Fantasy Shiva the common man

[sonukale]

Very nice update

 

[Avir]

Nice one

 

[Avir]

Nice one

 

[Pintupaul]

Nice update bro. Update nA sahi Rply de Diya koro

 

[Azad]

wating

 

[Secretshiva1]

Nice update bro. Update nA sahi Rply de Diya koro

Bhai jaha jaroorat hoti hai baha reply bhi karta hu

 

[Secretshiva1]

Update-11
Mein- nahi uncle aap toh sirf apni duty kar rahe the immandari se aapy maafi mat mango.
Galti toh kisi se bhi ho sakti hai.
Mein- mann me (Jaise mene ki 6 saal pehle jiski saja aaj tak bhugat raha hu.)
Ab aage
Uske baad papa ne bhi uncle se maafi maangi aur hum tino andar aa gaye yaha par sab bahut busy the toh kisi ne dhyan nahi diya ki kon aaya kon nahi.
Andar jaakar papa ko unke dost le gaye aur mere paas reh gaya sirf shera.
Mein shera ki taraf dekhe bina.
Mein- commando 57912
(Shera ne jaise hi ye suna bo sock me aa gaya par turant hi usne situation ko samjaha aur jabab diaya.)
Shera- yes boss.
Mein- kabhi koi pareshani toh nahi aayi mission me?
Shera- nahi sir.
Mein- kisi ko sak toh nahi hua tum par?
Shera- no sir.
Mein- good.
Shera- sir agar bura na mane tou kuch poochu?
Mein- poocho.
Shera- kon ho aap?
Mein- ye jaanne ki tumhe jaroorat nahi. Bus itna samjh lo ke tere alava kabhi kisi ko pata naa chale mere baree.
Shera- jaisa aap kahe.
Mein- ab jao aur baaki logo ka dhyan rakho.
Shera- yes sir.
Uske baad mein dinning hall me sabse alag aa kar beth gaya.

Bhai log yaha kuch naye character add honge jinka intro add hone ke baad doonga.
Abhi me baha betha hi tha ki ek waiter ne juice offer kiya mene juice ka glass liya aur pine laga ki tabhi meri najar ek ladki par padi jise dekh kar mera dimaagh hi ghum gaya.
Mein turant uth kar uske paas gaya.
Mein- hello sweetie.
Ladki ye baat sun ker thoda chonk gayi usne turant meri taraf dekha,phir ek dum normal ho gayi.
Ladki- kon ho tum.
Mein- apne aap se poocho.
Ladki- mene toh pooch liya par jawab sirf ek hi aaya ki ek number ke awara ho tum.
Mein- toh koi nahi awara se dosti hi kar lo.
Ladki- dosti my foot.
Mein- aaji itni bhi kadar na giraiye hamari dosti ki,miss sweetie.
Ladki- mat bulayo iss naam se mujhe.
Ladki (man me)- kon hai ye jo baar baar mujhe sweetie keh raha hai kahi ye bo hi toh nahi, awaz toh bilkul uske hi jaisi hai, par bo toh 4 saal se lapta hai. ye bo nahi ho sakta phir isee kaise maloom ye naam.
Mein- kaha kho gayi sweetie dosti nahi karni toh girlfriend hi ban jao.
Ladki- ye mister aukaat me raho jante bhi ho kon hu me.
Mein- haa janta hu miss kirti.
Ladki-( chonkte hue) bahut bade bale awara lagte ho mera naam bhi jante ho.
Mein- aaji naam kya hai humme toh apka address, aapki family members ka naam yaha tak ki apke kai saare secrets bhi pata hai, sweetie.
Ladki- (thoda chillate hue) mat bulao iss naam se mujhe.
Mein- (rote hue) kyu naa bulau apni sabse pyari dost ko iss naam se 4 saal se iss naam ko pukarne ke liye tadap raha hu. Tum se baat karne ke liye par tum ho ki pehchanti bhi nahi mujhe.itna toh nahi badal gaya hu me.
Ladki(kirti)- (rote hue) shiva, ye tu hi hai na bata ab aur pareshan mat kar mujhe.
Mein rote hue unhe gale laga leta hu.
Mein- mat meri sweetie mat ro. Are tere haste hue chehre ko dekhne ko kitna tadpa hu me aur ab bhi aap meri khwahish puri nahi karoogi.
Kirti- (aashu pochte hue) me nahi ro rahi hu par tu bhi toh itni der se pareshan kiye ja raha hai sidhe sidhe nahi bata sakta tha.
Mein- agar sidhe sidhe bata deta toh ye pyara sa hug kaha se milta.
Kirti- (pyar se maarte hue) bahut badmash ho gaye ho tum.
Mein- ek aap hi toh ho jisse dil ki baat karne me kabhi dar nahi lagta.
Kirti- bada ayaa dil ki baat karne bala. Panda kahi ka.
Mein- hai mausi ye sab ab nahi dekha nahi ab kitna fit ho gaya hua me.
Kirti- hmm dekha mene sukh kar kanta hua jaa raha hai par hai toh mera pyara panda hi na sweet sa cute sa, panda.
Mein aur kirti phir khub jor se haste hai.
Toh dosto kuch toh apko idia ho hi gaya hoga aur baaki me bata du ye hai kirti meri mausi cum meri best friend jayda.
Aaj ke liye itna hi...
Thanks for reading.
Plz review...

