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Romance TANHAI KE SAHARE

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Ritesh- tum ek no ki( phir wo sochta hai ki acha hai kaise bhi karke RB ko swati se door karna hai to yeh rashmi kaam aa sakti ahi ) thikhai ..
Anita- tum gussa nahini ho na
Ritesh- maine tum pe gussa ho sakta hoon .. ohh shit ye yanah
Anita- kya hua
Ritesh- swati RB kanha hai ..
Anita – niche wale section maine honeg ..
Ritesh bhagta hua uss tarf jaata hai uske piche anita bhi bhagte hue jaati hai ..
Ye wohi waqt hota hai jab rashmi ne RB ko hug kar rahi thi ..usi time ek taraf se ritesh aur doosre taraf se swati ,ussi jagha pe ponhach jaate hain

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Ritesh- RB chal yanha se jaldi.

RB- rashmi kya kar rahi ho hato .

Rashmi- ohh soory main kabhi dosto ke sath yun ghoomne nahini gayee hoon na bas isiliye jada khus hoagyee..sorry

RB – it ok .

Ritesh- chal yanha se jaldi ..

RB – kya hua tu aise kyun bol raha hai ..

Swati- aare kya hua kyun distrube kar rahe ho tum ritesh dekh nahini rahe ho sir apne agle sikar ke piche lage hain .. continue ..continue ..

Anita- rashmi tum chalo yanah se ..

Swati- kyun mere aane se kya sab ka mood kharab ho gaya .. ohh rashmi tujh se to aisi ummed nahin thi .tujhe pure college maine koi nahini mila isike ilwa ishq ladhane ko ..

Rashmi- haan to iss se tujhe kya ..tu pani kaam dekh na tum dono ka to break up ho chuka hai to wo kuch bhi kare uss se tunhe kya ..

RB – rashmi tum chup raho ..

Swati- kyun bolne do .. pata to chale ki kitna jhoote bato se usse fasa rakha hai .. thodi si bhi saram nahini aati hai .. maine nahini mili to kya naam hai uska rinki ya nisha wo ., uske sath dil bhargaya to rashmi .. chi aur tum jaise ghatiya aadmi se kya bhi umeed kiya jaa sakta hai ..

RB – swati ye tum kya keh rahi ho .. maine tumhe kitna baar bol chuk ahoon ,, aur waise bhi tum ne hi to kaha tha na ki tumhare saamne na aaun aur tum se baat bhi na karu to phir tum kyun khud jaan bujh kar ye kar rahi ho .

Swati- haan haan iska matlab tumhe kis aur ke jindegi bhi barbaad karne doon kabhi nahini ,,

RB- swati tum jaanti ho ki wo galti se hua tha phir bhi aur waise bhi maine kuch bhi karun tumhe kya tum jao apne uss sooraj ke pass ..

Swati- haan wo to jaungi tumhare jaise ghatia insaan ke pass thodi na hoti ..

RB – thik hai .. phir maine chalta hoon bye .

Swati haan jao par aage se maine tumhe kisi bhi ladki ke aas pass bhi dekha na to tumhare liye acha nahini hoga.. maine nahini chahiti ki tum phir kisi ko apne hawas ki chapet main lo .

RB bohat ho gaya tumhara bohat sunliya .. ab bas ab mera jo man hai maine wo karunga jiske sath ho uske sath ghoomunga ..rashmi yanah aana jara ..

Rashmi RB ke pass aati hai .

RB – rashmi agar maine tumhar ahth pakdun to koi ait raaz hai ..

Rashmi- nahini par …… nahini koi ait raaz nahini hai ..

RB – thik hai rashmi ka hath pakad ke tum pooch rahi thi na kal chalne ke liye hamare sath ab maien khud tumhe invite karta hoon mere sath chalne ko ..

Swati- hath chodo uska

RB – ab tum ko kya problem hai tumhe jo karna hai karo maine jo bhi karun tumhe usse se kya jab rashmi ko iss se koi problem nahin hai ..

Swati- par maine nahini chahti ki tum bhi iske jindegi kharab kardo agar raji ho gayee to tumhare bister pe barna uske sath bhi jabardasti rape karoge ,,

RB – swati pagal ho kya ye kya bol rahai ho ..

Swati- aur nahini to kya tum apne aap bohat doodh ke dhule hue maante ho na tumhe kya lagta hai yanha koi tumhari sachai nahini jaanta hai .. rapist kanhi ke ..

Ritesh- swati apni jaban sambhal ke baat kiya karo RB tu chal na yanah se .

RB – nanhini rukh mujhe sun na hai aaj ..haan tum bolo kya bol rahi thi ..

Swati – kyun sab ke saamne apne munh kala karane cahhate ho chale jao yanha se ..

RB – nahini ab to mujhe jaan na hai ki maine aisa kya kiya hai ki tum mujh se iotna nafrat karte ho ..

Swati- acha thik hai suno tum rapist ho sirf tum nahini tumhara wo Nihar bhaiya tum dono rapist ho samjhe ..

RB –swati jaban sambhalke mujhe chahe kuch bhi bol lo par Nihar bahiya ke baare maien ek bhi gande waord apne jaban pe mat lana ..

Swati- kyun kya hua bohat pyar umad raha hai apne bhai ke liye ..to meri behen ne kya paap kiye the jo tum dono darindo ne uske sath aisa kiya ..

RB – swati apne had maine raho ..aur ho sake to apna dimaag ka ilaaz karwao .. chalo sab yanah se ..

Swati- kyun ab bhag kyun rahe ho .. dar gaye kya .. agar kisi ladki ka izzat lutne ka himmat hai to baatein sun ne ki bhi himmat rakho na .. dono bhai bujdil ho samjhe ..

RB – swati maine tumhe aakhir baar keh raha hoon aage se galti se bhi mere bhai ke bare maien kuch mat kehna .. barna anjaam acha nahini hoga ..

Swati- kya karoge .. acha jaise tumhare nIhar bhaiya aur tum milke mere Ritu didi ka raope kiya tha waisa mera bhi karoge ..

“chataaak” “ chataak”

RB- tumhari himmat kaise hui mere Nihar bhaiya ke bare maien aur Ritu didi ke bare maine aisa bolne ko ..

Swati( apne gaal ko hath se sehlaate hue ) ha ha ha kya kaha “Ritu Didi” acha to jab uss Ritu didi ke izzat ko bhediye ke tarha loot rahe the tab yaad nahini aaya ki wo “ritu didi “ hai ya phir jab usse aar ke nadi kinare phek aaye the tab yaad nahini aaya ki wo tumhari “ritu Didi “ hai .. maine wohi Ritu ki Behan hoon samjhe .. jiss ne tumhare Uss Nihar bhaiya se pyar kiya tha bharosa kiya tah aur tumhe apne Chote bhai se jaad maan ti thi .. par tum chi ..

RB – tum ritu didi ke behan ho ..pagal jaise baaten mat karo .. thik hai .. ritu didi mere aur Nihar bhai ke liye kya hai wo hum jaante hai .. aur wo ab canad maine hai .. apni ye gande dimaag ke upaj ko apne pass tak hi rakho ..

Swati- acha sach maine kya .. to phir (apna phone nikal ke photo dikhate hu) ye kon hai jo do saal se mot se hardin ladh rahi hai .. ab bato apne kiye pap se tum bach nahini sakte .. tumne jo mere didi ke sath kiya hai uska saza to tumhe aur tumhare bhai ko bhogna hi hoga ..

Tabhi wanha pe dipika aur vicky aaajte hain jinhe ritesh ne call karliya tha ..wo RB ko khichte hue wanha se le jaate hain ..

RB sirf swati ko dekhe jaaraha tha uska najar sirf swati ke chehere aur uske hath maine pakde phone pe hi tha ..

RB ko leke vicky aur group wanah door chal;e jaate hain ..

Swati wanhi khade hue abhi bhi roye jaa rahi thi ..

Swati- tum ne ye acha nahini kiya RB mujhe sab ke saamne thappad mar aur mere didi ke sath aisa karne ke baad mujhe laga tha tumhe thoda sa to sahi iska paschatap hoga par tum …… ab dekho maine kya karti hoon ..

Swati apni phone nikal ke kisi ko call karti hai ..

Swati- hlw ,maine swati bol rahi hoo. Ek final kaam tha ..

Uss side-*************

Swati- kya matlab tum mera kaam nahini karogi .pagal mat bano yeh tumhari liye ek achi chance hai ..

Usss ide***********

Swati- to uss se kya hua ..agar thodi si jhut bolne se kuch hasil ho sakta hai to jhut bol dena chahiye ..

Uss side***********

Swati- thik hai maine tumhe kuch bhejti hoon ab tumhare upar hai ki tum wo karogi ya nahin waise bhi tum itna jhoot bol hi chuki ho ki ab tumhara ek aur jhoot bolne se kuch nahini hoga . aur waise bata doon tumhari jagha leel koi aur aagyee hai ..

