Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Ristrcted · Apr 11, 2020

Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
so lets go

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Abbasi · Jun 13, 2020

Very nice, fantastic, awesome, fabulous amazing update ..............
keep it up bro ................
Waiting for next update ..............

ULTRA · Jun 13, 2020

Ristrcted said:
Dosto iss jagah s maine strory m thode changes kiye hai .

UPDATE-7

CHARACTERS
GUDDU - EK SMUGLLER

ABTAK
MAINAPNA 2SRA CHAKRA JAGANE K LIYE BAITH GAYA DHYAN M

AAGE

Aaj bhi waisa hi dard hua aur waise hi mere body s ray nikla aur fir sama gaya mere body m.
Meri neend 4 baje k aas paas khuli aaj bhi body dard tha jab main bathroom m fresh hone gaya to mirror m khud ko dekh chowk gaya q ki meri body aur bhi strong lag rahi thi mere muscles aur fule hue the cuts fir aur acche s shape m aa gaye the.Main apne andar aaye is change ko le kr thoda paressan ho gaya k sabko kya bataunga k acchanak aise kaise ho gaya.Fir abhi k liye ye sab dimag s jhatak chal pada gym m aur shuru ki weight lifting pr sala ye weights mujhe bilkul kisi pankh k tarah halke lag rahe the maine dhire -dhire saare weights try kiye pr mere ko to saare ek saath uthne p bhi halke lag rahe the.Mere ko laga sayad body m aaye hue change ki wajah s aisa h.Karib 6 baje gym s nikal park k oor chal diya.Abhi main raaste m hi tha .ye rasta subah k iss samay p bahut sunsan hota h kuch hi log hote hai yaha s aane jaane wale.Mai aage badh hi raha tha k mujhe kuch ladkion k chillane ki awaj sunai di.Main bhi chal pada awaj ki disha m.waha pahucha to paya 6 log mil ke 2 kubshurat ladkiyon ko pakde hue hai.Mainunke pass pahuch kr.
Main: arre kya bhailog subah subah hi paap shuru kr diya chalo ab jaldi s inhe chod k bhag jao nahi to bahut marunga.
A1-(apne sathion s) dekho isse bhaiyon lagta h iski charbi nikalni padegi
A2-haa bhai mere haatho m bhi khujli ho rahi h
A3(leader)-jaa k mita le khujli apne haato ki .
Main -arre jisko bhi aana h jaldi aa jao agar m aa gaya to sabhi ko bahut maarunga.
Mera itna kahna tha ki A2 daudta hua aaya mere paas aur mujhe marne ko apna haath aage kiya.
Maine bhi socha saale k sath khelu bahut din ho gaye the haath saaf kiye.Jab wo mere karib pahucha maine bhi ek punch bana uska pet p maar diya uske hamla karne s phle hi.Maine to bus uske sath khelne k liye aisa kiya tha pr hua ye ki mere punch padte hi wo udta hua apni car p jaa gira aur ab hill bhi nahi raha tha.Jab maine ye dekha to thoda shock ho gaya wahi un gundo aur dono ladkiyon ki to pucho hi mat muh phade kabhi mujhe to kabhi us aadmi ko dekh rahe the .A3 jo unka leader tha wo khud ko sambhal k bola
A3 - Bahut galat kiya tune Lucky bhai k aadmion s panga le ke ab to tu bhi jayega in dono k sath.
Itna bol usne apne 4 sathion ko bej diya mere ko maarne charo hockey stick,baseball stick ,chain aur bat liye duad pade meri or maine socha ab inhe to aur aaram s maarna padega warna ye saare bhi maare jayenge .Abhi m y soch hi raha tha k A1:saale ek ko maar k jyada saana ban raha hai ruk abhi tere ko maar k tere ghar jayenge hm sabhi aur waha p.. aaahhhhh aaaa
wo abhi apni line puri karta ek chanta khinch k maine usse maara chaaataaak jiske baad saale ke ek side k saare dant jamin p the aur wo wahi gira pada tha. Ye dekh A1 bola
A1: arre chutiyon mil k maaro na jaldi kahe bakchodi kr rhe ho ab no baatiyana only lattiyana samjhe nahi hm hi tumko maar denge.
A1 ki baat sun tinno n mil k mujhpe dhawa bola ek ne hockystick s mere pair p waar kiya dusre n baseball bat s mere pith p aur ek n bat s mere sir p.Maine hawa m chalang laga k tino s bach gaya pr tino k hi waar ek dusre ko lag gaye unko gussa aagay aur wo fir meri taraf daude maine bhi ek k pair p laat maari aur baaki 2 k seene p ghusha de diya pair wale ki pair ki haadi buri tarah toot gai wo wahi baith chillane laga dard s baki k dono maar chuke the unke muh s khun ki pichkari nikli thi. Ab A3 ki fatt k char ho gayi thi wo sala dono ladkiyon ko chod bhagne ko hua main daud k pahuch gaya us tak meri speed m aur uske saamne khada ho gaya aur de maara ek ghussa uske pait p wo udta hua dono ladkiyon k paas pahuch gaya aur bhhooot bol k mar gaya. Waha p ab ek gunda pada hua tha jo dard s tadap raha tha maine usko bhi wahi p maar dena hi sahi samjha q ki agar ye bach jata to main iss bekar k lafde m fash jaata jo main nahi chahta tha.Usko khatam krne k baad maine sameer ko text kr location beja aur usse 15 min m clear krne ko bola.Fir main chal pada dono ladkiyon ki taraf wo had s jyada dari hui thi ek to pahle gunde fir main aur meri maar uske baad saare gundon ki maut aur wo A3 ki baat.Sayad sach m mujhe dono hi bhoot samajh rahi thi maine socha inhe phle kahi baitha deta hu taaki inse puch saku k wo log kaun the aur inhe q pareshan kr rhe the maine to bus kisi lucky bhai ka naam hi sunna aur kuch nahi.Main unke paas jaane laga to 2no pahle dhire-dhire piche jane lagi.Main abhi kuch bolta k gatli s mere pair m us aadmi k daant gad gaye jisse mere muh s ek choti chikh nikli.Meri iss choti si chikh sun pata nhi unko kya hua dono n fauran daud laga di aur turant waha s bhag gai.Main bas dekhta hi rah gaya ab maine bhi park na jaa kr pahuch gaya ghar. waha sabhi dinning table p hi the.Maine bhi change kr unko join kr liya kuch der baad Saifali school k liye taiyaar hone chali gai aur Tiya , Tanya ko bhi mom n shopping p jaane ka bol taiyaar hone bhej diya mujhe bhi kaha to maine mood nahi hai bol unko mana kar diya.Saare ek saath aa gaye niche taiyaar ho ke Mom,Maasi,Tiya,Tanya ko le nikal gaye shopping p Main bhi Saifali ko school chodne chala gaya aur Mausa jee Dad k sath office chal diye.
Saifali ko ghar chod k main ghar m aaya aate hi apne room m gaya aur apna phone nikal usme apne Nanaji k case ko study krne laga aur iss kaam m mujhe bahut s jhatke lage q ki jitne bhi saboot the saare k saare banawati the aisa lag raha tha ki unho waha p jaan bujh k rakha gaya hai
Main(maan m)-Ye saala Nana ji ka pata nhi chal raha kuch Mom dad s sunaa to laga k ye jo case hai isme pakka iska hi haath hoga pr saala file k hisab s to yahi lag raha h koi aur h jo Nana ji k khandhe p banduk rakh challa raha hai.

