Fantasy States War (Completed)
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Sorry Dosto Villain Raakha Ki Asli Name Agni Tha Jis Sey Main Story Li Thi Us Ko Agni Naam Acha Lagta Tha Is Liye Us Ne Naam Change Kar Diya Ab Se Raakha Ki Badle Agni Use Ho Ga.
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UPDATE-11
Ravi- abe kaha ja rha he chal ab apni aasli party suru krte he.
AT- kesi party..
Ravi- jannat ki party....
Ab age-
Ravi- chal aaj tujhe dikhata hoo Gaon ki bachelor party khas jiju ke liye rakhi he.
AT- abe pagal ho gya he ghar me agar kisi ko pata chala to tere sath meri bhi what lagegi..
Ravi- abe chal kuch nhi hoga.. aur AT ko pakad ke le jata he gaon ke peeche ke ilake me jaha charo aur sannat hota he..
AT- abe ye kaha leke chal rha he.
Ravi- abe tu chup kar aur chal aur phir vo log ek khandar ke pass jake rukte he.
AT- abe tu kya is khandhar me bhooto se nach karane wala he.. jhalla kar AT bolta he..
Ravi- Bhai Tu 10 min shant ho ja phir jo bolna he vo bolna ..
Aur phir dono log ander khander ke jate he jaha ka nazara bilkul alag hota he. Charo aur log ki moj masti chal rhi hoti he . Har taraf sarab hi sarab hoti he aur sarab ka maza badhane ke liye samne sabab bhi hota he. Har taraf adhnangi Ladkiya nach rhi hoti he. Aur sabhi mard unke badan se khel rhe hote he .
AT bhi vaha jake ek botle sarab ki uthata he aur ek hi sans me poori bottle khatam kar deta he . Aur iske baad silsila suru hota he jaha sabhi Ladkiyo aur sarab me doobe rehte he . Sabhi apni rate rangeen kar rhe hote he but hamara hero to bus sarab ki botle me hi busy rehta he. Esi hi puri raat beet jati he aur sabhi log vahi vesi hii halat me so jate he..
NEXT DAY-
Sabhi log bidai ki tayyari kar rhe hote he. Har taraf bis rona dhona ho rha hota he. Nisha bhi apne pita aur mata ke gale lag kar ro rhi hoti he. Bidai ki tayyari ho chuki hoti he . Sabhi log jane ke liye nikalne wale hote he ki tabhi Ravi aake AT par ek bomb phodta he..
Ravi- Bhai tayyar ho na..
AT- abe kya aaj hi chal rha he seher pehle kyu nhi bataya.
Ravi- hum seher nhi ja rhe he.. balki ... Aur phir chup ho jata he..
AT- balki kya fir hum kaha ja rhe he...... Kahi jo me soch rha hoo hum vaha to nhi ja rhe he..
Ravi- ha tu sahi soch rha he.. iske aage Ravi kuch bolta ki AT suru ho jata he Ravi ke upar..
Ravi- bus kar Bhai aur kitna marega. Ab isme me kya karoo papa aur Didi ne bola he jana hi padega...
AT- kuch soch kar theek he chalooga me bhi...
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Update -12
Ravi- bus kar Bhai aur kitna marega. Ab isme me kya karoo papa aur Didi ne bola he jana hi padega..
Ab age-
AT- kuch soch kar theek he chalooga me bhi... Lekin dhyan rhe ki kisi ko gaon me mere bare me pata nhi chalna chahiye..
Ravi- theek Bhai jesa tu bole. Chal ja apna saman pack kr le hume waha pe pura ek week rukna he aur phir wahi se Didi ko wapas lana he ek week baad.
Uske baad AT bhi apne kamre me chala jata he aur apna bag pack krke bahar aata he aur car me saman rakh deta he. Thodi dair me sab chalne lagte he aur Ravi aur AT bhi ek car me chal padte he . Baratiyo ke sath kuch 20-30 hathiyaar band log bhi hote he jinko dekh AT poochta he..
AT- abe Ravi ye hamare sath itne log kyu ja rhe he . Bidai hokar ghar ja rhi he dulhan ki ladne ke liye jung pe ja rhe he.
Ravi- Bhai tu to kayi salo pehle ye ilaka chod diya he isliye tujhe sayad yaha ke halat ke bare me nhi pata he.
AT- kyu kya hua yaha ke halat ko..
Ravi- pichle panch salo se yaha ke halat bahut bure ho gye he dakuo ka aatank bahut badh gya he. Din dahade lootpaat . Balatkar, logo ke ghar dukaan jala dete he aur koi kuch nhi kar pata he . Jinke pass Power he aadmi he paisa he vo ya to unse Ladke bach jate he ya phir paise deke aur jo gareeb he unko to bus unlogo ka atyachaar hi sehna padta he..
AT- aur yaha ki police aur government kya karti he.
Ravi- government ko to kuch pata hi nhi chalta he jo yaha ka mla aur bade police officers he vo sab unse mile hue he. Isliye koi bhi government action nhi hota he.