Uss side******

Swati- uss se tumhe kya farak padta hai .. waise tumhe uss ladki ka naam aur pic bheja hai dekh lo ab tum pe hai tum usse kisi aur ke hone deti ho ya phir thoda sa jhoot se usse pana chahate ho ..maine inteejjar karoongi maine kuch karne jaa rahi hoo agar 2 ghante ke andar tum wo karti ho to samajh jana wo tumhara hua barna usse bhul jana hamesha ke liye bye ..

Uss side ke kya nswer aaye usse sune bina hi swati ne call kaat diya ek baar apne gale maine pade locket ko dekha phir kuch sochke wanha se chali gayee.

Vicky aur group sab RB ko leke wanha se dur ek jagha leke aate hain ..

Ritesh – anita tum jao abhi maine tumhe baad maine milta hoon thik hai ..

Anita- par (ritesh usse ishara se kuch kehta hai ) thik hai maine jaati hoon par mujhe khabar dete rehna thik hai .. bye .rashmi chhal ..

Rashmi- nahini maine yanhi hoon tu jaa.

Anita- tujhe kaha na aane ke liye chal ..

Anita rashmi ko leke wanha se chali jaati hai ..aur jaate jate ritesh ko call karne ko ishara kar ke chali jati hai .

RB abhi bhi chup chap sirf betha hua tha .

Vicky- RB tu thik to hai na ..

RB – tune suna usne kya kah koi kisi se itna nafrat kaise kar sakti hai .tujhe pata hai usne kya kha usne mujhe rapist kaha Nihar bhai ko rapist kaha aur wo bhi ritu didi ka .. ritu didi canad nahin gayee.. hey bhagbaan ye kya hai ..

Vicky- bhai tu pehle shant ho jaa thoda .. maine tujhe sab bata ta hoon ..

Vicky- diipika pani dena .

Dipika pani ka bottle RB ko deti hai ..

RB pani ka bottle ko ek hi baar maine aadhe se bhi jada gale maine utar deta hai aur baki ko apne hi sar maine daal deta hai .. par jo dukh aur gussa uske dimag ko garam kar rahi thi usse sirf pani se thanda nahini kiya jaaa sakta tha .

Vicky- bhai sun tujhe kuch batana hai jo baat hum se chupai gayee thi .

RB – mujhe kuch nahini sun na hai .. plz mujhe abhi akela chod de .. mujhe usse dikahan hai usne himmat kaise ki Nihar bahiya ke bare maine aise kehne ki aur ritu didi ke bare maine aise kehne ki .. kehti hai maine aur nihar bhaiya ritu didi ke sath .. chi maine to juban pe kehne bhar se bhi mujhe saram aati hai ..

Vicky- bhai wo galat nahini keh rahi hai ..

RB – kya kha tune tera matlab ki ..

Vicky- pehle meri baat to sun le jo wo jaanti hai wo uske liye sach hai ..

RB – kehna kya chahata hai tu .

Vicky- to sun .. maine aur dipika aaj manish bhaiya ke pass gaye the poochne ke liye .. ************************** isiliye wo tujh se itni nafrat karti hai ..

RB – par usse kyun saaf saaf nahini dikh raha hai aur ritu didi ne usse kuch nahini batay ..

Vicky- wo abhi coma maine hai .. hum ne jo khbar sun rakhi thi ki wo shadi karke canada chali gayee wo jhut thi .. par swati ko samjhake bhi koi faida nahini hai wo puri tarha se pagal ho chuki hai .. pehle ek ki bali chad chuki hai aur ye bhi ussi raste maien chal rahi hai ..ya to yeh tujhe barbaad kardegi ya phir khud bhi wohi haal kar bethegi jo Ritu ki hui hai .. maine to yeh samajh nahini paa raha hoon abhi tak wo shant kyun hai ..

Dipika- kya pta kya chal raha ho uske dimaag maine ..

RB – thik hai maine swati ko samjahunga ..

Vicky- aur wo kaise wo teri batein manegi .. tujhe kya lagta hai tu pehle hai .. Nihar bhaiya bhi kosis karchuke the wo unke hi khilaf case kardiya .. wo ab itne badle ki aag maine jal rahi hai ki teri koi bhi safai usse kaan tak nahini jayegi upar se wo ulta jada gussa ho jayegi .. aur tu proove kya dega kuch tere hath nahini aayega .. na hi kuch saboot bacha hai na hi koi saamne aayega batane ko .. sach do hi log bayan kar sakte the ek Nihar bhaiya aur tujhe to pata hai unke halat kaisa hai wo jo bolenge koi yakeen bhi nahini karega aur doosra ritu didi jo bol nahini sakti ..

RB – to tu hi bata maine kya karu ..

Vicky – kuch nahin filhaal ke liye sab time ke hath maine chod de .. sab thik ho jayega ..

RB – par swati wo sirf isi gusse ke chalte sooraj se shagai kardegi ..

Vicky- pagal jaisi baatein mat kar wo tujh se guuse ke wajha se rista nahin tod rahi hai balki gusse ke wajha se wo tujh se rista jodi thi .. tujhe kya lagta hai wo tujh se pyar karti thi wo sirf tujhe takleef ponhachana chahati thi ..

Tujhe kya laga tujh se wo yun exam se kuch din pehele hi kyun break up kiya .. taki tu usse kabhi na bhul paye wo tujhe waisa hi tadpana chahati thi ..

RB – par bhai tu samajh nahini raha hai ..

Vicky- dekh mujhe tere liye jo acha laga miane wo bol diya ab karna ya na krna tere upar hai . par jo bhi karega maine tere sath hoon .. dipika chalo isse akela rehne do ..

Dipika- tum chalo maine aati hoon thode der main .

Dipika- RB , tum uss se abhi dur hi raho tum jaante nahini ho wo kitna nafrat karti hai tum se ..

RB – par tumhi hi kaho maine uske bina kaise reh sakta hoon .

Dipika- to tum kya karoge .. dekho waise bhi tumhe usse wo karne dena chahiye jiss se usse khusi mile tumhi to uss din keh rahe the ki bas wo khus rahe phir chahe wo kisi ke bhi sath rahe aur ab tum jaante ho na Ritu didi ke sath kya hua kanhi wo swati ke ..

RB – nahini maine aisa nahini hone doonga ..

Dipika – bas yehi to keh rahi hoon maine .. agar tum uske sath na rehte ho sirf tumhe bura lagega aur dard hoga par agar tumhe usse wapas pana chahte ho to sirf tumhe nahini bohat se logon ko dukh hoga ..kya tum yeh chhate ho..

RB – hmm waise bhi maine usse bada kiya tha ki usse exam ke baad shkal nahini dikhaunag .. to thik hai abhi chahe kuch bhi ho mujhe kitna bhi dard ho maine uske bare maine naini sochunga ..

Dipika- yeh hui na baat .. chalo ab mood thoda thik karo ..

RB – par Nihar Bhai ke sath Jin logon ne aisa kiya aur Ritu did ke sath jinhone aisa kiya unn logon ko to maine aise nahini chod sakta hoon ..

Dipika- aur tum kya karoge .. kya kar paoge un ka .. kuch nahini .. tumhe iss se milge kya .. kuch nahini par tum iss se kya kho sakte ho sab kuch .a bhi tumhare pass jo bhi bacha hai wo sab kuch .. socho un maa bapon ka jo apne bete ke liye itna sab kuch she gaye .. kitni beijjati hui hogi unki unka lagbhag sab kuch chin gaya .. unka beta apna dimagi santulan kho beta par wo aaj bhikhus hai sirf kis liye tum sab ko iss baat se kuch takleef an ho uss liye .. tumhari iss kadam se un sab ko takleef hogi ..

RB – tum sahi kehti ho.. mujhe sab ke khusi dekhni hogi apni nahin .. waise thanks ..

Dipika- wo kis liye..

RB – itne pyar se samjhane ke liye ..

Dip[ika- haan wo to karoongi hi na ek to tum mere dost ho aur upar se aage devar bhi ho .. aur ek baat yaad rakhna tum sirf vicky ke liye hi bhai jaise nahini ho mere liye bhi bhai jaisi ho ..

RB – sach maine vicky bohat lucky hai jisse tum jaisi samajh daar life partner milne wala hai ..

Dipika- sach maine

RB- aur nahini to kya bhavi ji ..

Dipika- ahhhh sun ne maine kitna acha lag raha hai aaj se yehi bulana thik hai ..

RB – thik hai bhavi

Dipika RB ko phir se muskurate dekh ke bohat khus thi ..

Dipika- ab jao apne dost se bhi baat kar lo gussa hua hai tum pe wo ..

RB – thik ahi ..

RB vicky ke pass jaata hai ..

RB – vicky bhai maaf karde maine samajh gaya jo tu keh raha tha ..

Vicky- kyun ab dimag maine kaise baat ghus gayee ..

RB – wo tu kuch bhi bak bak kar raha tha na uss liye kuch samajh nahini aa raha tha ab bhavi ne itne pyar se samjahaya to samjh maine aagaya .

Vicky- bhavi kon bhavi ?

