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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Kya mujhe mere likhne ka tarika change karna chahiye

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UPDATE - 94

Ab tak

Main Parilok se Rani Pari se ek kitab le kar Earth par aa gaya tha....usko padhne ki soch raha tha ki dimmag mein kisi ka khyal aaya aur main dhyaan mein baith gaya...

Ab aage

Next morning

Main utha sabse pahle wo kitab li aur usko padhne laga bahut si baatein pata chala uss kitab se...Usme jwala ke baare mein bhi likha tha..sath hi kuch aur tarike time travel ke...saath mein kaise kisi ko ek waqt pe aane se rooka jaaye uske liye time shield ka jikar kiya hua tha

Time shield iske baare mein ye likha tha ki jis time period mein bhi ye lagaya jaaye yaa isko lagane wala ho waha koi bhi dusra time travel ke through nahi aa sakta aur agar kisi tarah aa bhi gaya to wo uska sharir yaa to kaafi jyada umar ka ho jaayega yaa to bahut kaam umar kaa....usko banane ka tarika kuch aisa tha jisme Jwala ki jarurat padni thi saath hi Kaal sarp ki bhi....

iss kitab ko padhne mein hi mujhe bahut waqt lag gaya tha...karib 11 baj gaye the din ke jab main kitab padh ke taiyaar hua aur itne der mein sabhi ne mujhse contact karne ki koshish ki thi par main ignore kar raha tha...

Ab pahla target tha mujhe Jwala ko yaha laana Kaal sarp to yahi tha...

Main waha se nikla aur sheedha pahuch gaya Niharika ke planet pe...aur waha se kaal sarp ke pass jo abhi Dristi ke saaath khel raha tha...

Main- Baat hui kya kuch..

Kaal sarp- Haa baat ki maine par....

Main- Ab kya par kar rahe ho...batao

Kaal sarp- Alex aur Varsha dono ready the ki Varsha jaayegi par tabhi ye...

Main- Tabhi ye kya..

Usne Dristi ki taraf dekha...

Main- Dristi isne kya kiya..

Kaal sarp-ye unn dono ke goad mein gayi aur fir wo dono chale gaye isko mere pass chod kar main to abhi tak intezar kar raha hu unke aane ka..

Main- kya....wo kaha gaye honge...

Kaal sarp- Pata nahi...

Main- accha aap yahi ruko main dekh kar aata hu unko..

Main waha se pure planet pe unn dono ko dhundhne laga par wo nahi mille...aur isme maine bahut time waste kar liya tha...ahut gussa aa raha tha mujhe iss waqt...

Main seedha waha se Earth pe aa gaya aur....abhi aaya hi tha ki Mohini aur baaki sab mere pass aa gayi...

Shilpa- Kaha the kab se sampark banane ki koshish kar rahe hai aur aap...

Main- Busy tha bolo kya baat hai...

Paridhi- Busy the itna kya busy ho gaye ki humko bhi bhul gaye....

Main- Arre kaam tha bola naa....

Priya- To batao naa kya kaam tha jo humse bhi baat nahi ki...

Ab yaha pe mujhe gussa aa gaya...

Main- batana jaruri hai...kya dimmag kharab kar rakha hai jab waqt aayega batla dunga abhi jaao yaha se...

Shilpa- Saurya ye kya tarika hai..

Main- Dekho abhi jao yaha se mera mood nahi hai kisi se baat karne kaa...

Binna kuch kahe wo sabhi chale gaye waha se....wahi main sochne laga ki ab kya karu kaha dhundhu unn dono ko aur ye time shield kaise banau...

Bahut se sawal the par jawab kuch bhi nahi....

Main wahi baith gaya aur sochta raha inn sab ke baare mein aur pata nahi kaise par neend aa gayi mujhe...

"Saurya bacchao Saurya bachao"

"kon hai kon hai waha "

"Saurya bachao mujhe ye maar dega mujhe"

"kon hai kon hai waha mujhe kuch dikhayi kyun nahi de raha"

"Sauryaaaaaaa"

bas meri aankh khul gayi main wahi sofe pe baitha hua soo gaya tha....aur sayad ye koi sapna tha...Haa sapna hi hoga...par pata nahi kyun asli saa lag raha tha aur wo awaj wo bhi pahchani hui thi...

Time dekha to raat ke 7 baj rahe the aaj ka pura din hi bekar hgaya tha mera kaha maine socha tha Jwala ko laane ke baare mein aur kaha....

Kappa- abhi kya hua tha..

Main- Kya kya hua tha salla din barbad challa gaya...socha tha Kuch karunga par...

Kappa- Nahi kuch aur hua tha main bata nahi sakta aisa laga main kahi kho sa gaya tha..

Main- Kya tu bhi...waham hoga tera bas aur kuch nahi...Accha main soch raha hu dono ko dekh aau...

Kappa- Hmm thik hai aaj to dono mil gaye honge..

Main- Haa yaar wahi dekhna hai chalo...

Maine portal khola aur ek jagah chala gaya waha dekha to ek ladka aur ek ladki thi waha pe...dono galle lage hue the ladki roye jaa rahi thi...

Main- Ye roo kyun rahi h....ye yaha bhi waah iss chote se packet ne kaam aasan kar diya apna..

Kappa- Arre par ye yaha kaise...

Main- Kaise kya bhag aayi hogi ussi din ki tarah...aur Wo Varsha aur Alex dono isko Kaal sarp ke pass chod kar chale gaye the...

Main unn dono ki oor badha dhire dhire...dono nahi tinno Dristi thi naa goad mein Kiran ke...

Main untak pahuchta usse pahle hi Dristi udti hui aayi aur mere goad mein aa gayi...Waha utne log nahi the jo ye sab dekh paate...

Mere paas aate hi wo hasne lagi...ab baccho ki muskan ka to pata hi hai naa koi kitni bhi badi pareshani mein ho sab kuch bhul jaata hai isko dekh kar...

Abhi main uske muskurate hue chote se chahre ko dekh hi raha tha ki...hum waha se Nihari ke planet pe pahuch gaye aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala...

Waha pahucha to wo udti hui apni Maa yaani Varsha ke goad mein chali gayi...

Varsha- Ye tumhare pass thi main kab se dhundh rahi thi iss shaitan ko....

Main- Haa wo...Accha ye Alex kaha gaya usse kuch baat karni thi mujhe...

Varsha- Wo tumhare pass hi gaye the wo permission lene...

Main- Permission??...kis baat ki

Varsha- Wo Wo shadi ke liye..

Main- Kya...accha main chalta hu...

Main waha se jaldi Earth pe aaya wahi RAW ke flat mein waha pahucha to pahle se hi Alex waha baitha tha...