Maine turant apne superior ko call kiya call pick hote hi wo bol pade.
S- king jo bhi tum soch rahe ho iss case k bare m wo bilkul sahi h tumhare Nana ko fasaya gaya h aur unko fasane wala abhi bhi unke karib h.
Main- (hairan ho) sir aapko kaise pata ki wo mere Nana hai.
S- waise hi jaise ye pata tha k Digvijay RAW ka agent rah chuka h (AgentD) aur wo Shilpa ko bhi train kr raha hai RAW k liye.
Main-aapko hmare baare m itna kaise pata hai
S:King abhi tum kuch nahi jante ho apne pariwaar k baare m kuch galatfahamiyon k karan tumhara pura parivar hi aaj ek aise mod p hai k.... ye baate chodo aur case ko solve karne p focus karo.Yee case maine tumhe iss liye diya hai taaki tum usme kaamyab ho jaao jisme main kamiyab nahi ho paya.
Main:Thik h sir pr mujhe apne family k baare m jaanna h.
S:sahi waqt ka intezar karo mujhe pura yakin h k tum jaroor kamiyab hoge.Waise tumne Digvijay aur Shilpa ko team m rakh accha kiya h pr jb wo ye jaanege k tum king ho to kaise handle kr paoge unko.
S:sir main unko handle kr lunga pr kya unhone join kr liya abhi.
S:Join to wo jarur karenge Digvijay k kuch adhure waade hai jinko purra krne wo jaroor lautega. Shilpa bhi uske sath jaroor join karegi.
call cut.
Sir s baat krne k baad mera dimag aur ghum gaya pata nhi bhudha kya-kya bak gaya mere aur mere family k baare m.
Maine fir Ritvik ko call kiya aur usse Nanaji and family ka update liya sab kuch normal lag raha tha Fir maine Sameer ko call kiya aur usko bola k Nanaji k office m ghus jaaye(job join karke).
Aur waha bhi unke karibi logo ka pata kare aur unki details mujhe forward kare.
Fir Sameera ko call kiya aur bola ki aaj main nahi aa sakta aaj k kaam wo handle kr le aur Guddu aur us aadmi ko abhi ander hi rakhe.
Itna bol m chal pada gym room m aur waha baith case k bare m fir s case k baare m.

Chaliye kahi aur chalte hai.

Ek badi si sunder haveli hai jisme ek aurat mandir m baithi ek tasvir liye aashu baha rahi thi.

Aurat-Q Bhagwan Q ujad diya tune mere swarg s sunder ghar ko kitne acche the wo din jab ye ghar ek ghar hua karta tha logo ki hassi gunjti thi yaha baccho ki kilkariya unka roona kitna achha tha wo hum sab mil k rhte the pta nahi koski nazar lagi mere ghar ko ki aaj ye ek Makaan ban rah gaya hai Q Bhagwan Q(roote hue)
Tabhi ek dusri aurat n uske kandhe p haath rakhaa aur boli
Aurat2- Malkin aab roone s kuchu nahi hoga. Ham uhi waqat boli thi aapse rook lijiye Saifali Bitiya ko is ghar s nikale jaane s .
Aurat1- Shurbhi us waqt kuc samajh nahi aa raha tha aur jb smjhi to wo hme chod bahut door chali gayi jaha s koi nahi aata kabhi laut k.
Shurbhi- Ha to aab kahe roo rahi ho jab sb loot gaya.

Aurat1- Tu bhi aaj tk mujhse roothi hai na hona bhi chahiye wo mere kokh s janmi jaroor thi pr uski dekh bhal to tunne hi ki thi na Yasodha Maiya k jaise.
Shurbhi-Haa naraj to hu pr ab kr bhi kya sakti hu(roote hue) wo to chali gayi na mujhe chod k.
Aurat1 hai meri Nani ji yani Sharmila Singh.

Sharmila - ha aur sath hi le gayi iis ghar ki saari khusiyan bhi Jab uska janam hua tha tb s usko pyar nhi mila
Maa-Baap ka.Bhai-Bahno n bhi sirf nafart hi di usse.Hmesha apne saare bachon s door rha usko. Bachpan s hi hostle m padti aayi itna bada pariwar hone k baad bhi usse kabhi pyar nhi milla wo toh tu thi jo usse uski maa ban pala posha.Dekh na jo iss ghar n uske sath bachpan s kiya aaj wahi ye ghar bhugat raha hai kahne ko kitne log hai na yaha pr koi kisi s baat nhi karta saare log apne m lage rhte hai.3-3 bacchiya hai iss ghar m pr tinno ki aapas m nahi banti wo to unke maa-baap hai jo inhe jode hue hai warna ye kabhi ek jagah rahe hi na.Mere bachho ko bhi jab sach ka pata chala saare riste naate tod chali gai h.Apne Maa-Baap ko to chodo Sanjna wale hadse k baad s to apne jaan spyare bhaiyon s bhi baat nhi ki hai.Pata hai Shurbhi,Poonam ne to hme apni beti ka chahra bhi dekhne nasib nahi hone diya hum sabhi Hospital m hi the uss waqt aur usne Damad ji s bol hame bahar krwa diya.