Dipika- kon se kya matlab aur kitne hain ki tumhe pata nahin chal raha hai wo kiski baat kar raha hai .

Vicky- aare sorry baba par ye bhavi achanak ..

Dipika – wo hum bhavi devar ke bich ki baat hai ..

Tabhi RB ka phone bajne lagta hai ..

RB – hlw

Uss side******

RB – haan kon ladki ?? kya hua hai ? kya hua maa ko ? nahiiiiinn

RB ke mobile niche gir jata hai aur RB apne ghutne ke bal jameen pe beth jata hai .
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Good story bhai padh ke maja aaya thanks bhai itni achi story ke liye...
 

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Behtareen update,
Kahi usake gharwale hi usake khilaf saazish to nahi ker rahe. Asali gunahgar kaun hai. Mujhe Lagta hai ki is baar jo bhi final kand hone wala hai use bhi suspense me rakhkar vartman me Lana chahiye aur dono suspense ko end me khulana chahiye.
RB ki maa ko kuchh nahi hua hai ye bhi Shayad koi saazish hi ho.
Bhai kuch andaja sahi hai aur kuch galat.. Dekhte hain aage kya hoga waise aap ke suggestion ke liye thanks maine waise hi kiya hai jaisa aap bataye the... Ab flash back ko end wanhi end kardiya baki ka baad maine aayega... Thanks
 

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Vicky- aare sorry baba par ye bhavi achanak ..

Dipika – wo hum bhavi devar ke bich ki baat hai ..

Tabhi RB ka phone bajne lagta hai ..

