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Nice update bro waiting for your next update bro....
Hame bahut lajwab laga bhai aise hi likhate raho
Kamal ka flashback diye ho bhai
Bahut hi behtreen update hai..........
Agala update ka intejar rahega....
ThanksBahot behtareen zaberdast
Shaandaar update bhai
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Thanks broNice update bro waiting for your next update bro....
Ok bhaiAgala अपडेट 16 तारीख के बाद आएगा।
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast to prince ko Shiva samajh kr apne sath le liya or us Kallu ne Shiva ko pakad liya or ab use marne vale hai...Update no 12the story So Far:-
Aurat--dekho ji…...mai kuchh nahi janti mai sirf itana jaanti hu ki usane mera beta mujhse china………..dant pisate hue……….. mai uska beta usage chhin lungi…..bas…...mujhe khun ke badale khun aur bete ke badale beta chahiye….aur kuchh nahi……..aur rahi beta paida karne ka to is saari sampati jo hai use sambhalne ke liye koi to chahiye……..aur dono jeth me se to ek aaj nirvansh ho jayega to unki bhi dhan daulat ko sambhalne ke kiye koi to chahiye……..
Vah aadami kuchh nahi bolta hai….
Aurat- aur aap ne hse vada kiya tha ki mai jo bhi karungi aap bina koi saval puchhe karenge…….
Aadmi--rukhepan se halanki vah bhi apane bete ke liye dukhi tha par vah yah nahi karna chahta lekin vah apne patni se bahut pyar karta tha isliye vah uska sath de raha tha…….
Dono hidimba van pahuch gaye the…..aur car ko jangal ke anadar leliy the…………………
Abb aage:-
flashback jari rahega :-
Car ek bade se ped ke pass le jakar rok deta hai……..aur kisi ka intejar karne lagte hai…….
Tabhi bachhe ko hosh aa jata hai aur dekhata hai ki vo to gadi me hai phir bahar ki taraf dekhata hai to uske chacha chachi bahar hi hai unhe vah ladka aavaj hi dene wala hota hai ki use kuchh ghante pahle ki hui ghatanaye yaad aajati hai ki kaise uske chacha ne use mara gadi ke andar baithNe ke liye aur chachai baat kar rahi thi use marane ke liye vah ladka dar gaya aur sochne laga halanki vah sochane layak tha to nahi parantu har kisi ke sochane ki kshamta to hoti hi hai vah ladka bhi apne jitana dimag tha utna sochne laga ki….. abb kya kiya jaye usane dekha ki vo log gadi ke dusari side the aur dusri saide koi nahi tha…….us ne check kiya to get lock nahi tha vah chupake se get kholkar dhire se bahar nikal gya aur dusari side ki or bhagane laga…….vah jitana tej Daud sakta tha utana tej Daud raha tha tabhi chach ki najar mere taraf chali gayi……..
Chachi- ************ pakdo use vah kamina bhag raha hai…….hamne socha tha ki yah behosh hai lekin yah to badi chalak nikala………...jaldi se pakdo bhagane na paye……………
Dono log ladake ko pakadane ke liye us or bhagane lage aur ladka bhi jangal ki or teji se bhagane laga……………
Vah bhagate bhagate ualnhe chakama dete dete vah pahuch gya jaha suresh and family ja rahi thi mandir ki taraf……
Sudha - suresh yahi kuchh der aaram bhi kar lete hai aur khana bh kha lete hai ……
Suresh- kuch nahi bolata hai vahi sadak ke kinare ve log apna sara saman rakha kar shiva ko vahi litakar kuchh duri par jakar aapna tent lagane lagte hai ………....
VaH ladaka vaha pahuch jata hai aur jakar Sweety ke pass chala jata hai jo pass hi me baithi hui khel rahi th aur kuchh hi duri par thi didi mujhe bacha lo vo log mujhe maar denge Sweety abhi kuchh bolane hi vali hoti hai ki tabhi use apaniammi ki chikh sunai deta hai………….
Sudha- nahi ………..shiva……
Aur teji se Us or bhagati hai jis or ek mota gande se dikhane vala aadami shiva ko god me liiye hue teji se Daud raha tha halanki suresh aur Sweety ko us ladke ka chehara dikhayi nahi de raha tha….
