Fantasy SUPREME GOD
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king cobra
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Veer uss sword ko apne dono haathon sey carvings karta hai jisse sword ko merge karta aur ek normal sword sey powerful sword mey convert karna hota hai. Idhar Miss Qin refining room key pass athi aur andar dekhti hai toh veer apne dono haathon sey carving karta hai yeh dekhkar Miss Qin shock hojati hai kyunki ek ordinary aadmi key liye dono haathon sey carving nahi kar sakta hai lekin ek grandmaster kar sakta hai phir uss carving ko sword sey merge karta hai aur who powerful sword key roop convert hoti hai ek pattar par try karta hai aur jaise who sword pattar par lagti hai toh wahan ek scratch aajata hai.
Koimin uss sword ki power ko dekhkar kaafi hairan hojata hai kyunki ek powerful artifact sey banaya hua sword hai aur issmey jab carving ko merge kiya toh itna powerful banagaya hai tabhi dusre door sey mohan aata hai aur kehta hai mujhe pata chala ki master tumey apna disable bana liya koimin kehta hai Haan tumne sahi suna phir veer mohan ko yeh sword deta hai aur ek try karne key liye kehta hai phir mohan uss sword ko try karta hai apne fighting skills ko use karke aur kehta hai yeh ek perfect sword hai aur koi shak nahi hai isse top grade weapon artifact sey banaya hai lekin iss sword ki strength bahuth zyada hai.
Veer kehta mai yeh sword tumey dena chatha hoon mohan kehta hai kya aap sach mey mujhe dena chatey hain veer haan kehta mohan niche baite jata hai aur kehta hai mai humesh sey ek arrogant ladka tha aur aapko bahuth baar guusa bhi kiya hai aapko iss competition mey harane key liye dusre team key saath maine haath milaya tha lekin aapko sab kuch pata hone key baad bhi aapne kuch bhi nahi kaha aur shuru sey maine aapko kitna bura bhala kaha phir bhi aapne kuch bhi nahi kaha mujhe lagat hai ki mai yeh deserve nahi karta hoon par mai yeh chatha hoon ki aap mujhe bhi aapne disable key taur par swikar kare veer kehta mai tumey kaise swikar karoon tumey koi talent nahi hai phir bhi mai tumey ek mauka deta hoon agar tum usmey success hogaye toh mai tumey disable nahi balki aapna bhai banalunga aur tumey iss competition jitna hoga aur opposition team key member khub attack hai phir mohan aapne joh book diye tey usmey techniques bahuth difficult hai practice karne mey.
Veer kehta hai thikmai tumey ek technique sikha tha hoon aur sword ko aapne haath mey lekar iss technique ka naam KILLING INTENT TECHNIQUE hai kehkar use technique ka practice karta aur uska attack door par jakar lagta hai door do pieces cut hojata hai piche rahe Miss Qin sabko dikh jati aur use attack key wajse Miss Qin kapde bhi cut hojate hai tabhi Miss Qin kehti hai Veer yeh practice karne ki jagah nahi hai kehkar gusse sey chali jati hai veer use manane chala jata.
Thode der baad dono bhi pavilion key chat par dono baite dikahi deta hai jahan humey dikhata hai ki veer ney Miss Qin ko pata liya hai Miss qin kehti hai tumey humare shaadi sey kyun problem kyun nahi karna chatey shaadi mujhe sey veer kehta hai ki jiss level par hoon abhi mai aur sabhi log mera abhi Mazak udane wale hai abhi mai strong ho raha hoon aur sab log tumey bhi kahenge aur mujhe yeh pasand nahi hai Miss Qin kehti hai isse mujhe koi farak nahi padta hai
Agli subah mohan aur koimin dono ek saath dikhtey hai tabhi mohan kal raat ko Master Veer aur Miss Qin dono bhi pavilion key chat dikhayi diye romance karte hue tabhi veer aur miss Qin wahan aati hai tum aur koi kaam nahi hai time kam hai humare pass jake dono practice karo ache sey mai aata hoon tabhi veer kehta hai kya baat kar rahe tey tum log yahan par mohan kehta hai aapko kuch bhi chupane ki zaroorat nahi hai sab log jante hai ki aap dono ek dusre sey pyaar karte hai yeh sunkar miss Qin sharma jati hai aur veer ka haath pakad leti hai tabhi wahan par MOHAI aaja tha hai joh mohan ka competitor hai kehta city ka ek useless stress ko Miss Qin jaise beautiful ladki mili hai sach mey ek chamtakar hai yeh sunkar mohan ko gussa atha hai tum yahan kya kar rahe ho MOHAI kehta hai tumey kya lagta hai ki tum master veer sey sikh kar kya tum aapne aapke kya samaj tey ho kya tum mujhe har doge. Tumey kabhi bhi bhulana nahi hai ki jis person sey tum training ley rahe ho ek woh ek useless hai aur mujhe yeh samaj nahi araha hai ki Miss Qin jaise ek beautiful iss useless key saath kaise rehne key liye maan gayi hai tabhi koimin kehta hai ki tum apni hadh par kar rahe ho haan mai apni hadh par kar raha hoon kya kar loge maroge mujhe tum bewakoof tabhi Veer MOHAI key thobde par ek chipka deta hai woh tum he tey jo mujhse ladna chatey ho tabhi MOHAI key saath ayya hua aadmi aage aakar kehta hai ki Veer aaj tumne jo kiya hai na uska badla 7 din key baad tournament mey lenge aur tumey pata hona chahie ki DIAO key student key saath panga lene sey kya hoga kehkar MOHAI uthkar wahan sey chala jata.