 

[Secretshiva1]

Bhai log intro kuch naye tarike se diya hai toh batana kaisa laga...

 

[Raja thakur]

Update-11
Mein- nahi uncle aap toh sirf apni duty kar rahe the immandari se aapy maafi mat mango.
Galti toh kisi se bhi ho sakti hai.
Mein- mann me (Jaise mene ki 6 saal pehle jiski saja aaj tak bhugat raha hu.)
Ab aage
Uske baad papa ne bhi uncle se maafi maangi aur hum tino andar aa gaye yaha par sab bahut busy the toh kisi ne dhyan nahi diya ki kon aaya kon nahi.
Andar jaakar papa ko unke dost le gaye aur mere paas reh gaya sirf shera.
Mein shera ki taraf dekhe bina.
Mein- commando 57912
(Shera ne jaise hi ye suna bo sock me aa gaya par turant hi usne situation ko samjaha aur jabab diaya.)
Shera- yes boss.
Mein- kabhi koi pareshani toh nahi aayi mission me?
Shera- nahi sir.
Mein- kisi ko sak toh nahi hua tum par?
Shera- no sir.
Mein- good.
Shera- sir agar bura na mane tou kuch poochu?
Mein- poocho.
Shera- kon ho aap?
Mein- ye jaanne ki tumhe jaroorat nahi. Bus itna samjh lo ke tere alava kabhi kisi ko pata naa chale mere baree.
Shera- jaisa aap kahe.
Mein- ab jao aur baaki logo ka dhyan rakho.
Shera- yes sir.
Uske baad mein dinning hall me sabse alag aa kar beth gaya.

Bhai log yaha kuch naye character add honge jinka intro add hone ke baad doonga.
Abhi me baha betha hi tha ki ek waiter ne juice offer kiya mene juice ka glass liya aur pine laga ki tabhi meri najar ek ladki par padi jise dekh kar mera dimaagh hi ghum gaya.
Mein turant uth kar uske paas gaya.
Mein- hello sweetie.
Ladki ye baat sun ker thoda chonk gayi usne turant meri taraf dekha,phir ek dum normal ho gayi.
Ladki- kon ho tum.
Mein- apne aap se poocho.
Ladki- mene toh pooch liya par jawab sirf ek hi aaya ki ek number ke awara ho tum.
Mein- toh koi nahi awara se dosti hi kar lo.
Ladki- dosti my foot.
Mein- aaji itni bhi kadar na giraiye hamari dosti ki,miss sweetie.
Ladki- mat bulayo iss naam se mujhe.
Ladki (man me)- kon hai ye jo baar baar mujhe sweetie keh raha hai kahi ye bo hi toh nahi, awaz toh bilkul uske hi jaisi hai, par bo toh 4 saal se lapta hai. ye bo nahi ho sakta phir isee kaise maloom ye naam.
Mein- kaha kho gayi sweetie dosti nahi karni toh girlfriend hi ban jao.
Ladki- ye mister aukaat me raho jante bhi ho kon hu me.
Mein- haa janta hu miss kirti.
Ladki-( chonkte hue) bahut bade bale awara lagte ho mera naam bhi jante ho.
Mein- aaji naam kya hai humme toh apka address, aapki family members ka naam yaha tak ki apke kai saare secrets bhi pata hai, sweetie.
Ladki- (thoda chillate hue) mat bulao iss naam se mujhe.
Mein- (rote hue) kyu naa bulau apni sabse pyari dost ko iss naam se 4 saal se iss naam ko pukarne ke liye tadap raha hu. Tum se baat karne ke liye par tum ho ki pehchanti bhi nahi mujhe.itna toh nahi badal gaya hu me.
Ladki(kirti)- (rote hue) shiva, ye tu hi hai na bata ab aur pareshan mat kar mujhe.
Mein rote hue unhe gale laga leta hu.
Mein- mat meri sweetie mat ro. Are tere haste hue chehre ko dekhne ko kitna tadpa hu me aur ab bhi aap meri khwahish puri nahi karoogi.
Kirti- (aashu pochte hue) me nahi ro rahi hu par tu bhi toh itni der se pareshan kiye ja raha hai sidhe sidhe nahi bata sakta tha.
Mein- agar sidhe sidhe bata deta toh ye pyara sa hug kaha se milta.
Kirti- (pyar se maarte hue) bahut badmash ho gaye ho tum.
Mein- ek aap hi toh ho jisse dil ki baat karne me kabhi dar nahi lagta.
Kirti- bada ayaa dil ki baat karne bala. Panda kahi ka.
Mein- hai mausi ye sab ab nahi dekha nahi ab kitna fit ho gaya hua me.
Kirti- hmm dekha mene sukh kar kanta hua jaa raha hai par hai toh mera pyara panda hi na sweet sa cute sa, panda.
Mein aur kirti phir khub jor se haste hai.
Toh dosto kuch toh apko idia ho hi gaya hoga aur baaki me bata du ye hai kirti meri mausi cum meri best friend jayda.
Aaj ke liye itna hi...
Thanks for reading.
Plz review...

Nice updates

 

[Secretshiva1]

Nice updates

Bhai itne bade update ke liye ittu sa review not fair bhai...