Fantasy shivam.. the warrior..

[Shanu]

Job pe aaj ot kar rha hu.. Is lie kaam karte kqrte update post kar rha tha.. Agar pura update nhi de paya toh Kal morning me 8baje ghar jaunga tab de dunga​

Ok

 

[rebellover]

Update 35.. The most awaited. Shaadi..

shivam and shilpi ko ghar me le jaya gya.. Riya ne poora program final kia tha.. Aaj morning me mehdi nd haldi and kal shadi...

Sayesha nd kriti shilpi ko hatho me to riya nd pragya pairo me mehdi laga rahi thi.. Shilpi aaj bahot khush thi uski mohabbat aaj apni manzil par pahoch chuki thi.. Shivam sofa par beth kar sab dekh raha tha, par uski nazr shilpi par hi jami hui thi.. Thodi der baad mehdi lagane ki rasm puri hui and shilpi ko room me le jaya gya..

night time.. Sangeet..
Villa ke hall me bada sa stage banaya gaya tha and ek side par dj par badhiya wale songs baj rahe the.. Thodi der baad riya ne dono ka hath pakad kar unhe khada kia and unhe stage par khada kar ke niche audience ke bich aa kar beth gai.. Tabhi dono ka fav. Song bajne laga..

mere haath me tera haath ho
saari jannate mere saath ho
mere haath me tera haath ho
saari jannate mere saath ho
tu jo paas ho phir kya ye jaha
tere pyar me ho jaun fanaa
mere haath me tera haath ho
saari jannate mere saath ho
tu jo paas ho phir kya ye jaha
tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
mere haath me tera haath ho
saari jannate mere saath ho

tere dil me meri saanso ko, jagah mil jaaye
tere ishq me meri jaan, fanaa ho jaaye
jitne paas hai khushbu saans ke
jitne paas hotho ke sargam
jaise saath hai karvat yaad ke
jaise saath baaho ke sangam
jitne paas paas khwaabo ke najar
utne paas tu rehna hamsafar
tu jo paas ho phir kya ye jaha
tere pyar me ho jau fanaa
mere haath me tera haath ho
saari jannate mere saath ho

rone de aaj hamko, do aankhe sujaane de
baaho me lele aur khud ko bhig jaane de
hai jo seene me kaid dariya, wo chhut jayega
hai itna dard ke tera daaman bhig jayega
jitne paas paas dhadkan ke hai raaz
jitne paas bundo ke baadal
jaise sath sath chanda ke hai raat
jitne paas naino ke kaajal
jitne paas paas saagar ke laher
utne paas tu rehna hamsafar
tu jo paas ho phir kya ye jaha
tere pyar me ho jau fanaa
mere haath me tera haath ho
saari jannate mere saath ho

adhuri saans thi dhadkan adhuri thi adhure ham
magar ab chaand poora hai falak pe aur ab poore hai ham..

Sab dono ka dance dekh kar dang ho gaye the, dono ko pata hi nahi chla ki kab song khatm hua and dono hi ek dusre ki aakho me kho gaye the.. shivam ne shilpi ke lips pae sabke samne halka sa kiss kia and use gale se laga lia and kaan me kaha, " maine apna waada adha pura kia, thode hi palo me ham hamesha ke lie ek ho jayenge.. love you always my sherni.."

Dono sath me hi ek dusre ke hath me hath daale stage se niche aaye jaha sab standing ovation de rahe the.. Dono maa and riya ke paas aa gaye par fir bhi dono ne ek dusre ka hath nahi chhoda tha..

Riya : o laila majnu.. Kuchh to khayal karo ham senior citizens ka.. ab to hath chhodo ek dusre ka.. Kuchh hi hours me tum dono ki shadi hai fir jo chahe karte rehna..

shivam and shilpi sharma gaye par unhone apne hatho ko alag nahi kia.. Khair thodi hi der me sangeet khatm hua and sare guests ghar chale gaye, idhar shivam purane dino ki tarha apne room me




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[spritemathews]

What happened bro. Why no update

 

[rebellover]

Sorry bhai log, for very very late update.. I got injured in my backbone(reed ki haddi ke ek point me krack hai) but i am little ok now.. ​

Update 36.. ☺...
3din baad..

in tin dino me shivam and shilpi ki shadi dhum dhaam se ho chuki thi.. Sabhi chahte the ki dono honeymoon par jaye par dono ne mana kar dia yeh keh kar ki pehle karuna maa ko dhungenge fir unka and pallavi ka ashirvad le kar jayenge...