RB – hlw

Uss side******

RB – haan kon ladki ?? kya hua hai ? kya hua maa ko ? nahiiiiinn

RB ke mobile niche gir jata hai aur RB apne ghutne ke bal jameen pe beth jata hai .
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Vicky- kya hua RB ..
RB – wo maa maa swati maa
Ritesh jo ab tak wanhi khada hua tha jhat se phone uthata hai aur dur jake baat karne lagta hai ..
Uske baad ritesh sab ke pass aata hai ..
Ritesh- dipika tum ek baar RB ko sambhalo hum abhi aate hain ..
Vicky aur ritesh wanha se aage badh jate hain ..
Vicky- kya hua
Ritesh – wohi jiska dar tha swati RB ke ghar ponhach gayee aur usne uski maa ko nisha wala clip dikha diya yeh bola hai ki nisha ko rb ne black mail karke rape kiya hai aur usne nisha ka bhi koi video proof layi thi imean confession type kuch .. aur usne yeh bhi batya hai ki RB uske sath bhi ek baar jabardsati karne ki kosis kiya tha yeh sunke aunty ko dil ka doura pada hai aur unhe medical le gaye hain ..
Vicky- iss behan ki *** swati ki to ek baar aunty thik ho jaye phir maine iss batata hoon .. sal aritu didi ka to pata nahii agar aunty ko kuch hua na to maine sach maine iska ya rape kardunga ya murder phir chaye mujhe jail ho ya phasi ..
Ritesh – pehle koi taxi dekh hospital jana hai ..
Ritesh ek taxi rokta hai aur vicky jaake RB aur dipika ko wanha le aata hai .
Ritesh –RB ko sambhalne maine laga hua tha wanhi vicky dipika ko jo kuch h ua uske bare maine bata raha tha .. aise maine hi thodi hi time maine sab Hospital ponhach gaye.
RB bhag ke icu ke tarf jaata hai uske sath maienn baki sab bhi ho jaate hain .
Rb ka ro ro ke bura haal ho gaya tha . filhal ke liye kisi ko andar jaane ko nahini de rahe the milne ko .
Vicky dr se poochne ke liye chala jaata hai .
Vicky- dr ab aunty ke halat kaisi hai ..
Dr- abhi unki halat achi hai par abhi unhe aaram ki jarurat hai aap wait kijiye jab unke hosh aane ke baad dr kuch test karenge uske baad aap unse mil sakte hain par ek ek karke ..
Vicky- thik hai dr ..
Vicky wapas sab ke pass aata hai .
Vicky- RB tu hosh se kaam le agar tu aise royega to aunty ko jab pata chalega to unka kya hoga .. aansoo ponch dr se baat karliya hai maine wo thik hai unhe kabhi bhi hosh aa sakta hai ..
Vicky- ruby aunty (RB ke padoshan jo unhe yanah leke aaye thi ) uncle ko khabar diya hai aapne ..
Ruby aunty- haan beta maine RB ke papa aur shashank bhaiya ko bhi bata diya hai wo aate hi honge ,,(nihar ke papa)
Vicky- aap ne unhe baki kuch to nahini bataya hai an ..
Ruby aunty- nahni maine sirf unko yanha aane ko bol diya hai ..
Vicky- sahi kiya aunty ..
Dipika- aunty wanha hua kya tha aap jaanti ho ..
Ruby aunty- beta wo koi ladki aayi thi tumhari hi dost hai koi wo aake boli ki RB usse paise ke liye apne pyar ke jaal maine phasaya aur uske apne sone ke liye kaha jab wo na mani to uske sath jabardasti kiya par wo wanha se bhag agyee .. maine aur didi ne uske baat ko maan ne ko jab mana kardiya tab wo didi ko bohat kuch sunayee.. aur nihar ke bhi bohat bura bhala bola usne aur phir ..
Ritesh- kya hua bolo aage aunty .
Ruby aunty – wo apne phone maine RB ka aur ek ladki ka .. maine bol bhi nahini sakti .. usne bataya ki RB ne usse black mmail karke uska rape kiya hai .. aur usne uss ladki ka video bhi dikhay jiss main wo ro ro ke yeh baat keh rahi thi ..uske bad wo RB ko jail bhejegi bolke chali gayee did iss baat ko sehan naini kar payee aur wo ..**
Vicky apne phone se ek photo nikal ke bolta hai aunty yehi ladki video wali thi ..
Ruby- haan beta iska matlab kya wo ladki sach keh rahi thi hamare RB ne aisa kiya hai ..
Dipika- iss ladki ko to maine aaj nahini chodne wali ..
Vicky- aunty aap tension mat llo .ab hum yanha hai aap ho sake to aaram karlo ya ghar chale jao ..
Ruby aunty- thik hai beta mujhe bachoon ko bhi khana khilanahoga .. batate rehna kya hua ..
Uske baad ruby aunty wanha se chali jaati hai ritesh jaake unhe bahar taxi maine bithake aata hai ..
RB ka ro ro k ebohat bura haal tha .. Ritesh usse ke pass hi beth ke usse dilash de raha th a..
Dipika- ye usne sahi nahini kiya usne ..
Vicky- isne to iss baar had hi cross kar di .. socho shashank uncle wagera jab yanha aayeneg unhe ye pata chalega to unhe kitna bura lagega jo baat ko wo hum sab se chupana chahte the sirf hamare khusi ke liye unhone apna gam ko chupa liya tha wo phir se saamne aa jayega ..
Tabhi ek nurse jo anadr thi bahar aati hai aur kuch der maien wo apne sath kuch doctor aur nurse koleke aati hai .. kuch der ke chek up ke baad wo bahar aajate hian ..
Vicky aur RB unke pass chale jaate hain ..
RB – dr meri maa ab thik to hai na
Dr- haan ab koi tension ki baat nahini hai unko hosh aagaya hai aap kuch der maien un se mil sakte hain par wo abhi bhi kamjor hai to jada der mat miliye aur na hi jada bhid banana ek ya do log hi jaa sakte ho milne ..
Uske baad dr baki ke nurse se aage kya krna hai ye bolke chale gaye …
Thodi der maien nurse aake bolti hai ki aap jaake mil sakte hain .. RB aur vicky andar jaate hain ..
RB uske ma ke pass jaata hai jo ab bhi aankh band karke bed maine leti hui thi ..
RB – maa ,, maa main jaanta hoon aap sun rahe hain plz aankh kholo ..
RB ‘mom- kya wo sach hai .
RB - maa wo ..
RB ‘ s mom – maine kya pucha ?
RB – wo wo
Vicky- aunty aap nahin jaanti hai wo swati ka yeh sab plan hai wo ritu ki behan ai ..
RB’ mom- maine wo nahini pucha wo toh maine uske baton se jaan hi chuki hoon ..par wo ladki jo keh rahi thi kya wo sach hai wo dusri ladki nisha kon hai aur tu suke sath aisa kiya hai ..
Vicky- nahini aunty
RB ‘ s mom- tum chup raho vicky . tum jabab do kya puch maine ..
RB – maa wo galti se maine kuch nahini jaanta hai uss bare maien ..
RB ‘ s mom- kya tu nahini jaanta wo ladki ro ro ke keh rahi thi ki tu suko blackmail karke uske jabardasti physical hua tha .. kya wo sab jhoot hai ..
RB – nahnin maa. Maine usse koi black mail nahini kiya tha wo sab ba s
RB’s mom- matlab tune yeh kiya hai tujh se mujh ko yeh umeed nahini thi RB ab tere pap aayeneg to maine usse kya kahungi .. wo to yeh khabar sunke toot hi jayenge .. hey bhagwaan ye tune kya kardiya .. aahhhhh
RB – maa kya hua aapko
Vicky aunty nurse nurse dekho aunty ko kya ho gaya hai
Nurse jaldi se dr ko emergency call karti ahi aur jaldi se dr wanah aajte hain RB aur vicky ko bahar bhej diya jaate hain ..
Thodi der maien dr bahar aate hain ..
Vicky – dr kya hua aunty ko ..
Dr- maine kaha tha ki unhe tension na dena unka blood pressure unstable ho gya tha jisse heart pe pressure aaya isiliye wo behosh ho gay hain aap dhyan rakhe aage se unhko kisi tarha ka tension wagera mat deiin..
Dr yeh bole wanah se chale jaate hain ..
RB – yeh maine kya kardiya hey bhagwaan maa ko thik kardo .. meri galti ki saza unhe kyun de rahe ho .. mujhe yeh sab karna hi nahini chahiye ***********
Dipika- RB kya hua tumhe RB RB vicky RB ko dekho
Vicky jab ab tak andar ke tarf dekh raha tha bhag ke RB ke tarf aata hai RB behosh hoke girne hi wala hota hi ke vicky aake usse pakad leta hai ..
Vicky- RB RB kya hua tujjhe .. DR. Nurse
Ritesh bhag ke jaake dr aur nurse ko bula laate hain RB ko jaldi se andar le jaate hain..
Sab RB ke sath dr ke piche chale jaate hain ..
Dr andar RB ko check kar rahe the bahar sab tension ke sath besabar DR ke bahar aane ka wait kar arhe the .. thodi der maien Dr bahar aate hain ..
Ritesh – dr RB ko kya hua ..
Dr- kuch nahini wo jada stress ke chalte unka prefrontal cortex ke upar jada pressure pad isiliye o behosh ho gaye the ab wo thik hai .hum unhe IV laga diya hai kuch der maine unhe hosh aajayega ..
Vicky yeh sab kya ho raha hai pehle aunty ab wo RB .. uss Sali ko toh maine chodunga nahini ab ..
Vicky bahar ko jaane ko hota hai ki dipika ur ritesh usse rok dete hain ..
Dipika- tum pagal mat bano koi faida nahini hoga tum uska kuch kar nahin sakte na hi usse iss baat se farak padega wo toh jada khus hogi ki uska man chaha kaam ho gaya .
Vicky- par usse aise hi RB ke jindegi ke sath khelne nahini de sakte na ..kash kaise bhi karke yeh matter khatam ho jaye ..bas uncle wagera baat ko samjh jaye phir uss swati ko dekhta hoon maine ..
Dipika – tum tension na lo uske bare maine tumhe tension lene ki koi jarurat nahini hai maine wo dekh loongi ..
Vicky- matlab ..
Dipika – apna phone dena ..
Vicky- kyun
Dipika- kaha na phone do apna ..
Dipika vicky se uska phone leti aur kuch der check karne ke baad ek call laga deti hai …
Vicky- kisse call kar rahi ho .
Dipika – jo RB ko sambhal sake aur jis kaam ko tumhe pehle se hi kar dena chaiye tha .
RB aankh band karke soya hua tha tabhi usse kuch awaaz sunayee deti hai .. wo dhire se apna aankhe kholta hai to apne saamne nurse ko dekhta hai jo usse utha rahi thi .
Nurse- sir uth jaiye ,aap se milne police inspector aaye hue hain ..
RB – thik hai tum unhe bithao maine aata hoon thodi der maine .
RB ab purane yadon se maine khote hue kab nind maine so gaya tha usse khud bhi pata nahini tha par wo yadein itne gehre the ki uske so jaane ke baad bhi uske sapne main wo sab phir se khud ko dohrane lag gaye the .
RB uthke bed maine beth jaata hai aur aur phir thodi der apni dimag ko normal karne ke baad fresh hone washroom chala jata hai wanha se sidha bhaar aata hai janah couch pe insp uska wait kar rahe the ..
RB – good morning insp sir. Aap itne subha subha .
Insp- good morning . hmm kuch betein karni thi tumse .. waise ab unka haal kaisa hai ..
RB – sir ab wo kafi achi hai pehle se par aap ko toh pata hai ki jo uske sath hua hai uska kitna gehra asar dimag maine padta hai .. waise aap kis bare maine baat karne wale the .
Insp- maine uss time to tumhe wanha iss liye bacha liya ki tum police case maine faltu maine na phas jao . par ab lagta hai ki tumhe bachane ke chakar maien ab meri noukri jayegi ..
RB – kya hua sir .
Insp- tum ne mujhe ye kyun nahni bataya ki yeh diwang ji ki beti hai .. iska baap iss state ka sab se bada industrialist hai aur iska bhai iss area ka MLA. Tumhe pata hai na jab unhe pata hoga tab kya hoga iss pure sehar maine aag laga denge aur mera to pucho hi mat ..
“kuch nahini karenge wo aur na hi unhe kuch pata cahlega unhe to yehtak pata nahin hoga ki maine kanha hoon ..”
RB aur insp uss tarafa dekhte hain .jaha swati door ke pass khadi thi .
RB – tum kyun aaye bahar pagal ho kya
RB bhag ke jaate hai aur swati ko lek bed maien leta deta hai ..
RB – tum pagal ho kya bilkool tumhe mana kiya tha dr ne bed se bhi uthne ko phir bhi ..
Swati- mujhe insp se baat karni hai ..
RB – par
Swati- plz
RB –ok
RB bahar jake insp ko bulake lata hai .
Insp – aur ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai
Swati- dekh to rahe hain insp ..waise aap tension mat lijiye aap ke upar kisi tarha ki bhi aanch nahini aayengi ..
Insp- par aapke
Swati- kya unhone mera missing ka complin kiya hai ya phir unhe pata bhi hai maine kanha hoon .
Insp- nahini maine pata kiya tha unhe shyada pata nahin hai iss bare maine .
Swati- insp unhe farak nahin padta .. aap bilkool tension mat lijiye aapke bare maine humkisi ko kuch nahin batayeneg na hi aap to kisi ko pata bhi nahini lageaga .
Insp- thik hai maine chalta hoon phir ..apna khayal rakhna . RB tum aana tum se kuch baat karni hai ..
RB – thik hai insp chaliye .. tum plz yanha se phir se mat uthna thik hai ..
RB insp ke sath bahar aata hai ..
Insp – dekho RB mujhe jitna meri fikar nahini hai utna tumhari hai .maine to kaise bhi karke bach jaunga .par mujhe lagta hai ki tumh eswati ke ghar walon ko inform kardena chahiye .kyun ki agar uske ghar walon ko pata chal gaya to bohat bura haoga ..kosis karna ki ya to isse uske ghar walon ke pass bhijwa do ya phir ye kosis karo ki ye baat kisi ko pata na chale jab tak ho sake .
RB – thik hai sir maine dhyan rakhoonga iss baat pe .
RB insp ko bye bolke andar jaata hai .. swati ab bed pe so ke RB ka wait kar rahi thi ..
Swati- insp kya bol rahe the .
RB – kuch nahin tum wo sab chodo aur jaldi se medicine le lo ..
RB medicine nikal ke swati ko deta hiai swati medicine kha leti hai .. RB usse bed maine takiye ke sahare betha deta hai ..
Halaki in teeen char dino maine wo kafi had tak thik ho chuki thi par phir bhi uske private part maine jo chot aaye the uske chalte wo sidha hoke beth nahini paa rahi thi .
Swati- RB ek baat puuchun ..
RB – haan .. tum yanah matlab ab kya tum isi sahar maine rehte ho aur yanah koi aur nahni hai tumhari maa .. I mean sorry maine itne din se yanah hoon par yeh puch nahin payee.
RB kuch der swati ko dekhta hai phir niche ke traf dekhta hai phir ek halki si saans chod ke bol ta hai ..
RB – maine yanha nahin rehta .uss raat ko maine yanha lot raha tha .kuch kaam tha mujhe isiliye aaya hua tha kuch din ke liye ..
Swati- yeh ghar
RB – mera hi hai jab yanha se trasfer hua to maine uske baad time nahini nikal paya isse bechne ko .phir baad maine dil nahini kiya isse bechne ko .isiliye jab bhi yanha aata hoon to hotel ke wajaye yanhi reh jaata hoon .
Swati- kya aksar aaya karte the tum yanha …
RB – nahini iss sehar maine ab raha hi kya hai .. bas . chodo jaane do wo sab ..
Swati- to ab matlab koi office kaam tha ya kuch personal
Tabhi door bell bajta hai
RB – maine dekh ke aata hoon
RB ye converstion se bohat hi umcomfortable ho raha tha swati se yun baat karne se uske dil aur dimag ka santulan bigad raha tha .. isiliye wo sirf bahan dhoond hi raha tha ki wanha se kaise nikle tabhi bell bajke uska kaam aasaan kar diya ..
RB jaake gate kholta hai ..
Gate ke kholte hi achanak RB ke naak maine ek jor ka ghoonsa padta hai jiss se RB apna hath naak maine deke niche jhook jaata hai

.. tabhi uske pet maine ek mooka padta hai ..
“ kya be saale tujhe bola tha ponhach ke phone karne ko do teen deen ho gaye

tu phone nahini kiya .mujhe tere ofiice se pata chala ki tu kab ka yanah ponhach chuka hai ..

aur chuti bhi le liya hai advance maine ..”
RB ko iss awaaz ke sath aur bhi awaaz suni dete hain ..