Shurbhi-Malkin janti aap bhi ho ki galti kiski thi uss waqt jo Poonam n aisa kiya.

Sharmila bas ye sab bol k aur sun k roote-roote wahi behosh ho gai.Jab Shurbhi n ye dekha to usne sabko awaz lagai pr sayad koi tha nahi ghar m to usne kisi tarah Nani ko unke room m pahuchaya aur doctor ko phone kiya.Doctor n cheak kr k bataya ki BP ki problem hai bs aur kuch nhi.

Chaliye ab chalte hai hm Kalp aasram ki taraf.
Yaha p Rishi Gautam(R.G.) apne kutiya m dhyan m baithe hue the ki unke kutiya m koi aaya ussi k sath inki dhyan shadna bhi samapt ho gai.
Are ye to Saaya(Sena Nayak) hai
SenaNayak(S.N)- R.G. ko mera pranamm
R.G- arre aaj to hamre kutiya m jinlok k senapati ji padhare hai aaiye.
S.N- R.G mujhe ma....
abhi wo apna vakya pura krte ki usse pahle hi
R.G.- hame pata hai aap q aaye h maharaj s kah dijiyega ki chinta ki koi awasyakta nahi ye to bas Ishwar ki lila h kuch papiyon ko Dharti s mukt krne ka.Abhi apke maalik bilkul swasth hai aur jald hi wo apne shinghasan p virajne aayenge.
S.N-Thik hai

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Sabhi logo n sath m Dinner kr liya tha aur abhi hus sab baatain kr rhe the.Kal Meri Bahno ka school tha isliye wo soone chali gai thi.
Mausha ji kuch chintit nazar aa rahe the.Unko esse dekh Dad n unse pucha.
Dad- kya hua Vikram kuch paresan s nazar aa rhe ho
Mausa - Ha bhai sahab . Main Divya Bhabhi k baare m soch raha tha k unko batau ki nahi k Reshma & family wapas aa gayi hai.Ab to unka bhi transfer yahi ho raha hai sayad 2 din m yaha shift bhi ho jaye.
Mom- arre Divya abhi bhi padati h collage m kya?
Mausi- Didi wo to aab Dean abn chuki h collage ki yaha XYZ COLLAGE m kuch problem chal rahi h isliye unke yaha ka Dean banaya jaa raha hai.
Mom/Dad-Dean ban gai?
Mausa - haa jab koi aapne personal life s jyada apne professional life me gum ho jata hai to yahi hota hai.
Dad- kya matlab?
Mausi- Aapko to pata hai na ki wo na sirf Deep ki bahan thi balki wo to uski Maa bhi thi Deep k khusi k liye kuch bhi kr janne wali.Yaad hai jab unko Deep & Saifali k pyar k baare m pata chala to unhone Saifali s turant uski Sagai karwa di thi.pr jab wo hadsa hua unke sath tab s Divya Bhabhi puri tut gai thi are wo to pure 2 mahine tk room s bahar hi nahi aayi.wo to jeth ji ne unko sambhal liya.Fir kisi tarah unki jindgi patri p aayi pr tb s wo chup-chup rhne lagi.Kisi s bhi baat nahi karti thi bas jeth ji aur paridhi(beti Divya ki) k sath hi baat kr liya krti thi.waqt guzra wo fir s thodi thodi khulne lagi. Fir achanak s hi Reshma bhi gayab ho gayi aur jab ye baat Bhabhi ko pata chala wo to wo jakham fir s hara ho gaya aur Bhabhi n apna sab kuch chod bus apne collage aur Paridhi ki padhayi p focus suru kar diya aur dekhte - dekhte wo collage ki dean ban gai.Jab meri delivery ka waqt aaya tb wo hmse milne aayi.Meri Beti ko dekh wo bahut khush ho gai q ki ye bilkul Saifali ki tarah dikhti thi.Bhabhi n iska naam Saifali hi rakh diya.Ab wo Saifali k sath kub khelti, Saifali k aate hi jaise unko unka khoya sab kuch mil gaya ho wo to ye tak bolti ki "Meri Saifali aa gai Uske piche piche Deep bhi aayega".Ab hm log bhi unko khush dekh khush rahne lage.Paridhi bhi Saifali ko bahut pyar krti h q ki wahi to uski purani mom ko wapas layi thi.
Maasi ki Baat sunte sunte sabhi k aashu nikalne lage
Dad-dekho kal jb Reshma aayegi to hm usse is baare m baat karenge.

sabhi apne room m chale gaye main bhi room m aa gaya aur soo gaya
soote hi jungle jaa pahucha aur dhyan m baith gaya aapna 3rd chakra jagane ko

nice update ?

Aryanv · Jun 14, 2020

Awesome update

aditya · Jun 14, 2020

Excellent update

Asif khan · Jun 14, 2020

Waiting for next

Arjun Singh 72 · Jun 14, 2020

Awesome update ?
Ye Jo shafali h wo choti shafali h
Keep posting

ULTRA · Jun 14, 2020

Ristrcted said:
DOSTO phle k sare update hum issi m compress kar rahe hai iske aage sare naye update honge

UPDATE - 8

ABTAK

Main baith gaya dhyan m aapne 3rd chakra ko jagane.

AAGE

Aaj bhi wahi sab hua dard , ray nikalna bla....bla...bla...