Vah Gunda teji se us Shiva ko lekar bhagata hai………
Yaha suresh aur Sweety nasamajh ho kar dekhe ja rahe the………..ki sudha ma ko kya ho gaya vah itani teji se vs aadami ke pichhe kyo bhag rahi hai………………..
Suresh- sudha are kya hua tum us aadami ke pichhe kyo ja rahi ho……….
Sudha- suresh jaldi pakdiye is aadami ko ye shiva ko lekar bhag raha hai…………
Suresh- lekin shiva to yaha hai Sweety ke paas ……….
Sudha Sweety ki or dekhati hai to uska demag hi hill jata hai……..
Sudha- suresh hamara shiva yaha hai to us aadmi ne kisi ko pakad kar le gaya…………
Suresh- tum kahi pagal to nahi ho gayi ho jab shiva hamare pass hai to vah kaise shiva ko le ha sakta hai…………..
(Huaa ye tha ki jab vah ladka Sweety ke pass gaya tabhi vaha us ladke ko dundhate hue vah aadami vaha aa gya aur uski najar shiva par padi to usne use vaha se utha liya kyoki shiva aur us ladke ka chehara ek jaisa tha)
Sudh-nahi suresh aap ne dekha ki nahi dekha lekin maine dekha vah ladka hu b hu shiva ki tarah hi tha………….
Sweety- kya baat karti ho mammi vah mera betu jaisa tha leki aisa kaise ho sakta hai…...mera betu to yaha hai mere pass…………….
Ladka kuchh nahi bolata hai darr ke mare vah chupchap se sabko dekhata hai...
Sudh- hame chalkar dekhana chahiye suresh baat kya hai………….
Tino log usi disha me chal dete hai jis disha me vah aadami ladke ko le gaya tha……...jald hi be log vah pahuch jaye hai aur ek ped se chhipakar dekhane lage yaha un sabki bate sunai de rahi thi…………….
Gounda- malik le aaya yah mandir ki tarf bhag raha tha………
Aadami- vaah kallu vah ye tumane bahut achha kiya vaise yah bhagata to bhi marta bhukhe lekin ham koi risk nahi lena chahte the……..
Aurat- kallu tumane jo kaam kiya hai uska inaam tumhe mil jayega……..aab iska sar dhad se alag kar do aur iske sar ko ek gift me pack karke mere jeth Thakur ************* singh ko bhet savrup de do…………………
Aadmi nahi ----------- tum ye kya karna chahti ho bhaisahab ko pata chala ki unke bete ka katl huaa hai to vah iska pata lagwaywnge aur usme kahi pata chal gya to…………
Aurat- ha ye maine socha hi nahi……….. kallu ise tum kato aur iske deh ke har ang ko dur dur tak le jakar gad do…………
Kallu- ji malkin…….jaisa aap kahe………
Aur jaise hi kallu bachhe ke gardan par talwar chalane ko hota hai ki ladaka boll padata hai chachi ma aap aisa kyo kar rahi ho maine aapka kya bigada hai aapko to mai apana ma hi manta hu…………
Aurat ye sun kar uske aakho me aashu aa jate hai lekin vah kuchh kar nahi pa rahi thi aisa lag raha tha ki koi usase yah sab karwa raha hai……..
Aurat- chilla kar kallu jaldi kar……..
Yaha ped ke piche (Sare log dhire dhire baat karte hai)
sweety- papa hame kuchh karna chahiye betu jaisa dikhane wala ladake ko ve log maar denge………..
Sudha-ha suresh jaldi se police ko phone kariye……………..
Suresh apna mobile nikalta hai……..
Suresh- oh….no….
Sudha- kya huaa…….
Suresh- phone me network hi nahi hai dekho tumhare me hai kaya ……………
Sudha apani mobile chek karti hai….nahi mere me bhi nahi hai……….
Suresh- abb kya kare ye log to nirdayi ulta se is bachhe maar denge……….abb to lagta hai ki hame hi aage aana padega…….tum log yahi chhipe rahna………lo shiva ko tum pakado
Abhi suresh yah baat kahakar aage bhadhane hi wala hota hai ki tabhi koi usaka haath pakad leta hai…………….
Are Ye to ek khula rahasya Ho gya (open secret ) sbkuchh bta kr bhi kuchh pta na chla... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjastUpdate no. 12 (B)
Kahani aab tak:-
Suresh- phone me network hi nahi hai dekho tumhare me hai kaya ……………
Sudha apani mobile chek karti hai….nahi mere me bhi nahi hai……….
