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Romance TANHAI KE SAHARE

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Nevil singh

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Vicky – han aur pichle 10 min se ham enhi pe baat kar rahe haine par t une abhi tak kanhi jaane ki baat bhi nahini ki .matlab tu saaf usse avoid karne hi wanha se uth aaya .

RB – plz bhai pat nahini maine kosis toh karta hun par ajeeb si ghabrahat hhoti hai usse dekhte hi .to maine nahini chahat uske samne jada aau .plz bhai force mat karna.

Vicky- thik hai jaise teri marji par wo apni bhi friend hai yaar usse bhi bura lagega na tu usse avoid kar raha hai .

RB- thik hai bhai aage se try jaroor karoonga .filhaal toh Lab ke taraf chal .

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Dono Lab ke taraf chal padte hai . lab maine sab bache pehele se hi bethe hue the .ye chemistry ka practical tha . chem. Ke HOD .aur chem Professor aur lab technician aate hai. aur hod bachon ko iss saal ke syllabus aur kon kon se topic ke practical hone hai uske bare maine batake chale gaye aur tabhi technician ek chart leke aaya jiss maine student ke nameaur group tha .basically 2-2 ke pair maine group bane the total 15 group the . .technician sabhi bachon ko bolta hai chart se apna group check kar lo aur ussi hisab se apne desk ke pass chale jao . sabhi bache ek ek karke jate haine dekhne ke liye .vicky aur sooraj ka ek group tha .dipali ka koi dusre student ke sath ana tha aur lucy aur barsha ka alag batch tha kyun ki already iss group ke minimum strength ho chukka tha ur doosre batch maine shortage tha to unka abhi physics ka practical tha . swati aur RB ka ek hi group tha .

Sabhi bache apne apne desk ke pass khade ho jate haine .

Tabhi technician aata hai aur practical start karta hai .aaj chemical identification the .

Swati- RB ,kya hua khade ho chup chap ,jara test tube holder dena isse heat test karna hai .

RB- ……………..

Swati- aare kya hua sunai de raha hai holder do late ho raha hai .

RB- sir,

Technician – kya hua ?

RB- sir mera tabiyat thik nahini lag raha hai .chakar bhi aarahe hai .kya maine jaa sakta hun bahar .

Technician –han han kyun nahini aabhi jao aura age se bhi mat aana .chemistry practical ka koi faida thodi hai .pehele din hi khada nahini hua jaata . tum logon se .bahane bana rahe ho pehel din hi 5 min bhikahda nahini hua jata 3 ghante kya khade rahoge .

RB- sir sach maine mujhe chakar aa rahe hain ..plz sir

Technician – han han jao .khud hi bhugtoge exam ke time tab mat poochna sir a nahini aaraha hai wo nahini aaraha hai .

RB unke baton ko sun ke wanha se nikal jaata hai .ab swati ko sir ek aur group maine aaj ke liye daal dete haine practical karne . wanhi RB wanha se nikal ke HOD ke cabin maine jaata hai .

HOD- han beta bolo kya hua .

RB- sir, maine apne batch change karna chahta hun .

HOD- group change karna chahata hun ka kya matlab .ye koi circus chal rah ahi kya jiska marji jis batch maine jayega .chup chap jaake practical attend karo .waise bhi abhi tumhara practical chal rah hai .

RB- sir plz maine aapse request karta hun

HOD- dekho bachhe abhi sab batch full ho chukka hai abhi kis batch maine dalen tumhe firse sara batch ko disturb hoga .

RB- sara atleast partner change ho sakta hai kya .

HOD- tumhara aakhir kar problem kya hai .thik hai maine tumhe chemistry ke kuch sabal pooch rah hun agar sare thik die to maine change kara doonga .

Phir sir kuch swal poochte hain RB 10 maine 8 jawab de deta hain .

HOD- thik hai beta par ache se padh na thik hai na class maien koi complain aani chaiye na hi college campus maine .

Next day bhi sab bache practical ke liye ponhach jate hai aaj physics ki practical tha .Physics ke technician aata hai aur RB ko bulata hai aur pooch ta hai ki tumne group change ka apply kiya tha .aur phir wo changes kar deta hai ab RB aur dipika ek group maine the aur swati uss ladki ke sath jiske sath dipika thi .

Swati aur dipika hairan hoke dekh rahe the ki kya ho rah hai .unhe yeh samjh nahini aa raha ki achanak RB ne yun group kyun badlawaya . practical phir se suru ho gaya.

Dipika- RB tumne group change kyun kiya .

RB- aare kuch nahini bas aise hi .

Dipika- sach sach batao kya tumne mere liye group transfer kiya .

RB- tumhare liye kyun .

Dipika- bura mat maan na par mujh elagta hai tum mujh pe try kar rahe ho .