Meri neend 4 baje k aas paas khuli.Main utha aur fresh hua aur chal diya gym m waha karib 2 ghante tk exercise kiya fir 6:30 k aas paas nikal gaya park ki taraf maine waha ja ke apni jogging shuru kr di pr char aakhen aisi thi jo mujhe ghure ja rahi thi yesa nahi tha k main bahut tej bhag raha tha ya ajeeb lag raha tha . Thodi der baad wo akhen mere pass aane lagi main apni dhun m daudta raha kuch der baad piche s kisi ki awaj aayi jo badi taki hue thi .

Ye dono kal wali ladkiyan thi jo mere paas aa rhi thi daudte hue (jogging).

Main - Aap dono mera pechha q kr rhe ho(darne ki acting karte hue)

Ladki1- Arre nahi hum to tumse baat krna chahte the bas tum hamse daro mat

Ladki2- Prema pagal wo natak kr raha hai. (meri or dekh) hum tumhe thanks kahna chahte the.

Main- or wo q?

Prema- are aapne hamari jaan bacahi thi na isliye thanks

Ladki2-(mere taraf ek packet paas krti hue) dekho agar tum hamara ek kaam karoge to hum tumhe paise denge.

Uski baat sun k m confuse ho gaya.

Prema- Are Sapna phle conform to kr le ki ye wo hai ya nhi.

Main-kya hu main? Dekho sayad kuch galatfehmi hui hai.

Sapna-koi galti nhi hui h ok hme pata h tum gunde ho wo bhi bade waale dekho please hmari help kr do hm tumhe bahut paisa denge.

Main-arre mere ko paise nahii...

Prema-are paise nhi cahiye to hmare gaon m jo khet hai wo lelo pr please hamari help kardo please (aakhon m aashu liye) dekho hm badi ummid k sath aaye h tumhare paas please.

Sapna - ha please na help krdo hm jingdi bhar tumhara upkar nahi bhulenge(roote hue)

Saala mera dimag kharab ho gaya park k saare log hmari trf hi dekhne lage.Maine dono ka hath pakda. Hath pakadte hi dono mere dimag m dono k baare m sab kuch aa gaya wo kya hai kaha s aayi hai unki problem sb kuch mere ko apne aaj k power ka pata chal gaya.Maine dono ko ek bench p bitha diya .

Main-arre meri maatao roona band karo aur meri baat sunno.

mainkoi chota bada gunda nhi hu samjhe m to bas ek aam sa ladka hu .

Sapna-nhi tum gunde ho nahi to abhi tk tum jail m hote .

Prema-aur nahi to kya tumne kl 6 muders kiye aur kisi ko bhi iska koi pata nahi chala paaka tumne unhe khi dafna diya hoga aur police ko paise de case suru hone s phle hi band krwa diya hoga.

Main-arre nhi nhi aap log galat samajh rahe ho mere dad k connections bahut s bade loge s isliye kisi ko kuch pata nahi chala.(jhoot)

sapna(Prema k kaan m)-dekh abhi bhi chance hai kya pata iske dad hmari help kare.

prema bas haa m sar hilla deti hai.

Main - chalo ab apna problem batao

Prema-kya hum tumhare dad s mil sakte hai

Main-kya ye problem hia

Sapna - nhi pr hum tumhe bata kr isme samil nhi krna chahte warna tumhe kuch ho bhi sakta hai.please hame aapne dad a milwa do.

Main - dekho ye to lagbhag impossible hai pr agar tum mujhe problem bataogi to main dekhunga ki wo main kr sakta hu ya nhi agar nhi kr paya to dad to bata dunga.Yakin maano aaj tk dad n kbhi meri bast nhi taali h.

prema aur sapna ek dusre ki taraf dekhne k baad boli.

prema- dekho mera naam ...

Main-arre madam aapka naam prema hai ye aapki saheli Sapna hai .right? ab shide mudde p aate hai.

Sapna - thik hai dekho humdono XYZ collage m teachers hai.waha p Lucky naam k gunde k naam s drugs k dhandhe chal rahe hai .jb hume pata chala to hmne police m complain kr de pr yahi hamari galti thi sayad ab wo hme kidnap kr maar dena chahta hai. please hame bacha lo usse .

Main - are daro mt tumhara kaam ho jayega pr badle m tumhe meri collage m madad krni hogi.

Prema - kya tum bhi hamare collage k ho kabhi dekha nhi.

Main-arre madam abhi to main 12th k result ka wait kr raha hu ki kb result aaye aur m aapke collage m aa jaun.

Sapna- tumhari age kitni hai

Main -jee abhi 18 ka hone m kuch waqt hai

prema-tumne itni km umra m ladna kaha s sikhha.

Main-Baad m mil kr bataunga abhi mujhe kahi jaana hai.

Hmne apna no exchange kiya fir main chal pada ghar.

Ghar p phle hi gaon s sabhi aa chuke the aur aapna aapna saman bhi set kr liya tha sab n.

Hamne break fast kiya aur nikal pade school Tiya&Tanya k admission k liye q ki saare documents Shilpa didi le aayi thi. School k liye aaj Main, fufa ji ,didi aur meri baki k bahne gaye the .Waha saare formalities k baad unhone mujhe ghar drop kiya aur nikle gaye office ka bol k.

Main bhi fir ghar m dost ka bahana bana nikal gaya apne naye base ki oor.

Jab main pahucha waha to waha ka nazara hi kuch aur tha.ye pahla aisa base tha jisse RAW k team k liye MOSAAD MI6 RAW AUR NAVY SEAL n mill k banaya tha bahut kuch tha ander. Jamin k uper ek chota sa dhaba bana hua tha uss dhabe k kitchen s hoke ek lift thi jiske jariye hmare base ka rasta tha base 2 floor ka tha 1st floor p 5 rooms thi ek m sare gadgets aur computers the , ek main khane pinne ka saman tha, ek m ilazka saman aur medicine ek m weapons,aur ahiri wala tha hamara interogation room.Bahar ek bada sa hall bhi tha jo training k liye tha . uske niche wale floor p bahut sare mahngi mahngi cars aur bikes rakhe the jinme s adhikthar custumized the main unhi ko dekhne laga ki Sameera mere paas aayi aur boli.