Main- Kaha the aaj din bhar se kab se dhundh raha tha main...

Alex- Wo kuch discuss karna tha...

Main- kya hame bhi batao hum bhi to jaane...

Alex- Arre wo Jwala ko lane ke liye....wahi sab...

Main- Haa kaal sarp se baat ho gayi hai meri usne bola ki Varsha ke saath main chala jaun fir Niharika to manna karegi nahi...

Alex- kya...par main to...

Main- ha batao tum to kya...


Alex- Arre main to wo shadi ki baat soch raha tha..

Main- Shadi wo kyun bhala

Alex- Arre hum aise hi thodi....aur ab to Dristi bhi hai naa.

Main- Haa Dristi bhi hai to usse aur shadi se kya lena dena....

Alex - Arre wo badi hogi to...

Main- Haa badi to....

Main abhi bol hi raha tha ki Pradeep aur Kiran waha aa gaye...

Pradeep- Kya kiya tunne meri bahno ke saath...

Main- Arre Pradeep tujhe sab yaad aa gaya naa...aur Kiran tum thik ho naa...

Pradeep- Tunne meri bahno ko kyun rulaya..

Main- Main kyun rulaunga kisi ko yaar aur kya baatein kar raha hai tu....

Kiran- Wo sab roo rahi thi aur gusse mein bhi hai...

Main- tum sab Shilpa aur baakiyon ki baat kar rahe ho kya...

Pradeep- Haa unhi ki baat kar rahe hai hum...ab bata kya kiya tunne...

Main- Yaar maine kuch bhi nahi kiya sach bol raha hu...

Pradeep - Kiran chalo yaha se Alex tum bhi jaao isko akela chod do kya pata galti yaad aa jaaye...

Alex- par wo main....

Main- Haa permission hai ab jao yaha se aur sochne do ki maine aisa kon sa kaam kar diya ki wo sab roo rahi hai...

Alex chala gaya Kiran aur Pradeep bhi chale gaye baccha ab sirf main...

Chaliye Saurya ko chod hum chalte hai Bansoa mein...

Yaha pe lagbhag aadha planet khali kiya jaa chuka tha Headmaster ne logo se bola tha ki ye jagah ab shurakshit nahi rahi aur bhi saath mein kahi saare reasons de diye the...

Margret- Dadu bas kuch din aur fir hum yaha se chale jaayenge naa..

Headmaster- Haa beta hum chale jaayenge...tumne library ki chizze ikatha karni shuru kar di hai naa..

Margret - Hmm Dadu kar di hai waise ek baat kahni thi mujhe...

Headmaster- Haa bolo kya baat hai...

Margret- Main soch rahi thi jaa kar dekh aauss jagako jaha hummw jaana hao kya pata wahavkaise log ho..

Headmaster- Baat to sah hai aur tumhri aur tumhe jaana bhi chahiye par akele nahi.... Henry aur Rita saath jayenge tumhare..

Margret- Thik hai Dadu to main aaj hi nikalna chahungi...

Headmaster- Beta aaj nahi aaj to bas unn dono ko batna hai kal chale jaana....


Aaj ke liye itna hi agle update mein Margret ka Earth daura aur Alex ki shadi saath mein Saurya ka baaki sabhi ko manana ye sab hoga...


To banne rahiye
Nice update ye kya hero ne to frustrate ho kar saari ki saari ranio ko rula diya ab hamare hero ka band bajenga saari ranio ke haatho:slap:?
 

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UPDATE - 94

Ab tak

Main Parilok se Rani Pari se ek kitab le kar Earth par aa gaya tha....usko padhne ki soch raha tha ki dimmag mein kisi ka khyal aaya aur main dhyaan mein baith gaya...

Ab aage

Next morning

Main utha sabse pahle wo kitab li aur usko padhne laga bahut si baatein pata chala uss kitab se...Usme jwala ke baare mein bhi likha tha..sath hi kuch aur tarike time travel ke...saath mein kaise kisi ko ek waqt pe aane se rooka jaaye uske liye time shield ka jikar kiya hua tha

Time shield iske baare mein ye likha tha ki jis time period mein bhi ye lagaya jaaye yaa isko lagane wala ho waha koi bhi dusra time travel ke through nahi aa sakta aur agar kisi tarah aa bhi gaya to wo uska sharir yaa to kaafi jyada umar ka ho jaayega yaa to bahut kaam umar kaa....usko banane ka tarika kuch aisa tha jisme Jwala ki jarurat padni thi saath hi Kaal sarp ki bhi....

iss kitab ko padhne mein hi mujhe bahut waqt lag gaya tha...karib 11 baj gaye the din ke jab main kitab padh ke taiyaar hua aur itne der mein sabhi ne mujhse contact karne ki koshish ki thi par main ignore kar raha tha...

Ab pahla target tha mujhe Jwala ko yaha laana Kaal sarp to yahi tha...

Main waha se nikla aur sheedha pahuch gaya Niharika ke planet pe...aur waha se kaal sarp ke pass jo abhi Dristi ke saaath khel raha tha...

Main- Baat hui kya kuch..

Kaal sarp- Haa baat ki maine par....

Main- Ab kya par kar rahe ho...batao

Kaal sarp- Alex aur Varsha dono ready the ki Varsha jaayegi par tabhi ye...

Main- Tabhi ye kya..

Usne Dristi ki taraf dekha...

Main- Dristi isne kya kiya..

Kaal sarp-ye unn dono ke goad mein gayi aur fir wo dono chale gaye isko mere pass chod kar main to abhi tak intezar kar raha hu unke aane ka..

Main- kya....wo kaha gaye honge...

Kaal sarp- Pata nahi...

Main- accha aap yahi ruko main dekh kar aata hu unko..

Main waha se pure planet pe unn dono ko dhundhne laga par wo nahi mille...aur isme maine bahut time waste kar liya tha...ahut gussa aa raha tha mujhe iss waqt...

Main seedha waha se Earth pe aa gaya aur....abhi aaya hi tha ki Mohini aur baaki sab mere pass aa gayi...

Shilpa- Kaha the kab se sampark banane ki koshish kar rahe hai aur aap...

Main- Busy tha bolo kya baat hai...

Paridhi- Busy the itna kya busy ho gaye ki humko bhi bhul gaye....

Main- Arre kaam tha bola naa....

Priya- To batao naa kya kaam tha jo humse bhi baat nahi ki...

Ab yaha pe mujhe gussa aa gaya...

Main- batana jaruri hai...kya dimmag kharab kar rakha hai jab waqt aayega batla dunga abhi jaao yaha se...

Shilpa- Saurya ye kya tarika hai..

Main- Dekho abhi jao yaha se mera mood nahi hai kisi se baat karne kaa...