RB- aabe wo pagal ladki mujhe kya pagal kutte ne kata hai pehele baat to shayd tu aur Vicky officially realtion maine na ho .par ye tub hi janti hai ki jald hi tumhara suru hone wal hai aur maine pagal hun jot ere pe chance marunga .aur doosri baat mujhe waise bhi koi kaam nahini kya jo chipkali se romance karne ka try karun .

Dipika- ohh acha acha .ek minute kya kah tumne chipkali ??

RB- or nahini to kya

Dipika- kis angel se maine tumhe chipkali lag rahi hun .

RB-han to tum Vicky ko han nahini bol rahiho khud bhi latki hui ho aur usse bhi latka rakh hai .to tum chipkali hui na .

Dipika- han han ab chup chap kar practical .

Practical khatamhone ke baad sab hostel wapas chal jaata hai .ussi raat ko hostel maine .

Vicky-aabe sale kamine tujhe aur koi nahini mila mera hi bhai hoke meri hi kaat rah hai .

RB- maine kya kiya .be

Vicky- tu dipika ke sath kyun change kar diya .

RB- tujhe to pata hai ki maine kyun change kiya .phir bhi pooch raha hai

Vicky- han to dipika ke sath kya baat kar rah tha .

RB- aabe sale teri hi fayed ke baat kar rah tha .ussse samjha rah tha ki tujhe yun latkaye na ..

Vikcy- aare mere bhai bas ye kaam karde jo bolega wo karunga maine .

RB- aabe ye sooraj kanha gaya dikhta hi nahini hai wo .

Vicky- aare bhai sahib to lucy ke sath maje kar rahe honge kisi park maine apna hi kismet hi phoota hai .

RB- chal koi na tension na le .

Doosre side :-

Dipika- swati tune meri phone dekha kya kanhi.

Swati- aare han wo vikcy ka call aay tha tu nahini thi to maine bol diya baad maien call karne ko .

Dipika- acha chalo thik hai .

Swati- baat nahini karegi uss se

Dipika- aare abhi thodi na abhi to wo padh rah hoga ya phir RB ke sath hoga maine raat ko baat karoongi

Swati- haan .sun mujhe tujhse baat karni hai . aare wo aisa kyun hai .

Dipika- meri maa maine tere khopdi se connected nahini hun jo main ye jaan jaun kit u kiske baat kar rahi hai .

Swati- RB , tune dekha na aaj wo kya kiya

Dipika- han yaar maine bhi poocha usse ki group kyun change kiya to batay nahini

Swati- pata nahini

Dipika- mujhe lagta uska na tere sath koi issue hai .

Swati- matlab ?

Dipika –dekhna usne tere se group kyun change kiya .wo baki sab se ache se baat karta hai par tujhe avoid karta hai .

Swati- han yaar uss din bhi maine ussse baat kiya toh koi ans nahini diya .

Dipiak- pat karna padega kya bat hai .vicky toh batat hi nahini kitna bhi force karlo .ek kam karna tu uss se baat kar na dekh kya bolta hi .

Swati- kanha baat karta hai wo .aur ek baar call bhi kiya th ussse usne call disconnect kardiya

Dipika—to tu ussse fb pe baat kar le .

Swati- han ye good idea hai .

Phir dono fb pe RB ka id dhoondti hai aur par swati ko RB ka id nahini mil rah tha .

Swati aare uska toh id hi nahini dikha rah hai .shayad uska id nahini hai fb pe yya kuch doosra naam pe hai .

Dipika- kya baat kar rahi hai maine Vicky ke time line maine uske tag pic dekhi hai .rook maine dekhti hun

Dipika search karti hai to RB ka id show hoti hai .

Dipika- ye to hai id. Iska matlab usne tujhe block kar rakh hai .

Swati- pata nahini wo mujhse itna kyun nafrat karta hai.

Dipika- rukmaine uss ko fb pe request bhej ti hun

Dpika RB ko reqest bhej ti hai jise RB accept bhi kar leta hai .

Dipika- aare chalo ye kam se kam mera reqest to accept kiya .

Swati –han wo toh hai .

Dipika- sun n tu apni ek fake id bana aur phir RB se baten kar aur dhire dhire pat lag ki wo aisa kyun kar raha hai .

Swati- kuch bhi .

Dipika- dekh maine bol diya aage teri marji .

Swati – chal tu banake de

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Swati –han wo toh hai .

Dipika- sun n tu apni ek fake id bana aur phir RB se baten kar aur dhire dhire pat lag ki wo aisa kyun kar raha hai .

Swati- kuch bhi .

Dipika- dekh maine bol diya aage teri marji .

