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Fantasy Shiva the common man
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Dekh Bhai update Dena hai ya nhi bta do yrr roj online aate ho but update ka PTA. Nhi...JB story complete nhi krna hota to suru hi kiw krte ho.. yr
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Aap se jayda chinta hai story puri karne ki mujhe.
But update ki quality ke liye time toh lagta hi hai bhai,verna story boring lagne lag jayegi.
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Update-9
Uske baad sab sant ho gaye aur me kho gaya apni poorani yaadon me.
Ab aage..
(Bhai log kahani ka flashback kai jagah thoda thoda hoga, toh jab bhi flashback start hoga ya pause lega toh me describe kar doonga)
Flashback resume.
Jab meri aankhe khuli toh mere aas paas koi nahi tha baha sirf kuch logo ki laashe padi thi jinhe dekh kar me dar gaya.phir dhere dhere me yaad karne laga ki kaise kuch log mujhe khub mar rahe the aur kaise jab bo log mujhe jaan se marne aaye toh pata nahi kahan se bo aadmi naqab me aaya aur un logo ka mar dala.
Uske baad kaise uss aadmi ne meri choton ko thik kiya aur kaise ilaaz ke doran me dard se behosh ho gaya tha yaad karte hi mene jab apne ghaav ko chua toh dard bilkul nahi tha,baha toh sirf ek nishaan tha ghaav ka.
Abhi in cheejo se me bahar nikalne ki koshish hi kar raha tha ki ek aadmi mujhe andar aate dikha,jab bo mere paas aane laga tog mujhe uska face dikha ye toh ASLAM tha hamari dukaan ka regular costomer,(aur bo inshan jise police ne cctv me dekha tha mujhse jhagda karte hue).
Aslam jab mere paas pahoocha aur mujhe jinda dekha toh chonk gaya aur jab uski najar apne aadmiyon par gayi tab toh bo aur bhi shocked ho gaya.
Aslam- ye sab kya hai shiva tum yaha iss sunsan jagah kya kar rahe ho.
Mein- bhaiya mujhe nahi pata me yaha kaise pahoocha me toh dukaan se ghar ja raha tha bike se tab hi kisi ne mere sir par mara. Aur jab mujhe hosh aaya toh ye log mujhe maar rahe the,phir me dard ki vajah se behosh ho gaya aur jab hosh aaya toh ye sab dekha(mene jaan kar uss masked man ka jikra nahi kiya Aslam se).
Aslam- koi nahi bhai sab thik ho jaye ga kya tujhe pata hai ki inn logo ko kisne maara.
Mein- bhaiya aap ko in gundo ki padi hai apko meri chinta nahi hai kya?
Aslam-(ghabraht me) aisa kuch nahi hai bhai me toh bas aise hi pooch raha tha tu bata tu thik toh na aur tu aaya kaise iss khatranaak jungle me mere bhai?
Mein- (abhi kuch kehta ki uski baat dhayan se sunne ke baad.) Mera chodo bhaiya aap yaha kya kar rahe ho apko kaise pata chala ki me yaha hu?
Aslam- bo bhai bo bhai...
Kya hai na ki me hi bo hu jisne inn sabko bheja tha tujhe maarne ke liye, par ye haram ke pille toh khud hi mare pade hai yaha aur tu khada hai jinda mere saamne.
Mein- ye sab sunkar ek dam shock me tha, phir bhi mene poocha ki aisi kya bajah thi ki aapne ne mujhe maarne ko aadmi bheje mene bigaada hi kya hai aap ka ha batao?
Aslam- bigaada tune nahi tere baap ne hai uss kamine ki bajah se meri dukaan bilkul band hone ki kagar par aa gayi thi are galti hi kya thi meri ki me profit ke liye logo ke saaman me milabat karta tha,aree mein toh sidhe tor par unhe paise deta tha aur apna kaam chalata tha par tere baap ki bajah se mera poora ka poora kaam hi barbad ho gaya are koi free me thode hi na un logo ki property par kabza karta tha me paise naa chuaka paane par hi toh karta tha ye sab haa par tere baap ne iss kaam me apni taang atka di aur barbaad kar diya muje.