Binna kuch kahe wo sabhi chale gaye waha se....wahi main sochne laga ki ab kya karu kaha dhundhu unn dono ko aur ye time shield kaise banau...

Bahut se sawal the par jawab kuch bhi nahi....

Main wahi baith gaya aur sochta raha inn sab ke baare mein aur pata nahi kaise par neend aa gayi mujhe...

"Saurya bacchao Saurya bachao"

"kon hai kon hai waha "

"Saurya bachao mujhe ye maar dega mujhe"

"kon hai kon hai waha mujhe kuch dikhayi kyun nahi de raha"

"Sauryaaaaaaa"

bas meri aankh khul gayi main wahi sofe pe baitha hua soo gaya tha....aur sayad ye koi sapna tha...Haa sapna hi hoga...par pata nahi kyun asli saa lag raha tha aur wo awaj wo bhi pahchani hui thi...

Time dekha to raat ke 7 baj rahe the aaj ka pura din hi bekar hgaya tha mera kaha maine socha tha Jwala ko laane ke baare mein aur kaha....

Kappa- abhi kya hua tha..

Main- Kya kya hua tha salla din barbad challa gaya...socha tha Kuch karunga par...

Kappa- Nahi kuch aur hua tha main bata nahi sakta aisa laga main kahi kho sa gaya tha..

Main- Kya tu bhi...waham hoga tera bas aur kuch nahi...Accha main soch raha hu dono ko dekh aau...

Kappa- Hmm thik hai aaj to dono mil gaye honge..

Main- Haa yaar wahi dekhna hai chalo...

Maine portal khola aur ek jagah chala gaya waha dekha to ek ladka aur ek ladki thi waha pe...dono galle lage hue the ladki roye jaa rahi thi...

Main- Ye roo kyun rahi h....ye yaha bhi waah iss chote se packet ne kaam aasan kar diya apna..

Kappa- Arre par ye yaha kaise...

Main- Kaise kya bhag aayi hogi ussi din ki tarah...aur Wo Varsha aur Alex dono isko Kaal sarp ke pass chod kar chale gaye the...

Main unn dono ki oor badha dhire dhire...dono nahi tinno Dristi thi naa goad mein Kiran ke...

Main untak pahuchta usse pahle hi Dristi udti hui aayi aur mere goad mein aa gayi...Waha utne log nahi the jo ye sab dekh paate...

Mere paas aate hi wo hasne lagi...ab baccho ki muskan ka to pata hi hai naa koi kitni bhi badi pareshani mein ho sab kuch bhul jaata hai isko dekh kar...

Abhi main uske muskurate hue chote se chahre ko dekh hi raha tha ki...hum waha se Nihari ke planet pe pahuch gaye aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala...

Waha pahucha to wo udti hui apni Maa yaani Varsha ke goad mein chali gayi...

Varsha- Ye tumhare pass thi main kab se dhundh rahi thi iss shaitan ko....

Main- Haa wo...Accha ye Alex kaha gaya usse kuch baat karni thi mujhe...

Varsha- Wo tumhare pass hi gaye the wo permission lene...

Main- Permission??...kis baat ki

Varsha- Wo Wo shadi ke liye..

Main- Kya...accha main chalta hu...

Main waha se jaldi Earth pe aaya wahi RAW ke flat mein waha pahucha to pahle se hi Alex waha baitha tha...

Main- Kaha the aaj din bhar se kab se dhundh raha tha main...

Alex- Wo kuch discuss karna tha...

Main- kya hame bhi batao hum bhi to jaane...

Alex- Arre wo Jwala ko lane ke liye....wahi sab...

Main- Haa kaal sarp se baat ho gayi hai meri usne bola ki Varsha ke saath main chala jaun fir Niharika to manna karegi nahi...

Alex- kya...par main to...

Main- ha batao tum to kya...


Alex- Arre main to wo shadi ki baat soch raha tha..

Main- Shadi wo kyun bhala

Alex- Arre hum aise hi thodi....aur ab to Dristi bhi hai naa.

Main- Haa Dristi bhi hai to usse aur shadi se kya lena dena....

Alex - Arre wo badi hogi to...

Main- Haa badi to....

Main abhi bol hi raha tha ki Pradeep aur Kiran waha aa gaye...

Pradeep- Kya kiya tunne meri bahno ke saath...

Main- Arre Pradeep tujhe sab yaad aa gaya naa...aur Kiran tum thik ho naa...

Pradeep- Tunne meri bahno ko kyun rulaya..

Main- Main kyun rulaunga kisi ko yaar aur kya baatein kar raha hai tu....

Kiran- Wo sab roo rahi thi aur gusse mein bhi hai...

Main- tum sab Shilpa aur baakiyon ki baat kar rahe ho kya...

Pradeep- Haa unhi ki baat kar rahe hai hum...ab bata kya kiya tunne...

Main- Yaar maine kuch bhi nahi kiya sach bol raha hu...

Pradeep - Kiran chalo yaha se Alex tum bhi jaao isko akela chod do kya pata galti yaad aa jaaye...

Alex- par wo main....

Main- Haa permission hai ab jao yaha se aur sochne do ki maine aisa kon sa kaam kar diya ki wo sab roo rahi hai...

Alex chala gaya Kiran aur Pradeep bhi chale gaye baccha ab sirf main...

Chaliye Saurya ko chod hum chalte hai Bansoa mein...

Yaha pe lagbhag aadha planet khali kiya jaa chuka tha Headmaster ne logo se bola tha ki ye jagah ab shurakshit nahi rahi aur bhi saath mein kahi saare reasons de diye the...

Margret- Dadu bas kuch din aur fir hum yaha se chale jaayenge naa..

Headmaster- Haa beta hum chale jaayenge...tumne library ki chizze ikatha karni shuru kar di hai naa..

Margret - Hmm Dadu kar di hai waise ek baat kahni thi mujhe...

Headmaster- Haa bolo kya baat hai...

Margret- Main soch rahi thi jaa kar dekh aauss jagako jaha hummw jaana hao kya pata wahavkaise log ho..

Headmaster- Baat to sah hai aur tumhri aur tumhe jaana bhi chahiye par akele nahi.... Henry aur Rita saath jayenge tumhare..

Margret- Thik hai Dadu to main aaj hi nikalna chahungi...

Headmaster- Beta aaj nahi aaj to bas unn dono ko batna hai kal chale jaana....


Aaj ke liye itna hi agle update mein Margret ka Earth daura aur Alex ki shadi saath mein Saurya ka baaki sabhi ko manana ye sab hoga...


To banne rahiye
Gjb bro ??
 