Swati – chal tu banake de

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Phir dipika ne swati ke liye ek fake id bana ke deti hai .sare detail wagera bhar ke . swati uss id se RB ko reqest send karti hai .par kafi time hone ke baad bhi RB accept nahini karta . To wo kuch soch ke pehel hi msg bhejna suru kar deti hai .

Sooraj-aabe oye ghonchu tera phone baj rah hai

Vicky- kisse ghonchu bol raha hai be ?

Sooraj-aare maine RB ko bol rah hun tu ghonchu thodi na hai bhai hai tu apna .

Vicky- ye kahi na bhai wala baat .rula dia pagle

Sooraj- ro mat ,jhuk jaa ulta hoke

RB band karo tumhara natak .

RB-kiska msg aaya hai be dekhun ,hat sal fb ka msg .fns reqest hatt

Vicky- kiss ka be .

RB -pata nahini koi ladki ka hai . maine nahini jaanta hun isse

Vicky –aare tu idhar dena phone tera kaam ka hai nahini tu jaa apna khayali palau bana phone idhar de ladki ka id se reqest aaya hi aur tu aisa sad reaction de rah hai .

RB- le tu le le aur phone maine ghoos jaa aur mujhe apna phone de mujhe gaana sun na hai

Vicky – le le be par dipika ka phone aaya hai to jaldi leke dena .

RB – thik hai .

Sooraj- chal bhai tu ru hoja kon hai toh dekhte hai .

Vicky- be pat nahini hamari common fnd to nahini hai maine profile check kar diya .

Sooraj – to baat kar na

Vicky –hi

Uss side- Hy

Vicky –hlw miss .

Uss side – wo to thik hai par pehcahan maine kon hun .

Sooraj- be sal atu toh bol rah tha ki ye tumhari koi fnd nahni hai par ye toh RB ko jaanti hai .

Vicky – aabe maine bola th ahamari common fnd nahini hai

Sooraj- han to RB ka fnd koi ho sakti hai .

Vicky- aabe uske he hi kitne fnd sabko toh maine jant hun aur jad tar hamare common fnd hi hoge .

Uss side- kanha gaye kya ab itna time le raho o pehchn ne maine

Vikcy- aare yaad nahini aaraha hai batao na kon o .

Uss side kya yar mujhe nahini pehchana maine rinky bol rahi hun

Vicky-ab ye kon aagayee be rinky pehel toh kabhi naam na suna

Sooraj- terko kya matlab naam se aabe iss chutiye ko ladki ki fnd rq aa rahi hai wo bhi ladki saamne se itne openly baat kar rahi hai .sala bhagwaan utha le re mujhe

Vikcy- pata nahini ko he ye rinky chalo bat kar leta hun

Vicky –aare wo rinky han han pehchan gaya .aur kya kar rahi ho

Rinky –yehi magazine padh rahi thi . aur tum

Vicky –maine beth ke horoscope padh rah tha .pata hi likha hua hai aaj koi sundar si ladki se bhet ho sakt hai .cholo digital duniya hi issliye fb pe hi tumse mulaqat ho gayee

Rinky - acha sachmaine .

Vicky-aur nahini to kya han agr tumhara chera dekhne ko mil jaat toh sahimaine mulaqat ho jati tumne dp bhi nahini lagaee ho apni

Rinky- dp ka kya hai koi bhi rakh lo aur baki rah photo ki to time aane do photo kya hiakhud saamne aajaungi.

Vikcy-aare aise baat mat kiya karo .dil garden garden ho jaat hai .

Rinky- acha suno maine abhi busy hun baad maine bat kar ti hun thik hai .

Vikcy- suno na fb pe maj nahini aata apna no do ham text kiya karenge uar baat bhi

Rinky- jada utawal hona thik nahini hai .

Vikcy acha thik hai phir 789****** ye rah mera number agar madam ka mood change hua to call ya text kar dena waise bhi maine fb kam hi chlata hun to shayd hi wanha baat ho paye .

Rinky- sochungi ok bye

Sooraj- aare wah mere sher ,kaam la kardiya ab wo msg delete kar barna L lag jayenge agar usne dekh liya to .

Vicky- han ye to tune thik kaha .

Sooraj- sun ye wali pe maine try mar ta hunt u jane de

Vicky-aare kyun be meri mathe pe kya C likha hua hai .

Sooraj- thik hai beta tu try kar aur jab pat jaye to mujhe batan maine dikpika ko bhi bataunga iss khus kahabri ke bare maien .

Vicky- teri *********** sale thik hai par chal jaane de ek mahina maine agr mere se nahini hua to tu try karn a

Sooraj- ok done .

Wanhi doosri aur

Swati- aise to bada shareef bacha banta hai par yanha dekho sala anjani ladki kobhi try maar rah hai …

Dipika- sare ladke ek jaise hai

Swati- aare to agar ye sare ladke aise hote haine to phir ye sab se baat karta hai aur usss barsha seto chipak hi jaat hai par mere se kya dushmani hia iski mere kya sar pe singh nikle hue haine .