Sameera - ye saare hamare team k liye khas taur pr MI6 aur MOSSAD n bheje hai .

Main- wahi main sochu RAW kbs vehicles p itna karcha krne lagi.kya wo dono aa gaye ?

Sameera -Ha pr tum unko handle kaise karoge. kya tum unhe apni pahchan bata doge.

Main- Jab tak jaroori na ho tab tak to nahi.chalo chalte hai. Aaj kisi aur ko bhi uthana hai .

Fir hum pahuch gaye base k hall m jaha sabhi ek dusre s mill rahe the.

Main:Agents agar milna milana ho gaya ho to ab kaam kr lete hai usse pahle(fufaji aur didi k taraf dekh)welcome back AgentD aap gai toh akele the par sath m hamare liye ek nayab heera liye aaye hai jo ki behad khubshurat hai Welcome Agent11.

Meri baat sun jaha Didi sarmane lagi wahi Fufa ji ko thoda gussa aaya beti jo thi unki.

Main:Agent02 kya pata chala hamre mehmano k baare m .

Sameera(Agent02)- king Guddu ek smugler hai jo ki Shivpur s operate karta tha aur dusre ka naam hai Sanjay kapoor

Ye naam sunte hi Fufaji ki aakhen chamak gai wo kuch bolte usse phle.

Main k leave it abhi hame kisi ko aur bhi uthana hai AgentD sayad aapko uske baare m sun accha lage.aapka purana dost lucky singh.

AgentD-aate hi RAW ne mujhe mera badla len ka mauka de diya.

Main:chaliye ab is mission ko aap hi handle karoge plan banao aur usko carry on karo apko yaha sabka support hoga.

Unhone plan banaya aur kul 18 logo ki team le kr jane ko taiyar ho gaye. Main jb s hall m enter hua tha Didi mujhe bade pyar s dekhe ja rahithi isliye m unke sath nahi gaya.Fufaji k team m Sameer,Sameera ,Ritvik, shilpa didi aur bhi agents the .

kuch der m hamare khabri n hame Lucky ka location bataya jo ki ek farm house tha. Fufaji and team n apne plan ko follow karte hue Lucky ko 6:30 tk base p le aaye .

Wo to abhi hi dono ko interogate karna chahte the pr maine maana kr diya aur kal interogate krne ko kaha.

Time 7:30 main ghar p phucha sab kuch normal tha abhi main aage ja hi raha tha k Didi aur fufa ji ki entry hui Didi mujhe kuch alag c lag rahi thi main Didi ko hi dekh raha tha aachanak s.

Mom-q re tune meri bahu bhi dund li aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi

Ye sabd mere liye kisi bomb s km nahi tha ki tabhi ek bada bomb futa matlad main mom kitaraf muda to waha p sabhi k dresses change ho chuke the sabhi k sabhi esse lag rahe the kisi k shaadi m jaa rahe ho.

Abhi m sabhi ko dekh hi raha tha k waha hamare ghar ka bhi look change ho gaya. Ghar pura saja hua tha main kisi k haath m ring pahna raha tha .

Jaise hi maine ye dekha main e turant us ladki ka haath chod diya aur aas paas dekhne laga fir mujhe sabhi k roone ki awaje aane lagi aisa lag raha tha k saare log ek hi sur m roo rahe ho jaise kisi k control m ho.

Maine fir us ladki ki taraf dekha jiska maine haath choda tha ye hubahu Shilpa Didi ki tarah lag rahi thi fark itna tha ki iski body unse jyada khubshurat lag rahi thi aur aakhon ka colour brown na ho ke green tha.

Abhi main usko dekh hi raha tha k wo roote hue waha s gayab ho gayi . Main idhar udhar dekhne laga.Uske gayab hote hi sabhi hosh m aa gaye aur apne kapde dekh aur ghar ka mahaul dekh confuse ho gaye abhi koi kuch bolta usse pahle hi ek ek kr saare mere ghar wale behosh ho gaye main bhi unke pass jaane laga.

Mujhe sab dikh rahe the shiwaye Shilpa didi k fir ek saaya mere samne prakat hua

Saaya - Malik hame gyaat nahi tha k Rani Shilpa s kuch aisa ho jayega pr aap chinta na kare aapke kisi bhi parijan ko ye baatein yaad nahi rahe gi unko ye bas ek swapn hi lagega. Rani sahiba bhi kuch der m aapke sath hi hogi.

Saala main kuch bolta usse pahle hi wo bhi gayab ho gaya ab bacha tha m aur meri behosh padi family hall m k tabhi sabhi k bodies hawa m udte hue unke room m chale gaye .Main ye sab dekhta hua baith gaya hall m.Mera dimag hi fatta ja raha tha kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha is liye.

Chaliye Dekhte hai Shilpa didi kaha gai

(shilpa didi k respect mai)

Jab mujhe mere pati n nahi pahchana to main toot gayi aur chali aayi us jagah jaha hum sabhi n unke saath apna aakhri waqt guzara tha jungle(ye wahi jungle hai jaha Saurya soone k baad pahuch jata hai.) m .

yaha aate hi ek ajeeb sha sukun milla dil ko saari purani yaade taaza ho gayi meri mujhe sab wo khusi k pal yaad aane lagw jo hum sabhi n ek sath bitayen the fir wo din bhi yaad aaya jab hamara sab kuch badal gaya tha.

FLASH BACK (THE CURSE)

Ek jagah p ek aadmi baitha roo raha tha aur uske gaod m ek dusre aadmi ka sir tha.