Iss ka hi badla lene ke liye mene tere baap se aur tujhse dosti ki ke moka dekh ke tujhe kidnap kar ke tere baap se ye jagah chod dene ko kahoonga.sab thik hi jaa raha tha ki pata nahi kaise tujhe mere human trafficking bale dhandhe ke baare me pata chal gaya aur jab me tujhe samjhane aaya toh tu nahi mana aur kehne laga ki tu police ko mere iss kaamke baare me batayega bas isi liye mene tujhe maarne ka plan bana dala aur baaaki sab toh tere saamne hi hai.
Inn sab se toh tu bach gaya par ab tujhe koi nahi bacha payega tujhe marna hoga aut uske baad tere poore pariwar ko bhi marna hoga mere hi inn hatho se.
Aur isse ki saatha baha kuch log guns ke saath aa gaye aur mujhe charo taraf Se gher liya.
Thanks for reading...
Uske baad sab sant ho gaye aur me kho gaya apni poorani yaadon me.
Ab aage..
(Bhai log kahani ka flashback kai jagah thoda thoda hoga, toh jab bhi flashback start hoga ya pause lega toh me describe kar doonga)
Flashback resume.
Jab meri aankhe khuli toh mere aas paas koi nahi tha baha sirf kuch logo ki laashe padi thi jinhe dekh kar me dar gaya.phir dhere dhere me yaad karne laga ki kaise kuch log mujhe khub mar rahe the aur kaise jab bo log mujhe jaan se marne aaye toh pata nahi kahan se bo aadmi naqab me aaya aur un logo ka mar dala.
Uske baad kaise uss aadmi ne meri choton ko thik kiya aur kaise ilaaz ke doran me dard se behosh ho gaya tha yaad karte hi mene jab apne ghaav ko chua toh dard bilkul nahi tha,baha toh sirf ek nishaan tha ghaav ka.
Abhi in cheejo se me bahar nikalne ki koshish hi kar raha tha ki ek aadmi mujhe andar aate dikha,jab bo mere paas aane laga tog mujhe uska face dikha ye toh ASLAM tha hamari dukaan ka regular costomer,(aur bo inshan jise police ne cctv me dekha tha mujhse jhagda karte hue).
Aslam jab mere paas pahoocha aur mujhe jinda dekha toh chonk gaya aur jab uski najar apne aadmiyon par gayi tab toh bo aur bhi shocked ho gaya.
Aslam- ye sab kya hai shiva tum yaha iss sunsan jagah kya kar rahe ho.
Mein- bhaiya mujhe nahi pata me yaha kaise pahoocha me toh dukaan se ghar ja raha tha bike se tab hi kisi ne mere sir par mara. Aur jab mujhe hosh aaya toh ye log mujhe maar rahe the,phir me dard ki vajah se behosh ho gaya aur jab hosh aaya toh ye sab dekha(mene jaan kar uss masked man ka jikra nahi kiya Aslam se).
Aslam- koi nahi bhai sab thik ho jaye ga kya tujhe pata hai ki inn logo ko kisne maara.
Mein- bhaiya aap ko in gundo ki padi hai apko meri chinta nahi hai kya?
Aslam-(ghabraht me) aisa kuch nahi hai bhai me toh bas aise hi pooch raha tha tu bata tu thik toh na aur tu aaya kaise iss khatranaak jungle me mere bhai?
Mein- (abhi kuch kehta ki uski baat dhayan se sunne ke baad.) Mera chodo bhaiya aap yaha kya kar rahe ho apko kaise pata chala ki me yaha hu?
Aslam- bo bhai bo bhai...
Kya hai na ki me hi bo hu jisne inn sabko bheja tha tujhe maarne ke liye, par ye haram ke pille toh khud hi mare pade hai yaha aur tu khada hai jinda mere saamne.
Mein- ye sab sunkar ek dam shock me tha, phir bhi mene poocha ki aisi kya bajah thi ki aapne ne mujhe maarne ko aadmi bheje mene bigaada hi kya hai aap ka ha batao?