Dipika- pata nahini mujhe .

Dipika- sun thode aur maje lete haine RB ki

Swati abhi nahini baad maine abhi mujhe kuch notes bana ne haine ,

Dipika- aare han notes se yaad aaya lucy ne tera physics ke notes liye hue haiapne ghar aaj

Swati- wo kyun bhala mujhe to wahi karna tha abhi

Dipika - usne bola usne nahinikiya hai aur sooraj ke liye bhi usse hi notes banana haine to wo teri notes le gayee

Swati- han kaam kya hai aur din bhar uss sooraj ke sath ghooman phir mere hi notes se leke uske liye notes banana

Dipika-aare meri jaan tu kyun tension le rahi hai

Swati- han tujhe kya padi daka to mere ghar pad hai na

Dipika- wo to hai .tu tension kyun le rahi hai ter liye toh line lag jayeneg ladko ki .

Swati wah re eri dost abhi muft ka gyan mat de khud toh piche kisi ko latka ke ghoom rahi hai aur mujhe prabachan suna rahi hai .

Dipika- chal tension nale meri notes se banale abhi maine kuch aur kardeti hun .

Phir wo dono notes padhne maine lag jaate haine . aur phir khan khake bed pe aajte haine sone .

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saloni update hai bhai
 

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Dipika- wo to hai .tu tension kyun le rahi hai ter liye toh line lag jayeneg ladko ki .

Swati wah re eri dost abhi muft ka gyan mat de khud toh piche kisi ko latka ke ghoom rahi hai aur mujhe prabachan suna rahi hai .

Dipika- chal tension nale meri notes se banale abhi maine kuch aur kardeti hun .

Phir wo dono notes padhne maine lag jaate haine . aur phir khan khake bed pe aajte haine sone .

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Aaj lucy ghar gayee hui thi aur barsha ka tabiyat thik nahini tha to wo jaldi hi so gayee toh dono fnd aaj ek hi bed pe so gayee aur fb pe chating karne lagi .tabhi swati ko RB ka yaad aata hai

Swati- oye RB se baat Karen .

Dipika- han han maja aayega

Swati- hi ………(msg send karti hain)

Swati aare replay hi nahini kar rah hai .

Dipika –aare to phir ek baar msg karna

Swati –hii

RB- hlw ,kon

Swati aare itni jaldi bhul gaye hamen

RB- sorry pehchana nahini aapko

Swati aare itni jaldi bhul gaye abhi toh pehchaan diya tha rinky

RB- kon rinky .maine to kisi rinky ko nahini jaanta sorry shayad aap mujhe koi aur samjha rahi haine bye .

Dipika- aare ye kyat ha

Swati pata nahini yaar maien bhi wahi soch rahi hin .pehel toh itna ache se baat kar rahtha abhi achanak kya hogaya phir isse

Dipika- kuch samjh nahini aara hai iska jitna jaan ne ki kosis karo utna hi dimag kharab hota hai .

Swati –ek kam kar call karke dekhte hai

Dipika- han lagana uss number par

swati- han rook par kya faida wanha bhi aisa hi bolega .

swati- hlw

uss dide- hi,

swati- hi RB bol rahe ho

uss side –RB ,,, aap kon .

swati- maine rinky pehchana

uss side-aare han rinky maine RB bol raha hun .chalo kame kam tumne call to kiya

swati- nahini us tumhara number check kar rahi t hi ki chal rah hai ki nahini .

uss side –acha tumne mujhe fb pe msg kiya tha kya

swati –kyun kya hua ,nahini kiya tha tumne hi tohh kah than a kit um fb pe active nahini rehte

uss side- han han sahi kiya mujhe call ya text hi kardiya karo acha waise kar kya rahi ho .

swati- suno na maine na abhi market jaa rahi hun baad maine call karti hun tunhe .

uss side- ok han wait karoonga tumhara call ka .bye

swati- ye kya hai yaar ya toh maine pagal hun yaw o ban rah hai .

dipika- pat nahini yaar iss ladke ki kabhi ache se baat karta hi kabhi baat hi nahini karta hai

tabhi barsha ka phone bajta hia .to swati pehle barsha ko bula ti hai phir khud hi pick kar leti hai .

swati- hlw

uss side hi barsha maine RB bol rah hun

swati- ohh hi RB kya hu barsha so rahi hai.

RB- ………………………

Swati- kya hua bolo bhi

RB- barsha se baat karna tha

Swati – par barsha to

RB- dipika ko phone dena

Swati dipika ko phone deti hai .