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Killerpanditji(pandit)

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UPDATE - 94

Ab tak

Main Parilok se Rani Pari se ek kitab le kar Earth par aa gaya tha....usko padhne ki soch raha tha ki dimmag mein kisi ka khyal aaya aur main dhyaan mein baith gaya...

Ab aage

Next morning

Main utha sabse pahle wo kitab li aur usko padhne laga bahut si baatein pata chala uss kitab se...Usme jwala ke baare mein bhi likha tha..sath hi kuch aur tarike time travel ke...saath mein kaise kisi ko ek waqt pe aane se rooka jaaye uske liye time shield ka jikar kiya hua tha

Time shield iske baare mein ye likha tha ki jis time period mein bhi ye lagaya jaaye yaa isko lagane wala ho waha koi bhi dusra time travel ke through nahi aa sakta aur agar kisi tarah aa bhi gaya to wo uska sharir yaa to kaafi jyada umar ka ho jaayega yaa to bahut kaam umar kaa....usko banane ka tarika kuch aisa tha jisme Jwala ki jarurat padni thi saath hi Kaal sarp ki bhi....

iss kitab ko padhne mein hi mujhe bahut waqt lag gaya tha...karib 11 baj gaye the din ke jab main kitab padh ke taiyaar hua aur itne der mein sabhi ne mujhse contact karne ki koshish ki thi par main ignore kar raha tha...

Ab pahla target tha mujhe Jwala ko yaha laana Kaal sarp to yahi tha...

Main waha se nikla aur sheedha pahuch gaya Niharika ke planet pe...aur waha se kaal sarp ke pass jo abhi Dristi ke saaath khel raha tha...

Main- Baat hui kya kuch..

Kaal sarp- Haa baat ki maine par....

Main- Ab kya par kar rahe ho...batao

Kaal sarp- Alex aur Varsha dono ready the ki Varsha jaayegi par tabhi ye...

Main- Tabhi ye kya..

Usne Dristi ki taraf dekha...

Main- Dristi isne kya kiya..

Kaal sarp-ye unn dono ke goad mein gayi aur fir wo dono chale gaye isko mere pass chod kar main to abhi tak intezar kar raha hu unke aane ka..

Main- kya....wo kaha gaye honge...

Kaal sarp- Pata nahi...

Main- accha aap yahi ruko main dekh kar aata hu unko..

Main waha se pure planet pe unn dono ko dhundhne laga par wo nahi mille...aur isme maine bahut time waste kar liya tha...ahut gussa aa raha tha mujhe iss waqt...

Main seedha waha se Earth pe aa gaya aur....abhi aaya hi tha ki Mohini aur baaki sab mere pass aa gayi...

Shilpa- Kaha the kab se sampark banane ki koshish kar rahe hai aur aap...

Main- Busy tha bolo kya baat hai...

Paridhi- Busy the itna kya busy ho gaye ki humko bhi bhul gaye....

Main- Arre kaam tha bola naa....

Priya- To batao naa kya kaam tha jo humse bhi baat nahi ki...

Ab yaha pe mujhe gussa aa gaya...

Main- batana jaruri hai...kya dimmag kharab kar rakha hai jab waqt aayega batla dunga abhi jaao yaha se...

Shilpa- Saurya ye kya tarika hai..

Main- Dekho abhi jao yaha se mera mood nahi hai kisi se baat karne kaa...

Binna kuch kahe wo sabhi chale gaye waha se....wahi main sochne laga ki ab kya karu kaha dhundhu unn dono ko aur ye time shield kaise banau...

Bahut se sawal the par jawab kuch bhi nahi....

Main wahi baith gaya aur sochta raha inn sab ke baare mein aur pata nahi kaise par neend aa gayi mujhe...

"Saurya bacchao Saurya bachao"

"kon hai kon hai waha "

"Saurya bachao mujhe ye maar dega mujhe"

"kon hai kon hai waha mujhe kuch dikhayi kyun nahi de raha"

"Sauryaaaaaaa"

bas meri aankh khul gayi main wahi sofe pe baitha hua soo gaya tha....aur sayad ye koi sapna tha...Haa sapna hi hoga...par pata nahi kyun asli saa lag raha tha aur wo awaj wo bhi pahchani hui thi...

Time dekha to raat ke 7 baj rahe the aaj ka pura din hi bekar hgaya tha mera kaha maine socha tha Jwala ko laane ke baare mein aur kaha....

Kappa- abhi kya hua tha..

Main- Kya kya hua tha salla din barbad challa gaya...socha tha Kuch karunga par...

Kappa- Nahi kuch aur hua tha main bata nahi sakta aisa laga main kahi kho sa gaya tha..

Main- Kya tu bhi...waham hoga tera bas aur kuch nahi...Accha main soch raha hu dono ko dekh aau...

Kappa- Hmm thik hai aaj to dono mil gaye honge..

Main- Haa yaar wahi dekhna hai chalo...

Maine portal khola aur ek jagah chala gaya waha dekha to ek ladka aur ek ladki thi waha pe...dono galle lage hue the ladki roye jaa rahi thi...

Main- Ye roo kyun rahi h....ye yaha bhi waah iss chote se packet ne kaam aasan kar diya apna..

Kappa- Arre par ye yaha kaise...

Main- Kaise kya bhag aayi hogi ussi din ki tarah...aur Wo Varsha aur Alex dono isko Kaal sarp ke pass chod kar chale gaye the...

Main unn dono ki oor badha dhire dhire...dono nahi tinno Dristi thi naa goad mein Kiran ke...

Main untak pahuchta usse pahle hi Dristi udti hui aayi aur mere goad mein aa gayi...Waha utne log nahi the jo ye sab dekh paate...

Mere paas aate hi wo hasne lagi...ab baccho ki muskan ka to pata hi hai naa koi kitni bhi badi pareshani mein ho sab kuch bhul jaata hai isko dekh kar...

Abhi main uske muskurate hue chote se chahre ko dekh hi raha tha ki...hum waha se Nihari ke planet pe pahuch gaye aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala...

Waha pahucha to wo udti hui apni Maa yaani Varsha ke goad mein chali gayi...

Varsha- Ye tumhare pass thi main kab se dhundh rahi thi iss shaitan ko....

Main- Haa wo...Accha ye Alex kaha gaya usse kuch baat karni thi mujhe...

Varsha- Wo tumhare pass hi gaye the wo permission lene...

Main- Permission??...kis baat ki

Varsha- Wo Wo shadi ke liye..

Main- Kya...accha main chalta hu...

Main waha se jaldi Earth pe aaya wahi RAW ke flat mein waha pahucha to pahle se hi Alex waha baitha tha...

Main- Kaha the aaj din bhar se kab se dhundh raha tha main...