Suresh- abb kya kare ye log to nirdayi ulta se is bachhe maar denge……….abb to lagta hai ki hame hi aage aana padega…….tum log yahi chhipe rahna………lo shiva ko tum pakado
Abhi suresh yah baat kahakar aage bhadhane hi wala hota hai ki tabhi koi usaka haath pakad leta hai…………….
Abb aage:-
Ve log dar jate hai ki yah kaun hai pichhe mudkar dekhate hai to hath pakadne wala eak sadhu tha…………
Sadhu- beta tum unko nahi rok sakte ho…………
Suresh-baba ye aap kya kah rahe hai………..
Sadhu-mai sahi kah raha hu suresh…Yahi vidhi ka vidhan hai…….
Suresh apna naam sunakr chauk jata hai phir apane aap ko sambhalte hue puchata hai…………
Aap mera naam kaise jante hai…….
Sadhu-jaise ye janta hu ki vah ladaka jise tum bachane wale ho aaj uske sharir ka aant aa gay hai……..
Suresh- ye aap kya kah rahe hai ………...to kya ham use yu hi marne de……….
Sadhu- beta koi fayada nahi hai vaha jakar kyoki us ladke ka aant aa gay hai………..
Sudha- baba phir bhi ham use aise hi nahi marne de sakte hai apna prayash karenge use bachane ke liye……...ham use yu hi marne nahi de sakte hai………….
Sadhu-- putri sudha tum nishchint raho vah ladke ki mrityu nahi hogi balki uski keval sharir nast hoga………….
Suresh- ham kuchh samjhe nahi baba…….
Sadhu-- pahle yaha se chalo………..mai sab kuchh batata hu…….
Abhi ye log bate hi kar rahe the ki kalu ne us ladke ka sar dhad se aalag kar deta hai lekin sudha, suresh, Sweety ki najar idhar nahi padati hai unki najri aur kaano ko us sadhu ne bandh diya tha apni shaktiyo davara……..
Jab ladke marta hai to uske sharir se ek jayoti nikalti hai jo vastav me isaki aatma hoti hai……..
Lekin vah jyoti kewal aadhi hi thi aisa lag raha tha ki uaski aadhi hi aatma bahar nikali hai aadhi nahi……..vah jyoti jaha Vah ladka tha us or chal deta hai……ladka sweety ka hath pakda huaa tha aur vah jivanjyoti us ladke me jakar sama jaati hai aur us ladke apani sari batte bhul jaata hai aur yaad rahata hai to keval shiva ki yade vah shiva ban jata hai………
Sudha- baat kya hai baba…...aap ne us bache ko marne kyo diya………..
Sadhu-- putri kaun sa bacha kaun mara hai……...mujhe to nahi malum kisko maine marne diya hai……..mai to kisi ko aadha se purn bana raha hu……..
Suresh- ham kuchh samjhe nahi baba….kripya vistar se bataiye……….
Ve log kab mandir pahuch gaye unhe pata hi nahi chala ve log mandir me jakar ek or baith jate hai………..
Sadhu-- ye ek rahasya hai suresh………kya .ye aapki putri hai ………..
Sudha- ha baba iski naam Sweety hai…...aur ek aur hai jisaka naam Minal hai vah abhi 2 varsh ki hai…...use ham yaha nahi laye hai……..vah apane buaa ke pass hai……..
Sadhu-- putri Sweety kaya tum aur tumhara betu mandir nahi ghumenge jao mandir ghum aao………..
Ladaka jisame shiva ki atma samane ke baad use keval shiva dvara abhi tak ka jiye jindagi hi yaad thi vah apana saara past bhul gya tha to aab se use shiva hi likhunga kyoki vah shiva hi hai
Shiva- ha didi chalo na mai bhi ghumana chahta hu.
Sweety apani ma papa ki or dekhati hai……..
Suresh samjh jata hai ki jarur koi baat hai…...ja beta apane bhai ko lekar uske sath kelo……
Sudha- Sweety yahi vaha pass me jo chabutara hai usi par jaoo bhai ko lekar………..
Sweety chali jati hai……
Sadhu-- suresh aur sudha tum jante hi ho ki tumhare putr ki aayu jayada vakt ki nahi tha……….vah alpayu tha……..