Aslam- bigaada tune nahi tere baap ne hai uss kamine ki bajah se meri dukaan bilkul band hone ki kagar par aa gayi thi are galti hi kya thi meri ki me profit ke liye logo ke saaman me milabat karta tha,aree mein toh sidhe tor par unhe paise deta tha aur apna kaam chalata tha par tere baap ki bajah se mera poora ka poora kaam hi barbad ho gaya are koi free me thode hi na un logo ki property par kabza karta tha me paise naa chuaka paane par hi toh karta tha ye sab haa par tere baap ne iss kaam me apni taang atka di aur barbaad kar diya muje.
Iss ka hi badla lene ke liye mene tere baap se aur tujhse dosti ki ke moka dekh ke tujhe kidnap kar ke tere baap se ye jagah chod dene ko kahoonga.sab thik hi jaa raha tha ki pata nahi kaise tujhe mere human trafficking bale dhandhe ke baare me pata chal gaya aur jab me tujhe samjhane aaya toh tu nahi mana aur kehne laga ki tu police ko mere iss kaamke baare me batayega bas isi liye mene tujhe maarne ka plan bana dala aur baaaki sab toh tere saamne hi hai.
Inn sab se toh tu bach gaya par ab tujhe koi nahi bacha payega tujhe marna hoga aut uske baad tere poore pariwar ko bhi marna hoga mere hi inn hatho se.
Aur isse ki saatha baha kuch log guns ke saath aa gaye aur mujhe charo taraf Se gher liya.
Thanks for reading...
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Bhai log kuch naya karne ka socha toh story ka pattern bigad gaya but bhai aage se aisa nahi hoga aage se update aur sahi se likha karoonga.
Plz read and review.
Plz read and review.
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Update-10
Aur isse ki saatha baha kuch log guns ke saath aa gaye aur mujhe charo taraf Se gher liya.
Ab aage
Ki achanak mein apni soch se bahar nikal aaya kyu ki hum marriage hall me pahooch gaye the.(ghar hum nahi gaye kyu ki late ho rahe the)
Maa-beta ab uth ja dekh hum pahooch gaye.
Mein- ji mammi
Papa- beat hum andar chalte hai tu car me hi kapde change kar le pichhe diggi me hai aur taiyaar ho kar andar aa ja.
Mein- ji abhi taiyaar ho jata hu.
Uske baad maa papa under chale gaye aur me kapde pehnene laga ye ek 5 piece suit tha jo mene pehn liya aur taiyaar ho gaya. Suit thoda dhilla tha but itna bhi nahi iss me mein kafi achhha lag raha tha jab me car se utarke under jaane laga ki baha ke gaurd ne mujhe rok diya.
Gaurd- drivers ka khana baad me hoga toh aap abhi baha beth kar intejaar karo.
Mein- nahi uncle ji mein driver nahi hu mein toh yaha apne mammi papa le satha aaya hu.
Gaurd- beta mujhe chutiya samjh rakha hai kya ye sunaro ki Shaadi hai sharh se kai ameer aur bahut ameer log aaye hue hai aur tum jaise log iss Shaadi me aayi ladkiyon ke dekhne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte ho ye bhi mein janta hu ye toh meri sarafat hai ki tumhe police me nahi de raha verna abhi saari ki saari chalaki nikal jayegi.
Mein- ab kya kehta jab ye mujhe ek slum boy samjh ne lage hai mere kapdo ko dekh kar toh mein baha se jaaane laga aur car ke paas aa kar khada ho gaya kyu ki driver bhi baha nahi tha.
Udhar jab me kafi der under nahi pahoocha toh maa ko chinta hui aur unhone bahar jaa kar dekhna chaha par bo ladke ki badi behan thi toh kisi ne unhe jane nahi diya, toh unhone papa ko bheja mujhe laane ko jo ki ittefak se use time pahooche jab mere ko bo uncle slum boy keh rahe the isse sun papa ka para high ho gaya aur bo hamare bodyguard shera ke saath baha aane lage.
Baha pahooch kar
Papa- bhaishaab yaha mera beta aane bala tha.