AT-kuch sochta he aur phir bolta he chal theek he . Kitni dair me nikal rhe he sab.
Ravi- 15 min me chal rhe he .
AT- ruk mai abhi aata hoo aur phir apne bag se ek cigret nikalta he aur ek side me jake pine lagta he. Thodi der me jab log chalne lagte he aur AT bhi car me beth jata he.
Yaha se safar kuch 40 km ka hota he aur gaon ke rasta hone ki wajah se kuch 1-1.5 ganta hota he.
Sabhi care waha se chal deti he . Raste ke sundar drasyo ka anand uthate hue. Sadko ke kinare lage hue phool aur ped bahut hi sundar lag rhe hote he . Pure raste me prakrati ki sunderta ka bahot hi accha pradarshan ho rha hota he.
Abhi un logo ne adhe se jyada hi rasta par kiya hota he ki sabhi gadiya ruk jati he....
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Insani duniya se dur kisi aur dimension me ek budha aadmi betha hua tapasya kr rha hota he. Uske charo aur kafi sare log bethe hote he jo kafi pareshan hote he aur us budhe aadmi ke tapassya se bahar aane ka intezar kar rhe hote he.
Ki tabhi achanak vo budha aadmi apni tapasya se jagta he aur muskura rha hota he jise dekh sabhi logo ko bahut ascharye hota he.. aur usme se ek aadmi us budhe vyakti se poochta he..
Aadmi- Guruji aap ese muskura rhe he. Ye jante hue bhi ki bahut jald hi Agni us kaid se bahar aane wala he aur is baar uski shaktiya aur bhi adhikh bad jayegi..
Admi 2- us kaid me rehte hue bhi usne 5 States pe puri tarah se kabza kar liye he aur sirf ab hum kuch hi log bache he jo usse lad rhe he lekin kab tak ye bhi nhi jante he. Hamare ander to ab itni takat bhi nhi he ki uske sipahiyo se jeet paye..
Guruji- shant ho jao. Tum sab ... Bahot jald hi vo wapas aarha jo 5 States ko wapas ajad karayega.( Tabhi vaha pe kafi dair se shant Ladki bolti he)
Ladki- kon ayega Guruji ...
Guruji- King of Xander Cage aur vohi ab Dark Prince Agni ko khatam karega..
Ladki- lekin Rajkumar to mar chuka he.
Guruji- nhi Jackli vo kabhi nhi mara tha. Queen of Crystal State ke jadui mantro ke wajah se vo yaha se dur insani duniya me chala gya tha aur uske bare me kisi ko nhi pata chal paye isliye Rani ne kuch mantro se ek raksha kavach bana diya tha jo ki tab hi hatega jab uske ander ki Shaktiya jagegi. aur jo bahut hi jald jagne wali he..lekin abhi vo itna takatwar nhi he ki vo Agni ka samna kr paye isliye pehle usko train karna padega.
Jackli- matlab ki uski Shakti aate hi uske bare me sabko pata chal jayega..
Guruji- nhi mera baccha . Jabtak vo insani duniya me he koi bhi uske bare me pata nhi kar sakta usko tabhi track kiya ja sakega jab vo insani duniya ko chod 5 State me ayega. Aur uski kismat bahut jald hi 5 State me use leke ayega.....
Guruji ki baaat sun kar sabhi kafi khus ho jate he..
(Jackli- age 150 years, but look like a girl of 19 or 20, sword fight me best aur kisi bhi tarah ke kaam ko bahut jald hi kar leti he. Demag aam aadmiyo se 100 guna tez chalta he iska. Baki ka intro waqt ane pe)
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Abhi un logo ne adhe se jyada hi rasta par kiya hota he ki sabhi gadiya ruk jati he....
AT- kya hua gadiya kyu rokdi gyi AT car se muh bahar nikal ke dekhta he to raste me kuch patthar pade hote he.
Sath aye hathiyar band log bahar utarte he aur samne pade hue paththaro ko uthate he ki tabhi goli chalne ki awaaz aati he.
"Dhayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Ravi- bus kar Bhai aur kitna marega. Ab isme me kya karoo papa aur Didi ne bola he jana hi padega..
Ab age-
AT- kuch soch kar theek he chalooga me bhi... Lekin dhyan rhe ki kisi ko gaon me mere bare me pata nhi chalna chahiye..
Ravi- theek Bhai jesa tu bole. Chal ja apna saman pack kr le hume waha pe pura ek week rukna he aur phir wahi se Didi ko wapas lana he ek week baad.
Uske baad AT bhi apne kamre me chala jata he aur apna bag pack krke bahar aata he aur car me saman rakh deta he. Thodi dair me sab chalne lagte he aur Ravi aur AT bhi ek car me chal padte he . Baratiyo ke sath kuch 20-30 hathiyaar band log bhi hote he jinko dekh AT poochta he..
AT- abe Ravi ye hamare sath itne log kyu ja rhe he . Bidai hokar ghar ja rhi he dulhan ki ladne ke liye jung pe ja rhe he.