Sudha aur suresh ko vah baat yad aane lagata hai jab shiva ka janm huaa tha…….ghar ke pandit ne kaha tha ki aapke bete ki aatma aadhi hai……...is karan vah alpayu hoga……..apane soch se bahar nikalte hue…..
Suresh- ji baba hame yad hai…...aur humne unse upay bhi pucha tha lekin unhone kaha tha ki upay unhe nahi pata hai…….
Sadhu-- to putr tumhare putr aab chiranjivi ho gaya hai us ladake ko marne se aur aab aane wale samay me badh rahe papo ka naas karne ke liye ek masiha ka janm ho gaya hai aaj…….
Sudha- ham kuchh samjhe nhi baba…..mashiha …..aur hamre bete ka umr kaise badh gaya hai……
Sadhu--putri tumhare putr ke jivan me teen mrtu yog hai jo tala nahi ja sakta hai vastav me yah yog iske pichhle janm ki anjane me kiye hue apradh ki saza hai………..
Suresh-baba mrtu dand to bhayanak apradh ke liye diya jata hai leki shiva ne kaun sa apradh kiya tha…...ye rahasya kya hai baba …….. hamara putra kaun hai jo is janam me hamara beta bankar janm hua hai……….
Sadhu-- putr tumhare putr ek mahan aatma hai yah mahadev ke rakt se bana huaa hai yani mahadev ke ansh hai yah balak lekin ek dust ke vajah se isame rakshasi ansh bhi pravesh kar gay…….jisase yah devil king ban gay…
….dekha jay to yah ghatan brhma ji ke vardan ko pura karne ke liye huaa hai kyoki vah devil ne vardan hi manga tha ki mahadev ke ansh ho lekin sath hi uska ansh bhi ho usame jisaka use pata bhi na ho…….isi vardan ke karan ise devil king banaya gaya …..
.lekin yah baat us devil aur uske guru shukracharya ko pata chal gaya aur unhone apne devil power davara………...devil king me jo achhaiya thi unhe deil king ke agyanta davara nast kara diya jisase usne ek bhut hi bhayanak apradh kiya jisse use dandit kiya gaya…
….halanki devil king ka janm papo ka naash karne ke liye huaa tha to uski agyanta ko kshama karte hue uska phir se janam hua lekin jab devil king ki aatma ko dharti par bheja gaya to vah do bhago me pahucha jo ek tumhare garbh me gya aur ek Thakur patni ke garbh me jisase dono ki aayu alpayu ho gayi………jo aab …………..
Sudha- ka dil teji se dhadak rahath use lagne laga ki vah ladka usaka shiva hi tha………
Sudha- bechaini se aab kya baba……
Sadhu-- beta mai pahle ye batana chahta hu ki tumhare bete ki maut ho gayi hai aur jo yah larka hai yah vastav me Thakur ladka aur abb tumharabhi putr hogaya hai…………
Sudha- to ye baat sunte hi dhadam se vahi par gir jati hai suresh jadi se apane goad me le leta ha………...uski bhi aankho me aashu aa gaye the………
Sadhu apane kamndal se jal nikal kar sudha ke chehare par marate hai aur sudha hosh me aa jati hai aur hosh me aane ke baad rone lagti hai ………
Sadhu-- putri apane aap ko sambhalo tumhara putr marke bhi jinda hai……..
Sudha- kaisi ma hi mai apne bete ko pahchan nahi payi…..aur to aur uske kapade se bhi nahi pahchan payi ……….. hay mera shiva …….mujhe maf karde mere bete mai tujhe pahchan hi nahi payi aur tujhe marta hua vaha chod aayi……..
Sadhu--putri tumhara shiva jinda hai………
Sudha- apne aansu puchte hue…...jida hai phir vah kya tha kya vah kishi prakar ka maya jaal tha……..
Sadhu-- nahi na hi vah aasty hai aur na ye asaty hai ki tumhara beta jinda hai…….
Suresh- ham kuchh samjhe nahi baba…….
Sadhu-- tumhare bete ke mrtyu hote hi jo aadhi atma thi aab pura ho gayi hai…...kyoki yah balak tumhara bhi putra hai aur us Thakur ka bhi kyoki devil ke aadhe bhag ka janm Thakur patni ke garbh se bhi hauu taha…aur shiva ki aadhi aatma aab is balak me sama kar pura ho gayi hai…..