RB apne naak ko sehlata hua upar sar uthata hai uske saamne uske saare purane dost Vicky dipika Anita aur Ritesh khade the .. aur Ritesh usse teesra mooka maarne ko hath uthaye khada tha .
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Vicky- aare sorry baba par ye bhavi achanak ..

Dipika – wo hum bhavi devar ke bich ki baat hai ..

Tabhi RB ka phone bajne lagta hai ..

RB – hlw

Uss side******

RB – haan kon ladki ?? kya hua hai ? kya hua maa ko ? nahiiiiinn

RB ke mobile niche gir jata hai aur RB apne ghutne ke bal jameen pe beth jata hai .
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Ab Aage
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Vicky- kya hua RB ..
RB – wo maa maa swati maa
Ritesh jo ab tak wanhi khada hua tha jhat se phone uthata hai aur dur jake baat karne lagta hai ..
Uske baad ritesh sab ke pass aata hai ..
Ritesh- dipika tum ek baar RB ko sambhalo hum abhi aate hain ..
Vicky aur ritesh wanha se aage badh jate hain ..
Vicky- kya hua
Ritesh – wohi jiska dar tha swati RB ke ghar ponhach gayee aur usne uski maa ko nisha wala clip dikha diya yeh bola hai ki nisha ko rb ne black mail karke rape kiya hai aur usne nisha ka bhi koi video proof layi thi imean confession type kuch .. aur usne yeh bhi batya hai ki RB uske sath bhi ek baar jabardsati karne ki kosis kiya tha yeh sunke aunty ko dil ka doura pada hai aur unhe medical le gaye hain ..
Vicky- iss behan ki *** swati ki to ek baar aunty thik ho jaye phir maine iss batata hoon .. sal aritu didi ka to pata nahii agar aunty ko kuch hua na to maine sach maine iska ya rape kardunga ya murder phir chaye mujhe jail ho ya phasi ..
Ritesh – pehle koi taxi dekh hospital jana hai ..
Ritesh ek taxi rokta hai aur vicky jaake RB aur dipika ko wanha le aata hai .
Ritesh –RB ko sambhalne maine laga hua tha wanhi vicky dipika ko jo kuch h ua uske bare maine bata raha tha .. aise maine hi thodi hi time maine sab Hospital ponhach gaye.
RB bhag ke icu ke tarf jaata hai uske sath maienn baki sab bhi ho jaate hain .
Rb ka ro ro ke bura haal ho gaya tha . filhal ke liye kisi ko andar jaane ko nahini de rahe the milne ko .
Vicky dr se poochne ke liye chala jaata hai .
Vicky- dr ab aunty ke halat kaisi hai ..
Dr- abhi unki halat achi hai par abhi unhe aaram ki jarurat hai aap wait kijiye jab unke hosh aane ke baad dr kuch test karenge uske baad aap unse mil sakte hain par ek ek karke ..
Vicky- thik hai dr ..
Vicky wapas sab ke pass aata hai .
Vicky- RB tu hosh se kaam le agar tu aise royega to aunty ko jab pata chalega to unka kya hoga .. aansoo ponch dr se baat karliya hai maine wo thik hai unhe kabhi bhi hosh aa sakta hai ..
Vicky- ruby aunty (RB ke padoshan jo unhe yanah leke aaye thi ) uncle ko khabar diya hai aapne ..
Ruby aunty- haan beta maine RB ke papa aur shashank bhaiya ko bhi bata diya hai wo aate hi honge ,,(nihar ke papa)
Vicky- aap ne unhe baki kuch to nahini bataya hai an ..
Ruby aunty- nahni maine sirf unko yanha aane ko bol diya hai ..
Vicky- sahi kiya aunty ..
Dipika- aunty wanha hua kya tha aap jaanti ho ..
Ruby aunty- beta wo koi ladki aayi thi tumhari hi dost hai koi wo aake boli ki RB usse paise ke liye apne pyar ke jaal maine phasaya aur uske apne sone ke liye kaha jab wo na mani to uske sath jabardasti kiya par wo wanha se bhag agyee .. maine aur didi ne uske baat ko maan ne ko jab mana kardiya tab wo didi ko bohat kuch sunayee.. aur nihar ke bhi bohat bura bhala bola usne aur phir ..
Ritesh- kya hua bolo aage aunty .
Ruby aunty – wo apne phone maine RB ka aur ek ladki ka .. maine bol bhi nahini sakti .. usne bataya ki RB ne usse black mmail karke uska rape kiya hai .. aur usne uss ladki ka video bhi dikhay jiss main wo ro ro ke yeh baat keh rahi thi ..uske bad wo RB ko jail bhejegi bolke chali gayee did iss baat ko sehan naini kar payee aur wo ..**
Vicky apne phone se ek photo nikal ke bolta hai aunty yehi ladki video wali thi ..
Ruby- haan beta iska matlab kya wo ladki sach keh rahi thi hamare RB ne aisa kiya hai ..
Dipika- iss ladki ko to maine aaj nahini chodne wali ..
Vicky- aunty aap tension mat llo .ab hum yanha hai aap ho sake to aaram karlo ya ghar chale jao ..
Ruby aunty- thik hai beta mujhe bachoon ko bhi khana khilanahoga .. batate rehna kya hua ..
Uske baad ruby aunty wanha se chali jaati hai ritesh jaake unhe bahar taxi maine bithake aata hai ..
RB ka ro ro k ebohat bura haal tha .. Ritesh usse ke pass hi beth ke usse dilash de raha th a..
Dipika- ye usne sahi nahini kiya usne ..
Vicky- isne to iss baar had hi cross kar di .. socho shashank uncle wagera jab yanha aayeneg unhe ye pata chalega to unhe kitna bura lagega jo baat ko wo hum sab se chupana chahte the sirf hamare khusi ke liye unhone apna gam ko chupa liya tha wo phir se saamne aa jayega ..
Tabhi ek nurse jo anadr thi bahar aati hai aur kuch der maien wo apne sath kuch doctor aur nurse koleke aati hai .. kuch der ke chek up ke baad wo bahar aajate hian ..
Vicky aur RB unke pass chale jaate hain ..
RB – dr meri maa ab thik to hai na
Dr- haan ab koi tension ki baat nahini hai unko hosh aagaya hai aap kuch der maien un se mil sakte hain par wo abhi bhi kamjor hai to jada der mat miliye aur na hi jada bhid banana ek ya do log hi jaa sakte ho milne ..
Uske baad dr baki ke nurse se aage kya krna hai ye bolke chale gaye …
Thodi der maien nurse aake bolti hai ki aap jaake mil sakte hain .. RB aur vicky andar jaate hain ..
RB uske ma ke pass jaata hai jo ab bhi aankh band karke bed maine leti hui thi ..
RB – maa ,, maa main jaanta hoon aap sun rahe hain plz aankh kholo ..
RB ‘mom- kya wo sach hai .
RB - maa wo ..
RB ‘ s mom – maine kya pucha ?
RB – wo wo
Vicky- aunty aap nahin jaanti hai wo swati ka yeh sab plan hai wo ritu ki behan ai ..
RB’ mom- maine wo nahini pucha wo toh maine uske baton se jaan hi chuki hoon ..par wo ladki jo keh rahi thi kya wo sach hai wo dusri ladki nisha kon hai aur tu suke sath aisa kiya hai ..
Vicky- nahini aunty
RB ‘ s mom- tum chup raho vicky . tum jabab do kya puch maine ..
RB – maa wo galti se maine kuch nahini jaanta hai uss bare maien ..
RB ‘ s mom- kya tu nahini jaanta wo ladki ro ro ke keh rahi thi ki tu suko blackmail karke uske jabardasti physical hua tha .. kya wo sab jhoot hai ..
RB – nahnin maa. Maine usse koi black mail nahini kiya tha wo sab ba s
RB’s mom- matlab tune yeh kiya hai tujh se mujh ko yeh umeed nahini thi RB ab tere pap aayeneg to maine usse kya kahungi .. wo to yeh khabar sunke toot hi jayenge .. hey bhagwaan ye tune kya kardiya .. aahhhhh
RB – maa kya hua aapko
Vicky aunty nurse nurse dekho aunty ko kya ho gaya hai
Nurse jaldi se dr ko emergency call karti ahi aur jaldi se dr wanah aajte hain RB aur vicky ko bahar bhej diya jaate hain ..
Thodi der maien dr bahar aate hain ..
Vicky – dr kya hua aunty ko ..
Dr- maine kaha tha ki unhe tension na dena unka blood pressure unstable ho gya tha jisse heart pe pressure aaya isiliye wo behosh ho gay hain aap dhyan rakhe aage se unhko kisi tarha ka tension wagera mat deiin..
Dr yeh bole wanah se chale jaate hain ..
RB – yeh maine kya kardiya hey bhagwaan maa ko thik kardo .. meri galti ki saza unhe kyun de rahe ho .. mujhe yeh sab karna hi nahini chahiye ***********