Alex- Wo kuch discuss karna tha...

Main- kya hame bhi batao hum bhi to jaane...

Alex- Arre wo Jwala ko lane ke liye....wahi sab...

Main- Haa kaal sarp se baat ho gayi hai meri usne bola ki Varsha ke saath main chala jaun fir Niharika to manna karegi nahi...

Alex- kya...par main to...

Main- ha batao tum to kya...


Alex- Arre main to wo shadi ki baat soch raha tha..

Main- Shadi wo kyun bhala

Alex- Arre hum aise hi thodi....aur ab to Dristi bhi hai naa.

Main- Haa Dristi bhi hai to usse aur shadi se kya lena dena....

Alex - Arre wo badi hogi to...

Main- Haa badi to....

Main abhi bol hi raha tha ki Pradeep aur Kiran waha aa gaye...

Pradeep- Kya kiya tunne meri bahno ke saath...

Main- Arre Pradeep tujhe sab yaad aa gaya naa...aur Kiran tum thik ho naa...

Pradeep- Tunne meri bahno ko kyun rulaya..

Main- Main kyun rulaunga kisi ko yaar aur kya baatein kar raha hai tu....

Kiran- Wo sab roo rahi thi aur gusse mein bhi hai...

Main- tum sab Shilpa aur baakiyon ki baat kar rahe ho kya...

Pradeep- Haa unhi ki baat kar rahe hai hum...ab bata kya kiya tunne...

Main- Yaar maine kuch bhi nahi kiya sach bol raha hu...

Pradeep - Kiran chalo yaha se Alex tum bhi jaao isko akela chod do kya pata galti yaad aa jaaye...

Alex- par wo main....

Main- Haa permission hai ab jao yaha se aur sochne do ki maine aisa kon sa kaam kar diya ki wo sab roo rahi hai...

Alex chala gaya Kiran aur Pradeep bhi chale gaye baccha ab sirf main...

Chaliye Saurya ko chod hum chalte hai Bansoa mein...

Yaha pe lagbhag aadha planet khali kiya jaa chuka tha Headmaster ne logo se bola tha ki ye jagah ab shurakshit nahi rahi aur bhi saath mein kahi saare reasons de diye the...

Margret- Dadu bas kuch din aur fir hum yaha se chale jaayenge naa..

Headmaster- Haa beta hum chale jaayenge...tumne library ki chizze ikatha karni shuru kar di hai naa..

Margret - Hmm Dadu kar di hai waise ek baat kahni thi mujhe...

Headmaster- Haa bolo kya baat hai...

Margret- Main soch rahi thi jaa kar dekh aauss jagako jaha hummw jaana hao kya pata wahavkaise log ho..

Headmaster- Baat to sah hai aur tumhri aur tumhe jaana bhi chahiye par akele nahi.... Henry aur Rita saath jayenge tumhare..

Margret- Thik hai Dadu to main aaj hi nikalna chahungi...

Headmaster- Beta aaj nahi aaj to bas unn dono ko batna hai kal chale jaana....


Aaj ke liye itna hi agle update mein Margret ka Earth daura aur Alex ki shadi saath mein Saurya ka baaki sabhi ko manana ye sab hoga...


To banne rahiye
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Ab tak

Saurya ne Gudiya ko Pavitra agni mein dal diya uske baad usko Shaitani kitab ke baare mein bahut kuch pata chala. Jwala the Pheonix fir se rakhh se jinda ho gaya tha aur apni purane janmo ki baatein yaad kar raha tha. Saurya ne Kappa ke baare mein Saifali, Alex aur Varsha ko batla diya tha.

Aage

Sun se yaha aane mein aur ye sab karne mein hame late ho gaya tha raat ho chuki thi. Hum tino, main,Alex aur Varsha Jwala jinke paas the usko dekh rahe the ki kab ye kuch bole par wo to kuch bol hi nahi raha tha. Mujhe laga ab mujhe hi baat shuru karni chahiye.

Main- Jwala sab yaad aa gaya kya tumhe.

Jwala- Nahi abhi nahi par thumne jo kiya uske liye shukriya. Saayad agar tum naa aate to main wahi rah jaata. Bahut bahut shukriya.

Main- koi nahi ab ye batao tumhe sab yaad aane mein kitna waqt lagega.

Jwala- Saayad 1 din yaa usse bhi kam....tum kya mujhe koi aisi jagah bata sakte ho jaha baith kar mein dhyaan laga saku.

Main- Haa jarur waise tum yaha bhi kar sakte ho.

Jwala- Nahi yaha nahi agar yaha kiya to aas pass ke log meri energy se ghabra jaayenge. Koi dusri jagah batao.

B.S- isko Saifali ke yaha chod aao wo sambhal legi.

Main- Hmm ye bhi sahi hai waise bhi main Shilpa se milna chahta tha.

Main- Alex Varsha tum jao main isko jagah dikha kar aata hu.

Alex- hmm thik hai tum jao.

Wo dono nikal gaye.

Main- Tum kya roop badal sakte ho matlab insan ki tarah ban sakte ho kyunki yaha logo ko itna bada chil( eagle) wo bhi jisse aag nikal raha ho wo dekhne ki aadat nahi hai naa.

Jwala- Hmm bilkul ban sakta hu tum bas mujhe koi insan dikha do jiski tarah mujhe banna hai.

Main- kisi bhi insan ki tarah ban jaao bas insan lagne chahiye tum.

Usne aakhen band ki apne pankho ko phailaya aur fir unhi se khud ko chipane laga aur boom ek chota sa dhamaka aur wo insan ban gaya tha.

Main- Hmm ye sahi hai chalo ab le chalta hu tumhe uss jagah jaha tum aaram se dhyaan laga sakte ho.

Maine Saifali se baat ki uske baare mein usse bola ki portal khole.

Saifali ne bhi portal khol diya aur hum dono ander chale gaye.

Saifali- to ye hai wo Jwala the Pheonix isko sab yaad aaya yaa nahi.

Main- nahi abhi nahi aaya hai par jald hi aa jaayega. waise Shilpa kaha hai.

Saifali- wo so rahi hai milna hai to kal aana ab jao yaha se.

Main- arre bas ek baa.........Saifaliiiiii

Main bol hi raha tha usne ek portal khola aur mujhe ander dhaka de diya. Main apne room mein pahuch gaya.

Main- iss Saifali ka kuch karna hoga.

Main ghar mein aaya yaha Mohini ko dhundhne laga to pata chala wo bhi Saifali ke yaha hi hai Shilpa ke saath.

Ab kuch kar to sakta nahi tha to bed par chala gaya sone ke liye par tabhi ek kaagaj ka tukda milla mujhe.