Dipika- han RB bolo ,oh actually barsha ka tabiyat kharap hai to wo so rahi ai kuch kaam tha kya

RB –aare han won a uske pass mere notes hai usse bat dena ki wok al aate hue lete aaye mujhe notes se kuch kaaam the .

Dipika- acha ok bata doongi .wo tum mujhe pehele bhi kehsakte the na thodi der pehele

RB- matlab .

Dipika-a bhi jab hamari bate ho rahi thi .

RB –kab

Dipika-a bhi thodi der pehel

RB – mere pass toh tumhara number bhi nahini hai .toh maine call kaise karoonga

Dipika- acha ye number tumhar hai na

RB- han

Dipika – acha toh 98******** ye nuber tumhar nahini hai kya

RB – na ye mera nahini hai ye number shayad vikcy ka hai uska doosra number abhi liya hai kuch din pehele

Dipika- acha RB bye baad maine baat karti hun

RB- bye

Dipika- swati jara wo number den ek baar jis number se call kiya tha tumne

Swati- ye le

Dipika uss number pe call lagati hai apne number se

Dipika- hlw

Uss isde – aare han dipika .aaaj toh kamal ho gaya aaj madam ko hamari yaad aakhir kar aa hi gayee.

Dipika- Vicky …ye tum ho

Vicky- maine matlab kya baat hai

Dipika kuch nahini aaj ke baad baat hi mat karna mujh se ok bye

Vicky aare baat suno kya hua (call disconnect)

Swati- kya hua

Dipika- wo Vicky tha

Swati -Vicky tha matlab .

Dipika- tere se pehele jo baat kar rah tha fb pe aur call pe o Vicky ha RB ka id wo use karrahe the isiliye jab RB ko tune msg kiya to wo as usual baat kiya par Vicky uss time flirt karne ki try karrah tha .

Swati- ach atabhi maine sochu ye achank do do alag tarha se response kyun kar rah hai .

Dipika- uss Vicky ke bache ko toh maine kal dekhti hun .

Swati kya uska bach bhi hogaya …

Dipika- kiska bacch ho gaya

Swati –abhi tumne hi kahan kal vicky ke bache ko dekH loongi.

Dipika- sun mera dimag na pehele se hi kharab hai toh aur mat kharab kar thik hai so jaa chup chap

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Sorry Bhai Log Ye Wala Update Thoda Chota Tha ,Kal Kosish Karoonga Thodi Badi Upadte Dene .
sajeeli update hai bhai
 

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Vicky ne phir RB aur sooraj ko poochta hai aur phir sab jane ko nikal padte haine .Ab wo sab teachers se najar bachake nikal jaate haine ..aur ghoomte ghoomte wo log pahad ke upar ke taraf chale jaate haine

Vicky-doston wo dekho upar shayd koi mandir hai chalo chal te haine uss mandir ke taraf .

Swati- chalo jaldi chalo wait kiske liye kar rahe ho phir .

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Phir sab pahad ke par ke taraf chal ke mandir maine ponhach jatte haine .yeh mandir shayad bohat purana hai aur logo se thoda door isiliye shayd iss mandir maine nahi log aate the nahi puja hota tha .sab mandir ke stairs maine jake beth gaye .aur ab sabko bhuk bhi lagne lagi thi toh wo apne sath laye snacks khane lag jate haine .lagbhag aadhe ghante baad wo log phir wanha se bhi nikal jate haine ab thoda mousam maine bhi badlav aane lag gaya tha aasman maine halka halka kali ghatayein chalni lagi thi .Tabhi barsha k phone bajne lagta hai barsha pick karti hai to unke warden ka call tha wo inn sab ko dhoond rahe the aur maousam ka haal bhi bigadne wala tha isiliye sab ko wapas camp ko bulaya tha ..even trecking wale group bhi aadhi raaste main ek surakhit jagha pe camp kar liya tha .

Barsha- doston chalo wapas chalte haine mousam bigadne wala hai .

Vikcy-aare abhi rook na thod aitna jaldi kya hi ham to pass maine hi hai na nikal jayenge thodi der maine .

Sooraj- han abhi jaake wanha pe bore hone se acha hi yanhi pe thoda ghoom ke jaate haine cholo iss pahadi se niche ke taraf jaate haine wanha se chale jayenge , ghoomna bhi ho jayega aur doobara pahadi ke upar se ghoom ke nahini jaana padega ..

Phir sabhi iss bat pe agree kar jate hain aur chalne lagjate haine .ab door ke aasmaan kali hone lag gayee thi .ye log jab niche aate haine toh unh eek nadi milti hai unhe nadi crosss karna tha nadi jada gehra nahini tha .tabhi lucy ko dur ik pool dikhta hai toh wo log ussi taraf badh jaate haine . ab ponhach ke sab thodi der rest kar lene ka faisla karte haine .kyun ki ab wo lagbhag apne camp ke pass aa gaye the aura b sirf 1 km ka aas pass rast tha camp side ponhachne ko .