Aadmi2 - Samrath saurya sayad mera waqt is jahan m khatam ho gaya hai jaate jaate bas itna hi kahunga k aap apna khayal rakhna agar aap thik honge to meri bahne bhi thik hogi aur yadi wo thik hongi to mere aatma ko rahat milegi

Main-Mitr q kiya aisa q wo waar mere liye tha to q apni jaan de di tumne q

Aadmi2- Samrath ek to main aapka mitr hu dusra aapki patniyon n mujhe raakhi bandi hai bhai maana hai mujhe,

agar m y jaan k bhi aapke uper waar ho raha hai usse n rokta tho na to mitr kahlane yogya rhata aur nahi bhai.arre wo bhai hi kaisa jo apne bahno ki khushi k liye apna sab kuch newchawar kar de.Aur fir aap to meri bahno k pati hai to aapko kaise kuch hone deta

Abhi wo aadmi itna hi bola tha k waha p Baba aa jaate hai. ye aadmi Baba k beta tha.

Baba apne bete ki aisi halat dekh gusse m aapne haath m paani le kar aur mere oor dekhte hue bole

Baba - Samrath Saurya m tumhe sraap deta hu k jis tarah mera bete ki mout hui h thik ussi tarah tumhare aapno ki bhi maut hogi.

Tumhari saari patniyon ki maut aur tum unhe bachane k liye kuch bhi nhi kar paoge na hi apni saktiyon s aur na hi apni vidyaon s

Itna bol unhone wo paani mere uper chidak diya.

Abhi bhi Baba k bete m thodi jaan bachhi hui thi to usne apne pita ko unki galti ka ahsas karwaya .

Baba - Samrath aap jaaye aur apni patniyon ko yaha ghatit saari baate bata de aur mere bete ka bhi antim sanskar kr de q ki ab m is paap k chalte usko aur pida nhi dena cahata.Tabtk m apne sraap ka koi upay dhud leta hu.

Itna bol Baba waha s gayab ho gaye.

Baba k jaane k baad main bhi waha s gayab ho apne Mahal m pahuch gaya janha mujhe aur mere mitr ki aisi halat dekh meri patniyon k rulayi phoot gai.

Maine unhe sab kuch bataya aur fir unke sath mil ke apne mitr ka antim sanskar kiya.

In sabhi vidhiyon k baad maine ek sabha bullayi aur waha p apne khash vyaktiyon ko apne Rajya ka kuch kuch hissa de diya aur fir waha s nikal k apni patniyon k sath ek jungle m pahuch gaya.

Kuch din uhi bit gaye fir Baba n hme darsan diye aur bole

Baba-Samrath Saurya ye jo kuch bhi hua h Ishwar ki lila thi wo aap sabhi ko kisi aur lok m le jana chahte h jis wajah s ye sab hua h.Ab main aapko jo baate batane jaa raha hu unhe gaur s suniye ga. Mere yaha s jaane k baad hi aapki saari patniya apna deh tyag degi aapko un sabhi ka antim sanskar karna hoga uske baad inki aatmayen aapne nirdharit jagahon p pahuch jayegi.

Uske uperant aapko bhi aapni saari shaktiyan apne sarir s nikal k 15 hisso m baatni hogi aur unhe 15 chijo m dalna hoga jo ki Saptrangi kitabe, apki talwar ,Dhanush ,khanjar,Jinlok ka apka Singhasan,Parilok ki aapki mukut,apka locket ,armor aur aapki baasuri hogi.ye kaam krne k baad apko bhi apne pran tyagne honge issi jungle m.

Meri raniya-Baba hum waha inhe pahchane ge kaise

Baba-Us janam m aapko tab tk kuch bhi yaad nahi aayega jab tak aap sabhi k maan m Samrath k prati issi janam jaisa prem bhaw utpan na ho parntu 18 vars ki aayu hone k baad jaise jaise unhe unki saktiyan milna suru hogi waise waise unhe aap sabhi yaad aa jayegi.Aap sabhi Raniyon ki saktiyan aapke aatma m hi kaid rahegi jaise hi aapko apna purv janam yaad aayega aapki shaktiyan bhi wapas aa jayegi aur aap apne purane roop m bhi aa sakengi.

Itna bol Baba kuch der k liye maun ho gaye aur ham sabhi ek dusre ko akhri baar dekhne lage.

Baba-(Raniyon s)ye sab chuki mere hi karan hua hai m iss baat ki kosis karunga k aap sabhi ko ek sath hi rahu aur haa jaise iss janam m mere putr n aap sabhi ko apni bahan mana tha thik ussi prakar agle janam m bhi wo aapka bhai hoga aur jb bhi musibat aayegi aap sab ko usse nikalne ka prayatn karega pr usko uski saktiyan tabhi prapt hogi jab aap sabhi raniya usse apna bhai maanogi anyatha nhi.

Itna bol Baba waha s chale gaye aur maine bhi unke bataye hue tarike s sab kuch kr diya aur deh tyag diya.

Flash back end.

(Shilpa Didi k respect m)

Main wahi jungle m thi ki tabhi mujhe Baba k aawaj sunayi di.

Baba - ye aapne kya kr diya rani sahiba.

Main-Baba main bhul gai thi ki jabtk wo 18 saal k nhi hote unhe kuch yaad nhi aayega.Mujhe laga unhe main yaad houngi issliye main unse is tarah milna chahti thi pr sb bigad gaya.

Baba - aab jab aapko sab yaad aa hi gaya h to main aapko unki suraksha ka daaitwa deta hu

Fir baba n apna hath aage kiya usse ek white ray nikli aur wo sidha Saurya k ander sama gai.

Baba-hmne uski abhi ki smriti ko mitta diya h pr aap aage s dhyan rakhen

Main- jee Baba(udash hote hue)

Baba-app udash n ho aap unko abhi bhi apni or rijha sakti hai pr aap abhi unka mastisk niyantar nahi kr sakte.

Main(kush ho)-Dhanyawad baba.

Itna bol main ghar m as gai abhi bhi saurya jamin p baitha tha main uske paas ja kr.

main:arre ap jamin p kyun baithe ho

Saurya(khada hote hue)- aise hi pr Didi aap mujhe aap kyun bol rahe ho.

main: meri marji main aapko kuch bhi bulau kya aapko koi dikat hai (jhoote gusse m)

Saurya(darte hue)- nahi mujhe q problem hogi jo marji aaye aap wo bulao mujhe.

