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Bhai Jaise story mere man hai Bo apko nirash Nahi karegi
Fantasy Shiva the common man
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Bhai agar sochunga Nahi na toh update ki koi keemat Nahi rahegi.
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Apun bas Etna kehna chahta hai bhot readers Abhi tak kahani ka theme Ni samajh paye hain atleast kahani ka theme clear kro dear writer bhai kis theme pr hai story
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Bhai agar theme samjh aa Gaya toh story kya ghanta koi padhega..
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Sorry Bhai agar Bura laga ho toh me Nahi chahata ki Kisi ko lege ki story waaki sab ki Tarah hai.
But itna tay hai jaisa hai vaisa hoga nahi
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Ab sawal mere man me the papa ke liye jinke jabab mujhe janne the.
Ab aage....
Idhar ghar me jab maa ko pata Chala ki police mujhe Saath le gayi hai toh Bo rone lagi kyu ki unhe dar tha ki police shiva ki unse alag na Kar de doobara.
Meenu chachi ne unhe samjhya ki me thik ku aur police ko sirf Kuch sawal Karne the is liye mujhe Saath le gayi aur ab me bapas aa Raha hu.
Ye sun kar maa thoda Khush ho gayi.
Phir chachi ne unhe yaad dilaya ki hamme aaj Delhi Jana hai shaadi me mere chote mama ki.
Jab maa ko ye baat yaad aayi toh Bo phir se tension me aa gayi kyu ki aaj shadi thi aur abhi tak unhone mere liye Kuch bhi Nahi kharida tha shaadi me pehnne ke liye.
Udhar papa ke sath car me mujhe samjh hi Nahi aa Raha tha ki sawal suru Kaha se karoo.
Phir me Mene poochna shuru kiya
Mein- papa ye sab kya hai?
Papa- kya beta?
Mein- ye gaadi ye itna bada Ghar.
Ye itne naukar aur ye police ki sab ke samne darana.
Papa- kuch Nahi hai beta tere Jane ke baad mujhe ahsaas hua ki kitne piche hai hum iss samaz me Jo Apne bete ki bhi naa bacha sake aur bas uske baad se hi Mene aur mehnet se kaam suru Kar Diya aur logo ki udhar dena band Kar Diya suru me toh Kuch pareshan aayi but baad me sab thik ho Gaya aur uske baad Mene Kabhi peeche nahi dekha.aur Khun paisa kamaya.
Mein- ye toh thik hai but police ko police station me darana ye kaise?
Papa- yeh Bo kya baat hai na ki mein ab hamare yaha ki JEWELLERS ki camatee Ka president hu toh thoda naam hai mera aur iss Baar me Apne area me MLA ke chunaav me bhi khada ho rahha hu bas sab isse Ka Kamal hai.
Hamari baato me hi hum dukaan pahooch Gaye baha jakar pata Chala ki dukaan par Kai log jama hai mere welcome ke liye aur apni Khushi jahir Karne ke liye.
Me car se utara toh Kai logo toh me pehchan tha Kai naye the Jo shayad mere Jane ke baad hamare dost bane honge.
Uske baad me khuch Der dukaan par baitha.
Jab me andar Gaya toh dekhne me Kuch Nahi badla tha Jo jaisa 4 Saal pehle that baisa hi ab tha Mene jab iske baare me poocha toh papa ne kaha.
Papa- Bo kya hai iss sab me Teri hone ki Khushboo this isliye ise Nahi badla abhi tak par ab Tu aa Gaya hai na jaisa man ho baisa Kar Lena isko.
Mein- Nahi papa iski koi jaroorat Nahi hai ye sab bhi achha hai.
Bus Kuch changes Karke isse aur achha Kar denge.
Aur iske baad papa ne mujh se Kaha ki ab tum gaddi par betho aur aaj pure 4 Saal baad me yaha bethne Bala tha.mere Dil bhari ho Raha tha but me to Nahi paa Raha tha.
Aisa hi toh ho Gaya tha me 6saal pehle uss din ke baad se......
Thanks for reading....
Ab sawal mere man me the papa ke liye jinke jabab mujhe janne the.
Ab aage....
Idhar ghar me jab maa ko pata Chala ki police mujhe Saath le gayi hai toh Bo rone lagi kyu ki unhe dar tha ki police shiva ki unse alag na Kar de doobara.
Meenu chachi ne unhe samjhya ki me thik ku aur police ko sirf Kuch sawal Karne the is liye mujhe Saath le gayi aur ab me bapas aa Raha hu.
Ye sun kar maa thoda Khush ho gayi.
Phir chachi ne unhe yaad dilaya ki hamme aaj Delhi Jana hai shaadi me mere chote mama ki.
Jab maa ko ye baat yaad aayi toh Bo phir se tension me aa gayi kyu ki aaj shadi thi aur abhi tak unhone mere liye Kuch bhi Nahi kharida tha shaadi me pehnne ke liye.
Udhar papa ke sath car me mujhe samjh hi Nahi aa Raha tha ki sawal suru Kaha se karoo.
Phir me Mene poochna shuru kiya
Mein- papa ye sab kya hai?
Papa- kya beta?
Mein- ye gaadi ye itna bada Ghar.
Ye itne naukar aur ye police ki sab ke samne darana.
Papa- kuch Nahi hai beta tere Jane ke baad mujhe ahsaas hua ki kitne piche hai hum iss samaz me Jo Apne bete ki bhi naa bacha sake aur bas uske baad se hi Mene aur mehnet se kaam suru Kar Diya aur logo ki udhar dena band Kar Diya suru me toh Kuch pareshan aayi but baad me sab thik ho Gaya aur uske baad Mene Kabhi peeche nahi dekha.aur Khun paisa kamaya.
Mein- ye toh thik hai but police ko police station me darana ye kaise?
Papa- yeh Bo kya baat hai na ki mein ab hamare yaha ki JEWELLERS ki camatee Ka president hu toh thoda naam hai mera aur iss Baar me Apne area me MLA ke chunaav me bhi khada ho rahha hu bas sab isse Ka Kamal hai.
Hamari baato me hi hum dukaan pahooch Gaye baha jakar pata Chala ki dukaan par Kai log jama hai mere welcome ke liye aur apni Khushi jahir Karne ke liye.
Me car se utara toh Kai logo toh me pehchan tha Kai naye the Jo shayad mere Jane ke baad hamare dost bane honge.
Uske baad me khuch Der dukaan par baitha.
Jab me andar Gaya toh dekhne me Kuch Nahi badla tha Jo jaisa 4 Saal pehle that baisa hi ab tha Mene jab iske baare me poocha toh papa ne kaha.
Papa- Bo kya hai iss sab me Teri hone ki Khushboo this isliye ise Nahi badla abhi tak par ab Tu aa Gaya hai na jaisa man ho baisa Kar Lena isko.
Mein- Nahi papa iski koi jaroorat Nahi hai ye sab bhi achha hai.
Bus Kuch changes Karke isse aur achha Kar denge.
Aur iske baad papa ne mujh se Kaha ki ab tum gaddi par betho aur aaj pure 4 Saal baad me yaha bethne Bala tha.mere Dil bhari ho Raha tha but me to Nahi paa Raha tha.
Aisa hi toh ho Gaya tha me 6saal pehle uss din ke baad se......
Thanks for reading....
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