iss mamle ko main khud samjh lu fir inko bataunga..

Kappa- Thik hai..

Maine fir unn sab ko bataya ki kya kuch karna hai...

Bade dada aur gaon ke baare mein unn sab ko Dristi ne batla diya tha...

Bas fir kya tha maine portal khola sabhi Earth pe aur apne apne jagah pe....wahi main chala gaya Niharika ke planet pe waha pahucha to Alex Dristi ke saath khel raha tha saath hi Kaal sarp bhi tha unke saath...

Maine Kaal sarp ko bulaya usko sab kuch bataya to usne bola ki agar usko yaha aane se rokna hai to Jwala ko lana hoga...

Main- Matlab Alex aur Varsha ko batana hga..

Kaal sarp- Haa

Main - Thik hai tum unse baat karo iss baare mein main jarra Rani Pari se bhi puch aaun iss baare mein..

Waha se main nikal gay aur shidha pahuch gaya Parilok main jaha Pihu se sabse pahle mulakat hui usse kuch der baaat ki maine aur fir Rani Pari ke room mein chala aaya wo abhi kamjoor thi to bahar nahi aati ythi..

Main- Rani pari...

Rani pari- Arre Saurya beta aao aao main to kab se tumse milna chahti thi par...

Main - Maaf kijiyega par abhi inn sab mein waqt jaaza naa kar hum mudde par aate hai...Kya hum kisi ko time travel karne se rok sakte hai..

Rani pari ne mujhe pahle to acche se dekha uske baad apni aankhen band ki aur thodi der mein unke haath mein ek kitab aa gayi thi...Unhone wo kitab mujhe de diya...

Main- ye kya hai..

Rani pari- Kitab hai tumhari hi hai par tumhe milli nahi thi abhi tak isko padho sab samjh jaaoge...

Main- Meri hai se kya matlab..

Rani pari - Khass tumhare liye likhi gayi hai ye iss kitab ko dhyan se padhna aaram se koi jaldbazzi nahi samjhe...

Main- waqt ki hi to kammi hai...

Rani pari( Haste hue)- Wahi to khatam karni hai naa..isko padhna shuru karo sab samajh jaaoge..

Main-thik hai..

Itna bol waha se kitab lekar chala gaya..

Earth pe aaya to sham ho rahi thi...

Abhi aaya hi tha aur mera phone bajne laga..

Maine dekha phone mom ka tha maine unse baat ki unhone kaha ki wo jagah safe hai unpe bharosha kar sakte saath mein ye bhi kaha ki waha meri choti maasi ke alawa aur bhi log aa rahe hai jaise meri badi bua meri badi maasi ye sab...

Mom- Beta abhi main inhe tere baare mein batane ka soch rahi hu...

Main- Mom please thoda aur ruk jao maine kuch socha hai please please..

Mom- Haa bata kya socha hai..

Main- aapko khud pata chal jaayega waise badi maasi kab aa rahi hai..

Mom- Wo parso tak aa jaayegi pata hai abhi unko hamare yaha hone ka pata chala naa to kitna bawal hua tha..arre kya bataun....

Fir MOm ne mujhe wo saare emotional kisse sunaye jo waha hue the aur bhi bahut kuch aur issi tarah phone pe baaat karte hue hi sham se raat ho gayi maine kitab ko palat ke bhi nahi dekha tha...

Mom ne call cut kiya aur main jaldi se pahuch gaya RAW ke diye hue flat par..waha jaa kar abhi baitha hi tha ke dimmag mein kuch aaya aur maine kitab ko side kiya aur dhyaan mein baith gaya.....

Aaj ke liye itna hi bahut kuch hua hai iss update mein autr hum dhere dhere badh rahe hai iss part ke annt ki oor pahle hi bata deta hu annt Iss time period ke Maarcuss ke aant se hogi saaath hi hamare nayye villan ke samne aane se ye issliye likh raha ki koi ye naa kahe ending nahi sochi hai saath hi kuch suggetions ke liye agar aap chahte ho ki ending change ki jaaye to jarur baataiye waise change hone wali nahi hai maine soch rakha hai...haa par unn suggetions se jo agla part hoga usme madad ho jaayegi meri...Ab yaha Readers ye hi kahenge Writer to comments dekhta bhinahi hai to aisa nahi hai doston aap sab ke comments main dekhunga aur reply bhi karunga....To bane rahiye...

Ek baaar sabhi Readers ko dil se shukriya kahna cahunga saath bane rahne ke liye..

Agle update mein dekhte hai ye naya kitab kya hai aur saath hi Jwala ko laane ki taiyaari aur Bansoa se sabhi shathiyon ka bhi aana......
Super update bro
 
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