Erotica The Girl Next Door (Completed)

[manikmittalme07]

im crying princess you did very bad in the end. it wasnt expected. but it was your story and your way of writing is very different from others

 

[Indian Princess]

im crying princess you did very bad in the end. it wasnt expected. but it was your story and your way of writing is very different from others

Thanks for reading the story and your comment.

Revenge is always bittersweet and that exactly is the flavor of this story.

 

[cnuhyd]

What truly turns me on is a power play, to submit to a powerful man. That's why my inclination towards BDSM and forced sex.

wow, just WOW.

have you tried testing your bdsm side?

 

[Indian Princess]

wow, just WOW.

have you tried testing your bdsm side?

My husband is the most dominant man I've met in my life. I am submissive to him and his every wish is my command.

 

[Imyours]

First I would say ur writing skills are fantastic marvelous rapchik. As i said in my first comment that i dnt read english story much specially bdsm(bt it was nt BDSM ,I would say it was revenge thriller story) bt
your writing skills force me to read.

Won't say what I dnt like abt the story bcoz u already gave ur thought abt it, one thing what I liked abt u and this story was u didn't stretch it like most one do.

BDSM QUEEN ,would love to read something different from ur hand. Eagerly waiting to read another part of this story.

Jaate jaate kuch bolna chanunga. Yaar story read krte hue pata nhi kitne baar googli kiya hu kuch words ka meaning jaane ko.. Kaha se dhundi aise words.

 

[Indian Princess]

First I would say ur writing skills are fantastic marvelous rapchik. As i said in my first comment that i dnt read english story much specially bdsm(bt it was nt BDSM ,I would say it was revenge thriller story) bt
your writing skills force me to read.

Won't say what I dnt like abt the story bcoz u already gave ur thought abt it, one thing what I liked abt u and this story was u didn't stretch it like most one do.

BDSM QUEEN ,would love to read something different from ur hand. Eagerly waiting to read another part of this story.

Jaate jaate kuch bolna chanunga. Yaar story read krte hue pata nhi kitne baar googli kiya hu kuch words ka meaning jaane ko.. Kaha se dhundi aise words.

Thanks so much for your comment!

I am glad you liked the story and read it completely. I like to keep my stories short because that retains their thrill and flavor. Stretching a story too long becomes boring after a while. Also glad to know the you would like to read a sequel.

But first I am going to write a romantic short story for all those who requested something non BDSM from me. I hope you will support me.

My English vocabulary is perhaps good because I mostly read only English stories and have been reading for many years.

 

[Imyours]

Thanks so much for your comment!

I am glad you liked the story and read it completely. I like to keep my stories short because that retains their thrill and flavor. Stretching a story too long becomes boring after a while. Also glad to know the you would like to read a sequel.

But first I am going to write a romantic short story for all those who requested something non BDSM from me. I hope you will support me.

My English vocabulary is perhaps good because I mostly read only English stories and have been reading for many years.

Without a doubt would surely love to read ur future story (if gets time)..
From now onwards would try to read more English story to improve my vocabulary.

I think liter####a is d website from you read english story. Let me know if u know some other gud english story site.

 

[Indian Princess]

Without a doubt would surely love to read ur future story (if gets time)..
From now onwards would try to read more English story to improve my vocabulary.

I think liter####a is d website from you read english story. Let me know if u know some other gud english story site.

That is the only site I visit apart from XF. That place has enough English content to read for a lifetime.

 

[Indian Princess]

A big thank you to all my readers for this story who supported me with such personalized and encouraging comments.

It is because of your love and support that I could write a poem after several years.

I am sharing it here.

This is a heartfelt poem from Pankhudi written in her captivity, to her love, Armaan.

I’m lost in the dark,
In oblivion,
Can't leave, can't get away,
But I had a dream of you,
My heart just knew,
That you will find me one day.


I’m alone, I’m scared,
I’m so afraid,
They hurt me night and day,
But I’ll hold on,
For you to come,
And take me far away.


Each breath I take,
Away from you,
Burns deep inside of me,
I know you feel,
just as much pain,
After what happened to me.


This darkness gnaws,
Away at me,
I fight to keep my sanity,
I’m afraid I would,
No longer be,
The sweet loving girl I used to be.


I’m not as pure,
As I once was,
All I feel is hurt and shame,
But you are always,
In my heart,
And I still love you, all the same.


I’ll hold on, my love,
Forever, and more,
For the day, once more, you’ll be holding me,
Won’t give up on you,
Because I know,
You’ll never give up on me.

 

[cnuhyd]

My husband is the most dominant man I've met in my life. I am submissive to him and his every wish is my command.

Excellent