Veer uss sword ko apne dono haathon sey carvings karta hai jisse sword ko merge karta aur ek normal sword sey powerful sword mey convert karna hota hai. Idhar Miss Qin refining room key pass athi aur andar dekhti hai toh veer apne dono haathon sey carving karta hai yeh dekhkar Miss Qin shock hojati hai kyunki ek ordinary aadmi key liye dono haathon sey carving nahi kar sakta hai lekin ek grandmaster kar sakta hai phir uss carving ko sword sey merge karta hai aur who powerful sword key roop convert hoti hai ek pattar par try karta hai aur jaise who sword pattar par lagti hai toh wahan ek scratch aajata hai.
Koimin uss sword ki power ko dekhkar kaafi hairan hojata hai kyunki ek powerful artifact sey banaya hua sword hai aur issmey jab carving ko merge kiya toh itna powerful banagaya hai tabhi dusre door sey mohan aata hai aur kehta hai mujhe pata chala ki master tumey apna disable bana liya koimin kehta hai Haan tumne sahi suna phir veer mohan ko yeh sword deta hai aur ek try karne key liye kehta hai phir mohan uss sword ko try karta hai apne fighting skills ko use karke aur kehta hai yeh ek perfect sword hai aur koi shak nahi hai isse top grade weapon artifact sey banaya hai lekin iss sword ki strength bahuth zyada hai.
Veer kehta mai yeh sword tumey dena chatha hoon mohan kehta hai kya aap sach mey mujhe dena chatey hain veer haan kehta mohan niche baite jata hai aur kehta hai mai humesh sey ek arrogant ladka tha aur aapko bahuth baar guusa bhi kiya hai aapko iss competition mey harane key liye dusre team key saath maine haath milaya tha lekin aapko sab kuch pata hone key baad bhi aapne kuch bhi nahi kaha aur shuru sey maine aapko kitna bura bhala kaha phir bhi aapne kuch bhi nahi kaha mujhe lagat hai ki mai yeh deserve nahi karta hoon par mai yeh chatha hoon ki aap mujhe bhi aapne disable key taur par swikar kare veer kehta mai tumey kaise swikar karoon tumey koi talent nahi hai phir bhi mai tumey ek mauka deta hoon agar tum usmey success hogaye toh mai tumey disable nahi balki aapna bhai banalunga aur tumey iss competition jitna hoga aur opposition team key member khub attack hai phir mohan aapne joh book diye tey usmey techniques bahuth difficult hai practice karne mey.
Veer kehta hai thikmai tumey ek technique sikha tha hoon aur sword ko aapne haath mey lekar iss technique ka naam KILLING INTENT TECHNIQUE hai kehkar use technique ka practice karta aur uska attack door par jakar lagta hai door do pieces cut hojata hai piche rahe Miss Qin sabko dikh jati aur use attack key wajse Miss Qin kapde bhi cut hojate hai tabhi Miss Qin kehti hai Veer yeh practice karne ki jagah nahi hai kehkar gusse sey chali jati hai veer use manane chala jata.
Thode der baad dono bhi pavilion key chat par dono baite dikahi deta hai jahan humey dikhata hai ki veer ney Miss Qin ko pata liya hai Miss qin kehti hai tumey humare shaadi sey kyun problem kyun nahi karna chatey shaadi mujhe sey veer kehta hai ki jiss level par hoon abhi mai aur sabhi log mera abhi Mazak udane wale hai abhi mai strong ho raha hoon aur sab log tumey bhi kahenge aur mujhe yeh pasand nahi hai Miss Qin kehti hai isse mujhe koi farak nahi padta hai
Agli subah mohan aur koimin dono ek saath dikhtey hai tabhi mohan kal raat ko Master Veer aur Miss Qin dono bhi pavilion key chat dikhayi diye romance karte hue tabhi veer aur miss Qin wahan aati hai tum aur koi kaam nahi hai time kam hai humare pass jake dono practice karo ache sey mai aata hoon tabhi veer kehta hai kya baat kar rahe tey tum log yahan par mohan kehta hai aapko kuch bhi chupane ki zaroorat nahi hai sab log jante hai ki aap dono ek dusre sey pyaar karte hai yeh sunkar miss Qin sharma jati hai aur veer ka haath pakad leti hai tabhi wahan par MOHAI aaja tha hai joh mohan ka competitor hai kehta city ka ek useless stress ko Miss Qin jaise beautiful ladki mili hai sach mey ek chamtakar hai yeh sunkar mohan ko gussa atha hai tum yahan kya kar rahe ho MOHAI kehta hai tumey kya lagta hai ki tum master veer sey sikh kar kya tum aapne aapke kya samaj tey ho kya tum mujhe har doge. Tumey kabhi bhi bhulana nahi hai ki jis person sey tum training ley rahe ho ek woh ek useless hai aur mujhe yeh samaj nahi araha hai ki Miss Qin jaise ek beautiful iss useless key saath kaise rehne key liye maan gayi hai tabhi koimin kehta hai ki tum apni hadh par kar rahe ho haan mai apni hadh par kar raha hoon kya kar loge maroge mujhe tum bewakoof tabhi Veer MOHAI key thobde par ek chipka deta hai woh tum he tey jo mujhse ladna chatey ho tabhi MOHAI key saath ayya hua aadmi aage aakar kehta hai ki Veer aaj tumne jo kiya hai na uska badla 7 din key baad tournament mey lenge aur tumey pata hona chahie ki DIAO key student key saath panga lene sey kya hoga kehkar MOHAI uthkar wahan sey chala jata.
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