Sooraj-oye Vicky yaar mousam bada soohan ban rah ahi kya bolta hia ek ek ho jaye .

Vikcy- aaabe marwayega kya tera toh pata nahini par mera lag jayega .

Sooraj -sun waise bhi aaj ka poora mood ka kabada ho gaya.

Vicky – han yaar .

Sooraj- sun tu yanha pe thoda sambhal lena maine aur lucy aage ghoom kea ate haine .

Vicky- aare matlab .

Sooraj-aare itna soohan maousam hai kuch toh banta hai iss mood maine ab tu daro nahin nikal rah hai toh yehi sirf rasta bach mere pass .

Vicky – han to rook thoda maine bhi dipika ko pooch loon .

Vicky dipika ko batata hai aur dipika swati ke kaan maine batati hai .

Swati- jaa simran jaa jee le apni jindegi …

Dipika- han han jad filmy mat ho

Swati maine kanha filmy ho rahi hun filmy to tu ho rahi hai dekh jaa toh rahi hai par mujhe abhi moushi nahini banna hai thik hai toh dhyan rakhna .

Dipika- han thik hai ..ek ek minute kya boli tune ..aaj to tu gayee.

Swati – wo madam job hi karna hai abhi filaah apne sir ke liye bacha ke rakho .thik hai .

Phir wo charo uthke apne plan ke according ghoomne chal jate haine aur baki ke log wanhi nadi kinare beth jaate haine ..

RB nadi aur aasman ke photo lene lag jata hia jo ki ab mast dikh rah ethe aur swati aur barsha beth ke baaten karne lag jaate haine . lag bhag aadha ghanta hone ko aaye par abhi tak un logo ka pata nahini tha b thoda thoda bunda bandi bhi suru ho gayee thi aur door pahadi ke side jor se barish bhi ho raha tha ..to chances the ki jaldi yanhape bhi jor barsh hone lag jaye .yeh log jis taraf the wo to pur khula area tha aur jungle area tha par nadi uss taraf thoda ghane ped the jinke niche khade rah sakta tha barish maine toh yeh log pool cross karke uss taraf chale jaate haine .barsha ke pass unke teacher ke baar baar phone call aaraha tha aur vicky aur sooraj logon ka phone lag nahini rah tha .

Barsha- aare ye toh badi muskil kaam ho gaya kya Karen ab .lagta he jaldi yanha bhi jor daar barish hone lagegi …

RB –tu rook yanhi pe maine unhe bula ke lata hun .

Barsha- nahini tere phone pe network anhini hai na hi swati ke phone maine tum yanhi ruko maine jaake unhe dhoondti hoon aur caal karne ke kosisi karti hun …

RB- par .mainebhi tere sath chalti hun .

Barha- nahini tu yanah pe rook swati akeli kaisi khadi rahegi yanha pe .

Swati – to phir ham sab chalet haine .

Barsha- nahini aise to agar wo log aagaye to unhe pata nahini chalega ki ham unhe dhoondne andar gaye haine ..

RB – acha thik hai jaldi jaa.

Barsha unhe dhoonde anadr chali jaati hai aur RB aur swati wanhi pe akade rehte haine ab barish bhi badhne lag agyee thi ab barsha keg aye hue bhi time hogay tha par wo bhi abhi nahini aa rahithi .

Swati- mere khayal se hamine ek baar jaake dekhna chaiye .

RB- hmm

Swati kya hua

RB –par wo log aayenge to .

Swati –aare ab kitne time yanha wait karein .

