Erotica The Girl Next Door (Completed)

[Indian Princess]

Superb story it was good, nice revenge story, but felt that it was unfair on aditi.
hoping to read more of your stories in future.

Thank you for your reply

Yes it was unfair for both Aditi and Pankhudi, but revenge is never fair These men hurt a sweet girl whom Meera's loved, so she didn't hesitate to hurt the people they loved.

I'm starting another thread in a few days, I hope you will support me.

 

[cnuhyd]

uff.....when i started reading, i wax excited reading a bdsm story.

but this is not.... a horror/suspense/thriller story (bdsm involves consent, if not, it is just rape/torture)

and your english is so excellent that there are many new words i had to search internet for their meanings.

 

[Indian Princess]

uff.....when i started reading, i wax excited reading a bdsm story.

but this is not.... a horror/suspense/thriller story (bdsm involves consent, if not, it is just rape/torture)

and your english is so excellent that there are many new words i had to search internet for their meanings.

I am glad you took time to read this story. Thank you for your comment and appreciation.

Yes some scenes in the story may be disappointing to some readers, but that's what gives the story its raw unjust flavor.

In real life, I respect consent. But my fantasies are rather twisted. My personal favourite is that scene between Reyansh and Naina, although it was rape, it was highly arousing for me. Each to their own I guess.

 

[cnuhyd]

story is sooo strong

i read it yesterday but still some parts coming to my mind, so it created an impact in my brain, not every story does that.

kudos.

 

[manikmittalme07]

Hi Princess,

I started reading your previous story first. I wanted to start this also then I realized that I should read this after completion of the first one. I want to tell you something. I have read BDMS very first time in my life. You would have understood what kind of nature I have after reading my story. I don't like dark things. But I read your stories, you know why? Your writing skills are marvelous. You bind your stories with your stories. You intoxicate a person with the spell of your words. I am not intelligent like you, so could write only that your have failed old and bigger writers. I will like to read your all stories and for the wish of this fan, please write a romantic story also, without forcing anyone to love. Because if you write a love story, it will going to become best seller.

 

[Indian Princess]

story is sooo strong

i read it yesterday but still some parts coming to my mind, so it created an impact in my brain, not every story does that.

kudos.

Thanks for your comment

Yes the story had a powerful impact on me too and I couldn't sleep several nights.

 

[Indian Princess]

Hi Princess,

I started reading your previous story first. I wanted to start this also then I realized that I should read this after completion of the first one. I want to tell you something. I have read BDMS very first time in my life. You would have understood what kind of nature I have after reading my story. I don't like dark things. But I read your stories, you know why? Your writing skills are marvelous. You bind your stories with your stories. You intoxicate a person with the spell of your words. I am not intelligent like you, so could write only that your have failed old and bigger writers. I will like to read your all stories and for the wish of this fan, please write a romantic story also, without forcing anyone to love. Because if you write a love story, it will going to become best seller.

Thanks a lot for your comment.

What truly turns me on is a power play, to submit to a powerful man. That's why my inclination towards BDSM and forced sex.

But I am a romantic person at heart and I like writing love stories too. I think I'll write a short love story for you.

 

[manikmittalme07]

Thanks a lot for your comment.

What truly turns me on is a power play, to submit to a powerful man. That's why my inclination towards BDSM and forced sex.

But I am a romantic person at heart and I like writing love stories too. I think I'll write a short love story for you.

thank you so much princess. I forgot to tell you in previous comment that I slept at 12.30 am after reading a part of this story. that raping part. I became hyper. The AC wasnt working properly. I threw away the remote of AC in anger. My mom and my cousins (spending their holidays in my house) surprised with my behavior. because I never get hyper. it is not part of my nature. It only happened after reading the story. thats why I have been reading it during the day today.

 

[Indian Princess]

thank you so much princess. I forgot to tell you in previous comment that I slept at 12.30 am after reading a part of this story. that raping part. I became hyper. The AC wasnt working properly. I threw away the remote of AC in anger. My mom and my cousins (spending their holidays in my house) surprised with my behavior. because I never get hyper. it is not part of my nature. It only happened after reading the story. thats why I have been reading it during the day today.

Oh! I hope that didn't cause you too much problem.

 

[manikmittalme07]

Oh! I hope that didn't cause you too much problem.

I am very cool minded and like light things. this is very heavy stuff but the way it has been written is so good that i can't stop reading it.