Thodi der baad shilpi parcel me aai hui diary le kar drawing room me aa jati hai and shivam ko batati hai ki kisi ne yeh diary bheji hai karuna maa ke nam se.. Fir Shivam diary open karta hai and sab ko padh kae sunane lagta hai..

in karuna's diary..
Date 1/3/1975
mai hu karuna vishnupratap singh.. Aaj meri age 18saal ki ho gai hai and papa bhi bahot khush hai kyu ki main clg. me padhne jane wali hu, iit me.. Main hamare gav durgapur ki esi 3rd ladki houngi jisne itni padhai kari ho.. Thanks to pitaji jinhone girls ko aage padhane and saxam banane ke lie ganv walo ko prerit kia..

Parso main iit ahemdabad gujarat ke lie train se nikalne wali hu par dil me thoda dar aur apne pariwar se dur jane ka dukh bhi tha.. Khair wo din bhi aa gaya jab main apne nss destination yani ki iit pohoch gai.. Naya gyaan aur experience pane ke lie main bahot hi excited thi.. Par mujhe nahi pata tha ki yaha se meri life badalne wali hai ya fir yu kahe ki baad me nark banne wali hai..

thodi der me main apni class me pohochi, i forgot to tell ki mene information. technology ke vibhag me engineering karne ka tsy kia tha.. Class full thi bas ek last seat khali thi jispe ek ladka betha tha main wahaan ja ke beth gai..

woh ladka aur koi nahi aaditya tha jisse meri pehle hi din dosti ho gai thi.. khair dhire dhire 3classes khatm ho gai and recess time me main nashta order kar ke ek khali table par beth gai aur thodi der bad aditya bhi mere sath aa kar beth gaya and hm dono baat karte hue nashta krne lage..

Tabhi canteen ka door khula and ek shakhs andar enter hua, and woh aur koi nahi hamare padosi gaav ke sarpanch ka beta umesh tha.. Wo dikhne me ekdum sidha sa tha par koi bhi uske asli nature ko nahi janta tha jiska samna shayad main jaldi karne wali thi jiska mujhe andaza bhi nahi tha..

aadi and maine nashta khatam kar lia tha and ham dono library me jane ke lie nikal hi rahe the ki umesh ke ek dost ki nazar mujh par pad gai.. Wo bhi hamare padosi gaanv ka gunde type ka ladka tha, usne umesh ke kaan me kuchh kaha and uske bad uday uth kar ham dono ke pichhe aane laga..

Achanak hi wo hum dono ke samne aa gaya and hamara rasta rok lia.. And mujhe hawas bhari nazro se dekhte hue kaha, " kesi hai ap miss karuna singh.. Us din ke baad kaafi lambe samay bad apse mulakat hui.. " meri aakho me bahot sara gussa tha par pata nahi q thoda dar bhi tha..

Main usko avoid karte hue side se jane lagi ke tabhi usne mera hath pakad lia aur bola, " us din tumne jo bhi kia uska badla main zarur lunga.. Sirf tumse nahi tumse jude hue.. Aur " fir kuchh seconds ruk kar aadi ki tarf dekh kar kaha, "tumse judne wale har shakhs ko khatm kar dunga.." mujhe itna gussa aa raha tha ki main uski jaan le leti.. mujhme himmat aur takat dono hi the par jis jagah par main us waqt thu waha yeh sab karna khatarnak sabit ho sakta tha.. Is lie maine aadi ka hath pakda aur chal di..