Dipika- RB kya hua tumhe RB RB vicky RB ko dekho
Vicky jab ab tak andar ke tarf dekh raha tha bhag ke RB ke tarf aata hai RB behosh hoke girne hi wala hota hi ke vicky aake usse pakad leta hai ..
Vicky- RB RB kya hua tujjhe .. DR. Nurse
Ritesh bhag ke jaake dr aur nurse ko bula laate hain RB ko jaldi se andar le jaate hain..
Sab RB ke sath dr ke piche chale jaate hain ..
Dr andar RB ko check kar rahe the bahar sab tension ke sath besabar DR ke bahar aane ka wait kar arhe the .. thodi der maien Dr bahar aate hain ..
Ritesh – dr RB ko kya hua ..
Dr- kuch nahini wo jada stress ke chalte unka prefrontal cortex ke upar jada pressure pad isiliye o behosh ho gaye the ab wo thik hai .hum unhe IV laga diya hai kuch der maine unhe hosh aajayega ..
Vicky yeh sab kya ho raha hai pehle aunty ab wo RB .. uss Sali ko toh maine chodunga nahini ab ..
Vicky bahar ko jaane ko hota hai ki dipika ur ritesh usse rok dete hain ..
Dipika- tum pagal mat bano koi faida nahini hoga tum uska kuch kar nahin sakte na hi usse iss baat se farak padega wo toh jada khus hogi ki uska man chaha kaam ho gaya .
Vicky- par usse aise hi RB ke jindegi ke sath khelne nahini de sakte na ..kash kaise bhi karke yeh matter khatam ho jaye ..bas uncle wagera baat ko samjh jaye phir uss swati ko dekhta hoon maine ..
Dipika – tum tension na lo uske bare maine tumhe tension lene ki koi jarurat nahini hai maine wo dekh loongi ..
Vicky- matlab ..
Dipika – apna phone dena ..
Vicky- kyun
Dipika- kaha na phone do apna ..
Dipika vicky se uska phone leti aur kuch der check karne ke baad ek call laga deti hai …
Vicky- kisse call kar rahi ho .
Dipika – jo RB ko sambhal sake aur jis kaam ko tumhe pehle se hi kar dena chaiye tha .
RB aankh band karke soya hua tha tabhi usse kuch awaaz sunayee deti hai .. wo dhire se apna aankhe kholta hai to apne saamne nurse ko dekhta hai jo usse utha rahi thi .
Nurse- sir uth jaiye ,aap se milne police inspector aaye hue hain ..
RB – thik hai tum unhe bithao maine aata hoon thodi der maine .
RB ab purane yadon se maine khote hue kab nind maine so gaya tha usse khud bhi pata nahini tha par wo yadein itne gehre the ki uske so jaane ke baad bhi uske sapne main wo sab phir se khud ko dohrane lag gaye the .
RB uthke bed maine beth jaata hai aur aur phir thodi der apni dimag ko normal karne ke baad fresh hone washroom chala jata hai wanha se sidha bhaar aata hai janah couch pe insp uska wait kar rahe the ..
RB – good morning insp sir. Aap itne subha subha .
Insp- good morning . hmm kuch betein karni thi tumse .. waise ab unka haal kaisa hai ..
RB – sir ab wo kafi achi hai pehle se par aap ko toh pata hai ki jo uske sath hua hai uska kitna gehra asar dimag maine padta hai .. waise aap kis bare maine baat karne wale the .
Insp- maine uss time to tumhe wanha iss liye bacha liya ki tum police case maine faltu maine na phas jao . par ab lagta hai ki tumhe bachane ke chakar maien ab meri noukri jayegi ..
RB – kya hua sir .
Insp- tum ne mujhe ye kyun nahni bataya ki yeh diwang ji ki beti hai .. iska baap iss state ka sab se bada industrialist hai aur iska bhai iss area ka MLA. Tumhe pata hai na jab unhe pata hoga tab kya hoga iss pure sehar maine aag laga denge aur mera to pucho hi mat ..
“kuch nahini karenge wo aur na hi unhe kuch pata cahlega unhe to yehtak pata nahin hoga ki maine kanha hoon ..”
RB aur insp uss tarafa dekhte hain .jaha swati door ke pass khadi thi .
RB – tum kyun aaye bahar pagal ho kya
RB bhag ke jaate hai aur swati ko lek bed maien leta deta hai ..
RB – tum pagal ho kya bilkool tumhe mana kiya tha dr ne bed se bhi uthne ko phir bhi ..
Swati- mujhe insp se baat karni hai ..
RB – par
Swati- plz
RB –ok
RB bahar jake insp ko bulake lata hai .
Insp – aur ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai
Swati- dekh to rahe hain insp ..waise aap tension mat lijiye aap ke upar kisi tarha ki bhi aanch nahini aayengi ..
Insp- par aapke
Swati- kya unhone mera missing ka complin kiya hai ya phir unhe pata bhi hai maine kanha hoon .
Insp- nahini maine pata kiya tha unhe shyada pata nahin hai iss bare maine .
Swati- insp unhe farak nahin padta .. aap bilkool tension mat lijiye aapke bare maine humkisi ko kuch nahin batayeneg na hi aap to kisi ko pata bhi nahini lageaga .
Insp- thik hai maine chalta hoon phir ..apna khayal rakhna . RB tum aana tum se kuch baat karni hai ..
RB – thik hai insp chaliye .. tum plz yanha se phir se mat uthna thik hai ..
RB insp ke sath bahar aata hai ..
Insp – dekho RB mujhe jitna meri fikar nahini hai utna tumhari hai .maine to kaise bhi karke bach jaunga .par mujhe lagta hai ki tumh eswati ke ghar walon ko inform kardena chahiye .kyun ki agar uske ghar walon ko pata chal gaya to bohat bura haoga ..kosis karna ki ya to isse uske ghar walon ke pass bhijwa do ya phir ye kosis karo ki ye baat kisi ko pata na chale jab tak ho sake .
RB – thik hai sir maine dhyan rakhoonga iss baat pe .
RB insp ko bye bolke andar jaata hai .. swati ab bed pe so ke RB ka wait kar rahi thi ..
Swati- insp kya bol rahe the .
RB – kuch nahin tum wo sab chodo aur jaldi se medicine le lo ..
RB medicine nikal ke swati ko deta hiai swati medicine kha leti hai .. RB usse bed maine takiye ke sahare betha deta hai ..
Halaki in teeen char dino maine wo kafi had tak thik ho chuki thi par phir bhi uske private part maine jo chot aaye the uske chalte wo sidha hoke beth nahini paa rahi thi .
Swati- RB ek baat puuchun ..
RB – haan .. tum yanah matlab ab kya tum isi sahar maine rehte ho aur yanah koi aur nahni hai tumhari maa .. I mean sorry maine itne din se yanah hoon par yeh puch nahin payee.
RB kuch der swati ko dekhta hai phir niche ke traf dekhta hai phir ek halki si saans chod ke bol ta hai ..
RB – maine yanha nahin rehta .uss raat ko maine yanha lot raha tha .kuch kaam tha mujhe isiliye aaya hua tha kuch din ke liye ..
Swati- yeh ghar
RB – mera hi hai jab yanha se trasfer hua to maine uske baad time nahini nikal paya isse bechne ko .phir baad maine dil nahini kiya isse bechne ko .isiliye jab bhi yanha aata hoon to hotel ke wajaye yanhi reh jaata hoon .
Swati- kya aksar aaya karte the tum yanha …
RB – nahini iss sehar maine ab raha hi kya hai .. bas . chodo jaane do wo sab ..
Swati- to ab matlab koi office kaam tha ya kuch personal
Tabhi door bell bajta hai
RB – maine dekh ke aata hoon
RB ye converstion se bohat hi umcomfortable ho raha tha swati se yun baat karne se uske dil aur dimag ka santulan bigad raha tha .. isiliye wo sirf bahan dhoond hi raha tha ki wanha se kaise nikle tabhi bell bajke uska kaam aasaan kar diya ..
RB jaake gate kholta hai ..
Gate ke kholte hi achanak RB ke naak maine ek jor ka ghoonsa padta hai jiss se RB apna hath naak maine deke niche jhook jaata hai

.. tabhi uske pet maine ek mooka padta hai ..
“ kya be saale tujhe bola tha ponhach ke phone karne ko do teen deen ho gaye

tu phone nahini kiya .mujhe tere ofiice se pata chala ki tu kab ka yanah ponhach chuka hai ..

aur chuti bhi le liya hai advance maine ..”
RB ko iss awaaz ke sath aur bhi awaaz suni dete hain ..