Phir wo dono unhe dhoondne anadr chale jate haine …kafi anadr ke taraf dhhondne ke baad bhi unhe koi nahini milta ab unke phon epe network bhi nahini tha ki wo ab ksikio call kar askein ab sab alag alag ho gaye the …kafi der dhoondne ke baad barsha ko wo log mil jaate haine ab barish bhi tej ho gayee thi to wo log bhag ke pool ke taraf jane lag jaate haien .par pool ke pass ake wo log dekhte haine ki wanha pe koi nahini tha .to yeh log sochte hain ki shayad RB aur swati camp ke taraf nikal gaye hain toh ye log bhi base camp ke taraf bhag ke nikal jaate haine .. but iss taraf RB aur swati abhi bhi unhe dhoond rahe the .barish bhiab kafi had tak badh chukka tha .jab barsha & group RB aur swati ko camp maine bhi nahini paate haine to wo loag unka phone try karte hain jo ke unreachable tha.to barsha ,dipika aur Vicky wapas usi road pe jate hain ki shayad wo log unhe mijaye .barish bhi ab kafi had tak badh chuki thi .reh reh ke jor se bijli bhi maarne lagi thi .jab tak wo load uss pool ke pass ponhachte hain toh unke hosh udd jata hai .nadi ka pani ab isss had tak badh chukka tha ki ab janha pe pool tha wanha pe ab sirf pani ka chadar bicha hua tha .pahad ke upri hisshe maine jor barish se pani ke chote chote talab apne bandh tod nikal aaye the aur wo sara pani isi nadi ke dhara ke share badh rahe the . Abhi yeh log wanhi pe nirash hoke khade reh jate haine .basrha continue RB aur swati ke phone dial kar rahi thi ek to pahadi ilaka upar se aise mousam ke karan network hi nahini lag rah tha .
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Sorry Bhai Log Ye Wala Update Thoda Chota Hai .Ek Family Function Ke Chalte Likh Nahin Paya .Agar ho Paya Toh Kal Subha Aur Ek Update De doonga Chota Sa Ya Phir Kal Raat Waale Update Main Words Limit Badha Dunga .
laajwaab update hai bhai
 

Nevil singh

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jab tak wo load uss pool ke pass ponhachte hain toh unke hosh udd jata hai .nadi ka pani ab isss had tak badh chukka tha ki ab janha pe pool tha wanha pe ab sirf pani ka chadar bicha hua tha .pahad ke upri hisshe maine jor barish se pani ke chote chote talab apne bandh tod nikal aaye the aur wo sara pani isi nadi ke dhara ke share badh rahe the . Abhi yeh log wanhi pe nirash hoke khade reh jate haine .basrha continue RB aur swati ke phone dial kar rahi thi ek to pahadi ilaka upar se aise mousam ke karan network hi nahini lag rah tha .

Ab aage
kafi kosish ke baad akhir kaar RB ka phone lag jaata hai .

Barsha-hlw RB kanha pe ho yaar tum log .

RB- hlw barsah aawaz nahini aa rahi hai kanha ho tum log hum kab se tumhe dhoond rah ehaine .

Barsha- aare meri baat sun pehle tum kanha pe ho .

RB- aare hum jungle ke side aaye the tumhe dhoondne ab barish jada ho raha hi toh ek ped ke niche khade haine .

Barsha- aare pagal tum uss taraf kyun gaye maine bola tha na tumhe ki wanhi kahde rehna .

RB- tum loga nikal gaye kya ruko hum abhi ponhachte haine .

Barsha- aare nadi main badh aaye hui hai aur pura pool hi pani ke andar hai tum log wanhi pe ruk jao hum teacher ko bulate hiane shayad wo kuch doosra raste se tumhe wanha se laa sake aur pani ab bhi badh rah hai tum ho ske to upar chale jao shayd wo jagha bhi pani maine doob jaye ,,,hlw hlw RB hlw

Barsha – lagta hai hone cut gaya ab kya karein chalo camp maine jaate haine .

Vikcy-aare pani pool pe itna nahini hai ek baar kosish karte haine jaake shayad wo log aasake .

Dipika- paglon jaise baat mat kar pani ki speed dekh rah ahi na ek minute bhi khada nahini ho sakta tu wanha pe agar wo log ab aabhi jaye to bhi cross nahini kar sakte humain wapas jaake sir ko inform karna chahiye .

Phir wo loag wapas chale jate h aine aur camp maine jaake inform karte haine .pure camp maine hulchal mach jati hai .teacher toh pehel innlogon ko bohat data ti hai .aur RB aur swati ko lane ke liye nikalte haine tabhi local guide bolta hai koi faida nahini sir wanha tak kisi bhi raste se jaa nahini sakte jab tak barish nahini ruk jaaati aur pani thoda rook jaat hai .pahadi ke upar se ek rast hai par jab tak pani kam nahini ho jaat hai hum kuch nahini kar sakte .wo jungle bhi shayd doob jayega agar wo pahad ke upar chale gaye to shayd panikam hone pe ham unhe wanha se bacha skate haine .

Barsha- sir maine bhi unhe yehi bol diya tha .

Teacher- tum log to chup hi raho yanha se wapas jaate hi tum logon se baat karta hun .abhi sare bache camp maine chalo .

Wanhi doosre aur barsha ka phone kat jaane ke baad RB sochat hai ki ab toh yanha reh ke koi faida nahini hai upar hi jana padega .. RB aur swati ek bade se ped ke niche khade the par phir bhi wo log aadhe gilet oh ho hi chuke the .kyun ki jungle Ghana tha to barish itna nahini ho rah tha par RB ko tensionthi badh ki jo ki kabhi bhi aa sakti thi .

RB- barsah ne bola hai ki wo loag chale gaye haine aur wapas jaane wala pool bhi doob gaya hai badh ke pani se .