mere waha se nikal jane ke bad umesh khud se hi bola, "jitna khush rehna hai, jitna hasna hai hans le par is time tumhari har 100% pakki hai.. "

library me ja kar humne books li and class me jane ki bajaye hum wahi beth gaye and study karne lage par main concentrate nahi kar pa rahi thi is lie maine frustrated ho kar book bandh kar di..

aadi: kon tha woh and wo tumse ese kyu baat kar raha tha jese tumhari usse personal dushmani ho..

maine apne papa ke alawa yeh bat kisi ko bhi nahi batai thi par pata nahi kyu main aadi ko is baat ka raaz batane se khud ko rok nahi paayi..

short flash back..
yeh baat us waqt ki hai jab maine abhi abhi 10th pass kia hua tha and vacation chal raha tha.. Us waqt umesh hamare padosi gaanv ki school me 12th me padhta tha par aaye din woh dono gaanvo ki ladkio ko pareshan kia karta tha..

ek din uski nazar meri sagi badi behan kiran par pad gai, jo ki us waqt sirf 19saal ki masum ladki thi jo dimagi taur pe kamzor thii..

Ek din wo ghar me sab ko bina bataye khet me aa gayi.. Badkismati se umesh waha chhupa hua tha.. Usne dur se hi ek aam fenka jisme behoshi ki dawai inject kari hui thi.. Kiran aam dekh kar khush ho gai and use khane lagi aur thodi hi der main wo behosh ho kar gir gai..

Umesh ne jaldi se kiran ko uthaya and apni jip me daal dia and nikal lia.. Kismat se main apni bullet bike par waha se nikal rahi thi maine umesh ko dekh lia, maine turant apni bike ki speed badhai aur uske pichhe jane lagi.. Main uske pichhe pichhe uske farm house aa gai..

par umesh ne mujhe dekh lia tha and uske chehre par devil smile aa gai.. Usne kiran ko ghasitte hue jeep se bahar nikala and use khada kar ke uske gale par chaku fer dia jisse uski mout ho gai.. Umesh ne uski lash ko laat mar kar meri tarf fenk dia..

mere dil ko us waqt esi chot pahochi thi ke aaj bhi dil ro padta hai..

mene apne kandhe par bandhi apni sward nikali aur us haiwan ki taraf uska ant karne ke lie badh gai.. Par dil keh raha tha ki mout uske lue asaan saza hogi use esi saza deni chahie ki wo har pal marta rahe, maut ki bhikh maange..

jese hi main uski or badhi uske aadmio ne mujhe gher lia par main rukne wali nahi thi. Thodi hi der mein uske sare aadmi bahot buri halt me idhar udhar pade hue the. Ye nazara dekh kar wo haiwan andar ki or bhaga aur main bhi uske pichhe jane lagi. Wo bhag raha tha par mene nazdik me rakhe flower vase ko utha kar uski or fenka jo sidha uske sar pe laga.

meri aakho se angare baras rahe the. Maine usko ek zordar kick mari jiske wajah se wo ghasitta hua ek khambhe se ja takraya.mene usko mar mar kar ghutno par la dia tha. Bad me maine uske us hath ko kaat kar fenk dia jisse usne kiran di ki hatya ki thi fir mere uska penis kaat dia aur use tadapta chhod kar kiran di ki lash ko le kar ghar chali aai.

pure raste meri aakho se aasu beh rahe the. maa papa ghar ke bahar hi khade the jese hi unhone kiran di and mujhe dekha wo shocked ho gaye.

maine andar ja kar kiran di ko sambhal kar rakh dia and maa papa dono ko jo kuchh bhi hua tha wo bataya.

papa chup rahe par maa ne sirf itna kaha, "us haiwan ko ghasitte hue dono gaav ke bicho bich laa kar saza deni chahie thi. Taki aur koi darinda kisi masum ladki ki or buri niyat se dekhne se bhi dar jaye." and unhone mujhe rote hue gale laga lia.

dusre din pure vidhi vidhan ke sath kiran didi ka agni sanskar kia gaya, tab ham tino ne mil kar unki chita ko aag di. Waqt bitta gaya par hum sab anjaan the aane wale toofan se.