Main-kya aaj m aapke sath so sakti hu .

Saurya-ha q nhi.

(Hero k respect m)

Fir hum dono sone chale gaye mere room m .soote hi main pahuch gaya jungle m.Aur dhyan m baith gaya apni 4th chakra ko jagane m.

Fir wahi hua wahi dard,ray etc...

Meri neend 4 baje khuli Shilpa didi n hamko jakad rkha tha ekdum jaise koi choti bacchi apne khilone ko jakad k rakhti h.

M utha fresh hua aur gym gaya waha s fir park aur fir ghar aaya apni bahno ko school choda aur nikal gaya king k getup m base ki oor waha phle s hi Fufaji aur Didi baithi hue the. Mere pahuchte hi.

Fufaji-King kya ab m unki khatirdari karu.

Main-Thik h AgentD aap jao aur Sameera ko bi le jana usko bhi bada saukh hai khatirdari karne ki.

Meri baat sun jaise dono pagal ho utte ho khushi s dono lagbagh daud k ander chale gaye.

Unke jaane k baad Didi boli

Didi-king meri weapons ki training kb shuru hogi.

Main - Agent11 abhi to aapko ek test dena hoga main aapko ek file de raha hu isme jo aadmi hai aapko usse apne pyar k jaal m fasana hoga aur fir usse is file m diye gaye questions k answers niklawane honge wo bhi kuch hi dino m .

Meri baat sun ok bol janne lagi wo photo mere Nanaji k company k accountant ki thi jispe mujhe saq tha ki iska kuch na kuch jaroor lena hai is Terrorist funding wale case s. Sameer jo ki abhi ussi office m tha uska bhi yahi manana tha.

Didi(man m)- Dekho to kaisa pati hai apnihi patni ko kisi aur k sath chakar chalane ko bolta hai.ek baar bus ek baar enko sab yaad aa jaye fir batati hu inhe huh

Didi k jaane k baad maine sameer ko call kiya aur bola ki didi ka dhyan rakhe ager koi bhi gadbad ho to turant mujhe call kare

nice update ?

ULTRA · Jun 14, 2020

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UPDATE - 9

AB TAK

Maine Shilpa Didi ko apne Nanaji k Accountant ko pyar m fasake kuch info nikalne bola.

AB AAGE-

Didi k nikalne k baad maine Ritvik aur Sameer ko Didi ka khyal rakhne ko kaha ki agar wo kahi fase to wo dono unhe nikal le fir main chal dia interrogation room jnha abhi Fufaji aur Sameera mil k Lucky aur Sanjay ko pitte ja rahe the un dono k face p ek black cover laga hua tha jisse unhe ye nahi dikh raha tha k unko kaun maar raha hai wo bas chillaye ja rahe the aur unse kuch duri p chair p bandha hua tha Guddu.

Mere ander jate hi maine dono ko rukne ko bola.Dono ruk gaye fir ishare s 3no k face cover hatane bole.Sameera n 3no k face cover hataye.Lucky aur Sanjay ka chahre aasuoo s bhara hua tha wahi Guddu ji ki fatti padi thi mujhe dekh.

Wahi jab Sanjay aur Lucky ki nazar Fufaji p padi to unki bhi faat gai.

Main-tum logo s jo bhi pucha jaye uska sahi sahi jawab dena nhi to.

chalo aapna aapna naam aur kaam batao

Tinno n apna naam bataya fir Guddu ko chod baki k dono chup ho gaye Guddu bechare tote ki tarah bole ja raha tha apne dhandhe k baare m a to z sab bol diya usne.fir bola

Guddu-(Sanjay ko dekh)- saale tere wajah s fasa aapun bola tha tere ko ki abhi time sahi nahi hai deal nhi krte pr tu bsdk tere ko to meri sunni hi nhi thi(meri tarf dekh) bhai sabki last wish puri ki jaati hai na apun ki bhi kr do is madar***d Sanjay ko mere s phle maarna.

Sanjay jo ab tak smbhal gaya tha bola.

Sanjay -(Guddu ko dekh)

Aare bhadwe ye log mera kuch nhi bigad sakte jab mere bhai ko pata chalega na ki inlogo n mujhe pakda h to purre underworld m tahalka mach jayega mera bhai Don hai Don (fir fufaji ko dekh) aur tu be Digvijay sala tu bhi jinda ho gaya Deep bhi jinda h.Tab to paaka wo Reshma aur Saifali bhi jinda hogi.Ek baar yaha s niklbe de fir dekh mai,lucky aur Pankaj mill gangbang karenge unke sath.Bada maza aayega dono ki ek saath lene m

Abhi fufa ji kuch karte usse phle hi maine apni chaku nikali aur Sanjay k hath m de mara chku usske hatheli k aar paar hoga aur wo dard s chillane laga.Maine Fufaji s bola

Main-(Gusse m)AgentD bahar s mera blue box le aayiyega waha desk k piche pada hua h.

Mere itna gusse m bolne s Fufaji turant bahar chale gaye aur Sameera mere liye pani lene chali gai.Dono ek sath hi room m aaye.Sameera k haatho m 2 balti thi paani s bhari hui aur uske piche ek aur agent ha jiske hath m ek plate tha aur bottled water.Ussne wo bottle mujhe diya aur wo plate room m pade desk p rakh diya.Fufa ji sameera k hatho m baalti dekh usse sawaliya nazaro s dekh rahe the to sameera boli

Agent02-AgentD abhi kuch der ruko pata chal jayega ki ye main kyun lai.

Fir maine apna blue box khola ye ek tool box tha jisme ladbhag har tarah k tools the.Maine usme s ek chota sa drill machine nikala aur usse fufaji kitaraf badha unhe usse pakadne ko bola fir kuch nails aur ek hammer jisse maine sameera ko de diya aur khud ek plish liye badh chala Sanjay aur lucky ki oor or mere piche piche wo dono bhi aa gaye.