RB apne naak ko sehlata hua upar sar uthata hai uske saamne uske saare purane dost Vicky dipika Anita aur Ritesh khade the .. aur Ritesh usse teesra mooka maarne ko hath uthaye khada tha .
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Bahut badhiya update hai bhai...... To swaty ne nisha e baare me bataya or RB ke maa ko dil ka dohra padha hai..... Or uske hosh aate hi fir se behosh ho geyi.....or dipika shayed barsha ko ya fir reshmi ko phone karne wali thi.....dekhte hai ab present me kya hota hai....
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Vicky- aare sorry baba par ye bhavi achanak ..

Dipika – wo hum bhavi devar ke bich ki baat hai ..

Tabhi RB ka phone bajne lagta hai ..

RB – hlw

Uss side******

RB – haan kon ladki ?? kya hua hai ? kya hua maa ko ? nahiiiiinn

RB ke mobile niche gir jata hai aur RB apne ghutne ke bal jameen pe beth jata hai .
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Vicky- kya hua RB ..
RB – wo maa maa swati maa
Ritesh jo ab tak wanhi khada hua tha jhat se phone uthata hai aur dur jake baat karne lagta hai ..
Uske baad ritesh sab ke pass aata hai ..
Ritesh- dipika tum ek baar RB ko sambhalo hum abhi aate hain ..
Vicky aur ritesh wanha se aage badh jate hain ..
Vicky- kya hua
Ritesh – wohi jiska dar tha swati RB ke ghar ponhach gayee aur usne uski maa ko nisha wala clip dikha diya yeh bola hai ki nisha ko rb ne black mail karke rape kiya hai aur usne nisha ka bhi koi video proof layi thi imean confession type kuch .. aur usne yeh bhi batya hai ki RB uske sath bhi ek baar jabardsati karne ki kosis kiya tha yeh sunke aunty ko dil ka doura pada hai aur unhe medical le gaye hain ..
Vicky- iss behan ki *** swati ki to ek baar aunty thik ho jaye phir maine iss batata hoon .. sal aritu didi ka to pata nahii agar aunty ko kuch hua na to maine sach maine iska ya rape kardunga ya murder phir chaye mujhe jail ho ya phasi ..
Ritesh – pehle koi taxi dekh hospital jana hai ..
Ritesh ek taxi rokta hai aur vicky jaake RB aur dipika ko wanha le aata hai .
Ritesh –RB ko sambhalne maine laga hua tha wanhi vicky dipika ko jo kuch h ua uske bare maine bata raha tha .. aise maine hi thodi hi time maine sab Hospital ponhach gaye.
RB bhag ke icu ke tarf jaata hai uske sath maienn baki sab bhi ho jaate hain .
Rb ka ro ro ke bura haal ho gaya tha . filhal ke liye kisi ko andar jaane ko nahini de rahe the milne ko .
Vicky dr se poochne ke liye chala jaata hai .
Vicky- dr ab aunty ke halat kaisi hai ..
Dr- abhi unki halat achi hai par abhi unhe aaram ki jarurat hai aap wait kijiye jab unke hosh aane ke baad dr kuch test karenge uske baad aap unse mil sakte hain par ek ek karke ..
Vicky- thik hai dr ..
Vicky wapas sab ke pass aata hai .
Vicky- RB tu hosh se kaam le agar tu aise royega to aunty ko jab pata chalega to unka kya hoga .. aansoo ponch dr se baat karliya hai maine wo thik hai unhe kabhi bhi hosh aa sakta hai ..
Vicky- ruby aunty (RB ke padoshan jo unhe yanah leke aaye thi ) uncle ko khabar diya hai aapne ..
Ruby aunty- haan beta maine RB ke papa aur shashank bhaiya ko bhi bata diya hai wo aate hi honge ,,(nihar ke papa)
Vicky- aap ne unhe baki kuch to nahini bataya hai an ..
Ruby aunty- nahni maine sirf unko yanha aane ko bol diya hai ..
Vicky- sahi kiya aunty ..
Dipika- aunty wanha hua kya tha aap jaanti ho ..
Ruby aunty- beta wo koi ladki aayi thi tumhari hi dost hai koi wo aake boli ki RB usse paise ke liye apne pyar ke jaal maine phasaya aur uske apne sone ke liye kaha jab wo na mani to uske sath jabardasti kiya par wo wanha se bhag agyee .. maine aur didi ne uske baat ko maan ne ko jab mana kardiya tab wo didi ko bohat kuch sunayee.. aur nihar ke bhi bohat bura bhala bola usne aur phir ..
Ritesh- kya hua bolo aage aunty .
Ruby aunty – wo apne phone maine RB ka aur ek ladki ka .. maine bol bhi nahini sakti .. usne bataya ki RB ne usse black mmail karke uska rape kiya hai .. aur usne uss ladki ka video bhi dikhay jiss main wo ro ro ke yeh baat keh rahi thi ..uske bad wo RB ko jail bhejegi bolke chali gayee did iss baat ko sehan naini kar payee aur wo ..**
Vicky apne phone se ek photo nikal ke bolta hai aunty yehi ladki video wali thi ..
Ruby- haan beta iska matlab kya wo ladki sach keh rahi thi hamare RB ne aisa kiya hai ..
Dipika- iss ladki ko to maine aaj nahini chodne wali ..
Vicky- aunty aap tension mat llo .ab hum yanha hai aap ho sake to aaram karlo ya ghar chale jao ..
Ruby aunty- thik hai beta mujhe bachoon ko bhi khana khilanahoga .. batate rehna kya hua ..
Uske baad ruby aunty wanha se chali jaati hai ritesh jaake unhe bahar taxi maine bithake aata hai ..
RB ka ro ro k ebohat bura haal tha .. Ritesh usse ke pass hi beth ke usse dilash de raha th a..
Dipika- ye usne sahi nahini kiya usne ..
Vicky- isne to iss baar had hi cross kar di .. socho shashank uncle wagera jab yanha aayeneg unhe ye pata chalega to unhe kitna bura lagega jo baat ko wo hum sab se chupana chahte the sirf hamare khusi ke liye unhone apna gam ko chupa liya tha wo phir se saamne aa jayega ..
Tabhi ek nurse jo anadr thi bahar aati hai aur kuch der maien wo apne sath kuch doctor aur nurse koleke aati hai .. kuch der ke chek up ke baad wo bahar aajate hian ..
Vicky aur RB unke pass chale jaate hain ..
RB – dr meri maa ab thik to hai na
Dr- haan ab koi tension ki baat nahini hai unko hosh aagaya hai aap kuch der maien un se mil sakte hain par wo abhi bhi kamjor hai to jada der mat miliye aur na hi jada bhid banana ek ya do log hi jaa sakte ho milne ..
Uske baad dr baki ke nurse se aage kya krna hai ye bolke chale gaye …
Thodi der maien nurse aake bolti hai ki aap jaake mil sakte hain .. RB aur vicky andar jaate hain ..
RB uske ma ke pass jaata hai jo ab bhi aankh band karke bed maine leti hui thi ..
RB – maa ,, maa main jaanta hoon aap sun rahe hain plz aankh kholo ..
RB ‘mom- kya wo sach hai .
RB - maa wo ..
RB ‘ s mom – maine kya pucha ?
RB – wo wo
Vicky- aunty aap nahin jaanti hai wo swati ka yeh sab plan hai wo ritu ki behan ai ..
RB’ mom- maine wo nahini pucha wo toh maine uske baton se jaan hi chuki hoon ..par wo ladki jo keh rahi thi kya wo sach hai wo dusri ladki nisha kon hai aur tu suke sath aisa kiya hai ..
Vicky- nahini aunty
RB ‘ s mom- tum chup raho vicky . tum jabab do kya puch maine ..
RB – maa wo galti se maine kuch nahini jaanta hai uss bare maien ..
RB ‘ s mom- kya tu nahini jaanta wo ladki ro ro ke keh rahi thi ki tu suko blackmail karke uske jabardasti physical hua tha .. kya wo sab jhoot hai ..
RB – nahnin maa. Maine usse koi black mail nahini kiya tha wo sab ba s
RB’s mom- matlab tune yeh kiya hai tujh se mujh ko yeh umeed nahini thi RB ab tere pap aayeneg to maine usse kya kahungi .. wo to yeh khabar sunke toot hi jayenge .. hey bhagwaan ye tune kya kardiya .. aahhhhh
RB – maa kya hua aapko
Vicky aunty nurse nurse dekho aunty ko kya ho gaya hai
Nurse jaldi se dr ko emergency call karti ahi aur jaldi se dr wanah aajte hain RB aur vicky ko bahar bhej diya jaate hain ..
Thodi der maien dr bahar aate hain ..
Vicky – dr kya hua aunty ko ..
Dr- maine kaha tha ki unhe tension na dena unka blood pressure unstable ho gya tha jisse heart pe pressure aaya isiliye wo behosh ho gay hain aap dhyan rakhe aage se unhko kisi tarha ka tension wagera mat deiin..
Dr yeh bole wanah se chale jaate hain ..