Swati- to ab hum kya kare.

RB- *****

Swati- kuch to bolo

RB-haime upar pahad ke taraf jaana hoga yanha badh ka pani bhar sakta hai .

Swati- han to chalo .

Phir wo dono pahad ke upar ke raste maine badhne lagte haine .jab tak jungle tha tab tak to wo barish se bach hue the par jab jungle khatam hogaya tab to pahad pura khali tha aur upar ye log jaroor pura bhig jayenge agar koi jagha nahini mili barish se bachne ke liye .tabhi swati ko wo mandir yaad aata hai .

Swati- RB uss mandir ke tarf chalo .

Dono uss mandir ke raste bhagne lagjate haine barish se bachne ke liye wo log apna bag sar pe rakh dete heine. 8-10m inute bhagne ke baad wo loag uss pahadi mandir ke pass ponhach jaate haine .mandir ke jad atarhh hisse to khule the par mandir ke side ke tarf ek chota room type the jisk gate to mandir ke anadar wale room ka tha par uske ek side ka dibar toota hua tha yeh log usike anadr jake ruk jate haine .

Swati- acha hua bach gaye .

Swati apne kapde ko dekhti hai jo ki jada taRBhig chuke the .ab iss sardi maine bhige kapde se shayad tabiyat aur bhi kharab hone lag jaati .dono chup chap bethe hue the koi kisi se baat hi nahinikarrah tha .

Swati – RB yanah pet oh saamne ke taraf se bohat hi jada hawa aaraha hai iss shardi se toh halat aur bhi bura ho jayega

RB kuch nahini bolta hai bus chup chap beth ke samne ke tarf dekhne lagta hai .

Swati-RB plz ek baat bolun maine jaanti hun tum mujhse nafrat karte ho kyun ye bhi pata nahini par jab tak hum yanha pe phase hue haine atleast mujhs e baten toh kar hi sakte ho na tum

RB- nahini aisa kuch nahini hai maine tumse nafrat nahini karta .ok thik hai ab jab hum yanha pe phase hue haine to atleast baten toh karni padegi .

Swati- thanks .mujhe ye toh pata nahini ki tum mujhse itna nafrat kyun karte ho par atlest jab tak yanha pe haine hum as a dost to h baat kar hi sakte hain.

RB- dekho hum batein kar sakte hain par a as a dost type wala kuch seen nahini hogi .

Swati- ok (pata nahini kaisa ladka hai karela khake paida hua hai shayad )

Swati- RB iss samne wala dawaje ka kya karein .

RB- ab kar bhi kya saktein hai aise hi bethna hoga ..

Swati –RB tum thoda bahar jaoge maine apne gile kapde change karloon mere bag maien extra kapde haine

RB- thik hai .

Phir RB bahar ke taraf chala jata hai aur swati apni bag se apne dress nikal ke pehn leti hai .dress pehne ne ke baad wo RB ko andar bulati hai ..ab RB phir se bahar barish maine gaya tha to uske dress aur jar agile ho gaye the par ab barish thoda kam hone lag gaya tha isiliye thoda rahat thi.

Swati- tumhare pass kapde haine bagmaine ye kapde change karlo gile kapde se tabiyat kharab hojayegi .

RB- meri tabiyat kuch nahini hogi tum apna dekh lo .

Swati- tumkya ek baar bhi normal insano jaise baat nahini kar sakte aisa kya bigada hai mene tumhara .

RB- kuch nahin bas aise h I maine ladkyon se aise hi baat karta hun .

Swati ye patti na kisi aur ko pehnana tum dipika se to ache se baat karte ho lucy se bhi aur barsha se tumhara gehri dosti hai par sirf mere sath hi aisa kyun behavee karte ho .

RB- aisa kuch nahini hai kya hum iss topic ko yanhi pe khatam kar sakte haine .

Swati- ok par ek baar apne bag maine dekh lo kuch kapde ho to

RB- han shayd kuch kapde ho maine v bhi rakh hua tha .

RB apna bag check karne lagta hai to shock ho jaat hai kyun ki ye uska bag nahini tha ye to vikcy ke bagtha uske bag aur Vicky ke bag same the aur pata nahini kab switch ho gaye the .

Swati- kya hua

RB- aare ye toh Vicky ka bag hai mere bag shayad vikcy ke pass reh gaya hai .aur mere kapde bhi ussi maine the par chalo ismaine khana ur pani toh hai.

Bag maine kuch chips aur namkeeen ke packet (jo ki Vicky nE chakne ke liye layatha daru ke sath khane ko )pade hue the aur pani ke do bottle the .

Swati- chalo kamse khane pine ka toh tension khatam hua .
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sanoli update hai bhai
 
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