Main-(Sanjay s) Bahut bol liya beta tune ab dekh agar jo puchha jaye wo na bataya to tera kya haal hoga.AgentD sawal.

Fufaji- tune bola Deep jinda h Tune usse kab aur kaha dekha

Sanjay jiske ek hath m abhi bhi chaku dusha hua tha wo bola

Sanjay - Kishanpur k bus stop p dekha tha usse saale ko maarne k liye log bhi bheje the par wo sala bacha gaya pr ab aur nahi tum sab maroge aurr...aaaahhhhhhh

abhi wo kuch bolta maine uske nakhun nikal diye apne pliash s aur bola

Main- jitna pucha jaye utna hi batta agar kuch jyada hua to tera kuch kam ho jayega samjha.

Fufaji uska jawab sun thoda paresan ho gaye unhe samajh aa gaya tha ki ye log mujhe Deep Mausa samajh rahe hai aur mere upar hmla kr rhe hai.

Fufaji - kis kis ko pata hai k Deep jinda hai.

Sanjay- Mujhe aur pankaj ko.

Fufaji-Pankaj kaha hai

Sanjay- Tu mere sath kuch bhi kr le m tere ko pankaj ka pata nhi bataunga usse jaise hi pata chalega ki main gayab ho gaya hu to wo mujhe dhundte hue jarror aaye ga.

Maine socha q itna time waste kr raha hu apne power ka use kr sb patakr leta hu fir dono ko tadpa tadpa k marunga aur maine bari-bari sanjay aur lucky k hath pakde fir kya tha mujhe unke baare m sab pata chal gaya pr unke kiye gaye kaamo k baare m jaan mujhe had s jyada gussa aane laga maine jaldi s Fufaji s apna drill machine liya aur dono k Sanjay k ghutno p chalane laga wo chilla raha tha pr mujhe bada mazza aa raha tha main to jaise maano usse tadapta dekh jannat m aa gaya ho aur fir wo dard k maare behosh ho gaya wahi uske paas baite Guddu aur Lucky ki to patlun hi gilli ho gai. Dono saale dar k maare hi behosh ho gaye.Wahi mera aisa rup dekh Fufaji bhi dar gaye pr Sameera khud ko normal kiye hui thi jab usne deka tino behosh ho gaye hai to baalti s pani le unpe daal kr unko hosh m le aaye.Unke hosh m aate hi maine fir s aapna wahsi pan shuru kr diya pr iss baar Lucky k sath aur baari baari sanjay aur lucky k sath aisa karta raha.Guddu ka ye dekh aisi halat ho gayi thi k wo Sameera aur Fufaji ko usko goli marne k liye bol raha tha.

Ab Fufaji s raha nhi gaya aur wo bol uthe

Fufaji - King inhe aur maat tadpao inhe bas maar do

Main-AgentD ye tum kah rahe ho jiski biwi k bare m ye log bol na jane kya kya bol rahe the

Fufaji-Main unke liye nhi tumhare liye bol raha hu aapna ye wahsi pan band karo nahi to ye tumhari aadat ban jayegi jo bahut galt hoga.

Sameera -King ye sahi bol rahe hai inko inke kiye ki saza mil chuki hai ab inhe mukt karo.

Main-Tumlogo ko pata nhi inke karan kitno n kya kya khoya h inhe abhi aur tadapna hoga

Sameera mere paas aake :nahi king tumhe hamari dosti ki kasam inhe maar do aur is dard s mukt karo

Uska bas itna khna tha maine un tino ko goli maar di aur nikal pada waha s aapni aakhon m aashu liye main waha s shidha ghar chala gaya.

Time-3:40

Main jaise hi ghar k ander aaya mujhe Mom mill gayi.Main lagbhag daudta hua unke galle lag gaya aur roone laga mere aisa krte hi Mom pareshan ho gayi aur Mujhse puchne lagi k kya hua aise roo q raha hai aurunke bhi aasu nikal aaye.Mom k jor jor s mujhse sawal puch rahi thi jinki awaj sun Maasi bhi jo ki kichen m thi wo bhi bahar aa gai aur mujhe aise roota dekh mujhe galle laga liya maine bhi unko jor s galle laga liya aur roote hue unse bola

main-maasi aap Bua ko yaha jaldi bulaw .

unhone phle to kuch der mujhe dekha phir Reshma bua ko phone kr ye sab bataya to wo bhi jaldi s Suddha aunty k sath hamare yaha aa gai.

Meri aisi halat dekh Sudhha aunty n Mom ki taraf ishare s kuch pucha aur mom ne bhi ha m reply diya fir Suddha aunty kuch der k liye bahar chali gayi karib 10 min baad wo ander aayi main iss waqt bua ko gale laga roye jaa raha tha ki tabhi mujhe mere hath m kuch chubhne ka ahsas hua aur fir aagle hi pal mere akhen bhari hone lagi aur m behosh ho gaya. mere behosh hone k baad

Mom-Shuddha lagta hai ye ussi formula ka koi effect hoga

Sudhha -Ha Didi mujhe bhi yahi lagta h

Poonam-Didi aapne to bola tha k aap log saurya k body s uss furmula k asar ko khatm krne k liye aap log isse koi medicine dete hai .

Reshma-ha hum dete hai pr hame ye bhi pata hai k ek na ek din wo fomula Sameer k ander kuch changes jaroor layega.

Shudhh - ha sahi kaha tumne aur lagta hai wo waqt aab karib aa raha ha. hme jald hi kuch krna hoga.

Mom - kb tk hosh aa jayega isse

Shudha -Raat k khane tk ye hosh m

mom - thik hai pr jab isse hosh aaye to koi bhi abhi jo kuch bhi hua uske baare m nhi baat krega.

Massi -thik hai didi pr isse phle hum iske room m le chalte hai aur charon n mujhe kisi tarah mere room m pahucha dia aur chaaro wahi mere room baith gaye

yeh 4o ne kya inject kerke saurya ko behosh kar diya...

nice update ?

Silent lover · Jun 14, 2020

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