(ABHI KAHANI ME PAST SHURU HI HUA HAI, WAIT FOR END OF KARUNA'S PAST.)

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[Shanu]

Nice update bhai and welcome back bhai

 

[spritemathews]

 

[rebellover]

Update.37. Maut

Diwali ka tyohar chal raha tha.aaj diwali ka tisra din tha. Hum kiran di ke jane ke karan udas the par kismat ko kosne ke alawa kuchh bhi nahi kar sakte the.

Raat ke 11baj rahe the and hum sab living room me bethe the.tabhi bahar se kai sari cars ke rukne ki awaz aai.maine uth kar dekha to umesh ka baap gundo ke sath hamare ghar aa chuka tha.

Usne aate hi chilla ke mujhse kaha,"bahot shokh hai na tujhe insaaf karne ka, Badla lene ka ab tu mera badla dekhegi."Usne apni gun maa ke sar ki or point ki and unhe shoot kar dia.main aur papa Thodi der ke lie sadme me chale gaye,par jaldi hi hamara gussa had se jyada badh chuka tha.papa ki and meri swards nazdik hi tangi hui thi. Papa ne meri sward meri tarf uchhal di and uske baad hum baap beti unsab se ladne lage.

Hum dono ne lagbhag sare gundo ko khatm kar dia tha.umesh ke baap ne dhokhe se papa ki pith par goli chala di par uska nishana chuk gaya and goli unke kandhe ko chhu kar nikal gai and unke kandhe se khoon nikalne laga.

papa ka gussa ab apni sari sima paar kar chuka tha unhone jis hath me umesh ke baap ne gun pakad rakhi thi use kaat dia.tab tak mene baki bache sare gundo ko khatam kar dia tha. Ab hum dono Uske samne khade the.

Papa ne apni sward uski tarf fenk kar kaha, "hum sachche xatriya hain, jo kabhi nihatthe dushman par waar nahi karte. Meri beti tumse ladegi." papa apni baat puri kar ke pichhe Rakhe sofe par beth gaye.mere aur umesh ke baap ke bich bhishan dwand yuddh shuru ho gaya.

Wo ek hath se ladne ka try kar rha tha par wo asafal ho rha tha, and wo ab boht zyada ghayal ho gaya tha. Wo ab ghutne par aa gaya tha mene apni sward se uska chehra upar kia and kaha, "tera and tere bete ka ant shuru ho chuka hai. Use tujhse bhi battar maut milegi." Itna keh kar mene uska gala kaat dia.

Thode din baad me fir college chali gai. Papa akele pad gaye the par fir bhi unhone apne akelepan ko dur karne ka achha rasta dhund lia tha.Unhone gaanv me ek badi library banva di thi and wahi rehne lage the.

Ek month baad hamari batch education tour par gai hui thi. aadi ne mujhe sambhalne ki bharpur koshish ki thi and wo thoda kamyab bhi ho gaya tha. Hum dono hamesha ki tarha sath beth kar lecture attand kar rahe the ki tabhi peon class me aaya and mujhe bataya ki mere papa ka call aya hai.

Main peon ke sath chali gai. Jese hi mene reciever utha kar kaan ke pas lagaya mujhe papa ki ladkhadati aawaz sunai di. "uday zinda hai.usne mujh par hamla kia tha and ab shayad mera bachna namumkin hai. Savdhaan rehna."

Yeh unke aakhri alfaaz the.aadi mere paas pahoch chuka tha, mene use rote hue sarii baat bata di. Uske baad aadi ne dean sir se baat kar ke do din ki leave le li. Uske baad wo mujhe le kar taxi roki and thodi der baad hum ek ghar ke paas pahoch gaye.aadi ne mujhe bataya ki wo yhan apne bhai ke sath rehta hai.

Ghar me 4rooms ,ek kitchen aur teress tha. Thodi der me aadi ka bhai bhi aa gaya. Aadi ne hum dono ka intro. Karvaya.