" 2 mil gayi to unhi mein lag gaye baakiyon ka kya haa jab unko sab yaad aayega aur hamse puchengi ki itna waqt kyun laga to kya jawab denge hum. Issliye hum dono ne tay kiya hai jab tak unko sab yaad nahi aata tabtak kuch nahi "

Main- Abbe ye kya hai yaar bas yahi baaki tha saali ajeeb jindgi hai ek kaam nipatta nahi dusra aa kar baith jaata hai.

B.S- jo bhi ho raha sahi ho raha baccha yahi tumhari niyati hai.

Main- ab tujhe kya ho gaya aise kyun bol raha hai.

Kappa- Baccha dhyaan lagao warna sab bikhar jaayega tumhare pass jo nayi takat hai usko control karo warna wo tumhe control kar legi jaldi karo Dhyaan mein baitho

Aise hi sabhi books ne bhi ajeeb ajeeb baatein kahi mujhse main bhi baith gaya dhyaan mein.

Jab dhyaan mein baitha to pucho mat kya hua. Main khud ke hi saamne khada tha bas meri uar kuch jyada thi.

Main(old)- To aakhir tum nazdeek pahuch hi rahe ho.

Main- Ye kon si jagah hai aur tum mera matlab main matlab tum itne bade kaise.

Main(old)- lambi kahani hai par sunni to padegi hi tumhe tabhi kuch hoga.

Main- kon si kahani aur kya hone ki baat kar rahe ho tum.

Main(old)- Kappa tumhare ander aa gaya hai iska matlab fir se sab hone wala hai.

Main- kya fir se hone wala hai kuch sahi se batao

Main(old)- wahi hona hai jo pichli baar hua tha jab main tumhari jagah tha tab.

Main- arre yaar saaf saaf bolo mera dimag na khao samjhe.

Main(old) - sale tujhse baat karke ab samajh mein aa raha hai log kyun mujhe chutiya bolte hai.

Main- Abbe tu kahna kya chahta hai saaf saaf bol.

Main(old)- Pheonix uska acche se istemal karna maine galti ki aur aaj yaha khud ke saamne hu.

Main- kya kahna chahte ho khul kar kaho.

Main(old)- jitna bata sakta tha batla diya isse jyada nahi bata sakta haa bas ek advice deta hu waqt dhyaan se chunna agar sab shuru se kar sako to wahi karna.

Abhi main kuch bolta ki wo gayab ho gaya bilkul waise hi jaise Thanos hua tha Endgame mein. Uske jaate hi sab normal ho gaya yaha normal se mera matlab hai waisa hi jaisa jab mein dhyaan mein baithta tha. main foran utha waqt dekha to subah ke 8 baj rahe the kisi ne bhi mujhe uthane ki koshish nahi ki training ke liye pata nahi kyun.

Mere dimmag mein wo baat ghoom rahi thi fir se sab shuru se karne ki koshish karo. Ab ye shuru se kanha se shuru hota tha ye nahi samajh aa raha tha. kya main khud ko iss janam ke shuru mein jaane ki baat kar raha tha yaa pichle janam mein yaa fir uss janam mein jab mein Samrath Saurya tha yaa phir koi aur waqt kuch palle nahi pad raha tha. Ek pal ko to ye laga ki main soch hi kya raha hu kyun ki time travel to possible hi nahi tha par fir wo kya tha jo maine Dhyaan mein dekha tha.

Yahi sab dimmag mein liye main room se nikla samne Paridhi baithi hui thi mujhe dekhte hi khadi ho gayi.

Paridhi- Main ready hu chalo.

Main( maan mein)- Ab isko kya hua kaha chalne ki baat kar rahi hai.

Paridhi- Saurya Saurya kaha kho gaye chalo chalna nahi hai kya.

Main- kaha chalna hai??

Paridhi(ghurte hue)- Arre tumne hi to bola tha kal raat kisi ko laane jaana hai.

Main- Maine bola tha ? Ab ye bhi bata do kise aur kisko laane jaana hai.

Paridhi- Haa tumne hi bola tha naa wo Puja aur Priya haa wahi unn dono ko jaipur se laana hai. Unke pass bhi powers hai naa issliye.

Main- Kyaaa

Paridhi- haa aur nahi to kya. Ab chalo waise bhi mujhe kuch kaam hai.

Main-(maan mein)hmm chalo dekhta hu waha kya shock mil......ek minute isne abhi tak koi aisi waisi harkat kyun nahi ki ye ho kya raha hai. B.S , Kappa, Books koi hai kuch batao kya chal raha hai ye.

Kisi ka koi jawab hi nahi aa raha tha mujhe kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ho kya raha hai.

saayad kahi fas gaya hu main yaa kuch aur pata hi nahi kya ho raha tha.

Paridhi bas mujhe dekhe jaa rahi thi ek tak aisa lag raha tha jaise wo pause ho gayi ho. Kuch bol hi nahi rahi thi wo pata hi nahi chal raha tha ki ho kya raha hai.

Pata nahi dimmag mein kya aaya ki maine jor se Jwala ko pukara puri takat ke saath.

Jwala- Saurya bolo main yahi hu tumhare ander.

Main- tum mere ander kaise ye ho kya raha hai kya chal raha hai ye.

Jwala- Do time period takraye hai sab kuch idher udher ho gaya hai jo tumhare saamne hai wo Paridhi nahi hai wo koi aur hai wo maaya hai Maarcuss ki.

Main- Maarcuss ki maaya tum kahna kya chahte ho clearly batao.

Jwala- apni talwar ko bulla kar dekho sab samajh mein aa jaayega.

Maine apni talwar ko yaad kiya par kuch bhi nahi hua. Main bas yu hi khada raha.

Jwala- Nahi aaya na wo. Wo jaa chuka hai dost sab kuch jaa chuka hai waise ye hona to nahi chahiye tha agar main waqt par tumhare pass aa jata agar tum sab bhi sahi waqt par sahi kadam uthate to ye nahi hota.

Main- Hua kya ye dikhao mujhe main janna chahta hu sab kuch.

Jwala- Aankhen band karo sab kuch dikhega ki kya hua kya nahi.

Maine bhi aankhen band ki aur fir jo dikha wo bahut hi ajeeb tha. Main khud hi apni talwar ko fenk deta hu par kyun ba syahi dekh kar to meri aankh khul gayi.

Main- Jwala ye kya tha maine waisa kyun kiya.

Jwala- kyunki tumne sab kho diya tha tum sab kuch haar gaye the aur pata hai ye kyun hua ye sab tumhare iss attitude ke kaaran hua hai ye bachpana jo tumhare ander hai uske kaaran tumhare apno ne hi apno ko maaar diya aur tum bas soote rahe.