Use sab yad hai tum uski maa ho suresh uske pita hai ya you kahu ki use shiva jo janta hai vah sab yaad hai…….
Sudha-us Thakur ladke ki yade…….
Sadhu-beti uski yade kuch samay ke liye bandh gayi hai…...jo samay aane par hi use yaad aayegi ……….
Suresh-to baba yaad aate hi kya shiva hame bhul jayega…….
Sadhu-- maine tumhe yah bataya tha ki yah tumhara aur Thakur dono ke putr hai…….to jab iski shaktiya jagrit hogi tab ise sab yaad aa jayega…….aur sudha ye tumhe kabhi nahi chhodega…………
Sudh-lekin baba aapne yah nahi bataya ki teen mrityu yog kyo banaya gaya……..
Sadhu- beti halanki devil king ko dandit kiya gaya tha aur usi dand ko mrtyu yog banakar iske punr jivan me diya gaya hai ki agar yah pap hi karta hai to ise mrityu yog lagega anytha yah bach jayega…….
Sadhu-- yah yog jab yah 19 saal ka huaa hoga tab jab tak yah 20 saal ka nahi ho jata tab tak yah yog ispar kabhi bhi lag sakta hai…….agar yah bachh gya to iske 21 janmdin ke samy aur phir bach gaya to 25ve janmdin par lagega aur isase bach gya to iske upar se yah yog khatm ho jayega……....
Sudha- baba kya hame aap puri kahani vistar se batayenge
Sadhu kuchh der sochata hai phir bolta hai…..
putri yah khani hai treta yug ki ********************************************************************************yah kahani 3 se 4 update ki hai jo aane wale samy me ek aaise raj ka pardafas karega jisase is kahani ka villen juda huaa hai aur the devil king bana kaise tha kyo aur kaise janm huaa devil king ka sab pata chalega bas kuchh update intejar karne ke baad aur is
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Phir aaj se karib kai hajar purv us devil aur tantrik ki tapasya puri hui aur unka ant karne ke liye janm hua devil king ka aur phir ************************************************************************************************************
Bas yahi kahni hai devil ke janm, aur unke kary, aur dand ka.
Sudha- to kya us janm me bhi devil king ki aatama ka janm do rupo me hua th…..
Sadhu-- ha baat ye hai ki tantrik ne vardan me manga tha ki ******************tabhi uski mrityu hogi…...isliye…….
Saare log chupp ho jate hai is shanti ko bhang karne ke liye sadhu baba phir bolte hai…..
Suresh aur sudha ek saty mai tumhe batana chahunga ki devil ki sari patniyo ka bhi janam hua hai……….
Suresh- ve log kaun hai baba kya mai janta hu unhe ………
Sadhu-- beta devil ki 11 mukhya raniyo mese 4 raniyo ka janam tumhare hi ghar me huaa hai ve hai……..Mamata, Sweety, Minal, aur sonal………
Sudha aur suresh ye naam sunakr chook jate hai kya………..
Sadhu-- ha ye satya hai ki tumhare ghar ki sari ladkiya devil king ki patniya hai aur tumhari bhan ke garbh se bhi janm lene wali Kanika, Aarohi, Amrita, moni, bhi devil ki mukhya raniya hai…….
Suresh-ye to 8 hi hue hai baba aur 3 mukhya raniya aur inki Surbhi jo raniya hai vah sabhi kaun hai……..
Sadhu-- sab samya aayega to tumhe pata chal jayega beta itana adhir na ho………..
Sudha- baba leki ye sari to shiva ki bahane hai aur yah samaj………..
Sadhu--beta kya jab sristi bani to bata sakte ho Manu ki shadi jisase hui vah bhi brahma ji ki purti thi to dono bhai bhan hue ki nahi tab tum ye batao ki kya yah galat hai aur rahi baat is jamane ki baat to sab samay par chod do……..
Aur ek baat beta tumhare ghar ki sari devil ki raniyo ka batani ka mera yah karan tha ki tumhe apne sari ladakiyo ki mang me jab shiva ka jab 7va janam din aayega tab iske naam ka sindoor shiva ke hatho bharwana hoga hoga nahi to tumhari khandan ka samul vinash ho jayega…………..
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