Gaurd- shaab yaha toh koi nahi aaya ek ladka aayaa tha jo ki yaha ki jhuggiyon ka lag raha tha. Kyu ki uske kapde bhi maange huye lag rahe the.
Yaha dobara mere khilaf sun kar papa ka para aur bhi high ho gaya aur bo un uncle ka coller pakad ke.
Papa- sun be budhhe jis ko tunne abhi gaali di na bo beta hai mera aur teri itni himmat ke mere bete ko gaali de me teri jaan le loonga.
Shera- sir chod dijiye isse isko pata nahi tha bhaiya ke baare me iss liye galti ho gayi abhi toh humme bhaiya ko dhoondh na chahiye.
Ye baat sun kar papa thoda shaant huye aur un uncle ka coller chod diya phir mujhe dhoondhne lage unhe me car ke paas betha dikha mujhe dekh kar unhe bhi samjh aa gaya ki un uncle ko galatfaime kyu hui hogi.phir papa mere paas aaye.
Papa- beta yaha kyu betha hai?
Mein- bo gaurd ne andr nahi aane diya toh yaha aa gaya driver yaha tha nahi issi liye car ke bonat par hi beth gaya.
Papa- are toh phone kar leta mujhe ya apni maa ko?
Mein- mere paas phone hai hi kaha.
Papa ko apni galti ka pata chala aur unhone driver ko bulaya phir hum charo ek mall me gaye aur baha pehle toh papa ne mere liye naya suit aur kayi saari jeans and trouser aur shirts kharede.uske baad mein aur papa ek mobile shop par gaye.
Salesman- sir how can i help yo?
Papa- ji mere bete ke liye ek phone chahiye.
Salesman- naya phone sir?
Papa- aur kya mera beta poorna chalayega kya naye aur sabse mehnge phone dikhao isse.
Salesman- sorry sir, mein abhi dikha deta hu.
Salesman ne kayi phone dikhaye SAMSUNG, APPLE, GOOGLE ke phir mene apne liye Samsung s10+ le liya aur papa ne Prashant ke liye google pixle3 liya.
Shopping ke bill de kar hum function me bapas aa gaye aur ab un uncle ko yakeen ho gaya ki mein koi slum boy nahi hu me hu SHIVA VERMA s/o RUDRA VERMA toh bo mere pairo me girne lage par mene pehle hi unhe rok diya.
Mein- uncle aap bade hai ye sab aapko shobha nahi deta.
Gaurd- beta ye sab meri galtu hai mujhe pehle andar maloom kar lena tha mujhe maaf kar do.
Mein- nahi uncle aap toh sirf apni duty kar rahe the immandari se aapy maafi mat mango.
Galti toh kisi se bhi ho sakti hai.
(Jaise mene ki 6 saal pehle jiski saja aaj tak bhugat raha hu)
Thanks for reading...
Plz read and review..
Aur isse ki saatha baha kuch log guns ke saath aa gaye aur mujhe charo taraf Se gher liya.
Ab aage
Ki achanak mein apni soch se bahar nikal aaya kyu ki hum marriage hall me pahooch gaye the.(ghar hum nahi gaye kyu ki late ho rahe the)
Maa-beta ab uth ja dekh hum pahooch gaye.
Mein- ji mammi
Papa- beat hum andar chalte hai tu car me hi kapde change kar le pichhe diggi me hai aur taiyaar ho kar andar aa ja.
Mein- ji abhi taiyaar ho jata hu.
Uske baad maa papa under chale gaye aur me kapde pehnene laga ye ek 5 piece suit tha jo mene pehn liya aur taiyaar ho gaya. Suit thoda dhilla tha but itna bhi nahi iss me mein kafi achhha lag raha tha jab me car se utarke under jaane laga ki baha ke gaurd ne mujhe rok diya.
Gaurd- drivers ka khana baad me hoga toh aap abhi baha beth kar intejaar karo.
Mein- nahi uncle ji mein driver nahi hu mein toh yaha apne mammi papa le satha aaya hu.