Main-Kya matla hai tumhara maine kux=ch nahi kiya kya uss waqt.

Jwala- Kiya naa tum soo rahe the pure 1 saal se soo rahe the tum. Tumhari uss neend ne tumhara sab kuch chin liya sab kuch.

Main- kyaa 1 saal par kaise kyun.

Jwala-tumne khud ki nayi takaton par kaabu nahi paaya tha iss liye unsab ne tumpe kaabu paa liya aur uska asar ye hua.

Main- par main to dhyaan mein baitha tha naa aur tum mere bachpa.......

Jwala- aakhen band karo Saurya abhi tumne wo manzar to dekha hi nahi wo jisme tumne sab kuch khoya jiski wajah se tumne talwar fenki thi.

Maine apni aakhen band ki dekha to ek taraf Shilpa Mohini khadi thi wahi dusri taraf Puja aur Priya khadi thi aur unke piche kadi thi Paridhi jiski goad mein Saifali leti hui thi. Paridhi ki aankhen aag ugalne ko thi aisa lag raha tha sabko khatam hi kar degi. Wahi dur baithe the Kiran,Varsha,Margret. Kiran ne safeed shadi pahen rakhi thi Varsha ke haath mein saayad ek bacchi thi jo roo rahi thi. Wahi Margret ajeeb si dikh rahi thi. Wo tinno waha par baithe muskura rahe the ye sab dekh kar par kyun aur fir meri aankh khul gayi.

Main - Ye kya ho raha hai wo log aise kyun khade the aur Saifali usko kya hua tha aur Varsha , Kiran aur Margret aise kyun the.

Jwala- Unhe lagta tha unka sab kuch chin gaya tha tumhari wajah se aur bas issi liye unn tinno ne mill kar tumhe barbad kar diya tumhara sab kuch chin liya sabko ek dusre se ladwa diya.

Main- kya meri wajah se par unhe aisa kyun lagta tha aur main to main to soo raha tha na.

Jwala- Hmm bas issi wajah se to unhe aisa lagta hai aur saath hi ye uss Marcuss ke jaadu ka bhi asar tha. Aankhen band karo main tumhe dikhata hu ki kaise kab kya hua jiski wajah se unn tinno ko aisa laga.

Maine fir se apni aankhen band ki aur iss baar Mujhe Alex, Sangeeta, Headmaster, Pradeep, Henry aur Rita dikhayi di.

Alex- Wo Shuhani ko le gaye hai hame usko wapas laana hoga.

Sangeeta- hmm par binna Saurya ke jaage waha jaana kya ye sahi hoga.

Alex- jaanta hu muskil hai par hame karna hi hoga apne dost ke liye Samrath ke liye.

Aur issi ke saath wo saare nikal gaye waha se aur iske baad mujhe bas unn sab ki laashen hi dikhi aur saath mein dikha ek talwar jo hubahu meri tarah hi tha. Fir se meri aankhen khul gayi.

Main- ye kya tha aur ye talwar ye to meri thi naa...

Jwala- Ye tumhari nahi Maarcuss ki thi usne jaan bhujh kar choda tha usko waha taaki sabko lage ki tumhari hi talwar se ye sab hua hai aur wo sab ye jaante the ki tumhari talwar sirf tumhari baat maanti hai to ye sab tumne hi khud ka control kho kar kiya hai.

Main- Par maine nahi kiya naa.

Jwala- Ye tum jaante the main jaanta tha par aur koi nahi samjhe. Unsab ko ye lagna laazmi tha. Haa ek Saifali ko kuch saq hua tha par fir....

Main- Fir kya batao mujhe.

Jwala- Uski yaadast chali gayi thi pata nahi kyun saath hi uska jo Mother Elika se contact hota tha wo bhi hona band ho gaya tha aam bhasha mein kahu to wo pagal ho gayi thi usk kuch samajh nahi aata tha issliye uski jimmedari Paridhi ne leli aur jab Saifali ki maut ho rahi thi jo tumne abhi dekha uss waqt wo issiliye itne gusse mein thi.

Main- Kya itna kuch hua uske saath aur main main bas sota raha sab kuch mera lut gaya aur main soota raha.

Jwala- Hmm Chalo ab ek aakhri baar apni aankhen band karo taaki main tumhe wo bhi bata saku ki tum kaise khud se hi mille aur baat ki.

Maine apni aankhein band ki. Iss baar main bilkul akela ek sadak par chal raha tha haathon mein sarab ki bottle thi. Chahera pura dhadhi se bhara pada tha pet nikla hua tha kapde kapdo ki to pucho hi mat aadhnanga tha main uss sadak par chal raha tha wahi mujhe ek banda milla jiski aankhen bilkul hi kaali thi puri kaali ajeeb sa dikh raha tha wo bhi.

Wo- to aakhir haar hi gaya tu

Main- Kon hai be chutiye chal bhag yaha se warna warna main tere ko tere ko teri gaand maar lunga bhag yaha se.

Wo- Main mauka hu mauka jo tujhe tera sab kuch wapas dilwayega sab kuch teri patniyan tere dost aur sabse jyada tera parivaar jiske binna tu tu roota rahta hai raat din.

Main- Abbe bsdk bhag yaha se maine apna sab kuch sab kuch barbaad kar liya hai kuch nahi baccha mere pass uss maderchod Maarcuss ne bhi mujhe maara nahi jinne ko chod diya bolta hai main ek udaharan hu ki jo koi bhi usse takrayega wo wo meri tarah ho jaayega. Maut ki bhikh maangega hahaaha.

Ye bolte hue mere aanshu nikalne lage the.

Wo- Main sab laa dunga par mujhe B.Dragon ke pankh chahiye uska dil chahiye aur wo Kappa ka shield chahiye.

Main-abbe bhag na yaha se kyun paresha kar raha hai wo wo pather dekh raha hai naa wo tere gaand mein daal dunga chala jaa yaha se.

Wo uss pather ko dekhne laga aur fir acchanak boom wo pather chaknachur ho gaya.

Main- kon ho tum aur ye kaise kiya uss Maarcuss ne to koi bhi magical ceature jo uske khilaf tha kisi ko nahi choda fir tu...tu bhi uska sathi hai naa

Wo- Hahahaaahhaa main dusman hu tumhara bhi aur uska bhi par abhi hamara dusmani nibhane ka waqt nahi aaya hai abhi waqt hai milne kaa taaki uss maarcuss ko maar sake usse wo chin sake jo mera hai aur tujhe wo sab wapas mille jo maie kaha aur bharosha kar main ye kar sakta hu tu bas mujhe B.Dragon ke pankh aur dil laa de. Kappa ki shield to tu de nahi sakta ab ye mujhe pata chal gaya hai par fir bhi main madad karunga teri.