RB – yeh maine kya kardiya hey bhagwaan maa ko thik kardo .. meri galti ki saza unhe kyun de rahe ho .. mujhe yeh sab karna hi nahini chahiye ***********
Dipika- RB kya hua tumhe RB RB vicky RB ko dekho
Vicky jab ab tak andar ke tarf dekh raha tha bhag ke RB ke tarf aata hai RB behosh hoke girne hi wala hota hi ke vicky aake usse pakad leta hai ..
Vicky- RB RB kya hua tujjhe .. DR. Nurse
Ritesh bhag ke jaake dr aur nurse ko bula laate hain RB ko jaldi se andar le jaate hain..
Sab RB ke sath dr ke piche chale jaate hain ..
Dr andar RB ko check kar rahe the bahar sab tension ke sath besabar DR ke bahar aane ka wait kar arhe the .. thodi der maien Dr bahar aate hain ..
Ritesh – dr RB ko kya hua ..
Dr- kuch nahini wo jada stress ke chalte unka prefrontal cortex ke upar jada pressure pad isiliye o behosh ho gaye the ab wo thik hai .hum unhe IV laga diya hai kuch der maine unhe hosh aajayega ..
Vicky yeh sab kya ho raha hai pehle aunty ab wo RB .. uss Sali ko toh maine chodunga nahini ab ..
Vicky bahar ko jaane ko hota hai ki dipika ur ritesh usse rok dete hain ..
Dipika- tum pagal mat bano koi faida nahini hoga tum uska kuch kar nahin sakte na hi usse iss baat se farak padega wo toh jada khus hogi ki uska man chaha kaam ho gaya .
Vicky- par usse aise hi RB ke jindegi ke sath khelne nahini de sakte na ..kash kaise bhi karke yeh matter khatam ho jaye ..bas uncle wagera baat ko samjh jaye phir uss swati ko dekhta hoon maine ..
Dipika – tum tension na lo uske bare maine tumhe tension lene ki koi jarurat nahini hai maine wo dekh loongi ..
Vicky- matlab ..
Dipika – apna phone dena ..
Vicky- kyun
Dipika- kaha na phone do apna ..
Dipika vicky se uska phone leti aur kuch der check karne ke baad ek call laga deti hai …
Vicky- kisse call kar rahi ho .
Dipika – jo RB ko sambhal sake aur jis kaam ko tumhe pehle se hi kar dena chaiye tha .
RB aankh band karke soya hua tha tabhi usse kuch awaaz sunayee deti hai .. wo dhire se apna aankhe kholta hai to apne saamne nurse ko dekhta hai jo usse utha rahi thi .
Nurse- sir uth jaiye ,aap se milne police inspector aaye hue hain ..
RB – thik hai tum unhe bithao maine aata hoon thodi der maine .
RB ab purane yadon se maine khote hue kab nind maine so gaya tha usse khud bhi pata nahini tha par wo yadein itne gehre the ki uske so jaane ke baad bhi uske sapne main wo sab phir se khud ko dohrane lag gaye the .
RB uthke bed maine beth jaata hai aur aur phir thodi der apni dimag ko normal karne ke baad fresh hone washroom chala jata hai wanha se sidha bhaar aata hai janah couch pe insp uska wait kar rahe the ..
RB – good morning insp sir. Aap itne subha subha .
Insp- good morning . hmm kuch betein karni thi tumse .. waise ab unka haal kaisa hai ..
RB – sir ab wo kafi achi hai pehle se par aap ko toh pata hai ki jo uske sath hua hai uska kitna gehra asar dimag maine padta hai .. waise aap kis bare maine baat karne wale the .
Insp- maine uss time to tumhe wanha iss liye bacha liya ki tum police case maine faltu maine na phas jao . par ab lagta hai ki tumhe bachane ke chakar maien ab meri noukri jayegi ..
RB – kya hua sir .
Insp- tum ne mujhe ye kyun nahni bataya ki yeh diwang ji ki beti hai .. iska baap iss state ka sab se bada industrialist hai aur iska bhai iss area ka MLA. Tumhe pata hai na jab unhe pata hoga tab kya hoga iss pure sehar maine aag laga denge aur mera to pucho hi mat ..
“kuch nahini karenge wo aur na hi unhe kuch pata cahlega unhe to yehtak pata nahin hoga ki maine kanha hoon ..”
RB aur insp uss tarafa dekhte hain .jaha swati door ke pass khadi thi .
RB – tum kyun aaye bahar pagal ho kya
RB bhag ke jaate hai aur swati ko lek bed maien leta deta hai ..
RB – tum pagal ho kya bilkool tumhe mana kiya tha dr ne bed se bhi uthne ko phir bhi ..
Swati- mujhe insp se baat karni hai ..
RB – par
Swati- plz
RB –ok
RB bahar jake insp ko bulake lata hai .
Insp – aur ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai
Swati- dekh to rahe hain insp ..waise aap tension mat lijiye aap ke upar kisi tarha ki bhi aanch nahini aayengi ..
Insp- par aapke
Swati- kya unhone mera missing ka complin kiya hai ya phir unhe pata bhi hai maine kanha hoon .
Insp- nahini maine pata kiya tha unhe shyada pata nahin hai iss bare maine .
Swati- insp unhe farak nahin padta .. aap bilkool tension mat lijiye aapke bare maine humkisi ko kuch nahin batayeneg na hi aap to kisi ko pata bhi nahini lageaga .
Insp- thik hai maine chalta hoon phir ..apna khayal rakhna . RB tum aana tum se kuch baat karni hai ..
RB – thik hai insp chaliye .. tum plz yanha se phir se mat uthna thik hai ..
RB insp ke sath bahar aata hai ..
Insp – dekho RB mujhe jitna meri fikar nahini hai utna tumhari hai .maine to kaise bhi karke bach jaunga .par mujhe lagta hai ki tumh eswati ke ghar walon ko inform kardena chahiye .kyun ki agar uske ghar walon ko pata chal gaya to bohat bura haoga ..kosis karna ki ya to isse uske ghar walon ke pass bhijwa do ya phir ye kosis karo ki ye baat kisi ko pata na chale jab tak ho sake .
RB – thik hai sir maine dhyan rakhoonga iss baat pe .
RB insp ko bye bolke andar jaata hai .. swati ab bed pe so ke RB ka wait kar rahi thi ..
Swati- insp kya bol rahe the .
RB – kuch nahin tum wo sab chodo aur jaldi se medicine le lo ..
RB medicine nikal ke swati ko deta hiai swati medicine kha leti hai .. RB usse bed maine takiye ke sahare betha deta hai ..
Halaki in teeen char dino maine wo kafi had tak thik ho chuki thi par phir bhi uske private part maine jo chot aaye the uske chalte wo sidha hoke beth nahini paa rahi thi .
Swati- RB ek baat puuchun ..
RB – haan .. tum yanah matlab ab kya tum isi sahar maine rehte ho aur yanah koi aur nahni hai tumhari maa .. I mean sorry maine itne din se yanah hoon par yeh puch nahin payee.
RB kuch der swati ko dekhta hai phir niche ke traf dekhta hai phir ek halki si saans chod ke bol ta hai ..
RB – maine yanha nahin rehta .uss raat ko maine yanha lot raha tha .kuch kaam tha mujhe isiliye aaya hua tha kuch din ke liye ..
Swati- yeh ghar
RB – mera hi hai jab yanha se trasfer hua to maine uske baad time nahini nikal paya isse bechne ko .phir baad maine dil nahini kiya isse bechne ko .isiliye jab bhi yanha aata hoon to hotel ke wajaye yanhi reh jaata hoon .
Swati- kya aksar aaya karte the tum yanha …
RB – nahini iss sehar maine ab raha hi kya hai .. bas . chodo jaane do wo sab ..
Swati- to ab matlab koi office kaam tha ya kuch personal
Tabhi door bell bajta hai
RB – maine dekh ke aata hoon
RB ye converstion se bohat hi umcomfortable ho raha tha swati se yun baat karne se uske dil aur dimag ka santulan bigad raha tha .. isiliye wo sirf bahan dhoond hi raha tha ki wanha se kaise nikle tabhi bell bajke uska kaam aasaan kar diya ..
RB jaake gate kholta hai ..
Gate ke kholte hi achanak RB ke naak maine ek jor ka ghoonsa padta hai jiss se RB apna hath naak maine deke niche jhook jaata hai

.. tabhi uske pet maine ek mooka padta hai ..
“ kya be saale tujhe bola tha ponhach ke phone karne ko do teen deen ho gaye

tu phone nahini kiya .mujhe tere ofiice se pata chala ki tu kab ka yanah ponhach chuka hai ..

aur chuti bhi le liya hai advance maine ..”
RB ko iss awaaz ke sath aur bhi awaaz suni dete hain ..


RB apne naak ko sehlata hua upar sar uthata hai uske saamne uske saare purane dost Vicky dipika Anita aur Ritesh khade the .. aur Ritesh usse teesra mooka maarne ko hath uthaye khada tha .
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