Aadi ne in do dino me meri bahot care kari thi.hum tino sath me rehne lage the.ek din shaam ke waqt aadi khun se sani shirt ke sath ghar wapas aaya, main uski halat dekh kar seham gai.

main jaldi se aasi ke pas gai aur aadi ko check karne lagi. Aadi ne kaha, "yeh khun mera nahi hai, yeh khun kisi ki jaan bachate hue uska khun meri shirt pe gira hai.main use hospital le gaya." mere dil ko sukun mila ki use kuchh nahi hua hai. Fir bhi main Thodi dari hui thi, mene uska hath pakda aur usko uske room me le gai fir apne room me chali gai.

main room me aa kar man hi man soch rahi thi ke aadi ki esi halt dekh kar mere dil me kyu dard hua? Kyu main hamesha uske pas rehnna chahti hu? Sochte mujhe kab nind aa gai pata bhi nhi chala.

at morning, in college.
main aaj class me aadi ka hath pakad kar bethi hui thi during all time, jese ki wo mujhe chhod kar kahi chala jayega. Us din hamara samna umesh se nahi hua tha is lie man thoda sa shant tha. Chhutti ke time aadi ki car me ghar aate waqt bhi mene uska hath kas ke pakad Rakha tha and jab hum gharke andar pahoche tab jake maine aadi ka hath chhoda aur usko ek bar jee bhar ke dekh lene ke baad apne room md chali gai.

us time aadi ka bhai ghar pe hi tha usne wo sab dekha jo maine kia tha. Thodi der baad wo aadi ke room me gaya aur uske samne beth kar use ghurne laga. Aadi ne sawalia nazro se use dekha. Aadi ka bhai bola, "bhai mere khayal se karuna apse pyar karne lagi hai. Maine kal aur aaj uski halat dekhi thi jisse saaf sabit hota hai ki uske dil me apke lie pyar janam le chuka hai."

aadi: mujhe pata hai chhote ki wo mujhse pyar karne lagi hai par tu bhi janta hai ki hum dono raw ke undercover agents hai, aur hamari life ka koi bharosa nahi hai kab ham shahid ho jaye.

uske baad aadi ke bhai ne kuchh nahi kaha q k aadi ki baat sahi thi. Khair ye raat bhi bit gai. Aur subah hui aadi and main uski car mein college ke lie nikal gaye and aadi ka bhai hamare jane ke baad ek jagah jane ke lie nikal gaya.

raw headquarters.
aadi ka bhai raw chief ke samne khada tha.usne kaha,"sir jis ladki ne umesh ko gambhir roop se ghayal kia tha use humne Apni protection me le lia hai par buri khabar yeh hai ki umesh zinda bach gya hai and wo ab hamare college me aa gaya hai. Usne aane ke baad abhi tak kuchh bada nahi kia hai. Agar ham use pakad le to ham mr. X tak pahoch sakte hain.

raw cheif : hame us mr. X tak pahochne ke lie pakki full proof planning karni hogi warna uska khatma karna next to impossible hai.

uske baad dono ke bich kuchh aur discussion hui uske baad wo wapas ghar aa gaya.

At college.
Maine aaj bhi aadi ka hath pakad rakha tha college jate time,class me jate time, in short mene uske hath ko pura din chhoda hi nahi tha and aadi ne bhi mujhe kuchh nahi kaha tha.Meri sahelia meri halat dekh kar man hi man hasti ja rahi thi.

Aaj hamara ek lecture free tha to ham sab sahelia canteen me bethi thi and tabhi aadi aata hua dikha.main anjaane me hi usko dekhte hue uske chehre me gum ho gai.

mujhe aadi ko ese taadta dekh meri sahelia kabhi use dekhti to kabhi muje. Fir meri saheli ne mere sar par chamat lagate hue kaha, " chhutti ke baad jitna man kare utna didar karNa hai utna kar lena. Sab tumhe hi dekh rahe hain." main sharma gai and jaldi se nashta khatam karke class me chali gai. now i became sure that i love aadi.




















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[Shanu]

Excellent update bhai

 

[spritemathews]

बहुत ही शानदार अपडेट