Main- tum ho kon aur kyun aisa karna chahte ho.

Wo- Main apne Maalik ko wapas laana chahta hu issi liye ye kar raha hu Main Main Shaitani kitab ho Hahahahhhaa

Main- Kya tum sach mein mujhe sab de sakte ho wo sab kuch jo tumne bola.

Wo- Sab kuch dunga sab kuch jo bol wo sab.

Main- Thik hai main taiyaar hu tumhari madad ke liye tum batao mujhe kya karna hai.

Wo- Maine uss B.dragon ke ;ppankh aur dil ko Chaand par chipaya tha jab uss buddhe ko apne bas mein kiya tha tab par wo bhuddha yaha aa gaya aur fir ye sab ho gaya mujhe maua hi nahi milla un chizo ko wapas laane ka tum mujhe waha se wo laa kar do main tumhara sab kuch tumhe dene ka wada karta hu.

Maine bas sunna uski baat ko aur shidha ek portal khola aur pahuch gaya uss jagah chaand par puri jagah dhuul se bhari hui thi. Usne mujhe bataya tha ki kaha par wo chiz rakhi hai. Main gaya waha aur wo chiz uthayi aur wapas uske pass aa gaya aur usko wo de diya.

Wo- Yaad kar ek baar tunne kisi Pheonix ko bachaya tha wo tere hi ander hai usko bulla wo khud tujhe waha le jaayega. Itna bol kar wo hasta hua waha se bhag gaya. Aur meri aankhen khul gayi.

Main- Ye maine kya kar diya matlab itna bewakoof kaise koi ho sakta hai.

Jwala- ye sawal mujhe puchna chahiye tha. Accha ab koi aur sawal ho to puchho.

Main- Sawal to bahut hai par pahle ye batao Saifali ko hua kya aur kaise.

Jwala- Pavitra agni yaad hai naa tumne diya tha usko. Bas wahi se ye sab hua. Waise to Saifali bahut hi tez dimmag ki thi par usko bhi madad chahiye hota hai naa usne bulaya tha tumhe par tum soo rahe the bas issi mein wo accident hua wo ladki jispe sabse pahle kaabu kiya tha Shaitani kitab ne usko handle karne mein ye sab hua.

Main- Accha wo Main matlab wo jo mere saamne aaya tha uska kya hai usne kaha tha agar sab shuru se kar sako to hi accha hai.

Jwala- Arre haa uska matlab simple tha tum ek time bola aur main tumhe waha chod aaunga par yaha bhi condition hai dost uss time tum bilkul waise hi hoge jaise uss waqt the yaani naa to main hounga naa koi aur jo uss waqt nahi tha.

Main- Time period ab kon sa time period chunnu main. Agar main apne Samrath wale time mein chala jaoun to wapas se fir mujhe Earth par aan hi hoga naa wo sraap wraap ka chakar.

Jwala- Mujhe kya pata ye tumpe depend karta hai.

Main- arre kuch he...

Jwala- bas yahi attitude tumhara tumhe yaha iss jagah laya hai itni badi baat hai aur tum khud naa soch kar aise hi kisi ke kahe par aa jaaoge.

Main- Arre aisa nahi hai dost.

Jwala- Aisa hi hai. Ab jaldi se bolo kaha jaana hai tumhe.

Maine bahut socha aur fir bola.

Main - Iss janam se pahle wale janam mein jab Baba mujhe training de rahe the uss waqt ek baat aur kya tum uss Pihu ko rok sakte ho Baba ke pass jaane se taaki sab nirdharit waqt par ho sake.

Jwala- Nahi main wo to nahi kar sakta par ek chiz hai tumhe abhi tak ki saari baatein yaad hogi sab kuch jo bhi hua. Ek baaat aur iss baar bhi main dobara Suraj par hi rahunga to tumhe jaldi se mujhe waha se lana hoga. Kuch aur bhi baatein sun lo 'Kaal sarp' yaad hai naa Varsha ke pita unko bhi bachana hoga tumhe. Alex aur Varsha ki shadi, Pradeep aur Kiran ki Shadi, Margret ka yaha aana sab kuch tumhe karna hoga samajh rahe ho naa.

Main- Hmm samajh raha hu matlab meri what lagne wali hai.

Jwala- Attitude badlo.

Main- Hmm ab se main serious rahunga inn sab par.

Jwala- Chalo ab waqt ho gaya hai waqt mein piche jaane ka ek aur baat jiss samay mein tumhe waha bhej raha hu agar tumne sab sahi se kiya to Maarcuss kabhi Earth se nikal hi nahi paayega wahi maar jayega wo.

Main- Ek minute bas ek aakhri sawal ka jawab de do jab Maarcuss bahar hi nahi jaa paayega tab ye B.Dragon kaise aazad hoga aur uska dil aur uske pankh wo.

Jwala- Maine bola tha naa 2 time period collapse hue hai bas ye wahi hai.Waise bhi wo B.Dragon mar jaayega thode hi time mein tum usse mil bhi nahi paaoge.

Main- Kab kaise.

Jwala- Arre yaar kitne sawal hai tere itna koi reader naa puchta kabhi. Accha sun wo jo Saitani kitab ka maalik hai naa wo maar dega usko aur haa unn 5 chutiyon se bach ke rahna wo iss baar Maarcuss nahi balki uss Shaitani kitab ke malik ke under kaam karenge.

Main- Accha thik hai arre haa ek aur question wo Bansoa mein gudiya aur wo sab bhi hoga kya.

Jwala- Gudiya nahi hogi kyunki kitab sabse pahle usko hi khatam karega ek baat aur uss kitab ko tumhare baare mein pata nahi hoga aur yahi tumhara plus point hoga.

Main- Accha thik hai main samajh gaya sab kuch.

Jwala- ek baat aur main abhi tumhe jis samay mein bhej raha hu uss samay tak koi book na hogi tumhare pass samajh rahe ho naa matlab shuru se karna hoga aur iss baar yaad rahe tum jaise hi shakti mille uspe kaabu paane ki koshish karoge jitni jaldi ho sake samjhe chalo ab apni aankhen band karo jaldi se.

Maine apni aankhen band kari aur ek ujala meri najaro ke saamne cha gaya


Aaj ke liye itna hi. Agle update mein dekhte hai waqt mein picche jaa kar kya kya karta hai apna hero Saurya. Kya wo saari jimmedariyan nibha paayega yaa fir se apne iss attitude ki wajah se gadbad karega.

Note- Maine pahle hi bola tha iss bande ke attitude ke kaaran isko bada jhatka lagega ye wahi jhatka hai.
Dimakh khrab ho Raha hy
 
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