Ravi- Bhai tu to kayi salo pehle ye ilaka chod diya he isliye tujhe sayad yaha ke halat ke bare me nhi pata he.
AT- kyu kya hua yaha ke halat ko..
Ravi- pichle panch salo se yaha ke halat bahut bure ho gye he dakuo ka aatank bahut badh gya he. Din dahade lootpaat . Balatkar, logo ke ghar dukaan jala dete he aur koi kuch nhi kar pata he . Jinke pass Power he aadmi he paisa he vo ya to unse Ladke bach jate he ya phir paise deke aur jo gareeb he unko to bus unlogo ka atyachaar hi sehna padta he..
AT- aur yaha ki police aur government kya karti he.
Ravi- government ko to kuch pata hi nhi chalta he jo yaha ka mla aur bade police officers he vo sab unse mile hue he. Isliye koi bhi government action nhi hota he.
AT-kuch sochta he aur phir bolta he chal theek he . Kitni dair me nikal rhe he sab.
Ravi- 15 min me chal rhe he .
AT- ruk mai abhi aata hoo aur phir apne bag se ek cigret nikalta he aur ek side me jake pine lagta he. Thodi der me jab log chalne lagte he aur AT bhi car me beth jata he.
Yaha se safar kuch 40 km ka hota he aur gaon ke rasta hone ki wajah se kuch 1-1.5 ganta hota he.
Sabhi care waha se chal deti he . Raste ke sundar drasyo ka anand uthate hue. Sadko ke kinare lage hue phool aur ped bahut hi sundar lag rhe hote he . Pure raste me prakrati ki sunderta ka bahot hi accha pradarshan ho rha hota he.
Abhi un logo ne adhe se jyada hi rasta par kiya hota he ki sabhi gadiya ruk jati he....
.........................
Insani duniya se dur kisi aur dimension me ek budha aadmi betha hua tapasya kr rha hota he. Uske charo aur kafi sare log bethe hote he jo kafi pareshan hote he aur us budhe aadmi ke tapassya se bahar aane ka intezar kar rhe hote he.
Ki tabhi achanak vo budha aadmi apni tapasya se jagta he aur muskura rha hota he jise dekh sabhi logo ko bahut ascharye hota he.. aur usme se ek aadmi us budhe vyakti se poochta he..
Aadmi- Guruji aap ese muskura rhe he. Ye jante hue bhi ki bahut jald hi Agni us kaid se bahar aane wala he aur is baar uski shaktiya aur bhi adhikh bad jayegi..
Admi 2- us kaid me rehte hue bhi usne 5 States pe puri tarah se kabza kar liye he aur sirf ab hum kuch hi log bache he jo usse lad rhe he lekin kab tak ye bhi nhi jante he. Hamare ander to ab itni takat bhi nhi he ki uske sipahiyo se jeet paye..
Guruji- shant ho jao. Tum sab ... Bahot jald hi vo wapas aarha jo 5 States ko wapas ajad karayega.( Tabhi vaha pe kafi dair se shant Ladki bolti he)
Ladki- kon ayega Guruji ...
Guruji- King of Xander Cage aur vohi ab Dark Prince Agni ko khatam karega..
Ladki- lekin Rajkumar to mar chuka he.
Guruji- nhi Jackli vo kabhi nhi mara tha. Queen of Crystal State ke jadui mantro ke wajah se vo yaha se dur insani duniya me chala gya tha aur uske bare me kisi ko nhi pata chal paye isliye Rani ne kuch mantro se ek raksha kavach bana diya tha jo ki tab hi hatega jab uske ander ki Shaktiya jagegi. aur jo bahut hi jald jagne wali he..lekin abhi vo itna takatwar nhi he ki vo Agni ka samna kr paye isliye pehle usko train karna padega.
Jackli- matlab ki uski Shakti aate hi uske bare me sabko pata chal jayega..
Guruji- nhi mera baccha . Jabtak vo insani duniya me he koi bhi uske bare me pata nhi kar sakta usko tabhi track kiya ja sakega jab vo insani duniya ko chod 5 State me ayega. Aur uski kismat bahut jald hi 5 State me use leke ayega.....
Guruji ki baaat sun kar sabhi kafi khus ho jate he..
(Jackli- age 150 years, but look like a girl of 19 or 20, sword fight me best aur kisi bhi tarah ke kaam ko bahut jald hi kar leti he. Demag aam aadmiyo se 100 guna tez chalta he iska. Baki ka intro waqt ane pe)
................
Abhi un logo ne adhe se jyada hi rasta par kiya hota he ki sabhi gadiya ruk jati he....
AT- kya hua gadiya kyu rokdi gyi AT car se muh bahar nikal ke dekhta he to raste me kuch patthar pade hote he.
Sath aye hathiyar band log bahar utarte he aur samne pade hue paththaro ko uthate he ki tabhi goli chalne ki awaaz aati he.
"Dhayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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- 1,807
- 1,833
- 143
- 1,807
- 1,833
- 143