Gaurd- beta mujhe chutiya samjh rakha hai kya ye sunaro ki Shaadi hai sharh se kai ameer aur bahut ameer log aaye hue hai aur tum jaise log iss Shaadi me aayi ladkiyon ke dekhne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte ho ye bhi mein janta hu ye toh meri sarafat hai ki tumhe police me nahi de raha verna abhi saari ki saari chalaki nikal jayegi.
Mein- ab kya kehta jab ye mujhe ek slum boy samjh ne lage hai mere kapdo ko dekh kar toh mein baha se jaaane laga aur car ke paas aa kar khada ho gaya kyu ki driver bhi baha nahi tha.
Udhar jab me kafi der under nahi pahoocha toh maa ko chinta hui aur unhone bahar jaa kar dekhna chaha par bo ladke ki badi behan thi toh kisi ne unhe jane nahi diya, toh unhone papa ko bheja mujhe laane ko jo ki ittefak se use time pahooche jab mere ko bo uncle slum boy keh rahe the isse sun papa ka para high ho gaya aur bo hamare bodyguard shera ke saath baha aane lage.
Baha pahooch kar
Papa- bhaishaab yaha mera beta aane bala tha.
Gaurd- shaab yaha toh koi nahi aaya ek ladka aayaa tha jo ki yaha ki jhuggiyon ka lag raha tha. Kyu ki uske kapde bhi maange huye lag rahe the.
Yaha dobara mere khilaf sun kar papa ka para aur bhi high ho gaya aur bo un uncle ka coller pakad ke.
Papa- sun be budhhe jis ko tunne abhi gaali di na bo beta hai mera aur teri itni himmat ke mere bete ko gaali de me teri jaan le loonga.
Shera- sir chod dijiye isse isko pata nahi tha bhaiya ke baare me iss liye galti ho gayi abhi toh humme bhaiya ko dhoondh na chahiye.
Ye baat sun kar papa thoda shaant huye aur un uncle ka coller chod diya phir mujhe dhoondhne lage unhe me car ke paas betha dikha mujhe dekh kar unhe bhi samjh aa gaya ki un uncle ko galatfaime kyu hui hogi.phir papa mere paas aaye.
Papa- beta yaha kyu betha hai?
Mein- bo gaurd ne andr nahi aane diya toh yaha aa gaya driver yaha tha nahi issi liye car ke bonat par hi beth gaya.
Papa- are toh phone kar leta mujhe ya apni maa ko?
Mein- mere paas phone hai hi kaha.
Papa ko apni galti ka pata chala aur unhone driver ko bulaya phir hum charo ek mall me gaye aur baha pehle toh papa ne mere liye naya suit aur kayi saari jeans and trouser aur shirts kharede.uske baad mein aur papa ek mobile shop par gaye.
Salesman- sir how can i help yo?
Papa- ji mere bete ke liye ek phone chahiye.
Salesman- naya phone sir?
Papa- aur kya mera beta poorna chalayega kya naye aur sabse mehnge phone dikhao isse.
Salesman- sorry sir, mein abhi dikha deta hu.
Salesman ne kayi phone dikhaye SAMSUNG, APPLE, GOOGLE ke phir mene apne liye Samsung s10+ le liya aur papa ne Prashant ke liye google pixle3 liya.
Shopping ke bill de kar hum function me bapas aa gaye aur ab un uncle ko yakeen ho gaya ki mein koi slum boy nahi hu me hu SHIVA VERMA s/o RUDRA VERMA toh bo mere pairo me girne lage par mene pehle hi unhe rok diya.
Mein- uncle aap bade hai ye sab aapko shobha nahi deta.
Gaurd- beta ye sab meri galtu hai mujhe pehle andar maloom kar lena tha mujhe maaf kar do.
Mein- nahi uncle aap toh sirf apni duty kar rahe the immandari se aapy maafi mat mango.
Galti toh kisi se bhi ho sakti hai.
(Jaise mene ki 6 saal pehle jiski saja aaj tak bhugat raha hu)
Thanks for reading...
Plz read and review..
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Atlist ek reply to KR Skte ho na Reders wait to krta hi hai
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Bhai sorry but actually me yaha story read bhi karta hu toh khud ki story ka bhul jata hu kabhi kabhi.
Bo toh jab alert show hota hai tab yaad aata hai